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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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Lovingheart

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Update a21



Kishan badha ja raha tha apni manzil ki talaash mein ki use kuch cheekhe sunayi di woh us taraf bhag ke gya


Raste mein ek gadi ruki hui thi uske pass do log khoon se lath path pade the aur 7 log pass mein khade hass rahe the

Kishan bhag ke unke pass gya aur jo sabse age tha uski chest mein ek kick mari woh ek sab ko piche leke gir pada
Kishan bhag ke jo log ghayal the unke pass gya yeh ek admi aur ek aurat the kafi agged the

Kishan ne dono ko check kiya
Aurat ne to apni akhiri sanse le li thi par admi ki sanse abhi baki thi

Kishan - uncle ankhein kholiye main apko hospital leke chalta hu

Uncle - nahi beta mere pass waqt bohat kam hai meri beti ko bachao beta verna woh darinde uski jaan le leinge
Beta meri beti ko bacha lo

Kishan - han uncle mein usko bacha lunga pehle apko hospital pohnchana jaruri hai

Uncle - nahi beta main nahi bachunga yahan waqt barbad mat karo meri beti ko bachao jao jaldi

Uncle ne itna hi bola tha ki Kishan ke sar pe piche se rod padi aur uske sar se khoon behne laga

Jese hi Kishan utha aur uski taraf ghuma to ek rod uske pait mein ghus gayi Kishan vahi ghutno ke bal baith gya

Gl - kyu sale hero banne aya tha janta nahi hai kya mujhe

Kishan - yeh acha nahi kiya tumne pachtaoge tum ab

Uncle -(gundo se) mat maro use use jane de main tumhare age hath jodta hu plz jane do use

G2 - buddhe galti kardi isne ab to yeh bhi parlok sidharega

Yeh bolke usne Kishan ki chest mein ek rod ghused diya Kishan ab jameen pe gir gya
Aur de dana dan unlogo kishan pe road aur hockey bagera barsana shuru kar diya

Kishan ki puri body lahu luhan ho gayi thi muh se bhi khoon nikal raha tha uski sanse bhi tutne lagi thi apne sahmne apni akhiri umeed ko marte dekh uncle ki bhi sanso ne unka sath chodh diya

Kishan ki bhi ankhein band hone lagi thi
Aur 2 3 sec mein band ho gayi uska khud se dabandh shuru ho gya
Kishan ki atma ke sahmne ek shaksh tha jo janzeeron mein jakda hua tha

Devil - mujhe azad karde Kishan

Kishan - nahi tum tabahi machaoge

Devil - nahi Kishan esa kuch nahi hoga vaada hai mere tumse

Kishan - mujhe ek shaitan ke vaade bharosa nahi hai

Devil - bharosa karna padega Kishan kyu ki us ladki ki jaan bachana jaruri hai fir tu soch Meera ka kya hoga tere bina tujhe apne parivar ka bhi pata lagana hai

Kishan - main tujh pe bharosa kese karu

Devil - tumhe bharosa karna hi hoga Kishan kyu ki main bhi apni takat ka istemaal achayi ke liye karna chahta hu isse pehle jitne logo ko bhi meri takat mili un sab ne burayi failayi main chahta hu mera nam bhi achayi mein liya jaye meri madad kar Kishan main teri madad karta hu

Kishan - theak par bharosa nahi todna mera

Devil - theak hai

Fir ek roshni fail gayi charo aur Kishan ki atma aur devil ek ho gaye dheere dheere Roshni kam hui to G1 Kishan ke sar pe bandook ka focus karke goli chalane hi wala tha ki Kishan ka roop badal gya aur woh ek devil ke roop mein change ho gya

Body achi khasi maskular ho gayi thi body pe jo kapde the fat gaye the bs paint bachi thi

Usne G1 ki ankhon mein dekha jis mein dehshat thi usne uski ankhon ko read kiya aur bola


Kishan - Bola tha na pachtaoge galti kar re ho tum

G1 -(ghabrate hue) kkk.kkk...kkk..ko.ko.konnn ho tum

Kishan - tum sab ki maut Hahahhahahahahahahahhaa

Aur ek drawani Hassi chari taraf gunjh gayi
Fir Kishan ne bas halki si apni gardan jhatki aur sab ke sar dhad se alag ho gaye

Aur fir vahan se gayab ho gaya pohanch gya ek room mein yahan ek ladki bed pe bandhi hui thi Gayab hone se pehle Kishan apne asli roop mein aa gya tha par body uski nayi wali hi thi muscular

Ladki bed pe bandhi hui thi aur do ladke pass mein baithe hue daru pee rahe the

Kuch der pehle

Ladka 1 - kyu janeman abhi bhi bada fadfada rahi ho

Ladka 2 - thodi der ruko sari Garmi nikal dete hai tumhari Pihu darling

( ji han ese hi hui thi Pihu ki mulakat apne hero se)

Woh dono apna last peg pii ke Pihu ki aur badhne lage the woh dono uske pass pohnche hi the ki Kishan prakat ho gya aur dono ki gardan pakad li piche se aur unko utha ke deewar ki taraf fhenk diya

Aur Kishan ne hath ek bar hawa mein lehraya aur Pihu ko pakad ke uthaya aue apne piche khada kar liya

Kishan - Di aap yahi raho mere piche

Pihu ko yeh bada caha laga woh apni hi soch mein kho gayi
Tabhi uske kaan mein do cheekhe padi

Kishan ne Sahmne dono ladki ki kalayi pakad rakhi thi aur unko ukhad diya Pihu to bs Kishan ki body ko nihare ja rahi thi jab uske chehre pe do tin bund giri to usko ehsas hua ki kya ho raha hai

Fir Kishan ne dono ki gardan pakdi aur dono ka ram nam sataya kar diya
Dono ke marne ke baad Pihu bhag ke Kishan ke pass ayi aur use hug kar liya

Pihu - Thank you bhai meri jaan bachane ke liye

Kishan - Di main is Thank you ka haqdar ni hu

Pihu - kyu? Abi abi to tumne meri izzat aur jaan dono bachayai hai

Kishan - par di main.......
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Age ka scene next update mein guys action scene khatam kar diya is update mein
 

aka3829

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Gajab ka update diya he bhai. To aise pihu aur kishan ka mel hua tha. Aur ye devil ka kya chakkar he bhai. Kya kishan ki powers jo he wo ek devil ki powers he. Fight thodi aur jyada badi karte bhai. Ab sayad sare flashback khatam ho gaye he aur story ab present me chalegi.
Waiting 4 next update
 
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