Incest Main , Meri Family Aur Mera Gaon (Part -02)
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Bhai maine kabhee koi kahani nahi likhee. Balki doosaro ke ki kahani ko pad kar apni collection mein edit karke rakh leta hoon. Mujhe jo galtiya dikhayee deti hai use sudhar leta hoon apni sirf apni collection ke liye.
chunki yeh kahani adhuri chhod di gayee thee aur do teen writers ne apni apni style mein kuchh joda par mujhe kafee galtiya nazar aayee to maine use sudhar kar kahani ko ek saar kar diya.
Mujhe 15 din dijiye shayad main kuchh soch kar bataunga ki kya main is kahani ko poora kar paunga ya nahi.
Aap log tab tak mujhe sujhav do ki aap kahani mein kya kya chahte ho aur kahani ka ant kaisa chahte ho..
chunki yeh kahani adhuri chhod di gayee thee aur do teen writers ne apni apni style mein kuchh joda par mujhe kafee galtiya nazar aayee to maine use sudhar kar kahani ko ek saar kar diya.
Mujhe 15 din dijiye shayad main kuchh soch kar bataunga ki kya main is kahani ko poora kar paunga ya nahi.
Aap log tab tak mujhe sujhav do ki aap kahani mein kya kya chahte ho aur kahani ka ant kaisa chahte ho..
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Bhai jaisa ki aapne kaha ki aapne kavi koi story nhi likha hai us se mujhe nhi lagta hai ki aap story ko complete kar paaoge. Kyuki ye story jitna deeply likhi hui hai mujhe nhi lagta ki koi v apni pahli story mai is story ko complete kar sakta hai. Kisi or ka story ko edit karna utna kathin nhi jai jitna kisi dusre story ko complete karna hai. Mere khayal koi purana writer hi shayed ise complete kar sakta hai.
Agar aapko apne aap pe yakin hai ki aap ise complete kar sakte ho to apka "swagat hai" agar thora bahut v apke man mai ashanka hai to mere khayal se ise chorna hi accha hoga. Kyuki avi tak jitne v writter ne ise start kiya hai koi v "avi bhai" ki trah 10% v nhi likh paya. Ab to kisi writer pe yakin hi nhi raha. Start to kayi writer ne kya 5-6 update dene k baad aise gyan ho jate ki dhundne pe v nhi mile.
Agar mere kisi v baat ka kisi ko v bura lage to mai dil se maafi chahta hu. Maine bas avi tak jo hota aaya wahi batya
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Sab tour ke liye ready huva per Kuch log ne kushi ke sath aur Kuch log ne tension ke sath bus Mai bait Gaya neha, mamatha aur pooja Uske husband aur neetha Uske pati Suman, Seema aur Meena unke bachonke pass
Komal aur Rani ek jagha
Chacha diver ke pass
Avi ke Didi sab unke pati se sab pairs may bait Gaya
Baki sab baitne ke bad bus start huva
Avi avike sath Vidhya bait Gaya sab ne mast mood mai tha
Sab ne Apne Apne batho may hai
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Neha aur mamata ke beach mai
Neha : mamata ji
Mamata : kya huva neha ji
Neha : Mai tho Avi ke bareme Soch Raha hum kya Avi , rani aur Komal ki shadi kab aur kisa
Mamata : haste huye neha ji abi kya jaldi hai
Neha : vo to hai pir bi
Komal aur Rani ek jagha
Chacha diver ke pass
Avi ke Didi sab unke pati se sab pairs may bait Gaya
Baki sab baitne ke bad bus start huva
Avi avike sath Vidhya bait Gaya sab ne mast mood mai tha
Sab ne Apne Apne batho may hai
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Neha aur mamata ke beach mai
Neha : mamata ji
Mamata : kya huva neha ji
Neha : Mai tho Avi ke bareme Soch Raha hum kya Avi , rani aur Komal ki shadi kab aur kisa
Mamata : haste huye neha ji abi kya jaldi hai
Neha : vo to hai pir bi
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Ok dear readers first I am sry I have met with an accident and In critical condition so I was not able to give my updates if you guys want another writter you can have them and have a good story
Raja thakur
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Bro tell me one thing , are you writing the story or just pasting from another site? Cuz, i want to know how much story you have and I really wanted this story in safe hands.
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