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Incest Manhoos ( action, crime, drama emotional story)

Best character in story & i like the story


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Baap Ji

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Bhai iss ka matlb kya hua tab....
Yahan par toh likhe ho aap iss ID ke original karta dhrta nhi ho....
Kam se kam jhooth toh mat bolo....
Bhai kisi bhi story par itni jaldi readers ka response nhi milta....
Aapka story abhi sahi track par nhi aaya tha jab aata toh response bhi milta....
For e.g. Aapne aaj ek ped lagaya hai aur dusre din aap uss ped se phal ya phool mango ge toh milega nhi na toh waise he yahan bhi hai....
Readers bhi waise he hote hai....
Sahi se story chalu nhi huyi aur aapne story band kar di....
Bura lga ho toh sorry..


Bhi ye waqio k liye likha jo mujhse sawal karte ki 2 stories already 3rd kyo start ki jhuth nhi koi
Or apne sabhi dosto ko maine bta diya k mai hi hu dost nhi mera is story ka writer
 
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kamdev99008

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Bhai iss ka matlb kya hua tab....
Yahan par toh likhe ho aap iss ID ke original karta dhrta nhi ho....
Kam se kam jhooth toh mat bolo....
Bhai kisi bhi story par itni jaldi readers ka response nhi milta....
Aapka story abhi sahi track par nhi aaya tha jab aata toh response bhi milta....
For e.g. Aapne aaj ek ped lagaya hai aur dusre din aap uss ped se phal ya phool mango ge toh milega nhi na toh waise he yahan bhi hai....
Readers bhi waise he hote hai....
Sahi se story chalu nhi huyi aur aapne story band kar di....
Bura lga ho toh sorry..
sahi baat..........
ped ko roj update ka "paani" lagao....... dhire dhire waiting ke "patte" nikleinge fir kuchh dino baad review ke "phool aur kante" :D
 
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Bhai maine update dena isliye band Kyo k support nhi hai agar 3 hours me Mai ek update tayar karta hu to readers ka bhi support karna chahiye
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MAAF KARNA BHAI

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ABHI CHALNA SURU HI KIYA THA KI YE MAAN KAR RUK GAYE KI DILLI DUR HAI

KAHIR AAPKI MARZI, AAP IS KAHANI KE RACHNAKAR HAIN, AAP IS KAHANI LEKAHAK HAIN TO IS KAHANI KA KYA KARNA HAI YE AAPKI MARZI HAI

MERI BAATON KA BURA LAGA HO TO MAAF KARNA.............. THANKS !!!!
 

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Bhai maine update dena isliye band Kyo k support nhi hai agar 3 hours me Mai ek update tayar karta hu to readers ka bhi support karna chahiye
Support nhi
Isliye update dena band kar diya
Woh bhai ap ke marzi hai update do ya na do mujhe ap ke soch ik bacha ke tarha lage Jo bacha chocolate do to ap mera apne hai ni to ni janta .
Ap sand story ko dekho pahle kitna support aata tha aur ab kitna aata kuch likho ge to support aeee ga bro
 

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Update 7

Richa : beta tum bas meri dono betio ki dekh bhal karna jo unhe chahiye wo dena tum Sirf unki mais ho

Sonam : ji memsab

Richa : mai tumse tumhara Naam puchna to bhul hi gayi.
Sonam : hamara nam sonam hai

Richa : bada sundar hai bikul tumhari tarah ab jao samne wale dono kamro ko ache se saaf karo or unhe saza do

Sonam : ji memsab

Ab age....


Dpsu. College Delhi

Saumya Rita k pass se uth kar arshi k pass aakar baith jati hai

Saumya dhire se : arshi tu ab tak lekar baithi us Baat ko
Arshi : mai heirs se bhut pyar karti tune cheating karke cut kiye ab tujhe nhi chodungi.

Saumya : everything is fear love & war

Arshi smile karte hue: the most dengerous animal in the world's is a silent smiling arshi

Ye dekh kar saumya k chahere par chinta k bhab nazar ane lagte hai.

Saumya ghabrate hue : mere sath kya karegi tu

Arshi : hihihihi

Ye dekh kar saumya chid jati hai

Saumya : tu arushi dono lesbian hai ye Baat pura college jaan jayega jaldi se bta de kya karegi.

Arshi gusse me : tujhse kisne kaha ham dono behne lesbian hai

Saumya saitani smile dete hue : hahaha i saw you in London

Arshi : hamne bas kiss kiya tha

Saumya : hihihihi jaldi se bta tu kya karegi mere sath

Arshi jhut mut ka rote hue : plz tu ye kisi ko nhi batayegi promise kar maine abhi kuch socha hi nhi
Saumya man me : ab ayi line par sab ugalbalungi isse mai

Saumya : sach bta kaise revenge legi tu mujhse

Arshi bholepan se : Sachi kuch nhi socha

Saumya bench se jate hue : jab soch le tab mujhe apna plan batana

Arshi gardan hila k Haa me jawab de deti hai


Arshi man me : ab kaise badla ki isse..
Tabhi chutti ki well bajti or arshi gusse me saumya ko dekhte hue bahar chalne lagti.

Rita pichey se : lesbo.....

Arshi ye sun k pichey dekhti to puri class us par has rahi hoti hai

Student 1 : hihihi arshi tune apni bahen ki pussy kaise lic ki hame bhi bata

Student 2 : fingring ki ya dildo use kiya arshi tune hihihihi

Ese hi bhut se students jo arshi ki khubsurati se jalte wo arshi ka mazak udane lagte or saumya rita bhi zor zor se Hasne lagti hai

Tirsha gusse me cheekh k : hansna band karo nhi to tumhara mooh tod dungi

Saumya : tu chupp reh na Tirsha dekh kitna maza aa raha hai.

Arshi nam ankho se saumya k pass ati hai : saumya tune kyo bataya sabko

Saumya haste hue : hihihi kyoki tune koi plan nhi banaya revenge k liye hihihi

Arshi : dekhna ab jald hi tujhse badla lungi bitch

Ye Kehte hue chal deti arshi.


Mai car k bahar khada hoke sabhi students ko dekh raha hota hu.



Tabhi Arshi mam dur se ati hui dikhayi deti hai

Arshi pass ake : chal pehle parlour chal

Mai : thik hai
Ye Kehte hue car me baith gaya

Arshi gate open karte hue : is seat par nhi driving seat par baith mai nhi kar rahi driving.

Ye sun k mere hath pair buri tarah se kampne lage.

Mai man me : ab kya karu bhag**n hamka bacha le
Mai man me prathna karne laga.

Arshi : teri samajh me nhi aya what I say
Mai : mam hamka car chalani nhi ati


Arshi : what... Fir tu driving karne kyo aya chal nikal car se

Mai nam ankho se car se Bahar aa gaya

Arshi gusse me : Pta nhi kaha kaha se Aa jate ye bloody villagers get lost lier dad se teri shikat karungi or us jhanvi ki bachi ko nhi chodna maine ab

Ye Kehte hue arshi car me baithti or chal deti hai.

Mai bhi sonam didi ko lene unke ghar chal deta hu paidal.

Mai man me : in ameero me bikul bhi daya nhi hoti surat achi hai lekin sirat nhi to surat kisi kaam ki nhi
Mai rote hue qadam bada raha tha.

Mai khud se : ab ham thakur k paisa kaise denge nisaiya ko school kaise bhejenge
Yahi sab sochte hue mere ansu behne lage 10 rupey jeb me pade they jo sonam didi ne diye " agar paiso ki zarurat pade to inse kaam chala lena" in paiso se to auto wala bhi jhanvi memsab k ghar nhi chod raha

Chalte chalte mujhe ek khokha dikha Jahan pan pudiya bik rahi thi

Mai : chalo raste me gutkha khate jayenge gham kam hoga

Ye Kehte hue ek gutkha kharid leta hu or chalne lagta hu.

Jhanvi mem sab k ghar are ate 1 ghante se jyada ka Waqt lag gaya ghar akar park me baith k sonam didi ka intezaar karne lagta hu.
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Jhavi's cabin

Jhanvi khud se: kya mujhe esa karna chahiye kahi mera saga bhai nikla to nazre kaise milaungi usse bad me.

Jhanvi ka dil : jhanvi tune sari raat jaag k plan banaya hai ki tu usse pyaar ka natak karegi fir uske sine or jangh ka til dekhegi

Jhanvi : agar bhai nikla to kya hoga kaise nazre milaungi usse.

Jhanvi ka dil: mafi mang lena kya tu nhi chahti k tu Bachpan se jis bhai k pyaar k liye tarsi wo tujhe fir mil jaye soch mat jhanvi kar de jo karna hai.

Jhanvi ye sochte hue arush ki photo ko chum k sine se laga leti hai.
Jhanvi akhiri faisla lete hue: mai pyaar ka natak nhi karungi bas tumhe khud k kareeb laungi.

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Parlour se ghar aake arshi saumya se badla lene k bare me sochne lagti hai

Arshi : kya karu tera saumya tune mere heir cut kiye I kill you bitch..

Arshi khud se : usne sabse kaha Mai lesbian hu arushi ko bataun is bare me nhi nhi wo to saumya ka mujhse bura haal karegi pehle se hi dono me jyada nhi banti.

Kya karu.. "boyfriend '. Hmmm I got the idea hihihihi...

Arshi khud se : mujhe koi esa boy chahiye jo poor ho or saumya se jhuta love kare kaha milega esa boy kaha kaha....

Mera driver hmm wo perfect hai Gareeb bhi hai Ohh shit use to maine naukri se nikal diya.... jhunnu janti hogi usi ne banaya mera driver use... Raat ko usse puchungi us driver k bare me..

Ye Kehte hue ayine k samne se uthkar arshi bad par let jati or apne plan ko anjam dene k bare me sochne lagti hai.


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Arushi class khatm hone k baad chalne lagti hai class k bahar hi use ram ladaite
Khada milta hai

Ram : arushi beta aao mere sath tumhari extra class lagani hai.

Arushi : sir Kal se lagaungi sar me pain ho raha hai

Ram : thik hai beta Kal sidha mere office me aa jana.

Arushi gardan hila k chalne lagti hai ghar ko.

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Mujhe park ki ghas me baithe baithe 3 ghante se jyada ka time ho gaya raat bhi ho gayi lekin di nhi ayi thi abhi tak.


Mai dekhne k liye andar ki or chalne laga ye sochkar di ab tak kya kar rahi hai.



Ghar k andar sonam ate hi pure ghar ko dhone lagti pani se pani ki chote uske chahere ko khilte gulab ki tarah bna raha tha.

Richa : beti tumne to Sara ghar dho diya maine to bas arshi arushi k kamre ko saaf karne k liye kaha Ghar dhone k liye waqi servents they na.

Sonam :memsab un dono kamro ko saaf kar diya hamne fir hamko Khali baithna acha nhi laga to fir hamne ghar dhone ki thani.

Richa : tum to badi mehenti ho chalo ab ise Rehne do meri dono betiyan Aa gayi hai unse Jaa ke puch lo agar kuch chahiye ho unhhe

Sonam : thik hai memsab

Ye Kehte hue sonam upar ati pehle arshi ka kamra padta to sidhe arshi k room me ghus jati hai.

Arshi samne bad par leti hui plan par work karne k bare me soch rahi hoti hai door open hone se uska dhyan tutta hai.

Sonam room me ate hi kamre ki khubsurati me kho jati hai.

Arshi gusse me: you bloody knok karke nhi Aa mila tumhe.. Kaise Ana hua

Sonam : maaf karna choti memsab.. Badi memsab ne bheja apki meda bana ke

Arshi meda sun k zor zor se Hasne lagti hai

Arshi : hihihi wo meda nhi maid hota hai buddhu... Pehle nhi dekha tumhe new ho

Sonam : ji choti memsab hamka or hamre bhai ko Naukri jhanvi memsab ne di Kal.

Arshi chonkte hue : wo driver tumhara bhai hai

Sonam : ji memsab

Arshi man me : ye uski bahen hai lekin chahera to nhi milta usse mujhse milta hai
Esa ho sakta iski Maa ne cheat kiya ho or in dono k face alag alag ho gaye ho.. Isse mera fayda hua subah saumya ko usse apna bhai bana k intriduse karungi hihihi..

Arshi : kaha hai wo driver

Sonam : wo hamka lene yahi Aa gaye honge... Memsab koi kaam hai to bataye

Arshi : nhi tum jao

Itna sunte hi sonam chali jati room se or arshi phone se kisi ko call karti hai.

Arshi : hello Naresh

Naresh : ji baby ji

Arshi : mera driver aya

Naresh : ji memsab mere puchne par keh raha apni didi ka wait kar raha hai garden me baitha hai apke

Arshi : OK thanks...

Ye Kehte hue phone cut karti or lour pahen k apna hand bag leti or bhagte hue garden me ati hai

Arshi cheekh k : oye driver

Awaaz sun kar Mai sar utha k dekhta hu to samne arshi mam hoti hai.

Unhe dekh kar mere hath pair kanmpne lagte
Mai man me : ab kya mera ye zarur saza dene Aa rahi Pta nhi kya karengi mere sath.

Ye sochte hue mai bhagte hue arshi mam k pass gaya or unke pair pakad liye.

Mai : hamka maaf kar do ham apko dhoka nahi dena chahte ham bhut Gareeb hai isliye dhoka diya hamka maaf kar do

Mafi mangte hue meri ankho se ansu behkar arshi mmam k pairo ko bhigone lage.

Arshi man me : ye perfect hai mere liye kitna bewakoof hihihi

Arshi : mere pair choro kuch nhi karti chalo aao mere sath

Mai uthte hue : kaha jana. Hai memsab..

Arshi hontho par ungli rakhte hue: no more question bas sath aao.


Mai bhi bina kuch bole sath chalne laga English me kya kaha ye to samajh se pare tha lekin hontho par ungli ishare ko samjh gaya ki chupp rehna hai mai bhi darte hue pichey pichey chalne laga.

Garden se akar ham grage me aye

Arshi car me baithe hye aao baitho akar..


To be continued..












 

Baap Ji

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Woh bhai ap ke marzi hai update do ya na do mujhe ap ke soch ik bacha ke tarha lage Jo bacha chocolate do to ap mera apne hai ni to ni janta .
Ap sand story ko dekho pahle kitna support aata tha aur ab kitna aata kuch likho ge to support aeee ga bro

Bhi ap monster Kane ho kya.. Wo bhi same yahi Kehte but bat ye nhi mai dusro ki stories par jata to waha bhut hote bus jelosy hoti isliye
Bhi ap logo ko dekhte hue maine update de hi pade update
 
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Baap Ji

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MAAF KARNA BHAI

LEKIN AAP TO SURUWAT ME HI HAAR MAN GAYE, MERA MANAN HAI EK CHHOTI SURUWAT HI AAGE JA KAR BADI BANTI HAI

ABHI CHALNA SURU HI KIYA THA KI YE MAAN KAR RUK GAYE KI DILLI DUR HAI

KAHIR AAPKI MARZI, AAP IS KAHANI KE RACHNAKAR HAIN, AAP IS KAHANI LEKAHAK HAIN TO IS KAHANI KA KYA KARNA HAI YE AAPKI MARZI HAI

MERI BAATON KA BURA LAGA HO TO MAAF KARNA.............. THANKS !!!!

Bhi apka sath raha to hasr nhi manni update is posted
 
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