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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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Lovingheart

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JH

Boht zabardast awesome interesting lajawab

Bari churail bni phrti thi esha taqat Pana chahti thi lag gayi lo,,

Chalo in teno ko bhi bacha Liya very good

Ab ay ga Maza ,aeana dikha dia 4ro ko Rahul ki ache se kathirdari kerna

In 4ro ki Gand mai bambo dal do hihihihi :lol1:
Apki icha maine pehle hi puri kar di thi?
 

Lovingheart

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Ye cheez meri wish pori ho gay:yippi::toohappy:

Sahi se bjwayi h baap bete ki Maza a gia

Awesome interesting lajawab update
Apki wish to puri ho gayi par admin team ko bs mera hi yeh update galat laga jabki aur do tin stories mein isse bhi badhkar kayi kayi bar likh chuke hai writers but admin team ko hamesha mujh se dikkat rahi hai
 

Lovingheart

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Update a26


Ek banglow mein ek ladki so rahi thi uske pehrawa bhi bohat gareebo wala tha

Ek store room mein uska bistar laga hua tha uske chehre ko gaur se dekhne se pata chal raha tha ki bohat royi hai woh

Subha ke 4 vaje uski neend khul gayi fresh hoke usne dusre kapde pehne aur saaf safayi karne lagi ghar ki

6 vaje tak usne niche ka flore saaf kar diya bs rooms ko chodh ke ek ghante tak ghar ke sare rooms bhi saf ho gaye kyu ki jo log rooms mein rehte the woh sab jonging aur gym bagera chale gaye do mehlaye mandir chali gayi

7 vaje ghar ki saaf safayi karke woh nashta banane lagi juice aur shakes tyar karke usne bread garam karke do logo ke liye pranthe bana liye

8 vaje sabhi members tyar hoke nashta karke apne office aur college nikal gaye piche reh gayi do mehlayein

Ladki unmein se ek aurat ke kamre mein gayi

Ladki - maa woh mujhe kuch paise chahiye the

Usne itna hi bola tha ki ek thappad uski gaal pe pada woh bs sar jhukaye khadi rahi

Aurat - tujh se kitni bar kaha hai ki mujhe maa mat bola kar nahi hu main teri maa samjhi malkin bola kar mujhe aur manhoos tujhe kitni bar kaha hai ki jab bhi mere ya ghar ke kisi bhi member ke sahmne aao to muh dhak ke aya karo ek bar mein samjh nahi ata

Ladki ki ankhon mein ansun aa gaye the usne apna chehra chunnri se chupa kiya

Ladki - sorry malkin ainda esi galti nahi hogi

Aurat - theak aur yeh bata kalmuhi tujhe paise kya karne hai

Ladki - woh malik naye kapde lane the yeh fat gaye hai aur chappal bhi lani hai

Ladki ki baat sun ke us aurat ne apni 2 purani sari aur ek joda purani chappal ka us ladki ko de diya

Aurat - yeh le pehan le ise aur ab paise mat mangna samjhi

Woh ladki kapde aur chappal leke vahan se chali gayi aur apne kamre mein rone lagi jake

Ladki - (mann mein) bhagwan akhir esi kya galti thi meri ki mujhe is dharti pe paida kiya bheja to bheja kisi ache ghar mein bhej dete bhagwan yahan mujh se bs janwaro jesa vyavhar hota hai bhagwan mujhe is narak se nikal de bhawan mere bhai ko bhej do bhagwan

Aur woh roti rahi par use chup karwane wala nahi tha

Idhar Kishan sapne mein yeh scene dekh raha tha uski ankhon mein bhi nami thi

Kishan ne ankhein kholi aur mann mein Esha ko yaad kiya

Esha - (mann mein) ji akka hukum

Kishan - (mann mein) main abi tumhe apna sapna dikha raha hu pata kro konsi yagha aur konsa ghar hai yeh muje apni lagti hai yeh ladki aur puri jankari leke ana jao jaldi ab

Esha - jo hukum aka

Aur fir Kishan un teeno ke vich mein se uth gya aur fresh ho gya jogging bagera karke aya to teeno dinning table pe baithi thi teeno abi bhi dukhi thi Kishan naha dho ke dinnig table pe aa gya

Sabhi Kishan ko sawaliya nazro se dekh rahi thi

Kishan - pehle nashta karlo tum log jaldi se fir jo jo sawal hai puch laina

Fir sab ne nashta kiya aur hall mein aa gaye Pihu mere sath hi baithi thi Megha aur Meera paas wale sofe pe baithi thi

Kishan - han to pucho ab jo kuch bhi puchna hai

Pihu - tumne Ritu ko kyu chorh diya use bhi kyu nahi khatam kar diya aur to aur use property bhi de rahe ho

Kishan - tumhari pehli baat ka jabab hai tumhe ko shayad Akshay yaad hoga

Akshay ka name sun ke Pihu ke chehre ki rangat badal gayi shock se

Pihu - (apne aap ko sambhalte hue) iss sab mein uska kya laina dena woh to mar chuka hai na

Kishan - woh tumhe yaad hoga hi ki Ritu ka bhai tha Akshay aur usi se laina dena hai iss baat ka tumhe yaad hai na usne tumhare sath kya karne ki koshish ki thi hut us waqt tum bach gayi uske baad tumne use reject kiya aur fir woh sudharne laga tha par Rahul ko yeh baat pasand nahi ayi thi usne Akshay ko mar kar use pankhe se latka diya tha kyu ki Akshay ke marne se do din pehle main tumhari life mein aa gya tha woh is baat se nakhush tha ki tumne mujhe sahara de diya tha iss liye usne mujh se badla laine ke liye Akshay ko mara aur Ritu ko tumhare khilaf bhadkana shuru kiya taki Ritu tumhe kuch kare aur main fir se tut jau uske baad Ritu 1 saal baad vapis ayi humari zindgi mein par usse 4 month pehle Esha hamari life mein ayi thi jisne kuch esa kiya ki main Ritu ka aur Esha ka dono ka mann nahi padh paya jis vajha se woh aaj yahan tak pohanch gayi thi ab ismein uski kya galti woh bs apne bhai ki maut ka badla laina chahti thi aur usko zinda chorhne ki vajha hai uska chota bhai uska Ritu ke ilawa koi nahi hai

Pihu - (shocked si boli) hmm woh to theak hai par tumhe kya hua tha us waqt behosh kese ho gaye the

Main - woh bhi Esha ka kiya dhara tha usne mere dharam pita se ek esa mantar liya tha jis se main qaid ho gya tha

Pihu - ohh i see issi liye tumhe vapis ane mein itna time lag gya

Main - hmmmm ab tum dono kya puchna chahti ho puch lo

Meera - bhaiyu woh apse yeh puchna tha ki apke pass powers kaha se ayi mera matlab hai jo aap gayab ho gaye the aur fir hume bhi yahan le aye gayab karke

Main - gudiya choti moti powers to mere pass bachpan se hi thi jese ki speed aur mind fir jab 16 ka hua to eye read ki power aa gyi aur uske baad ek power ayi jis se main kisi bhi vision ki video bana sakta hu jese maine ghar chorte waqt nikali thi aur Megha di aur baki sab ko bhej di thi

Megha - hm to ese ayi to woh video maine socha tha ki ghar mein camera lage hue the par mujhe kahi dikhayi nahi diye lekin baki ki powers kaha de ayi

fir maine inhe Pihu se milne ke waqt hui ghatna batayi

Main - ok to tum sab ko tumhare jabab mil gaye honge han to Pihu Vakil sahab ko phone kar diya na

Pihu - han woh maine uthte hi kar diya tha woh dopehar 12 vaje papers le ayenge

Main - ok fir to main ja ra hu room mein kam dekhne tum log rest karo ya batein woh tumhari marzi

Yeh bolke main room mein chala gya aur woh log vahi baith ke batein karne lagi
 

Asif khan

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Apki wish to puri ho gayi par admin team ko bs mera hi yeh update galat laga jabki aur do tin stories mein isse bhi badhkar kayi kayi bar likh chuke hai writers but admin team ko hamesha mujh se dikkat rahi hai
Oh bahi ab Kia kh sakte hain admin log ko

Ha Maine bhi ek do story mai esa read Kia tha but yad ni a rahi Kon c thi
 

Lovingheart

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Oh bahi ab Kia kh sakte hain admin log ko

Ha Maine bhi ek do story mai esa read Kia tha but yad ni a rahi Kon c thi
Ek story to mujhe yaad hai usmein hero Pappu ki gand marta hai
 

Asif khan

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Update a26


Ek banglow mein ek ladki so rahi thi uske pehrawa bhi bohat gareebo wala tha

Ek store room mein uska bistar laga hua tha uske chehre ko gaur se dekhne se pata chal raha tha ki bohat royi hai woh

Subha ke 4 vaje uski neend khul gayi fresh hoke usne dusre kapde pehne aur saaf safayi karne lagi ghar ki

6 vaje tak usne niche ka flore saaf kar diya bs rooms ko chodh ke ek ghante tak ghar ke sare rooms bhi saf ho gaye kyu ki jo log rooms mein rehte the woh sab jonging aur gym bagera chale gaye do mehlaye mandir chali gayi

7 vaje ghar ki saaf safayi karke woh nashta banane lagi juice aur shakes tyar karke usne bread garam karke do logo ke liye pranthe bana liye

8 vaje sabhi members tyar hoke nashta karke apne office aur college nikal gaye piche reh gayi do mehlayein

Ladki unmein se ek aurat ke kamre mein gayi

Ladki - maa woh mujhe kuch paise chahiye the

Usne itna hi bola tha ki ek thappad uski gaal pe pada woh bs sar jhukaye khadi rahi

Aurat - tujh se kitni bar kaha hai ki mujhe maa mat bola kar nahi hu main teri maa samjhi malkin bola kar mujhe aur manhoos tujhe kitni bar kaha hai ki jab bhi mere ya ghar ke kisi bhi member ke sahmne aao to muh dhak ke aya karo ek bar mein samjh nahi ata

Ladki ki ankhon mein ansun aa gaye the usne apna chehra chunnri se chupa kiya

Ladki - sorry malkin ainda esi galti nahi hogi

Aurat - theak aur yeh bata kalmuhi tujhe paise kya karne hai

Ladki - woh malik naye kapde lane the yeh fat gaye hai aur chappal bhi lani hai

Ladki ki baat sun ke us aurat ne apni 2 purani sari aur ek joda purani chappal ka us ladki ko de diya

Aurat - yeh le pehan le ise aur ab paise mat mangna samjhi

Woh ladki kapde aur chappal leke vahan se chali gayi aur apne kamre mein rone lagi jake

Ladki - (mann mein) bhagwan akhir esi kya galti thi meri ki mujhe is dharti pe paida kiya bheja to bheja kisi ache ghar mein bhej dete bhagwan yahan mujh se bs janwaro jesa vyavhar hota hai bhagwan mujhe is narak se nikal de bhawan mere bhai ko bhej do bhagwan

Aur woh roti rahi par use chup karwane wala nahi tha

Idhar Kishan sapne mein yeh scene dekh raha tha uski ankhon mein bhi nami thi

Kishan ne ankhein kholi aur mann mein Esha ko yaad kiya

Esha - (mann mein) ji akka hukum

Kishan - (mann mein) main abi tumhe apna sapna dikha raha hu pata kro konsi yagha aur konsa ghar hai yeh muje apni lagti hai yeh ladki aur puri jankari leke ana jao jaldi ab

Esha - jo hukum aka

Aur fir Kishan un teeno ke vich mein se uth gya aur fresh ho gya jogging bagera karke aya to teeno dinning table pe baithi thi teeno abi bhi dukhi thi Kishan naha dho ke dinnig table pe aa gya

Sabhi Kishan ko sawaliya nazro se dekh rahi thi

Kishan - pehle nashta karlo tum log jaldi se fir jo jo sawal hai puch laina

Fir sab ne nashta kiya aur hall mein aa gaye Pihu mere sath hi baithi thi Megha aur Meera paas wale sofe pe baithi thi

Kishan - han to pucho ab jo kuch bhi puchna hai

Pihu - tumne Ritu ko kyu chorh diya use bhi kyu nahi khatam kar diya aur to aur use property bhi de rahe ho

Kishan - tumhari pehli baat ka jabab hai tumhe ko shayad Akshay yaad hoga

Akshay ka name sun ke Pihu ke chehre ki rangat badal gayi shock se

Pihu - (apne aap ko sambhalte hue) iss sab mein uska kya laina dena woh to mar chuka hai na

Kishan - woh tumhe yaad hoga hi ki Ritu ka bhai tha Akshay aur usi se laina dena hai iss baat ka tumhe yaad hai na usne tumhare sath kya karne ki koshish ki thi hut us waqt tum bach gayi uske baad tumne use reject kiya aur fir woh sudharne laga tha par Rahul ko yeh baat pasand nahi ayi thi usne Akshay ko mar kar use pankhe se latka diya tha kyu ki Akshay ke marne se do din pehle main tumhari life mein aa gya tha woh is baat se nakhush tha ki tumne mujhe sahara de diya tha iss liye usne mujh se badla laine ke liye Akshay ko mara aur Ritu ko tumhare khilaf bhadkana shuru kiya taki Ritu tumhe kuch kare aur main fir se tut jau uske baad Ritu 1 saal baad vapis ayi humari zindgi mein par usse 4 month pehle Esha hamari life mein ayi thi jisne kuch esa kiya ki main Ritu ka aur Esha ka dono ka mann nahi padh paya jis vajha se woh aaj yahan tak pohanch gayi thi ab ismein uski kya galti woh bs apne bhai ki maut ka badla laina chahti thi aur usko zinda chorhne ki vajha hai uska chota bhai uska Ritu ke ilawa koi nahi hai

Pihu - (shocked si boli) hmm woh to theak hai par tumhe kya hua tha us waqt behosh kese ho gaye the

Main - woh bhi Esha ka kiya dhara tha usne mere dharam pita se ek esa mantar liya tha jis se main qaid ho gya tha

Pihu - ohh i see issi liye tumhe vapis ane mein itna time lag gya

Main - hmmmm ab tum dono kya puchna chahti ho puch lo

Meera - bhaiyu woh apse yeh puchna tha ki apke pass powers kaha se ayi mera matlab hai jo aap gayab ho gaye the aur fir hume bhi yahan le aye gayab karke

Main - gudiya choti moti powers to mere pass bachpan se hi thi jese ki speed aur mind fir jab 16 ka hua to eye read ki power aa gyi aur uske baad ek power ayi jis se main kisi bhi vision ki video bana sakta hu jese maine ghar chorte waqt nikali thi aur Megha di aur baki sab ko bhej di thi

Megha - hm to ese ayi to woh video maine socha tha ki ghar mein camera lage hue the par mujhe kahi dikhayi nahi diye lekin baki ki powers kaha de ayi

fir maine inhe Pihu se milne ke waqt hui ghatna batayi

Main - ok to tum sab ko tumhare jabab mil gaye honge han to Pihu Vakil sahab ko phone kar diya na

Pihu - han woh maine uthte hi kar diya tha woh dopehar 12 vaje papers le ayenge

Main - ok fir to main ja ra hu room mein kam dekhne tum log rest karo ya batein woh tumhari marzi


Yeh bolke main room mein chala gya aur woh log vahi baith ke batein karne lagi
Very nice very awesome very good update

Ye larki Kon thi,or us orat ko Maa q bula rahi thi or us k 7 esa saluk q Kia ja raha tha or wo Kis bahi ki baat kr rahi thi

Hmm to hero ne esha ko Bhej dia pta kerne k ye Kon h

Chalo teno ko un k sawalo k jawab mil gay

Let's see what happend
 
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