Nadan Dill
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b-chachi(thakur k samne jate hue): thakur saheb muje mere bete ko dekhna hai
hath jor k kehti hai
thakur: suman beta dekho usy kuch nahi hua hai bas halki si chote aai hai thori
der ruk jao bad mein mil lena abhi dr. ko checkup karne do
b-chachi waha se jake apni dono behno ko gale lgati hai aur rone lagti hai
thakurain unko samjhane ki koshish karti hai par unko unke bete ko dekhna tha
wo ek hi zid kar rahi thi
thori der bad dr. bahar ajata hai
3no chahiyan ek sath: kya hum mil sakte hain
dr: mil sakte ho kya ap ghar bh le ja sakte ho puri rat hai chahe to panja lara
k dekho
sab hanste hain aur 3no chahiyan bhagti hui avi k pas pohanch jati hai
jab b-chachi k nazar avi pe parti hai to wo bhagh k us k pas chali jati hai aur
gale lga k rone lagti hai choti chachi wahn par m-chachi ka hath pakar rakha tha
avi: maa...mujhy maf bolne wala tha k tbhi bich mein
b-chachi: koi bat mat kar abhi smjha jo bolna hai main wo ghar ja k bolungi
aur usk e mathe ko chum leti hai aur dono chachi bhi sath mein lipat jati hai
aur 4ro rone lagte hain
payal dor k avi k pas jati hai
avi(gadi chalte hue apne apse): zroor mina chachi ne b-chachi ko kaha ho ga
isi liye mujhy maaf kar diya khush hote hue gaav ki traf ane laga aise hi sochte
sochte wo gaav k adhe raste tak pohanch gya
tabhipiche se ek car bohat speed mein ati hui avi ki gadi ki tarf ati hai aur avi
ki gadi ko thok deti hai
asal mein wo gadi payal chla rahi thi jo k andhere se dar lag rha tha to fast
chla rahi thi jab us k dehan mein ata hai k us ne ek gadi ko thokkar mari hai to...
jab us k dehan mein ata hai k us ne ek gadi ko takkar mari hai to wo jaldi se
gadi band karti hai aur bhagi us ladke k pas usne chehra dekha to usy kuch
jana pahchana chehra nazar a rha tha usn epas jake dekha to usy avi dikha
payal(zor se rote hue): AVI...bhagke avi ki taraf jati hai
pas jake dekhti hai to avi rod k side mein gira hua tha gass mein to usy
zeyada kuch laga nahi tha bas us ke pair mein se khoon nikal rha tha
jab payal usy is halat mein dekhti hai to hosh khote khote avi ke pas jati hai
avi k muh se 3 naam nikal rhe the
avi(zakhmi halat mein): b-chachi,rani,komal ko yad kar rha tha
payal usy is halat mein dekhke foran utha kar sahara dety huye kese bhi gadi tak
lati hai gadi mein dal k us ko ek bar dekhti hai aur driving seat par
beth k gadi chla deti hai hospital ki taraf
payal(gadi chlate hye call karti hai): us k papa ko
payal(call karte hue): thakur call uthata hai
thakur: kya hua beti ye bolna tha k
payal(rote hue chilati hai): papa maine avi ka accident kar diya plz ap us ke
ghar jao aur sab ko leke hospital pohncho jaldi
thakur shock hota hai parantu khud ko sambhlate hue wo sab ko bata deta hai
aur khud night dress mein nikalta hai avi k ghar ki taraf...
thakur ne avi k ghar k samne jake gadi laga deta hai aur bahar se hi sab ko awaz
deta hai
kuch no btate hue sab ko hospital ki taraf le jata hai
payal wahan hospital mein pohach jati hai aur avi ka ilaj shuru ho jata hai
zeyada chot to nahi aai thi parantu abhi bhi usy hosh nahi tha
dr. ke check karne k bad dr. bahar aajata hai
dr.: beti uske right leg ki haddi thori tuti hui hai baki kuch kharoch i hai
(note: ye thakur ka hospital hai is liye police case nahi hua aur jaldi tritment
chalu ho geya)
dr. itna kehte hi wahan se chala jata hai
payal roti roti wahin pe beth jati hai
kuch time bad wahan thakur ki family aur avi ki family(3no chachi aur chacha)
a jate hain
b-chachi(chillate hue) behosh ho jati hai
3no chachiyon ka to bura hal tha wo bohat ro rahi thi unka rona dekh kr dr bahar
ata hai
dr(sabko samjhate hue): dekhiye ladke ko kuch nahi hua sirf kuch chote aai hain
ek jagah pe plaster karna hai baki sab thk hai...itna keh k wahan se chala
jata hai
sab normal ho jate hain tabhi tab bhi 2no chahiyan aur payal ro rhi thi.jab
b-chachi ko hosh aya to unhe btaya ki jada chot nahi aai hai tb jake kahi chup
chap baith gaye sab log
These are the updates given by co writter in other site so I say may thanks and sorry to copy that hereb-chachi(thakur k samne jate hue): thakur saheb muje mere bete ko dekhna hai
hath jor k kehti hai
thakur: suman beta dekho usy kuch nahi hua hai bas halki si chote aai hai thori
der ruk jao bad mein mil lena abhi dr. ko checkup karne do
b-chachi waha se jake apni dono behno ko gale lgati hai aur rone lagti hai
thakurain unko samjhane ki koshish karti hai par unko unke bete ko dekhna tha
wo ek hi zid kar rahi thi
thori der bad dr. bahar ajata hai
3no chahiyan ek sath: kya hum mil sakte hain
dr: mil sakte ho kya ap ghar bh le ja sakte ho puri rat hai chahe to panja lara
k dekho
sab hanste hain aur 3no chahiyan bhagti hui avi k pas pohanch jati hai
jab b-chachi k nazar avi pe parti hai to wo bhagh k us k pas chali jati hai aur
gale lga k rone lagti hai choti chachi wahn par m-chachi ka hath pakar rakha tha
avi: maa...mujhy maf bolne wala tha k tbhi bich mein
b-chachi: koi bat mat kar abhi smjha jo bolna hai main wo ghar ja k bolungi
aur usk e mathe ko chum leti hai aur dono chachi bhi sath mein lipat jati hai
aur 4ro rone lagte hain
payal dor k avi k pas jati hai
No bro I will write may way after 3 update I think u r following my updates too there in that sitebhai app toh toh monika ka fast forward wala hi copy past kar rahe ho..
asa hi chalta raha toh 10 update mei story ka end ho jayega.
so its better you stop writing this legendary story if u can't write it.
If haven't see mg mg mf page in that site I have may way to express but I don't want to make the confusion in readers so I have copied that 2 updaters herebhai app toh toh monika ka fast forward wala hi copy past kar rahe ho..
asa hi chalta raha toh 10 update mei story ka end ho jayega.
so its better you stop writing this legendary story if u can't write it.