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[MS DHONI]

Raja Bhai for starting a new thread...Intro bahut achhi hai aur kahani mein bahut saari characters bhi hain..Asha hai ki aap sabhi patron ko lekar ek bahut hi achhi kahani likhoge..Tension mat lena aur khul kar apne bichharon ko prakash karna..Agar regular updates aaye to kahani mein judne mein aasan hoga..Best of luck

 

[Raja chouhan]

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intro to bahut lamba chauda hai...................

lekin jab puri family ka intro diya to .................
amit ke maa-baap ka kyon nahin diya.............
bhai amit ki maa...in 3 bahanon mein se ek hai kya?
ya inki koi chauthi bahan hai to intro me deni chahiye thi..............

latkau sa suspense bana diya........... jabardasti wala

dekhte hain aage

hai wait karo zara story chalegi aage to pta chal jayega

 

[Raja chouhan]

Raja Bhai for starting a new thread...Intrro bahut achhi hai aur kahani mein bahut saari characters bhi hain..Asha hai ki aap sabhi patron ko lekar ek bahut hi achhi kahani likhein..Tension mat lena aur khul kar apne bichharon ko prakash karna..Agar regular updates aaye to kahani mein judne mein aasan hoga..Best of luck

Shukriya Bhai I will do my best update week me 2 ya 3 hi de paunga kyunki kaam se jyada waqt nikal nhi pata magar kahani ko best way me likhne ki koshish karunga

 

[Raja chouhan]

Bhaiyon agar aap gif add karna chahe to send kar dena message me

 

[MS DHONI]

Bhai wee

Shukriya Bhai I will do my best update week me 2 ya 3 hi de paunga kyunki kaam se jyada waqt nikal nhi pata magar kahani ko best way me likhne ki koshish karunga

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Shukriya Bhai I will do my best update week me 2 ya 3 hi de paunga kyunki kaam se jyada waqt nikal nhi pata magar kahani ko best way me likhne ki koshish karunga

Bhai week mein 2/3 updates kaafi hain..Aap tension mat lena aur free ho kar har week mein update dena lekin megupdates plz

 

[Virender]

Bhai mast update h lekine ye story kuch kuch Main Meri family Aur Mera Gaon Jo Avi bhai ke story h us jse lgi mere ko

 

[John Cena]

Nice intro dost lagta ha tum wo main meri family or mera gaon ka bare fan ho us sa milta julta characters daal diye han kya ya fantasy story ha yan waise hi....

 

[Raja chouhan]

Bhai mast update h lekine ye story kuch kuch Main Meri family Aur Mera Gaon Jo Avi bhai ke story h us jse lgi mere ko

Bhai ab kuch na kuch kisi na kisi kahani me milta hoga magar story abhi shuru hi nhi hui aap wait to karo agar aapko same lage to aap bol dena main band kardunga but wait and watch

 

[Raja chouhan]

Nice intro dost lagta ha tum wo main meri family or mera gaon ka bare fan ho us sa milta julta characters daal diye han kya ya fantasy story ha yan waise hi....

Are bhai abhi wait to karo story chalne to do

 

[Black water]

Nice intro bhai kahin hero divya ki judwa behen ki beta to nahin