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[tabishqureshi]

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[u.sir.name]

Hame batate huye atyant harsh ho raha hai ki aapki kahani Google Ranking mein Top 5 kahaniyo me shumar huyi hai..
Is adbhut uplabdhi ka shrey jitna kahani ke Writer ki mehnat ka hai utna hi kahani ke Readers ka jinhone apne support se kahani ko is mukam par pahuchaya hai..
Hum XForum Staff pure XForum ki taraf se kahani ke writer aur sare readers ko is sarahniya uplabdhi ke liye tahe dil se badhai dete hai...


The XForum Scoop - JUNE 2021 Edition

 

[Guri006]

Bhai agar is story ko tumne complete kr dia to je story is site ki best story hogi. Iski hi nhi sabse aage hogi . Aur jo pyar 100 bar usse bi aage. Kyuki tum characters define kar rhe ho. Example ke liye( Amit: chup kro) . Jo pyar 100 bar hai na ussme writer hero ki aur se kahani nhi likh rha ,wo apni aur se likh rha hai jaise ,hero ka us se pyar ,hero je kar rha . (But tumhari DIL ko touch kr rhi kyuki tum hero ki jwani likh rhe ho)jab koi writer hero ki jwani likhta hai to alag hi fellings aati hai.

 

["SCAM"]

Bhai agar is story ko tumne complete kr dia to je story is site ki best story hogi. Iski hi nhi sabse aage hogi . Aur jo pyar 100 bar usse bi aage. Kyuki tum characters define kar rhe ho. Example ke liye( Amit: chup kro) . Jo pyar 100 bar hai na ussme writer hero ki aur se kahani nhi likh rha ,wo apni aur se likh rha hai jaise ,hero ka us se pyar ,hero je kar rha . (But tumhari DIL ko touch kr rhi kyuki tum hero ki jwani likh rhe ho)jab koi writer hero ki jwani likhta hai to alag hi fellings aati hai.

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[Avi12]

प्रतीक्षा में राजा भाई

 

[Guri006]

Bhai tumhari story DIL KO Hilaaa rhi hai.

 

[abhishek123409@]

Raja chouhan bhai Waiting for update

 

[Raja chouhan]

Congratulations bhai

Next target Bro No. 1 hain aur hum sab mil ker acchive karege.

Wow.....top 5..... congratulations...

राजा भाई कामयाबी की ढेर सारी सुभकमनाएं.......

Raja Chauhan Bhai For This Achievement......................

Raja Bhai Congratulations for this achievement.

Congratulations!! Raja chouhan

@Raja chouhan bhai...

Many many congratulations

Congratulations

Bhai agar is story ko tumne complete kr dia to je story is site ki best story hogi. Iski hi nhi sabse aage hogi . Aur jo pyar 100 bar usse bi aage. Kyuki tum characters define kar rhe ho. Example ke liye( Amit: chup kro) . Jo pyar 100 bar hai na ussme writer hero ki aur se kahani nhi likh rha ,wo apni aur se likh rha hai jaise ,hero ka us se pyar ,hero je kar rha . (But tumhari DIL ko touch kr rhi kyuki tum hero ki jwani likh rhe ho)jab koi writer hero ki jwani likhta hai to alag hi fellings aati hai.

Bhai tumhari story DIL KO Hilaaa rhi hai.

Thanks bhai logo ye sab aapka pyar hai

 

[Raja chouhan]

Bhai tumhari story DIL KO Hilaaa rhi hai.

Shukriya dost

 

[Raja chouhan]

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Dosto apni kismat hi aaj kal dheeli chal rahi hai . Hath me gambhir chot lag gyi hai aur stitches lage hain. Koshish karunga thoda thoda kar k likh sakun aur update de sakun