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Amit subah ki kasrat karke aur akhade me pasina bahane k baad ghar wapis aa rha tha raste me use raju mil gya poore gaon me raju hi amit ka khas dost tha ya yun kahen eklota

Raju : janmdin bahut bahut mubarak mere yar bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye

Amit : shukriya mere yar. Saale tujhe maalum tha k aaj mera janmdin hai?

Raju : kaisi baat karta hai saale mujhe nhi pta hoga to kise pta hoga wo chhod bta aaj party kahan aur kaise dega

Amit : abe tu jo bolega jaise bolega waise party karenge magar aaj ni kal tujhe to pta hai aaj ghar pe nana nani ki barsi hoti hai to unka shok manate hain sab aise me mera janmdin manana acha ni lagta

Raju : theek hai theek hai wo main janta hun magar kal koi bahana nahi chalega

Amit : Han Han kal party pakka waise bhi abhi to chhuttian hain bol kahan karni hai party

Raju: gaon me to dhang ki koi jagah hai ni main soch rha tha kal cinema dekhne shehar chale udhar hi kha pee k mauj kar k wapis aa jayenge sham tak

Amit : abe saale marwayega kya tujhe pta hai maa mujhe kahin jaane nhi deti aur tu shehar jane ki bat karta hai

Raju: dekh bhai ab tu palti mat mar saal me ek din to ata hai uspe bhi tujh bahane sujhte hain main kuch ni sununga kal shehar chal rhe hain to bas chal rhe hain

Amit : yar tu samjhta ni, maa se kya kahunga kyu jana hai shehar

Raju : wo tu soch mujhe kuch ni pta

Amit: chal koi rasta nikalta hun magar agar maa na mani to fir main kuch ni kar sakta pehle hi bol deta hun

Raju : mujhe kuch ni sunna agar mujhe dil se dost manta hai to tu kal shehar chalega warna main samjhunga meri koi keemat ni teri nazar me

Amit : ek jhapad dunga muh pe kuch bhi bakwas karta hai chal main karta hun kuch

Raju : hihihi... kasam se yar tu jab aise gussa karta hai bda maza ata hai

Amit : dun kya kaan k niche full maza ayega

Raju : abe ni ni pehalwan mujhe abhi apne liye ladki patani hai tu to brahmchari marega magar mujhe to shadi karni hai mera itna khayal rakha kar

Amit : chal chal drama band kar ab der ho rhi hai ghar bhi jana hai maa rasta dekh rhi hogi

Raju : theek hai chal .

Fir dono ghar ki taraf chal padte hain dono k ghar pass me hi hain . Thodi der me amit ghar pahunch jata hai ghar me sab tayar baithe the aur pandit ji ka intzar kar rhe the teeno bhai safed kurte pazame me the aaj k din ghar me pandit ji se hawan karwate hain apne mata pita ki atma ki shanti k liye.
Amit chup chap ghar me ghusta hai aur jaldi se baramde se side me nikal kar sidian chad kar apne room me jata hai tayar hone abhi akhade ki miti aur pasine ki badbu uske jism se aa rhi thi. Jaldi se room me jakar kapde utar kar bathroom me ghus jata hai nahane ke liye . Nahane k baad towel bandh kar room me ata hai to samne bed par white kurta pazama dekh kar samjh jata hai k ye maa ne aj k liye rakhe hai aur jaldi se kapde pehan kar room se bahar nikalata hai sidha maa k room me jata hai

Gauri: aa gya mera laal (kehkar sidha amit ko gale laga leti hai aur apni mamta ki barish uspar karti hui uske mathe ko chumti hai )
Gauri : jug jug Jiyo mere laal hamesha khush rho tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye janmdin mubarak ho

Amit : nhi maa apki umar nhi chahiye mujhe main to sari umar apke pass rehna chahta hun

Gauri: khush rho beta . Aaj itni der kahan laga aya main kab se tera intzar kar rhi thi tujhe to pta hi hai aaj ghar pe hawan pooja bhi hai aur bta aaj tujhe kya chahiye janmdin par

Amit : are maa mujhe sab yad hai wo bas raste me raju mil gya tha bas baron me thoda late ho gya. Aur mujhe kuch ni chahiye janmdin par sab to hai mere pass fir kya mangu

Gauri: beta tu aaj 18 saal ka ho gya hai kuch to tere dil me ata hoga koi to khwahish hogi teri bta kya chahiye tuhhe

Amit : nhi maa mujhe kuch nhi chahiye bas apka pyar chahiye hamesha hamesha

Gauri itna sunkar fir se gale lga leti hai amit ko uski aankhe nam ho jati hain aur dil me sochti hai k bhagwan ne shayad isi liye use maa nhi banaya kyunki amit mere liye hi to bheja hai bhagwan ne

Gauri: chal jaldi kar pandit ji ane wale hain aur ja kar pehle apne baba se baki sab se mil le sabka ashirwad lele

Amit : ji maa main abhi ja rha hun

Fir amit apne baba yani vijay shankar k pas jata hai

Amit : baba paon Laage,ashirwad dijiye mujhe k aap ka nam roshan karun

Vijay: aa gya mera sher jug jug jiyo khoob tarakki karo, tujhe dekhta hun to seena choda ho jata hai mera garv se poore gaon me kya aas pass k kisi bhi gaon me tumhare jaisa honhar sanskari ladka koi nhi

Amit : Baba ye sab aapka aur maa ka ashirwad hai main jo bhi hun sab apki hi tapsya aur ashirwad hai

Vijay: jeete rho beta . Bta aaj kya chahiye mere sher ko janmdin par

Amit : are nhi baba sab to hai mere pas fir kya mangu, mujhe kuch nhi chahiye bas aap mere sar par apna hath rakho aur kuch ni chahiye

Vijay : mujhe pta hai tu yahi kehta rahega magar maine jo socha hai wo main zarur dunga

Amit: Baba aap yunhi soch rhe hain mujhe kuch ni chahiye

Vijay: wo chhod ja jaldi pehle sab se mil le pandit ji bas aa rhe hain fir hawan me baithna hai tujhe hamare sath

Amit : ji Baba main abhi jata hun

Fir amit apne manjhle mama k pas jata hai jo hawan ki vyawastha kar rhe the

Amit: paon laage mama ji

Ajay: are aagya beta jite rho sada khush rho bta kya chahiye tujhe janmdin par

Amit : are mama ji bas apka ashirwad hi kaafi hai aur kuch ni chahiye

Ajay : aise kaise nhi chahiye
Itna kehkar apni jeb se kuch rupay nikal kar amit ki jeb me dal deta hai amit mana karta hai magar ajay zabardasti paise de deta hai . Fir amit apne chhote mama kamlesh k pas jata hai jo k abhi apne room me hi tha

Amit : paon lage mama ji

Kamlesh: aa gya mera sher janmdin mubarak ho bol aaj kya tohfa chahiye tujhe

Amit : are mama ji kya pehle aapne koi kami rakhi hai jo mango kuch

Kamlesh: are ab tu jawan ho gya hai aaj 18 saal ka ho gya hai bta kya chahiye kuch bhi mang le

Amit : are nhi mama ji kitna bhi bda ho jaun rahunga to apka bacha hi

Tabhi kamlesh ki biwi yani ki deepika aa jati hai aur haste hue kehti hai

Chhoti mami: aaj to gaon ki sab ladkiyan mar hi jayengi hamare hero ko dekhkar . Kher nhi kisi ki aaj, main to kehti hun aaj aap Amit ghar se bahar hi na jane dena kya pta kisiki ki ladki ise dekhkar behosh ho gyi aaj to aap ko hi bolenge sab gaon wale k bhanje ko sambhal kar rakho

Chhoti Mami : happy birthday amit many many happy returns of the day aur tu apne mama ki jeb dheeli karwa dil khol kar tujhse kharch nhi honge to main kar lungi hihihihi

Amit : thanks Mami ji magar aap aise hi meri taang khichti rehti ho ladkion ki bat kar k mujhe nhi dekhna kisi ko . Aur paise mere pas pehle hi hain aap sab dete rehte hain magar main kharch karun bhi to kahan aise hi pade rehte hain

Chhoti mami: ( hairani se ) kyaaa.. tu paise kharch nhi karta . Are budhu hum tujhe dete hain kharch karne ko aur tu aise rakhe rehta hai chal bachu ab main batati hun tujhe k kharch kaise karte hain agle hafte tu tujhe shehar lejakar shoping karwati hun

Kamlesh: le jana le jana aur jitna paisa chahiye ho meri jeb se le jana magar abhi baten chhodo pandit ji aa rhe honge chalo jaldi

Fir teeno room se nikal kar baramde me aane lagte hain to amit kamini mami se milne ka bolkar unke room ki taraf nikal jata hai
Room ka darwaza khula tha amit jaise hi room me ghusne lagta hai achanak wo kamini se takra jata hai jisse kamini gir jati hai , kamini k hath me Bartan pakde the jo kamini k upar hi gir jate hain aur uski saadi gandi ho jati hai , kamini is sab se achanak gusse me aa jati hai aur kehti hai

Kamini: andha hai kya dekhkar nhi chal sakta mere kapde kharab kar diye kitni bar kaha hai subah subah apni manhoos shakal mujhe mat dikhaya kar, jab bhi samne ata hai kuch na kuch nuksan ho jata hai. Pta nhi kab pich chhutega mahoos se

Amit ye sunakr dukhi ho jata hai wo to ashirwad lene aya tha aur ye kya ho gya uski apni galti hai kyu itni jaldi me aya kya ho jata dekhkar aram se chalna chahiye tha.

Amit : mami ji galti ho gyi maaf kar dijiye main to aapse ashirwad lene aya tha aaj janmdin hai mera

Kamini: (gussa se )galti ho gyi ... are galti to hamse hui hai k tujhe is ghar me le aye zindagi narak bna di tune meri. Aur kaun sa janmdin kaisa ashirwad apne janmdin par hi apne nana nani ko aur apne maa baap ko kha gya aur mujhse ashirwad mang rha hai manhoos kahin ka

Ye bat sunkar mano amit ka kaleja fat gya jaise uske kaano me kisi ne jalta hua tel daal diya ho uski aankhon se aansoo behne lagte hain muh se ek shabd nhi nikalta uski taange mano uska apna hi wajan uthane me nakamyab ho rhi thi uska dil kiya k abhi use dharti nigal le ye sab baten amit k ilawa kisi aur ne bhi sun li thi jo amit k piche hi aa rha tha wo thi amit ki chhoti mami deepika jo kamini ko lene hi aa rhi thi darasal use pta tha k subah subah kamini ko amit ka chehra dekhna pasand nhi aaj amit ka janmdin hai kahin kamini kuch ulta sidha na keh de aur wohi hua jo wo nhi chahti thi k ho . Deepika bhag kar kamini ko shant karwati hai

Deepika: didi shant ho jaiye please ghar me hawan hai pandit ji aa gye hain kisi ne sun liya to khamkha ghar ka mahol bigad jayega aap please shant ho jaiye. Amit to chal mere sath aur didi aap jaldi aaiye bahar

Deepika janti thi k kamini ki baten sunkar amit k dil par kya bit rahi hogi bechara bina kisi kasoor k kamini se aisi jali kati sunta rehta hai magar abhi filhal ise kisi bhi tarah sambhalna hoga. Amit ko leke apne room me jati hai

Deepika: Amit chup ho ja ab tu chhota bacha nhi poora gabhru jawan ho gya hai . Kya acha lagta hai tere jaise hatte katte pehlwan ki ankhon me aansu chup ho ja

Amit to bas aankhon se ansu bahaye ja rha tha muh se ek Shan’s nhi nikal rha tha uske kano me kamini k shabd goonj rhe the

Deepika: dekh aaj tera janmdin hai aaj k din koi rota hai kya jaldi se chup ho ja apna hulia theek kar didi ne dekh liya to pta nhi kya hoga please chup ho ja

Magar amit to jaise abhi bhi unhi shabdo k jaal me fasa hua tha use chhoti mami ki koi bat sun hi nhi rhi thi fir deepika amit ko pani ka gilas pilati hai

Chhoti mami: Amit please control yourself agar didi ne dekh liya to unke dil pe kya bitegi meri nhi to didi ki parwah karle thodi c . Kya bitegi unke dil par tujhe yun rota dekhkar tujhe didi ki kasam chup ho ja

Itna sunte hi jaise amit neend se jagta hai aur apne aansoo ponchhta hua kehta hai

Amit: nhi mami ji main bilkul nhi rounga Ma ko main dukhi nhi dekh sakta wo to mera sabkuch hain

Chhoti Mami : ( thoda haskar) achaaaa matlab main kuch nhi . Wah bhai wah hum to yunhi samjh rhe the k hum bhi unke apne hain aur wo humen ajnabi kar gye

Itna sunte hi Amit k chehre par ek smile aa jati hai wo janta tha k mami aise hi hansi mazak karti hai sab se. is liye Amit muskura k kehta hai

Amit : aise mat kaho mami ji aap to meri sab se khas hain bilkul meri dost ki tarah maa k bad aap hi to hain jo mera itna khyal rakhti hai

Chhoti mami: bas bas makhan mat lga jaldi huliya theek kar pandit ji aa gye hain jaldi chal warna tere sath mujhe bhi daant padegi chal jaldi

Fir huliya theek kar k amit aur deepika pandit ji k pas aa jate hain jahan sab pehle hi bethe the kamini ko chhod kar

Gauri: are chhoti kamini kahan reh gyi use bula to jaldi pooja shuru honewali hai
Itne me kamini bhi aa jati hai pandit ji hawan karte hain aur chale jate hain uske sath hi amit sir dard ka bahana bna kar apne room me chala jata hai sone
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Itne me kamini bhi aa jati hai pandit ji hawan karte hain aur chale jate hain uske sath hi amit sir dard ka bahana bna kar apne room me chala jata hai sone

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Amit apne kamre me so rha tha teeno bhai apne apne kaam nikal gye uske baad teeno aurten mil kar dopehar ka khana banane lagti hain gauri k man me amit ki tabiyat ko lekar chinta thi isiye wo dekhne jati hai uske room me magar amit so rha tha gauri door se hi use sota dekhkar lot ati hai
Wahin deepika k man me ek hi baat chal rhi thi k
Akhir kya wajah hai jo kamini itni nafrat karti hai Amit . Man hi man usne faisla kar liya tha k wo pta lga k rahegi pehle bhi kai bar usne poocha tha magar kabhi sahi jawab nhi mila koi to bat zarur hai jo kamini itna kosti hai amit ko warna Amit itna pyara hai k koi usse nafrat kar hi nhi sakta itne masoom ladke ko akhir kamini kyu manhoos bol bol kar itni mansik peeda deti hai.
Tabhi uske man me ata hai k amit ko aaj bahut bura lga tha bechara kisi se apne man ki pida keh bhi to nhi sakta kitna dard tha aaj uski aankhon me kahin kisi din koi galat kadam na utha le usiki ki wajah se ghar me thodi bahut ronak hai agar usne kuch galat kar liya to hum sabka kya hoga

Deepik:( khud se) nahin nahin main use aisa nhi karne dungi main use samjhaungi uska koi dost nhi main uski dost banungi uske man ko padna hoga aur use samjhana hoga
Itna sochkar deepika irada kar leti hai k ab se wo amit k sath dost bankar rahegi taki wo apne man se sari baten bahar nikal sake dopehar ka khana bna kar free ho kar deepika pehle kamini k pass jati hai taki sach jan sake magar is bar bhi kamini koi sahi jawab nhi deti fir wo uthkar amit ko dekhne jati hai abhi tak amit dopehar ka Khana khane bhi ni nikla tha kamre se . Jab deepika amit k room me jati hai dekhti hai amit aankhen band kiye so rha hai wo wapis palatne ko hoti hai k uska dhyan amit ki aankho par jata hai uski palken thodi gili thi matlab k wo ro rha tha yaniki wo soya nhi hai sone ka natak kar rha hai . Ek dam se deepika darwaza band kar k Amit k pass bed par baith jati hai aur use awaz deti hai

Deepika : wah ji wah janab lambi taan k soye pade hain birthday ki party dene k bajaye bahana bna kar neend poori ki ja rhi hai , chal chal bahut ho gya drama mujhe pta hai to jag rha hai
Itna kehkar wo amit k balon me hath ferti hai
Magar amit koi response nhi deta use lagta hai agar wo jawab nhi dega to khud hi chhoti mami lot jayegi magar deepika to jaan gyi thi

Deepika: chal uth bhi ja mere sher aur mujhe party de main koi bahana nhi sunungi ye drama didi k aage karna mujhe pta hai tu jaag rha hai
Ye sunkar Amit sochta hai k mami ko kaise pta chla magar fir sochta k aise hi bol rhi hogi

Deepika: uthta hai ya didi ko bulakar laun aur wo khud dekhle k unka ladla janmdin par ro rha hai
Itna sunkar amit ekdam uth jata hai

Amit : nhi nhi mami ji maa ko mat bulana
Deepika: fir ro kyu rha hai tujhe samjhaya tha na maine fir bhi tu bachon k jaise roye ja rha hai agar didi ki itni hi chinta hai to khud ko sambhalta kyu nhi agar unhe pta chala to kya bitegi unpar

Amit : to aap hi batao Mami ji main kya karun aakhir mera kasoor kya hai jiski mujhe itni saza di ja rhi hai kyu kamini mami mujhe manhoos kehti rehti hai kyu mujhe dhutkarti hai kyu wo mera chehra dekhna bhi pasand nhi karti main to hamesha unhe ma k saman hi ijjat di hai fir kis liye mere sath aisa salook ho rha hai mera dil karta hai main mar jaun ya kahin door chala jaun jahan koi mujhe pehchan bhi na sake
Itna kehkar amit foot foot kar rone lagta hai aur deepika aage badkar use gale se laga kar chup karwati hai

Deepika : kabhi socha hai tere jane k bad didi ka kya hoga jiska din shuru nhi Hota tere bagair jisko neend nhi ati jab tak tu na so jaye jo har waqt tere bare me hi sochti rehti hai, kya hoga jinhe tu baba kehta hai jo aaj tujhe dekhkar seena choda kiye firte hain kya hoga tere ajay mama teri chhote mama ka is ghar ki khushion ki zara bhi parwah nhi tujhe . Tu itna selfish kab se ho gya kabhi socha hai k mujh par kya bitegi k main sab jankar bhi chup rhi aur tujhe samjha nhi payi
Are gussa narazgi to har rishte me hota hai magar humein to use door karne ki koshish karni chahiye aise door chale jane se rishte toot jate hain. Wo insan hi kya jo dusron ki galti ko maf na kar sake aur tu to itna samjhdar hai fir bhi aisi baten kar rha hai

Amit: (rote hue) main bhi to insan hun mami ji pathar to nhi jab se hosh sambhala hai kamini mami ne kabhi haskar mujhse ek shabd bhi na bola har waqt bas nafrat bhari nigahon se dekhti hai kab tak main bardasht karun akhir kab wo mujhe has k gale lagayengi kab mujhe apna beta kahengi akhir mera gunah kya hai kam se kam itna to batade fir chahe jan bhi lele mujhe gum na hoga

Deepika: yahi to main bhi janna chahti hun k akhir vajah kya hai . Waise to kamini didi dil ki itni achi hain fir kyun tumhare sath hi itna bura salook karti hain aur jab bhi vajah poochun batati bhi nhi hai. Kaun bata sakta hai akhir vajah kya hai badi didi ko bhi kuch nhi pta akhir aisa kya raaz hai
Anyway wo sab chhod aur tu aaj subah keh rha tha k tere dost nhi aur tu mujhe dost samjhta hai to chal aaj se hum dost ban jate hain, bol karega dosti

Amit: ( muskura kar) kya mami, aap meri taang khichne k liye bol rhi hain , aap kaise dost ban sakti hain aap to meri mami hain main to bas dost ki tarah apse bat karna chahta hun

Deepika :( maze lete hue) acha waise baton k ilawa aur kya karna chahta hai tu dost k sath

Amit: (sharma jata hai) jao main apse bat ni karta aap meri taang khichne aa gyi hain sab chhodkar bhla aur kya karte hain dosto k sath

Deepika: ( haste hue) lo Bhai dost banane chala hai aur itna bhi nhi pta k dost k sath kya karte hain. Are budhu dosto k sath sirf baten hi nhi hoti, hansi mazak bhi hota hai ladai jhagda bhi hota hai, koi ruthta hai koi manata hai, masti karte hain ghumte hain party karte hain aur shoping bhi karwate hain, aur aaj se hum dost hain to sabse pehle tu aaj mujhe janm din ki party dega aur shoping bhi karwayega wo bhi shehar se

Amit sir par hath rakhkar
Amit : hey bhagwan itna kuch mujhe to lagta hai k aap ki dosti bahut mehengi padne wali hai. Na baba na maaf karo

Deepika: ( haste hue ) bas dar gya nikal gyi hawa dost banane hain itna pta hai aur kuch ni ata
Tu tension na le hamara sab kuch tera hi to hai jitne chahiye mujhse lelena paise

Amit : kaisi bat karti ho mami ji main to aise hi bola tha waise bhi jo aap sab mujhe dete rehte hain paise main wo bhi kahan kharch kar pata hun, boliye aap kab chalna hai shoping par

Deepika: (haste hue ) ye hui na bat pehle to huliya theek kar aur chal khana khale fir aage ka plan karte hain . Jaldi aja main khana lagati hun

Itna kehkar deepika chali jati hai aur amit bhi tayar ho kar khana khane niche aa jata hai
Khana dono milkar khate hain tabhi gauri bhi aa jati hai

Gauri: ab tabiyat kaisi hai beta
Aakar amit k mathe par hath laga kar check karti hai

Amit : bilkul theek just halka sa sir dard tha abhi ek dam fresh hun
Itna kehkar muskura deta hai

Gauri: (nakli gussa dikhakar dant te hue) kisne kaha hai itni subah subah jakar akhade me kasrat karne ko, suraj baad me nikalta hai tu pehle nikal jata hai , kapde nikal kar nanga ghumta hai udhar nazar lag gyi hogi isi liye sir dard hua hoga
Deepika ko dekhte hue ja chhoti rasoi se mirchi lekar aa iski nazar utaren pehle pta ni kisne nazar lga di mere bete ko

Deepika: ( haste hue ) are didi mirchi se kya hoga apka beta itna handsome hai k har koi ise nazar hi lagayegi main to kehti hun ek kam aur bhi karo aap

Gauri: ( hairani se dekhkar ) wo kya

Deepika: iske gale me nimbu mirchi dono latka do taki nazar na lage

Gauri: thehar tu zara mere bete ka mazak udati hai abhi batati hun tujhe
Itna kehkar deepika ko pakdne ko hoti hai to deepika uthkar rasoi me bhag jati hai

Amit :are maa tum bhi kya bate karti ho aisa kuch ni hai aao baitho mere pas, batao aaj mera janmdin hai to kya laun apke liye bazar se

Gauri: Amit k balon me hath ghumakar) aaj to tera janmdin hai tu bol kya chahiye tujhe , mera pet to tujhe dekhkar bhar jata hai

Amit kaskar gauri ko gale laga leta hai aur man me sochta hai sach me kitna pyar maa k dil me agar main kahin chala gya to kaise rahegi mere bina
Tabhi deepika mirchi lekar aa jati hai aur usse mirchi lekar gauri amit ki nazar utarti hai . Gauri mirchi lekar rasoi me chali jati hai
Deepika: to bta kya plan hai , karwayega mujhe shoping aaj

Amit : ab to jana mushkil hai ab agar gye to bus me ane jane me rat ho jayegi fir kisi din ka program bnate hain
Deepika : hmm bat to sahi hai agar apni gadi hoti to bat aur thi bas me ana jana bahut time kharab karne wala kam hai
Tu ek kam kyun nhi karta bike chalana sikhle main tere mama ko bolkar tujhe bike dilwa deti hun

Amit : mami ji ab itni si bat k liye kyu bike leni bus hai to sahi shehar jane ko

Deepika: waise agar gaadi chalana sikh lega to kya chala jayega tera kahin kabhi mushkil pad jaye to kaam aa jata hai

Amit : hmm bat to apki bhi sahi hai, main sikh lunga kisi se aap chinta na karo magar abhi bike nhi leni maine abhi is sal padai ka board ka saal hai 12th ka ye pass kar k lunga bike

Deepika: padhai to hoti rahegi main hun na jab kabhi zarurat ho mujhse pooch liya kar magar ab jaldi se bike sikh aur fir bike leni hai thats final aur behas nhi

Amit : hath jodte hue) jo agya maate
Aur dono hasne lagte hain tabhi gauri aa jati hai

Amit : maa main kal shehar jana chahta hun raju k sath
Gauri: kyu kya hua kya kaam aa gya wahan par

Amit: ( hadbda kar) wo wo wo ma wo raju ki mausi ki beti ki tabiyat thoda Kharab hai uska pta lene jana hai
Gauri : beta to isme tumhara kya kaam raju k mata pita chale jayenge

Amit ko koi jawab nhi sujhta to amit deepika ki taraf request bhari nazro se dekhta hai, deepika samjh jati hai k bat kuch aur hai amit bta ni pa rha

Deepika: are didi jane do na hogi koi bat k raju k mata pita na ja pa rhe hon, dono dost hain aur jawan hain hokar aa jayenge , waise bhi dunia dekhne do ise agar pallu se baandh kar rakhogi to dunia ko kaise samjhega

Gauri: rehne du tu jyada tarafdari mat kar, aur kya dunia dekhega shehar me kaise kaise log rehte hain ye kitna bhola hai kisi ne kuch kar diya to, dekha nhi kaise nazren lga dete hain gaon k hi log Ise , shehar wale to kha hi jayenge mere chand se bache ko

Deepika: o ho didi aap na amit ko budhuram bana dogi agar aise hi rha to koi bhi ise bewkoof bna kar lootkar chala jayega, main kehti hun abhi se ise dunia dekhne do 18 sal ka to ho gya hai kya sari umar aise hi rakhogi ise

Gauri thoda naraz hote mante hue akhir han kar hi deti hai magar ek condition k sath k dopehar tak wapis ana hoga aur amit bhi hami bhar deta hai . Maa se ijazat milne k baad Amit ye bat raju ko batane nikal padta hai
Piche se gauri deepika se kehti hai
Gauri: dekh chhoti tere kehne par maine ijazat to dedi hai magar mera dil nhi manta
Deepika: are didi bharosa rakho hamara beta kabhi kuch galat nhi karega aur na hi uske sath kuch galat hoga hamara pyar hai na uski hifazat karne ko aap use thoda dunia ko bhi dekhne ka moka do taki wo sab samjh sake dunia ko dekhkar
Udhar amit raju ko milne ja hi rha tha k raju bahar hi mil gya
Amit : are tu bahar hi rehta hai kya hamesha ya gharwalon ne nikal diya
Raju: Han han tu to mujhe ghar se hi nikalwana chahta hai

Amit: abe chup notanki na kar, acha sun main batane aya tha k maa se manjuri mil gyi hai kal subah shehar jane ki
Raju : ( khushi se uchhalkar) hurray .. ab ayega maza apni to nikal padi kal khoob masti karenge
Amit : abe itna mat uchhal ek condition bhi hai dopehar tak wapis ana hai isliye jaldi nikalna padega
Raju : wo bad me dekhenge tu ruk main abhi aya
Itna keh kar raju bhag jata hai
Raju se milkar amit ghar aa jata hai, hal me koi nhi tha to amit apne room me chala jata hai thodi der me hi deepika wahan aa jati hai
Deepika :kya chal rha hai kidhar ja rha hai kal, date wate hai k teri kisi k sath, bta mujhe main tujhe guide karungi

Amit : (sharma kar) kya mami aap fir taang khichne lagi, aapko pta to hai ladki kya main to kisi ladke se bhi bat ni karta

Deepika: are budhu yahi to umar hai dost bna aur girlfriend bhi bna aur nhi to budha hokar banayega

Amit: mujhe nhi zarurat kisi ki aap hain to sahi mere pass maine aur kisi ko kyun dost bnana hai

Deepika: ( maze lete hue ) acha to kya girlfriend bhi mujhe hi bna lega besharam

Amit : kya maami aap bhi, mujhe nhi chahiye koi gf
Deepika: kyun ! Kyo nhi chahiye zindagi bhar kya akela hi rehna hai

Amit: main kahan akela hun aap sab hain to mere pass

Deepika : chal ye chhod ab bta k kal kahan ja rha hai aur kiske sath aur kya karne

Amit : acha to aap ye pta lagane ayi hain, waise main kal raju k sath shehar ja rha hun use cinema dikhana hai , mere birthday ki party deni hai use

Deepika: hmm to janab akele akele party dete firte hain aur Hume puchte bhi nhi
Amit : are aisi bat nhi apko bhi dunga na kal aate waqt apke liye aur baki sab k liye kuch na kuch leta aaunga . Aap bas hukam kijiye

Deepika : rehne de rehne de dusron ko film dikhata hai aur mujhe samosa khila kar saste me niptana chahta hai aise nhi chalega

Amit: to bataiye fir kya chahiye
Deepika: mujhe bhi movie dekhne jana hai magar abhi tu raju k sath fir kisi din chale jayenge
Amit : theek hai Mami ji jo hukam
Iske baad aur idhar udhar ki baten karne k bad deepika apne room me chali jati hai
Wahin dusri aur raju amit se milkar bhagta hua mandir k pas jata hai kisi se milne aur kehta hai kal wo mere sath subah 7 baje ki bus me chalega tum time se sahi jagah pahunch jana , aur han! Mera kam bhi ho jana chahiye tumhara to maine kar diya ab agar mera kam na bna to bhul jao sab itna kehkar raju wahan se nikal jata hai aur wo dusra shaks khush ho kar kal ka plan banane lagta hai k aisa moka fir nhi milega kal kaise bhi kar k apna kam karna hoga
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Wahin dusri aur raju amit se milkar bhagta hua mandir k pas jata hai kisi se milne aur kehta hai kal wo mere sath subah 7 baje ki bus me chalega tum time se sahi jagah pahunch jana , aur han! Mera kam bhi ho jana chahiye tumhara to maine kar diya ab agar mera kam na bna to bhul jao sab itna kehkar raju wahan se nikal jata hai aur wo dusra shaks khush ho kar kal ka plan banane lagta hai k aisa moka fir nhi milega kal kaise bhi kar k apna kam karna hoga

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Subah Amit uth kar apni routine se akhade me jata hai magar aaj waqt se pehle laut ata hai kyunki aaj raju k sath shehar jana tha ghar aa kar jaldi se tayar hota hai gauri ko bhi malum tha jaldi jayega to uske liye nashta pehle hi se bana deti hai nashta kar k amit ghar se nikalne ko tyar hota hai k gauri use apne kamre me bulati hai

Gauri: amit ye le kuch paise rakhle khali hath jayega kya shehar
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai

Amit : maa iski koi zarurat nhi hai mere pas to pehle hi itne paise hain main bhala kya karunga itne paison ka

Gauri: bas chup kar jo bol rhi hun wo sun wahan jakar kahin awaragardi mat karna kisi anjan admi se jyada bat ni karna na kisi kuch lekar khana aur han agar waqt ho to apni mausi k yahan bhi chakkar lga Ana

Amit: theek hai ma jo hukam magar mausi k yahan ni ja paunga agar wahan gya to raat ho jayegi ate ate

Gauri : acha acha rehne dena magar time se wapis aa jana

Amit: theek hai maa ab chalta hun
Itna kehkar amit room se nikalta hai tabhi chhoti maami mil jati hai

Deepika: amit bat sun, ye le kuch paise rakhle aur ache se party dena apne dosto ko koi kanjoosi ni
Itna kehkar wo amit ki jeb me paise dal deti hai

Amit : are ye kya mami pehle hi maa ne itne paise de diye hain aur mere pas apne bhi to hain

Deepika: bas bas pta hai mujhe, paisa jitna ho acha hai. Aur han time se laut ana ye na ho didi tere piche shehar hi na pahunch jaye
Fir amit ghar se nikal kar raju ki taraf jane lgta hai to raju samne se ata hua dikhta hai aur dono dost bus stop ki taraf nikal padte hain

Bus stop par koi khas bheed nhi thi is time me bas me normal hi bheed hoti thi dono dost bus pakad lete hain aur apni seat par baith jate hain Amit ki nazar manjri par padti hai jo aaj khoob tayar ho kar laal salwar suit me apni saheli k sath baithi thi ek pal to amit ki nazar uspar ruk gyi aaj wo bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi. Amit janta tha k manjri use pasand karti hai magar amit k dil me aisa kuch ni tha, udhar manjari bhi amit ko dekh rhi thi jab dono ki nazar milti hai to dono muskura dete hain

Amit : Abe sale manjari itni subah kahan ja rhi hai tayar ho kar

Raju : dekh bhai bura mat manna jo bhi bolna ho bad me bol lena darasal main manjari ki saheli renu ko pasand karta hun aur usse shadi karna chahta hun, bade hath pair jodkar maine manjari ko manaya hai k tu apne janmdin ki party de rha hai aur tune manjari ko bhi bulaya hai aur renu ko sath lane ko kaha, tu to janta hai uska baap sala use ghar se kahin bahar nikalne ni deta to kisi tarah manjari ki help se aaj main apne dil ki bat karne wala hun renu se, ab apne yar ki khushi k liye tu itna bhi ni kar sakta
( Darasal kal raju bhagkar manjari k pass hi gaya tha usne manjari ki help ka sauda kiya tha Amit k sath uski setting karwane me badle me manjari raju ki setting renu se karwayegi)

Amit: chup sale band kar apna emotional drama tu apne chakkar me mujhe kyu fasa rha hai tujhe pata hai na main ladkiyon se door rehta hun aur tu mera nam lekar manjari ko bula liya, kya tere ko ni pta wo kaise mujhe dekhti hai ab to wo samjhegi k Maine use bulaya matlab main use pasand karta hun

Raju: dekh bhai agar wo tujhe pasand karti hai to tu bhi use pasand kar le na waise bhi usse khoobsurat ladki poore gaon me nhi, kab tak brahmachari bna firega yahi to din hai jawani k , main to bolta hun tu bhi use aaj lapak le wo to kab se tayar baithi hai ek tu hai aise hi bhaaw khaye ja rha hai

Amit : bakwas band kar tujhe pta hai na main in sab baton me nhi padne wala

Raju: yar dekhle meri zindagi ka sawal hai main renu se shadi karna chahta hun ab agar tu meri madad ni karega to aur kaun karega
Waise bhi manjari kaun sa tujhe kha jayegi baten hi to karni hai mujhe thoda waqt mil jayega renu se bat karne ka

Amit: acha theek hai magar gaon me agar kisi ko pta chal gya to socha hai kitni badnami hogi mere gharwale mujhe ghar se nikal denge

Raju: are gaon me kisi ko kuch pta ni chalega wo alag ja rhi hain hum alag hum sidha cinema me hi milenge

Amit : chal theek hai yari k nam par ye bhi manzoor hai magar agar koi lafda hua to apna soch lena

Raju: (haskar) tere liye jan hazir hai mere yar
Yun hi baten karte hue ek ghante me bas rukti chalti shehar pahunch jati hai fir dono dost aur dono sahelian alag alag auto se cinema pahunch jati hain amit ticket lene k liye line me lagta hai to dekhta hai manjari bhi ticket ki line me thi amit raju ko ishara kar k manjari ko ticket lene se rokne ko kehta hai fir amit tickets le kar raju k sath manjari ki taraf jata hai

Manjari: ( manjari aaj gulab ki tarah khili khili lag rhi thi lal suit me wo aaj pakka irada kar k ayi the k aaj amit se dil ka haal bayan kar k hi rahegi , amit ko gulab ka phool dete hue)
Janmdin mubarak ho bhagwan kare aap hamesha yunhi haste khelte rhen aapko wo har khushi mile jo aap chahte hain

Amit : ( thoda narvous ho jata hai k kya kahe kya kare) shukriya manjari iski kya zarurat thi tum itna risk lekar kyun ayi shehar agar kisi ko pta chala to kitni badnami hogi

Manjari : to kya hua apka janmdin tha to kaise na ati apke liye sab kabool hai

Amit hairani se manjari ko dekhne lagta hai , tabhi raju bich me bolta hai

Raju : chalo yar jaldi karo nhi to picture nikal jayegi

Fir charon ander hall me jate hain subah ka show tha isliye jyada rush ni tha charon ki seat sath me hi thi pehle Amit baith jata hai uske sath manjari baith jati hai fir renu fir raju, amit raju ki taraf dekhta hai to raju ankhon se request karta hai ishare se, Amit bhi chup kar k baith jata hai. Manjari k dil me aaj khushion ki shehnaiyan baj rahi thi jane kab se wo amit k sath waqt bitana chahti thi taki wo apna haal -e-dil bayan kar sake pta ni kab se wo amit ko apna sab kuch man chuki thi aur ek amit tha k use ignore karta rehta tha
Thodi der me lights bujh jati hain aur movie shuru ho jati hai ye ek romantic love story ki hindi movie thi aur aap to jante hain k Bollywood ki filmo me kiss karna to aam bat hai aise hi film me jab kissing scene ata hai hero heroine k labon par apne lab rakhta hai to Amit k dil me halchal hone lagti hai akhir tha to wo bhi gabhru jawan wahin manjari k dil me bhi toofan uthne lagte hain uski ankhon me lal dore aane lagte hain aur wo achanak amit ka hath kas k pakad leti hai
Amit manjari ko dekhta hai dono ki nigahen milti hain dono me se koi nhi bolta magar dono k hi dil machal rhe the amit apna chehra sidha kar leta hai aur khud ko control karne lagta hai aise hi thode bahut garma garm scene film me ate hain aur interval ho jata hai amit sabke khane k liye snacks lata hai thodi der me movie fir start ho jati hai . Thodi der k bad film me ek bedroom scene ata hai jise dekhte dekhte Amit ka private part akadne lagta hai aur manjari ka bhi bura haal tha wo bhi kamvasna me jalne lagi thi Amit bas ankhen band kar k khud ko sambhalta hai manjari ka hath abhi bhi amit k hath par tha
Aise hi waqt bit jata hai movie khatam ho jati hai charon bahar ate hain amit bhagwan ka shukriya ada karta hai k film khatam hui

Raju : kyu kaisi lagi picture tujhe
Amit: ( gusse se dekhkar) bakwas
Raju : mujhe to bahut maza aya itna bolkar wo renu ko dekhta hai aur renu sharma jati hai

Amit samjh jata hai k raju ne kuch to kiya hai magar chup rehta hai wahin manjari chup thi aur amit ko dekh rhi thi

Amit : ab chalen ghar
Raju: abe party to abhi rehti hai na chal kuch kha pikar ate hain
Amit gusse se raju ko dekhta hai magar raju fir request karta hai ishare se

Amit : bta fir kahan chalen kya khana hai
Raju: manjari renu tum bhi to batao kya karna hai kahan chalna hai

Manjari : shehar k bare me humen kya maloom aap hi dekhlo
Fir charon ek auto karte hain use batate hain k kisi ache se restaurant me chod de
Fir charon restaurant me ja kar thoda bahut kha kar wapis chalne ka irada karte hain
Manjari dil me soch rhi thi k kaise bat kahe apne dil ki magar Amit tha k use dekh hi nhi rha tha tabhi manjari raju aur renu ko ishara karti hai to renu bathroom jane ka bolkar uth jati hai aur raju bhi uth jata hai unke jate hi manjari apni kamij se hath dalkar ek kagaz nikal kar amit ko deti hai aur kehti hai k ek bar parh lena please itna mujh par ehsan kar dena
Amit awak sa use dekhta rehta hai magar manjari k masum chehre ko dekhte hue uski ankho me ilteza ki nazar dekhkar wo kagaz pakadkar jeb me rakh leta hai. Manjari ko thodi tasalli hoti hai k amit ne kagaz pakad liya matlab uska chance hai kya pta uska prem patr padkar Amit ko uspe taras aa hi jaye
Is patr me manjari ne apne dil ka sara haal bayan kar diya tha kitne hafton se likh likh kar kagaz faad faad kar finally ek prem patr likha tha, itne jyada jazbat usne likh diye the shabdo me k koi pathar bhi ho to pighal jaye magar Amit pighlega k nhi ye pta ni
Thodi der me renu aur raju aa jate hain aur bill amit pay krta hai fir sab nikal padte hain bus stop ki taraf . Yahan se bus stop door nhi tha isliye pedal hi nikal liye

Abhi raste me ja hi rhe the ek gali se se ek aurat k cheekhne ki awaz ati hai

Aurat: bachao nachos koi meri madad karo aaahhhh
Bachao bachaooooo
Amit awaz sunkar awaz ki disha me bhagta hai gali sunsan thi aur aage se band thi is taraf koi ghar dukan kuch bhi nhi tha shayad kisi hotel ki backside thi,
Amit teji se bhagta hua jata hai to ek andhere kone me use teen gunde dikhte hain jo ek aurat pakde hue the unke hathon me chaku the wo koi lutere lag rhe the jo aurat se chaku ki nok par gehne utarwa rhe the
Amit teji se bhagte hu raste me padi hui ek eent utha kar marta hai jo sidha ek gunde k sir me lagti hai aur khoon ki dhar uske sir se foot padti hai
Dusra gunda chaku lekar Amit ko marne ko hota hai k Amit uska baju hawa me hi pakad leta hai aur baju marod kar us gunde ko dusre hath ka istemal kar k hawa me utha k patak deta hai
Tabhi teesra gunda teji se chaku lekar hamla karta hai aur ek war uska amit k baju par lag jata hai magar amit to pehalwan tha wo iski parwah kiye bagair teesre gunde ko bhi pakad kar jor se diwar me uska sir mar deta hai aur wo bhi dher ho jata hai
Teeno ko nipta kar amit aurat ki taraf mudta hai wo dekhta hai k samne ek husan ki dewi khadi hai bilkul dudhia rang chamkta chehra sharbati aankhen us aurat ko dekhkar to Amit ko hemamalini yad aa gyi dream girl kya zabardast figure tha saadi me to aur bhi haseen lag rhi thi baal sir par bandhe hue the umar ka andaza lagana mushkil shayad 30 k asspass ki hogi
Amit ek tak use dekh rha tha

Aurat : ( man me iska chehra mujhe apna sa kyun lag rha hai akhir kaun hai ye aise lag rha hai ye mera apna hai) shukriya bete tumne meri jan bachayi main bahut ehsan mand hun , kya nam hai tumhara?

Amit : ( hosh me ata hua) ji ji wo Amit Mam hai mera
Aur please aap shukriya mat kahiye ek taraf mujhe beta bol rhi hain aur fir shukriya kehkar mujh par pap charha rhi hain

Aurat : tum wakai ek ache aur sanskari ghar se ho yakeenan tumhari maa koi devi hogi jisne tumhare jaisa beta paida kiya

Amit : are aap aise hi meri badai karne lagi maine to bas apna farz ada kiya hai

Aurat: nhi Amit aaj kal k zamane me kon kisi ki madad karta hai aur tumne to apni jaan ki baazi lga di agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
Tabhi us aurat ki nazar Amit ki bazu par lage zakham par padti hai wo jaldi se apni saadi ka pallu faad kar amit k baaju pe baandh deti hai
Ye sab hote hue raju bhi wahan pahunch chuka tha aur sab dekh rha tha use bhi amit k zakham ko dekhkar tension ho jati hai

Raju : are ye kya itni chot lag gyi tujh
Amit: kuch nhi yar bas kharonch hai halki c tu tension na le

Raju : chal doctor k pas chalte hain
Amit : are zara c to chot hai itni to lagti hi rehti hai
Aurat: tumhara dost sahi keh rha hai chalo doctor k pass patti karwalo
Amit : are apne patti to kardi hai ab aapke pyar aur sneh se badkar koi dawa thodi ho sakti hai
Waise bhi hum late ho rhe hain humen gaon wapis jana hai agar late ho gye to gharwale pareshan honge

Aurat: are aise kaise chale jaoge tumne meri itni madad ki hai mujhe kuch to moka do sewa ka

Amit : are nhi madam please humen sachmuch deri ho rhi hai fir kabhi mulakat hui to zarur aapke hath ki chai piyunga

Aurat:( haste hue ) theek hai yad rakhna waise mera nam madam nhi manju hai

Amit : ( muskura kar ) theek hai manju ji ab chal te hain ijazat dijiye

Fir amit aur raju chal padte hain gali se bahar nikalte hain to samne manjari aur renu ghabrayi hui c khadi thi jab se amit bhagkar gya tha manjari ka dil dar k mare baitha ja rha tha upar se raju dono ko piche aane se mana kar k gya tha

Manjari jab amit ko dekhti hai aur uski baju par patti dekhti hai jisme khoon laga hua tha wo bhagkar Amit k sine se chipak jati hai aur rone lagti hai, Amit k dil ko ek mitha sa ehsas hota hai magar agle hi pal wo manjari ko khud se alag kar k chup karwata hai

Amit : are manjari tum kyun bachon ki tarah ro rhi ho bas zara c kharonch hai kuch ni hua please chup ho jao

Manjari : ( rote hue ansun ponchti hui ) kya zarurat thi aise musibat me fasne ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota

Amit k dil me ye bat bahut asar karti hai k ‘ mera kya hota “
Ek pal ko soch me pad jata hai k manjari kitne hak se itni bat keh gyi jo sidha Amit k dil par asar kar gyi
Fir Amit use chup karwata hai aur bus stop ki taraf chal padte hain charo
Bus stop par thodi hi der me bas aa jati hai bus ki seats full thi isliye charon khade ho jate hain sabse aage raju fir renu fir manjari fir amit
Bus chal padti hai next stop par aur log charh jate hain bus me aur bheed ho jati hai Amit na chahte hue bhi manjari se chipak jata hai
Bus k bar bar break marne se Amit bar bar manjari se takra rha tha jisse k Amit k nichle hisse me movement shuru ho gyi thi
Manjari ki gaand k sath takra kar Amit ka baburao sir uthane laga Amit ko sharmindagi hone lagti hai k ye uske sath kya ho rha hai manjari kya sochegi mere bare me
Wahin manjari ko bhi Amit ka land apne chootadon par mehsoos hone lagta hai
Ek mitha sa ehsas use hota hai uski munia bhi pania jati hai aur manjari khud par control khone lagti hai ab manjari bhi apne chootad janbujhkar Amit k land par dabane lagti hai aur maza lene lagti hai ye uski zindagi nya ehsas tha jo use bada maza de rha tha
Wahin Amit khud ko control karne ki poori koshish kar rha tha uska chehra lal tamatar ban gya tha aur pasine se bheeg gya tha
Amit piche hatne ki bahut koshish karta hai magar bheed ki vajah se piche nhi hat pata
Gaand k ehsas ne babu rao ki neend tod di thi aur ab wo us gaand se takkar mar rha badla lene k liye. Amit ka land poore joban par aa gya tha jo lohe ki rod ki tarah manjari k andar ghus jana chahta tha
Manjari land ki motai aur lambai apne chootadon me feel kar k poori paniya gyi thi aur apni gaand ko dabaye ja rhi thi land par use samjh ni aa rha tha wo kya kare ye uski zindagi pehla ehsas tha apne chootado par kisi mard k land ka

Amit khud ko rok nhi pa rha tha abhi tak ki zindagi me use ye ehsas kabhi nhi mila tha, hota bhi kaise pehalwani me to yehi sikhaya jata hai aurton se jitna door rho utna acha hai magar aaj amit ka khud par kaboo nhi tha ab use bhi ye ehsas maza dene lga aur thodi der me wo bhi jor lagakar land ko manjari ki gaand me ghusane lga
Manjari jyada der khud ko rok nhi payi aur wahin khade khade jhad gyi ab usse khada nhi hua ja rha pasine se chehra bheeg gya tha tabhi bus rukti hai aur do seat khali ho jati hain Amit renu aur manjari ko wahan bitha deta hai aur apni shirt bahar nikalkar apne akde hue land ko chhupa deta hai
Aise hi ek ghante ka safar khatam ho jata hai aur charon gaon pahunch jate hain
Manjari amit se nazren nhi mila pati aur chupchap renu k sath nikal jati hai Amit bhi bus me hui ghatna se sharminda tha isliye jaldi jaldi wo bhi nikal jata hai raju k sath
Raste me amit raju ko kehta hai jaldi chal aaj to daant padegi 5 baj gye maa gussa karegi
Tab dono apne apne ghar pahunch jate hain

Gauri ghar me pareshan idhar se udhar ghoom rhi thi aur soch rhi thi k use Amit ko jane hi nhi dena chahiye tha agar amit ko kuch ho gya to
Wo kai bar deepika se bhi gusse me keh chuki thi sab teri vajah se hua hai abhi tak ni aya agar use kuch ho gya to main dekh tera kya hal karti hun
Itne me darwaza khulta hai
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Gauri ghar me pareshan idhar se udhar ghoom rhi thi aur soch rhi thi k use Amit ko jane hi nhi dena chahiye tha agar amit ko kuch ho gya to
Wo kai bar deepika se bhi gusse me keh chuki thi sab teri vajah se hua hai abhi tak ni aya agar use kuch ho gya to main dekh tera kya hal karti hun
Itne me darwaza khulta hai

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Amit jaise hi ghar me ghusta hai samne gauri khadi thi jo dodkar amit ko gale laga leti hai aur pyar se use gussa dikhakar dantne lagti hai

Gauri : kahan reh gya tha itni der se kahan tha ? Tujhe kaha tha na k dopehar tak laut ana tujhe meri koi parwah hai k ni? Bol kahan reh gya tha ?

Gauri ko aise hal me dekhkar amit bhi uski mamta ko dekhkar uske chehre ko hi dekhe ja rha tha muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rhe the
Wo sochne lga abhi thoda der se hi aya to yeh hal hai agar main kahin door chala jaun to kahin maa judai me hi mar jayegi
Kitni karuna kitni mamta thi gauri ki ankhon me
Tabhi piche khadi deepika ki nazar Amit k bazu par bandhi patti par jati hai jo khoon se thodi lal ho rakhi thi
Deepika man me sochti hai k agar didi ne dekh liya to sab ki shamat aa jayegi sab se jyada to usiko ki watt lagegi aur fir gauri dobara kabhi Amit ko shehar jane bhi ni degi.
Isliye wo jaldi se aage badti hai aur gauri se kehti hai

Deepika : kya didi darwaze par hi class lga dogi ab subah se ghar se gaya hai itna safar kar k aya hai thak gya hoga pta ni kuch khaya bhi hai ya nhi. Apne lal ko pehle kuch khila pila do fir karti rehna baten

Itna kehkar deepika amit k us baju ko cover kar leti hai jahan chot lagi thi aur amit ko kamre me lejane lagti hai
Gauri bhi mamta me doobi jaldi se rasoi me jati hai Amit k liye kuch khane ko lane abhi tak uski nazar Amit ki chot par nhi gyi thi

Deepika :( jaldi se Amit ko room me lejakar kehti hai ) tumhari class to main baad me loongi ja pehle apni shirt change kar agar ye jakham didi ne dekh liya didi sara ghar sir pe uthalegi

Amit ko bhi yad ata hai wo kaise bhool gya kam se kam patti utar deta fir amit teji se apne kamre ki aur bhagta hai aur ja kar shirt change kar k wapis chhoti mami k pass akar baith jata hai
Itne me gauri garma garam doodh aur khane k liye pinnian le ati hai

Amit : are maa mera pet bhra hua hai zarurat nhi kisi ki

Gauri : chup chap doodh pi aur ye pinnian kha
Pta hai mujhe bhookh hai k ni

Amit chup chap doodh ka gilas pakad kar pine lagta hai aur pinnian khata hai

Gauri: ye mat sochna k main naraz nhi hun
Tujhe itni asani se ni chhodungi tu jo masti marta firta hai bahar mujhe sab pta hai

Tabhi gauri ka dhyan Amit ki shirt par jata hai

Gauri: abhi to tune doosri shirt pehni thi ye kab badal li

Gauri ki bat sunkar amit hadbada jata hai magar deepika beech me bol padti hai

Deepika : wo kya hai na didi wo mere hath se tale ki botal Amit k upar gir gyi thi ate hi to isliye maine kaha k ja pehle shirt change karle

Itna sunkar Amit chain ki Saans leta hai aur nazron se chhoti mami ko thanks kehta hai bat sambhalne k liye

Gauri : ab bta pehle k itna waqt kahan lag gya tujhe?

Amit : wo wo.. maa .. wo kya hai na k tumhe pta hai na k bus do ghante baad chalti hai shehar se gaon k liye, wo dopehar wali bus 2 minute pehle nikal gayi thi isliye wo chhoot gyi aur hum 2 ghante bus stop par next bus k intzar me baithe rhe bas aise der ho gyi

Gauri : to dhyan rakhna chahiye tha na time ka ab aage se aisi galti dobara nhi honi chahiye

Amit : maa main aage se dhyan rakhunga

Deepika : didi main kya kehti hun k hum Amit ko ek bike le den taki bus ka jhanjhat hi khatam ho
Waise bhi agar kahin kabhi zaruri jana pad jaye to Amit humen le ja sakega aur koi kam bhi ho to dekh lega ab to bada ho gya hai

Gauri: fir to maharaj ghar par baithenge hi nhi aise hi ghumte rahenge

Deepika: kya didi tum bhi ! Kya tumhe bharosa nhi apne bete par

Amit : nhi chhoti mami mujhe zarurat nhi hai ,
Waise bhi mama k pass bike to hai na

Deepika : tu chup reh , tere mama k pass to waqt hi nhi hota hamare liye
Kam se kam tu hi hamare chhote chhote kam kar diya karega

Amit: to aapko ye bike apne liye chahiye na ki mere liye

Deepika badi badi ankhen nikalti hai Amit ko dekhkar

Deepika : ha aisa hi samjh le kya tu kya hamara kam ni karega bol

Amit : are aisa bhala ho skta hai kabhi aap sab to mere liye sab se pehle hain

Gauri: mera bacha ( amit ko gale lagate hue ) tu to is ghar ki jan hai sab kuch tera hi to hai

Aise hi thodi bahut baton k bad sham ka khana banane ka waqt ho jata hai aur teeno milkar khana bnati hain
Teeno mama bhi laut ate hain aur rat ka khana khane k bad sab apne apne kamron me chale jate hain
Rat ko kamlesh dost zaruri kam ka bahana bna kar apne dost milne nikal jata hai to deepika sochti hai k abhi sab apne kamron me hain yehi sahi samay hai Amit se puchne ka k akhir use chot kaise lagi

Deepika dheere dheere chupke se amit k kamre me chali jati hai to dekhti hai k amit bed. Par leta chhat ko dekh rha tha ,
Asal me Amit aaj manjari k sath hui bas ki ghatnaon k bare me soch rha tha k akhir kyun wo khud par control nhi kar pa rha tha wo kya soch rhi hogi mere bare me

Tabhi deepika kamre me dakhil hoti hai aur darwaza band kar k Amit k pas ati hai

Deepika: to bta aaj kya kar k aya hai, aur kahan se chot lagi hai ?

Amit khayalon ki dunia se bahar ata hai aur chhoti mami ko dekhkar chonk jata hai

Amit : are mami is Waqt aap yahan

Deepika: kyun kya nhi aa sakti main yahan

Amit : are nhi nhi Mera wo matlab nhi

Deepika : to meri bat ka jawab de pehle k kahan se chot lagi hai dikha mujhe kitni chot hai

Amit mana karta rehta hai par deepika amit ki shirt utarwa kar baju dekhne lagti hai
Patti hata kar jab zakham dekhti hai to use ek cut nazar ata hai

Amit : are kuch nhi mami wo bas aise bus me kharonch lag gyi thi darwaze se

Deepika Amit ki ankhon ko padne ki koshish karti hai, amit zarur kuch chhupa rha hai

Deepika : acha mami se bolne me dar rha hai to dost ko hi bolde
Doston se koi bat chhupai nhi jati

Amit : are mami kuch bhi to nhi aisi koi bat nhi

Deepika uth jati hai bed se aur bahar jane ko mudti hai

Deepika : theek hai agar tu mujhe apna dost nhi samjhta to main chalti hain

Amit ek dam uthkar mami ka hath pakad kar wapis khinch kar bed par bitha leta hai

Amit : acha baba batata hun magar pehle wada karo ye bat kisi ko pta nhi chalni chahiye aur na hi aap gussa karogi

Deepika: promise! Main kisi ko nhi bataungi aur na gussa karungi

Fir amit sari ghatna bta deti hai k kaise usne lady ki madad ki aur chot lagi
Deepika hairani se dekhkar muh par hath rakhkar kehti hai

Deepika: haaaa .. agar tujhe kuch ho jata to kabhi socha hai.
Kya zarurat thi hero banne ki agar chot kahin aur lag jati to, agar tumhari jan par ban aati to
Socha hai k didi ka kya hota
Tumhare zara late hone par sara ghar sir pe utha liya tha
Soch unka kya hota

Amit : mami ji ye bhi to sochiye agar us aurat ki jagah aap hoti ya maa hoti ya kamini mami hoti to kya main aisa nhi karta

Deepika chup ho jati hai akhir amit ek sanskari ladka tha fir wo kaise bardasht karta k uske samne kisi aurat k sath anyaye ho jaye
Deepika: to to lakhon me ek hai bhagwan sab ko tere jaisa beta de
Acha ye to bta fir kya kya kiya sara din kaun kaun tha sath

Amit soch me pad jata hai k kya jawab de , manjari k bare me bataye ya nhi

Amit ko sochte dekhkar deepika bolti hai

Deepika : itna sochne ki kya bat hai , jo bhi hai dil kholkar bta main kisi se kuch nhi kahungi
Koi to bat zarur hai tere dil me jo tu aise soch me gum tha,, chal bta jaldi soch mat

Amit fir manjari aur renu k sath jane k bare me bta deta hai aur ye bhi k ye plan raju ka tha renu k sath uski setting karne ka
Amit ko manjari ka letter yad aa jata hai aur wo jaldi se apne kapde jo wo badal chuka tha usme se letter nikalkar dikhata hai
Deepika manjari ka letter amit se lekar padne lagti hai
Letter padte padte deepika ki ankhen nam ho jati hain, amit hairani se chhoti mami ko dekhta ja rha tha k aisa kya likha hai letter me
Thodi der bad deepika letter pad kar apni ankho ko saadi k pallu se saaf kar k amit ko dekhti hai aur kehti hai

Deepika: tumne ye letter parha tha ya nhi ?

Amit na me gardan hila deta hai

Deepika : is khat ka ek ek lafz usne apne dil k khoon se likha hai, bahut pyar karti hai wo tumhe please uska dil mat todna aisa pyar to lakhon me kisi kisi ko milta hai
Kal hi ja kar use han bol de meri poori support hai
Main sab dekhlungi tu chinta mat karna

Amit hairani se deepika ki baten sun rha tha

Amit : ye aap kya keh rhi ho mami aapko to pta hai main insab se door rehta hun aur aap khud mujhe ye karne ko bol rhi hain

Deepika : han main keh rhi hun, tu kya samjhega sacha pyar kise kehte hain, tu kya jane ek ladki jab kisi ko apne man mandir ka devta bna leti hai to fir aur kisi ko swikar nhi karti
Tu bas use han karde uske pyar ki laaj rakhle agar meri baton ki koi value hai to use nirash mat karna

Itna kehkar chhoti mami apni ankhon k ansoo pochhti kamre se nikal jati hai, Amit akela baitha jane kab tak manjari aur mami ki baton k bare me sochta rehta hai aur aise hi so jata hai

Deepika apne kamre me bed par leti manjari k khat ko dekhti hui sochti rehti hai k manjari kitni achi ladki hai aur sundar bhi hai aur kitna pyar karti hai amit ko uske khat ka ek ek lafz is bat ki gawahi de rha hai yun hi der tak sochti rehti hai kamlesh bhi ghar nhi lota tha
Achanak deepika ko yad ata hai k Amit ko to chot lagi hai upar se koi dawa bhi to nhi lagai usne kahin aadhi rat ko use dard hone laga to
Itna sochkar deepika ek pain killer le kar amit k kamre ki taraf badti hai har taraf andhera tha rat k 2 baj rhe the deepika chinta me khoi fatafat amit k room ki taraf jati hai k shayad abhi jag rha ho

Deepika jab amit k room me pahunchti hai light jala kar jaise hi Amit ki taraf dekhti hai to uska halak khushk ho jata hai
Darasal aaj din ki ghatnaon se Amit ka baburao gusse me sir uthaye khada tha
Amit to so rha tha magar baburao gusse me funkar rha tha shayad amit sapne me bus wala scene dekh rha tha

Deepika ek tak Amit k pajame k ubhar ko dekh rhi thi , pajame k ubhar se use andaza ho gya tha k ye koi mamuli land nhi hai , ye to ek tagda moosal hai . Itni chhoti umar me aisa tagda land bahut hairani ki bat hai magar ho bhi kyun na body bhi to kitni banai hui hai Amit ne pehalwani karta hai to land kaise na tagda ho
Aisa land agar manjari jaisi kuwari ladki ki choot me jayega to wo bechari parlok sidhar jayegi
Manjari kya agar mere jaisi shadishuda aurat ki choot me ghus jaye to bhosda bna kar hi niklega
Itna sochte hi deepika ki choot gili hone lagti hai
Tabhi uske man me dusra vichar ata hai k haye haye ye main kya sochne lagi Amit to mere bete jaisa aisa sochna bhi paap hai
Itna sochte hi deepika jaldi se light band kar k apne kamre me bhaag jati hai
Apne kamre me akar bed par late jati hai aur sone ki koshish karti hai magar bar bar uski ankhon k samne amit k lund ka ubhar ane lgta hai
Kitna farak tha kamlesh aur Amit k land me
Kahan kamlesh ka 5’ ka patla sa land kahan Amit ka mota tagda moosal
Na chahte hue bhi wo dono k land ka comparison karne lagti hai aur chudasi hone lagti hai
Kab uska hath niche choot par chala gya use pta hi nhi chala
Dheere dheere saadi ko kamar tak chada kar ek hath se choot ko sehlane lagti hai
Is waqt use chudai ki sakht zarurat mehsoos hone lagti hai magar kamlesh to ghar par nhi tha
Waise bhi kai hafton se kamlesh ne deepika ko choda nhi tha jabki shadi k bad daily kamlesh 2/3 bar use chod deta tha magar pichle ek sal se ab kamlesh bahut zor dalne par hi deepika ki chudai karta tha

Amit k land ko yad karte karte deepika apni choot ko zor zor se sehlati ja rhi thi
Deepika : ooooooo aaaaaaaaa aaaaaah kitna bda lund hai sssssss aaaaaaahhhhhhh ek bar me hi choot ka bhosda bna dega cccccccc aaaaaaahhh

Kahan reh gya kamlesh. Aaooooo chodddooo mujhe dekho meri choot kaise ansooooo baha rhi hai cccccc aaaaaahhhhhhh kahan chale gye kamlesh. Ccccccccccc aaaahhhhhhhh
Jaldi aao chodo mujhee cccccccc ooohhhhhh
Kitna bada moosal hai cccccccc aahhhhhhhh
Aur teji se ungali apni choot me chalane lagati hai
Aaaaahhhhhhhh aaaaahhhhhhh. Fuck meeeee
Aaaaahhhhhh cccccccc oooohhhhh ffffuuuucckkkkkk me ffffuckkkkkkkkkkk
Chodo mujhe amitttttttttt. Aaaahhhhhhhhhh
Cccccccccc kass k rrragggdddoooooooo mujhe aaaaah
Aise ungali karte uska pani nikal jata hai aur wo thandi pad jati hai
Jaise hi thandi hoti hai to use khyal ata hai k usne abhi apne bhanje ka nam lekar pani nikala uske land ko yad karke wo jhadi hai to khud se hi sharminda hone lagti hai kafi der bad uski bhi aankh lag jati hai
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