Incest MANHOOS {मनहूस} by Neha sexy

[Rahul]

Thanks dost
Lekin sorry aaj update nahi kar paungi

Koi na kal update kar dena

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Par kal ka update zabardast hona chaiye

 

[N sexy]

Koi na kal update kar dena

Thanks

 

[N sexy]

Par kal ka update zabardast hona chaiye

Bilkul

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Rajurajsingh91]

Nice update waiting next

 

[Hellohoney]

Neha ji update kab derahi he

 

[PARADOX]

Read all the updates..
Bohot achhi tarah pesh kiye ho aap....
Wese mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki aap story ko ek point me lane ke liye betab hain aur usike chalte story ko chhote chhote sence me hi aage badha rahi hai....

Wese story tragedy type ki hai to batadun tragedy type ki story mujhe bohot pasand balki main likhna bhi pasand karta hun... Ishiliye chhoti si chhoti galtiyan bhi najarandaj nahin karunga...
Skills par aur kam karo.... Character ki bhav ko aur bhi nikharo taki koi bhi character me khudko imagine kar sake...
Wese kahani ki plot aapne jo chuna hai usme bhavnaon ko aur bhi bhavuk tarki se dikhaya jaa sakta hai..... Let do work on it....

Waiting for update

 

[N sexy]

Read all the updates..
Bohot achhi tarah pesh kiye ho aap....
Wese mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki aap story ko ek point me lane ke liye betab hain aur usike chalte story ko chhote chhote sence me hi aage badha rahi hai....

Wese story tragedy type ki hai to batadun tragedy type ki story mujhe bohot pasand balki main likhna bhi pasand karta hun... Ishiliye chhoti si chhoti galtiyan bhi najarandaj nahin karunga...
Skills par aur kam karo.... Character ki bhav ko aur bhi nikharo taki koi bhi character me khudko imagine kar sake...
Wese kahani ki plot aapne jo chuna hai usme bhavnaon ko aur bhi bhavuk tarki se dikhaya jaa sakta hai..... Let do work on it....

Waiting for update

Thanks dear,
Pahle to main ye bata du ki mujhe likhne ka shouk hai isliye likh rahi hu main koi professional writer nahi hu isliye galtiya to hongi hi isliye aap sath bane rahe aur galti hone par mujhe batate rahe taki main unhe sudhar saku

 

[Raaz1886]

UPDATE 6
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jaise taise din nikla aur naina ne mujhe bade pyar se chai nashta karwaya subah karib 10 baje bua wahan aa gai aur mishra uncle ka dhanywaad karke mujhe apne sath ghar par le aayi.
phir wo mujhe mere room me chhod kar papa aur mummy ke paas chali gai bua ke jane ke baad hi mere tino bhai bahan mere paas aaye unke chehre par ek shaitani muskurahat thi, waise bhi kal ki pitai se mere ang ang abhi tak dard kar raha tha aur main abhi aur maar nahi khana chahta tha to jaise taise wahan se bua jidhar gai thi us taraf bhaga, bua papa mummy ke room me thi main room ke bahar hi ruk gaya mujhe pata tha ke wo tino madarchod yaha apni maa chudwane nahi aa sakte the wo tino hi mere pichhe aaye lekin mujhe wahan khada dekh kar wo aankhe badi badi karke wahan se chale gaye jaise kah rahe ho ki 'ruk ja bachhu tujhe baad me dekhte hai'
"bhaiya ye kya karne ja rahe the aap, kyon itni buri tarah pita aapne sonu ko" tabhi mujhe bua ki aawaj aai
"mera bas chalta to kal main us manhoos ko maar hi dalta wo to mishra ji aa gaye jinki wajah se wo bach gaya" mera baap gurraya
"bhaiya, kyon itni nafrat karte ho aap sonu se aakhir wo aapki hi aulad hai" bua boli
"main use apni aulad nahi manta SHOBHA wo mere liye ek manhoos, ek panauti se jyada kuchh nahi hai, wo to pitaji ne wasiyat kar ke fansa diya warna main to kabka uska namonishan mita deta" mera baap bola, shobha meri bua ka naam hai
"jab us wasiyat ke liye itna sabra kar liya to kuchh saal aur kar lo, kal agar use kuchh ho jata to gaye the aapke 1000-1200 karore" bua boli
"us manhoos ki manhusiyat se bachne ke liye mujhe ye bhi manzoor hai" papa bole
"lekin bhaiya pitaji us se bahut pyar karte the kam se kam unka to maan rakh lo" bua boli
"wo hi soch kar ab tak ruka hua tha lekin ab bardasht nahi hota, ab wo manhoos mere bachho se bhi aankh milane laga hai kal to wo bach gaya lekin ab agar wo is ghar me raha to kisi bhi din wo jaan se ja sakta hai" papa phir gusse se bole
"to aapko sirf uske is ghar me rahne se pareshani hai, hai na? to chalo thik hai main use apne sath le jati hu tab to thik hai na" bua boli
"tu kuchh bhi kar mujhe koi matlab nahi hai bas agar tu use zinda dekhna chahti hai to use meri nazro ke samne se door kar de" papa bole
"thik hai phir main use aaj hi apne sath le jati hu ab wo mere sath hi rahega" bua boli aur papa ke room se bahar aa gai
mujhe wahan khada dekh bua ne mujhe apna jaruri saman pack karne ko kaha to main apne room me gaya aur packing karne laga
aaj mujhe wasiyat ke bare me pata laga tha lekin meri umra itni nahi thi ki main is bare me jyada kuchh soch ya samajh pata lekin abhi to mujhe isi baat se rahat mil rahi thi ki chalo yahan se to jaan chuti lekin isme mera ek nuksaan bhi ho raha tha naina se mujhe door hona pad raha tha jiska mujhe bahut dukh ho raha tha lekin ab kiya bhi kya ja sakta tha.
main packing karke bua ke paas aa gaya tha aur bua to jaise taiyaar hi baithi thi unhone mera hath pakda aur ghar se bahar nikal gai maine pichhe palat kar dekha to mere sabhi ghar wale wahan khade the lekin kisi ke bhi chehre par koi bhaav nahi the yahan tak ki meri maa jisne mujhe janam diya tha wo bhi mujhe jate hue aise dekh rahi thi jaise koi bala tali lekin meri aankho me aansu the maine apne aansu pochhe aur aage badha tabhi meri nazar naina par padi jo apne ghar ke gate ke paas khade dabdabayi aankho se mujhe dekh rahi thi shayad use pata lag gaya tha ki main hamesha ke liye yahan se ja raha tha
pahle bua apni car me baithi aur phir mujhe baitha liya maine aakhiri baar apne ghar ki taraf dekha aur jaise hi car aage badhi maine naina ko dekh kar bye kiya aur apne aap se wada kiya ki main wapas jarur aaunga.
aur car wo sab pichhe chhod kar farrate se aage badh gai......

Superb update...hero ko ab apni family se chhutkara mil gya...