Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

[Lovingheart]

Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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[Vipul]

Update a33

(Mega means double update hau yeh 2000 words ka)


Idhar main apne room mein baitha tha ki tabhi Shaitan mere mann mein bola

Shaitan - chal bhai dark plannet pe chal ke mere bhai ka haal chaal liya jaye

Main - itni jaldi abhi to uska kahani mein dusri bar zikar bhi nahi hua

Shaitan - to kya hua mera bhai iss kahani ka main villain thode hi hai villains to tere ghar wale hai teri kahani wale mere bhai ka role bs itna hi hai aur han main iss liye bhi bol raha hu ki woh apne chamche dharti pe bhejne wala hai bar bar ladne se acha hai ek hi bar mein kissa khatam kya bolte ho fir

Main - maine kya bolna hai chalo fir halla karne

Iske baad maine Esha ko bulaya kuch seconds mein woh mere sahmne khadi thi

Esha - ji hukum

Main - Esha is ghar ka dhayan rakhna main jaruri kam se ja raha hu

Esha - ji hukum main pura khayal rakhungi

Main - han Komal ka khas dhayan rakhna

Esha - ji hukum

Itna bol ke woh gayab ho gayi aur main bhi gayab ho gya aur kuch waqt mein hi main Dark plannet pe tha
Mere vahan paon rakhte hi Dark plannet pe yahan bilkul andhera tha vahan ab halki si roshni ho gayi

Yahan pehle kuch dikhayi nahi de raha tha vahan ab halka halka sab kuch dikh raha tha

Dheere dheere hum age badhne lage hum jani ki main aur shaitan humhare yahan ane ki khabar Shaitan ke bhai ko bhi lag gayi thi

Woh apne singhasan pe baitha tha aur muskurane laga


Skb - ohh to bade bhai tum khud hi yahan aa gaye iska matlab hai ki ab mujhe jyada mehnat nahi karni padegi aa jao jaldi Seeennnaaapppaaatttiii

Skb ne chilla ke senapati ko bulaya senapati vahan bhagte hue aya aur jaldi se ake chest pe hath rakh ke ghutno pe baith gya

Senapati - maharaj ko jai ko

Skb - senapati mere bade bhai yahan pohanch chuke hai jao unhe achi si khatirdari karke mere sahmne lao

Senapati - ji maharaj

Itna bolke Senapati mehal se bahar nikal gya aur usne ek awaaz nikali jis se ass pass ke sabhi darinde bagera ek hi yagha ikathe ho gaye hai

Senapati - sipahio waqt aya hai jung shaitan laut aya hai use rokna padega aao vinash kare uska ache se khatirdari karna uski marityundaaaaa

"Marityunddaaaaaa" uske piche sare plannnet pe yeh awaaz gunjh gayi

Fir sabhi ne apne apne hathyar liye aur meri aur badhne lage idhar main bhi chala ja raha tha tabhi shaitan bola

Shaitan - dude did you listend something they are coming let's have some fun

Kishan - ohh yeah m ready buddy i also want an one man army fight it'll be fun

Kuch door jane pe woh sab mere aur ate dikhe Senapati age aa raha tha ek bheriye pe baith ke bheriya 7 feet uncha tha

Unko ate deikh maine hath mein talwar layi aur ek shield se apne aap ko cover kar liya

Aur laga di daur unsab ki taraf maine daurte hue apni talwar ghumayi aur ek dam se age ko jhatka diya meri talwar se electric waves nikal ke unki aur jane lagi jis jis pe wave padi woh jalne laga

Uske baad maine ek hath hawa mein utahaya aur chote chote pathar upar aye maine hath un sab ki aur lar diya issi ke sath pathar full speed mein unki aur jane lage pathro ki speed se udne wali dhool bhi pathro se judne lagi aur pathar bade hone lage un logo en un pathro ko rokne ki koshish ki par kuch pathro ko hi rok paye ab tak unki sena adhi reh gayi thi itne mein woh mere kareeb pohanch gaye

Shaitan apne roop mein aa gya aur bhid gya sena se aur unko gajar muli ki tarha katne laga unmein se koi bhi hume chu nahi pa raha tha dekhte dekhte sena kam hoti gayi aur thodi si reh gayi woh log bhagne hi wale the ki Shaitan ne aag ki barish kar di unpe woh sab jal ke rakh hone lage ab bs bacha tha sirf senapati

Senapati ne bheriye se utar gya aur use humari taraf ishara kiya ishara milte hi bheriye ne humari taraf jhapatta mara uska muh hum tak pohanchta usse pehle hi hum ne hawa mein uth ke uske jabde pe ek mukka mara woh do tin palti kha ke piche gira woh uth ke fir se bhag ke humari taraf aya is bar humne uski tang pe bar kiya aur talwar se kaat di bheriye ko to jese farak hi nahi pada is bar woh jab jhapta to humne ne niche baith ke uske seene mein talwar ghusa di jo ko uske dil pe lagi aur woh tadapne laga


Fir hum ne senapati ki aur rukh kiya hume apni taraf ata hua dekh ke usne mantar padha aur dekhte hi dekhte uske jese kayi patibimb vahan ban gaye

Ab usmein se ek ko pehchanna mushkil ho gya tha usne humare charo aur ghera bana liya tha

Itne mein humare piche se bar hua to humne ghum ke bar karne wale ka sar kaat diya par yeh asli senapati nahi tha

Shaitan - pith pe bar karke tune pita jo ko to mar diya tha kayar par hume ni maar payega

Sena pati - yeh to waqt hi batayega Shaitan

Humne un sab ki ankhein parhna shuru ki to asli senapati mil gya hume is bar un sabi me ek sath bar kiya par unho ne dair kar di thi humne hath ghumaya aur talwar asli senapati ki aur chorh di thi jo ki jake sidha senapati ke dil mein ghus gayi senapati ke marte hi uske sare duplicate gayab ho gaye

Fir hum mehal ki aur badh gaye skb abhi bhi singhasan pe baitha tha uske aas pass ek do mantri baithe the
Jese hi humne mehal mein kadam rakha kuch sainiko ne hum pe humla kiya par humne unko bhi kaat diya

Ese hi hum age badhte rahe aur jo raste mein ata gya katte gaye usko itne mein hume kuch yaad aya aur hum age badhte gaye

Kuch mins mein hum Skb ke sahmne the mantriyon ne humpe humla kiya par woh humare age kuch nahi tha

Skb taliyaan bajate hue bola

Skb - bohat khub bhai bohat khub akhir mehal tak pohanch hi gaye tum

Hum - pohanchna hi tha Takshak tujhe se hisab jo karna tha

Takshak - bhaiya tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itni asani se mujhe maar doge

Hum - chutki ka kam hai hamare liye

(Hum ka matlab hai Kishan aur Shaitan hum iss liye kyu ki yeh dono abi ek sath hai nahi to Shiatan hamesha Kishan ke ander rehta hai aaj woh bahar hai aur Kishan ander hai)

Takshak - hahahahhahaha sapne dekh rahe ho bhaiya dekho dekho kyu kuch waqt mein main tumhe sada ki neend sula dunga

Hum - woh to waqt batayega kiski maut hone wali hai vese maut to tune apne khate mein usi din likh li thi jab tune maa pita ji aur apni patni ko mara tha aur mujhe bhi marna chaha par pita ji ki kasam ki vajha se mujhe dharti lok jana pada

Takshak - chalo aaj do do hath karke dekh hi laite hai

Itna bol ke usne talwar nikali aur hum dono ki talware apas mein takrane lagi pure mehal mein humare talwaro ki takrane ki awaaz aa rahi thi

Hum dono ke bodies pe ghaw aye par dono ke jakham bhar gaye

Hum - to Takshak khel kahatam kiya jaye ab itne logo ko maar ke main ubh chuka hu

Yeh bolke maine use dikahne ke liye uske sar pe ek bar kiya aur uska sar dhad se alag hua aue niche gir gya lekin woh fir se vapis dhad ki aur ane laga

Itna kafi tha humare liye aur humne ek aag ka gola banaya usmein halki c meri white roshni milayi aur vahan lagi ek painting ki aur chorh di

Takshak chillaya uska sar abhi apni yagha pe nahi laga tha issi liye woh kuch kar nahi paya

Takshak - nahi esa nahi ho sakta tum mujhe nahi maar sakte

Hum - eaa ho chuka hai mere bhai?? tumhari lanka to lag gayi hai ab kuch ni ho sakta

Maine itna bola aur painting pe woh gola laga painting jalne lagi aur Takshak bhi jalne laga aur tadapne laga

Hum - tujhe kya laga tha ki tu apni jaan is painting mein chuayega to tu bach jayega kya nahi bilkul nahi Shaitan hu main shaitan

Dekhte hi dekhte woh rakh ho gya maine ek darwaze pe daikha to vahan Takshak ki beti khari thi maine use apne pass bulaya woh ro rahi thi kyu ki uska baap mara tha

Woh bhagte hue mere pass ayi aur mere gale se lag gayi

Hum - na na meri beti ese rote nahi hai tu to bahadur beti hai na aur kajri tum kiske liye ro rahi hu iss Takshak ke liye ro rahi ho jisne humara pura parivar tabha kar diya tha

Kajri -(sisakte hue) par bade papa woh mere papa the na kese khud ko roku

Shaitan - beta sambhalo khud ko ab is planet ko tumhe hi sambhalna hai aaj aur isi waqt se tum yahan ki Rani ho pata hai tumhe yeh jimebari kyu de raha hu main kyu ki tum mein tumhari maa ke gunn hai achai ke gunn tumhe ab is planet kl sambhalna hai

Kajri - bade papa mujhe nahi rani banna mujhe apke sath jana hai

Shaitan - beta tumhe sambhlna hoga is yagha ko aur main tumse vaada karta hu ki jaldi hi main tumhare pass hounga bs kuch kaam nipta ke tumhare pass aa jaunga main

Kajri - pakka..?

Shaitan - han pakka meri beti chal ab singhasan pe

Itne mein vahan jo aam rakshas the woh sab bhi vahan pohanch gaye ab main normal roop mein aa gya aur hath ghumaya to mere kapde badal gaye fir maine halka sa hath ghumaya sabhi rakshaso ki bhesh bhusha badal gayi woh sab isano ki tarha dikhne lage
Sab apne aap ko dekh ke chonk gaye
Fir sab Shaitan ki nam ki jai jai karne lage

Uske baad maine khoon ka ek bartan laya use Kajri ke sar pe dala yeh rasam thi dark planet ki fir maine vahan lani laya aur Kajri ko nehla diya fir maine 5 dasiyon ko bulaya aue unke hatho mein shahi poshak de di aur Kajri ko tyar krne ke liye bola fir maine singhasan ke charo aur parda kar diya magic se kuch der baad parda hata diya

Fir maine magic kiya to sara mehal saaf suthra ho gay aur usmein roshni ho gayi yahan pehle thodi si rohni thi ab sara mehal light se chamak raha tha uske baad maine fir sath ghumaya aur sarr dark planet pe paid pode aur flowers ubhar aye yahan sirf kali mitti thi aur gandi thi vahan ab hariyali ho gayi thi pura planet chamak raha rha

Fir maine magic kiya to ek taaj aur flowrs ki thali aa gayi maine taaj uthaya aur Kajri ke sar pe rakha aur flowers uspe fhenke

Aur bola

Main - MahaRani kajri ki jai

Uski ke sath Kajri ki jai jai kar hone lagi

Main - (sab se) han to ab tum sab burayi nahi bhalayi ki taraf kadam badhaoge mujhe agar jara sa bhi malum hua ki tum logo ne burayi failayi hai to tum sab ko jaan se maar dunga

Fir Kajri ki aur dekh ke

Main - chalo beta mujhe agya do jane ki jald hi main vapis aa jaunga

Kajri - bade papa abi to kuch din rukiye mere pass

Main - abi to nahi ruk sakta beta han main tumse milne ata rahunga

yeh bolke maine uska matha chuma aur vahan se gayab ho gya aur vapis earth pe aa gya mujhe bohat skoon mehsus ho raha tha ek aur dushman khatam ho gya tha mera aaj


note :- dosto Takshak main villain nahi tha kahani ka main villain family member aur woh jhoothi khabar failane wala hi hai so yeh mat samjhiyega ki main villain khatam ho chuka hai

Keep supporting like that

Kafi achha update tha padhake maja aa gaya bhai

 

[Vipul]

 

[Aryanv]

Update a33

(Mega means double update hau yeh 2000 words ka)


Idhar main apne room mein baitha tha ki tabhi Shaitan mere mann mein bola

Shaitan - chal bhai dark plannet pe chal ke mere bhai ka haal chaal liya jaye

Main - itni jaldi abhi to uska kahani mein dusri bar zikar bhi nahi hua

Shaitan - to kya hua mera bhai iss kahani ka main villain thode hi hai villains to tere ghar wale hai teri kahani wale mere bhai ka role bs itna hi hai aur han main iss liye bhi bol raha hu ki woh apne chamche dharti pe bhejne wala hai bar bar ladne se acha hai ek hi bar mein kissa khatam kya bolte ho fir

Main - maine kya bolna hai chalo fir halla karne

Iske baad maine Esha ko bulaya kuch seconds mein woh mere sahmne khadi thi

Esha - ji hukum

Main - Esha is ghar ka dhayan rakhna main jaruri kam se ja raha hu

Esha - ji hukum main pura khayal rakhungi

Main - han Komal ka khas dhayan rakhna

Esha - ji hukum

Itna bol ke woh gayab ho gayi aur main bhi gayab ho gya aur kuch waqt mein hi main Dark plannet pe tha
Mere vahan paon rakhte hi Dark plannet pe yahan bilkul andhera tha vahan ab halki si roshni ho gayi

Yahan pehle kuch dikhayi nahi de raha tha vahan ab halka halka sab kuch dikh raha tha

Dheere dheere hum age badhne lage hum jani ki main aur shaitan humhare yahan ane ki khabar Shaitan ke bhai ko bhi lag gayi thi

Woh apne singhasan pe baitha tha aur muskurane laga


Skb - ohh to bade bhai tum khud hi yahan aa gaye iska matlab hai ki ab mujhe jyada mehnat nahi karni padegi aa jao jaldi Seeennnaaapppaaatttiii

Skb ne chilla ke senapati ko bulaya senapati vahan bhagte hue aya aur jaldi se ake chest pe hath rakh ke ghutno pe baith gya

Senapati - maharaj ko jai ko

Skb - senapati mere bade bhai yahan pohanch chuke hai jao unhe achi si khatirdari karke mere sahmne lao

Senapati - ji maharaj

Itna bolke Senapati mehal se bahar nikal gya aur usne ek awaaz nikali jis se ass pass ke sabhi darinde bagera ek hi yagha ikathe ho gaye hai

Senapati - sipahio waqt aya hai jung shaitan laut aya hai use rokna padega aao vinash kare uska ache se khatirdari karna uski marityundaaaaa

"Marityunddaaaaaa" uske piche sare plannnet pe yeh awaaz gunjh gayi

Fir sabhi ne apne apne hathyar liye aur meri aur badhne lage idhar main bhi chala ja raha tha tabhi shaitan bola

Shaitan - dude did you listend something they are coming let's have some fun

Kishan - ohh yeah m ready buddy i also want an one man army fight it'll be fun

Kuch door jane pe woh sab mere aur ate dikhe Senapati age aa raha tha ek bheriye pe baith ke bheriya 7 feet uncha tha

Unko ate deikh maine hath mein talwar layi aur ek shield se apne aap ko cover kar liya

Aur laga di daur unsab ki taraf maine daurte hue apni talwar ghumayi aur ek dam se age ko jhatka diya meri talwar se electric waves nikal ke unki aur jane lagi jis jis pe wave padi woh jalne laga

Uske baad maine ek hath hawa mein utahaya aur chote chote pathar upar aye maine hath un sab ki aur lar diya issi ke sath pathar full speed mein unki aur jane lage pathro ki speed se udne wali dhool bhi pathro se judne lagi aur pathar bade hone lage un logo en un pathro ko rokne ki koshish ki par kuch pathro ko hi rok paye ab tak unki sena adhi reh gayi thi itne mein woh mere kareeb pohanch gaye

Shaitan apne roop mein aa gya aur bhid gya sena se aur unko gajar muli ki tarha katne laga unmein se koi bhi hume chu nahi pa raha tha dekhte dekhte sena kam hoti gayi aur thodi si reh gayi woh log bhagne hi wale the ki Shaitan ne aag ki barish kar di unpe woh sab jal ke rakh hone lage ab bs bacha tha sirf senapati

Senapati ne bheriye se utar gya aur use humari taraf ishara kiya ishara milte hi bheriye ne humari taraf jhapatta mara uska muh hum tak pohanchta usse pehle hi hum ne hawa mein uth ke uske jabde pe ek mukka mara woh do tin palti kha ke piche gira woh uth ke fir se bhag ke humari taraf aya is bar humne uski tang pe bar kiya aur talwar se kaat di bheriye ko to jese farak hi nahi pada is bar woh jab jhapta to humne ne niche baith ke uske seene mein talwar ghusa di jo ko uske dil pe lagi aur woh tadapne laga


Fir hum ne senapati ki aur rukh kiya hume apni taraf ata hua dekh ke usne mantar padha aur dekhte hi dekhte uske jese kayi patibimb vahan ban gaye

Ab usmein se ek ko pehchanna mushkil ho gya tha usne humare charo aur ghera bana liya tha

Itne mein humare piche se bar hua to humne ghum ke bar karne wale ka sar kaat diya par yeh asli senapati nahi tha

Shaitan - pith pe bar karke tune pita jo ko to mar diya tha kayar par hume ni maar payega

Sena pati - yeh to waqt hi batayega Shaitan

Humne un sab ki ankhein parhna shuru ki to asli senapati mil gya hume is bar un sabi me ek sath bar kiya par unho ne dair kar di thi humne hath ghumaya aur talwar asli senapati ki aur chorh di thi jo ki jake sidha senapati ke dil mein ghus gayi senapati ke marte hi uske sare duplicate gayab ho gaye

Fir hum mehal ki aur badh gaye skb abhi bhi singhasan pe baitha tha uske aas pass ek do mantri baithe the
Jese hi humne mehal mein kadam rakha kuch sainiko ne hum pe humla kiya par humne unko bhi kaat diya

Ese hi hum age badhte rahe aur jo raste mein ata gya katte gaye usko itne mein hume kuch yaad aya aur hum age badhte gaye

Kuch mins mein hum Skb ke sahmne the mantriyon ne humpe humla kiya par woh humare age kuch nahi tha

Skb taliyaan bajate hue bola

Skb - bohat khub bhai bohat khub akhir mehal tak pohanch hi gaye tum

Hum - pohanchna hi tha Takshak tujhe se hisab jo karna tha

Takshak - bhaiya tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum itni asani se mujhe maar doge

Hum - chutki ka kam hai hamare liye

(Hum ka matlab hai Kishan aur Shaitan hum iss liye kyu ki yeh dono abi ek sath hai nahi to Shiatan hamesha Kishan ke ander rehta hai aaj woh bahar hai aur Kishan ander hai)

Takshak - hahahahhahaha sapne dekh rahe ho bhaiya dekho dekho kyu kuch waqt mein main tumhe sada ki neend sula dunga

Hum - woh to waqt batayega kiski maut hone wali hai vese maut to tune apne khate mein usi din likh li thi jab tune maa pita ji aur apni patni ko mara tha aur mujhe bhi marna chaha par pita ji ki kasam ki vajha se mujhe dharti lok jana pada

Takshak - chalo aaj do do hath karke dekh hi laite hai

Itna bol ke usne talwar nikali aur hum dono ki talware apas mein takrane lagi pure mehal mein humare talwaro ki takrane ki awaaz aa rahi thi

Hum dono ke bodies pe ghaw aye par dono ke jakham bhar gaye

Hum - to Takshak khel kahatam kiya jaye ab itne logo ko maar ke main ubh chuka hu

Yeh bolke maine use dikahne ke liye uske sar pe ek bar kiya aur uska sar dhad se alag hua aue niche gir gya lekin woh fir se vapis dhad ki aur ane laga

Itna kafi tha humare liye aur humne ek aag ka gola banaya usmein halki c meri white roshni milayi aur vahan lagi ek painting ki aur chorh di

Takshak chillaya uska sar abhi apni yagha pe nahi laga tha issi liye woh kuch kar nahi paya

Takshak - nahi esa nahi ho sakta tum mujhe nahi maar sakte

Hum - eaa ho chuka hai mere bhai?? tumhari lanka to lag gayi hai ab kuch ni ho sakta

Maine itna bola aur painting pe woh gola laga painting jalne lagi aur Takshak bhi jalne laga aur tadapne laga

Hum - tujhe kya laga tha ki tu apni jaan is painting mein chuayega to tu bach jayega kya nahi bilkul nahi Shaitan hu main shaitan

Dekhte hi dekhte woh rakh ho gya maine ek darwaze pe daikha to vahan Takshak ki beti khari thi maine use apne pass bulaya woh ro rahi thi kyu ki uska baap mara tha

Woh bhagte hue mere pass ayi aur mere gale se lag gayi

Hum - na na meri beti ese rote nahi hai tu to bahadur beti hai na aur kajri tum kiske liye ro rahi hu iss Takshak ke liye ro rahi ho jisne humara pura parivar tabha kar diya tha

Kajri -(sisakte hue) par bade papa woh mere papa the na kese khud ko roku

Shaitan - beta sambhalo khud ko ab is planet ko tumhe hi sambhalna hai aaj aur isi waqt se tum yahan ki Rani ho pata hai tumhe yeh jimebari kyu de raha hu main kyu ki tum mein tumhari maa ke gunn hai achai ke gunn tumhe ab is planet kl sambhalna hai

Kajri - bade papa mujhe nahi rani banna mujhe apke sath jana hai

Shaitan - beta tumhe sambhlna hoga is yagha ko aur main tumse vaada karta hu ki jaldi hi main tumhare pass hounga bs kuch kaam nipta ke tumhare pass aa jaunga main

Kajri - pakka..?

Shaitan - han pakka meri beti chal ab singhasan pe

Itne mein vahan jo aam rakshas the woh sab bhi vahan pohanch gaye ab main normal roop mein aa gya aur hath ghumaya to mere kapde badal gaye fir maine halka sa hath ghumaya sabhi rakshaso ki bhesh bhusha badal gayi woh sab isano ki tarha dikhne lage
Sab apne aap ko dekh ke chonk gaye
Fir sab Shaitan ki nam ki jai jai karne lage

Uske baad maine khoon ka ek bartan laya use Kajri ke sar pe dala yeh rasam thi dark planet ki fir maine vahan lani laya aur Kajri ko nehla diya fir maine 5 dasiyon ko bulaya aue unke hatho mein shahi poshak de di aur Kajri ko tyar krne ke liye bola fir maine singhasan ke charo aur parda kar diya magic se kuch der baad parda hata diya

Fir maine magic kiya to sara mehal saaf suthra ho gay aur usmein roshni ho gayi yahan pehle thodi si rohni thi ab sara mehal light se chamak raha tha uske baad maine fir sath ghumaya aur sarr dark planet pe paid pode aur flowers ubhar aye yahan sirf kali mitti thi aur gandi thi vahan ab hariyali ho gayi thi pura planet chamak raha rha

Fir maine magic kiya to ek taaj aur flowrs ki thali aa gayi maine taaj uthaya aur Kajri ke sar pe rakha aur flowers uspe fhenke

Aur bola

Main - MahaRani kajri ki jai

Uski ke sath Kajri ki jai jai kar hone lagi

Main - (sab se) han to ab tum sab burayi nahi bhalayi ki taraf kadam badhaoge mujhe agar jara sa bhi malum hua ki tum logo ne burayi failayi hai to tum sab ko jaan se maar dunga

Fir Kajri ki aur dekh ke

Main - chalo beta mujhe agya do jane ki jald hi main vapis aa jaunga

Kajri - bade papa abi to kuch din rukiye mere pass

Main - abi to nahi ruk sakta beta han main tumse milne ata rahunga

yeh bolke maine uska matha chuma aur vahan se gayab ho gya aur vapis earth pe aa gya mujhe bohat skoon mehsus ho raha tha ek aur dushman khatam ho gya tha mera aaj


note :- dosto Takshak main villain nahi tha kahani ka main villain family member aur woh jhoothi khabar failane wala hi hai so yeh mat samjhiyega ki main villain khatam ho chuka hai

Keep supporting like that

Fantastic update

 

[Arv313]

Awesome story hai abhi tak kai utar chadaw aaye hero ki life me but jeet humesha sach ki hi hoti h
Dekhte h aage kya hota hai.
Waiting for the next update.

 

[Dev the lover]

Update 7


Issi ke sath shuru hota hai game Mahi and Team ka par kya yeh asliyat mein unka game hai yaa kisi aur ka chalo dekhte hai

Ab Mahi ne plan to kiya par usne Kishan ke bare mein sahi se pata ni kiya lagta hai aaj kand hoga

Mahi abi bas apne plan ko final touch de rahi thi par yahan ek twist hai ki apne Kishan ko yeh sab Bike drive karte bhi dikh raha tha

(To ab apka sawal hoga ki agar Kishan ke pass powers hai to usne kisi ko location pata lagane ko kyu bola uska jabab yeh hai ki tab woh public place mein tha)

Mahi ki planning aur batein sun ke uski ankhen nam thi aaj usne ek bar fir galat dost chuna jese pehle choose kiya tha aaj usko khud pe rona aa raha tha aur gussa bhi

Uske dil mein Mahi ke liye feelings aa gayi thi par ab uska dil ro raha tha khair ab kya ho sakta tha andhe vishwash ka yahi nateeza hota hai

Udhar Mahi sabhi cheezo ko touch up de rahi thi

Mahi - (g1 se) esa karo ki tum mujhe ab bed pe bandh do aur jab woh darwaze ke nazdeek aye to mere rape ki acting shuru kar dena


Gundo ne vesa hi kiya jesa mahi ne kaha tha par yahan Mahi se ek gadbad ho gayi aur woh kya hai to woh yeh hai ki ab Mahi bed pe helpless bandhi hui thi aur gundo ke mann mein hawas jaag chuki thi

Ab jage bhi kyi na Mahi thi hi ese bhara hua sareer bade bade chuche sapat pet aur musal janghe ufff lar tapak gayi un sab me muh se sabhi gunde bahar aye


G2 - bhai kya kehte ho jab woh ladka ayega tab ayega kyu na ham

G3 - han bhai vese bhi bohat din ho gaye hai koi nayi chidiya hath lage

G1 - baat to sahi hai tumhari chalo apna kam karte hai (g6 se) raju tum darwaze pe nazar rakhna fir tera bhi no ayega

Raju - ok bhai

Aur woh gate pe chala gya aur bakki ke pancho room mein ab yeh 5 aur Mahi bed pe woh bhi helpless

Mahi - tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho bahar nazar kon rakhega

G5 - jab tere jesa maal yahan pe khud wa khud hi hame neota de raha hai to ham darwaze pe kya karenge

Mahi - kya matlab hai tumhara

G2 - matlab yeh ki aaj ham sab tera rass nichodne wale hai

Mahi - nahi vahi ruk jao mere pass bhi mat ana nahi to anzam bohat bura hoga

G1 - anzam ki baad mein dekhi jayegi

Aur yeh bolke usne uski t-shirt upar utha di
Aur furti se bra bhi upar utha di Mahi bas chatpatane ke siwaye much ni kar sakti thi uska plan usi ke upar ulta pad chuka tha ab woh bs unse minnate kar rahi thi aur ro rahi thi

Ufffff big big boobs sorry chuche bade bade aur unpe light brown color ke chote chote nipples haye mere muh mein pani aa gya
Yahi hal g1 aur bakki sab ka tha do log uske chucho pe tut pade

Abi yeh itna hi kiye the ki ek dam darwaza tuta aur Kishan ander aa gya usne ate hi g5 ko punch diya aur gun nikal ke 5 ke 5 gundo ko uda diya matlab shoot kar diya

Woh kafi gusse mein tha chahe Mahi chaal hi kyu na chal rahi thi par thi to ek ladki hi issi liye Kishan ne unhe tapka diya

Kishan ne age badh ke ek chaddar Mahi ke upar fhenki aur uske hath pair khol diye
Mahi ne Jaldi se apne kapde theak kiye aur bhag ke Kishan ke gale lag gayi aur rone lag gayi

Pehle to Kishan ne normal hug kiya but jab use Mahi ke chucho ka ehsas hua to usne use tight hug kar liya Mahi jo ab tak rote rote thanks bol ri thi woh ab siski mein badal chuka tha

Mahi - Thank you Kishan aaj tumne dusri bar meri madat ki hai thank you so much

Kishan - dost hone ke naate yeh to mera faraz tha Mahi

Mahi - Kishan kya tum sari zindgi ese hi meri raksha karo kabhi mujhe chodh ke to nahi jaoge

Kishan - nahi Mahi kahi nahi jaunga

Mahi - I Love You Kishan

Kishan - I Love You to Mahi

Aur Kishan ne apne hath uski gand pe ralhe aur halka sa dava diye aur gardan pe halka sa kiss kar liya isse Mahi ki ek halki si siski nikal gayi

Tabhi Kishan ko much yaad aya aur woh Mahi ko chodh ke bahar aya bahar Raju behosh pada tha usne 50 hazar pe jeb se nikale aur ek letter ke sath Raju ki jeb mein daal diye aur Mahi ko leke bike ke pass aa gya aur dono city ki aur chal diye

bike pe woh Kishan se chipak ke baithi thi
Kishan ne Mahi ko uski manzil pe chodha aur ghar chal diya Aaj Kishan udaas tha

Usne ek baat bhi soch li thi mahi ka khel usi kr sath khelne ki aur use Mahi ka chehra read karne ke baad Arun aur Nitin ke bare mein bhi pata chala chuka tha

Aaj use bohat jyada rona aa raha tha aur woh jake apne room mein ghusa aur bed pe let ke chatt ki aur dekh ke ashun bahane laga ek servant ne Pihu ko call kar di aur Kishan ki halat bhi bata di

ess liye kehate hai ki chutiye sai dur rehanai ke saath dosti ke naam par joh tatti log zindagi mai aa jaate hai unnhe bhi paani ki tarah baha doo tabhi life saaf hogi
update aacha thaaa bhaut par dosti ekdum ghatiya thi yaa kaho story mai joh dost asali mai bhi aise hote hai

 

[Lovingheart]

Wah bhai

Thanks bhai

 

[Lovingheart]

Awesome update

Thanks bhai

 

[Lovingheart]

Jabardast update

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[Lovingheart]

Thanks bhai

Super fantastic update bhai

 

[Lovingheart]

Nice update

Thanks bhai