bahut sahi story hai bhai
main 4 din pehle story phadna starr kiya tha
starting me mujhe laga ye bhi avi bhai ki story ki copy hai
but apne sirf thodasa base liya tha
but apni story writing ka main fan hogaya
apki lekhni bahut badiya hai
mujhe apki story ki sabse badi baat ye lagti hai ki aap baar ek hi person ke sath simple tarike ki chudai nahi dekhate ho
and apka story pace
bahut sahi pace hai story ka
sirf jarurt ki chize batate ho
aur bhai ek request he ki thodasa maa baap ko jayada invove kardo
unka flashback kya hai