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Adultery Majboori (Bhai ki maut. Bhabhi se shaadi) Restarted

Konse character se sabse jyada nafrat Hai aapko..

  • Parry

    Votes: 45 13.7%
  • Ramesh

    Votes: 147 44.7%
  • Siya

    Votes: 37 11.2%
  • Ashu

    Votes: 50 15.2%
  • Harry

    Votes: 11 3.3%
  • Rajni

    Votes: 11 3.3%
  • Saloni

    Votes: 6 1.8%
  • Priya

    Votes: 10 3.0%
  • Aalu

    Votes: 5 1.5%
  • Reena

    Votes: 7 2.1%

  • Total voters
    329

Parryrock15

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Hello bro.....
This is my first comment on this thread.

Toh ab aate hai story par all of the way story completely jhakkas hai, lekin isme mujhe parry ke baap ka character samajh nahin aa raha hai. Pahli baat toh mujhe ye lagta hai ki isska baap ek number tharki hai . Dusri baat Priya ka baap gangster hai jo ki kisi bhi tarah se apni beti ko uske saath nahin jaane dega. Tisri baat Anshu jo ki apni hi chulll machaye huye hai shayad isne parry ki lene ka theka le rakha hai, lekin kuchh dinon baad parry iski lega. Chauthi baat Harry chutiya hai. Panchvi baat iska baap Anshu ki shaadi isliye karwa raha taki vah Anshu ki maa ki le sake.

Ab baat aati mere point of view se story ki toh sabse kuchh aisa karo parry apne baap ka pichhvada tod sake chahe sirf ek baar hi sahi lekin iske baap kutaii toh banti hai. Rahi baat Priya ki toh mujhe nahin lagta kuchh updated ke baad uska role bhi rahega ki nahin kyunki saali bewafa hai .

Hero ko improvise karo kyunki yeh sabse marwata fir raha hai ab Tak ki story me koi action nahin hai iska yeh sirf pani ki tarah ek dhara me bahta chalaa jaa raha hai


Toh writer ji yeh sirf mere views hai agar aapko sahi lage toh gaur farmaye verna chutiyapa samajh kar ignore kar do.

And most important thing is ki aap bahut mast story likh rahe ho toh please continue rakhna aur regular bhi.

Thanks......
Shukriya Bhai comment krke Apne apna review Diya review Milna Bahut important HOTA Thanks Bhai regular rahunga story ka end hokar rahega bakki Kabhi Kabhi time Nahi milta
 

Raja maurya

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Update 19

Parry ghar laut Aaya tha Woh Apne room main Chala jata hai .Saloni kitchen se parry ko Dekh leti Hai aur woh jaakar Ashu ko kehti hai ki , Ashu beta Parry aa gaya Hai usse batt karle Shaadi ki agar Maan Gaya Tu meri dusri bahu bhi aa Jayegi ..

Ashu- Mummy ji Mann hi Jayega aakhir Itne Achi Behan hai MERI uski family tu tyaar hai hamare ghar se rishta jodhne ke liye , Bass parry ki haa aur inka rooka Kar denge ..

Saloni- beta phir Tu tum Dono Devrani jethani Ghar sambhalna Main Tu aaram karungi.

Ashu- haha mummy ji aap Tu Abhi se sapne dekhne shuru ho Gayi hai Abhi Tu Kuch Tay bhi Nahi hoya Hai .

Saloni- Beta Mujhe tujh par pura bharosa Hai ki Tu parry ko mana hi legi Shaadi ke liye .

Ashu- maa ek kaam karte Hai shaam ko puchte hai dinner par tabh papa ji BHI ghar par honge unke Saamne puchege tu Woh aana kaani Karega Nahi Karega ..

Saloni - thek Hai beta .. Saloni bholi Khushi se fooli Nahi sAAMA RAHI thi ki uska ladla beta ki Shaadi ki Batt chal rahi thi ..

Idhar Rajni Abhi BHI Yeh sapne liye bethi thi ki parry usse pyaar Karega par pichle 2 Saal se parry ne usse Achi friend ke aage bhadne nahi Diya Rajni ke andhar Abh sabar Nahi bacha tha Woh Bass Parry ko paana chahti thi aur uske liye Woh Kuch BHI Karne ko tyaar thi ..

Rajni ko jabh Siya se pta chalta hai ki Priya wapis aa rahi Tu usse parry Apne haathon se jata hoya dikh rha tha Jo Kabhi uske haathon main tha hi Nahi ..

Idhar dinner time ho chuka tha Ramesh bhi ghar wapis aa chuka tha Ashu aur Saloni Dono batt ko shedne ki tyaari main thi parry bhi aata Hai Aur Beth Kar dinner shuru karte hai ..

Ashu- Papa ji Maine aapse Woh batt ki thi Na .

Ramesh- kis baare Main beta ..

Ashu- wohi Meri cousin ke baare main Soch rahi thi agar batt kr lete tu Acha hota ..

Parry- Bhabhi kis baare main batt ho rahi hai ..

Ashu- bass devar woh Aapne MERI cousin dekhi Hai Naa Supriya ..

Parry- ha kya hoya dekhi Hai.

Ashu- kaise lagti hai Woh aapko ..

Parry- Achi hai kiyu kya Hoya ..

Saloni- beta hum Soch rahe they ki Tumhari aur Supriya ki Jodi Achi lagegi , yeh sunte hi parry ko samajhne main jyada waqt nahi lagha ki Yeh kis baare main Batt ho rahi hai.

Parry- Aapka Kahi Mtlb Shaadi waadi tu nahi Hai ..

Ashu- bilkul Sahi samjhe aap devar ji hum aapki aur Supriya ki Shaadi ki batt Kar rahe Hai ..

Parry- aap logo ka dimaag tu thikane pare hai aap aisa Soch BHI kaise sakte hai 21 Ka Kuch mahine main hoonga main na koi job aur aap keh rahe Hai Shaadi karlo ..

Ramesh- beta Maine BHI tu 20 ki umar main Shaadi ki thi tumhari maa se aur rahi batt Naukri ki police main karwa dunga ..

Parry- Rehne dijiye Papa Mujhe Nahi Chahiye police ki Naukri aur na hi mujhe Koi Shaadi Karni hai kisi se.

Ashu- par devar ji Supriya aapko Bahut Pasand Karti Hai , Maine unke ghar walo ko promise Kiya hai ki Main usko apni Devrani banaogi aap Mujhe jhootha bajaoge unke Saamne..

Parry- ( 2 Saal main pehli baar gusse main ) mujhse pucha tha promise Karne se pehle , aapko kisne haq Diya ki meri life ka itna important faisla aap logi ..

Ashu- Lekin Supriya main Kami kya Hai ..

Parry- batt Kami ki Nahi hai mujhe Shaadi nahi Karni hai abhi Pehle career banana hai phir sochunga aur Abhi meri Shaadi ki age nahi Hai ..

Ramesh- parry Shaadi Tu Karni hi Hai Ek na ek din tu Abhi Karne main kya ho Jayega bahu Ka mann bhi reh Jayega career tu bannta rahega Zindagi padhi Hai aur Kami kya Hai iss Ghar main ..

Parry- aap Sabh log MERI Batt sunn lo main Shaadi Nahi Karne wala Filhal Tu bilkul hi Nahi aur Bhabhi aap jaise mera se Bina puche Mera Zindagi ke liye promise Karke aayi ho Supriya se Tu bilkul hi shaadi nahi karne wala .

Ashu - lekin Devar ji ... Woh itna hi Keh paati hai aur parry wha se uth Kar Chala gya ..

Ashu- Papa ji agar Yeh Nahi maana tu rishtedaari main tu main jhoothi sabit ho jaungi.


Ramesh-beta chinta matt karo Mann Jayega Abhi thoda ukhda Hoya Hai ..

Parry Apne kamre main aata Hai Gussa uske chehre se saaf jhalak rha tha ,.

Parry- behenchod mjk BNA rakha hai Yeh Hoti kon Hai MERI Shaadi Ka promise krke aane wali Woh bhi mujhse Bina puche ..

Idhar Shaam ki flight se priya wapis aane ke liye nikal chuki Thi thi , Harry BHI chuti leke ghar jaane ke liye Nikal chuka tha tha kahani ke kirdaar ek Baar Phirse ek hi shehar main ikathe ho rahe they .

Ashu jisko apni cousin ko Apni Devrani banane ka vaada apni rishtedaari main badhi shaan se Kar diya tha kiyunki usse Lagta tha ki parry Abh uski muthi main hai woh Shaadi ke liye aaram se Mann Jayega , Lekin uska bilkul Ulta Hoya Abh Woh pareshaan thi ki isko manaya Jaye tu Jaye Kaise . Ashu Reena ko phone lagati Hai ..

Ashu- maa kaise hoo aap .

Reena- beta main Tu theekh ho tum batao Tumhari awaaj itni ukhdi ukhdi kiyu lagh Rahi Hai Koi batt Hoyi Hai Kya.

Ashu- Woh maa parry ne Supriya se Shaadi Karne ke liye manna kr Diya Abh kya karo Main Tu wha itni badhi badhi shod ke aayi thi ki parry MERI batt taalega hi NHI.

Reena- Beta Mann Jayega Samdhi se kaho kehne ke liye Woh manwa lenge ..

Ashu- maa Papa ji ki batt bhi NHI maani Maine unke Saamne hi kha tha Lekin Woh NHI maana upar se Mujhe sunayi Woh alag ..

Reena- Beta chinta mat kar Aaj NHI tu kal Woh Mann hi Jayega , Aur batao Harry kabh aa rha Hai..

Ashu- Nikal gaye Jammu se kal Dupehar tak pahunch jayenge .

Reena-Achi batt hai Harry BHI aa Jayega jabh sabh joor denge Woh Mann Jayega dekhna ..

Ashu- ha maa Dekhte Hai ..maa Rohit Kaisa hai Mera chota SA bhua ko miss karta hai ..

Reena- kya Tu bhi Abhi ek Saal Ka Nahi hoya Woh Yaad kaise Karega ..

Ashu- kiyu Nahi kar sakta bhala ..

Reena- jabh tera bacha Hoga Tabh pata chal Jayega Tujhe ..

Ashu- kya maa tum BHI..

Raat Tu gujar jaati hai shaanti ke Saath par aane Wali Subha aakhir konsa toofan laane wali Hai Apne saath ,.

Subhe ke 7.30 parry uthta Hai Apni bike uthata hai roj ki Tarah aur Priya ke Ghar ki aur Nikal padta Hai , udhar late night ko Priya ghar pahunchi thi Woh aaram ki neend so Rahi thi ..

Parry aakar rukta Hai Priya ke Ghar ke Bahar kaano Main headphones aur roj ki Tarah Priya ki uss khidki ko dekhne Lagta Hai jisme usne Priya ki aakhiri jhalak Dekhi thi , Woh iss Umeed main ki shayad phir issi se Priya dikh jaaye , par Aaj uss khidki ke piche Priya thi Jo ki inn Sabh se bekhabar neend main khoyi Hoyi thi . Parry uss khidki ko Kitna bhi dekhta uske dimaag main seediyon se girne se pehle waali priya ki jhalak baar baar dikhayi de Rahi thi .

Samay beeta Hai 9 baj jate Hai roj ki Tarah aaj BHI niraasha lekar Woh Apni bike start karta hai aur wha se Nikal Jaata Hai , Priya ke kaano Main jaise hi bike ke start hone ki awaaj aati hai uski neend khul jaati Hai kiyunki usse Yeh awaaz jaani pehchaani Lagti hai Woh Jaldi se uth Kar wha se khidki main jaakar dekhti hai , par waha Koi Nahi dikhta bike ki awaaj doori ke saath Kam ho Gayi thi .

Udhar khidki khuli thi jiski parry ko 2 Saal se wait thi par Woh abh Apne Rx100 par Nikal chuka tha iss batt se bekhabar ..

Parry 20 minute main Ghar pahuch jata hai woh naha Kar jabh breakfast ke liye aata hai tu Ramesh Ashu wha par pehle hi.bethe hoye they ..

Parry- ( Mann Main ) yeh Phirse Shaadi Ka raag gayenge , parry aakar breakfast karne ke liye beth jaata Hai..

Ramesh-ha phir parry kya socha phir ..

Parry-kis baare main ..

Ramesh- ki kya Karna hai Abh life Main..

Parry- Soch rha hoon main apna Koi business Karo ..

Ramesh- Kaisa business ..

Parry- Abhi Soch hi RHA hoon Dekhte hai konsa business Acha Hai ..

Ramesh- Acha business Karne ke liye Tu paise ki jarurat padhti hai kaha se laaoge paisa.. Tabhi Ashu BOL padhti Hai..

Ashu- Supriya ke papa aur Bhai Ka jawellery shops Hai Woh log Devar ji ko business samjha BHI sakte hai Aur shuru bhi karwa sakte Hai..

Parry- Bhabhi wohi par hi ruk jayie usse aage kehne ki Koi jarurat Nahi Hai mujhe smajah aa rha Hai aapki batt kidhar jaa rahi Hai .

Ashu- Devar ji aapko aakhir problem Kya hai Supriya se Shaadi karne ki.

Parry- problem Koi Nahi hai lekin Mujhe itni Jaldi shaadi nahi Karni bass ..

Ashu- ek kaam karte Hai engagement Kar Lete hai Shaadi jabh aap chahe tabh kar lena Supriya Bahut hi Achi Ladki Hai Woh Bahut psnd Karti Hai aapko..

Parry - yaar aapko samajh kiyu Nahi aata ,woh mujhe psnd Karti Hai Tu Main kya karo main Nahi karta usko psnd aur jo Marji ho Jaye Shaadi Tu Main karunga Nahi jo Marji ho Jaye iss liye plz chain se jeene do Mujhe . Parry breakfast bich Main shod Kar wha se Chala jata Hai .

Ashu-( aankhon main aanso laake) Papa ji main Itni shaan se Apne Devar ke liye haa Karke aayi thi abh Main kis mooh se unse milungi , devar ji ne Tu MERI izzat ka rati bhar nahi socha aakhir maayeka main kya kahenge log.

Ramesh-beta tum chinta mat Karo main manaoga isse hum Apni bahu ki zubaan ko jhootha thodi padhne denge ..

Ashu ne Apna Ram Bhan ramesh ke roop main shod diya tha Dekhte Hai kya hota hai Parry mangega Shaadi ke liye ja Nahi..

Idhar Dupehar tak Harry BHI pahuch gya Ghar sabse Mila Woh sabse Milne ke baad jabh woh Ashu ke Saath kamre main tha Woh Ashu ko Apni baahon Main bhar leta hai .

Harry- Maine Apni apsara ko Bahut miss kiya . Ashu koi jawab Nahi deti Mooh sa BNA Kar khadi rehti hai ..

Harry- kya Hoya darling Itni ukhdi ukhdi kiyun ho..

Ashu- ukhdi hi hongi jabh iss ghar main MERI Koi izzat hi Nahi hai Tu ..

Harry- kya ho gya yaaar, Ashu phir usse saari batt bata deti Hai.

Harry- bass Itni se batt ..

Ashu- aapko yeh Itni c Batt lagh rahi Hai ..

Harry- tention matt lo Tum papa par shod do agar unhone Kaha Hai ki Woh Parry ko manwa Lenge Mtlb Parry maana hi samjho.

Ashu- sachi naa.

Harry- haa Yaar , yeh sunn Kar Ashu uchal Kar Harry ke gaale lagh jaati Hai.

To be continued.

Guy's update Ka size chota Hai uske liye maafi update 20 bhi chota hi hoga Jo KAL ayega kal BHI mujhe time kam milega iss liye parso se update aayenge jinka size bhi badha hoga aur kahani Abh raftaar bhi pkdegi ..
Mast update bhai
 
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Dhansu

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Waiting bhai
 
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Xfan

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mast sory hai bhidu...
lekin sala ye flashback jaldi se khatm karo aur story ko track pe lao jaldi...
 
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Bhai update?
 

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Update sir
 
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