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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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aka3829

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Update 15 (new update)

Megha tasweer se batein karti rahi aur ese hi so gayi thi

Idhar Kishan apni dono behno aur Esha ke sath mein sote hue city ki aur ja rahe the

Aur raste mein han raste mein Pakkia truck laya gadi kuchlne ke liye

(Par is sale ko kon samjhaye woh kis se panga lene aya
Ab jahir si baat hai zinda to bachega nahi par fir bhi ise apni icha puri kar lene de ab jane wale ko kon rok sakta hai

Readers- abe chutiye rok use verna yeh mar jayega

Writer - iss se mujhe kya i love to see that ab shanti se update padho aur update ke baad revu mein chipkana jo bolna hai)

Han to Pakkia ji maharaj apni mout se gale milne ja rahe hai but iss sale nautanki Kishan ko dekho ke masti ke alam mein so raha hai

Wait aa minute what yeh kese hua aap bhi dekho are dekho nahi padho han to

Jese hi yeh log City mein ghusne lagi tabhi Do trucks ayi rod block karte hue unka irada saaf saaf jhalak raha tha ki kis irade se kar rahe hai yeh sab woh aur jese hi unki doori kam hui tanhi Car ki dono side se missiles nikli aur jake trucks ko lagi boooooommmmmm

Aur issi ke sath rasta khul gya aur trucks hawa mein gadi aram se age nikal gayi

(Writer - are bhul gya bc yeh gadi modified hai aur auto driving mode pe hatt bc bohat din baad likhne ka yahi nateeza hai)

Han to hame yahan dekhne ko mila ki In 4ron ko ander kuch pata hi nahk chala car sound proof jo thi but but but jisko pata lagna tha usko pata chal gya

Ji han aur kisko Kishan sahib ko sala neend mein bhi muskura raha hai khair usko yeh bhi malum chal chuka hai ki kya aur kyu hora hai

To age kahani jese hi car age badhi to ek aur truck tezi se aa raha tha aur ismein koi aur nahi apne Pakkia ji maharaj bethe hue the vahi baat hui yeh to ki "aa bail mujhe mar" sala maine do trucks ki halat dekh bhi nahi chup baitha

Ab yaha bhi ek baat sahi baithti hai ki "Gand main ho rahi hai khujli
Fir bhi sala isko karna hai kisi aur ko ungli"

Maroo bhaiya hame kya hum to bs darshak hai aur kya

"Gali gali mein gunjhe ek nara
Ab to pakka marega yeh Pakkia Sala"

Han to jesa ki main bata raha tha ki apne Pakkia ji maharaj jese hi gaddi se takrane wale the to ek dam se car mein se upar se niche tak ek lezar chari aur truck do tukde ho gaye

Sath mein hi gadi se ek bomb nikla aur ek bar fir se booommmm

Aur Pakkia ji maharaj ka swah hai
Bechare ki vaat lag chuki hai khak ho gya pura

Aur yeh kya Kishan gadi mein ek dam se bechain ho gya aur uth baitha uske uthne se teeno bhi uth gayi

Pihu - betu kya hua ese kyu uthe aur yeh yeh paseena kyu ara hai itna? Koi bura sapna dekha kya

Aur usne use gale se laga liya

Pihu - betu bol na kya hua kuch to bol

Kishan - pata nahi di kuch bechaini si ho rahi hai pata nahi kyu aur kyu hori hai woh mujhe pata nhi chalra lagta hai mere kisi apne ke sath bura hua hai par kiske sath yahi pata ni chalra hai

Pihu - nahi betu veham hoga tumhara aram se baitho aur yeh lo pani pi lo main pata karti hu

Fir Pihu ne Kishan ko pani pilaya aur khud kisi ko call karne lagi aur yeh no tha Meera ka par call recieve ni hua udhar se 3 se 4 baar esa hi hua

Ab Pihu ko bhi tension ho rahi thi aur idhar Kishan bhi apni powers use nahi kar pa raha tha uski bechaini badhti ja rahi thi kyu ki esa uske sath pehli bar ho raha tha aur usko iska karan nahi pata tha

Chalo main apko bata deta hu iss bechaini ki vajha

Hua yu tha ki aaj Meera ki city mein ek dam se badal cha gaye kale ghanghor aur tezz hawa chalne lagi esa lagra tha bohat tez tufaan ane wala hai

Par yeh kya asman se ek kala dhua nikal ke aya aur woh seedha Meera ke ghar ki aur chal diya

Is waqt sabhi ghar pe the siwaye Meera ke woh kisi kam se bahar gayi thi woh dhua ese hi pure ghar mein fail gya aur us dhue ne Abhay Avantika aur Megha ki bodies ko apne ander daboch liya dheere dheere unki puri body dikhna band ho gayi par kuch der mein woh dhua hata aur dekha to teeno ki laash niche padi thi teeno ke jism mein jakhm the aur teeno ki gardan pe bhi vaar hua tha vahan cut ka nishan tha aur khoon veh raha tha

Kuch der mein dekhte hi dekhte pura asman saaf ho gya aur hawa bhi apni normal raftar se chalne lagi
Bhale hi tufaan ane se tala ho par Kishan ki zindgi mein ek bada tufaan aa chuka tha jiski bharpayi shayad hi koi kar sakta tha

(Are yeh Megha pe zoom karo re camera man
Han ab sahi dikh ra hai)

Megha mein abhi jaan baki thi aur woh apne khoon se kuch likh rahi thi aur jab usne likhna pura kiya tbhi uski sanse tham gayi aur usne duniya ko alvida keg diya

Aaj Kishan ki zindgi ke 3 eham hisse uska sath shod gaye par abhi ek aur durghatna baki hai aur woh kya hai yeh khud padh lo aap log

Meera bhi mosam sahi hote hi ghar ki aur vapis chal di par aaj shayad uska bhi waqt sahi nahi tha

Woh ghar ko paidal hi ja rahi thi kyu ki jyada door nahi tha woh kuch hi door chali thi ki ek goli akar seedha uske sar ke aar paar ho gayi aur uske muh se bs ek cheekh nikal gayi

Meera - Bbbhhhaaaaiiiiyyyyaaaaaa

Meera ki cheekh ki vjha se hi Kishan ko bechaini mehsus hone lagi thi Aur idhar Meera vahi dher ho gayi uski sanse tham chuki thi har taraf bhagdhad mach gayi

Tabhi vahan kisi building ke chatt pe baitha ek admi kisi ko iski khabar de raha tha

Saksh - boss kam ho gya hai goli seedha uske sar ke par nikal gayi hai aur uski sanse tham chuki hai

Boss - ok to jaldi vahan se nikal jao

Idhar boss hasne laga

Boss - tu to bach gya tha Kishan par teri behan nahi bach payi par fikar mat kar tujhe bhi jaldi hi uske pass pohncha dunga hahahahahahaha


Udhar aaj Kishan ne bohat kuch kho diya Kishan se raha nahi gya aur usne gadi ko Meera ki city ki aur dora diya uski bechaini badhti ja rahi thi woh bs car bhagaye ya raha tha woh apni power ka use karne ki koshish kar raha tha par kar nahi pa raha tha khair usne is taraf jyada dhayan ni diya aur gadi bhagata raha

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Is update ko me 2 bhago me divide karunga. Pehle bhag me jaha kishan ki gadi ka kamal dikha ki kaise wo us pakkiya ke humle se bach gya aur beech 2 me TP ka bolna hasyapad stithi paida kar raha tha. Aur jo ek Wahi iska usra bhag mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya. Meera aur megha ka mara jana is kahani ko ek andhkaar me le gya he. Yaar kishan ko dilo jaan se pyaar karne wali bahan meera ko aise marna mujhe to bilkul bhi achha nahi laga. Dusra megha ne jo bhi galti ki thi wo ab uske liye pachta rahi thi aur us galti ka paschatap karna chahti thi. Wo sudhar rahi thi. Use pura haq tha apne bhai aur bahan ki nafrat khatam karne ka ek mauka milne ka. Aur na hi writer ne wo raaz khola ki kyu krishan ko apna vhar chodna pada aur megha ki kya galti thi jisame usake ma aur baap ne bhi uska hi sath diya. Sorry bhai mujhe ye update bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya. Agar aapko marna hi tha to avantika aur kishan ke baap ko maar sakte the.
Waiting 4 next update jisame sayad megha aur meera ko to aap jinda kar hi doge.
 

Lovingheart

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Is update ko me 2 bhago me divide karunga. Pehle bhag me jaha kishan ki gadi ka kamal dikha ki kaise wo us pakkiya ke humle se bach gya aur beech 2 me TP ka bolna hasyapad stithi paida kar raha tha. Aur jo ek Wahi iska usra bhag mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya. Meera aur megha ka mara jana is kahani ko ek andhkaar me le gya he. Yaar kishan ko dilo jaan se pyaar karne wali bahan meera ko aise marna mujhe to bilkul bhi achha nahi laga. Dusra megha ne jo bhi galti ki thi wo ab uske liye pachta rahi thi aur us galti ka paschatap karna chahti thi. Wo sudhar rahi thi. Use pura haq tha apne bhai aur bahan ki nafrat khatam karne ka ek mauka milne ka. Aur na hi writer ne wo raaz khola ki kyu krishan ko apna vhar chodna pada aur megha ki kya galti thi jisame usake ma aur baap ne bhi uska hi sath diya. Sorry bhai mujhe ye update bilkul bhi pasand nahi aaya. Agar aapko marna hi tha to avantika aur kishan ke baap ko maar sakte the.
Waiting 4 next update jisame sayad megha aur meera ko to aap jinda kar hi doge.
Mast rebu amtul bhai

Is story mein twist hi twist dalunga
So sath bNe raho bs itna hi bolunga
 
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