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Hiii how are you I hope you doing great and healthy, ummm well I don't know what to say,how to say,you will get angry or happy mere words ko aap dil se na lagayen I am saying because I really like the story or dil se mujhe ye story itni pasand aye hay ki main ise 2 times read kar chuka or 3rd time read karne ki soch raha hoon actually this is the first story for which I eagerly wait everytime to read I even open it on seperate tab in browser and it always open so I don't need to open it again n again...I wanna know is it your own thinking or is it from some novel you liked and think to share with us.....you may be curious why I ask this because it's nearly perfect... Now you may think why it's nearly perfect but not totally perfect, well I found so many names and spelling mistakes but it can be managed, and some of mistakes which is related to story while reding all that's why I said it's nearly perfect...well actually I read it 2 times, first time I just did fast reading 2nd time I took time and try to understand everything word and remember it all,


I don't like incet stories sorry about that,but what I liked most is the emotional part and how people express there feelings to others mostly the emotional and romantic and the feeling coming from heart,and the suspense in the story,and the part of karuna,naina,and kalpana, because they are the special part of story because those are the character who makes me laugh a lot I never knew I will come to some story where I can find everything, I don't know how many times but truly I laught so much of these 3 characters sense of humore and it's same a in real with school and college going student they do talk like this which makes other to laugh...and I like how you discribe every details even when telling about home inside you mentioned about how was chairs and what type is there carpet or not how is the door....it's not so descriptive like in novels to understand everything and visualise everything just buy reading but still pretty good and I appreciate you hard work and giving you very important and precious time to this story.... I find these kind of real life experiences only in novels, well I love novels more than watching movies actualy I had not watched hindi movies nearly over 10 years I like old movies which really is different and education not like todays, i don't feel attract towards the movies story it's feel like hollow without any feelings but over acting, because I don't feel myself in movies than in novels,the experience of feeling yourself in the story when you are reading page by page and get a feeling of immersion in the story, which you can't feel in movies or indian serial, I like the main character and his emotional side and I wonder how will the main character will overcome all the coming troubles in future...

Story main, hame kuch chejen real life se hat ke lage jo ke nahi hona chaheye jayse ke

First-----amit se jo relationship bana chuke hay unke saath amit ka formality se pesh ana jab woh akele ho tab bhi..... Jayse ke simple, Deepika ka he jo Amit ki one and only first aurat jisne amit se sabse pahla Milan hua or ek relation banaye or story ke hisab se woh amit ko apna pati man chuki or sare adikar use saup diye ek pati wale balke kai dafa amit se kah chuki hay ki woh use tum ya naam se bulaye jayse ek pati pati ko bulata hay apne pan se ek hak se jo woh suna or mehsoos karna chati hay amit se...jab dono akele ho par phir bhi woh mami-mami karta rahta hay jab dono akele bhi ho jo reality se bilkul alag hay,same manju ke bhi saath wohi jayse ki abhi last update main, respect dena alag bat hay woh koi unse buri tarhan toh nahi bolta ki lage woh respect nahi de raha...real main jab ek dafa koi kisi se physical relationship bana leta hay toh woh rishta bilkul alag hota hay koi 2 jism tabhi ek hote hay jab woh formality ko nikal dete hay nahi toh kabhi koi relationship bana he Na payega or duniya khatam ho jayegi ... Yeh toh ayse he lage ki aap apni gf ya wife ko ap-ap kahen akele main woh bhi sex ke bad.....or nahi koi gandi baten jo harkoi aaj ke jamane main sex karte waqt apne gf ya biwi ko bolte hay ya unse bulwate hay jaan bhooj ke kyunki aurte ye sab jara nahi bol pati sankoch or sharam ki wajah se or mardon ko unse bulwane main maja ata hay.

Second is----- Deepika ki delivery ke baad 6 month ka gap jabki 2 months se jayda nahi lagta dobara sex ke liyea agar surgery se delivery ho, nahi toh sirf 1 month agar normal delivery... Main is liye kah raha kyunki main khud medical se related hoon.


Third------ jab amit ko Ritu ne torture kiya... Police kabhi sirf back par he nahi marti ki log kapre pahanke woh nishani chupa le... Police ye nahi dhekti woh toh har jagah marti hay or sabse pahle toh face par he jo samne hota hay or story main bhe ye show hay par amite ke face par koi nishan ya swelling nahi jabki abhi tak ki jitne hamne police torture news main dheke hay sab main face par jaroor kuch na kuch nisha ya swelling dhekne hay.



I don't have much interest in sex parts there are millions of story fill with only sex.... But what I interested is of funny talk of karuna,naina,kalpana and others story related like...

----advocate suman kab story main ane lagegi?

----- gangster shera kab ane lagega?

----- story kya tab tak chalegi jabtak ki amit poore college khatam kar business na sabhalne lage?

----- Kya woh baljeet rai ko business main haraker uska sab kuch cheen kar kangal karega bhikhari bana kr matlab jaanse mar ke mukti dene se kahi jayda saja toh jindigi deke Harpal Rone dena or pachtawa karna jayda sahi hay?

------ Or dr Rina ka kya hoga kyunki woh toh minimum 6 months maximum 1 year ke liyea London gaye matlab uske saath toh kuch hona nahi siwaye phone par bate.

----- monty kaha hay or kya hua uska?

----- Ankita jo aunty ki kitty party wali kya uska bhi koi role hay? Ya phir aunty ki kitty party main koi or bhi hay jise amit ka relation banege? Waise toh aunty ki beti karishma ka bhi same hoga so am not going to be shocked when it happen but wonder will she also get pregnant with amit or it will be limit to only sex...kyunki woh 2 bar apna bacha kho chuki hay or har aurat ke dil main maa bane ka experience or apne god main apna bacha dhekne ki badi icha hoti hay jise koi kabhi mita nahi sakta ye ek aysa ehsas hay jo sirf ek aurat he samaj sakti hay anyway let's see...


----- kya amit sab ko apne saath rakhega? well agar amit sabko ek he chat ke neeche sabko apne saath rakhe toh bhi I guess sab rahlengi samjhauta karke kyunki sab amite ko pyar or uske saath rahna chati hay so its possible or baljeet rai ka haweli numa ghar itna bara or itne sare kamre toh hay ki sab rah sakengi....
Bhai, kahani ka operation aacha kiya hai.
:ban2::budhabudhi::budhau:
 

Xabhi

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Hiii how are you I hope you doing great and healthy, ummm well I don't know what to say,how to say,you will get angry or happy mere words ko aap dil se na lagayen I am saying because I really like the story or dil se mujhe ye story itni pasand aye hay ki main ise 2 times read kar chuka or 3rd time read karne ki soch raha hoon actually this is the first story for which I eagerly wait everytime to read I even open it on seperate tab in browser and it always open so I don't need to open it again n again...I wanna know is it your own thinking or is it from some novel you liked and think to share with us.....you may be curious why I ask this because it's nearly perfect... Now you may think why it's nearly perfect but not totally perfect, well I found so many names and spelling mistakes but it can be managed, and some of mistakes which is related to story while reding all that's why I said it's nearly perfect...well actually I read it 2 times, first time I just did fast reading 2nd time I took time and try to understand everything word and remember it all,


I don't like incet stories sorry about that,but what I liked most is the emotional part and how people express there feelings to others mostly the emotional and romantic and the feeling coming from heart,and the suspense in the story,and the part of karuna,naina,and kalpana, because they are the special part of story because those are the character who makes me laugh a lot I never knew I will come to some story where I can find everything, I don't know how many times but truly I laught so much of these 3 characters sense of humore and it's same a in real with school and college going student they do talk like this which makes other to laugh...and I like how you discribe every details even when telling about home inside you mentioned about how was chairs and what type is there carpet or not how is the door....it's not so descriptive like in novels to understand everything and visualise everything just buy reading but still pretty good and I appreciate you hard work and giving you very important and precious time to this story.... I find these kind of real life experiences only in novels, well I love novels more than watching movies actualy I had not watched hindi movies nearly over 10 years I like old movies which really is different and education not like todays, i don't feel attract towards the movies story it's feel like hollow without any feelings but over acting, because I don't feel myself in movies than in novels,the experience of feeling yourself in the story when you are reading page by page and get a feeling of immersion in the story, which you can't feel in movies or indian serial, I like the main character and his emotional side and I wonder how will the main character will overcome all the coming troubles in future...

Story main, hame kuch chejen real life se hat ke lage jo ke nahi hona chaheye jayse ke

First-----amit se jo relationship bana chuke hay unke saath amit ka formality se pesh ana jab woh akele ho tab bhi..... Jayse ke simple, Deepika ka he jo Amit ki one and only first aurat jisne amit se sabse pahla Milan hua or ek relation banaye or story ke hisab se woh amit ko apna pati man chuki or sare adikar use saup diye ek pati wale balke kai dafa amit se kah chuki hay ki woh use tum ya naam se bulaye jayse ek pati pati ko bulata hay apne pan se ek hak se jo woh suna or mehsoos karna chati hay amit se...jab dono akele ho par phir bhi woh mami-mami karta rahta hay jab dono akele bhi ho jo reality se bilkul alag hay,same manju ke bhi saath wohi jayse ki abhi last update main, respect dena alag bat hay woh koi unse buri tarhan toh nahi bolta ki lage woh respect nahi de raha...real main jab ek dafa koi kisi se physical relationship bana leta hay toh woh rishta bilkul alag hota hay koi 2 jism tabhi ek hote hay jab woh formality ko nikal dete hay nahi toh kabhi koi relationship bana he Na payega or duniya khatam ho jayegi ... Yeh toh ayse he lage ki aap apni gf ya wife ko ap-ap kahen akele main woh bhi sex ke bad.....or nahi koi gandi baten jo harkoi aaj ke jamane main sex karte waqt apne gf ya biwi ko bolte hay ya unse bulwate hay jaan bhooj ke kyunki aurte ye sab jara nahi bol pati sankoch or sharam ki wajah se or mardon ko unse bulwane main maja ata hay.

Second is----- Deepika ki delivery ke baad 6 month ka gap jabki 2 months se jayda nahi lagta dobara sex ke liyea agar surgery se delivery ho, nahi toh sirf 1 month agar normal delivery... Main is liye kah raha kyunki main khud medical se related hoon.


Third------ jab amit ko Ritu ne torture kiya... Police kabhi sirf back par he nahi marti ki log kapre pahanke woh nishani chupa le... Police ye nahi dhekti woh toh har jagah marti hay or sabse pahle toh face par he jo samne hota hay or story main bhe ye show hay par amite ke face par koi nishan ya swelling nahi jabki abhi tak ki jitne hamne police torture news main dheke hay sab main face par jaroor kuch na kuch nisha ya swelling dhekne hay.



I don't have much interest in sex parts there are millions of story fill with only sex.... But what I interested is of funny talk of karuna,naina,kalpana and others story related like...

----advocate suman kab story main ane lagegi?

----- gangster shera kab ane lagega?

----- story kya tab tak chalegi jabtak ki amit poore college khatam kar business na sabhalne lage?

----- Kya woh baljeet rai ko business main haraker uska sab kuch cheen kar kangal karega bhikhari bana kr matlab jaanse mar ke mukti dene se kahi jayda saja toh jindigi deke Harpal Rone dena or pachtawa karna jayda sahi hay?

------ Or dr Rina ka kya hoga kyunki woh toh minimum 6 months maximum 1 year ke liyea London gaye matlab uske saath toh kuch hona nahi siwaye phone par bate.

----- monty kaha hay or kya hua uska?

----- Ankita jo aunty ki kitty party wali kya uska bhi koi role hay? Ya phir aunty ki kitty party main koi or bhi hay jise amit ka relation banege? Waise toh aunty ki beti karishma ka bhi same hoga so am not going to be shocked when it happen but wonder will she also get pregnant with amit or it will be limit to only sex...kyunki woh 2 bar apna bacha kho chuki hay or har aurat ke dil main maa bane ka experience or apne god main apna bacha dhekne ki badi icha hoti hay jise koi kabhi mita nahi sakta ye ek aysa ehsas hay jo sirf ek aurat he samaj sakti hay anyway let's see...


----- kya amit sab ko apne saath rakhega? well agar amit sabko ek he chat ke neeche sabko apne saath rakhe toh bhi I guess sab rahlengi samjhauta karke kyunki sab amite ko pyar or uske saath rahna chati hay so its possible or baljeet rai ka haweli numa ghar itna bara or itne sare kamre toh hay ki sab rah sakengi....
Aapne kafi dhyan se story read krke positively review diya hai keep it up bhai
 

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Karuna Didi ko khidki par dekh mere hosh hi ud gye the. Kuch pal ko to meri sochne samajhne ki shakti jaise shunya ho gyi thi. Maine sapne me bhi nahi socha tha k aisa manzar bhi samne aa sakta hai. Rita mausi to madhosh hui padi thi aur main bhi unke upar tha. Hum dono k jism paseene se bhare hue the magar ab mujhe apna jism sard padta lag raha tha . Mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha k kya karuna kya nahi. Honth mano sil gye the ankhen mano palak jhapakna bhool gyi thi. Aur dil ki dhadkan mano ruk rahi thi. Main ek tak didi ko dekh raha tha . Hum dono ki nazren mili hui thi . Didi ki ankhon me kuch nami thi aur gussa bhi. Tabhi wo wahan se piche hat gyi aur gaun ho gyi. Shayad wo upar apne kamre me bhag gyi thi. Didi k hatne k bad mujhe hosh aya aur main jaldi se mausi k upar se utha. Rita mausi to sudh budh khoye Anand k sagar me dubi padi thi aur yahan meri ankhon me andhera chha raha tha. Mausi ko kuch kehne ki meri himmat nahi hui. Maine jaldi se apne kapde pehne , mujhe khud par gussa aa raha tha k main itna laparwah kaise ho gya ? Kyun maine khidakiyan darwaze pehle check nahi kiye ? Mausi ne to kaha tha k sabko doodh me dawa mila kar di hai to fir didi jag kaise rahi hai ? Ye bhi ek bada sawal tha . Khair maine mausi k upar bed sheet daal di aur jaldi se kamre se nikal kar upar ki taraf bhaga. Waise to meri himmat nahi thi didi ka samna karne ki par dil me ye bhi aa raha tha k kahin wo kuch galat na kar baithen ya fir neha didi ya nidhi ko na kuch bata den . Waise to karuna didi mujhse pyar karti thi aur hamare bich bhai behan wala pyar nahi balki bf gf wala pyar tha magar jaisa maine unki ankhon me gussa dekha use dekh kar mujhe dar lag raha tha. Waise bhi wo thoda gusse wali bhi to thi . Main sidiyan charh kar jaise hi upar pahuncha to karuna didi k kamre ka darwaza khula hua hi tha . Main jaise hi andar ghusa to karuna didi ko bed par baitha paya. Unka chehra dusri taraf tha aur bed k kinare baithi thi . Maine niche baith kar unke paon pakad liye

Amit : mujhe maaf kar do didi , please mujhe maaf kar do .

Karuna : rote hue ) tujhe sharam nahi aayi ? Wo meri ma hai aur teri mausi . Aur tu unke sath ... chhiii .

Karuna didi ro rahi thi aur unki ankhon se aansoo behte dekh meri ankhen bhi bhar aayi. Didi k dukh ka karan main tha . Chahe hakeekat jo bhi ho. Chahe hamare beech jo rishta tha wo samaj ki nazron me swikarya nahi tha par fir bhi unki nazron me aaj main khud apni nazron me hi doshi an gya tha . Karuna didi apni jagah sahi thi akhir unhone mujhe sab kuch to de diya tha aur fir bhi main mausi k sath wo sab kar raha tha. Halanki sachai kuch aur thi par filhal main unki nazron me doshi tha. Usi samay me mujhe ek hi bat sahi lagi aur wo ye k sara dosh main apne upar hi lelun. Taki mausi didi k nazron me galat sabit na ho . Warna ma beti k beech ka rishta kadwahat bhara ho jana tha . Aur main aisa katai nahi chahta tha . Main to kabhi kabhi unke yahan ata tha par unhe to har roz har pal yahin ek dusre k sath rehna tha

Amit : mujhe maaf kar do didi . Sab meri galati hai. Main hi bhatak gya tha. Main bahut bura hun. Main maafi k bhi layak nahi hun. Par is sab me mausi ka koi kasoor nahi hai. Sab galati meri hi hai. Maine hi unhe majbur kiya tha . Aap ko jo saza deni hai mujhe do main uff nahi karunga . Magar please mausi ko galat mat samajhna . Main wada karta hun k kabhi apko apni shakal bhi nahi ......

Meri bat puri hone se pehale didi ne mere muh par hath rakh diya .

Karuna : ek dam chup , samjha ? Tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe kuch nahi pata ? Tu jo kahega main wo man lungi ? Sab janti hun main .

Didi ki bat sun kar main hil gya. Iska matlab didi ko sab kuch pta hai . Main hairani se didi ko hi dekh raha tha .

Karuna : dopehar ko hi mujhe laga tha k kuch to gadbad hai jab main college se wapis aayi thi. Ma mujhse chhupane ki koshish kar rahi thi par unki lipstic gayab thi aur unki halat dekh kar mujhe lag hi raha tha k wo kuch aur kar rahi thi par tumhare sath wo ye sab kar sakti hain maine socha nahi tha. Magar tumhari halat bhi kuch waisi hi dekh kar mujhe shak ho gya. Pent me tambu bana rakha tha jo apne aap to nahi bana hoga . Socha tujhse puchungi par tu ghar se nikal gya . Rat ko bhi didi aa gyi to main puch nahi payi. Main tere pas aa hi rahi thi k ma ko upar aate dekha to maine bed par sone ko acting karne lagi. Aur wo mujhe dekhne k bad tere kamre me chali gyi . Mujhe laga zarur kuch to hoga jo main itni der rat tere kamre me aayi hain. Aur tabhi se main sab dekh aur sun rahi thi chhup chhup k . Tum dono me jo bhi baten hui hain maine sab suni hai. Is liye jhuth mat bol. Maine khud sab suna hai k ma ne hi khud is sab ki shuruat ki hai. Magar tu kaise razi ho gya ye sab karne ko ? Tujhe zara bhi khyal nahi aya k Tera unke sath kya rishta hai ? Wo meri ma hai aur mere sath wo sab karne k bad bhi tune unke sath ,,,,,,, kya kami thi mujhme jo tu mujhe chhod kar unke sath ye sab karne laga?

Didi roti hui mujhse sawal kar rahi thi aur meri to himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi k main kuch keh bhi sakun. Unki tarah meri ankhon se bhi aansoo beh rahe the. Magar didi ka aise rona aur dukhi hona meri vajah se hi tha . Main himmat kar k unse fir bat karne ki koshish ki

Amit : didi aap please pehle chup ho jaiye .

Maine jaise hi didi k aansoo pochne ki koshish ki to unhone mere hath jhatak diye.

Karuna: hath mat laga mujhe . Aur please mujhe akela chhod de . Mujhe koi bat nahi karni abhi. Tu ja yahan se .

Amit : par didi meri ........

Karuna : main kaha na mujhe akela chhod de . Ja yahan se .

Didi gusse me thi aur meri bat sunne ko bhi taiyar nahi thi . Main unhe aur dukhi nahi karna chahta tha is liye wahan se utha aur apne kamre me chala gya. Meri ankhon se neend gayab thi . Samajh nahi aa rahi thi k kya karuna . Didi meri vajah se dukhi thi . Aur ab to mujhe dekhna bhi nahi chah rahi thi . Main khud ko kosta hua apne kamre me tehelta rha . Bed par nidhi didi aram se soyi hui thi. Aur ab mujh me itni bhi himmat. Hai ho rahi thi k unke pas bhi baith jaun. Main khud ko bahut akela mehsus kar raha tha . Jo bhi hua uske liye main khud ko hi dosh de rha tha . Didi ki ek ek bat sach thi jo mujhe chain se baithne nahi de rahi thi . Main aise hi apne aapko kosta raha aur kamre ab andhere ki jagah roshni hone lagi thi. Subah ho rahi thi aur kuch hi der me sab jagne wale the magar mere andar himmat nahi thi k main kisi ka samna karun. Is liye main chupchap ghar se nikal gya . Mujhe pata nahi tha k mujhe kahan jana hai aur kya karna hai . Par ab ek pal bhi yahan thehrana mujhe gawara nahi tha. Akhir main kaise samna karta karuna didi ka . Bas isi liye ghar se nikal gya . Main paidal hi chala ja raha tha bas apni soch me duba hua . Chalte chalte mere kadam khud hi Manju m k ghar ki taraf mud gye . Aur jab main unke darwaze tak pahuncha to mujhe hosh aya k main unke ghar par pahunch gya hun. Manju m k ghar ka darwaza khatakhatane ki bhi himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Akhir main yahan kyun aya aur kya kahunga main unse ? Yahi soch kar main wapis mudne laga to Manju m ki awaz mere kano me padi .

Manju : Amit , tum yahan ? Itni subah ? Kahan ja rahe ho ?

Manju m ki awaz sun kar main palta to wo darwaze par hi khadi thi . Unke chehre par muskan thi magar mera chehra dekhte hi ek dam se wo muskan gayab ho gyi aur wo tezi se meri taraf barhi aur mujhe gale se laga liya . Maine khud ko rokne ko bahut koshish ki magar unke gale se lagte hi meri ankhon me ruka hua pani apni seemaaen tod kar bahar nikal aya aur jhar jhar behne laga .

Manju : kya hua hai ? Tum aise ,,,,,, andar aao pehle .

Manju m mujhe apne sath andar le gyi . Darwaza band karte hue wo mujhe sahar dete hue apne kamre me khinch kar le gyi aur bed par bitha diya .

Manju : baitho yahan , main tumhare liye pani le kar ayi.

Manju m kitchen me chali gyi. Unhe meri fikar ho rahi thi. Mujhe samajh nahi aa rahi thi k akhir main unke ps kyun aya ? Main chah kar bhi ye bat to kisi se keh bhi nahi sakta tha . Aur unke sawalon ka ab main koi jawab bhi nahi de sakta tha. Manju m jaldi se pani ka gilas layi aur meri bagal me baith kar apne hathon se wo pani ka gilas mere honthon se laga diya . Na chahte hue bhi mujhe wo pani pina pada halanki mera bilkul bhi man nahi tha .

Manju : ab bataoge bat kya hai ? Tumhari ankhen kyun lal hain ? Aur tumhara ye utra hua chehara ? Kuch hua hai kya ? Please mujhe batao . Mera dil baith ja raha hai.

Amit : please Mam mujhse abhi kuch mat puchiye . Bas itna hi keh sakta hun k koi dar wali bat nahi hai. Bas mujhse ek galati hui hai jisse koi mera apna mujhse bahut naraz ho gya hai. Maine uska dil dukhaya hai. Aur ab meri himmat nahi ho rahi k main uska samna karun. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha k kahan jaun pata nahi kaise main yahan aa gya . Sorry maine aapko disturb.......

Meri bat khatam hone se pehle manju m ne mere honthon par apna hath rakh diya.

Manju : shhhhhh ,,, main aur tumhari vajah se disturb ??? Aisa kabhi sochna bhi mat . Balki mujhe is bat se kitni khushi mili hai ye main hi janti hun k tumne aisi halat me mujhe yad kiya mujh par bharosa kiya aur yahan chale aaye. Khushi to hun kisi k sath bhi bant sakte hain magar gum sirf usi k sath bant te hain jis par hum bharosa karte hain jo dil k kareeb hota hai.

Manju m ne meri ankhon me dekhte hue gambhirta se ye bat kahi halki si muskan honthon par sajaye. Sach hi to kaha tha unhone main khud ko akela mehsus kar raha tha aur kisi k sath apna dard bantna chah raha tha agar gaon me hota to to chhoti mami mere kareeb hoti par aaj unki kami manju m poori kar rahi thi aur na jane kyun main unme wahi apna pan mehsus kar raha tha. Main khud ko rok na paya aur manju m k gale lag gya. Manju m ne bhi mujhe bahon me kas liya aur meri pith sehlane lagi

Manju : relax , tum nahi batana chahte to main bhi nahi puchungi par itna keh deti hun k jo apne hote hain wo kuch pal k liye chahe naraz ho jayen par hamesha k liye nahi hote. Jo bhi tumse naraz hai wo zarur man jayega kyunki tumse koi jyada der naraz reh bhi nahi sakta . Sab bhool kar khud ko shant karo aur thoda samay do. Sab theek ho jayega . Aao yahan late jao. Rat bhar soye nahi na tum ?

Maine Mam ki bat ka koi jawab nahi diya par shayad wo meri halat se sab samajh gyi thi. Isliye unhone mujhe bed par litaya aur mera sir sehlate hue mere sath hi late gyi. Mujhe bahut sukoon mil raha tha . Pata hi nahi chala k kab meri ankhen band hui aur main neend ki agosh me chala gya .

Udhar nidhi jab uthi to khud ko bistar par akela paya . Use laga k Amit shayad jaldi uth kar excercise kar raha hoga is liye wo fresh hui aur dudh ka gilas garam kar k upar chhat par gyi magar Amit wahan nahi tha . Amit ko wahan na pakar wo niche ayi aur sabhi kamron me Amit ko talash kiya . Magar wo kahin na mila . Tab tak Rita uth kar kitchen me chai banane k liye aa gyi .

Nidhi : mausi aapne Amit ko dekha ?

Rita : Amit ? Nahi to , wo to apne kamre me hi hoga .

Nidhi : nahi mausi wo wahan nahi hai . Balki main to chhat par bhi dekh kar aa rahi hun wo wahan bhi nahi hai

Rita : shayad bahar kahin gya hoga . Jakar dekho to darwaza band hai ya khula hai

Nidhi jaldi se bahar ka darwaza dekhne k liye aayi to darwaza khula tha . Matlab Amit bahar gya hai. Kyunki baki sab to ghar me hi the . Nidhi ko kuch tasalli hui aur wo wapis aa kar taiyar hone lagi . Magar uske taiyar hone tak bhi Amit wapis nahi aya. Fir usne Amit ko phone kiya to uska mobile bed par hi pada mila . Jise dekh kar nidhi k man me chinta hone lagi . Nidhi andar se bechain hone lagi . Halanki koi aisi bat nahi thi jisse k Amit pareshan ho par fir bhi na jane kyun use ghabrahat ho rahi thi . Ho bhi kyun na , uska dil to hamesha Amit ko ankhon k samne dekhna chahta tha . Khud ko samjhate hue k shayad Amit mobile sath le jana bhool gya hoga kahin bahar park me gya hoga. Aisi tasalli deti wo neeche aa gyi . Tab tak neha bhi uth kar bahar aa chuki thi . Karuna abhi bhi apne kamre me thi . Wo jag to chuki thi par rat jo kuch bhi usne dekha tha wo fir se uski ankhon k samne ghoom raha tha . Rita nashta bana rahi thi aur neha nidhi dono sath baithi halki dulki baten kar rahi thi .

Neha : didi Amit kahan hai ? Wo to jaldi uth jata hai .

Nidhi : uth to aaj bhi jaldi gya hai . Par wo ghar me nahi hai. Shayad bahar kahin ghumne nikal gya hoga . Uska phone bhi ghar par hi reh gya hai. Main to khud usi k bare me soch rahi thi .

Neha : kya ??? Wo ghar nahi hai? Aur phone bhi ghar par hai? Par aisa to usne kabhi nahi kiya . Aapne ma se bat ki ?

Nidhi : mausi ko bhi bata kar nahi gya .

Neha : kyaa ?? Aapne kisi aur se pucha ? Main abhi Mohit ko phone karti hun tab tak aap radha aur naina se puchiye .

Neha jo hamesha shant hi rehti thi aur sirf kitabon me ghusi rehti thi wo ek dam se adhir ho gyi thi Amit ko is tarah ghar se bina bataye gayab hone par . Wo jaldi se apne kamre me gyi aur Mohit ko phone laga diya magar Mohit se pata chala ko Amit uske sath nahi hai aur na hi dono me aaj koi bat hui hai. Uske bad neha bari bari se sabko phone karne lagi . Aur nidhi bhi harkat me aa gyi thi. Usne bhi naina aur radha se bat ki magar bina kuch zahir kiye. Jawab sab taraf se ek hi tha k Amit ne aaj kisi se bat nahi ko aur na hi uska koi aisa prograam tha . Ab to neha ki ankhon me nami aane lagi thi aur aisa hi hal nidhi ka bhi tha . Magar wo abhi bhi khud ko control kiye hue thi. Jaise jaise samay beet raha tha har pal k sath unki bechaini barh rahi thi.

Neha : didi kuch pata chala ?

Nidhi : nahi , uski kisi se koi bat nahi hui hai . Tujhe kuch pata chala ?

Neha : nahi didi maine sabko phone kar k pucha sabhi friends se magar wo kisi k sath nahi hai aur na hi kisi se bat ki hai usne . Didi mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai . Please aap kuch karo .

Nidhi : ghabra mat wo shayad kahin door nikal gya hoga.

Neha : nahi didi wo aisa kabhi nahi karta zarur koi bat hui hai. Kya aapke sath uski koi bat hui thi ?

Nidhi : nahi to

Neha : fir ? Karuna ,,,, han shayad use pata hoga .

Neha jaldi se sidiyan charh kar upar karuna k kamre ki taraf bhagi aur usi k piche piche nidhi bhi bhagi . Ab to uska man use sambhal nahi raha tha . Chahe wo khud ko majboot dikha rahi thi magar wo andar se kitna ghabra rahi thi ye wahi janti thi . Neha jab karuna k kamre me gyi to karuna bed par leti hui thi aur rat ka wakya yad kar rahi thi .

Neha : karuna Amit kahan hai ?

Karuna jo apne hi khayalon me gum thi wo ek dam se hosh me ayi aur apni dono badi behno k chehre par chinta ki lakeeren aur bheegi ankhen dekh uska dil bhi ghabra gya .

Karuna : kya hua didi ?

Neha : maine pucha Amit kahan hai ? Wo ghar par nahi hai . Kya tune use kuch kaha tha ?

Ye sunte hi karuna andar se hil gyi. Neha ki bat mano bomb ban kar tooti thi us par jisse uska kaleja fat gya . Amit ki roni Surat uski ankhon k samne aa gyi k kaise wo maafi mang kar use manane ki koshish kar raha tha aur usne usse bat tak nahi ki balki apne kamre se chale jane ko keh diya tha aur najane gusse me kya kya keh gyi thi. Halanki bad me sab kuch sochti samajhti wo is nishkarsh par pahunchi thi k jo bhi hua usne Amit ki koi galati nahi thi. Kyunki usne sab kuch to apne kano se suna tha. K kaise uski ma vasna ki aag me jal rahi thi jise uske papa bujha nahi pa rahe the . Aur wo kisi bahar wale k sath bhi ye sab karne ko taiyar ho chuki thi magar Amit ne unki aag ko shant karte hue unke ghar ki izzat ko bachaya tha . Aur yahi sab to wo khud bhi Amit k sath kar chuki thi aise me Amit ya ni ma ko kisi tarah ka dosh dena ab use galat lag raha tha . Wo ye sab Amit ko batana chahti thi khud bat kar k magar usse pehle hi neha ne aakar jo bataya usne karuna ko hila kar rakh diya . Neha ki bat ka jawab dene ki bajaye wo ek jhatke se uthi aur nange paon sidha Amit k kamre ki taraf bhagi mano Amit abhi bhi wahin ho. Magar Amit ka bistar khali tha . Ye dekh kar karuna ki ankhen bhi bhar ayi aur use apni galati par pachtawa hone laga . K usne Amit k sath sahi nahi kiya. Akhir uski kya galati thi. Usne to har kisi ko santusht hi kiya tha apne pyar se fir usne aisa kaise keh diya use ? Apne kahe hue ek ek shabd se ab wo khud hi lajjit ho rahi thi andar se. Karuna khud ko sambhal na payi aur ek dam se neeche girti hui bedsheet ko pakad kar rone lagi. Neha aur nidhi jo karuna k piche hi bhagti hui aayi thi apni natkhat behan ko aise rota hua dekh kar wo bhi hairan hui . Nidhi ne jaldi se karuna ko uthay aur uske aansoo pochne lagi .

Nidhi : chup ,, chup kar . Aise ro kyun rahi hai ? Wo yahin kahin hoga . Abhi aa jayega . Tu chup kar .

Karuna : rote hue ) nahi didi sab meri galati hai . Maine uski bat nahi suni . Sab meri galati hai . Maine uske sath acha nahi kiya . Wo mujhse naraz ho kar chala gya hai . Didi please use wapis bulao main usse maafi mangungi . Please didi maine gusse me use keh diya tha magar mera aisa koi irada nahi tha please didi use bulao

Nidhi aur neha dono hi karuna ki bat sun kar ek dam se chonk gyi.

Neha : gusse me ) kya kaha tune use ? Bol , kya kaha tune use ? Wo teri vajah se hi chala gya hai na ? Kya hua tha ? Kya kaha tha tune use ?

Neha gusse me karuna ko dono bajuon se pakad kar zor zor se hilati hui puch rahi thi. Neha ko kabhi aise gussa nahi ata tha par ab jaise wo aaape se bahar ho rahi thi. Nidhi ne neha ko piche hataya .

Nidhi : kya kar rahi hai neha ? Aise gussa kyun kar rahi hai ? Pehle bat to sun le uski . Karuna mujhe bata kya hua tha ? Kya kaha tha tumne use .

Nidhi ne fir ek bar badi behan hone aur ek paripak shakhsiyat hone ka suboot dete hue dono ko sambhalte hue control karne ki koshish ki .

Karuna : rote hue ) maine gusse me use apne kamre se chale jane ko kaha tha didi huh .........

Neha : gusse me ) par tune use kyun kaha tha kamre se chale jane ko ? Bol kyun kaha tha ? Kya hua tha ?

Ab is sawal par karuna fass gyi thi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha k ab wo kya jawab de . Kisi bhi tarah ki bat muh se nikalne par iska anjam kya ho sakta hai ye use ache se pata tha

Karuna : wo mujhe tang ke raha tha to Maine use gusse se keh diya k wo kamre se nikal jaye .

Nidhi : par wo tumhare pas kab aya ? Wo to mere sath tha na . Aur aisa kya keh diya usne k tum itna gusse ho gyi.

Nidhi karuna k jawab se hairan ho gyi thi k Amit rat ko uske pas kyun gya tha

Karuna : wo didi ,, wo Amit rat ko pani pine k bad kitchen se upar aa raha tha to Maine use dekh kar apne liye pani lane ko kaha to wo mujhe aalsi kehne laga mujhe gussa aa gya to main use gusse se bol kar apne kamre me aa gyi. Wo mere piche piche aa gya . Tab Maine use apne kamre se chale jane ko kaha tha .

Nidhi ko karuna ki bat sun kar bilkul bhi yakeen nahi hua. Kyunki itni chhoti si bat par to Amit aise gussa ho hi nahi sakta tha. Aur na hi karuna jaisi ladki itni chhoti si bat par use aise dant sakti thi

Neha : itni chhoti si bat k liye tune use nikal jane ko kaha ? Tujhe zara bhi sharam nahi aayi aisa karte hue ? Tere liye shayad wo nahi hoga par mere liye mera bhai hai wo. Agar teri vajah se wo yahan se gya to main kabhi tere bat nahi karungi .

Itna keh kar Neha gusse me kamre se nikal gyi. Karuna abhi bhi roye ja rahi thi. Magar nidhi is jawab se santusht nahi thi

Nidhi : karuna , sachai kya hai mujhe bata . Main janti hun tu jhuth bol rahi hai. Zarur bat koi aur hai .

Karuna nidhi k sawal se chup ho gyi aur ghabra bhi gyi k ab wo kya jawab de .

Nidhi : dekh main kisi se nahi kahungi , lekin mujhe sach sach bata bat kya hai.

Karuna : didi ...........

‘ ye tune kya kiya , tujhe zara bhi sharam nahi aayi ye sab karte hue ? Tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai? ‘ meri ma ya divya mausi dono me se kaun thi ye to main nahi janta par wo roti hui ankhon se mujhse ye sawal puch rahi thi k Maine kaise rita mausi k sath aise sambandh banaye. Main khud bhi ro raha tha . Aur mere muh se awaz tak nahi nikal pa rahi thi. Magar ma / mausi ki ankhon me aansoo dekh kar main bhi dard se bhar gya aur tadap kar uth baitha . Maine khud ko bed par paya yani k main Sapna dekh raha tha . Magar aisa lag raha tha jaise sab hakeekat me ho raha hai .

‘ Kya hua tum aise cheekhe kyun ? Koi bura Sapna dekha kya ? ‘ shayad mere muh se awaz nikali thi jisse Manju m ne mujhe apne bahon me bhar liya aur mujhe sehlate hue mujhse puchne lagi

Amit : shayad Sapna dekh raha tha mam .

Manju : main to ghabra hi gyi thi . Kya dekh rahe the sapne me kise dekh rahe the ? Tum ek dam se ma keh kar kyun cheekhe ? Kya ma ka Sapna dekh rahe the ?

Amit : hmmm , ma ka hi tha . Wo mujhse naraz thi . Bas isi liye ...

Manju : tension me the na is liye aisa Sapna aya hoga. Relax sab theek hai. Lagta hai ma k sath hi koi bat hui hai. Khair ma k sath to kabhi narazagi jyada der rehti nahi hai. Ab utho aur fresh ho kar khana kha lo . Itna keh kar mam uth kar kamre se bahar jane lagi

Amit : time kitna hua hai mam?

Manju : 12 bajne wale hain . Jaldi fresh ho kar aa jao tab tak main khana lagati hun .

Man ki bat sun kar main jaldi se bed se utha . Main itni der tak sota raha k adha din guzar gya . Maine jaldi se bathroom me ja kar khud ko fresh kiya aur hall me aa gya . Mam ne hum dono k liye khana laga diye . Wo abhi bhi simple se kapdon me thi ghar me pehnne wale .

Amit : nam aaj aap college nahi gyi ?

Manju : tumhe aise chhod kar bhala main ja sakti thi ? Mere liye tumse zaruri kuch bhi nahi hai.

Amit : sorry mam meri vajah se ....

Manju : sorry kahe ki ? Ye to meri duty hai k main tumhara khyal rakhun . Aur ye mam mam kya lag rakha hai? Nam bhi to le sakte ho na mera. Chalo ab khana khao .

Manju m ko is tarah apni parwah karte dekhna mujhe bahut acha lag raha tha. Hum dono sath me khana khane lage . Manju ne apne hathon se mujhe khilaya. Achi neend lene se main ek dam relax ho chuka tha aur rat ka kissa bhi dimag se bahar tha is waqt. Khana khane k bad

Manju : ghar par bata kar nikle the ya aise hi aa gye the bina bataye ? Ek bar bat karlo ghar


Manju ki bat sun kar mera dimag chala to maine apni jeb me hath dala magar mobile jeb me nahi tha wo to ghar hi reh gya tha. Ek pal me hi mujhe tension hone lagi k main bina bataye ghar se nikal aya hun aur mobile bhi mere pass nahi hai . Mausi aur baki sab ko tension ho rahi hogi . Tabhi darwaze par bell baji . Manju m ne darwaza khola to samne Mohit aur nidhi didi the .....
Superb raja bhai.......
Ye dono yaha kaise aa gayi.....
Amit ka kitna accha ye secret place tha shayed ab ye secret nhi rahega. Ise secret hi rahna chahiye tha......
Waiting for your next update.....
 
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