Adultery Manhoos se mahan tak

[Raja chouhan]

Ek wohi toe bachi hai, teeno deviyo mein se, or kaun hoga.

No hint from the writer that hero has nawabi showak, therefore no mama ...?

Shayed wo admi ajay hi tha.....

Waiting for next update.....

LAJWAB UPDATE BHAI

Nice n fantastic update

Ab mami bhanje me thoda romance banega Ya fir thoda sa TWIST aayega ????
Kya hoga .....
Dekhate hai agle update me...

Awwesome update
maybe mama ji honge

Nice update

भाई बढ़िया जा रहे हो

यह कौन शख्श है अजय मामा और उनकी बातें सुनकर शायद इस रिश्ते को कुबूल कर लें इंतज़ार है अगले अपडेट का

Very nice update

Super fantastic update bhai

Kdk update bro

ab ye kaun tha..................... ajay mama hone chahiye..................... ya fir gauri mami bhi ho sakti hain....................
dekhte hain

Very nice update .................
Keep it up bro ...................
Waiting for next update .....................

Bahut kamuk update tha bhai.
Kahi Gauri ka no. toh nahi lagne wala hai...

Waiting for next update.

Nice update

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

lagta hain ajay ne apni biwi ke karname dekhliys

Behtareen update.
Kahani achchhi jaa rahi hai.
Ye part jaldi se niptao aur kahani ko agle mod per le jaao.

Nice storyline..

Last update was nice., Seems like it could be either Ajay or gauri.. if it's Ajay then maybe this will create tension btw Ajay & kamini but if it's gauri then I think the next person lying beneath Amit will be her ..

Well abtk story sirf gaon k andar aur Amit k nanihal tk hi rahi h aur ab uska 12th ka exams bi hogaya h to ab shayad city jane ka number aagya h waise Amit Jana to Ni chahega kyuki yahan depkia kamini h aur gauri maa bi.. iske alawa manjari kinwajah s bi Amit city jane ka na soche but agar Amit Bahar Ni gaya to story gaon m hi atak jaegi hamesa k liye..

Amit ki dusri family bi h jinke bare m usko ni pata . Ho sakta h wo log Amit s nafratt karte ho jaise kamini karti thi par unka aana bi jaruri h but kaise aaenge dekhna h... Shayad city m jis lady ko bachaya tha wo Amit k papa ki side ki ho ..

Kher , gaon m to filahal kuch bacha Ni h .. koi new element introduce kardo wo alag baat h but abhi to Ni lag Raha ki kisi tarah ka adventure hone Wala h .. since ye story kisi dusri story s inspired h but sirf shuruat m hi , base bi almost same h bs kahani badal gai h ..

Story is gng good ...as it is in adultery section so can't expect thrilling elements but if it's there then surely it will add more flavours in d story... But for that sake don't introduce that THAKUR part n all ..


Keep it up....

is baat pakka kamini k pati ne dekha hoga guarantee. But jo bhi ho maza aa gaya. 1 thukayi din k time family k bich mai risk leke bhi krwao us type ka maza hi kuchh aur hota hai and ye next family se kab miloge bhai. I m sure ki next family ka scene aur bhi mast hoga. Keep it up bro kal k din ka wait rahega. Vaise agar sach bolu to bhai tu hi apna sahara hai jo din main 2 updates deta hai Tera Ehsaan hum sab milke bhi ni utar sakte yar. Agar breakup k baad kisi ne Sahara diya to wo tu hai yaar bhai hai tu hum sabka bhai.

nice and hot update

Nice one

Nice update
Planning successful
Keep posting

Raja bhai agla update kb tk

Privous update awesome th bhai.
Sahar me jis aurat ki jaan amit ne bachaya th sayad uski second family me se ho sakta h.
Ab dekhte h second part me Kya Kya hota h.
Waiting for next bro

Ajay ho sakta hai kamini ki baaten sunne wala. Waiting for next

WAITING...

Dipika nd kamini dono pregnant hojayengi phirkonai nai chut aayegi story me wo sochne wali baat h... Waise manjri to he h

achcha likh rahe ho

Nice story

Waiting for next

Update please

Update posted

 

[Raja chouhan]

Are wah

is baat pakka kamini k pati ne dekha hoga guarantee. But jo bhi ho maza aa gaya. 1 thukayi din k time family k bich mai risk leke bhi krwao us type ka maza hi kuchh aur hota hai and ye next family se kab miloge bhai. I m sure ki next family ka scene aur bhi mast hoga. Keep it up bro kal k din ka wait rahega. Vaise agar sach bolu to bhai tu hi apna sahara hai jo din main 2 updates deta hai Tera Ehsaan hum sab milke bhi ni utar sakte yar. Agar breakup k baad kisi ne Sahara diya to wo tu hai yaar bhai hai tu hum sabka bhai.

wah wah bhai bahut khushi hui itni tareef k liye shukriya I hope main kuch bura nahi likh raha

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Nice update

 

[Malhotra]

Its good to be proven wrong... mama ji toe mahan nikle...

 

[Raja chouhan]

Nice storyline..

Last update was nice., Seems like it could be either Ajay or gauri.. if it's Ajay then maybe this will create tension btw Ajay & kamini but if it's gauri then I think the next person lying beneath Amit will be her ..

Well abtk story sirf gaon k andar aur Amit k nanihal tk hi rahi h aur ab uska 12th ka exams bi hogaya h to ab shayad city jane ka number aagya h waise Amit Jana to Ni chahega kyuki yahan depkia kamini h aur gauri maa bi.. iske alawa manjari kinwajah s bi Amit city jane ka na soche but agar Amit Bahar Ni gaya to story gaon m hi atak jaegi hamesa k liye..

Amit ki dusri family bi h jinke bare m usko ni pata . Ho sakta h wo log Amit s nafratt karte ho jaise kamini karti thi par unka aana bi jaruri h but kaise aaenge dekhna h... Shayad city m jis lady ko bachaya tha wo Amit k papa ki side ki ho ..

Kher , gaon m to filahal kuch bacha Ni h .. koi new element introduce kardo wo alag baat h but abhi to Ni lag Raha ki kisi tarah ka adventure hone Wala h .. since ye story kisi dusri story s inspired h but sirf shuruat m hi , base bi almost same h bs kahani badal gai h ..

Story is gng good ...as it is in adultery section so can't expect thrilling elements but if it's there then surely it will add more flavours in d story... But for that sake don't introduce that THAKUR part n all ..


Keep it up....

Thanks for your valuable comment . Well I think gaon me jo abhi tak satory chali hai shayad sabko wo kuch khas nahi lag rahi is liye jaldi se ise change karne ya next family k bare me likhne ka bol rahe hain par agar main ek dam se sab kat kar shehar se shuru kardun to usse story ka maza kharab ho sakta hai

Agar kahin bhi kuch galat lag raha ho to bata dena bhai bas abhi result k sath college to shehar me hi milega

 

[Raja chouhan]

BAHOT HI MAST UPDATE, LAGTA HAI MAMA JI JAG RAHE THE, UMMID HAI UNHE IS BAAT SE KOI BHI PROBLEM NAHI HOGI

KAHANI ABHI TAK BAHOT HI SAHI JA RAHI HAI, KOI KUCH BHI KAHE AAP APNI KAHANI ZARI RAKHEN

AGLE UPDATE KA INTEZAR

Thanks bhai I will do My best

 

[Raja chouhan]

Privous update awesome th bhai.
Sahar me jis aurat ki jaan amit ne bachaya th sayad uski second family me se ho sakta h.
Ab dekhte h second part me Kya Kya hota h.
Waiting for next bro

Zarur bhai koi to rishta niklega hi

 

[Raja chouhan]

Its good to be proven wrong... mama ji toe mahan nikle...

Ek hi mama harami hai baki sab sahi hain is liye hero bhi unke jaisa hai

 

[Killerkd]

Kdk update bro
Waiting for next

 

[Raja thakur]

awesome updates