LoverBoy19
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Ashu toh apne husband ke jaane ke gum mein doobi hui hain, lekin shaadi ke liye kaise maan leti hain abhi tak terahwi bhi na hui hain, aur us insan se jisse wo bhi nafrat karti hain,,
Thanks broNice story so far bro but little slow hope so main story starts soon
bhai besak aap achha likh rahe ho, aur behas nahin kar rahe hain bhai, bas discuss kar rahe hain jo mujhe laga aur lomdi bhaiy koo.Bhai sala main khud ko average writer samjahta hoon aur aap logo ki behas chal rhi hai story ko lekar mujhe abh lagh rha shayad Kuch acha hi Likh rha hoo