Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Alok]

Raja chouhan bhai hum to bas itna kahna chahte hain ki aap kahani ko aapne hisab se likhe. Aise logo ki baaton mein dhyan na de........

Isliye kishore Da ne bhi kaka tha ki " kuch to log kahenge logon ka kaam hai kehna chodo bekar ki batoon mein bit na jaye raina".....

 

[Sabhi91]

Ok sir story boring ho gyi hai to hum isko end ki taraf le chalte hain. Jyada time kyo lagana . Right sir

Aap apne according likhiye Raja Bhai.....
Yaha sakidon reader hai. Jaruri nhi jo ek ko accha lage wo dusre ko v accha hi lagega. Aap agar reader ko follow karne lagenge to shayed kavi koi story acche se likh nhi payenge. So please aap apne according likhiye or negative comments ko ignore kijiye. Har story pe kuch na kuch negative comments aa hi jate hai.....

Hume aap k dwara likhi gai story hi pasand hai kisi k dwara likhwaya gaya nhi. Or shayed baki reader ko v aapke likhe gaye story hi pasand hai. ....
Waiting for your next update.....

 

[Sky07]

Ok sir story boring ho gyi hai to hum isko end ki taraf le chalte hain. Jyada time kyo lagana . Right sir

Raja chouhan भाई ये कहानी इस forum की सबसे आकर्षक व बेमिसाल कहानियों में से है। बस आप हमे रोमांचित करते रहो और किसी के कहने से कया होता है आपकी और हमारी इस कहानी के readers ही जानते हैं कि आप हमारे लिए कितनी शानदार लिखते हो ।

 

[Sabhi91]

itni saari comments mein sirf yahi ek comment dikhayi di aapko .. hadd hai ...

Firefox Bhai agar Koi v writter sacche dil se story k lye mehnat kar raha hota hai to use negatives comments chubte hi hai..ye baate to aap v jante hi hai. Aise mai negative comments ki traph hi dhyan zayada jata hai writter ka....
Is baat ka reader ko v dhyan rakhna chahiye agar wo khud kuch likh nhi sakte hai to jo likh rahe hai use to demotivate kyu kare.

 

[Raja chouhan]

Friends maine next comment me clear kar diya tha k main band nahi kar raha kahani . Chill karo yar, apan story to apne hisab se hi likhenge. Itni jaldi nahi main gussa karta. Wo to bhai ko aram se jawab diya tha. Agla update padne k bad suggestion dena . Main thoda writing style badal raha hun. Aaj ki leave laga do bhai

 

[Sabhi91]

Friends maine next comment me clear kar diya tha k main band nahi kar raha kahani . Chill karo yar, apan story to apne hisab se hi likhenge. Itni jaldi nahi main gussa karta. Wo to bhai ko aram se jawab diya tha. Agla update padne k bad suggestion dena . Main thoda writing style badal raha hun. Aaj ki leave laga do bhai

Ok Raja Bhai. Hum intezar karenge aapka agle update k sath.....

 

[NawTDoggy]

itni saari comments mein sirf yahi ek comment dikhayi di aapko .. hadd hai ...

Sahi Bol rahe hai firefox420 lomri bhai ji.

Raja chouhan bhai jee aap hum logo ko kaise ignore kar sakte hain jo aapko follow karte hai aur dil se support karte hain. Please be positive and continue your good work on this story.

Aap har kisi comment ko dil par naa lain

Jaroori to nahi ki har kisi ko sabhi kahani passand aye ?

lekin hum jaise jo aapko support karte hai aur maze se story parthe hain aapki kya aapko humaari koi value nahi ?

Sher bano

 

[NawTDoggy]

Friends maine next comment me clear kar diya tha k main band nahi kar raha kahani . Chill karo yar, apan story to apne hisab se hi likhenge. Itni jaldi nahi main gussa karta. Wo to bhai ko aram se jawab diya tha. Agla update padne k bad suggestion dena . Main thoda writing style badal raha hun. Aaj ki leave laga do bhai

GOOD BOY

 

[NawTDoggy]

writers ka yahi panga h positive ka dhayan de ya na de but negative par pura dhayan dete h

Bhai hum sabhi log hi aise hote hain. Lekin jab apno ka support mile to wapus sahi disha bhi pakar lete hain.

 

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Waiting for next update.