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[firefox420]

Abhi amit k emotions nhi dikhay gay end py ghoor karo too kuch b hosakta hy apna hero phir btay bina ghr sy ja b sakta hy oor phir wohi family seen sb prayshan or end mn manju ka guri mami oor baki sab sy samna sabhi option open heen abhi

matlab saari sambhaavnaaye bata-bata kar lekhak ji ke liye yaha kucch bhi likhne ke liye matt chhodna .. ye itni saari bhavishyewaaniya to Enigma bhai ki pyaar - 100 baar mein he theek hai .. yaha to Raja chouhan bhai ko bakas he do .. ek baar muzhe pehle he raja bhai tok chuke hai ki meri kahani simple and straight hai .. isme koi itni paheliya nahi hai ...

 

[Billi420]

matlab saari sambhaavnaaye bata-bata kar lekhak ji ke liye yaha kucch bhi likhne ke liye matt chhodna .. ye itni saari bhavishyewaaniya to Enigma bhai ki pyaar - 100 baar mein he theek hai .. yaha to Raja chouhan bhai ko bakas he do .. ek baar muzhe pehle he raja bhai tok chuke hai ki meri kahani simple and straight hai .. isme koi itni paheliya nahi hai ...

OK boss mn ab sy ungli nhi karta mn karan nhi banu ga

 

[Raja chouhan]

matlab saari sambhaavnaaye bata-bata kar lekhak ji ke liye yaha kucch bhi likhne ke liye matt chhodna .. ye itni saari bhavishyewaaniya to Enigma bhai ki pyaar - 100 baar mein he theek hai .. yaha to Raja chouhan bhai ko bakas he do .. ek baar muzhe pehle he raja bhai tok chuke hai ki meri kahani simple and straight hai .. isme koi itni paheliya nahi hai ...

Are bhai rokne tokne wali to koi bat hi nahi. Jiske man me jo khyal aaye wo zahir kar sakta hai . Sabki Sunni bhi chahiye , han karni to apne man ki hai. Sujhaw sunne se soch ko nai unchaiyan bhi to milti hain. Han main ek bat bat bat kahunga k bhai apan ek sidha sadha sa aadmi hai ek reader . Man me jo khujali thi kuch likhne ki bas usi vajah se likh raha hun. Galtiyan to bahut hongi magar sabke sath chalte chalte kahin na kahin to pahunchenge. Manzilon se safar haseen hote hain basharte hamasafar ache hon . To manzilon ki parwah kyun karen ?

 

[Raja chouhan]

Same to same apna bhi yehi haal tha jab padhna start kiya tha iss story ko

Shukriya bhai bahut bahut shukriya

 

[Raja chouhan]

Raja chouhan bhiya kmaal ka likhty ho ap mn ny 1 week lga k apki story parhi alfaz k jadugr ho ap apki khani ny ic last week mn jany kitni baar rulaya oor muskrany py majboor b kiya apki khani py mera kuch b kehna suraj k aagy diya jeesa hy boht kmal ka likh rhy ungli karny ka pap yh billi yhaa nhi kr saky ga love u and keep writing

Shukriya bhai main bhi ek reader hi tha bas kisi adhurepan humen musafir bana dala , ab un rahon par bhatakte hain jinse kabhi wasta na tha.

 

[A. P]

Sala free ka gyan dena toh humari rago mein hai.. update do bhai update.. free fokat ke pages bada rahe ho.. Raja bhai ab update de bhi do.

 

[Raja chouhan]

Bhaiya kab tak update aayega ...waiting eagerly

Sahi kahun bhaiya to is kod par aakar main 2 din se kai kuch likh kar khud hi kaat chuka hun. Emotions ko yahan se handle karna mujhe khud mushkil lag raha hai . Ab pyar par pyar ki hi chot ho rahi hai to kaun harega kaun jitega. Yahan par at shayad koi jeet hi nahi sakega

 

[A. P]

Raja bhai jara index bhi update kar do... plz

 

[Shashi68]

Sahi kahun bhaiya to is kod par aakar main 2 din se kai kuch likh kar khud hi kaat chuka hun. Emotions ko yahan se handle karna mujhe khud mushkil lag raha hai . Ab pyar par pyar ki hi chot ho rahi hai to kaun harega kaun jitega. Yahan par at shayad koi jeet hi nahi sakega

Bhaiya aap bahut shandar likhte ho ...aap pura time lo par jo bhi hoga acha hi hoga ...maine is forum me kai writer dekhe hain jo ultimate hain jisme ek aap ho....bura na mane par jaroori lage to Enigma bhaiya se sampark kar sakte hain unke pas athah Sagar hai gyan ka aur story telling ka

 

[Yamraaj]

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