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Adultery Majboori (Bhai ki maut. Bhabhi se shaadi) Restarted

Konse character se sabse jyada nafrat Hai aapko..

  • Parry

    Votes: 44 13.6%
  • Ramesh

    Votes: 145 44.9%
  • Siya

    Votes: 37 11.5%
  • Ashu

    Votes: 48 14.9%
  • Harry

    Votes: 11 3.4%
  • Rajni

    Votes: 11 3.4%
  • Saloni

    Votes: 6 1.9%
  • Priya

    Votes: 10 3.1%
  • Aalu

    Votes: 5 1.5%
  • Reena

    Votes: 6 1.9%

  • Total voters
    323

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Kaan ke niche Jo mass ka tukda Hota hai jisme shed Karke earings pehnte hai woh earing ke saath niche padha hoya tha Ashu ki dard ke maare cheekhe nikalne lagti hai aur Saath main side main khoon hi khoon tha , Lekin Parry ko Koi khabar NHI usne kya kar diya woh tu Apni bhadas Harry pae nikalne main lagha hoya tha , yeh Sabh Dekh kar Ramesh Aur Vicky Zor lagate hai aur parry ko Harry ke upar se dhakeel dete hai , Ramesh parry ke chehre par thapdo ki barsat kr deta Hai , Idhar mukesh Reena simi sabh Ashu ke pass chale jaate hai usse uthate Hai ..

Ashu- ( rote hoye ) dad Bhut dard ho rha Hai , Harry thik hai naa Dekho usse . Woh niche padhe harry ko Dekh kar kehti hai jiske naak aur Mooh se khoon beh raha tha .. Vicky usse uthata hai .

Vicky - jaldi Karo doctor ke pass Lekar chalte hai inko ..

Idhar Supriya shocked khadi thi usne imagine bhi NHI Kiya tha ki jiss cheej ke liye Woh itni excited Thi woh aise khatam Hogi , Surya Parry ke pass aakar Yeh Tumne Acha Nahi Kiya MERI Beti Ka dill todh kar Woh yeh keh ke apni family ko lekar waha se Nikal Jaata hai , idhar Ramesh aur Parry Bache they ..

Ramesh- Sab Kuch barbad Kar diya Tumne parry Sabh Kuch itna acha Rishta tha itne paise wale log aur Tumne Sabh barbad kar Diya ..

Parry- Nashe Main) Barbad Tu muje Kiya Hai tum Sabh ne milke tum Sabh ne mera Koi saga Nahi Hai , .

Ramesh uski batt sunne bina wha se Chala jata hai , Parry bhi Nashe ki haalat Main wha se Chala jata hai , shraab ke Nashe main Raaste..

Parry- ( badbadata Hai Raste par) main zinda Nahi shodunga Ashu Harry tumko agar bta deta kya jata zinda Nahi shodunga .

Aise hi Woh Raat ke waqt bhatakta bhatakta Kisi park ke bench par jaakar lait jata hai aur ussi haalat main wha soo jata hai ..

Idhar doctor ke pass Ashu Aur Harry ki marham patti ho Rahi thi Ashu ki cheekhe waha par bhi Nikal rahi Thi kiyunki Jo mass ka tukda alag Hoya tha doctor usse tanke lagha kar jodh rha tha jisse hone wala dard uski bardasht se bahar tha, Harry theek tha bass Uske Mukko ki wajah se honth mass wagera fatt Gaye they par chehra poori tarah sooja Hoya tha .. Thodi hi time main ramesh BHI waha pahuchta Hai .

Mukesh - Samdhi ji Yeh Tu hadh se jyada ho gya Main uthwa rha hoon parry ko aaj usne meri Beti ki Dekho kya haalat kardi hai Aur hamare damad ko kitni buri tarah maara hai .

Ramesh- Jaise aapko theek laghe kijiye usne harqat hi aise ki hai jiske liye usse sakht se sakht saaja milni Chahiye ...

Tabhi Saloni beech main aa jaati Hai Woh Mukesh ke aage haath jodh kar kehti hai Bhai Sahab aap Aisa Matt kijiye Woh nashe main tha ghar Ka mamla hai hum usse saaja denge ..

Mukesh - maaf kijiye Samdhan ji par Yeh batt najarandaj karne wali katte hi Nahi Hai ..

Saloni- Bhai Sahab meri batt Ka Mann rakh lijiye plz Main haath jodhti hoon apke Saamne hum usse denge saaja sakht se sakht ..

Mukesh- Samdhan ji aise haath Matt jodhiye theek hai sirf aapke kehne par shod rha hoon ..

Ramesh- Saloni inki saaja se Tu Tumne Bacha liya par MERI saaja se tum usse nahi bacha paogi .. idhar parry aaram se park ke bench par soya padha tha kisi masoom bache ki tarah.

Present time ..

Priya Jaise hi hospital main enter hoti hai Saamne Ashu dikhayi deti hai usse Ashu ki BHI Thodi hi dheer Main najar Priya par padh jaati hai ..

Priya aage badhti Hai Ashu ke pass pahunchti hai , parry Kaisa Hai ... Dono ke beech ek ajeeb c situation thi Dono ko Ek dusre se Kaise batt kare samajh Nahi aa rha tha , ek Bhabhi Jo ki abh Apne devar ki patni banne Wali hai aur ussi devar ki girlfriend saamne khadi Hoo Kya hi batt Hogi ..

Ashu- ( katrate hoye ) theek hai Woh khatre se bahar hai.

Priya- thank god ..

Ashu- tum jha kiyu .

Priya- Main kiyu mtlb parry ko Kuch ho tu kya main nhi aayungi .

Ashu- Lekin Abh uski Shaadi hone Wali hai ..

Priya- pta Hai Mujhe yaad dilane ki jarurat NHI Hai Mujhe bass Ek Baar Parry se Milna hai ..

Ashu- NHI mill Sakti ..

Priya- kiyu NHI mill Sakti ..

Ashu- sirf family ke member hi mill sakte hai bahar Wale NHI ..

Priya- Aap Kaha se family ho gayi pichle ek saal se Tu aap logo ne uska haal NHI pucha kha Hai kya Hoya uske Saath pta Hai. Abh family Yaad aa Gayi .. Tabhi piche se ramesh aa jata Hai ..

Ramesh- ae Ladki meri Batt kaan khol ke sunn lo parry se door raho Abh tum Nahi Tu mujse bura koi Nahi Hoga , tumhare baap ko phone krke batao tum Jha hoo ..

Apne baap ka naam sunn kar priya darr jaati hai kiyunki usse Apne baap ki sehat ki fikar Thi..

Priya- plz unko phone Matt kijiye main ja rahi hoon Jha se aur Priya hospital se chali jaati Hai ..

Ramesh- Ashu beta tum BHI ghar jaakar aaram karo main Simi ko bhejta hoon Woh Jayegi Tumhare Saath ..

Ashu- ji papa ji ..aur Ashu wha se chali jaati Hai ,.

Andhar se Aalu Aata hai , Acha uncle ji Mujhe izzazat dijiye main Phirse Aata ghar jaakar fresh ho aao Yeh kapde bhi badalne hai khoon lagha geya Hai inme ..

Ramesh- haa ha beta jao ek Baar Phirse Shukriya tumhara Shi waqt par usse hospital laane ke liye ..

Aalu- uncle kaise baatein kar rahe hai isme Shukriya wali kya batt Yeh Tu mera farz tha .

Ramesh- haa beta ..

Aalu- Acha chalta hoon Main ..

Aalu ke jaate hi Reena udhar Aati Hai , reena Ramesh ke pass aakar usse kehti hai , ramesh ji Aap chinta Matt kijiye Kuch Nahi Hoga parry ko .

Ramesh- haa bhagwan ki kirpa se bach geya ..

Reena- Woh Tu theek hai Lekin hum abh kabh milenge 20 din ho Gaye mujhse rha Nahi ja rha ..

Ramesh- (side Main laakar)kamaal Karti hoo Tum Koi sunn leta Tu pta hai Kitna hungama Hota Abhi Mera jawaan Beta maara hai Tumhari beti vidhwa hoyi Hai , Aur Mera ek beta mushkil se bacha Hai aur Tumhe chudna Hai ..

Reena- aap yeh Batt aaram se bhi Tu Keh sakte they ..

Ramesh- Tumne batt hi aise ki Hai aur haa mera aas pass mandraya Matt Karo jabh mukesh Bhai Saab aas pass ho unko shaq ho Jayega ..

Reena- Aap bekar main Itni tention Lete ho Kuch NHI hota pichle 9 mahine se unhe pta NHI Chala Tu Abh Kya chalega ..

Ramesh- MERI ek Batt sunn lo itni overconfident Matt RHA kro inn Sabh maamlo main ..

Reena- theekh Hai ji ..

Ramesh- Tu jao abh , Reena wha se chali jaati hai ..

Ramesh- Yaar yeh aurat kitni garam hai jabh Dekho chudne ko tyaar rehti hai .. Tabhi Reena wapis aati Hai ..

Ramesh-Abh Kya reh gya ..

Reena- Jaise hi Parry recover ho uski Shaadi Ashu se karwa denge hum ..

Ramesh- theek Hai par Mujhe ek Batt batao tumhe parry se hi Shaadi kiyu karwani Hai Ashu Beti ki ..

Reena- Ashu ke liye sabse Acha jahi Hai aur aapke Ghar ke liye BHI ..

Ramesh- kaise Abhi Tu bta do Ashu Beti ke liye Kaise acha Hai jabki tumko PTA hai parry duniya Main sabse jyada nafrat Kisi ko krta Hai Tu Woh Ashu ko Mujhe Abhi tak samajh NHI aaya aakhir Acha kaise hai ..

Reena- Woh aap mujh par shod dijiye Na kiyu tention leeta ho ..aur Woh wha se chali jaati hai ..

Idhar Parry ko hosh aata hai Woh dhire dhire Apni aankhein kholta hai , yeh swarg hospital Jaise kiyu lagh rha hai , tabhi ek nurse usse hosh Main aata Dekh kar ..

Nurse - finally aa hi gya aapko hosh badhe khus kismat ho Jo Itni najdeek se goli lagne ke baad BHI Bach Gaye ..

Parry- Iska mtlb main zinda hoon maara NHI ..

Nurse - ji aap zinda Hai , yeh sunn kar parry uthne ki koshish krta Hai par usse Apne kandhe main Aur baaju Main dard Hota Hai Woh uth Nahi paata ..

Nurse- Kya kr rahe Hai aap leete rahiye goli laghi Hai Koi mjk NHI, main Bahar bata deti hoon sabko ki hosh aa geya Hai Tumhe..

1 Saal pehle ..

Subhe ke 6.30 ho chuke they park main log jogging Kar rahe they sabki najare Baar baar bench par soo rahe parry par jaa Rahi thi parry padhe aaram se soya Hoya tha iss sabh se bekhabar ki KAL Usne kya kaand Kiya tha ..

Jabh Suraj ki kirne Uske chehre par padhti hai Tu uski nidra main vigan padhta Hai dheere se woh Aankhe kholta Hai , jabh uski aankhein khulti Hai Tu Woh khud ko khule aasman ke niche pata hai pehle tu usse veham lagta hai Lekin jabh ek aadmi usko aaakr uthata hai , kya Bhai idhar hi soo rahe ho ghar var Nahi Hai kya suit boot Pehan kar udhar soo rahe Hai ..

Isse woh achanaak uthta Hai aur saamne kayi logo ko khud ko ghurta Hoya pata hai ..

Parry- ( Mann Main ) main jha kya kar rha hoon kal Tu Party par they aur yeh saala haath kiyu dukh rha Hai . Woh Apne haath ko dekhta hai Tu uss par sookha hoya khoon lagha tha Jise Dekh kar usse yaad aataa hai ki kal raat hoya kya tha Jaise hi yaad aata hai woh Apna sir pakad leta Hai ..

Parry- behenchod yeh sala kya kar Diya maine Karne Kya gya tha kya kar Aaya yeh daaru pee hi kiyu ... Parry ko yeh yaad tha jo isne Harry ke saath Kiya par Ashu ki kaan katai usse yaad Nahi Thi kiyunki woh usne anjane Main Kiya tha ..

Parry- Ghar par vaat lagegi sala kiyu pee maine daaru , wha se uthta Hai aur chalkar ghar ki aur Nikal padhta Hai . Idhar sabhi log ghar par pahunch chuke they Harry aur Ashu Ramesh hall main Bethe hoye they Woh subhe subhe bass pahuche hi they ghar par Saloni kitchen Main Kuch khaane ke liye banane gayi thi ..

Ramesh- Beta tumko dard Tu Nahi ho rha kya Abhi ..

Harry- Papa yeh dard Tu theek ho Jayega Lekin Jo dill Main dard Hai uska kya Dekho kya haalat kardi Hai Mera sasural Main MERI Kya izzat reh Gayi Hogi batayie . Aur Ashu ke Saath Jo Kiya usne Main usse Kabhi maaf Nahi karunga .. Abh ja Tu iss ghar main woh rahega ja Main aur Ashu ..

Ashu ke chehra ro ro kar utra hoya tha abhi bhi uski aankhon se aansu beh rahe they .. , Harry Mera kaan Main Bahut dard ho rha Hai , Main kya Karoo ...

Harry- Ashu honsla Rakho theek ho Jayega ..

Idhar Ramesh uthta Hai Aur Parry ke room Main ghus jaata Hai , kareeb aadhe ghante baad Parry ghar ke bahar pahuchta Hai jaise hi pahunchta Hai usse ghar ke bahar 3 bag padhe hoye they ..

To be continued..
nice .. ye sala abhi tak Reena ka chakkar samajh mein nahi aa raha .. iska Ashu ko parry ke saath he shaadi karne ka kya masla hai .. sirf ashu ke pet mein us bacche ka baap hona he to itna bada kaaran nahi ho sakta .. khaas kar jab dono log ek dusre se beintiah nafrat karte ho .. kucch to gadbad hai .. asal masla to kucch aur he hai .. khair aage aane waale updates mein dheere dheere ye bhi clear ho jaayega .. till then .. let's enjoy the story ...

bahut khoob lekhak ji .. bahut he umda likha hai ...

loved the flashbacks .. time-table manupulating concept .. you nailed it ...

good work!
 
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oye teri ki .. ye wala incident to main bhool he gaya tha .. asli kaand to yahi hua tha .. Ashu ka to kaan he uda diya tha yaha par Parry ne .. ye to sabse mast wala scene tha .. isko padh kar to dil garden garden ho gaya tha ...

outstanding update .. ek baar fir padhne par bhi bilkul first time wala maza aaya ...

ab saari kahani remind hoti jaa rahi hai .. i would say very well written or articulated ...
Thanks bro
 
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nice .. ye sala abhi tak Reena ka chakkar samajh mein nahi aa raha .. iska Ashu ko parry ke saath he shaadi karne ka kya masla hai .. sirf ashu ke pet mein us bacche ka baap hona he to itna bada kaaran nahi ho sakta .. khaas kar jab dono log ek dusre se beintiah nafrat karte ho .. kucch to gadbad hai .. asal masla to kucch aur he hai .. khair aage aane waale updates mein dheere dheere ye bhi clear ho jaayega .. till then .. let's enjoy the story ...

bahut khoob lekhak ji .. bahut he umda likha hai ...

loved the flashbacks .. time-table manupulating concept .. you nailed it ...

good work!
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Jaise hi Parry ghar ke bahar pahunchta Hai usse 3 bad Darwaje ke bahar padhe dikhayi dete hai usse Kuch Kuch Tu samajh aa geya tha ki yeh ussi ke hi honge .. parry par phir bhi ghar ki bell bajata Hai , Darwaja Kuch hi paalo Main khulta Hai Saamne ramesh khada tha ..

Ramesh- Jaise Aaye ho waise hi mudh jao aaj ke baad iss Ghar ki taraf mooh bhi Matt karna ..

Parry- papa ..

Ramesh- khabardar Jo Apne iss manhoos Mooh se Mujhe papa kaha Tu Aaj se Mera tumse koi Rishta Nahi saare khandan ki izzat mitti Main Mila Di Tumne.

Parry- papa Sorry Galti ho gayi main Harry Bhai se maafi maang Lunga Nashe Main Mujhe pata hi NHI Chala. .

Ramesh- Harry Chahe Tumhe maaf kar BHI de uska dill Bahut Badha Hai Lekin main Tumhe Kabhi maaf Nahi karunga Tumne jo Ashu beti ke Saath Kiya mera tu dill kar rha hai Tujhe goli maar do ..

Parry- Ashu Bhabhi ke Saath unke Saath kya Kiya Maine?

Ramesh- waah Tumhe yaad BHI Nahi jo Tumne Kiya .. aao dikhata hoon Tumhe , aur Woh usse pakad kar andhar ke jata Hai jaha par Ashu bethi hoyi thi Saath Main hi Harry ..

Ramesh- Yeh Dekh Uske kaan ke Saath Kya Kiya tumne .. Ashu parry ko Dekh kar ghabra jati hai uske Mann Main Parry ke liye darr Beth gaya tha ..

Parry jabh Ashu ke kaan Ka haal dekhta hai tanke laghe hoye .. papa Mujhe Nahi pata yeh kaise Hoya Sach main ..

Parry- Bhabhi sorry Maine apke Saath yeh jaan bujh ke Nahi Kiya aur Harry bhai aapko bhi sorry , Lekin aap logo ne Jo Mera Saath Kiya tha Woh BHI Sahi Nahi tha ..

Harry aur Ashu Kuch Nahi Bolte Parry BHi samajh chuka tha ki uska iss Ghar se nikalna pakka Hai aur Woh Bina Kuch Kahe waha se jaane lagta hai , Saloni ko rota Hoya dekhta hai par usse bhi pta tha usne Jo Kiya uske baad uski maa BHI uske bachav Main Kya Karti ,, jaate jaate Darwaje ke pass jaha par saari chabiyan Rakhi Hoyi Hoti Hai wha se woh apni bike ki chaabi utha leta hai ramesh ki najro se bacha ke , woh ghar ke Bahar jata hai , idhar ramesh aaakr Darwaja lock kar deta hai , parry ek bag Apne kandhe main daal leta hai ek ko Apni bike ke piche angle se bandh deta hai Aur ek ko bike par beth kar aage tank pae rakh deta hai aur jaldi se bike start Karke waha se Nikal jata Hai ..

Idhar Priya ki neend khulti Hai Woh badhe maaje se angdayi lekar uthti hai aaj Woh Bahut hi Khush thi kiyunki aaj uska pyaar ek baar phir usse mill chuka tha , jisse Woh pichle 2 Saal se door thi ..

Woh uthti hai fresh hokar niche jaati Hai jha par Ritesh Siya aur uski maa breakfast kar rahi Thi. Priya Kuch ghun ghunate hoye niche aati hai aur dinning table par aakar beth jaati Hai uski Khushi uske chehre se hi dekhi ja sakti thi.

Siya- kya Batt Hai Priya Aaj badhi Khush lagh Rahi Hoo ..

Ritesh- haa Beta Hume bhi batao hum BHI khush ho Jaye thoda ..

Priya - Kuch Nahi papa Aaj bass mood Acha Hai ..

Siya- pehle Tu aise Kabhi Nahi Hoya tumhara mood Acha Aaj Kuch Tu khaas Batt Hai batao naa.

Priya-kya Didi tum bhi Koi batt Nahi hai aap tu piche hi padh gayi ..

Rajshri - ( priya ko breakfast dete hoye ) Siya Tumse Tu bardasht hi Nahi Hoti meri beti Khush rahe ..

Siya- Kya mummy aap BHI Main Tu bass Puch hi rahi thi.

Rajshri- Koi Kuch Nahi puchege khaana khane do meri Beti ko..

Jabh Sabh log Khana khaa ke chale jaate hai Priya Apne Room Main jaa chuki Thi Siya Apne hi dimaag ke ghode daudane lagti Hai ..

Siya- ( Mann main ) Kuch Tu Batt Hai aise tu Priya Tabh Khush Hoya Karti Thi jabh yeh parry se Millkar aaya Karti thi , kya Phirse milli Hai , nahi Nahi Nahi iske dimaag Main Maine Jo Uske liye zehar bhara Hai Uske baad Tu sawaal hi Nahi uthta ki Yeh usse dekhe tak BHI..

Idhar Siya ke dimaag ke ghode chal rahe they udhar Parry beghar ho chuka tha , Parry sadak par ek pedh ki shaav Main Apni bike rookta hai aur Apne vault main dekhta hai Tu usme sirf 2000 rupee they , Lekin kal Jo suit kharedna ke liye usse credit card Diya tha ghar walo ne Woh usse wapis Lena bhool Gaye they .. par Parry ko samajh Nahi aa RHA tha Woh kare Tu Kya kare kidhar Jaye. Phir Woh apna phone nikalta Hai Aur number dial karta hai apni Behan Simi kaa ..

Kuch dheer Main Simi phone uthati Hai. Hello ..

Parry- Didi Kaise Hoo aap..

Simi-Tumne kal Jo Kiya uske baad kaise hongi Tumhe pata hai Tumhari wajah se apne sasural Main kitni sharmindgi Hoyi Hai mujhe Vicky bhi Bahut gussa hai tumpe..

Parry - Didi maine Jaan bujh ke Nahi Kiya Kuch BHI nashe Main ho Gaya ..

Simi- nasha BHI Tu Tumne Khudh Kiya tha Kisi ne jabardasti Tu karwaya Nahi tha tumse tum ache se jaante ho ki sharab nahi sambhalti Tumse Tu kiyu pee ..

Parry- Didi Galti ho gayi par Abh main kya karo papa ne ghar se Nikal Diya hai , mera pass paise bhi Nahi hai kya Karo kidhar jao Kuch samajh Nahi aa RHA ..

Simi- Galti ki hai bhugat Abh ..

Parry - Didi aap help kardo ge ..

Simi- Main Kya help kar Sakti hoon teri ..

Parry-Didi thode paise dedo..

Simi- Vicky ko ja Ghar Main Kisi ko pata chal Gaya na Woh Bahut naraj honge mujhse ..

Parry- Didi plz ek aap hi Tu ho jisse main madad maang sakta hoon plz ..

Simi- theek Hai Lekin Dhyaan rakhna kisi ko pata na chale khaaskar Vicky ko, Jo Tumne harqat ki Hai Uske baad dill tu nahi kar rha tumhari madad Karo par Kya karo Bhai ho mussibat Main dekha bhi Nahi ja rha ..

Parry- thank you Didi.

Simi- Main tumhare account main daal dungi theek Hai .

Parry- theek hai ..

Simi 20 hajar parry ke account Main daal deti Hai Apne account se Parry ATM se paise Nikal leta Hai , aur Apne kisi dost ko phone lagata hai , yaar rehne ke liye Koi kamra wagera Chahiye kiraye par .. 2000 hajar mahine , haa chalega , theek Hai Main aata hoon, aur Woh phone kaat deta hai aur bike start Karke waha se Nikal padhta Hai , kareeb 15 minute Main Woh ek building main pahunchta Hai Jha par 2 floor they Dono Main line main rooms bane hoye they .

Ussi building ke bahar khada tha ek ladka jiskee pass parry apni bike le Jata hai aur rukta Hai , ..

Parry- ( haath milate hoye ) kya Yaar Kya haal chaal tera ..

Ladka- Abhey Mera Tu theek hai Tu bta Itne waqt baad. .

Parry- haa yaar bass aise hi aur parteek life kaise chal Rahi Hai ..

Parteek - bass chal Rahi Hai Kaam wagera ghar shi chal rha Hai aur Tu bta college ke baad kya kiya ..

Parry - vehla hi hoon yaar karna kya hai hai tune Tu First year Main hi college shod Diya tha Acha kaam kar rha Hai Uske baad ..

Parteek - haa yaar dad ke death ke baad zimedaariya Mera upar aa gayi thi iss liye padhai shodni padhi , abh par life mast chal Rahi Hai ,. Ghar par bhi paise bhej deta hoon sabh sahi chal rha Hai ..

Parry- haa yaar bhadiya hai Woh tu theek Hai room Tu dilwa de abh ..

Parteek - yaar Woh Tu Main dilwa hi doonga par tera acha khasa ghar hai Tujhe Kya jarurat padh Gayi kiraye ke room ki ..

Parry- yaar Bahut lambi kahani hai Kabhi fursat Main batao gaa. Room dilwa de pehle ..

Parteek- Acha aaja Phir , aur Parry bike lagata hai Apna Samaan uthata hai aur uske piche chal deta hai ..

Parteek- Mera Saath wala kamra 2 din pehle hi ladka khaali kar ke Gaya Hai wohi khaali hai bass kismat Achi hai teri ..

Aur Woh usse apartment ke pass hi ek kothi par le jata Hai , Jo ki uss building Ke maalik ki thi , Bakhtawar khan naam Ka aadmi tha Jo iss building Ka maalik tha , parteek parry ko usse milwata hai kamre kiraye par lene ki batt Hoti Hai woh parry ko kamra de deta hai aur 3 mahine Ka advance kiraya le leta Hai , Dono Aate hai kamre ki Aur , parteek Ka kamra 14 parry Ka kamra number 15 , Parry andhar jaakar kamra dekhta Hai kamre main 1 bed lagha hoya tha chota SA bathroom tha choti c kitchen BHI thi Mtlb Rehne ke liye theek tha .

Parry- thank you Yaar Mujhe kamra dilwane ke liye ..

Parteek - yaar thank you kiss Batt kaa Apne Dosto se thank you NHI Kehte ..

Parry- haa Mera Bhai , Acha sunn yeh 16 number kiska room Hai ..

Parteek - Ladki rehti Hai Koi idhar , par usse door hi rehna ..

Parry- Kyu Aisa Kya Hai ..

Parteek - Abhey Woh uss Gunda hai na Bittu vapari uski girlfriend Hai ..

Bittu vapari Ka naam sunn kar usse yaad aa jata hai Woh lock up Main Mila tha usse ..

Parry- Bittu vapari ki girlfriend phir Tu uske bagal se BHI gujarna Chahiye ..

Parteek - haa Maine suna Hai ek ladke ne sheeda tha usse Bittu ne katal Kar Diya tha uska goliyon maar ke ..

Parry- Kya batt Kar Raha isse tu door Rehne main hi bhalayi Hai ..

Parteek - haa Acha yaar Main chalta hoon kaam par jaana Hai shaam ko milta hoon tumse ..

Parry- theekh Hai yaar milte hai ..aur woh usse gale mill kar usko Jane deta Hai .

Phir parry Apne saaman Nikalne lagta hai jaise hi woh pehla bag kholta hai Uske upar hi paise padhe hoye they ,

Parry- yeh paise Kaha se aa gaye .. phir Woh ginta Hai Tu kareban 14 hajar 300 rupee they jisme Kuch 500 ke Kuch 100 ke Kuch 50 ke note they Woh samajh jata hai Yeh uski maa ne hi daale hai , Jo Woh Bacha Kar rakhti thi paise ..

Parry- thank you maa ..
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To be continued ..

Guy's I AM tested positive for covid Yeh jitna Likha tha daal rha hoon, koshish karunga agla update jaldi hi Doo..
maa to aakhir maa he hoti hai .. beshak aulaad kitni bhi nikhad kyun na ho .. par maa ki mamta hamesha usko dukh pareshani se bacha kar rakhna chahti hai .. pehle to Saloni ne Ashu ke baap se minnat karke parry ko bacha liya .. warna SP sahab is baar Parry ko tagda lapet dete beti aur damaad ke saath maar peetai karne ke liye aur jo badtamiji waha chhote bhai ki iklauti beti ke roke ke moke pe parry ne kiya tha ...

abhi aage jo kahani mein aata jaa raha hai .. usko dekh kar abhi sahi se andaaza lagana mushkil hai ki Parry par goli kaun chala sakta hai ya kisne chalwayi hogi .. kyonki kayi logo ke kayi kaaran aur maksad ho sakte hai .. kucch baato par gaur kiya jaaye abhi ke liye to thoda bahut andaza laga kar dekh sakte hai ...

to kucch kirdaaro par agar gaur farmaya jaaye ki kaun Parry ko marwana chahta hai ---

1. Ashu ka baap mukesh - beshak jab sabke saamne isne apni samdhan ka maan rakhte hue parry ko maaf kiya ho .. magar parry ne sabke saamne uski beti/damad aur saath mein uski puri family ki beijaati ki thi .. dusra ye ab na chahta ho ki dobara se iski beti ki shaadi parry jaise loser case se ho .. khaas kar jab parry aur ashu abhi bhi khud ke mann se abhi iss rishte ko aage badhane ke hak mein nahi hai ...

2. Rajini - ye ladki to sabse jyada potential candidate hai is story mein jo parry ko marwa sakne ki sanak liye baithi ho .. ye sabse jyaada janooni hai parry ke liye .. to apni chahat ko thukraye jaane ke liye kisi aur ko parry na mile isliye parry ko marwa do .. kucch aisa he case rajini ka banta hai .. jitni badi ye sanki hai to isse kucch jyada umeed nahi ki jaa sakti ...

3. Prateek - beshak ye Parry ka dost ho .. magar parry ke chalte kya pata iski naukri ya kamaai par farak pad raha ho .. exactly abhi kucch kaha nahi ja sakta ...

4. soni ka aashik ya ye khud bhi parry ko marwane ki koshish kar sakti hai .. kyonki pichle ek saal mein parry ne kya kiya hai aur kaise logo ke saath uska uthna baithna raha hai .. iska to sahi se andaza lagana bhi mushkil hai abhi ...

5. jis aadmi ke liye ye drugs ka kaam karta hai .. shayad paiso ka mamla ho .. uska khudka ya fir kisi client se bhasad baaji ho gayi ho parry ki ...

6. Ramesh - kya pata ramesh police wala hai isi liye ramesh se badla na lekar parry se bhadaas nikaali ja rahi ho ...

7. kya pata Mukesh (reena ka pati) ko apni patni ke vishay mein pata lag gaya ho jiski setting Ramesh se chal rahi hai .. aur is pariwaar se hamesha ke liye nata he khatam ho jaaye is wajah se wo parry ki jaan lena chahta ho .. taaki na parry rahega na ashu ki shaadi hogi aur apne aap he uski patni ka ramesh se sambandh vicched ho jaayega ...

8. bhakhtawar khan ka bhi kucch indirect masla ho sakta hai .. abhi iske baare mein kahani mein kucch jyaada bataya gaya nahi hai .. par kya pata iski bhi shayad koi beti ho jo parry ke peeche pagal ho .. ha ha ha ...

kucch bhi ho sakta hai .. i am just making absurd predictions .. well i am trying to be the part of the story .. this i will be more involved into it ...

well whatever .. i am enjoying the story .. so far so good .. kudos to writer ...
 
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