Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Gdyrjkfkfkfkf]

Are bhai logon kahani band nai kar raha , main bas dekhna chahta tha k ye best aur good wale voters hain kidhar . Dekha na ek hi jhatke me sab aa gye samne

bhai aapne to dara diya

 

[Lone man]

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KR$NA

 

[richad]

Bhai apke story best hai xform per
Plz continue kijiye
Ham apke sath hai

 

[Raja chouhan]

To story band kardo. Black mail Muth Karo
Bakwas story hai to bakwas hi kahenge.
Pata nahi kya concept socha hai hero ko khandan ke auroto se chudwake mahaan banodo. Ek taraf apne maa baap ka mystery abhi tak solve nahi kiya. Bus jo aurat mili usbko pel te raho. Yahi ek reason hai story ko na pasand karne ka.
Baaki aap story thoda thrilling banaye. 2000 ke uper pages likhdiye ho abhi tak sabi pahelu open hai. Lagta hai tum khud confuse hogaye ho.
No end for stupidity.

Yar tum khud koi kahani likh lo main zarur padunga aa kar .
Main yahan forum pe entaratenament k liye likh raha na ki kisi booker award k liye . Tumhe jaisi kahani chahiye waisi likh kar batao fir aisi bat kehna

 

[Ashishsarkar]

Bilkul sahi raja bhai

 

[Raja chouhan]

Pehle 18 the ab ek aur aa gya , aise hi the pehle wale bhi dekh lo bhai logo

 

["SCAM"]

Yar tum khud koi kahani likh lo main zarur padunga aa kar .
Main yahan forum pe entaratenament k liye likh raha hu. Tumhe jaisi kahani chahiye waisi likh kar batao fir aisi bat kehna

Yaar ignore him and tell him to read other stories that suits him.

Usko kahani likhna nahi aata likin padhna aata hai.

Aur aap na isko ek positivitivity ke tour per dekho. Is forum per har koi incest, ya sex padhne nahi aate. Unme se ek ye bhai sahab haonge. Aur upar se 2019 me join hue the likin sbhi tak 25 comments nahi diye, to ye bhai sahab silent reader hue. Jo chahe jo marji bolo likin aapke stories padne aate hai, nahi to itne purane reader 270 episode ke baad comnent nahi karte wo bhi story ke ander likhe hue baat ko lekar

iss forum per me takriban naya hu sirf 6 mahine hue hai mujhe.

Aur maine jo baat observe ki hai wo ye hai ki jo bahut achchi stories hoti hai, jaise aapka, enigma bhai ka, ya Dmahi19 ka, anand bhai ka usme jyaadatar ek update se next update me 50 logo ke comments hote hai, likin agar aapko aur jyada comment chaheye to 2 din aur late story do 2 pages yani ki 20 logo ka aur comment aayega likin wo 20 usi 50 wale hi hote hai.

Bhaiya ji sab log comment nahi karte. Agar aap pyaar 100 bar ko dekhenge to pichle kuchh dino se karib karib 8 to 10 pages comment aane suru hue the.

Aap koi bhi kahani dekho agar double comment chhod do to aapke khate me 50 log hote hai jo regular comment karte hai, agar aap ki story achchhi hai to nahi to koi koi stories per 10 comnents mushkil se aate hai.

Aap writer ho , baaki aapki marji.

Aur upar se ye bhi yaad rakhna ki election me 70000+ members hote hue bhi iss forum per 1% vote nahi pada, jis bajah se hamare kaamdev bhai nahi jite.

 

[Shanu]

Awesome update bhai

 

["SCAM"]

Pehle 18 the ab ek aur aa gya , aise hi the pehle wale bhi dekh lo bhai logo

Raaja bhai 800 me 18 the , 900 me sirf 19
Negative vote bhi kam ho rahe hai

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting