Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Raj_Singh]

Bhaiya itni jaldi order de dete ho aap , aap to rest bhi nahi karne dete

Sir Ji

Koi Aapko "Order" nahi deta hai,

Hum sabhi chahne wale Aapse Request karte hai, qki Aapki Story itni behtareen hai ki Hum sabko jyada intezaar karne ka "sabr" hi nahi ho pata hai.

 

[Janu002]

Superb update

 

[Lonetiger]

Nice update

 

[paarth]

Bhaiya itni jaldi order de dete ho aap , aap to rest bhi nahi karne dete

Baithna manna hai. Likhte raho Aaj shaam ko bhi update chahiye.. Ab to jb tk emergency naa aaye rukne ni chahiye update ???

 

[Anky@123]

Awesome update raja bhaiya
Kanyao ki ginti din dugni rat chaugni hoti ja rhi hai ???

 

[Jassybabra]

Bhai bahut acche likh rahe ho. Jab se story shuru hui hai jab se padh raha hu. Aap aapne hisab se story ko aagey badayein.

 

[bd sharkar]

Fabulous update... Romance and Action Ka combo tha
amazing

 

[Arv313]

Shukriya dost par main to bas aise hi pehli bar kuch likhne laga tha . Aap sab k pyar ne story ko acha bana diya. Rahi bat best ki to wo mere khyal se #enigma bhai ki pyar 100 baar hai

Bhai sahab aapne sahi farmaya dear Enigma Brother ki kalam ka jaadu hi hai jo hum pyar ko smajh sake aur es kahani se bhi brabar jude hue hai.
Aap ka apna esthan Hai.
Waiting for the next update.

 

[Rahuljarvis]

bhai bahut mast update tha aur rina ki help bhi ki aur uske dil mein amit ne khas jagah bana li ha...aur wo sala tarun kaisa ladka hai pyaar ke naam par ladki ka jism paana chahta hai dekte hai aage kahani mein uska role hai ya nahi....aur bhai aapne abhi tak sp ritu ki galatfami dur nahi ki dekete hai wo kab hota hai nhi to wo amit ko galat samjti rahegi...aur bhai ye radha ka charachter thoda mature karo bhai kab tak bachpana chalega aur ye jo amit ki itni fikar hai to phone par ye akele me dikao jab mahol romantic ho aur dono akele ho aise sabke samne nhi aur itna possesive hona bhi tik nhi hai rima ka dekha itna mast charachter hai uska....aur bhai abhi to nidhi ki bhi help karni hai bechari ka kya haal ho raha hoga bhai usko job ki tension hai to pehle un maderchod manager aur uske junior ko sabak sikao aur phir resignation letter manager ke gaand me dal do aur rahi nidhi ke job ki baat wo to raghav uncle ke company mein bhi kar sakti hai aur usko acchi post milegi na ki amit ke wajah balki apni education aur experience ke dam par...aur rahi baat wo 3 log jo story ko pasand nhi karte bhai kitna bhi accha kaam karlo par log to kuch na kuch kami nikal lete hai uski jinta aap mat karo....par bhai amit sanskari hai tik hai par chudai ke time to chudai acche se ho tab sanskar ko beech mein mat lao....main sahi bolu to main to khali amit aur gauri mein jayda intersted rehta hu....aap kahani sahi likte hai par thoda aur descriptive lige to aur maja ayega....ye to mera sujao tha bura laga ho maafi chahta hu...

 

[S M H R]

Nice update
Waiting for next