waah yaar mast kahani likhi hai .. pehle shuruaat mein padhte - padhte muzhe laga ki main ye kahani shayad pehle padh chuka hu .. phir date check kari to April month ki date mein update posted the .. phir beech - beech mein kuch comments bhi padhe .. to kisi ne pehle kisi story ka jikrr kiya tha .. ki ye uski copy hai .. magar fir maine jyaada nahi socha .. kyon ki story padhne mein maza aa raha tha .. but wo 3 mamiyo wali theory baar - baar dimag mein ping kar rahi thi .. but jab Gauri Maami wala chapter shuru hua waha yaatra wala to ye kahani pehli wali se kayi baato mein behtar lagi .. usme jo badi maami wala scene dikhaya tha .. wo itna seductive aur resonable sa nahi tha .. bas jaise ki jabardast sex karane ke liye kuch bhi bana do .. but yaha poora detailed description ke saath aur ek valid aur reasonable situation ke saath Amit aur Gauri ka emotional .. psychological .. aur physical bonding dikhayi .. aur bahut he badhiya scene banaya hai ...
aur jo bhi log bol rahe hai ki ye uski copy hai .. to aisa kehna to bevakoofi hai .. kyonki har ek line dobara se likhi gayi hai .. aur har character ka build up bhi bilkul alag tareeke se kiya gaya hai .. isme character ka base jyaada strong hai .. aur story ki har situation ka aapas mein taal-mel bhi jyaada behtar hai .. hone ko to kayi baato mein samanta bhi hai par isko bilkul naye sire se likhne mein mehnat to lagi hai aur wo bhi bikul nayi kahani mein jitna hota hai us-se jyaada he hai .. aur kehne ko log beshak isko criticize kar rahe ho .. magar isko jitne log pasand kar rahe hai .. wo khud he explain kar deta hai ki ye kitni kamyaab story ban-ne jaa rahi hai .. agar isme naya pan na hota to shayad log isme itna interest bhi na lete .. har writer ki apni creativity hoti hai .. waise he iss story ke writer ne bhi apni creativity ko use karke isko bahut he acche se likha hai ...
aur bakwaad chodna to bahut aasaan hai .. koi bhi ek ya 2 line ki comments likh kar story ko criticize kar deta hai .. magar ek-ek line likhna aur usko regular post karna bahut kathin kaam hai .. well muzhe to ye har angle se pehli wali story se acchi he lagi .. aur rahi similarity wali baat to incest word ko use kar rahe hai to fir to scope bahut limited ho jaata hai .. yani ki jo bhi sexual relation dikhana hai wo blood related members ke beech mein dikhana hai .. to gine - chune rishte hai .. jinke saath aap khel sakte hai .. maa - behen - mausi - bua - bhabi - bhatiji/bhaanji (ye relation sab se kam use kiya jaata hai) ... ya had se had daadi/naani (rare occasions in rare stories) .. to sab kahaniyo mein ladka hero hota hai .. usually wo apni family ko protect karta hai aur baap ya kamane wala male chutiya hota hai .. aur sabse badi baat hero ka lund extraordinary hota hai .. jaise ki jinke aam size ka lund hota hai ve chudai aur bacche paida nahi kar sakte hai .. .. ab jo bhi karna hota hai inhi gine - chune kirdaaro ko aise chamatkaari dhang se dikhana hota hai ki padhne wala apna lund hilane par majboor ho jaaye ...
waise jo log kahaniyo mein itni kamiya nikaalte hai .. ve wahi log hai jinko padhne ke baad lund hilane mein maza nahi aata .. kyonki BC lund hilane ki bhi to limit hai .. ab saare din har story ko padhte - padhte hue hilaoge to lund bhi kehne lagta hai ki BC ab to bakasde .. aur bina lund hilaye maza aata nahi hai .. to fir shikaayat he nikalti hai mooh se .. sorry haato se
bhai maine to almost bina hilaye he ye story abhi tak padh li hai .. aur fir bhi bahut pasand aayi .. ab aur iss-se jyaada kya bacche ki jaan loge ...
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ab thodi si story mein chal rahi gatividhiyo par bhi charcha kar le ...
pehle to Kalpana ki breast size batao .. kya bilkul he sapaat hai .. ya fir baby bump hai ...
dusra ab apne hero ka thoda level ucha karo .. social level .. kuch skills ka level bhi badhna chahiye .. aur ab competition badh raha hai .. to sirf kushti ke adhar par he to sabse 2 hath nahi kar sakta .. to judo .. wushu .. ya marshal-arts kuch to seekhana padega .. kyonki ab haramiyo ki list badhti ja rahi hai ...
aur amit ke to dost bhi shareef se hai .. Raju, mohit, neeraj (ye bhi choclati pehlwaan he hai) .. abhi tak to kaalu he aisa launda dikha hai jo cometition ko takkar deta hai ...
Gauri ma se Gauri maami ho gayi hai peechle kuch updates se .. ye main note kar raha hu .. kya readers ke dimaag mein bhi aisa he badlaav dikhane ka tatpriya hai ...
abhi tak story mein sabhi behno par kaafi detail mein focus kiya hai sirf sabse badi didi Nidhi ko chhod kar .. uski sirf ghar ki he life show kari hai .. kuch professional life ka bhi to dikhao .. kya job karti hai .. kaha jaati hai .. aur itne din ho gaye na Neha didi aur Radha ke department ke students aur teachers se milwaya hai .. jyaada detail nahi thoda bahut upar-upar se highlight he dikha do .. us-se story mein flavour add ho jata hai ...
waise abhi tak Manju mam / urf didi ka character kaafi acche tareeke se develop kiya hai .. aur uske saath apne Amit ki tuning bhi kaafi acchi hai .. magar itne din hogaye kya ek baar bhi Manju ne ye jaan-ne ki koshish nahi ki .. ki Amit ki uske bhai se itni shakal milti hai .. kya uske mann mein Amit ki family ko jaan-ne ki utsukta nahi badhi ...
aur Jab Manju ka apne sage bhai se itna attachment tha .. to kyo usne apne bhai ki koi photo ya us-se related baat Amit se ki .. itna to common hota hai jiske saath wo kapde khareedti fir rahi hai .. jiske saath ghoomti hai .. jisko apne ghar mein rakhne ko taiyaar hai .. uske saath apni family ya jo bhi common si baate jo similar ho unpar baate kare ...
waha gaanv mein to abhi tak Gauri he saare ghar ko chalati aayi thi magar suddenly waha ghar mein Deepika maami ka character Alpha female ke roop mein ubhar ke saamne aa raha hai ...
aur Amit itne dino se mohit ki maa ko pel raha hai wo bhi bina protection ke to kya waha nayi sambhaavnaye nahi ban rahi ...
na he sheher mein Rita mausi ne koi precaution liye .. during intercourse .. bas sab chudne mein aur maze mein he lagi rehti hai .. kisi ko koi fikr he nahi hoti apne future ko lekhar .. aur na he Amit safety ka dhyaan rakhta hai .. is hisab se to kuch dino mein ye ful sex manic ban jaayega .. kyonki isko GF koi nahi banani magar chodni sab hai .. kisi ko to chhod diya karo .. jis tarah ye aage badh raha hai .. uske hisaab se to ye kuch dino mein Shalu ke upar bhi chadh jaayega ...
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bhai abhi tak to story farrate daar jaa rahi hai .. ab aage dekhte hai aap kya kamaal dikhate ho .. agle update ka intezaar rahega ...
bahut sateek vishleshanwaah yaar mast kahani likhi hai .. pehle shuruaat mein padhte - padhte muzhe laga ki main ye kahani shayad pehle padh chuka hu .. phir date check kari to April month ki date mein update posted the .. phir beech - beech mein kuch comments bhi padhe .. to kisi ne pehle kisi story ka jikrr kiya tha .. ki ye uski copy hai .. magar fir maine jyaada nahi socha .. kyon ki story padhne mein maza aa raha tha .. but wo 3 mamiyo wali theory baar - baar dimag mein ping kar rahi thi .. but jab Gauri Maami wala chapter shuru hua waha yaatra wala to ye kahani pehli wali se kayi baato mein behtar lagi .. usme jo badi maami wala scene dikhaya tha .. wo itna seductive aur resonable sa nahi tha .. bas jaise ki jabardast sex karane ke liye kuch bhi bana do .. but yaha poora detailed description ke saath aur ek valid aur reasonable situation ke saath Amit aur Gauri ka emotional .. psychological .. aur physical bonding dikhayi .. aur bahut he badhiya scene banaya hai ...
aur jo bhi log bol rahe hai ki ye uski copy hai .. to aisa kehna to bevakoofi hai .. kyonki har ek line dobara se likhi gayi hai .. aur har character ka build up bhi bilkul alag tareeke se kiya gaya hai .. isme character ka base jyaada strong hai .. aur story ki har situation ka aapas mein taal-mel bhi jyaada behtar hai .. hone ko to kayi baato mein samanta bhi hai par isko bilkul naye sire se likhne mein mehnat to lagi hai aur wo bhi bikul nayi kahani mein jitna hota hai us-se jyaada he hai .. aur kehne ko log beshak isko criticize kar rahe ho .. magar isko jitne log pasand kar rahe hai .. wo khud he explain kar deta hai ki ye kitni kamyaab story ban-ne jaa rahi hai .. agar isme naya pan na hota to shayad log isme itna interest bhi na lete .. har writer ki apni creativity hoti hai .. waise he iss story ke writer ne bhi apni creativity ko use karke isko bahut he acche se likha hai ...
aur bakwaad chodna to bahut aasaan hai .. koi bhi ek ya 2 line ki comments likh kar story ko criticize kar deta hai .. magar ek-ek line likhna aur usko regular post karna bahut kathin kaam hai .. well muzhe to ye har angle se pehli wali story se acchi he lagi .. aur rahi similarity wali baat to incest word ko use kar rahe hai to fir to scope bahut limited ho jaata hai .. yani ki jo bhi sexual relation dikhana hai wo blood related members ke beech mein dikhana hai .. to gine - chune rishte hai .. jinke saath aap khel sakte hai .. maa - behen - mausi - bua - bhabi - bhatiji/bhaanji (ye relation sab se kam use kiya jaata hai) ... ya had se had daadi/naani (rare occasions in rare stories) .. to sab kahaniyo mein ladka hero hota hai .. usually wo apni family ko protect karta hai aur baap ya kamane wala male chutiya hota hai .. aur sabse badi baat hero ka lund extraordinary hota hai .. jaise ki jinke aam size ka lund hota hai ve chudai aur bacche paida nahi kar sakte hai .. .. ab jo bhi karna hota hai inhi gine - chune kirdaaro ko aise chamatkaari dhang se dikhana hota hai ki padhne wala apna lund hilane par majboor ho jaaye ...
waise jo log kahaniyo mein itni kamiya nikaalte hai .. ve wahi log hai jinko padhne ke baad lund hilane mein maza nahi aata .. kyonki BC lund hilane ki bhi to limit hai .. ab saare din har story ko padhte - padhte hue hilaoge to lund bhi kehne lagta hai ki BC ab to bakasde .. aur bina lund hilaye maza aata nahi hai .. to fir shikaayat he nikalti hai mooh se .. sorry haato se
bhai maine to almost bina hilaye he ye story abhi tak padh li hai .. aur fir bhi bahut pasand aayi .. ab aur iss-se jyaada kya bacche ki jaan loge ...
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ab thodi si story mein chal rahi gatividhiyo par bhi charcha kar le ...
pehle to Kalpana ki breast size batao .. kya bilkul he sapaat hai .. ya fir baby bump hai ...
dusra ab apne hero ka thoda level ucha karo .. social level .. kuch skills ka level bhi badhna chahiye .. aur ab competition badh raha hai .. to sirf kushti ke adhar par he to sabse 2 hath nahi kar sakta .. to judo .. wushu .. ya marshal-arts kuch to seekhana padega .. kyonki ab haramiyo ki list badhti ja rahi hai ...
aur amit ke to dost bhi shareef se hai .. Raju, mohit, neeraj (ye bhi choclati pehlwaan he hai) .. abhi tak to kaalu he aisa launda dikha hai jo cometition ko takkar deta hai ...
Gauri ma se Gauri maami ho gayi hai peechle kuch updates se .. ye main note kar raha hu .. kya readers ke dimaag mein bhi aisa he badlaav dikhane ka tatpriya hai ...
abhi tak story mein sabhi behno par kaafi detail mein focus kiya hai sirf sabse badi didi Nidhi ko chhod kar .. uski sirf ghar ki he life show kari hai .. kuch professional life ka bhi to dikhao .. kya job karti hai .. kaha jaati hai .. aur itne din ho gaye na Neha didi aur Radha ke department ke students aur teachers se milwaya hai .. jyaada detail nahi thoda bahut upar-upar se highlight he dikha do .. us-se story mein flavour add ho jata hai ...
waise abhi tak Manju mam / urf didi ka character kaafi acche tareeke se develop kiya hai .. aur uske saath apne Amit ki tuning bhi kaafi acchi hai .. magar itne din hogaye kya ek baar bhi Manju ne ye jaan-ne ki koshish nahi ki .. ki Amit ki uske bhai se itni shakal milti hai .. kya uske mann mein Amit ki family ko jaan-ne ki utsukta nahi badhi ...
aur Jab Manju ka apne sage bhai se itna attachment tha .. to kyo usne apne bhai ki koi photo ya us-se related baat Amit se ki .. itna to common hota hai jiske saath wo kapde khareedti fir rahi hai .. jiske saath ghoomti hai .. jisko apne ghar mein rakhne ko taiyaar hai .. uske saath apni family ya jo bhi common si baate jo similar ho unpar baate kare ...
waha gaanv mein to abhi tak Gauri he saare ghar ko chalati aayi thi magar suddenly waha ghar mein Deepika maami ka character Alpha female ke roop mein ubhar ke saamne aa raha hai ...
aur Amit itne dino se mohit ki maa ko pel raha hai wo bhi bina protection ke to kya waha nayi sambhaavnaye nahi ban rahi ...
na he sheher mein Rita mausi ne koi precaution liye .. during intercourse .. bas sab chudne mein aur maze mein he lagi rehti hai .. kisi ko koi fikr he nahi hoti apne future ko lekhar .. aur na he Amit safety ka dhyaan rakhta hai .. is hisab se to kuch dino mein ye ful sex manic ban jaayega .. kyonki isko GF koi nahi banani magar chodni sab hai .. kisi ko to chhod diya karo .. jis tarah ye aage badh raha hai .. uske hisaab se to ye kuch dino mein Shalu ke upar bhi chadh jaayega ...
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bhai abhi tak to story farrate daar jaa rahi hai .. ab aage dekhte hai aap kya kamaal dikhate ho .. agle update ka intezaar rahega ...
Firefox bhai yaha per main story hidden ho gyi hai thodi ,kyu ki Amit ko apne maa pita ki maut ke bare me janne me jyada interest nahi hai wahi manju ke sath gajab bonding dikhai hai per mera yahi manna hai ki manju uski khoi hui bua hai .ek sex encounter ke bad ye jarur revile hoga ,baki main vilen shina aur month ka bap hai aesa lagta hai ,jo abhi parde ke pichy hai aur Amit ka koi relation jarur h uske sath. Story ki speed acchi h bas sex part jyada hi likha hai lekhak mahodaya newaah yaar mast kahani likhi hai .. pehle shuruaat mein padhte - padhte muzhe laga ki main ye kahani shayad pehle padh chuka hu .. phir date check kari to April month ki date mein update posted the .. phir beech - beech mein kuch comments bhi padhe .. to kisi ne pehle kisi story ka jikrr kiya tha .. ki ye uski copy hai .. magar fir maine jyaada nahi socha .. kyon ki story padhne mein maza aa raha tha .. but wo 3 mamiyo wali theory baar - baar dimag mein ping kar rahi thi .. but jab Gauri Maami wala chapter shuru hua waha yaatra wala to ye kahani pehli wali se kayi baato mein behtar lagi .. usme jo badi maami wala scene dikhaya tha .. wo itna seductive aur resonable sa nahi tha .. bas jaise ki jabardast sex karane ke liye kuch bhi bana do .. but yaha poora detailed description ke saath aur ek valid aur reasonable situation ke saath Amit aur Gauri ka emotional .. psychological .. aur physical bonding dikhayi .. aur bahut he badhiya scene banaya hai ...
aur jo bhi log bol rahe hai ki ye uski copy hai .. to aisa kehna to bevakoofi hai .. kyonki har ek line dobara se likhi gayi hai .. aur har character ka build up bhi bilkul alag tareeke se kiya gaya hai .. isme character ka base jyaada strong hai .. aur story ki har situation ka aapas mein taal-mel bhi jyaada behtar hai .. hone ko to kayi baato mein samanta bhi hai par isko bilkul naye sire se likhne mein mehnat to lagi hai aur wo bhi bikul nayi kahani mein jitna hota hai us-se jyaada he hai .. aur kehne ko log beshak isko criticize kar rahe ho .. magar isko jitne log pasand kar rahe hai .. wo khud he explain kar deta hai ki ye kitni kamyaab story ban-ne jaa rahi hai .. agar isme naya pan na hota to shayad log isme itna interest bhi na lete .. har writer ki apni creativity hoti hai .. waise he iss story ke writer ne bhi apni creativity ko use karke isko bahut he acche se likha hai ...
aur bakwaad chodna to bahut aasaan hai .. koi bhi ek ya 2 line ki comments likh kar story ko criticize kar deta hai .. magar ek-ek line likhna aur usko regular post karna bahut kathin kaam hai .. well muzhe to ye har angle se pehli wali story se acchi he lagi .. aur rahi similarity wali baat to incest word ko use kar rahe hai to fir to scope bahut limited ho jaata hai .. yani ki jo bhi sexual relation dikhana hai wo blood related members ke beech mein dikhana hai .. to gine - chune rishte hai .. jinke saath aap khel sakte hai .. maa - behen - mausi - bua - bhabi - bhatiji/bhaanji (ye relation sab se kam use kiya jaata hai) ... ya had se had daadi/naani (rare occasions in rare stories) .. to sab kahaniyo mein ladka hero hota hai .. usually wo apni family ko protect karta hai aur baap ya kamane wala male chutiya hota hai .. aur sabse badi baat hero ka lund extraordinary hota hai .. jaise ki jinke aam size ka lund hota hai ve chudai aur bacche paida nahi kar sakte hai .. .. ab jo bhi karna hota hai inhi gine - chune kirdaaro ko aise chamatkaari dhang se dikhana hota hai ki padhne wala apna lund hilane par majboor ho jaaye ...
waise jo log kahaniyo mein itni kamiya nikaalte hai .. ve wahi log hai jinko padhne ke baad lund hilane mein maza nahi aata .. kyonki BC lund hilane ki bhi to limit hai .. ab saare din har story ko padhte - padhte hue hilaoge to lund bhi kehne lagta hai ki BC ab to bakasde .. aur bina lund hilaye maza aata nahi hai .. to fir shikaayat he nikalti hai mooh se .. sorry haato se
bhai maine to almost bina hilaye he ye story abhi tak padh li hai .. aur fir bhi bahut pasand aayi .. ab aur iss-se jyaada kya bacche ki jaan loge ...
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ab thodi si story mein chal rahi gatividhiyo par bhi charcha kar le ...
pehle to Kalpana ki breast size batao .. kya bilkul he sapaat hai .. ya fir baby bump hai ...
dusra ab apne hero ka thoda level ucha karo .. social level .. kuch skills ka level bhi badhna chahiye .. aur ab competition badh raha hai .. to sirf kushti ke adhar par he to sabse 2 hath nahi kar sakta .. to judo .. wushu .. ya marshal-arts kuch to seekhana padega .. kyonki ab haramiyo ki list badhti ja rahi hai ...
aur amit ke to dost bhi shareef se hai .. Raju, mohit, neeraj (ye bhi choclati pehlwaan he hai) .. abhi tak to kaalu he aisa launda dikha hai jo cometition ko takkar deta hai ...
Gauri ma se Gauri maami ho gayi hai peechle kuch updates se .. ye main note kar raha hu .. kya readers ke dimaag mein bhi aisa he badlaav dikhane ka tatpriya hai ...
abhi tak story mein sabhi behno par kaafi detail mein focus kiya hai sirf sabse badi didi Nidhi ko chhod kar .. uski sirf ghar ki he life show kari hai .. kuch professional life ka bhi to dikhao .. kya job karti hai .. kaha jaati hai .. aur itne din ho gaye na Neha didi aur Radha ke department ke students aur teachers se milwaya hai .. jyaada detail nahi thoda bahut upar-upar se highlight he dikha do .. us-se story mein flavour add ho jata hai ...
waise abhi tak Manju mam / urf didi ka character kaafi acche tareeke se develop kiya hai .. aur uske saath apne Amit ki tuning bhi kaafi acchi hai .. magar itne din hogaye kya ek baar bhi Manju ne ye jaan-ne ki koshish nahi ki .. ki Amit ki uske bhai se itni shakal milti hai .. kya uske mann mein Amit ki family ko jaan-ne ki utsukta nahi badhi ...
aur Jab Manju ka apne sage bhai se itna attachment tha .. to kyo usne apne bhai ki koi photo ya us-se related baat Amit se ki .. itna to common hota hai jiske saath wo kapde khareedti fir rahi hai .. jiske saath ghoomti hai .. jisko apne ghar mein rakhne ko taiyaar hai .. uske saath apni family ya jo bhi common si baate jo similar ho unpar baate kare ...
waha gaanv mein to abhi tak Gauri he saare ghar ko chalati aayi thi magar suddenly waha ghar mein Deepika maami ka character Alpha female ke roop mein ubhar ke saamne aa raha hai ...
aur Amit itne dino se mohit ki maa ko pel raha hai wo bhi bina protection ke to kya waha nayi sambhaavnaye nahi ban rahi ...
na he sheher mein Rita mausi ne koi precaution liye .. during intercourse .. bas sab chudne mein aur maze mein he lagi rehti hai .. kisi ko koi fikr he nahi hoti apne future ko lekhar .. aur na he Amit safety ka dhyaan rakhta hai .. is hisab se to kuch dino mein ye ful sex manic ban jaayega .. kyonki isko GF koi nahi banani magar chodni sab hai .. kisi ko to chhod diya karo .. jis tarah ye aage badh raha hai .. uske hisaab se to ye kuch dino mein Shalu ke upar bhi chadh jaayega ...
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bhai abhi tak to story farrate daar jaa rahi hai .. ab aage dekhte hai aap kya kamaal dikhate ho .. agle update ka intezaar rahega ...
Awesome update..
Awesome updates
Hamesha ki tarah umda. Awesome. Waiting for next
LAJWAB UPDATE BHAI
bahut khubsurat...............khaskar manju aur amit ke beech ka emotional part.................. ek aurat ya ladki agar bhai, pita aur bete ke sahare hi ji sakti to use shadi ki jarurat hi kya thi.............. ye bandhan sab bandhanon se bada hota hai............ in dono ke beechh khulkar nahi lekin apas mein bane aur bana rahe...yahi manju chahti hain............ atmik milan...........jo ek dusre ko samajh sakein
Jabardasttt update bhai
Excellent mindblowing superb fantastic update.....................?
keep posting....................?
waiting for next update...............?
Lovely and emotional update bro
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
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Nice update
Nice n fantastic update
Both hi vadiya update Hy brother
Awesome update
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Aage ka intjaar
Jabardast update hai Bhai.. waiting for next update ..
Nice update bhai
भाई कुछ अधूरा सा लगा मुझे सायद आप समझ गए होंगे
But
Today update has totally mind-blowing and I'm?
Nice update
Nice update bhai
Ab dheere dheere sab log amit ke kareeb ho rahe hain jaise manju gouri kalpana radha rita bua, hero ke to maze hain.
Magar iske saath monty jaise dushman ki i chal bhi shuru ho gayi hain aur amit unhe phir halke me le raha hain.
Laptop djoondne ke kaand ke baad monty badla lene ki koshish karega par amit unhe dhyaan nahi de raha hain phir se.
Good update brother.............
Bhai aaj ka update toh ekdum dil ko chuu gya bc.
Koi alfaz nai hai jajbat batane ko.
Waiting for next update.
BOHOT HI EMOTIONAL UPDATE BHAI
Superb update bro
Bahot shaandaar update dost yeh sheena n tow pahot bada game plan bana lia tha
Drug amit k bag m rakhne ka bahot kameeni cheez h paisa ka ghamand bhai kaisa h woh nahi dekh rahi sir se leker paon tak sirf gunah gandagi m bhara huwa h chali h doosre ko sahi kerne
Dekhte inka plan kamyab hota h ya fir se muh ki khani padegi
Intizar rehega aaaapke agle update ka
Shukriya aapka
Manji ka sath to ho gaya par ab purane sambhandho per se parda har jana chahiye. Khubsoorat aur emotional update agle ka intezar
Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ................
Superb update ??
Fabulous Raja chouhan. keep it up.........
Waiting for next
Waiting for update bhai
Ab update dene ka kram ek din chhodkar ek din ho gaya. Waiting for next
Waiting for next update
Very nice update, post next update please.
भाई बेसब्री सै इंतज़ार है आप के अपडेट की
Bhai ji update kab tak aayega
Awesome update bhai waiting for next
Waiting, please post next update .
Waiting for next update brother.......
Superb Raja bhai.....
Waiting for next update.....
Nice update bhai
Waiting for next
Bhai mast update par apse ek request hai jab bhi amit aur gauri ka milan use ekdum mast dikana aur waise bhi gauri ab amit ko pati ki tarah dekane lagi hai to usko submissive dikana jo apne pati ko khush karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai aur un dono ke beech aatacheet bhi dirty rakana matlab amit uske sath dominant rehe aur wo submissive
Bhai update kab tak ayega
waah yaar mast kahani likhi hai .. pehle shuruaat mein padhte - padhte muzhe laga ki main ye kahani shayad pehle padh chuka hu .. phir date check kari to April month ki date mein update posted the .. phir beech - beech mein kuch comments bhi padhe .. to kisi ne pehle kisi story ka jikrr kiya tha .. ki ye uski copy hai .. magar fir maine jyaada nahi socha .. kyon ki story padhne mein maza aa raha tha .. but wo 3 mamiyo wali theory baar - baar dimag mein ping kar rahi thi .. but jab Gauri Maami wala chapter shuru hua waha yaatra wala to ye kahani pehli wali se kayi baato mein behtar lagi .. usme jo badi maami wala scene dikhaya tha .. wo itna seductive aur resonable sa nahi tha .. bas jaise ki jabardast sex karane ke liye kuch bhi bana do .. but yaha poora detailed description ke saath aur ek valid aur reasonable situation ke saath Amit aur Gauri ka emotional .. psychological .. aur physical bonding dikhayi .. aur bahut he badhiya scene banaya hai ...
aur jo bhi log bol rahe hai ki ye uski copy hai .. to aisa kehna to bevakoofi hai .. kyonki har ek line dobara se likhi gayi hai .. aur har character ka build up bhi bilkul alag tareeke se kiya gaya hai .. isme character ka base jyaada strong hai .. aur story ki har situation ka aapas mein taal-mel bhi jyaada behtar hai .. hone ko to kayi baato mein samanta bhi hai par isko bilkul naye sire se likhne mein mehnat to lagi hai aur wo bhi bikul nayi kahani mein jitna hota hai us-se jyaada he hai .. aur kehne ko log beshak isko criticize kar rahe ho .. magar isko jitne log pasand kar rahe hai .. wo khud he explain kar deta hai ki ye kitni kamyaab story ban-ne jaa rahi hai .. agar isme naya pan na hota to shayad log isme itna interest bhi na lete .. har writer ki apni creativity hoti hai .. waise he iss story ke writer ne bhi apni creativity ko use karke isko bahut he acche se likha hai ...
aur bakwaad chodna to bahut aasaan hai .. koi bhi ek ya 2 line ki comments likh kar story ko criticize kar deta hai .. magar ek-ek line likhna aur usko regular post karna bahut kathin kaam hai .. well muzhe to ye har angle se pehli wali story se acchi he lagi .. aur rahi similarity wali baat to incest word ko use kar rahe hai to fir to scope bahut limited ho jaata hai .. yani ki jo bhi sexual relation dikhana hai wo blood related members ke beech mein dikhana hai .. to gine - chune rishte hai .. jinke saath aap khel sakte hai .. maa - behen - mausi - bua - bhabi - bhatiji/bhaanji (ye relation sab se kam use kiya jaata hai) ... ya had se had daadi/naani (rare occasions in rare stories) .. to sab kahaniyo mein ladka hero hota hai .. usually wo apni family ko protect karta hai aur baap ya kamane wala male chutiya hota hai .. aur sabse badi baat hero ka lund extraordinary hota hai .. jaise ki jinke aam size ka lund hota hai ve chudai aur bacche paida nahi kar sakte hai .. .. ab jo bhi karna hota hai inhi gine - chune kirdaaro ko aise chamatkaari dhang se dikhana hota hai ki padhne wala apna lund hilane par majboor ho jaaye ...
waise jo log kahaniyo mein itni kamiya nikaalte hai .. ve wahi log hai jinko padhne ke baad lund hilane mein maza nahi aata .. kyonki BC lund hilane ki bhi to limit hai .. ab saare din har story ko padhte - padhte hue hilaoge to lund bhi kehne lagta hai ki BC ab to bakasde .. aur bina lund hilaye maza aata nahi hai .. to fir shikaayat he nikalti hai mooh se .. sorry haato se
bhai maine to almost bina hilaye he ye story abhi tak padh li hai .. aur fir bhi bahut pasand aayi .. ab aur iss-se jyaada kya bacche ki jaan loge ...
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ab thodi si story mein chal rahi gatividhiyo par bhi charcha kar le ...
pehle to Kalpana ki breast size batao .. kya bilkul he sapaat hai .. ya fir baby bump hai ...
dusra ab apne hero ka thoda level ucha karo .. social level .. kuch skills ka level bhi badhna chahiye .. aur ab competition badh raha hai .. to sirf kushti ke adhar par he to sabse 2 hath nahi kar sakta .. to judo .. wushu .. ya marshal-arts kuch to seekhana padega .. kyonki ab haramiyo ki list badhti ja rahi hai ...
aur amit ke to dost bhi shareef se hai .. Raju, mohit, neeraj (ye bhi choclati pehlwaan he hai) .. abhi tak to kaalu he aisa launda dikha hai jo cometition ko takkar deta hai ...
Gauri ma se Gauri maami ho gayi hai peechle kuch updates se .. ye main note kar raha hu .. kya readers ke dimaag mein bhi aisa he badlaav dikhane ka tatpriya hai ...
abhi tak story mein sabhi behno par kaafi detail mein focus kiya hai sirf sabse badi didi Nidhi ko chhod kar .. uski sirf ghar ki he life show kari hai .. kuch professional life ka bhi to dikhao .. kya job karti hai .. kaha jaati hai .. aur itne din ho gaye na Neha didi aur Radha ke department ke students aur teachers se milwaya hai .. jyaada detail nahi thoda bahut upar-upar se highlight he dikha do .. us-se story mein flavour add ho jata hai ...
waise abhi tak Manju mam / urf didi ka character kaafi acche tareeke se develop kiya hai .. aur uske saath apne Amit ki tuning bhi kaafi acchi hai .. magar itne din hogaye kya ek baar bhi Manju ne ye jaan-ne ki koshish nahi ki .. ki Amit ki uske bhai se itni shakal milti hai .. kya uske mann mein Amit ki family ko jaan-ne ki utsukta nahi badhi ...
aur Jab Manju ka apne sage bhai se itna attachment tha .. to kyo usne apne bhai ki koi photo ya us-se related baat Amit se nahi ki .. itna to common hota hai jiske saath wo kapde khareedti fir rahi hai .. jiske saath ghoomti hai .. jisko apne ghar mein rakhne ko taiyaar hai .. uske saath apni family ya jo bhi common si baate jo similar ho unpar baate kare .. .. na ghar mein apne kisi ka photo lagaya jisko dekhkar Amit koi sawaal kare ...
waha gaanv mein to abhi tak Gauri he saare ghar ko chalati aayi thi magar suddenly waha ghar mein Deepika maami ka character Alpha female ke roop mein ubhar ke saamne aa raha hai ...
aur Amit itne dino se mohit ki maa ko pel raha hai wo bhi bina protection ke to kya waha nayi sambhaavnaye nahi ban rahi ...
na he sheher mein Rita mausi ne koi precaution liye .. during intercourse .. bas sab chudne mein aur maze mein he lagi rehti hai .. kisi ko koi fikr he nahi hoti apne future ko lekhar .. aur na he Amit safety ka dhyaan rakhta hai .. is hisab se to kuch dino mein ye ful sex manic ban jaayega .. kyonki isko GF koi nahi banani magar chodni sab hai .. kisi ko to chhod diya karo .. jis tarah ye aage badh raha hai .. uske hisaab se to ye kuch dino mein Shalu ke upar bhi chadh jaayega ...
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bhai abhi tak to story farrate daar jaa rahi hai .. ab aage dekhte hai aap kya kamaal dikhate ho .. agle update ka intezaar rahega ...
gauri ka roll bhut kamsin rkho...bolte he na jo control rkhta he usme aag hoti he ...vese hi gauri ke jism me bhut aag dhikhaw or use bhut jyada close kro or hero jo khe vo hi kre gauri asa roll bna do
Bhai aap ek baat kehna bhul gai ke story ki heroine radha hai aisa starting me introduce krwaya tha but ab usko bhi thoda love wala feel aage dikhane ka waqt aagya h..
And thoda bahut flash back bhi dikhao Amit ke papa nd uske bhaio ka ..q ki Mohit ki jung jo hone wali hai ab kuch time me .
bahut sateek vishleshan
Update postedSuperb story bro....bhai gauri ka khas roll rakhna ....sex me sabse jyada garam ho ...aur uske saath dominating chudai hi jyada karwao dusro se bilkul alag