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Wese... Agar karna ko ab image bachaate hue mu'afi paani hai toh use kisi aur ko nahin balki khud ko yeh saabit karna chahiye ki woh sabhiki mu'afi aur pyaar ke qaabil ban chuka hai....
Intzar rahegaDosto likh raha hun par abhi time lagega .
Intzar rahegaDosto likh raha hun par abhi time lagega .
Koi baat nahin bhaiDosto likh raha hun par abhi time lagega .
Raja chouhan babu mehnat kar rahe hain.Dosto likh raha hun par abhi time lagega .
Awesome update..bhai?
Toh Rajni ka ka bhi kalyaan kar hi diya Amit ne ?
Dekhte hain ab Divya ka number kab lagega ?
Aur Nidhi ko bhi ek sukhad jhatka lag hi gaya dekhte hain iska asar kya hota hai Nidhi par ?
Behtreen update Bhai
Beautiful update bhai ? ji bhai pura kar dete maza aa jata..
Amit k aaj saare raaz khul gaye rajni mausi k saamne lekin rita mausi n sab sambhal lia
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update
Fantastic and rocking update
As expected nidhi ko secratory banya gaya
Par ye secratory se jyada kam karegi yani ki compny ko handel karna
Rajni mausi bhi lag gayi hai ab line mai .....
Intazar hai gale carector ka jo hosakta hai ek rajneta ka ho yani ki neta ki beti ka .......
Ya fir koi or carector bhi ho sakta haiii .......
Kahni me twist abhi baki hai......
Waiting fir the next updet
Fantastic update raja bhai
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Jaldi hi 1k pages honge
Superb bhai maja a geya . Rajni ko bhi pyar mil geya aur nidhi ko toh jindgi ka sabse bada jhatka laga hai
Awesome updates
Adbhut update bhaiya ji
padhane me maza aaya bhai
Ab dekhate hai nidhi ji kaise react karti hai.
Waiting for the next update bro.
Raja chouhan bhai
yahi me maanta hu........... nali me se agar badbu ane lage to us gandgi ko pura bahar nikaal do
jisse jitni bhi gandgi hai samne bhi aa jayegi..........jitni badbu failni hai ek bar me failegi......
aur dhire-dhire jab support ka pani milna band ho jayega.........to sookhkar dhool bankar hawa me ud jayegi
varna badbu to bani hi rahegi hamesha..........support ki barsat ka pani milte hi overflow bhi ho jayegi...........jo apko gandgi me jine par majbur kar degi
ye aapne apne shar, gaon ghar me bhi dekha hoga...........nale-naaliyon ki safai
ro thodi badbu sahne se achchha.........ek bar jyada badbu sahkar ...........kuchh samay ke liye rahat bhi mil jati hai aur overflow ka khatra bhi nahin rahta
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Rajesh Sarhadi bhai ne kamlesh ke bare me bhi sahi kaha............
aur aapne jo maryada ki baat kahi...........apatti kale maryada nasti ..................sankat ke liye koi maryada nahi hoti
aur agar divya, neha, nishi aadi ka support nahi hota to sankat bahut hi bada tha.........na sirf amit ke liye balki deepika aur uske bachche ke liye bhi
me janta hu ki mahan banne ke liye achchha bhi bankar dikhana hota hai...................lekin me achchhe aur bure ke drishtikon se nahi
duniya ko sahi-galat ke drishtikon se dekhta hu..................isiliye auro se alag hoon..........samaj se bhi
kyonki mujhe maryada purushottam ram bankar apni patni ki agni pariksha nahi leni aur na tyag karke uski murti ke sath baithkar yagya karna
me to un purushottam ke pita dasrath ki tarah apni sab patniyon ke sath umr bhar jina hai..........antim saans tak
vaise ye mere vyaktigat vichar hain..................kahani aap apne tareeke se likhein
mujhe 1st update se ab tak...............kahin koi kami nahin dikhi
bahut pasand ayi
awesome, jabardast, speechless, mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update
4 completing 1K pages on your thread, your update was awesome hat's off to you bro keep rocking we love your story and your writing skills.
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Congratulations raja bhai for completing 1000 pages. Party to banti hai ????
Mubarak ho raja bhai 10 shatako ke liye or shandar update ke liye
Raja Sir 1000 Page ke liye subhkamnaye..
Ur sandhaar update...keep posting......
BAHUT HU SHAANDAAR AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY EXCELLENT MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE
Superb update bro...
CONGRATS for 1000 Pages...
Keep Going Broo...
Congratulations Raja Bhai complete for 1000 page .
Fantastic update waiting for next
Bhai 1000 pages pure hone par hardik badhayi
Congratulations bro.
Raja bhai update majedar OR bahut lajwaw behtreen jabardast tha ek tarf rajani Mousi ke saath ye kya hogya wanhi dusri taraf Nidhi ko 440 wolt ka jhatka laga
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
1000 pages pure hone dhero badhai
Jhakassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssß
1k ki bahut bahut badhai.
Bhai Aapne To 1000 Pages Pure Hone Se Pahale Itna Sandar Update Dekar Char Chand Laga Diye Bhai.
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For Completing 1000 Pages.
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And Waiting For NIDHI's Shocking Reaction Update.
for 1k pages. Raja chouhan bhai
bhai andere main kand ho gya rajni mausi ka koi ni accha hi hua
Nice n fantastic update
Congratulations on the completion of 1000 pages
Fantastic update bhai
Fantastic Update ?
Bhai jabedust update tha. Matlab kya suspen tha ab rajni mousi ka tadap aur galfemi dur hogyi aur Nidhi ka job issue slow hoga our amit ke karan wo tention free hog hai..
Nice update bro waiting for next
bhai dhamkadar update
Congrats for 1000 page raja bro
Bhai kya bolu.... Mast hai, majedaaar hai, fantastic hai, aur words hi Nahi mil rahe hai.
The way you are giving happiness to all is really amazing.
May God bless you.
Awesome update bhai and congrats for 1k pages keep posting
Bhai fantastic update ?
FIRST TOH
FOR COMPLETE 1000 PAGE'S BHAI
Congrats for completing 1000 pages
BAHUT HI LAJAWAAB UPDATE HAI BHAI
RITA KE CHAKKAR ME RAJANI KA NUMBER LAG GAYA.RAJANI KE SATH YE SEEN BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR RAHA AMIT KA.
PAR JATE JATE AMIT NE JO BAAT KAHI THI SHAYAD USKA HI ASAR HAI JO SHUBAH ME RAJANI MOUSI NE KUCH HANGAMA NAHI KIYA AUR AMIT KE SAMNE BHI NAHI AAYI.
AUR SABKE JANE KE BAAD RITA SE AMIT AUR RITA KE SAMBANDHON KE BAARE ME BHI JANKARI LI .
RAJANI NE RAT ME HI AATMAMANTHAN KAR LIYA HAI ISLIYE SUBAH RITA KO KUCH GALAT NAHI BOLA YA NARAJ NAHI HUYI KISI SE .
AB NIDHI KO PERSONAL SECRETARY APPOINT KIYA HAI RAGHAV NE AUR ABHI NIDHI PAHUCHI HAI MD KE CABIN ME AUR AMIT KO DEKH KAR CONFUSE AUR SHOCKED HAI.
KHAIR DEKHATE HAIN AGALE UPDATE ME KYA REACTION HOTA HAI NIDHI KA JAB USKO PATA CHALEGA KI AMIT HI MD HAI AUR WOH USKI HI PS APPOINT HUYI HAI
Awesome updat Raja chouhan bhai. I think here story will take turn.
1000 pages kee badhai. Update shandar raha. Rajni jee ka bhee kalyan ho hee gya. Ab to company director Amit hai jo college jayega aur company ko Raghav Uncle ke sath ab Nidhi ko hee sambhalna hai. Business women bhee amit ke sath aa gayi. Umda.
First of all congratulations for 1000 pages. Fabulous story... and lovely update... Stay safe and keep entertain us with your writing skills.
Fadu update bro
Superb Raja bhai.....
Rajni v nipat gai ab dhekhte hai Rajni or Amit khul k ek dusre k samne kaise aayega. Mujhe lagta hai isme Rita hi kuch karegi....
Mujhe pahle hi laga tha Rita ki jagh Amit Rajni ko hi pel raha hai maine to socha tha Rita or Rajni planing karke ye sb kar rahi thi lekin nhi......
Waiting for next update.....
kya hot update diya hai.. aur itna bada twist.. rita ke chakkar mein rajni mausi ka khata khul gaya.. ab dekhte hai rajni mausi saving bhi karti hai ya fir current mein he chaalu rakhti hai...
deepika, kamini aur gauri maami ne to FD bhi karwa li hai.. dekhna ye hai ki kya inki bhi FD hoti hai ya nahi...
aur nidhi ko to asli jhatka amit ne de diya hai...
waise aaj muzhe tag nahi kiya..
Haha ek aur jhakash update bhai.
Shuru karte hi samajh aagya tha ke amit rita samajh ke rajni pe chadh gya hai haha. Jab amit ko pata chalega tab maza aayega.
Abhi dekhte hai amit aur nidhi ke beech kya hota hai next update me
Awesome update bhai ...Mja a gya ...Aage ke suspense pr se prda htne ka besbri se intjar he bhai
First of all congratulations for completing 1000 pages and the update was so good
Carry on
Congrats for 1000 pages
Mazedaar aur dhansu update Raja chouhan bhayya
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Raat mei Rita mausi ki jagah Rajni mausi ki raat rangeen ho gayee aur dhansu ghurswari ke baad ab Rajni mausi ka dabba bhi Amit ki train ? mei lag gaya ha ha ha ?
Rajni aur Rita mei bhi sab khulase ho gaye aur ek doosre ko sahara bhi mil gaya.
Nidhi didi ko bahut filmy style me job interview bhi karwa diya jo ki mazedaar tha. Dhekte hai Amit ko Director ke roop me dekh kar wo kaise react karti hai.
Uncle bhi Amit ki pehchaan banane mei koi kasar nahi chor rahe.
Is kahani ke sabse jaada nekdil aur acche vyakti ab tak teen log dikhe - Vijay mama (Baba), manjhle mama aur Mohit ke papa.
Principal sahab aur Prof V bhi bahut acche insaan hai dono.
Baki larkio ko abhi pyasa hi rahna parh raha hai kuch hafto se.
Dekhte hai agla update kya nya dhamaka laata hai.
1000 pages ki uplapdhi ke liye bahut bahut badhayee ho aur kahani ko aage acche se barhane ke liye hardik shubhkaamnaa
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First of congratulations to 1000 pages.
Amit ko pata bhi na Chala kise Raat ke andhere me thok diya . Jise Wah Rita samajh raha hai wo Rajni thi . Rajni ka account to galti se khool gaya Rita ne jo nind ki goli ka plan banya tha khood ke liye uska fayda Yski bahan ko mil gaya doodh ka glass exchange hone se . Ab Rajni ke ghar dubara jayega Amit to Rajni kaise khood ko rokegi . Aaj Karuna ko ratri me time diya hai ab Rita ko aur Intzarr karna padega .
Nidhi puri trah se taiyar ho kar interview dene gayi aur success bhi rahi par use kya pata tha yaha kay ho raha hai use asal jhatka to Amit ko director ki chair par baitha dekhkar laga . Esme raghav ne bhi Amit ka sath diya ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai ?
Zabardast updated bhai apki storie best
Bs dil krta h ye storie kabhi khatam na
Bs tum aise he likhte rho...aap kya likhte
Ho sir Kamal h...
Awesome update brooo
Yeh mousi wala kam acha ho gya
Karan ko b saza mil gai
Nidhi ko job
Ab director hony pa reaction daikhna hoga
Mind blowing update.....
Ab nidhi ka reaction dekte hai kaise hota hai.......
Best story on XForum....
Congratulation for 1000 Pages Raja Bhaiya
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Both hi ????????❣?????????❣?????? vadiya update Hy Raja bahi
Raja bhai ye to ghazab ho gaya, rita ke jagah rajni ka account khul gaya wo bhi dhanakedaar opening ke saath. Acha hua ke nidhi bhi ab ek achi company me kaam karegi jahan ke owners aur managers uske jism pyase nahi honge.
Karuna bechari to hamesha rita ke jal me phas jati hain aur uske armaan nind ki goli ke saath doodh me behjate hain.
Aur ye amit ka chota mama pehle se hi aawara hain magar mujhe lagta tha ye amit se pyaar karta hain par iske to na lund ke dum hain aur upar se dimag se paidal jo karan ne bola use sach man liya.
Is sab me deepika mami ki izzat ke bare me kisine nahi soncha, uska pati bhi uski nangi tasveer sabko proof ke taur par bata raha tha aur jab mahilao ko tasveer nikalne wala karan hain ye pata laga to sab amit ko phasane ke liye bhadak gaye karan pe magar kisine deepika ko beizzat karne ke liye uski gaand nahi maari.
Exciting update
Boht zabardast update
Congrats for over 1000 pages of this story bhai, as always awesome update bhai, toh Rajani massi ka bhi no lag gaya, dil se ek request hey bhai, ho sake toh Divya massi ke saath thoda pyar wala feelings ke saath sex scene dekhaiyega please bhai, aise Rajani massi ke tarah Amit ke anjane main na ho jaye sex. Mera matlab, thoda special wala scene expect kar raha hu aapse bhai, niras mat karieaga please bhai. Nidhi ko bhi ek tagra jhatka laga, ek taraf se achha hi hua Nidhi ke liye, Amit ke saath rahega toh apna pyar use jada se jada mahsus kara payega, at last but not the least egarly waiting for next update bhai.
awesome update hai raja bhai,
behad hi shandaar lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
wow rajni mausi ko rita mausi samajh kar amit ne sab kuchh kar liya,
vahin nidhi didi ko ab tagda jhatka laga hai Amit ko director ke roop mein dekh kar,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Superb update bro
Congratulations for 1000 Pages bhai
Congrats for this milestone raja bhai. Keep it up .
Pyare Raja Bhaiya
Sabse pehle aapko 1000 page pure hone ki badhai.
Kahani bahot hi badhiya chal Rahi hai abhi aapne jaha ek new account khol diya Rajni ka wo to ek purane kahawat ki tarah hai k "e to gajab hoi gawa" waise Nidhi bhi shoked hai Amit ko director k chair par baitha dekh kar aur uska reaction ap aage batayenge.
Waise pichle updates me karan ne jo Amit k sath kiya hai wo usme safal to nahi ho paya aur jaha tak pakda bhi gya par mujhe lagta nahi k wo abhi sudherega balki wo ab aur bhi hosiyari aur dimag ka upyog karke Amit ko phasane k liye koshish karega aur sath hi mujhe jo lag rha hai k wo jis college me hai jiska ulliekh abhi tak aapne nahi kiya wo sayad boys college hi na ho jaha k ladko k sath Amit ka panga hai aur wo bhi is bhai bhai ki ladai ka faiyda uthaiye. wahi Kamlesh k dimag me jo baat baith gai hai wo bhi sayad Amit k khilaf kuch Karega aisa lagta hai. par kya wo to aap hi janow waise aage ka intejar hai.
jaldi agle bhag de man nahi maan rha hai kyoki mai normali aisa dabao ya maang nahi karta par abhi majboor hu is dil dimag se isliya
Sorry
shubhratri
goodnight
Superb update
& Congratulation bro 1000 complete
Awesome update janab
Fabulous update
We Want Update .
We Want Update .
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Jab Tak Hame Hamara Update Nahi Mil Jata Hum Aise Hi Dharne Me Baithe Rahenge Kyon Bhaiyon.
Raja bhaiya tusi great ho
Tofo kabul karo
Superb update bro
Nidhi ko to jabardast shock lagaa hoga aur Uncle ne hi bola hoga aise masti ke liye......
thoda samay Karishma ko bhi dilawao
Awesome update bro
Waiting for lovely one
Very detailed description...bro..
Raja bhai..you should not neglect these points..
btw your story is just fabulous...keep posting
Or rhi meri baat to m aapki story ka ek silent reader of fan raha hu but m hmari frst site EXBII (Xossip) ka ek active member tha.. this is my first reply..m pichle 7 dino se aapki story padh raha hu or an 110 update tk phucha hu...
Mene socha tha ki frst reply tb krunga jb m apki story ki sath phuchunga means current date me..
Bt bhai ka itna detailed description dekh kr hi mene ye reply kiya..
Last me bs ek suggestion ki hmare Hero ko thoda or powerful bnao...means uski strength thodi or increase kro...like (Dhan,bal,powerful dost).
Nd thanx for the such a wonderful story.
Congratulation for 1k page
Achha hai
Just Mind-blowing Fantastic Superb Update ????
Congratulations on 1000 page
Chha gaye guru
Is khusi ke moke par ek bada update to banta hai
Awesome bhai Maza aa gaya
Nice update. Congratulations for 1000 pages completing & waiting for next update
Umda. Lajawab. Waiting for next
Congrats for completing 1000 page and your lovely story.
Dil khush ho jata hai xforum pe ye do stories read karke
1 pyar 100 baar
2 manhoos se mahan tak
Love you bhaiya ji Raja chouhan
Waiting for the next update bro.
Stand up for Raja chouhan
And clapping???????????????????????????????????????????????
And congratulation for pages
Congratulations for 1000 pages
readers jan krupaya dhyan de
Aaj is thread ke 1000+ pages hone ki khushi me ham sab milke (415 members jinhone total vote kiya he) Raja chouhan bhai se party lenge
To tayyar ho jayyiye aaj aap sabko writer ki taraf se daru ke liye har ek ko 100 rupya milega (415×100=41500 )
Is liye sab apni line banaye rakhiye koi dhakka mukki nahi karega
Wese party ke kharche ko dekhte huwe ye bhi suchit kiya jata hai ki shayad Raja chouhan bhai aaj 1 update ki jaga 2 update de jo utne hi bade ho jaise hamesha hote hai
Ab dekhna ye hoga ki writer sahab sabke daru ka dhyan rakh ke khush karte hai ya 2bade update deke double khush karte hai
Aage ki Jankari ke liye bane rahiye dhanyawad
for 1000 pages brother
for 1000
Congratulations for 1000
Es Hushi ky moka par aik mega Update to banta hy
Kya hyal ay Dosto???
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first of all congrats raja bhai aapko 1000 page ke liye dil se badhai aapko ...
aage aise hi badte raho ...yahi pray karta hun ...aapke liye ...
or sath me apna khayaal bhi rakhna ..aapke ache ki kamna ke sath ...
ek baar phir se 1000 page ke liye badhai ...
thanks aap logo ka aapke vichar ache lage per kuch pehloo jo the amit ko lekar jo karan or kamlesh ne kiya usko lekar uske liye kya amit ka kuch karna ya nahi yeh raja bhai ki apne vichar hai ...usse lekar humara apna alag alag soch rakhna is baat ko dekhne ka apna ek nazariya bhar hai ..
per ilzaam lagne ke baad amit ko kaisa laga hoga ya uski life me or kya change aa sakte hain ..usko lekar baat karne ka apna ek bada topic ban sakta hai ...
shyad kuch logon ko maaf karna sahi ho ya nahi main iske baare me kuch nahi kahuga kyuki har insaa ka apni alag soch ho sakti hai ...
so jo dimaag me aaya usko ek kahani ka roop dekar likh diya ..
ab yahan amit kya karega yeh toh raja bhai ke hath me hai ..per meri kahani me amit kya kar raha hai ..ek baar use bhi dekhna zaroor uske baad aapke shayad maaf karne ko lekar saare vichar kuch or hon...
is kahani ko likhne ki inspration kamdev99008 bhai or Raja chouhan bhai ke vicharon se hi li hai ...ummid hai ek choti kahani aapko
amit ke nazariye se ILZAAM इल्जाम ... Short story... samjh aaye .....
kahani me bas ek ILZAAM lagne ke baad kaisa asar padta hai wahi likha hai ...
thanks kamdev99008 or Raja chouhan bhai ki aapne likhne ke liye inspire kiya ...
Super Duper Hit & Mind Blowing & Fantastic & Awesome & Masttt & Very Nice Update Bro
Wah aakhir aa hi gya rajni ka number b ab to or maja aane wala h
Wah y to kamaal h nidhi amit ki personal secretary hogi Super nidhi ko b de siya sok
Waiting
Nice update.'...... and congratulations for 1000 page complete
Very nice bro
Superb Update and congratulations for 1k pages.
Ab lga nidhi ko jhatka. Ye toh uske liye unexpected tha. Rajni ki pyas bhi amit me dwara bujh hi gyi.
Waiting for next one
Chha gaye aap to Raja bhai
Bhai congrats for 1000 pages
Wese... Agar karna ko ab image bachaate hue mu'afi paani hai toh use kisi aur ko nahin balki khud ko yeh saabit karna chahiye ki woh sabhiki mu'afi aur pyaar ke qaabil ban chuka hai....
Thanks for your lovely wishes bhaiyo.Raja chouhan bhai congratulations for completing 1000 pages