Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

[Lovingheart]

Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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[Vipul]

bhai jaldi se naya update de do

 

[Naina]

Intezaar

 

[Last benchers]

Gjb krte ho pande ji . update itna late aayega to story ka mjaa kirkra ho jayega

 

[Aryanv]

Waiting for next update

 

[Lovingheart]

Dosto maaf karna update parso ayega waqt ni mil raha likhne ka yeh meri 4th story hai aur pehle bar itni latak rahi hai issi liye main apse maafi mangta hu but jaldi 2 din wait karlo

Kam ki vajha se waqt ni nikal raha

 

[John Cena]

Dosto maaf karna update parso ayega waqt ni mil raha likhne ka yeh meri 4th story hai aur pehle bar itni latak rahi hai issi liye main apse maafi mangta hu but jaldi 2 din wait karlo

Kam ki vajha se waqt ni nikal raha

Baki konsi 3 story han tumhari

 

[Asif khan]

Where is update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Story to achchi hai par update bahut hi dhire aate hai

 

[aman rathore]

Update 11


Kahani TP ki jubani

Ab Tak Thakur aur Kallan bhi usi yagha pohanch chuke the yahan yahan Kishan mojud tha Rakesh ki halat dekh dono bokhla gaye aur usse se lipte hue hi rone lage

Unke rone ki awaaz sun ke gaon wale apne gharo se bahar nikal aye Mahi aur Mahi ke pariwar wale bhi sath mein Pihu Ritu aur Esha bhi

Itne mein Kallan gusse se aag babula hoke Kiahan ki taraf badha aur apna khanjar nikal liya fir woh Kiahan ki taraf badhte hue bola

Kallan - aaj hum tohka na chodi humre Rakesh bitwa ko maar diya tune hum tohar le liha

Yeh keh ke usne Kishan ki taraf daud laga di jese hi usne Kishan pe war kiya Kishan ne uska hath pakad liya aur halki si tapli uske naak pe mari aur woh piche ho gya apna naak pakad ke

Kallan ne Kishan par fir se war karna chaha to Kishan jaldi se side hua aur uski kanpati ke niche fir se ek halka sa diya abi tak Kishan usse sirf khel raha tha

Khair Kallan fir se sambhla aur usne fir se Kishan pe war kiya Kishan ne abki bar uska hath pakda aur ek mukka diya rakh ke Kallan ki chest pe jis se Kallan ek side gira aur uske hath se chaku dusri side

Kishan chaku ke pass gya use thokar mar ke Kallan ki taraf fhenk diya

Kishan - ari ho Kallan dada ee lo tohar hathiyarwa uthayi lo dui tin bar aur koshishwa kar hi liyo shayad kohnu chamatkar hui jayi ha

Kallan kisi tarha khada hua aur usne chuka utha ke fir se Kishan ki taraf daud lagayi par Kishan ne uske hath pe kick mari aur chaku upar uchal gya fir Kishan ne Kallan ki gardan pakdi aur Thakur ki jeep pe use pith ke bal lita diya aur chaku utha ke uski chest mein lagatar 4 bar ghopa aur Kallan bhagwan ko pyara ho gya

Abi Kishan thakur ki taraf badha hi tha ki do chaku dono taraf se Kishan ki peeth mein ghus gaye

Kishan ne jab piche mud me dekha to vahan apne do dosto ko paya uski ankhen nam ho gayi fir use thakur ki hassi sunayi di

Thakur - jiske dost hi uske dushman ho to use kisi aur dushman ki jarurat nahi hai hahahahaha

Tabhi Kishan ne Arun aur Nitin ki taraf dekha aur hath piche leja kar dono chaku nikal liye

Kishan - Thakur mujhe marna itna asan nahi hai tum mein se koi mujhe nahi maar sakta

Aur itne mein goli chalne ki awaaz ayi Ritu Pihu aur Esha ek sath chillayi

Ritu,Pihu aur Esha - Kkkiiissshhhaaannnnn

Kishan ne politly teeno ko bola

Kishan - shant raho tum teeno kuch nahi hua mujhe

Halan ki uski shirt khoon se bheeg chuki thi par powers ki vajha se yeh sab cheeze use mehsus nahi hoti Kishan fir se Nitin aur Arun ki taraf palta

Kishan - Arun akhir khoon ne apna asli rang dikha hi diya

Fir Kishan thakur ki aur palta aur Arun ki gardan pakad ke use age kiya

Kishan - chal Thakur tujhe ek jhatka deta hu dil pe hath rakh le aur jhatka yeh hai ki Rakesh tumhara asli pota nahi tha

Thakur aur gaon wale Kishan ki baat sun ke shocked hue

Thakur - kya bakwas kar rHe ho ladke

Kishan - such bol raha hu Thakur Yeh Arun tumhara asli beta hai Pushpa Thakur ka beta

Thakur - yeh kese ho sakta hai yeh ladka Pushpa ka beta

Kishan ke baat sun ke Thakur Arun aur Nitin ko shock laga

Kishan - han Thakur yahi tumhara asli pota hai 23 saal pehle uski janam hote hi Kallan ne ise marne ki koshish ki par Pushpa Thakur ne ise kisi tarha bachaya aur bhaag gayi tumhare bete ki maut to pehle hi ho chuki thi jise Kallan ne hi mara tha Fir Kallan ne Arun ki yagha apne bete ko tume sonp diya aur bola ki Pushpa devi mar gayi hai aur isse mushkil se bachaya tha usne

Thakur - nahi Kallan esa nahi kar sakta

Kishan - kiya hai Thakur usne aur usne yeh sab kiya hai tumhari daulat ke liye jese aaj is Arun ne daulat ke liye meri peeth mein chura ghopa hai (Arun se) daulat ke liye aaj tune dosti jese rishtey ko badnam kar diya le dekh aaj tujhe mil gayi teri daulat issi ke liye aaj tune gaddari ki Pihu di pe gandi nazar rakhi dekh aaj tujhe daulat mil gayi sath mein rutwa bhi aur asli pehchan bhi

Yeh bol ke Kishan ne Arun ko Thakur ki taraf dhakka de diya fir Kishan bola

Kishan - Thakur aur Arun tumhe ek warning deta hu ki iss gaon mein kabhi bhi koi galat kam mat karna na hi power ka galat istemal karna agar esa hua to Arun mujhe achi tarha se janta hai ki main kya kar sakta hu aaj jo hua woh sirf trailer tha

Fir Kishan Nitin ki taraf palta woh use kuch bolta ki usse pehle hi Esha ne Nitin ko chanta laga diya

Esha - (rote hue) akhir kyu kiya tumne esa aaj Kishan hi peeth mein chura ghop diya kyu akhir kyu dost the na tum hum sab ke

Nitin - han dost tha par ab nahi hu nafrar hai mujhe Kishan se uski shakkal se uske naam se

Kishan - mujh se itni nafrat kyu

Nitin - nahi bardasht hoti thi mujh se tumhari nazdeekiyan woh meri mangater hai par uske hotho pe har waqt tumhara naam hota aur to aur apne hatho se khilati hai yahan tak ki tumhare sath hi ghumtu firti hai yeh sab mujh se bardasht nahi hota

Esha - esi bhi kya aag lagi thi tumhe jo esa kiya aur tum mere mangater the aaj se aur abhi se main tum se apna rishta todti hu

Uske baad Esha ne apni ungli se ring nikal ke Nitin ke chehre pe mari aur fir Kishan se boli

Esha - Kishan kya yeh vahi ladka hai jise tumne mujhe han bolne ko kaha tha? Kya yeh vahi ladka hai jiski tum us waqt support kar rahe the? dekho aaj isne khud hi dosti naam ke rishtey ko badnam kar diya isse kaho ki yeh abi ke abi meri akhon se door ho jaye


Pihu ne age badh ke Esha ko sambhala fir Kishan Mahi ki aur badha aur usse bola

(Kahani Kishan ki jubani)

Main Mahi ke pass pohancha aur usse bola

Main - Mahi har bar shal kapat kam nahi ata kabhi kabhi such se sab kuch mil jata hai tum apne iss kam ke liye ek dal dal mein fasne wali thi jisse bahar nikalne ka koi rasta nahi hai aaj tum sab ko azaadi mil gayi aur tum ko ab koi ulta seedha kam karne ki jarurat nahi hai

Fir main Thakur Arun aur Nitin se bola

Main - tum teeno zindgi mein koi ulta seedha kaam mat karna nahi to anzam mout hoga

Itna bol ke main Pihu Di Ritu Di aur Esha ko leke gaon se nikal pada apne city ki taraf

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Sorry for late

Amazing update hai bhai

 

[aman rathore]

Update 12

Main car drive kar raha tha ham charo iss waqt kafi upset the jo kuch hhi aaj hua uski vajha se

Ham kuch hi dur aye the ki mujhe ek talab nazar aya ab itna ganda jo ho gya tha khoon ki vajha se karne ko to main apne kapde magic se change kar sakta tha par Ritu di ko abi pata nahi tha ki mere pass powers hai han Esha ko jarur pata tha

Khair maine car rok di mere car rokte hi teeno ne meri aur dekha

Pihu - kya hua betu car kyu rok di

Main - kuch nahi di woh talab aa hai vahan pe aap esa karo piche buket padi hai diggi mein aap woh le aao aur meri kapde bhi change karna hai mujhe

Meri baat sun ke teeno ko meri halat ka andaza hua kyu ki ab tak sabhi apne apne mein gum the

Ritu - nahi bhai pehle hospital chalo dekho kitna khoon beh gya hai

Main - are di kuch ni hua aap chinta mat karo car mein first aid box hai main naha ke usmeij se dawa laga lunga

Yeh keh kar mein car se bahar nikal gya aur chal pada taalab ki tharaf yeh yagha bohat sunder the bar taraf shanti yahan dekho hare hare ped podhe

Taalab ke kinare pe khada ho ke main apne kapde utare aur sirf underwear mein aa gya kuch der mein woh teeno bhi mere pass aa gayi Pihu di ne buket bhari aur mere uoar pani dalne lagi dheere dheere 4 buket se meri body se har yagha se khoon saaf ho chuka tha

Ab tak mere jakham bhar jate but Ritu di ki vajha se maine unhe bharne nahi diya bas khoon niklna band ho gya bas Ritu di ko esa lag raha tha ki jakham abhi bhi hai

Fir maine side mein jaake underwear change kiya aur ek capri pehan li fir Ritu di ke pass aa gya kyu ki unho ne zidd pakad li bandage lagane ki fir mujhe unke age har manni padi aur medi lagvayi uske baad Tshirt pehan ke ek tree ke niche baith gya aur ankhen band karli

Kuch der baad mujhe mehsus hua ki mere dono baju se koi laga aur meri legs pe bhi mujhe thoda sa vajan mehsus hua

Maine apni ankhen kholi to Ritu di aur Esha meri dono pakad ke mere kandhe pe sar rakh ke baithi thi aur Pihu di ne meri jangho pe sar rakha tha

Mere chehre pe smile aa gayi hum sabhi is waqt khamosh the bas jo hus use theak se samajhne ki koshish kar rahe the halan ki main ab tak ubhar chuka tha iss sab se

Kuch der baad Esha boli

Esha - Kishan dekha na tumne aaj un dono ki harkat 3 saal mein mujhe laga tha ki main use puri achi tarha se samajh chuki hu par nahi aaj uska asli chehra sahmne aa hi gya

Maine ek thandi sans li aur fir bola

Main - Esha such kahu to main bhi galat thehra apni soch mein mujhe laga tha ki Nitin ek acha ladka hai tumhare liye but i was wrong abi bas mere deemag mein ek soch ari hai ki use behkaya gya hai

Esha - tum ab bhi yeh soch rahe ho woh koi bacha to nahi ki use behlaya ja sake dekha jaye to hum sab mein se jyada samajh use the hum sab se jyada mature tha woh fir bhi usne yeh galti ki usne tumhe marne ki koshish ki jisne uske liye itna kiya ab tak jo uski study ka kharcha utha raha hai jisne use nokri di hui hai aur woh

Maine Esha ke muh pe hath rakh diya

Main - chup use iss sab ke bare mein pata hi nahi hai agar esa hota to woh kabhi esa karta hi nahi

Esha - vese ek such baat kahu

Main - kya?

Esha - us waqt tum bhi mujh se peecha chudwana chahte the na issi liye tumne Nitin ko age kar diya tha na

Main uski is baat pe kuch nahi bola bas ek thandi sans leke chup raha aur sahmne dekhne laga Pihu di jo abi tak ham dono ki batein sun rahi thi woh boli

Pihu - Esha iss baat ka jabab main tumhe deti hu tumhe to pata hai na ki us waqt yeh khud kis halat mein tha na sahi se khata tha na sahi se kuch peeta tha bas ham ko hasane ke liye hasta tha tab yeh in sab cheezo mein nahi padna chahta tha aur na hi aaj yeh un sab cheezo mein padna chahta hai tab bhi isne iss liye tumhare liye Nitin ko chuna tha ki yeh apne behave ki vajha se tumhari life nahi spoil karna chahta tha kyu ki isse lagta tha ki kabhi yeh pehle jesa nahi ho payega han main bhi manti hu ki yeh pehle jesa nahi hai jesa ki yeh apni pehle ki life mein tha but han pehle se theak hai yeh mera sab se pyara dost bhai aur mera maa baap sab kuch hai I Love You bhai hum sab ko itni achi life dene ke liye

Yeh bol ke usne mujhe gale laga liya halan ki akhen nam thi meri aur un teeno ki bhi

Ritu aur Esha ne bhi mujhe gale laga liya aur dono ek sath boli sisakte hue

Ritu & Esha - We also love you bhai/Kishu

Esha kabhi kabhi Kishan ko Kishu bulati thi

Esha - Kishu ek sawal pucho agar bura na mano to

Main - hu pucho jo puchna hai

Esha - agar main kahu ki main aaj bhi tumse pyar karti hu to kya tum mujhe apnaoge

Maine ek thandi sans li aur bola

Main - Eshu dekho ab yeh faisla mera akele ka nahi hai ismein ab do logo ki aur marzi shamil hai agar main tumhe apanau to yeh un dono ke sath na insafi hogi

Esha mujhe se alag hoke uthte hue boli

Esha - seedhe seedhe bol do na ki tum mujhe apnana nahi chahte bahane kyu bana rahe ho

Aur rote hue piche mud gayi Ritu di ne uth kr jaldi se uska hath pakda aur use gale se laga liya fir mujh se boli

Ritu - bhai

Main - what?

Ritu - tum isse rula kyu rahe ho

Main - di aap janti ho jo maine bola woh such hai

Ritu - agar main kahu ki mujhe objection nahi hai to

Maine unki aur dekha itne mein Pihu di boli

Pihu - i also don't have any objection

Esha sawaliya nazro se unhe dekhne lagi

Ritu - kya dekh rahi ho sautan ji yeh such hai kal hi isne hum dono ka pyar accept kiya hai

Esha - what ? Iska matlab apne iss bhondu ko propose kar diya aur isne accept bhi kar liya

Main - bhondu kisko bola ab to kisi keemat pe nahi apnane wala tumhe

Esha - (Pihu aur Ritu se masum face bana ke) diii

Pihu, Ritu - jaanu plz


Main -

Esha - ese nahi manoge kya to ab dekho main kya karti hu

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Sawal - akhir esa kya karegi Esha Kishan ko manane ke liye guess karo

amazing update hai bhai