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Raja Chauhan, lots of places in India are under curfew/lockdown and a lot of your readers could be under some
sort of quarantine/home isolation so a regular dose of updates with help a lot in cheering up thier mood.
You now have an added responsibility.
 

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Raja Chauhan, lots of places in India are under curfew/lockdown and a lot of your readers could be under some
sort of quarantine/home isolation so a regular dose of updates with help a lot in cheering up thier mood.
You now have an added responsibility.

ha ha ha .. yaar aapne to Raja chouhan bhai ke saamne aisi conditon rakh di hai .. jaise ki inki shaadi aapse hui hai .. aur ab aapko khush rakhne ki jimmedaari inki .. gazab ... :lol:
 

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Mere samne Manju m mere hi Mata pita aur meri bachpan ki tasveer khole baithi thi aur mujhe unke bare me bata rahi thi. Aur meri zuban jaise lakwa hi mar gyi thi. Jis Manju bua ki talash mujhe thi wo itne samay se meri ankhon k samne thi aur main unhe kabhi pehchan hi na paya . Jab bhi main unse milta tha to mujhe hamesha ye ehsas hota tha k mera unke sath sambandh kafi purana hai . Main sochta tha shayad ye pichle janam ka sambandh hoga par ye nahi samajh paya k sambandh isi janam ka tha . Main pathar sa bana bas unhe hi dekhe ja raha tha aur wo tasveeren dikhate hue pata nahi kya kya bata diya rahi thi. Unki ankhon se bat karte karte aansoo beh rahe the aur unhe jaise ehsas hi nahi tha k unke pas main bhi baitha hun. Jabki main unko dekh kar khud ko sambhalne ki koshish kar raha tha . Akhir mujhe aaj wo pehla shakhs mila tha jo mere papa k pariwar se tha . Aur wo bhi unki wo sahi behan jis par wo apni jaan chidakte the . Jise wo apne bachon ki tarah pyar karte the . Jinke liye wo ma baap bhaai sab the . Jiski talash sab ko thi par koi nahi janta tha wo isi shehar me thi magar sab usse anjan the . Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha k main kya kahun unhe. Meri ankhon me ruke aansuon ne apni Seema langh li thi aur ab mere chehre par lakeeren banate hue neeche gir rahe the .

Manju : rote hue ) meri duniya mere bhaiya bhabhi aur mera bittu hi the magar bhagwan ne ek pal me hi mujhse sab cheen liya . Kash main bhi apne bhaiya bhabhi aur apne bittu k sath hi mar jati .

Amit : rote hue ) aap ne kabhi apne bittu ko talashne ki koshish kyun nahi ki buaaaaaa

Mere muh se ‘ bua ‘ sunte hi Manju m ko jhatka laga aur ek dam se wo roti roti chup ho gyi aur mujhe hairani se dekhne lagi .

Manju : kya kaha tumne ?

Amit : rote hue ) aapne apne bittu ko talashne ki koshish kyun nahi ki ‘ buaaaaa ‘

Manju : shocked ) yy ye ye ye tum kya keh rahe ho ? Mera bittu to mar chuka hai . Mujhse aisa mazak .....

Amit : rote hue ) aapka bittu zinda hai bua aur aapke samne baitha hai .

Manju m meri bat sunte hi jhatke se khadi hui aur 2 kadam piche hat gyi . Apne hathon ko apne muh par rakhe wo badi badi ankhon se mujhe dekh rahi thi jaise ye koi anhoni ho rahi ho jis par unhe yakeen nahi ho raha tha .

Manju : ye tum kya bole ja rahe ho ? Tumhe kya ho gya hai ? Mere sath aisa mazak mat karo. Mat karo aisa mere sath

Amit :rote hue ) ye mazak nahi hai bua , main hi aapka bittu hun. Ma papa to mujhe chhod gye par aapne bhi ek bar bhi mujh se milne ki koshish kyun nahi ki ? Kya unke sath mera vajood bhi khatam ho gya tha aapke liye ?

Manju : zor se ) nahiiiiiiiiiiii ,,,,, aisa nahi ho sakta . Kehdo k tum jhooth bol rahe ho. Aisa nahi ho sakta ye sab jhooth hai .

Amit : rote hue ) janti hain na mere birthday par hi ma papa aur nana nani ki accident me maut hui thi . Us din shayad sab mandir ja rahe the mere liye pooja karwane . Magar main us accident me Bach gya tha . Par aapko kaise pata hoga , aapne to kabhi janne ki koshish hi nahi ki k apka bittu zinda bhi hai ya mar gya.

Manju : to kya ,,, to kya tum sach me ??????

Amit : han bua main hi apka bittu hun . Aapke pannu bhaiya aur damini bhabhi ka beta . Jise aapne mara hua man liya tha par badkismati se main zinda bach gya tha .

Mere muh se ye sunte hi Manju bua ne bhag kar mujhe gale se laga liya aur mere sir ko dono hathon me thame mere chehre par lagatar chumne lagi . Sath hi wo roye ja rahi thi aur bolti ja rahi thi .

Manju :rote rote chumte hue ) tu itne din kahan tha ? Kisi ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki tum zinda ho ? Main itne salon tak yahi sochti rahi k tum bhi bhaiya bhabhi k sath .. ye mere sath itna bada dhokha kisne kiya ? Kisne mujhe mere bittu se door kiya ? Mujhe to yahi kaha gya tha k tum bhi bhaiya bhabhi k sath us accident me kare gye . Tum ab tak kahan the ? kahan the ab tak? Tujhe kabhi apni is badnaseeb bua ki yad nahi aayi ? Ek bar bhi tujhe taras nahi aya apni bua par ? Bol kahan tha tu ? Kahan tha ab tak ?

Amit : rote hue ) yahi to main aapse janna chahta hun k aapne kabhi koshish kyun nahi ki mere bare me janne ki ? Mujhe mere mama mami apne sath le gye the par aapne ek bar bhi un logon se mil kar kuch janna theek nahi samjha? Akhir aisi kya bat ho gyi thi jo aapko apne bittu ki zara bhi yad nahi aayi ?

Manju : kaise aati main ? Bade bhaiya ne kaha tha k un logon ne bhaiya bhabhi ki tumhari lash bhi dekhne nahi di. Upar se jhagda bhi kiya . Wo tumhare nana nani aur tumhari ma ki maut ka zimmedar pannu bhaiya ko thehra rahe the . Upar se unhonne dhamki bhi di thi k agar koi kabhi unke ghar aya to wo jan se mar dalenge .

Amit : aap to janti thi na sab ko ? Kya aapko lagta hai wo log aisa kar sakte the ? Aapse jhooth bola gya tha bua . Han main zinda hun ye bat zarur chipayi gyi jiski shayad koi vajah zarur rahi hogi . Par ye bhi sach hai k un sab ko apka intzar tha . Baba ne bataya tha mujhe aapke bare me k aap papa ki laadali thi aur mujhse bhi kitna pyar karti thi. Aur isi liye main aapse milna chahta tha ek bar k aapse pooch sakun , aapne aisa kyun kiya ? Kam se kam ek bar to aap wahan aati magar aap nahi aayi aur na hi kabhi kisi se milne ki koshish ki .

Manju : kaise aati , kaise aati main. Mera dil kai bar kiya tha aane ko . Par har bar mujhe rok liya gya aur aisi aisi baten batayi gyi k mere dil me bhi gussa bhar gya tha un sab k prati. Par wo bhi to bata sakte the na k tum zinda ho. Akhir un logon ne aisa kyun kiya? Kyun tumhe mujhse door rakha . Agar wo nahi chahte the k tum hamare sath raho to mujhe hi bata dete . Main sab kuch chhod kar apne bittu k pas chali aati.

Amit : maine kaha na bua , baba ne ye bat sab se chhupayi thi . Yahan tak k mujhe bhi nahi pta tha k main asal me unka beta nahi hun. Unhone hamesha mujhe apne sage bete ki tarah hi pala. Aur jab se mujhe apne mata pita k bare me pta chala hai main tab se hi tadap raha tha aap se milne k liye . Aur dekho itne dino se aap mere samne thi magar main aapko pehchan nahi paya .

Manju : pehchan to main nahi payi tujhe , tujhe dekhte hi mujhe pannu bhaiya ka chehra nazar ata tha aur tumhari ankhen ,, tumhari ankhen bilkul damini bhabhi jaisi hain. Magar main kabhi ye samajh hi nahi payi k tumhi mere bittu ho. Ab main tujhe apne se door nahi jane dungi . Ab se tu mere sath hi rahega . Ab main akeli nahi hun duniya me . Mere pannu bhaiya ka beta mere sath hai meri damini bhabhi ka beta mere sath hai . Mera bittu mere sath hai .

Itna keh kar Manju bua fir se mujhe chumne lagi . Hum dono lagatar roye ja rahe the . Hamare andar k jazbat aansoo ban kar lagatar beh rahe the aur hum khud ko rok hi nahi pa rahe the . Manju bua kabhi mujhe gale laga leti kabhi chumne lagti kabhi zor zor se rone lagti.

Amit : bas karo bua bas karo ab aur nahi . Bahut ro liya aapne ab main aapko aur rone nahi dunga . Ab aap akeli nahi rahengi , ab se aap hamare sath rahengi . Chaliye hun abhi ghar chalte hain. Ma baba aapko dekh kar bahut khush honge .

Manju : nahi nahi , main unke samne kis muh se jaungi ? Ek bar bhi main unse milne nahi gyi . Balki unhe galat samajhti rahi. Wo to meri shakl bhi dekhna pasand nahi karenge. Main kis muh se unke samne jaun.

Amit : aap galat samajh rahi Hain bua . Wo aise bilkul bhi nahi hain. Balki wo to khud is bat se hairan the k aap kabhi milne kyun nahi aayi. Wo aapko apni chhoti behan jaise hi mante hain. Jab unko sachai ka pata chalega to wo bilkul bhi naraz nahi honge .

Manju : nahi , main nahi jaungi unke pas . Filhal abhi to nahi. Mujh me itni himmat nahi k unka samna kar sakun.

Amit : kya mere liye bhi nahi ?

Manju : tere liye to main apni jaan bhi de sakti hun . Par tujhe meri kasam mujhe majbur mat kar. Taqdeer ne pehle hi mere sath itna bada khilwad kar diya hai. Jise apni goad me khilaya tha usi k sath main ......

Itna keh kar Manju bua mujhse door hat gyi aur chehre dusri taraf kar k rone lagi. Main samajh raha tha k wo hum dono k beech bane sambandhon se ab ahat ho rahi hain . Maine aage barh kar unke kandhe par hath rakha to wo bina meri taraf dekhe fir se boli .

Manju : mujhse bahut badi galati ho gyi , bahut badi galati . Bhaiya bhabhi mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge . Shayad unke kehne se hi bhagwan ne tumhe mere pas bheja tha aur main vasna ki aag me lipti tumhare sath ...... chhiinn ,,, mujhe to bhagwan bhi maaf nahi karega . Apne aap se hi nafrat ho rahi hai mujhe ye soch kar k main apne hi bhateeje k sath wo sab karti rahi.

Amit : vaasnaaaa ??? Kya wo sirf vasna thi? Nahi bua wo vasna nahi prem tha . Aisa prem jisme na koi swarth tha na koi bhookh . Apne dil par hath rakh kar kahiye k aapne mere sath dil ki gehraiyon se pyar nahi kiya ?

Manju : bhagwan k liye chup ho jao Amit . Main pehle hi paap kar chuki hun. Mujhe aur papi mat banao .

Amit : paap ?? Ab aap nishchal prem ko pap kehne lagi ? Abhi kuch der pehle tak hum dono k beech jo pyar tha wo ek sach jan lene se se pap ho gya ? Agar hamare beech ka ye rishta zahir nahi hota to kya tab bhi aap use paap hi kehti ?

Manju : chup ho jao please . Tum achi tarah jante ho k ek bua bhateeje k beech aisa rishta sirf paap hi kehlata hai. Samaj me aise rishton ko sirf tiraskar ki nazron se dekha jata hai. Kisi ko to bad me jawab deta hai insan , par khud ko kya jawab dun main? Kya jawab dun khud ko bolo ? Apne hi sage bhateeje k sath main wo sab karti aayi hun . Chhiinn ,, mujhe khud se hi ghin aa rahi hai . Isse acha hota main mar hi jati .

Amit : anjane me hue paap k liye to bhagwan bhi maaf kar deta hai bua . Aur humne to koi paap bhi nahi kiya . Aap jis samaj ki duhai de rahi hain , tab kahan tha ye samaj jab akeli zindagi me dukhon ka bojh dho rahi thi. Tab to ye samaj aapke dukh door karne nahi aya tha . Hum dono to jante bhi nahi the k hum dono k beech koi rishta aur bhi hai . Maine to aapke dil k dard ko mehsus kiya aur jo main kar sakta tha wo maine kiya . Hamara milna bhagwan ki marzi thi . Waise bhi to duniya me sab kuchh usi ki marzi se hi to hota hai na ? To fir isme aap doshi kaise hui ? Agar aap khud ko dosh de rahi hain to fir aapke sath main bhi barabar ka doshi hua na . Aise to fir mujhe hi mar jana chahiye .....

Meri bat khatam hone se pehel hi bua mere muh se marne ki bat sun kar ek dam se palatu aur mere muh par hath rakh liya .

Manju : rote hue ) khabardar jo marne ki bat bhi ki to . Bhaiya ki tarah kya tu bhi mujhe chhod kar chala jayega , han ? Isse to acha hai mujhe apne hathon se hi mar de. Aisi zindagi se to maut hazar darje achi hai , hazar darje achi hai . Maar de mujhe apne hathon se , maar de mujhe maar de .

Itna sab kehte kehte bua roti hui zameen par baith gyi the kapde nochti nochti. Bua ka rudan aur bhi jyada ho gya tha . Main unke man ki vyatha ko mehsus kar raha tha k unke dil par kya beet rahi thi . Apne hi sage bhateeje k sath apne jismani tallukat ko yad kar k wo khud ko doshi man rahi thi. Unke liye mushkil ho raha tha is bat ko accept karna . Halanki wo sab anjane me hua tha jiske liye na wo doshi thi na main , doshi tha to sirf waqt . Aur ab hum us dorahe par khade the jahan se kis taraf jayen humen samajh nahi aa raha tha . Jahan hum dono k dil khush bhi the apna asli rishta jan kar wahin isse pehle hamare beech ban chuka wo rishta ab hamare asal rishte ki pawitrta par daag sa lag raha tha . Is sachai k samne aane se pehle tak main Manju bua ki duniya tha aur ab wo khud se hi sharminda ho rahi thi sirf meri vajah se. Halanki mere liye ye badi bat nahi thi par kyunki main pehle hi aise rishton me pad chuka tha magar bua k liye ye bahut badi galati ban gya tha.

Amit : mujhe to hosh bhi nahi tha jab mere ma bap akela mujhe chhod gye . Aur itne saalon tak main is sach se hi anjan raha . Jab se mujhe mere mata pita k bare me pata chala main tab se hi khud ko akela samajhne lag gya tha . Aur fir mujhe aapke bare me pata chala . Sab ne yahi kaha k aap papa ki jan thi is liye aap ko ek bar dekhna chahta th , puchna chahta tha k akhir kis liye aapne apne ikalaute bhateeje k bare me janne ki koshish tak nahi ki . Aur ab jab aap mere samne hain to aap aisi baten kar rahi hain. Main janta hun aapne zindagi me bahut dukh dekhe hain. Maine aapke har dard ko mehsus kiya aur hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua usme kisi ki koi galti nahi thi. Fir aap iske liye khud ko kyun dosh de rahi hain? Ye bhagwan ki hi marzi thi jo hum kareeb aaye. Maine aapse wada kiya tha k aapko kabhi dukhi nahi hone dunga aur aaj aap fir se dukhi hain sirf meri vajah se . Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha k main apni bua k milne ki khushi manaun ya fir jo hua uske liye dukh manaun. Par isme na aapka dosh hai na mera . Hum dono ne hi ek dusre ko dil se muhabbat ki hai bua jisme zara si bhi hawas nahi thi. Ye aap achi tarah janti hain. Chahe ye sab anjane me hua par ye pap kabhi nahi tha . Fir bhi agar aap ise pap samajh rahi hain to ,,,, main kabhi aapke samne nahi aaunga. Kyunki mujhe dekh kar aapko bar bar dukh hoga . Aur main nahi chahta k meri vajah se aap kabhi dukhi ho. Main ja raha hun bua, socha tha k hamesha aapke sath rahunga magar zindagi is mod par le aayegi ye nahi janta tha . Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena . Par itna zarur yad rakhna k agar aapne apne sath kuch bhi galat karne ki koshish ki to main bhi khud ko khatam kar lunga main kasam khata hun.

Bua lagatar roye ja rahi thi par meri akhiri bat sun kar wo ek dam shocked si mujhe dekhne lagi . Magar ab mujh me aur himmat nahi thi k main wahan rukun. Manju bua ko is waqt samjhana shayad namumkin tha is liye main wahan se nikal aya . Mujhe laga k kahin wo apne sath kuch galat na kar len is liye maine ye sab keh diya tha . Unki baton se saaf zahir tha k wo kitni jyada dukhi ho rahi hain. Aur jitna jyada wo emotional thi us vajah se mere dil me ek dar sa tha. Jate jate ye sab keh kar maine unhe kuch bhi galat karne se rok to diya tha . Par samasya wahin k wahin thi. Itne salon bad hum dono mile bhi to kis mod par . Ab bua kya faisla legi ye un par tha magar ab main unhe khona nahi chahta tha . Bua k ghar se nikal kar main khud ko sambhalta hua paidal hi chal pada .

Wahin Manju abhi bhi sadme me thi. Jate jate Amit ne jo kaha tha wo sab sun kar uska dil ek anjane dar se bhar gya tha. Magar use kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha . Takdeer ne aaj fir se uske sath bahut bada dhokha kiya tha . Manju ki zindagi bas dukh dard ki kitab ban kar hi reh gyi thi . Bachpan me hi ma bap ka saya chin gya . Uske bad jo uski duniya tha uska bada bhai jo use mata pita bhai behan dost sabka pyar deta tha use bhi takdeer ne chin kar besahara kar diya . Sautele bhaiyo ne use sir par bojh samajh kar halt logon k hawale kar diya jahan use siwaye dukhon k kuch nahin mila . Itne salon bad use Amit k roop me thodi si khushiyan mili thi . Ek ummeed ki kiran uski zindagi me aayi thi. Uski suni zindagi me fir se rang bharne lage the magar ek hi pal me sab fir se khatam ho gya . Jise wo apni zindagi samajh rahi thi jiske sath wo apni umr bitana chahti thi wo uska apna saga bhateeja nikla . Jise goad me khilaya tha usi ki goad me wo khel rahi thi itne dino se. Manju ko jitni khushi apne bhateeje ko zinda dekh kar hui usse kahin jyada dukh use apne aur Amit prem sambandho par ho raha tha . Uska dil chah raha tha k abhi k abhi dharti fatt jaye aur wo usme sama jaye . Ya fir waqt ka pahiya piche ghoom jaye aur jo kuch bhi abhi kuch der me hua wo sab na ho. Magar dono hi nahi ho sakte the . Manju man hi man itna dukhi ho gyi thi k use zindagi k is bhadde roop se jyada maut achi lag rahi thi. Magar jate jate Amit ne khud ko marne ki jo dhamki de di thi usse ab wo mar bhi nahi sakti thi. Manju Amit ko jate hue dekhti rahi wo use rokna chahti thi use gale lagana chahti thi magar aisa karne ki bhi jaise himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Siwaye rone k ab uske pas aur kuch nahi bacha tha . Zameen par baithi wo roye ja rahi thi aur bar bar bhagwan se yahi sawal puch rahi thi k akhir uski kaun si aisi khata thi jiski use itni badi saza mili.

Main Manju bua k bare me sochta sochta chala ja raha tha , mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha k main kya karun . Manju bua k milne ki jo khushi honi chahiye thi ab uski jagah dard aur pachtawe ne le li thi . Jo bhi hua anjane me hua tha par zindagi k aayine me wo aks aise dikhega ye socha bhi nahi tha . Main apne hi khayalon me gum tha k mera phone bajne laga . Ye phone Mohit ka tha jo mujhse puch raha tha k main kahan hun . Maine use bata diya k main bas aa raha hun aur jaldi se uske ghar ki taraf chal diya . Manju bua ki jo halat thi use dekh kar mujhe unka zikar karna theek nahi lag raha tha is liye maine soch liya k jab tak wo khud normal nahi ho jati tab tak main kisi se kuch nahi kahunga . Par unko normal kaise kiya jaye ye bhi ek pechida masla tha . Akhir wo is sachai ko kaise accept kar payengi . Mujhe bar bar unki chinta ho rahi thi. Mera dil bar bar yehi keh raha tha k mujhe unhe chhod kar nahi aana chahiye tha kahin wo apne sath kuch kar na len. Magar sachai ye bhi thi k mere samne hone par wo khud ko aur bhi jyada dosh deti rehti isi liye main chala aya tha . Tabhi mujhe Ritu ka khyal aya ek wo hi to thi Manju bua ki sab kuch unki dost unki behan unki hamraz hamdard . Maine jaldi se phone nikala aur Ritu ko phone kiya . Unhone bhi dusri hi ring par phone utha liya

Rita : to aa gyi huzoor k apni kaneez ki yad. Shukar hai apne beemar ka khayal to aya janab ko.

Amit : aap abhi kahan hain ?

Ritu : chonkte hue ) kya bat hai ? Tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho . Kya hua hai ? Sab theek to hai na ?

Amit : kuch theek nahi hai. Aapko abhi Manju bua k pas jana hoga warna wo kahin khud ko kuch ....

Ritu : kya hua hai Manju ko ? Aur wo khud ko kuch kyun karegi ? ,,,,,, ek minute ,,, tumne abhi abhi kya kaha ? Manju ‘ BUAA ‘ ???

( Ritu ek dam se shocked ho gyi thi bua shabd sun kar . Use apne kano par jaise yakeen nahi ho raha tha )

Amit : han bua ,,, kyunki wo meri bua hain. Main unke sage bhai ka beta hun aur wo meri sahi bua hain. Ye bat mujhe aaj hi pata chali hai. Kismat ne bahut bada mazak kiya hai hamare sath. Manju bua roye ja rahi hain. Kahin wo khud ko kuch kar na le. Please aap abhi unke pas chale jaiye. Unhe bas aap hi sambhal sakti hain.

Ritu : oh my god , oh my god . Oh shit , aisa kaise ho sakta hai. Kya tum sach keh rahe ho? Kahin tumhe koi galat fehmi to nahi hui?

Amit : mujhe koi galat fehmi nahi hui hai . Please aap abhi k abhi bua k pas chale jaiye warna kahin wo khud ko kuch kar na len. Agar aisa hua to main bhi .....

Ritu : stop , isse aage kuch mat kehna , Manju aisa kuch nahi kar sakti , main abhi uske pas jati hun. Aur please tum bhi khud ko sambhalna . Mujhe to ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha jo tumne abhi kaha. Tum apna khyal rakhna main uske pas ja rahi hun.

Ritu se bat kar k mujhe kuch tasalli hui aur main apne man ko samjhata hua Mohit k ghar pahunch gya jahan sab mera hi intzar kar rahe the .

Rama : kahan chale gye the tum ? Hum kab se intzar kar rahe hain .

Amit : wo ek dost se milne gya tha.

Mohit : chal aaj yar sath me khana khate hain .

Amit : nahi yar mera man nahi hai .

Rama : aise kaise man nahi hai . Chupchap baitho yahan .

Aunty ki bat mante hue main baith to gya par mera man bilkul bhi nahi tha kuch khane ka. Maine apne chehre se kuch zahir nahi hone diya k main kin halaton se nikal kar aa raha hun . Magar karishma didi mujhe ghoor kar dekh rahi thi . Meri nazar jab unse mili to khud ko aise ghoorta dekh kar maine nazren chura li.

Amit : nidhi didi nazar nahi aa rahi kahin.

Rama : han beta wo ghar se phone aya tha to wo ghar chali gyi . Bol kar gyi hai k subah jaldi aa jayegi . Lo khana khao .

Man na hote hue bhi main chup chap khana khane laga. Bar bar mere dimag me bas Manju bua ka hi khayal tha is liye mera hath khana khate khate ruk ja raha tha. Mohit aur Aunty mujhse bat kar rahe the par mera bilkul bhi dhyan nahi tha.

Rama : Amit ,,,, amit !! Kya hua tum khana kyun nahi kha rahe ? Kya bat hai ? Tumhara dhyan kahan hai ?

Amit : hh hmmm , kuch nahi wo bas ma ki yad aa rahi thi.

Rama : kyun ? Kya ab hamara sath tumhe acha nahi lag raha ?

Amit : nahi nahi aisi bat nahi hai. Wo bas aise hi . Ma yad kar rahi hogi na .

Rama : koi bat nahi , kal to tum ja hi rahe ho gaon. Ab aram se khana khao.

Maine jaise taise beman se thoda bahut khana khaya aur thakawat ka bahana kar k apne kamre me chala gya . Mohit mujhse bat karna chahta tha par maine mana kar diya aur wo bhi apne kamre me chala gya . Kamre me aate hi main bed par pad gya aur Manju bua k bare me sochne laga. Tabhi mere phone par rima ki call aane lagi . Rima ka nam dekhte hi mere hath call pick karte karte ruk gye . Rima Manju bua ki bhatiji yani k mere chacha ki hi ladki thi jise main dilo-jan se chahta tha aur ab ek hi jhatke me sab khatam ho gya . Takdeer ne kya bhadda mazak kiya tha . Jis jis k sath pyar ki duniya basane ki soch raha tha wo ek pal me hi paraye ho gye. Kahan main apne khoye hue pariwar se milna chahta tha aur ab aisi halat ho gyi thi k sachai batane me bhi sharam aa rahi thi . Maine Rima ka phone bajne diya , wo lagatar phone kiye ja rahi thi aur main bas phone silent par dal kar soch raha tha . Rima meri behan thi rishte me jise main apni patni apni zindagi banana chah raha tha . Aur Rupali meri sahi chachi jiske sath bhi main sharirik sambandh bana chuka tha aur Sheena ,, monty ,,, aur to aur apni taayi k sath Maine kitna brutually sex kiya tha . Ye sab soch soch kar mera sir dard se fat ja raha tha. Un sab k samne ab main kaise jaunga kaise unhe kahunga k main unka apna hun. Main to is kabil bhi nahi reh gya tha k unhe apna sach bataun. Monty ki to maine zindagi hi barbad kar di thi . Ek se ek sawal mere dimag me ghumte ja rahe the aur meri bechaini badti ja rahi thi. Sab se bada sawal to mere pyar ka tha . Rima ,,, ab Rima ko main kis nazar se dekhun? Chahe main apni mausi ki betiyon k sath bhi sex kar chuka tha par Rima k sath main zindagi guzarne k khwab dekh chuka tha . Aur ab sab khatm ho gya tha . Main kabhi khud ko to kabhi apni takdeer ko kaus raha tha k ye mere sath kya ho gya. Sach hi kehte the sab k main hun hi manhoos aur fir se ek bar meri manhusiyat mere samne hi aa gyi thi. Ek bar fir se main sab kuch Kho baitha tha . Meri ankhon me neend bilkul bhi nahi thi aur dil khoon k aansoo ro raha tha . Sab sapne khaak ho gye the , sab arman mitti ho gye the . Mera dil rone ko ho raha tha par ro kar bhi kya hona tha . Mujhe ma ki yad aa rahi thi . Mera phone flash kar raha tha magar ab phone ghar se aa raha tha . Shayad ma hi kar rahi hogi . Meri himmat nahi ho rahi thi k main phone uthaun magar jab bar bar phone bajta raha to mujhe laga k phone utha lena chahiye warna sab tension me aa jayenge .

Amit : hello

‘ hello , kahan ho tum ? Phone kyun nahi utha rahe the ? Kya hua hai ? Tum bolte kyun nahi ? ‘ phone par ma hi thi . Ma ki awaz sunte hi meri ankhon se aansoo behne lage par zuban thi ki jaise lakwa mar gyi ho.

Gauri : tum bolte kyun nahi beta , mera hi ghabra raha hai. Bat kya hai kuch to bol.

‘ mujhe do bhabhi , hello hello ,, hello Amit tum sun rahe ho na? Please kuch to bolo . Mera dil ghabra raha hai . Please kuch to bat kar ‘

Ye awaz divya mausi ki thi jinhonne ma se phone le liya tha aur ab wo mujhse bat kar rahi thi . Magar mere kab nahi khul rahe the . Magar main nahi chahta tha k wo sab tension me aayen is liye maine himmat kar k bat ki .

Amit : hello , Han Han mausi main theek hun . Wo awaz nahi aa rahi thi shayad . Aap kaisi hain aur ma kaisi hai ?

Divya : tu theek to hai na ? Hum yahan sab theek hain. Humen badi bechaini ho rahi hai beta . Sab theek to hai na? Tu ghar kab aa raha hai ?

Amit : main bilkul theek hun mausi aur yahin hun Mohit k ghar . Aap meri chinta mat karo.

Divya : kaise chinta na karun? Mera dil ghabra raha hai jaise kuch hua hai tere sath. Tu jaldi se aja main tujhe dekhna chahti hun.

Gauri : beta jaldi se aja dekh jab tak tujhe dekh nahi lungi mujhe chain nahi aayega .

Amit : ma maine kaha na sab theek hai. Aap aur mausi aise hi chinta kar rahe ho. Main yahin ghar par hi to hun aur kal wapis aa raha hun ghar . Acha ab main rakhta hun . Rat bahut ho gyi hai aap bhi so jao.

Maine ma ko samjha bujha kar phone kat diya aur side me rakh diya . Divya mausi aur ma dono k hi dil shayad mere sath hue is hadse ko mehsus kar rahe the magar kisi ko kya pata tha jo mere sath hua . Rat k 12 baj chuke the magar neend to jaise aaj aane hi nahi wali thi. Main andhere me hi bed par baitha hua tha k mere kamre ka darwaza khula aur koi chupke se kamre me dakhil hua. Darwaza dheere se band kar k wo saya meri taraf barha mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi k ho na ho ye Rama Aunty hi hongi. Aur mera andaza sahi sabit hua jab bed k kareeb aa kar unhone dheemi awaz me mera nam liya .

Rama : Amit ,, Amit ,, so gye kya ?



Udhar Ritu ghar par aram kar rahi thi jab Amit ka phone aya tha aur apni sabse khas saheli Manju k bare me sun kar wo bhi tension me aa gyi aur jaldi se kapde change kar k akeli hi nikal jati hai Manju se milne . Jab wo Manju k ghar pahunchi to darwaza khula hua tha . Ritu bhagte hue ghar k andar ghusi to Manju zameen par hi leti hui thi jaise use kuch ho gya ho.

Ritu : chilla kar ) manjuuuuuuu
 

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Raja Bhai
koi bat nai
Exited for Next Update
Shandar update bro
Excellent update.. bhai..💥
Superb update


Ab Amit ko uska parivaar ke baare mein pata chal jayegaa
शानदार update है Raja chouhan भाई, लगता है कि अब अमित कि जिंदगी की गाठें खुलती जा रही है।
Mind blowing... fabulous.......amazing.... Awesome...
Nice update
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Mast shaandar update
To finaly raaj khul hi gya par itne drame k baad itna casually..... Ab dekhte hn amit aage se sach manju ko btata h ya ab uske dimaag me kuch aur hai....
agle update ka besabri se intzaar
Dhassu, Fadu, mind blowing, Lazavab,
Is Update ke liye words me byan nai kar sakta
Raja Bhai
Ye to Apne bhut bda dhamaka kar diya
Jb Amit ko pta chalega ki mnju m uski bua hai
to kya hoga??? ye janne ke liye me excited hu
Divya vha Gav me bechain hai
Amit ko apni bua mil gyi to vo jrur mnju mam ko gav leke jayga
Ye mera andaz hai,
aur agar Divya or mnju Face-to-Face milege to kya Dhamaka hoga???
akhir apne Suspence me lake patk hi diya
Aage kyaa hoga ye janne ke liye me utsuk hu BHai

Waiting For Next Mega Update
Super update
Nice update
Both hi 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞😊😁😊💝💕💟💕💟💕💟❤ fantastic or both hi 😊😊😁❤❤❤😊❤❤😊❤❤ Both hi bda sespenc
Vajrapat ke baad kuchh sukoon ke pal, lekin unme bhi dhuandhar action, dono ke dono past, itna larenge toh jaan kahan se bachegi.... Bechare ko ritu madam ne nichor liya... ab tum meri jaan ban gaye ho... ek aur sautan, ab jo sach mein iski bewi banne waali hogi.. uspe kya beetegi jab iski itni lambi chauri list samne aayengi.. ab toh haq bhi jamane lagee hain... waise sahi hain ek professor doosri sp dono mil ke pelengi isko tabhi akal thikane aayega.. Jidhar dekho udhar account khole baitha hain..

Bhai aise soye rahoge, toh one sided shaadi waali bewi bechain hee hongi na.. sidha KBC chalu kar diya karishma ne.. bechara jitna chhupata hain utna hi samne aate jata hain, yeh karishma iske saare secrets jaan ke rahegi...

Bhai ab sehar mein toh ruk gaya, ab ghar jaa udhar divya bajane waali hain... lo idhar uski pehle hi baj gayee... bechara jiske saath lover-lover khel raha tha ab wo bua nikli, ab ek tarah se jis tarah wo apni mausio keee baja raha hain toh uss hisab se dikkat na honi chahiye... lekin aise shock lagega ek close family member jiske saath koi aur relation the... ab ek naya relation ban jayega achanak... bechara khus ke saath jhatke bhi lagega jordar....

Waise abhi toh jyada khus hone kee baat hain, uske papa kee taraf se koi toh hain jo jinda hain, waise iss rishte ke khulne se bechare kee girlfriend jiske saath shaadi tak ke sapne dekhe the.. wo behen ban jayegi, ab yeh behen kee le toh shakta hain shaadi thori na kar shakta hain.. kyun amit babu...
Awesome updates
Buhut
Shandar
Jabardast
Mind-blowing
Super
Fantastic
Update
Superb update Raja chouhan bhai...💕💕
:superb: :good: :perfect: awesome update hai raja bhai,
Behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
Aakhir kar manju ki asliyat amit ke saamne aa hi gayi,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai
Super bro
Nice update bro
Awesome update.
Super update bro nice
Bhut behtarin update Bhai 👍👍👍
Raja chouhan bhai aajkal sabhi update ekdum suspense par khatam kar rahe ho, isiliye agle update ka or besabri se intejaar rehta hai, bahut hi lajawab update 😍😍
Wonderful update bro
nice update bro
Jabardast Update :applause:
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting 4 next update...
Damdaar update dost
wonderful update
Nice update...
Bhai aap Kamal Ho malamal Ho dhamal Ho kya update Diya hai maja a Gaya waiting for next update
Nice n fantastic updated
Bhai jaan le lo but agla update de do wait nhi ho raha itne khatarnak jagah pe rok diya update ko
Waiting for your next update bro.....
RAJA Bhai ...
Kar diye Amit ka kaliyan..
Amit jo socha wo such ho Gay..
*(
Akhir meri bua mujhse milne kabhi kyu nahi aayi . Aur papa itna pyar karte the apni behan se to akhir kya vajah rahi hogi jo unhone kabhi mere bare me janne ki koshish tak nahi ki . Aur baba ne to bataaya tha k wo antim bar papa ko dekhne tak nahi aayi. In sab baton ka jawab main janna chahta tha aur jawab sirf meri bua hi de sakti thi .)*

Amit Ko Jabab Mil gaya is update me..
Amit ke paw tale Jamin hi khisik Gaya hoga..

lagta hai Agla update Kafi
emotional hoga
Wah to aakhir raj se parda utha hi diya
Bua bhatije ko mila hi diya😅
Fantastic update Bhai.
Aakhirkar bha bhatije ka Milan ho hi gaya....
Amazing update...
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update eagerly...
Gajab update yaar akhir apni buwa se mil he gaya amit kya baat h bahut acha story solid ja rahi h realy 2no udate bahut ache h
Nice update bhai
Finally samne aya manju mam ka raaj
Nice updates bro
Bahut badiya update bro 👌
solid jhatka!
Ek dum faadu wala update bhai........
Aakhir kar bua bhatije ko milane ka soch hi liya raja bhai aapne. Ab maza aa jayega kyoki sath me amit k father ka pura pariwar bhi milega.
Mazedar update. :perfect:
Akhir bua-bhateeje ke rishte ka khulaasa kar hi diya ! :what2:

Ab Amit is baat ko kaise samajhta hai ?
Aage kafi emotional aur challenging updates ki bhoomika ban gayee hai lagta.
:hukka:
Agle update ka besabri se intezaar ....
🥃🥃💕
Ek dum fadu update Bhai haha sab log Amit ki fikar me hain wahi RITU ke Dil me and aatma me ek Naya hi jagah aa gayi Hai Amit ki pyaar to pehlay se thaa magar ab woh pyaar samman aur samarpan me badal Gaya hain. Aur ab Madam ke sath Amit ka rishta ujagar honey jaa raha jo ki dono ki zindagi per bohat gehra asar chorne wala hain. Jaha ek taraf madam ko khushi hogi ki iske bhai ki Nishani aur uska khoya pariwar usko mil Gaya to wahi usko apne aur Amit ke rishtey ka bhod usay depression me na le jaaye dekhna hoga woh kaisay accept karegi. To doosri aur Amit ki sari duniya hi change हो jaayegi. I mean Har rishta badal jayega. Means jab Pata chalega Apni chachi aur Tai ko buri Tarah chod chuka Hai aur jisko chahta Hai woh bhi uski cousin Hai. Jin Manju mam ko jaan se zada chahta Hai aur Apni biwi ka darja de rakha Hai woh koi aur nahi uski ek loti Bua Hai. Sab ek asmanjas me hinge. Lekin Raja chouhan bhai Apni likhnay ki shaili se isay bhi acchay we paish karege magar I think yah kahani ka sabse important part hoga aur yaha Sai kahani kisi bhi direction me chal sakti hain.
Mazaedar update Bhai hat's off.
zabardast update
मां चोद दी अपडेट की फंटास्टिक अपडेट
Realy is baar fir se next update ka bhaut besabri se intjar rahega family meet up ka jab wo sabko gaanv mai manju ko milwayega etc
Great update ayega
What a pleasant surprise! Jabardast superb update bhai
Raaz Bhai ne sahi kaha
Awesome update. Akhir Manju ki sachai samne aa hi gai waise to pahle bhi bohat se hint diye ja chuke the Manju bua ki taraf. Lekin dekhne ki baat yah hai k ab Amit ka sach jan k Manju kaise react karti hai aur kya kya sach pata chalte hai Amit ko apne baap k bare me aur kya wajah thi jo Manju apne bhai ke marne ke baad kisi se bhi nahi mili.
Nice update. Waiting for next update
Congratulations for complete 1200 pages
Dhamakedaar Update

Amit ke to pairo tale jamin khisak gayi hogi... Sab kuch ek hi pal me khatam ho gaya ..
Sare riste bhikhar jayenge ab to .. Amit ke mann me pehle se hi itne sawal the Apni bua ke liye.. Ab kaisa react karega amit pata nahi.. Sab kuch pehle jaisa rahega ya nahi pata nahi..

Can't wait for the next UPDATE
Eagerly awaiting..
Jaldi UPDATE dena bhai
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
Bhai apne bada besabar bana diya,aisa update deke..ab nind na ayegi agle update padne tak
Agla update aaj hi de do bhai, pet me dard ho rha h itne suspence se....
Lajawsb, zabardast, shaandar aur excellant update Raja Chauhan bhai. Ab RAAZ khulne ka waqt aa gya hy. Manju ka pata lagne ke baad doosron ka to automatically pata chal jay ga. Mind blowing yaar
Ho Gaya bantadhar pata nahin bomb kis par padega Amit per to pad hi Gaya wah to Gaya abhi gaon ki jo real intensity hai uska pata chalna hai ki ki kya rang dikhega ab agar sacchai samne aaegi to kya ab bhi Amit pahle ke jaise Manju se pyar Kar payega yah kuchh Badal jaega pata nahin kya hoga per itna To hai kuchh farak to rishto main aana hi hai Aur wo fark aur badlav kitne aur kis had Tak honge yah dekhna hoga yah bhi dekhne hoga ki aage kya asar padega dekhte hain aap kahani Ko kaun sa mod dete Hain.
Aapka fan
Eagerly waiting 4 nxt update.
Yes
Baki member bhi jise aaj update chahiye wo is post ko reply me yes likhe
Nice update
hi
aapki story padhmeme bahot maja aata hai sex ke sath emotion action se bharpur story hai aapki bahot hi mst likhte hai aap aise hi likha karo ayr update jaldi diya karo best of luck
Superb lajawab Mind blowing update Raja sir kya likhta ho ap kamal kr diya bhai. Plzz ab jatna jaldi ho ska next update de do amit kesy react krte dekhna hai Raja sir plzz. Thank you sir
To akhirkar amit ko pata chal hi gaya ke manju amit ki bua hain waiting bhai new update
Fantastic update 👍👍
तो अमित के चाचा, बुआ और ताऊ की खोज समाप्त हो ही गयी। अब आगे क्या होगा, देखने वाली बात है।
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Ohh to aakhir khul gya raj amit or manju ab kese react krege kya amit sach bol dega ya usk mama ki bat ki koi nhi aaya tha



Waiting
superb update bro iska bahot lambe samay se intazaar tha ab ahla update jald dena bhai
Bhai jbrdst twist aayega lgta h khani me
Awesome update raja bhai.
Ritu ki palang tod chudai ke baad hafte bhar thik se chal na payegi. Karishma didi ko shayad pata he suman ki kese help ki thi Amit ne par Nidhi ke rehte jyada na khica baat ko. Divya aur gauri bhi apni chinta me he.
Last me jo aapne dhamaka kiya he vo kabile tareef tha. Ab dekhte he Amit kese react karega. Bua se pyara bhi to karta he kya rishta aade aayega? Dekhte he.
Waiting for next update 🙏🏻.
Nice and superb update bhai
waiting for next
Congratulations for complete 1700 pages
Bhai great Story
Eagerly waiting for next update, nice story...
Superb update broo..
Awesome..
Jabardast..
Superb raja bhai.....
Shayed ab amit or manju ma'am k beech jo chupa relation tha wo clear ho jayega... dhekte hai is sach k baad dono ka kya reaction hota hai.....
Jabardast romaanchak update eagerly awaiting
Raja chouhan bhiya 😘😘😘 kmaal ka likhty ho ap mn ny 1 week lga k apki story parhi alfaz k jadugr ho ap apki khani ny ic last week mn jany kitni baar rulaya oor muskrany py majboor b kiya apki khani py mera kuch b kehna suraj k aagy diya jeesa hy 😘😘😘 boht kmal ka likh rhy ungli karny ka pap yh billi yhaa nhi kr saky ga love u and keep writing 😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘
WOW CHAUHAN SIR...
Aakhirkar manju mam or Amit ki real identity ujagar ho hi gayi...
Manju mam jiske liye Amit pehle uska masiha bana phir student,bhai,love or akhir me uski zindagi uska husband...
Ab kya hoga jb use ye pata chalega ki jiski gode me vo itne dino se khel rahi h vo khud uski gode me khelne wala uska bittu h😜😜😜
Akhir Raja chouhan bhai ki khani ne Billi420 bhai ko idhar kuch hi liya, acha laga billi bhai idhar dekh kar 😊
Bhai manju aur Amit ke family ki mulakat daily soap ki tarha delay mat karoa plz....
Hshh... Bc.. 3 din continue padhi h ye story. Mai wese to adultery stories padhta nhi hu.. bs AP bhai ki story ko chhodkr.. par Raja Bhau tussi great ho yrr.. bhai ye story ne chipka kr rakha tha khud se.. baaki stories to am bhul hi gya tha..
Ab such samne hai.. emotional scene h. But ab sochne wali baat h ki rima jisse hero pyar krta hai dil se.. wo bhi bahan nikli. chahe soutela chacha tau ki hi bei bhati kyu na ho hai to bahan hi. Kya hoga jb nidhi ka such samne aayega.. Rima ko such pta chalega. Bht se swaal hai bhai.. apki story bookmark saved h...
Ek no. Story hai bhai
Bahot behtareen update shaandaar
Zaberdast lajawab
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