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Shi pakde haiBap shadishuda beti ki chudai
Mein bahut Ras aayega...
Mangal sutra mein....
Shi pakde haiBap shadishuda beti ki chudai
Mein bahut Ras aayega...
Mangal sutra mein....
Ise kehate hai upadateHi guys ...main nahi janta aap kya soch rahe honge ye title dekh kar........aapko kya lagta hai....ki ye kaha ni kis ke upar hai....agar aap readers hai to aap jante hi honge....ki aakhir meri kahani ka favourite topic kya ...hoga...
Ye kahani release karne me bahot time lagega....lekin mujhe aap bataiye ....aap is kahani ke bare me kya soch te hai....aap ko kya lagta hai...ki ...ye kahani kiske upar hogi.....
Aur haa aap bhi kuch apne ideas share kar skte hai....agar mujhe acchi lagi to main story me aapki I'd kaa naam jaroor dunga ....
Update pleaseMangalsutra - season-01
EP-01-unknown number
Mumbai ek sapno ka shahar ....naye sapne ...naye khwab ..aur naye jindagi ki maine ab shuruwat ki thi....maine apna purana kal bhool Diya tha.(shayad filhal)....lekin ab mujhe is nayisi zindgai ko jeena tha jo maine kabhi nahi jiya tha...mujhe laga bhi nahi tha ki ye din kabhi meri jindagi me ayega ..khair ab main ghar tak aagayi thi ...
Ramesh- Darling Sunita, ye hai hamara pyara sa Ghar ..ab yahi tumhe apni baaki zindagi ghujarni hai ..mere sath..bahome bahe dalkar...haina?
Aur meri taraf dekhke muskurane lage..
Ramesh inki umr 43 saal ki hai..unki 1 wife ki death karib 5 saal pahle hua tha...ab unke zindagi me unka sirf ek beta tha..uski umr 19 saal hai...Ramesh ek businessman hai...unke pass shoharat ki koi kami nahi..bas kami thi to unhe kisi apne ki...aur unhone wo mujhme dhunda....aur unhone mere gale me mangalsutra pahnaya aur maang me sindoor ..
Main Sunita meri umar 27 saal hai..main janti hoon aap log ye soch rahe honge ki is budhe ke sath fir kyun shadi ki ...kahani kafi lambi hai.....so kahani ki taraf chalte hai.....
Sunita- haa jaanu...ab aapke saath hi zindagi gujarni hai ....aur maine unke pass jaake unke Gaal ko chuma...
Ab hum dono Ghar ki taraf badhe...unka ghar kafi bada tha ..main dekh ke hi hairan hogayi.....Ramesh ne bell bajayi ....tabhi unka beta bahar aaya...
Ramesh- Ajay dekho kaun Aya hai..ab se ye tumhari maa hai...unse baat karo..main fresh hoke ata hoon...
Lekin Ajay ko shayad main pasand nahi thi ...usne mujhe bahot gusse se dekha...aur wo chupchap andar chala gaya...mujhe us waqt bahot bura laga..maine us wakt yahi socha ki mujhe Jada nahi sochna chahiye...waisebhi main is Ghar me nayi hoon...
Shaam ko maine sabke liye khana banaya aur sabne khana kha liya...shaam ke wakt bhi Ajay ne kuch baat nahi ki.....maine socha ki use aur wakt chahiye hoga. ...khana khane ke baad main bartan dho rahi thi.....ki tabhi pichese Ramesh ne aake mujhe pakda. ..
Ramesh- chalo Jaan ab bas karo ye kaam karna...asli kaam to hum andar karenge...
Main- chodiye mujhe ...aapkaa beta aajayega...
Ramesh-nahi meri jaan wo upar jaake so Raha hai...kuch nahi hoga ab chalo jaldi se room me ...
Main- thik hai ati hoon aap jao...
Kuch wakt baad maine bartan dhoye..aur main taiyyar hone lagi ..red saree..black sleeveless blouse....mere 36 ke boob bahot mote lag rahe the ...kyunki Maine bra nahi pahni thi ..upar mangalsutra chudiya aur thdi jewellery pahan Li...
aur main..andar unke room chali gayi...wo mera intezaar kar rahe the...unhone mujhe dekhte mere pass daud pade aur aur mujhe bahome bhar liya ..
Ramesh- kitna tarsaogi meri jaan ...ab raha nahi jaa raha hai ...
Main unka utawala pan dekhkar hasne lagi...mujhe unhone jor se khicha aur bed par leta diya ...mujhe jor jor se kiss karne lage ....
Ramesh---ummmmmm...ummmm Jaan tum kitni khubsurat ho.....Mera nasib hai ki tumhare jaisi jannat mujhe mil gayi...
Main hasne lagi ..
Main-accha..ji .
Ab main bhi unko kiss karne me saath dene lagi ..wo mere hoto ko jaise chabana chahte the ...main unki ye bhook samajh bhi sakti thi ..
Ab wo mere gale ko chum rahe the...saath me meri chuchiya bhi daba rahe the ..ab dhire dhire mere andar garmi badh rahi thi...main halki halki siskiya le rahi thi ...wo mujhe chume Jaa rahe the ....ab maine blouse ka hoon khola aur apni chuchiyoko khula chodadiya...wo dekh ke Ramesh ke maano hosh udgaye ..
Ramesh- Sunita tum sachme apsara ho kya chuchiya hai tumhari....
Ab wo mere chuchiyo ko chusne lage...main upni chuchiya uthake unke mooh me de rahi thi...
Main- yes ....ahhhhh....aisehi....ahhhhhhh.....dhire...chaato........hmmmm......ahhhh.....dhir dabao na...Ramesh jiiiiii .....ahhhhhh
Lekin wo mujhpe taras nahi khana chahte the...wo jor jor se chatne aur dabane lage...
Ramesh- Sunita...schme tumhare mammo ka kamaal nahi....wahhh.......ummmmmm...ummmmmm.uhmmmm...
Wo curse chatne lage....
Maine unka shirt utar diya...aur pant se unka lund nikala....unka lund thik thak tha(lekin jitne Maine aajtak liye the usme ye chota hai..._-ye story season2 me)
Ab unhone meri saaree khol di aur mujhe pura nanga kardiya...wo dhire dhire niche jakar unhone kiss karna shuru kar diya...maine unka sar apne pet be daba rahi thi...mujhe laga ab wo meri choot chatenge...lekin unhone aisa nahi kiya...
Wo uthagaye
Ramesh- mujhe ye cheeze chatna aur chatwana pasand nahi hai
Main ab nirash hoagyi..lekin maine kaha
Main- koi baat nahi jo aapke manko accha Lage wo aap karo...
Ramesh ne apna Lund sidha mere andar ghusaya...aur mujhe pelne lage. ..
Mujhe bhi ab thoda maja aa raha tha ...wo dhire dhire pele Jaa rahe the ..
Ramesh- ahhhhhhhhhh.....sun.....iiiiitttaaa.....aahhhhh.....sachme kya mast chut hai tumhari....ahhhhhhhhhh......
Main ye sunke khush hoagi ..mujhe bhi maja aane laga tha....
Main-- Ramesh aur jor se chodiyena...Jann .....aahhhh....aur jor se daliye...........ahhhhhhhhh.......
Ramesh-- haaa....meri jaaannnnn.....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....ohhhh....ye lo.....
Ab pure room me awaz goonj rahi thi ....puchhhhhhhh.....pucchhhhh...pcuuuuu
Main-- haa Ramesh aisehi ahhhhhh....ahhhhhhchodo .....ahhhh......main ab puri garam hoagyi thi ..
Ramesh-- aahhhhhhhh.....Sunita main.........main......ahhh....nikal raha hoon......ahhhhhh.......itna kahte wo jhadgye...
Mere andar andar hi andar mujhe shock sa laga ...ki akhir kis tarah mujhe meri zindagi bitani padegi . ..kahi aisa na ho jise door jaa rahi hoo ..wahi fir se naa...ho ..lekin main ye soch 1 min me dimakh se bahar nikala ...aur khudko kaha ki koi baat nahii...jald hi main pregnent bhi ho jaungi ...tab fir pet se hojaungi...fir ye saari chize kuch nahi lagegi ...
Ramesh- ahhhh....Sunita meri jaan tumhe maja to Aya na ...
Main-- haa mujhe bahot maja aya .).ab main kya kahti)
Ramesh- main janta hoon ab meri umr ho chuki hai aur tum abhi jawan hoo .I'm sorry ..
Main-- nahi aisa kuch nahi mujhe sachme achha laga...
Ek baat to thi ki Ramesh mujhe sachme bahot chahte the unki pahli wife ke baad unke liye main bahot mayne rakhti thi ...
Ramesh- ok darling gn....
Meri pyas abhitak bujhi nahi thi..par mere pass koi option nahi tha ..maine ab us bare me sochna chod diya. ..aur main bhi sone lagi ....
Ab 15 din baad....
Sabkuch normal chal rhaa tha...ajay bhi ab mujhe mom yaa maa kahke pukarta tha ..sex se bhi mujhe utni dikkat nahi thi ...sab kuch thi chal raha tha...fir achanak ek din...
Ramesh- bye Sunita darling...main late ho rhaa hoo ...
Main-- ok jaldi ayiyega ....
Thodi der baad Ajay bhi college ki taraf Jaa Raha tha ..
Ajay - main jaa raha hoon maa
Main-- thik hai beta ...apna khayal rakho ...
Ab sab chale gaye..1 ghanta hogaya tha..ghar ka sara kaam bhi hua tha..main ab akeli bore ho Rahi thi...to maine TV on kiya...main Tv dekh rahi thi ..tabhi ek call aya...maine dekha to wo UNKNOWN NUMBER tha....maine call pic kiya ..
Main-- ji hello kaun hai aap...
Stranger-Hello Sunita mam kaisi ho ..
Main-- ji kaun main nahi pahchanpayi lekin aap kaun....
Stranger- itne bade Ghar me tum akele bore hoti hogi ..hai na...kya tumhari pyass bujhti bhi hai Ramesh se...mujhe to nahi lagta......
Main bilkul shock hogayi...- kaun ho tum aur ye kaisi badtameezi se baat kar rahe ho ...
Stranger- ooohhh...acchaa....to Hardin itni pyasi kyun rahti ho...main samjh sakta hoon...tumhari choot ki pyaas bujhti nahi .....tumhe shayad naye lund ko khojna chaiye....
Main-- bas karo warna main apne pati ko bataungi...yaa nahi to police complain karogi .
Stranger- oooohhh to thik hai ....tum chahe to ye jhoot bata sakti ho ...lekin main janta hoon tumhare andar ki aag ...aur pyass ...tunhari chut kis tarah lund lene ke liye tadap rahi hai ..
Main- nahi...kuch bhi mat kaho...
Stranger- accha agar tum chaho to apne pati ko bata skti ho mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai ..lekin main hi hoo Jo tunhari ye madad kar skta hoon ..tujhe ye maja de skata hoo....baaki tumhari marji....ab bye...kal baat karte hai...tumhare liye gift hai mere pass....
Main-- helloo....hhe..
Usne phone kaat diya. Main ab pasine se lat ho chuki thi ..main ab samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki ye kya ho raha hai...akhi wo kaun hoga.
Kya chahta hoga mujhse?
Ab wo kal bhi call karega.??
Agar kisine sun ya dikh liya to ..??
Continued in next episode
Episode-02- hawas
Bahetarin suruat ki hai bhaiMangalsutra - season-01
EP-01-unknown number
Mumbai ek sapno ka shahar ....naye sapne ...naye khwab ..aur naye jindagi ki maine ab shuruwat ki thi....maine apna purana kal bhool Diya tha.(shayad filhal)....lekin ab mujhe is nayisi zindgai ko jeena tha jo maine kabhi nahi jiya tha...mujhe laga bhi nahi tha ki ye din kabhi meri jindagi me ayega ..khair ab main ghar tak aagayi thi ...
Ramesh- Darling Sunita, ye hai hamara pyara sa Ghar ..ab yahi tumhe apni baaki zindagi ghujarni hai ..mere sath..bahome bahe dalkar...haina?
Aur meri taraf dekhke muskurane lage..
Ramesh inki umr 43 saal ki hai..unki 1 wife ki death karib 5 saal pahle hua tha...ab unke zindagi me unka sirf ek beta tha..uski umr 19 saal hai...Ramesh ek businessman hai...unke pass shoharat ki koi kami nahi..bas kami thi to unhe kisi apne ki...aur unhone wo mujhme dhunda....aur unhone mere gale me mangalsutra pahnaya aur maang me sindoor ..
Main Sunita meri umar 27 saal hai..main janti hoon aap log ye soch rahe honge ki is budhe ke sath fir kyun shadi ki ...kahani kafi lambi hai.....so kahani ki taraf chalte hai.....
Sunita- haa jaanu...ab aapke saath hi zindagi gujarni hai ....aur maine unke pass jaake unke Gaal ko chuma...
Ab hum dono Ghar ki taraf badhe...unka ghar kafi bada tha ..main dekh ke hi hairan hogayi.....Ramesh ne bell bajayi ....tabhi unka beta bahar aaya...
Ramesh- Ajay dekho kaun Aya hai..ab se ye tumhari maa hai...unse baat karo..main fresh hoke ata hoon...
Lekin Ajay ko shayad main pasand nahi thi ...usne mujhe bahot gusse se dekha...aur wo chupchap andar chala gaya...mujhe us waqt bahot bura laga..maine us wakt yahi socha ki mujhe Jada nahi sochna chahiye...waisebhi main is Ghar me nayi hoon...
Shaam ko maine sabke liye khana banaya aur sabne khana kha liya...shaam ke wakt bhi Ajay ne kuch baat nahi ki.....maine socha ki use aur wakt chahiye hoga. ...khana khane ke baad main bartan dho rahi thi.....ki tabhi pichese Ramesh ne aake mujhe pakda. ..
Ramesh- chalo Jaan ab bas karo ye kaam karna...asli kaam to hum andar karenge...
Main- chodiye mujhe ...aapkaa beta aajayega...
Ramesh-nahi meri jaan wo upar jaake so Raha hai...kuch nahi hoga ab chalo jaldi se room me ...
Main- thik hai ati hoon aap jao...
Kuch wakt baad maine bartan dhoye..aur main taiyyar hone lagi ..red saree..black sleeveless blouse....mere 36 ke boob bahot mote lag rahe the ...kyunki Maine bra nahi pahni thi ..upar mangalsutra chudiya aur thdi jewellery pahan Li...
aur main..andar unke room chali gayi...wo mera intezaar kar rahe the...unhone mujhe dekhte mere pass daud pade aur aur mujhe bahome bhar liya ..
Ramesh- kitna tarsaogi meri jaan ...ab raha nahi jaa raha hai ...
Main unka utawala pan dekhkar hasne lagi...mujhe unhone jor se khicha aur bed par leta diya ...mujhe jor jor se kiss karne lage ....
Ramesh---ummmmmm...ummmm Jaan tum kitni khubsurat ho.....Mera nasib hai ki tumhare jaisi jannat mujhe mil gayi...
Main hasne lagi ..
Main-accha..ji .
Ab main bhi unko kiss karne me saath dene lagi ..wo mere hoto ko jaise chabana chahte the ...main unki ye bhook samajh bhi sakti thi ..
Ab wo mere gale ko chum rahe the...saath me meri chuchiya bhi daba rahe the ..ab dhire dhire mere andar garmi badh rahi thi...main halki halki siskiya le rahi thi ...wo mujhe chume Jaa rahe the ....ab maine blouse ka hoon khola aur apni chuchiyoko khula chodadiya...wo dekh ke Ramesh ke maano hosh udgaye ..
Ramesh- Sunita tum sachme apsara ho kya chuchiya hai tumhari....
Ab wo mere chuchiyo ko chusne lage...main upni chuchiya uthake unke mooh me de rahi thi...
Main- yes ....ahhhhh....aisehi....ahhhhhhh.....dhire...chaato........hmmmm......ahhhh.....dhir dabao na...Ramesh jiiiiii .....ahhhhhh
Lekin wo mujhpe taras nahi khana chahte the...wo jor jor se chatne aur dabane lage...
Ramesh- Sunita...schme tumhare mammo ka kamaal nahi....wahhh.......ummmmmm...ummmmmm.uhmmmm...
Wo curse chatne lage....
Maine unka shirt utar diya...aur pant se unka lund nikala....unka lund thik thak tha(lekin jitne Maine aajtak liye the usme ye chota hai..._-ye story season2 me)
Ab unhone meri saaree khol di aur mujhe pura nanga kardiya...wo dhire dhire niche jakar unhone kiss karna shuru kar diya...maine unka sar apne pet be daba rahi thi...mujhe laga ab wo meri choot chatenge...lekin unhone aisa nahi kiya...
Wo uthagaye
Ramesh- mujhe ye cheeze chatna aur chatwana pasand nahi hai
Main ab nirash hoagyi..lekin maine kaha
Main- koi baat nahi jo aapke manko accha Lage wo aap karo...
Ramesh ne apna Lund sidha mere andar ghusaya...aur mujhe pelne lage. ..
Mujhe bhi ab thoda maja aa raha tha ...wo dhire dhire pele Jaa rahe the ..
Ramesh- ahhhhhhhhhh.....sun.....iiiiitttaaa.....aahhhhh.....sachme kya mast chut hai tumhari....ahhhhhhhhhh......
Main ye sunke khush hoagi ..mujhe bhi maja aane laga tha....
Main-- Ramesh aur jor se chodiyena...Jann .....aahhhh....aur jor se daliye...........ahhhhhhhhh.......
Ramesh-- haaa....meri jaaannnnn.....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....ohhhh....ye lo.....
Ab pure room me awaz goonj rahi thi ....puchhhhhhhh.....pucchhhhh...pcuuuuu
Main-- haa Ramesh aisehi ahhhhhh....ahhhhhhchodo .....ahhhh......main ab puri garam hoagyi thi ..
Ramesh-- aahhhhhhhh.....Sunita main.........main......ahhh....nikal raha hoon......ahhhhhh.......itna kahte wo jhadgye...
Mere andar andar hi andar mujhe shock sa laga ...ki akhir kis tarah mujhe meri zindagi bitani padegi . ..kahi aisa na ho jise door jaa rahi hoo ..wahi fir se naa...ho ..lekin main ye soch 1 min me dimakh se bahar nikala ...aur khudko kaha ki koi baat nahii...jald hi main pregnent bhi ho jaungi ...tab fir pet se hojaungi...fir ye saari chize kuch nahi lagegi ...
Ramesh- ahhhh....Sunita meri jaan tumhe maja to Aya na ...
Main-- haa mujhe bahot maja aya .).ab main kya kahti)
Ramesh- main janta hoon ab meri umr ho chuki hai aur tum abhi jawan hoo .I'm sorry ..
Main-- nahi aisa kuch nahi mujhe sachme achha laga...
Ek baat to thi ki Ramesh mujhe sachme bahot chahte the unki pahli wife ke baad unke liye main bahot mayne rakhti thi ...
Ramesh- ok darling gn....
Meri pyas abhitak bujhi nahi thi..par mere pass koi option nahi tha ..maine ab us bare me sochna chod diya. ..aur main bhi sone lagi ....
Ab 15 din baad....
Sabkuch normal chal rhaa tha...ajay bhi ab mujhe mom yaa maa kahke pukarta tha ..sex se bhi mujhe utni dikkat nahi thi ...sab kuch thi chal raha tha...fir achanak ek din...
Ramesh- bye Sunita darling...main late ho rhaa hoo ...
Main-- ok jaldi ayiyega ....
Thodi der baad Ajay bhi college ki taraf Jaa Raha tha ..
Ajay - main jaa raha hoon maa
Main-- thik hai beta ...apna khayal rakho ...
Ab sab chale gaye..1 ghanta hogaya tha..ghar ka sara kaam bhi hua tha..main ab akeli bore ho Rahi thi...to maine TV on kiya...main Tv dekh rahi thi ..tabhi ek call aya...maine dekha to wo UNKNOWN NUMBER tha....maine call pic kiya ..
Main-- ji hello kaun hai aap...
Stranger-Hello Sunita mam kaisi ho ..
Main-- ji kaun main nahi pahchanpayi lekin aap kaun....
Stranger- itne bade Ghar me tum akele bore hoti hogi ..hai na...kya tumhari pyass bujhti bhi hai Ramesh se...mujhe to nahi lagta......
Main bilkul shock hogayi...- kaun ho tum aur ye kaisi badtameezi se baat kar rahe ho ...
Stranger- ooohhh...acchaa....to Hardin itni pyasi kyun rahti ho...main samjh sakta hoon...tumhari choot ki pyaas bujhti nahi .....tumhe shayad naye lund ko khojna chaiye....
Main-- bas karo warna main apne pati ko bataungi...yaa nahi to police complain karogi .
Stranger- oooohhh to thik hai ....tum chahe to ye jhoot bata sakti ho ...lekin main janta hoon tumhare andar ki aag ...aur pyass ...tunhari chut kis tarah lund lene ke liye tadap rahi hai ..
Main- nahi...kuch bhi mat kaho...
Stranger- accha agar tum chaho to apne pati ko bata skti ho mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai ..lekin main hi hoo Jo tunhari ye madad kar skta hoon ..tujhe ye maja de skata hoo....baaki tumhari marji....ab bye...kal baat karte hai...tumhare liye gift hai mere pass....
Main-- helloo....hhe..
Usne phone kaat diya. Main ab pasine se lat ho chuki thi ..main ab samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki ye kya ho raha hai...akhi wo kaun hoga.
Kya chahta hoga mujhse?
Ab wo kal bhi call karega.??
Agar kisine sun ya dikh liya to ..??
Continued in next episode
Episode-02- hawas
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