Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Malhotra]

Its becoming typed n boring. Life main mahan banane ke liye sirf sex nahin hota. Seems another case of writer loosing plot, and killing a good start.

 

[Raja thakur]

Awesome update

 

[Hellohoney]

Bhot acha update bhai lekin me aapse kehna chahta hun ki ganv ke bahar ka bhi kuch dikhav bhai ese to sab bor hojayenge fir jesi aapki marji

 

[Black water]

Super fantastic update

 

[Raja chouhan]

Friends have some patience shehar result k baad jayegi story 2/3 update aur wait karo

 

[MS DHONI]

Pehle to me sorry bolunga regular comments nahin dene keliye....Kyunki me 3/4 din me story padhta Hoon....Khair ab point pe aate Hain...Me dekha ki kai readers ko story ki detailing achha nahin lag raha Hai...Unhe to sirf ghapaghap chahiye....To unko mera request hai hi forum pe bahut saari aisi kahani hai jahan be matlab ki chudai Hai...Aap wahan ja sakte ho...Aur Raja Bhai apko dilse dhanyabad ki aap apni baat pe khadi utre Hain... Regular updates ke saath situations create karne me mahir ho aap...Mera request hai ki aap jis flow pe kahani ko badha rahe hain usi tarah continue kijiye....Warna faltu baat me fas ne se kahani ki eishi ki teshi ho jayegi...Are ye thodi hoga ki har update mein chudai...Hero unse milega,kapde utarega aur phir shuru ho jayega....Uske liye situations create karna padhta Hai yaar...To aap jis detailing ke saath likh rahe ho wahi perfect Hai....Sex ke pehle thodi narazgi,thodi sharmana,thodi emotional...aise hi kahani me maza aayega...Aur haan aap gaon chodke sehar jaane ki jaldi mat karna.. Lockdown hai aajkal...To aap gaon ke scene ko achhi se niptao aur phir apki Jo planning hai uske hisab se badho...Aapko bilkul bhi Jaldbaazi karne ki jaroorat nahin Hai...Story ko apne hisab se lamba khicho regular updates ke saath...Aur mujhe jab bhi mauka milega ya phir aapke against me kuch baat ho rahe ho tab me jaroor comment karunga..Dhanyabaad

 

[Raj142]

SUPERB UPDATE BHAI
BUT MUJE YE STORY "AVI BHAI" KE STORY JAISE LG RHE HE

 

[Raja chouhan]

Sh

Pehle to me sorry bolunga regular comments nahin dene keliye....Kyunki me 3/4 din me story padhta Hoon....Khair ab point pe aate Hain...Me dekha ki kai readers ko story ki detailing achha nahin lag raha Hai...Unhe to sirf ghapaghap chahiye....To unko mera request hai hi forum pe bahut saari aisi kahani hai jahan be matlab ki chudai Hai...Aap wahan ja sakte ho...Aur Raja Bhai apko dilse dhanyabad ki aap apni baat pe khadi utre Hain... Regular updates ke saath situations create karne me mahir ho aap...Mera request hai ki aap jis flow pe kahani ko badha rahe hain usi tarah continue kijiye....Warna faltu baat me fas ne se kahani ki eishi ki teshi ho jayegi...Are ye thodi hoga ki har update mein chudai...Hero unse milega,kapde utarega aur phir shuru ho jayega....Uske liye situations create karna padhta Hai yaar...To aap jis detailing ke saath likh rahe ho wahi perfect Hai....Sex ke pehle thodi narazgi,thodi sharmana,thodi emotional...aise hi kahani me maza aayega...Aur haan aap gaon chodke sehar jaane ki jaldi mat karna.. Lockdown hai aajkal...To aap gaon ke scene ko achhi se niptao aur phir apki Jo planning hai uske hisab se badho...Aapko bilkul bhi Jaldbaazi karne ki jaroorat nahin Hai...Story ko apne hisab se lamba khicho regular updates ke saath...Aur mujhe jab bhi mauka milega ya phir aapke against me kuch baat ho rahe ho tab me jaroor comment karunga..Dhanyabaad

shukriya bhai
Mujhe khushi hai aap support kar rhe hain mujhe thanks

 

[Avir]

Waiting

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई