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[Shahrukh]

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Update 243



‘ To ab kaun kahan soyega ? ‘ khana khane k bad rita mausi ne ye bat kahi . Waise to hum sab pehle hi adjust ho hi jate the par aaj bua k sath sath uncle aunty bhi the aur sath me karishma didi aur Mohit .

Deepika : Raghav bhai sahab aur Rama bhabhi ko amit ka kamra de dete hain didi. Karishma nidhi k sath ho jayegi aur inke sath Neha Radha . Karuna naina Kalpana k ek sath so jayengi . Aap divya didi aur badi didi ek sath so jana . Amit aur Mohit ek sath so jayenge .

Rita : par itne kamre kahan hain. Upar se sardi ka mausam .

Amit : main aur Mohit raju k ghar so sakte hain.

Gauri : nahi , koi bahar nahi jayega.

Rama : Mohit aur Amit hamare sath hi so jayenge .

Divya : mere khyal se karishma aur Mohit Raghav bhaiya k sath hi so jayenge . Nidhi Neha k sath Radha aur rajani didi. Karuna Kalpana Naina k sath Rita didi . Aur ek me main Manju aur Amit so jayenge.

Divya mausi k is sujhav par sab sehmat ho gye . Aur usi hisab se extra charpayi laga kar kamron ke jagah bana di gyi . Naina didi aur karuna didi thoda muh bana rahi thi k mausi unke sath soyengi. Dono ka shayad kuch aur hi program tha . Manju bua bhi is sujhav se khush thi. Par filhal baton ka silsila jari hi tha . Itne salon ki kasar aaj hi nikalne ka soche baithe the sab . Magar ma ne sabko sakhti se sone ka aadesh de diya . Sabka intzam karne k bad Deepika mami aur main jab free hue to mami ne mujhe apne kamre me jane ko kaha . Mausi aur bua pehle hi kamre me chali gyi thi . Main jab wahan pahuncha to apne liye alag se lagai charapai par pasar gya .

Divya : tum wahan kyun let rahe ho ? Idhar aao bed par .

Amit : par mausi ye charapai hai na mere liye .

Divya : to kya hua , chupchap idhar aao . Aaj Manju itne salon bad ayi hai to ab tu door rahega . Waise bhi jab se aayi hai tab se har koi ise gher kar baitha hai aur tu door door reh raha hai .

Manju : koi bat nahi didi , ye to mere pas hi rahega ab se . Baki sab to apne apne ghar rahenge par ise main apne pas rakhungi .

Divya : aate hi ise hum sab se cheenne ka irada bana liya tumne ?

Manju : maine aisa kab kaha didi ?

Divya : to fir ? Agar tu ise apne pas rakhegi to baki sab ka kya ?

Manju : mere kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha didi . Main to bas ye keh rahi thi ....

Manju bua divya mausi ki baton se thoda ghabra si gyi hai . Divya mausi k chehre par gussa aur sakht awaz se unhe lag raha tha k mausi gusse me aa gyi hai . Mujhe bhi ek pal aisa laga par agle hi pal divya mausi muskurane lagi aur bua ka chehra apne hathon me lekar boli .

Divya : mazak kar rahi thi meri bholi Manju . Tera bhi barabar ka hak hai is par sabki tarah balki jyada hi hai. Itne salon ki kasar jo nikalni hai tumne . Chal ab muskura de thoda sa. Aur tu kya dekh raha hai ? Chal idhar aa hum dono k beech let ja aa kar .

Divya mausi ko muskurata dekh kar Manju bua bhi muskurane lagi aur meri taraf dono ne unhe pyar se dekha . Main bhi mausi ki bat mante hue dono k beech aa gya.

Amit : lo mausi main aa gya par meri vajah se aap dono ko dikkat hogi. Itni jagah thoda hai bed par . Ek kam karta hun ek aur kambal pakad leta hun.

Divya : bahut jagah hai aur koi zarurat nahi kambal ki . Ye hai to double bed wala . Aur tujhe kya hum dono moti nazar aati hain ho jagah kam padegi. Dekhle Manju apne bhatije ko . Ise hamare sath dikkat hai .

Amit : maine kab aisa kaha mausi , mujhe bhala kya dikkat hogi . Main to khushnaseeb hun jo mere agal bagal itni khubsurat aurten maujood hain.

Divya : mujhe marte hue ) besharam,,, abhi batati hun tujhe .

Manju : main ise pakadti hun didi aap maro ise meri taraf se bhi .

Ab scene ye tha k main bed par leta tha dono k beech aur main divya mausi se bachne k liye jaise hi palta Manju bua ne mere baju pakad liye aur divya mausi meri peeth par marne lagi. Wo halke hathon se mar rahi thi par main dikhawa aise kar raha tha jaise bahut zor se mar pad rahi ho . Dono hi meri is acting ka maza le rahi thi .

Amit : aaaa mausi aaa mar gya mausi chhod do mausi fir se aisa nahi karunga . Bua bachao please bua bacha lo aaaaa maaa

Divya : ab bol kya bol raha tha ? Ab bolega aisa ?

Amit : nahi mausi ab nahi bolunga . Aaa

Mausi ne jaise hi marna band kiya to bua ne bhi mujhe chhod diya . Main apni peeth malte hue sidha hua to bua aur mausi dono mujhe dekh kar has rahi thi .

Divya : ab bol kya bol raha tha .

Amit : kya bolun ? Aapne to meri bolti hi band kar di . Sach kahun to aapke komal hathon se mar kha kar maza bahut aya . Aise lag raha tha jaise pyar se malish kar rahi hain. Sach me khubsurat aurat k hathon se mar khana bhi mazedar hai .

Divya : kya kaha , ab dekh tera kya hal karti hun main .

Divya mausi fir se gusse me aa gyi aur is bar apne dono hathon se mera gala hi daba diya. Ye sab wo mazak me kar rahi thi par unki is harkat se meri hawa tight ho gyi kyunki is bar main sidha leta hua tha aur mausi mera gala dabane k chakkar me meri chhati par hi aa gyi . Mausi to mera gala daba rahi thi par mausi k thos stan meri chhati daba rahe the . Mausi k komal stano ka ehsas mere khoon me garmi paida karne laga . Isse pehle k mera land sir uthata Maine mausi ko apne upar se hatane ki koshish ki to mausi bhi mere sath zor aazmaish karne lagi .

Amit : aaaaahhhhh

Divya : aaahhhh. ccccccccc

Mere aur mausi k muh se ek sath awaz nikali jise sun kar bua chaunk gyi .

Manju : kya hua ?? Tujhe kahin chot to nahi lagi ? Didi aapko kya hua ?

Asal me hua ye tha k divya mausi mere sath kushti ladti mere upar hi aa gyi thi . Is dauran Unka dayan ghutna mere land par zor se lag gya jis se mere muh se aaj nikal gyi. Dard se main jhatpataya aur be dhyani me mera dayan hath mausi k bayen chutad par zor se kas gya . Dard ki vajah se maine zor se muthi bheench li thi. Halanki mujhe tab pata bhi nahi chala tha k mera hath kahan hai magar mausi ki siski aur Manju bua k sawal se mera dhyan jab apne hath par gya to mujhe ehsas hua . Maine jaldi se hath mausi k chutad se hataya aur palat gya. Kyunki na to mausi ka samna karne ki mujh me himmat thi aur na main Manju bua ko mausi k samne ye bata sakta tha k main kyun cheekha hun.

Manju : tu bolta kyun nahi ?? Kya hua tujhe ?

Amit : kuch nahi bua wo main bas mazak kar raha tha .

Manju : tu sach bol raha hai na ? ,,,, didi aapko kya hua ?

Divya mausi jo abhi tak khamosh thi wo bua k sawal se hadbada gyi .

Divya : kk ku kuch nahi kuch bhi to nahi . Wo mera hath mud gya tha .

Manju : dekh le , teri vajah se didi ko chot lag gyi aur tera mazak hi nahi khatam hota . Chal ab chupchap apne bistar par ja .

Divya : nahi , rehne de na Manju , isme iski kya galati hai . Meri hi galti thi. Main light band kar deti hun ab sauté hain.

Divya ( man me ) kya Amit ne janbujh kar mere wahan hath lagaya hoga ? Shayad galati se lag gya hoga . Kitna zor se masla hai ccc abhi tak aise lag raha hai jaise amit abhi bhi wahan daba raha hai. Kahin isne janbujh kar to nahi kiya ?

Divya mausi ne jab tak light band nahi kar di main ulta hi leta raha. Fir jab wo bed par wapis aa gyi to Maine bed se uthne ki koshish ki to mausi ne mujhe rok diya

Divya : chupchap yahin leta reh aayi bat samajh me .

Marta kya na karta , main chupchap sidha let gya . Magar man me uthal puthal machi hui thi . Mere dimag me Deepika mami ki baten ghumne lagi . Man me chhipa shaitan meri soch par haawi hota ja raha tha . Mere ek taraf Manju bua leti thi jinke sath main pehle bhi kai bar pyar bhare pal bita chuka tha aur dusri taraf meri pyari divya mausi jinke sath lagatar koi na koi aisi ghatna hoti ja rahi thi k mere andar unke prati galat vichar ghar karne lage the . Maine andhere me bas ankhen band kiye mausi aur bua k bare me sochta raha . Pta nahi kab tak main apni soch me duba raha , neend thi k aaj aa hi nahi rahi thi. Bua aur mausi shayad kab ki so chuki thi aur main ullu ki tarah jag raha tha . Tabhi divya mausi neend me karwat badalti mere kareeb aa gyi .

Divya : jyada zor se to nahi lagi na ?

Divya mausi ne sargoahi ki to main chaunk gya . Iska matlab divya mausi bhi jaag rahi thi magar kyun ? Aur agar jag rahi thi to itni der se sone ki acting kyun kar rahi thi . Aur upar se aisa sawal, jo bat main chhupa raha tha wo ab samne se hi puch rahi thi . Matlab unhe pata tha k kya hua hai . Par main mausi k sawal par kuch nahi bola aur waise hi pada raha .

Divya : I am sorry , Maine Jan bujh kar nahi kiya tha . Tumhe jyada dard to nahi hua na ?

Amit : koi bat nahi mausi , main janta hun sab anjane me hua . Aur please aap mujhe bhi maaf kar do . Mere hath anjane me .....

Divya : janti hun , isi liye maine bura nahi mana . Chal ab kuch mat soch aur aram se so ja .

Mausi ki bat sun kar mujhe acha lga . Main karwat badal kar mausi ki taraf ghumne laga to usi dauran mausi bhi shayad mera gaal ta matha chumne k liye meri taraf jhuki thi aur hamare chehre ek dusre k samne aa gye aur honthon se honth jud gye . Ye sab andhere k karan hua tha . Na mausi ne aisa socha tha na maine . Magar honthon se honth judte hi mano hum dono hi butt ban gye . Na mausi koi harkat kar rahi thi na hi main. Hum dono k honth bas apas me jude hi the , sirf touch karte hue. Par is touch se hi shareer sunn pad gya tha . Achanak se mausi piche hui aur karwat badal kar meri taraf pith kar li.

Divya : man me ) hay bhagwan ye Maine kya kar diya ,, ye mujhse kaise ho gya ,,, Amit kya soch raha hoga mere bare me ,,, pehle use wahan par touch kar baithi aur ab sidha Honthon par hi ... ye mujhe kya hota ja raha hai ,,, kyun main apne aap se hi bahar hoti jati hun iske pas hone par hi. ..

main jo abhi tak shunya me tha mausi k palat jane se mujhe bhi hosh aya aur main bhi apni barhi hui dhadkano ko kabu karta hua sidha let gya aur apne chehre par halke hath se thappad laga kar khud ko hosh me lane ki koshish karne laga . Divya mausi aur main chahe khud se alag ho gye the aur wo touch bhi bhi kuch palon ka hi tha magar uska ehsas mujhe andar se romanchit kiye ja rha tha . Ek bar fir dimag par shaitan haawi hone laga tha magar main khud ko rokne ki koshish karte hue ankhen band kar k sone ki koshish karne laga . Mera dhyan apne land par gya to wo sala pehle hi top bana khada tha . Ab is mahol me use shant karne ka aur koi tareeka to tha nahi. Aur ab aise uth kar jata to mausi pata nahi kya sochti . Soch ab bhi rahi hogi par abhi jo bhi hua wo anjane me hua tha. Main khud ko control karta ankhen band kiye sone ki koshish kar raha tha . Mausi bhi aisa hi kuch kar rahi thi halanki neend dono ko hi nahi aane wali thi . Ek bar fir se poore kamre me sannata pasar gya tha .

Amit : I am sorry mausi wo Maine jan bujh kar nahin kiya .

Maine jijhajhakte hue mausi se bat karne ki koshish ki par mausi ne koi jawab nahi diya . Mujhe laga mausi so gyi shayad ya wo bat nahi karna chahti . Maine dobara se mausi se bat karne ki koshish ki par himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi . Is liye karwat dusri taraf kar k sone ki koshish karne laga .

Pata nahi kab meri aankh lagi par sapne me bhi mere sath divya mausi hi mujhe nazar aayi aur maine unhe apni bahon me kase hue lete lete hi unke piche se apna land unki choot me ghusa raha tha . Hum dono ek taraf muh liye karwat k bal lete hue the aur mera dayan hath mausi k dayen stan par tha . Mausi k sath main itna jyada excited ho raha tha k land ko poore zor se ghusaye ja raha tha. Excitement me maine kuch jyada hi zor se mausi k boobs ko daba diya aur mausi k muh se aaj nikal gyi . Is k sath meri aankh khul gyi kyunki mujhe kisi ne dhakka diya tha . Main hadbada gya kamre me andhera tha is liye kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha . Par jab thoda sa hosh aya to mujhe bua ki awaz sunai di .

Manju : ye kya kar rahe the tum ? Maine tumhe samjhaya tha na , fir bhi tum ......

Bua ki bat sun kar mujhe samajh aya k main sapne me jo kuch kar mausi k sath kar raha tha asal me wo Sapna nahi tha aur mausi ki jagah bua thi.

Amit : I am sorry bua ,, wo neeennd me galati se .......

Manju : jao udhar charapai par so jao , kahin didi k sath aisi harkat kar di to kya muh dikhaoge .

Main sharminda sa hokar bed se utar gya aur apne charapai par chala gya . Bua ne sahi kaha tha kahin ye harkat mausi k sath ho jati to pta nahi kya hota . Manju bua k sath chahe main pehle jaise bhi raha par ab wo bhi mujhse door hi rehna chahti thi to main bhi unhe majbur nahi karna chahta tha . Is liye chupchap sone ki koshish karne laga aur pata nahi kahi kab neend aa gyi.



‘ chhod dijiye mujhe , warna main chillaungi . ‘ BALJEET rai bahar se hi aaj sharab pee kar ghar lauta tha aur aaj soch ke aya tha k wo Rupali k sath chudai karega . Bahut dino se Rupali uske hath nahi aayi thi aur dusra Manju ko ghar lane ka kam bhi wo Rupali se ho karwana chahta tha . Is liye ghar aate hi wo sidha Rupali k kamre me gya . Kismat se Rupali is waqt kamre me akeli thi. BALJEET rai k ghar aane k bare me koi nahi janta tha is liye Sheena bhi is waqt apni chachi k sath nahi thi . Mauka acha jan kar BALJEET rai ne Rupali ko daboch liya tha . Magar Rupali usse bachne k liye jaddojehed kar rahi thi .

BALJEET rai : chilla sali , chilla. Bula jisko bulana hai. Nakhra to aise kar rahi hai jaise main pehli bar kar raha hun. Aaj kal teri garmi koi aur thandi kar raha hai jo mere pas nahi aati . Mat bhool k meri bat na manne ka anjam kya hoga .

Rupali beachari apni beti k samne apni izzat kharab hone k dar se chilla bhi nahi sakti thi aur ye bat BALJEET rai achi tarah janta tha . Waise bhi itni salon me wo Rupali ko anginat bar apne neeche la chuka tha to wo nishchint tha k wo kuch karegi . Rupali ki ankhon me fir se bebasi k aansoo aa gye . Is waqt use Amit ki yad aa rahi thi . Uske wada kiya tha k wo use bachayega par aaj wo akeli fir se usi shaitan k aage bebas thi. Jo use hamesha apne niche rondata tha aur uski betiyon par bhi nazar rakhta tha . Rupali man hi man bhagwan se prarthna kar rahi thi k wo kisi tarah use bacha le .

BALJEET rai : chal ab nakhre chhod ise muh me le .

BALJEET rai ne Rupali ko shant dekha aur jhat se apni zip khol kar apna land bahar nikal kar Rupali ko use muh me lene ko kaha . Rupali roti ankhon se abhi bhi kisi madad ki aas me darwaze ki taraf hi dekh rahi thi .

‘ thak thak thak ‘ darwaze par dastak hui to Rupali ki ankhen ummeed me badi ho gyi. Jabki BALJEET rai ne jhunjhala kar ek bar darwaze ki taraf dekha aur fir Rupali ko pakad kar uske kaan me bola .

BALJEET rai : jo bhi ho use darwaze se hi taal dena warna tu janti hai mujhe .

Rupali bechari lachari me darwaze ki taraf chal padi . Ek ek kadam chalti wo bhagwan se madad hi mang rahi thi aur jaise hi usne darwaza khola to Sheena darwaze ko dhakelti hui andar aa gyi.

Sheena : kya chachi , itni der darwaza kholne me ....... papa !!! Aap kab aaye? Aapne apne aane ki khabar tak nahi di kisi ko ?

Sheena Rupali se bat karti andar ayi par jab uski nazar samne khade apne baap par gyi to hairan ho gyi . Shock to BALJEET rai bhi ho gya tha . Uska KLPD jo ho gya tha . Wahin Rupali ka dil Sheena ko duayen de raha tha k usne aa ke use bacha liya .

BALJEET rai : hhh han beta wo bas abhi aya hi hun . Mujhe laga tu yahan hogi to sidha yahin chala aya . Aaj kal chachi k pas jyada rehti hai na tu .

Sheena : han ye to bilkul sahi hai aur aaj bhi main chachi k pas hi sone wali hun . Par aap yahan hain aur ghar me kisi ko pata tak nahi , ye koi bat hui ?

BALJEET rai : maine kaha na bas abhi aya hi hun . Socha pehle apni rajkumari se mil lun to yahan chala aya . Tu kaise hai meri pyari beti?

Sheena : main to ek dam fir hun papa . Aap shayad thak gye honge . Chaliye main pehle aapka khana lagwati hun fir aap aram kar lena. Chachi aap bhi thoda aram kar lo . Aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai na subah se .

Sheena ne janbujh kar Rupali ki tabiyat ki bat kahi to Rupali ne bhi bas sir hila kar sehmati jatayi .

BALJEET rai : kya ? Tumhari tabiyat kharab hai aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi .

Sheena : chachi aisi hi hai papa , aap chaliye aur chachi ko aram karne dijiye .

BALJEET rai : theek hai , waise mujhe ek bat karni thi ab tum bhi yahin ho to dono se keh deta hun. Itna bada ghar hone k bad bhi Manju wahan chhote se ghar me akeli reh rahi hai , ye koi achi bat hai ? Society me log baten bana rahe hain. Maine pehle bhi tumhe kaha tha k use ghar le aao.

Sheena : papa maine pehle bhi bataya tha k bua yahaan nahi ana chahti aur wo nahi aayengi.

BALJEET rai : akhir kyun nahi aayegi wo ? Dekho main janta hun wo mujhse naraz hai par tum to use mana sakti ho na . Main bhi usse maafi mang lunga , bas use ghar wapis le aao. Mujhse bahut galtiyan hui hain par ab main sab theek krna chahta hun.

Sheena ko to ek bar apne baap ki bat sun kar bahut acha laga aur uske chehre par khushi ki lehar aa gyi magar Rupali k chehre par vyang bhari halki si muskan thi kyunki wo janti thi k kutte ki punch sidhi nahi ho sakti .

Sheena : sach papa !!! Fir to hum bua ko kaise bhi kar k mana lenge aur ghar le aayenge . Hum subah hi bua k pas chalenge . Aap bhi sath chalna .

BALJEET rai : pehle tum sab jao , main gya to shayad wo gussa kare . Ek bar wo yahan aa gyi to main use mana hi lunga .

Sheena : ye bhi theek hai , chachi aap subah taiyar rehna . Main aap aur Rima kal bua ko ghar le kar aayenge .

Rupali : theek hai beti kal hum chalenge .

Sheena : chalo papa , aaj main aapko apne hathon se khana laga kar deti hun. Chaliye .

Sheena apne bap ka hath pakad use khinchti hui apne sath kamre se bahar le gyi. Sheena to bechari apni bua ko ghar lane ki bat se hi khush thi . Aur use lag raha tha k uska bap sudhar gya hai shayad. Magar use kya pata tha k Manju ko ghar lane k piche bhi uska koi aur hi irada hai .

Awesome update

 

[Kavyanjali143]

Fantastic update

 

[Raja chouhan]

Awesome Updateee


Ab Baljeet Rai Amit ka pata lagwa raha hai agar uski asliyat pata chal gayi toh shayad uski jaan ko khatra ho.

Par filhal Rupali ki izaat ko khatraa hai. Dekhte hai Rupali ki izaat kaisee bachti hai.

Ek request hai Rupali Rima inki izaat ko kuch mat hone denaaa

Fantastic update bhai..

Reply dene ke liye dhanyawad Raja bhai. Umeed hai un dono ko abhi kewal Amit ka humesha ke liye saath naseeb ho varna kahani thodi Mere Parivar aur Mera Gaon jaisi ho jaaegi. Aise hi shaandar dhang se apne hisaab se likhte rahiye aur apne samay aaram se lekar update de. Itni zabardast kahani ke liye fir se dhanyawad.

Zabardast update

Awesome updates

Brother in blood sex relationship is not allowed in india apne dekha hoga sausr bahu ya phir devar bhabhi ka sex scene kyunki unka blood relation nahi hota ...

Nice update bhai

Nice update....

shandaar updatee bhai

Bahut hi shandar update

Awesome update tha bro aur deepika mami bhi ab purane andaaz mein laut rahi hai jiska jikr unhone amit ko divya ke baare mein batate huye kaha aur fir manju aur raghav ke parivar ke punarmilan bahut hi accha tha shaandar family entertainment wala update❤

Zabardast update

Super update hai Bhai

Jabardast update

Awesome update brother waiting for new update

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai

Nice update raja bhai

Nice n fantastic updated

awesome update hai raja bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
Ab ye baljeet rai phir se rupali ka use karne ki sonch raha hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Bohot hi umda update.

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Jabardast update

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Bahot khoob superb

Bahut hi behtreen update Raja chouhan bhai.....

Bahtreen update bhai

Nice update

mast update raja bhai

Excellent update bhai

Nice update bhai

Waiting for new update bhai

Bhai Update Bahot Hi Lajawaab tha Family Scene Emotional tha aur Shayad Karishma ka No. Nidhi Aur Divya se Pahele Aayega, Pichla Update aur Aaj ka Update Padhne ke Baad lag raha ke Amit ke liye Khatra Badh Jaayega aur is Chakkar me Shayad Vijay Yaani Amit ke Baba ko Apni Jaan ki Baazi Lagani Padegi Aisi Feeling aa Rahi hai Bhai is Liye Likh Raha Hu Baaki Aap Jaano Aapne Kya Socha hai Aage Aapko hi Pata Hai ke Kya Hone Wala Hai.

Nice update...

Fantastic Update

Nice updates bro

Nice update

Nice update bhai ji

Shaandar update Raja bhai. Agle update ka intzaar rahega aur ho sake to length thodi jyada rakhna halanki time nikalna thoda mushkil hota hai.

Superb update

Noice Update ...
Deepika ne amit ko iss baat se taaruf kara diya ki jo kuch uske aur manju k beech jo rishta tha woh aise khatam na hone wala.. woh abhi k liye dbaa jrur hai... Wahi dusri tarf baljeet bhi hath dhoobk padaa hai ritu k... Aur iss se usse kafi kuch ptaa chal gaya hai... Lekin usse abhi rishta na ptaa amit ka manju se... aur usne ab amit k peeche apne laug bhi lagaa diye hai uski jaankari nikalne k liye... Dekhte hai yeh ghatnakram kya mod laata hai... Wahi dusri tarf baljeet ab phirse Rupali ki tarf apna rukh kar raha Abhi tak to Amit ne us se uss se bachaya hua tha par abb baljeet rupali k through manju ko use karna chahta hai jaankari nikalwane k liye amit ki... Par dekhna yeh hoga ki rupali bach pati hai ya nhi Baljeet se.. aur amit ko sachhai ptaa kaise lagti hai apne sautele chachao ki...
Abhi sabhi khush hai ganv mein aur Mel milap chal raha hai... Shayad yeh sannata hai tufaan aane se pehle ka...
Brilliantly written...
keep writing ...
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Nice update. Waiting for next update

Rasprad aur Romanchak kahani. Emotional bhi hai. Pratiksha agle update ki

Zabardast update Raja chouhan bhai...

Superb Raja bhai.....
Ab lagta hai baljeet rai v amit k peeche lag gaya hai. Bahut jald use pata chal jayega ki amit kon hai or amit ko v pata chal jayega ki uske pita k saath kya hua tha.....
Dhekthe hai baljeet rai manju se kaise milta hai. Wo shayed rupali ko bhejne wala hai Manju se milne. Ab shayed rupali ko amit k bare mai pata chalega hi saath saath Rima ko v amit k berukhi ka karan pata chalega. Dhekthe hai uske baad amit or Rima k love story ka kya hota hai. Rina ko jab pata chalega ki amit uska bhai hai to uske v share Arman pe pani phir jayega. Pata chalne k baad Rina kya karegi wo v kafi dilchasp hone wala hai......
Lagta hai ab saare patte ek saath khulne wala hai.....
Waiting for your next update.....

Mast update hai

Mast shaandar behtreen update

Awesome update bro

Nice update...

Excellent superb update bhai

Dhekthe hai baljeet rai manju se kaise milta hai.........
Wo shayed rupali ko bhejne wala hai Manju se milne.......
Ab shayed rupali ko amit k bare mai pata chalega hi saath saath Rima ko v amit k berukhi ka karan pata chalega......
Dhekthe hai uske baad amit or Rima k love story ka kya hota hai.......
Rina ko jab pata chalega ki amit uska bhai hai to uske v share Arman pe pani phir jayega......
Pata chalne k baad Rina kya karegi wo v kafi dilchasp hone wala hai......

Bahut badhiya update

Nice family update but bich me ye Baljeet Rai ka seen atak sa gya dimag me sala phir rupali k piche pad gya ab bhagwan hi bachaye use Sheena k roop me
Waiting for next update bhaiya

Raja chouhan bhai ye story wonderful hai lekin late update ke karn kabhi kabhi intrest khatam hone. Lagta hai

Xforum par kuch stories itni acchi hai ki kabhi kabhar wait krne ka man nahi manta

madhu bua ka pariwarik milan mein hi aaj ka din nikal gaya... raghav jee bhi aaye... kehne ko madhu hi toh unki bhi behen thee... dost ke jaane ke baad usse bhi nata toot gaya... lekin iten rasuukhdar aadmi apni behen ko na dhundh paya.... jabki wo issi sahar mein rahte the... aur phir kya madhu bua kee tashveer bhi na thee koi unke ghar mein kya jo mohit bhi na pehchan saka... akhir kaisa pyar tha in logo ka jo ek yaad bhi na sanjo ke rakhha tha... akhir dost the amit ke pita kya unke saath madhu bua kee tashveer toh jaroor honi chahiye thee...

khair ant bhal toh shab bhala... aaj itne barsho baad shab mil gaye.. lekin shabme madhu bua ko saath rakhne kee hor laggee hui hain... pehle yahee hor amit ko saath rakhne kee thee... khair deepika mami ne amit ko aaj ko uss sach se avgat karwa diya jisse wo jaanke bhi anjan ban raha tha.... divya mausi,,, inki najar ka pyar unhone ne padh liya.... amit jo mehsoos karta tha wo shab uska bhram matra na ho ke sach hain.... wo abhi bhi isse wakt ke hawale chhor dena chahta hain.... lekin kab tak... ek madhu bua ka bhi sach hain... kaheen wo avsad mein na chali jaye apne bhatije/premi mein se chunte chunte.... akhir apni zindagi ke un haseen palo ko kaise ek hi jhatke mein bhool jayega... waise agar amit kee mamio ka sach agar maloom chalega toh unki glani jaati rahegi... akhir jis dar se wo pechhe hat rahi hain... wo dar se toh kayee log pare nikal chuke hain... aur iss ghar ke do purush ko toh yeh tak pata hain kee amit ke sambandh bhi hain unki patnio ke saath...

akhir jab yeh sach divya ko maloom chalega toh kya beetegi unpar... chahti toh wo bhi yahee hain... lekin bas apne liye... thora swarthi hain aur nadan bhi unka pyar... wajah hamesha khoti hee toh aaye hain... pehle jaan se pyari behen... aur phir pati bhi mila toh kabhi usne pyar na diya jiske aapeksha thee... toh lajmi hain aadmi thora simat jata hain... jo bhi uske pass hain uske liye had se jyada possessive ho jata hain.... shayad yahee dar kabhi kabhi unke man mein satane lagta hain.... aur jo sapne damini aur divya ne amit aur radha ke liye dekhe the kya wo kabhi pura karegi...

lekin inke pati ka bhi samajh na aata hain... bhala na chitthi na koi sandesh jane wo kaun se desh jana wo chale gaye.. are dubai hain re... lekin dubai mein tel ka kuan toh na khodne baith gayee... jo sala abhi tak khuda hee na hain.... aur bhala aise rishte mein divya mausee rah kahe rahi hain... jahan na payr hain na parwah... bas naam ka rishta hain.... shayd radha ke liye... lekin kab tak ghutti rahegi.. akhir radha bhi toh samjhegi apni maa kee ghutan ko... sirf maa-baap hi sacrifice kyun kare... aulaado ka bhi toh farz banta hain.... jab baat maa aur baap mein se chunne kee baari aayegi toh zahir hain wo maa ko chunegi... lekin kisi bhi larki ke lie uska baap bara ajeez hota hain... lekin wo pyar dene ke liye toh wo kabhi paas the hi nahin... khair dekhte hain...


balwant ray ko najar ab amit tak pahunch gayeee... jis kari se itne saalo door bhaag raha tha wo khud ba khud uss tak pahunch rahi hain... akhir wo sach samne aayega hhi... aaj amit ne bhi apne baba se apne pita kee maut ka sach janna chaha jisse unhone bari safai se bargla diya... lekin unke andaaj ne ek shak kee sui bo diye uske dil mein... kya yeh baat jaan kar kee uske maa-baap kee maut swabhawik nahin hatya thee wo shant rahega...lekin karega bhi kya gandu... jaise manjri kee maut ko bhula baitha hain... yehan bhi shant ho jayega... kuchh din taraf ke.... balwant ray aur amit badh dono ek doosre kee taraf hi rahe hain... bas pehla waar kaun karta hain... amit ke pass khone ke liye bahut log hain... balwant ke pass shayad na ke barabar .... apne beti sheena se usse pyar hain... aur wahee sheena amit ko pyar karti hain... kya wo dhal banegi jab apne hi baap kee kartoote ka maloom chalega... akhir baap aur pyar mein kisse chunegi aksar chunav alag hote hain... lekin jab baap galat ho tab kya? khair yeh toh bhavishya ke sawal hain...

dekhte hain kitni sachhai inhe maloom chalta hain.. jab maloom chalega balwant ko keee yeh ussi ka bhatija hain toh,,, jise wo mara hua maan raha tha... aaj wo jinda aur uske samne khara hain...jis samrajya pe aaj wo raj kar raha hain... uske waaris hain wo... khair paiso kee chah toh amit ko na hain... lekin jo uska haq hain usse kaise chhor de... uske pita kee mehnat aur unki hatya ummed nikat bhavihsya mein kuchh takrav kee....

Rasprad aur Romanchak kahani. Emotional bhi hai. Pratiksha agle update ki

badhiya update bhai

Very nice update

राजा चौहान भाइ

आपका ये स्टोरी बहुत धांसु है. पढ़कर मजा आ रह है, अभि में एपिसोड १९२ में हुं। यह स्टोरी मैने १० दिन पहले स्टार्ट कि थि। छोडनेका मन नहीं करत।

मुझे आपका राइतिङ्ग स्किल अच्छा लगा, सुरुके २० या २५ एपिसोड तक ठिक था पर उसके बाद बहुत हि अच्छा लिख रहे है।

स्टोरी ओभर अल बहुत अच्छी है। हँसि मजाक है और इमोसनल भी है, हर एपिसोड मे आँशु निकलते हैं।

इस सबके बावजुद कुछ खामिया भी है।

सबसे पहला बलदेब राय का नाम। अमितके किसी भी रिस्तेदार ने इस सहरमे बलदेव राय क नाम नही सुना, जबकि वो बहुत बडी तोप है। खैर छोडो नाम सुन होगा , लेकिन अपनी बेटियो कि फ्रेन्ड ,बलदेव राय कि बेटी है , ये पता नहीं। यार जो बच्चे घर आते है, उनसे पुछा जाता है बेटा आपके डैड कौन है क्या करते है वगैरह वगैरह, लेकिन नाम क जिक्र नही आया । रजनी मौशी नही जानती थि निधि देश के जिस सबसे बडी कम्पनि मे काम करती थि उसका मालिक कौन है. हाइवे कि किसी होटल मे बलदेब राय और नारायण दास क पोस्टर लागि हुवा होता है लेकिन उसके अफिसमे नही, होता तोह रजनी को दिख जाति।

शीना के अपने जन्मदिन पर, जीस सख्स ने पार्टी राखी, वोह भी इतनी फेमस जगह, उसका नाम नही पता।

दुसरा अमित खुद

जो बन्दा ८०% लाकर पास होता है वोह भी गांव से और जो किताबी किडा भी नही है , उसका इन्टेलिजेन्स लेभेल ४०% वाला बन्दे से भी कम है। लेकिन किसी किसी जगह वो १००% वाला काम करता है जैसे मंजरिके चाचा के वारेमें उसको शक् होता है।
येह एक अल्फा मेल टाइप का बन्दा है, लेकिन लड़की बहुत कम है, काम करने कि लिए।
करिश्मा जब गांव आती है अमित से माफी माग्ने, तब भी वोह माफ नही करता।

जो भी हो दुसरे राइटर जैसे अपना हिरो बात बात पर हेंग नहीहोता।

तिसरा
कारवा चौथ मे शालु के लिए कुछ भी नही हुवा, मतलब उसने अमित के लिये लम्बि उमर कि दुवा नही की।

यार जब लिखाने बैठा था हजारो बाते थि कहानेके लिये और उनमे अच्छी बाते ज्यादा, लेकिन जब लिखना सस्टार्ट किया याद कुछ भी नही रहा।

एक और चिज जब ऋतु का क्यारेक्टर सुरुमे आय था किसिने कमेन्ट मे लिखा था कि वोह बिराज कि बहन है. लेकिन मैने तोह स्टार्ट हि १० दिन पहले कि थि पर ये क्यारेक्टर क जिक्र कहिँ नही हुआ था।

जो भी हो ओभर अल खामी से ज्यादा खासियत है कहानी मे।

लेकिन साला हम लोगोका एक हफ्ता बित जाता है, पर कहानी मे सिर्फ एक दिन वितता है, यार हम लोगोका २ साल गुजर गया (मेरा सिर्फ १० दिन) हिरो क सिर्फ ६ महिने. कुछ दया करो भाइ जैसा अमित का लण्ड है बैस हि पेन से लिखो, जिससे हमको भी लागे कि राइटर के पास 'जादुइ छडी' है और वोह बहुत लम्बि चल्ती है.

kyonki us waqt rina ke dimaag mein Daamini kahi se bhi kahi tak nahi hogi .. kyonki wo to mar chuki hai na .. aur us time to Rina bhi bacchi he rahi hogi ...

Update posted friends

 

[raj2.0]

Nice update

 

[Mr. Nobody]

Nice update..

 

[Vicky11]

Bohot hi umda update.

 

[Gupta g]

Mast update raja bhai
Keep going.....

 

[Choduraghu]

Update 243



‘ To ab kaun kahan soyega ? ‘ khana khane k bad rita mausi ne ye bat kahi . Waise to hum sab pehle hi adjust ho hi jate the par aaj bua k sath sath uncle aunty bhi the aur sath me karishma didi aur Mohit .

Deepika : Raghav bhai sahab aur Rama bhabhi ko amit ka kamra de dete hain didi. Karishma nidhi k sath ho jayegi aur inke sath Neha Radha . Karuna naina Kalpana k ek sath so jayengi . Aap divya didi aur badi didi ek sath so jana . Amit aur Mohit ek sath so jayenge .

Rita : par itne kamre kahan hain. Upar se sardi ka mausam .

Amit : main aur Mohit raju k ghar so sakte hain.

Gauri : nahi , koi bahar nahi jayega.

Rama : Mohit aur Amit hamare sath hi so jayenge .

Divya : mere khyal se karishma aur Mohit Raghav bhaiya k sath hi so jayenge . Nidhi Neha k sath Radha aur rajani didi. Karuna Kalpana Naina k sath Rita didi . Aur ek me main Manju aur Amit so jayenge.

Divya mausi k is sujhav par sab sehmat ho gye . Aur usi hisab se extra charpayi laga kar kamron ke jagah bana di gyi . Naina didi aur karuna didi thoda muh bana rahi thi k mausi unke sath soyengi. Dono ka shayad kuch aur hi program tha . Manju bua bhi is sujhav se khush thi. Par filhal baton ka silsila jari hi tha . Itne salon ki kasar aaj hi nikalne ka soche baithe the sab . Magar ma ne sabko sakhti se sone ka aadesh de diya . Sabka intzam karne k bad Deepika mami aur main jab free hue to mami ne mujhe apne kamre me jane ko kaha . Mausi aur bua pehle hi kamre me chali gyi thi . Main jab wahan pahuncha to apne liye alag se lagai charapai par pasar gya .

Divya : tum wahan kyun let rahe ho ? Idhar aao bed par .

Amit : par mausi ye charapai hai na mere liye .

Divya : to kya hua , chupchap idhar aao . Aaj Manju itne salon bad ayi hai to ab tu door rahega . Waise bhi jab se aayi hai tab se har koi ise gher kar baitha hai aur tu door door reh raha hai .

Manju : koi bat nahi didi , ye to mere pas hi rahega ab se . Baki sab to apne apne ghar rahenge par ise main apne pas rakhungi .

Divya : aate hi ise hum sab se cheenne ka irada bana liya tumne ?

Manju : maine aisa kab kaha didi ?

Divya : to fir ? Agar tu ise apne pas rakhegi to baki sab ka kya ?

Manju : mere kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha didi . Main to bas ye keh rahi thi ....

Manju bua divya mausi ki baton se thoda ghabra si gyi hai . Divya mausi k chehre par gussa aur sakht awaz se unhe lag raha tha k mausi gusse me aa gyi hai . Mujhe bhi ek pal aisa laga par agle hi pal divya mausi muskurane lagi aur bua ka chehra apne hathon me lekar boli .

Divya : mazak kar rahi thi meri bholi Manju . Tera bhi barabar ka hak hai is par sabki tarah balki jyada hi hai. Itne salon ki kasar jo nikalni hai tumne . Chal ab muskura de thoda sa. Aur tu kya dekh raha hai ? Chal idhar aa hum dono k beech let ja aa kar .

Divya mausi ko muskurata dekh kar Manju bua bhi muskurane lagi aur meri taraf dono ne unhe pyar se dekha . Main bhi mausi ki bat mante hue dono k beech aa gya.

Amit : lo mausi main aa gya par meri vajah se aap dono ko dikkat hogi. Itni jagah thoda hai bed par . Ek kam karta hun ek aur kambal pakad leta hun.

Divya : bahut jagah hai aur koi zarurat nahi kambal ki . Ye hai to double bed wala . Aur tujhe kya hum dono moti nazar aati hain ho jagah kam padegi. Dekhle Manju apne bhatije ko . Ise hamare sath dikkat hai .

Amit : maine kab aisa kaha mausi , mujhe bhala kya dikkat hogi . Main to khushnaseeb hun jo mere agal bagal itni khubsurat aurten maujood hain.

Divya : mujhe marte hue ) besharam,,, abhi batati hun tujhe .

Manju : main ise pakadti hun didi aap maro ise meri taraf se bhi .

Ab scene ye tha k main bed par leta tha dono k beech aur main divya mausi se bachne k liye jaise hi palta Manju bua ne mere baju pakad liye aur divya mausi meri peeth par marne lagi. Wo halke hathon se mar rahi thi par main dikhawa aise kar raha tha jaise bahut zor se mar pad rahi ho . Dono hi meri is acting ka maza le rahi thi .

Amit : aaaa mausi aaa mar gya mausi chhod do mausi fir se aisa nahi karunga . Bua bachao please bua bacha lo aaaaa maaa

Divya : ab bol kya bol raha tha ? Ab bolega aisa ?

Amit : nahi mausi ab nahi bolunga . Aaa

Mausi ne jaise hi marna band kiya to bua ne bhi mujhe chhod diya . Main apni peeth malte hue sidha hua to bua aur mausi dono mujhe dekh kar has rahi thi .

Divya : ab bol kya bol raha tha .

Amit : kya bolun ? Aapne to meri bolti hi band kar di . Sach kahun to aapke komal hathon se mar kha kar maza bahut aya . Aise lag raha tha jaise pyar se malish kar rahi hain. Sach me khubsurat aurat k hathon se mar khana bhi mazedar hai .

Divya : kya kaha , ab dekh tera kya hal karti hun main .

Divya mausi fir se gusse me aa gyi aur is bar apne dono hathon se mera gala hi daba diya. Ye sab wo mazak me kar rahi thi par unki is harkat se meri hawa tight ho gyi kyunki is bar main sidha leta hua tha aur mausi mera gala dabane k chakkar me meri chhati par hi aa gyi . Mausi to mera gala daba rahi thi par mausi k thos stan meri chhati daba rahe the . Mausi k komal stano ka ehsas mere khoon me garmi paida karne laga . Isse pehle k mera land sir uthata Maine mausi ko apne upar se hatane ki koshish ki to mausi bhi mere sath zor aazmaish karne lagi .

Amit : aaaaahhhhh

Divya : aaahhhh. ccccccccc

Mere aur mausi k muh se ek sath awaz nikali jise sun kar bua chaunk gyi .

Manju : kya hua ?? Tujhe kahin chot to nahi lagi ? Didi aapko kya hua ?

Asal me hua ye tha k divya mausi mere sath kushti ladti mere upar hi aa gyi thi . Is dauran Unka dayan ghutna mere land par zor se lag gya jis se mere muh se aaj nikal gyi. Dard se main jhatpataya aur be dhyani me mera dayan hath mausi k bayen chutad par zor se kas gya . Dard ki vajah se maine zor se muthi bheench li thi. Halanki mujhe tab pata bhi nahi chala tha k mera hath kahan hai magar mausi ki siski aur Manju bua k sawal se mera dhyan jab apne hath par gya to mujhe ehsas hua . Maine jaldi se hath mausi k chutad se hataya aur palat gya. Kyunki na to mausi ka samna karne ki mujh me himmat thi aur na main Manju bua ko mausi k samne ye bata sakta tha k main kyun cheekha hun.

Manju : tu bolta kyun nahi ?? Kya hua tujhe ?

Amit : kuch nahi bua wo main bas mazak kar raha tha .

Manju : tu sach bol raha hai na ? ,,,, didi aapko kya hua ?

Divya mausi jo abhi tak khamosh thi wo bua k sawal se hadbada gyi .

Divya : kk ku kuch nahi kuch bhi to nahi . Wo mera hath mud gya tha .

Manju : dekh le , teri vajah se didi ko chot lag gyi aur tera mazak hi nahi khatam hota . Chal ab chupchap apne bistar par ja .

Divya : nahi , rehne de na Manju , isme iski kya galati hai . Meri hi galti thi. Main light band kar deti hun ab sauté hain.

Divya ( man me ) kya Amit ne janbujh kar mere wahan hath lagaya hoga ? Shayad galati se lag gya hoga . Kitna zor se masla hai ccc abhi tak aise lag raha hai jaise amit abhi bhi wahan daba raha hai. Kahin isne janbujh kar to nahi kiya ?

Divya mausi ne jab tak light band nahi kar di main ulta hi leta raha. Fir jab wo bed par wapis aa gyi to Maine bed se uthne ki koshish ki to mausi ne mujhe rok diya

Divya : chupchap yahin leta reh aayi bat samajh me .

Marta kya na karta , main chupchap sidha let gya . Magar man me uthal puthal machi hui thi . Mere dimag me Deepika mami ki baten ghumne lagi . Man me chhipa shaitan meri soch par haawi hota ja raha tha . Mere ek taraf Manju bua leti thi jinke sath main pehle bhi kai bar pyar bhare pal bita chuka tha aur dusri taraf meri pyari divya mausi jinke sath lagatar koi na koi aisi ghatna hoti ja rahi thi k mere andar unke prati galat vichar ghar karne lage the . Maine andhere me bas ankhen band kiye mausi aur bua k bare me sochta raha . Pta nahi kab tak main apni soch me duba raha , neend thi k aaj aa hi nahi rahi thi. Bua aur mausi shayad kab ki so chuki thi aur main ullu ki tarah jag raha tha . Tabhi divya mausi neend me karwat badalti mere kareeb aa gyi .

Divya : jyada zor se to nahi lagi na ?

Divya mausi ne sargoahi ki to main chaunk gya . Iska matlab divya mausi bhi jaag rahi thi magar kyun ? Aur agar jag rahi thi to itni der se sone ki acting kyun kar rahi thi . Aur upar se aisa sawal, jo bat main chhupa raha tha wo ab samne se hi puch rahi thi . Matlab unhe pata tha k kya hua hai . Par main mausi k sawal par kuch nahi bola aur waise hi pada raha .

Divya : I am sorry , Maine Jan bujh kar nahi kiya tha . Tumhe jyada dard to nahi hua na ?

Amit : koi bat nahi mausi , main janta hun sab anjane me hua . Aur please aap mujhe bhi maaf kar do . Mere hath anjane me .....

Divya : janti hun , isi liye maine bura nahi mana . Chal ab kuch mat soch aur aram se so ja .

Mausi ki bat sun kar mujhe acha lga . Main karwat badal kar mausi ki taraf ghumne laga to usi dauran mausi bhi shayad mera gaal ta matha chumne k liye meri taraf jhuki thi aur hamare chehre ek dusre k samne aa gye aur honthon se honth jud gye . Ye sab andhere k karan hua tha . Na mausi ne aisa socha tha na maine . Magar honthon se honth judte hi mano hum dono hi butt ban gye . Na mausi koi harkat kar rahi thi na hi main. Hum dono k honth bas apas me jude hi the , sirf touch karte hue. Par is touch se hi shareer sunn pad gya tha . Achanak se mausi piche hui aur karwat badal kar meri taraf pith kar li.

Divya : man me ) hay bhagwan ye Maine kya kar diya ,, ye mujhse kaise ho gya ,,, Amit kya soch raha hoga mere bare me ,,, pehle use wahan par touch kar baithi aur ab sidha Honthon par hi ... ye mujhe kya hota ja raha hai ,,, kyun main apne aap se hi bahar hoti jati hun iske pas hone par hi. ..

main jo abhi tak shunya me tha mausi k palat jane se mujhe bhi hosh aya aur main bhi apni barhi hui dhadkano ko kabu karta hua sidha let gya aur apne chehre par halke hath se thappad laga kar khud ko hosh me lane ki koshish karne laga . Divya mausi aur main chahe khud se alag ho gye the aur wo touch bhi bhi kuch palon ka hi tha magar uska ehsas mujhe andar se romanchit kiye ja rha tha . Ek bar fir dimag par shaitan haawi hone laga tha magar main khud ko rokne ki koshish karte hue ankhen band kar k sone ki koshish karne laga . Mera dhyan apne land par gya to wo sala pehle hi top bana khada tha . Ab is mahol me use shant karne ka aur koi tareeka to tha nahi. Aur ab aise uth kar jata to mausi pata nahi kya sochti . Soch ab bhi rahi hogi par abhi jo bhi hua wo anjane me hua tha. Main khud ko control karta ankhen band kiye sone ki koshish kar raha tha . Mausi bhi aisa hi kuch kar rahi thi halanki neend dono ko hi nahi aane wali thi . Ek bar fir se poore kamre me sannata pasar gya tha .

Amit : I am sorry mausi wo Maine jan bujh kar nahin kiya .

Maine jijhajhakte hue mausi se bat karne ki koshish ki par mausi ne koi jawab nahi diya . Mujhe laga mausi so gyi shayad ya wo bat nahi karna chahti . Maine dobara se mausi se bat karne ki koshish ki par himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi . Is liye karwat dusri taraf kar k sone ki koshish karne laga .

Pata nahi kab meri aankh lagi par sapne me bhi mere sath divya mausi hi mujhe nazar aayi aur maine unhe apni bahon me kase hue lete lete hi unke piche se apna land unki choot me ghusa raha tha . Hum dono ek taraf muh liye karwat k bal lete hue the aur mera dayan hath mausi k dayen stan par tha . Mausi k sath main itna jyada excited ho raha tha k land ko poore zor se ghusaye ja raha tha. Excitement me maine kuch jyada hi zor se mausi k boobs ko daba diya aur mausi k muh se aaj nikal gyi . Is k sath meri aankh khul gyi kyunki mujhe kisi ne dhakka diya tha . Main hadbada gya kamre me andhera tha is liye kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha . Par jab thoda sa hosh aya to mujhe bua ki awaz sunai di .

Manju : ye kya kar rahe the tum ? Maine tumhe samjhaya tha na , fir bhi tum ......

Bua ki bat sun kar mujhe samajh aya k main sapne me jo kuch kar mausi k sath kar raha tha asal me wo Sapna nahi tha aur mausi ki jagah bua thi.

Amit : I am sorry bua ,, wo neeennd me galati se .......

Manju : jao udhar charapai par so jao , kahin didi k sath aisi harkat kar di to kya muh dikhaoge .

Main sharminda sa hokar bed se utar gya aur apne charapai par chala gya . Bua ne sahi kaha tha kahin ye harkat mausi k sath ho jati to pta nahi kya hota . Manju bua k sath chahe main pehle jaise bhi raha par ab wo bhi mujhse door hi rehna chahti thi to main bhi unhe majbur nahi karna chahta tha . Is liye chupchap sone ki koshish karne laga aur pata nahi kahi kab neend aa gyi.



‘ chhod dijiye mujhe , warna main chillaungi . ‘ BALJEET rai bahar se hi aaj sharab pee kar ghar lauta tha aur aaj soch ke aya tha k wo Rupali k sath chudai karega . Bahut dino se Rupali uske hath nahi aayi thi aur dusra Manju ko ghar lane ka kam bhi wo Rupali se ho karwana chahta tha . Is liye ghar aate hi wo sidha Rupali k kamre me gya . Kismat se Rupali is waqt kamre me akeli thi. BALJEET rai k ghar aane k bare me koi nahi janta tha is liye Sheena bhi is waqt apni chachi k sath nahi thi . Mauka acha jan kar BALJEET rai ne Rupali ko daboch liya tha . Magar Rupali usse bachne k liye jaddojehed kar rahi thi .

BALJEET rai : chilla sali , chilla. Bula jisko bulana hai. Nakhra to aise kar rahi hai jaise main pehli bar kar raha hun. Aaj kal teri garmi koi aur thandi kar raha hai jo mere pas nahi aati . Mat bhool k meri bat na manne ka anjam kya hoga .

Rupali beachari apni beti k samne apni izzat kharab hone k dar se chilla bhi nahi sakti thi aur ye bat BALJEET rai achi tarah janta tha . Waise bhi itni salon me wo Rupali ko anginat bar apne neeche la chuka tha to wo nishchint tha k wo kuch karegi . Rupali ki ankhon me fir se bebasi k aansoo aa gye . Is waqt use Amit ki yad aa rahi thi . Uske wada kiya tha k wo use bachayega par aaj wo akeli fir se usi shaitan k aage bebas thi. Jo use hamesha apne niche rondata tha aur uski betiyon par bhi nazar rakhta tha . Rupali man hi man bhagwan se prarthna kar rahi thi k wo kisi tarah use bacha le .

BALJEET rai : chal ab nakhre chhod ise muh me le .

BALJEET rai ne Rupali ko shant dekha aur jhat se apni zip khol kar apna land bahar nikal kar Rupali ko use muh me lene ko kaha . Rupali roti ankhon se abhi bhi kisi madad ki aas me darwaze ki taraf hi dekh rahi thi .

‘ thak thak thak ‘ darwaze par dastak hui to Rupali ki ankhen ummeed me badi ho gyi. Jabki BALJEET rai ne jhunjhala kar ek bar darwaze ki taraf dekha aur fir Rupali ko pakad kar uske kaan me bola .

BALJEET rai : jo bhi ho use darwaze se hi taal dena warna tu janti hai mujhe .

Rupali bechari lachari me darwaze ki taraf chal padi . Ek ek kadam chalti wo bhagwan se madad hi mang rahi thi aur jaise hi usne darwaza khola to Sheena darwaze ko dhakelti hui andar aa gyi.

Sheena : kya chachi , itni der darwaza kholne me ....... papa !!! Aap kab aaye? Aapne apne aane ki khabar tak nahi di kisi ko ?

Sheena Rupali se bat karti andar ayi par jab uski nazar samne khade apne baap par gyi to hairan ho gyi . Shock to BALJEET rai bhi ho gya tha . Uska KLPD jo ho gya tha . Wahin Rupali ka dil Sheena ko duayen de raha tha k usne aa ke use bacha liya .

BALJEET rai : hhh han beta wo bas abhi aya hi hun . Mujhe laga tu yahan hogi to sidha yahin chala aya . Aaj kal chachi k pas jyada rehti hai na tu .

Sheena : han ye to bilkul sahi hai aur aaj bhi main chachi k pas hi sone wali hun . Par aap yahan hain aur ghar me kisi ko pata tak nahi , ye koi bat hui ?

BALJEET rai : maine kaha na bas abhi aya hi hun . Socha pehle apni rajkumari se mil lun to yahan chala aya . Tu kaise hai meri pyari beti?

Sheena : main to ek dam fir hun papa . Aap shayad thak gye honge . Chaliye main pehle aapka khana lagwati hun fir aap aram kar lena. Chachi aap bhi thoda aram kar lo . Aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai na subah se .

Sheena ne janbujh kar Rupali ki tabiyat ki bat kahi to Rupali ne bhi bas sir hila kar sehmati jatayi .

BALJEET rai : kya ? Tumhari tabiyat kharab hai aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi .

Sheena : chachi aisi hi hai papa , aap chaliye aur chachi ko aram karne dijiye .

BALJEET rai : theek hai , waise mujhe ek bat karni thi ab tum bhi yahin ho to dono se keh deta hun. Itna bada ghar hone k bad bhi Manju wahan chhote se ghar me akeli reh rahi hai , ye koi achi bat hai ? Society me log baten bana rahe hain. Maine pehle bhi tumhe kaha tha k use ghar le aao.

Sheena : papa maine pehle bhi bataya tha k bua yahaan nahi ana chahti aur wo nahi aayengi.

BALJEET rai : akhir kyun nahi aayegi wo ? Dekho main janta hun wo mujhse naraz hai par tum to use mana sakti ho na . Main bhi usse maafi mang lunga , bas use ghar wapis le aao. Mujhse bahut galtiyan hui hain par ab main sab theek krna chahta hun.

Sheena ko to ek bar apne baap ki bat sun kar bahut acha laga aur uske chehre par khushi ki lehar aa gyi magar Rupali k chehre par vyang bhari halki si muskan thi kyunki wo janti thi k kutte ki punch sidhi nahi ho sakti .

Sheena : sach papa !!! Fir to hum bua ko kaise bhi kar k mana lenge aur ghar le aayenge . Hum subah hi bua k pas chalenge . Aap bhi sath chalna .

BALJEET rai : pehle tum sab jao , main gya to shayad wo gussa kare . Ek bar wo yahan aa gyi to main use mana hi lunga .

Sheena : ye bhi theek hai , chachi aap subah taiyar rehna . Main aap aur Rima kal bua ko ghar le kar aayenge .

Rupali : theek hai beti kal hum chalenge .

Sheena : chalo papa , aaj main aapko apne hathon se khana laga kar deti hun. Chaliye .

Sheena apne bap ka hath pakad use khinchti hui apne sath kamre se bahar le gyi. Sheena to bechari apni bua ko ghar lane ki bat se hi khush thi . Aur use lag raha tha k uska bap sudhar gya hai shayad. Magar use kya pata tha k Manju ko ghar lane k piche bhi uska koi aur hi irada hai .

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Divya : mere khyal se karishma aur Mohit Raghav bhaiya k sath hi so jayenge . Nidhi Neha k sath Radha aur rajani didi. Karuna Kalpana Naina k sath Rita didi . Aur ek me main Manju aur Amit so jayenge.... dekh rahe ho tharkee divya bharti ko... amit mere saath soyega... kaula maal pe daka...

Divya : to kya hua , chupchap idhar aao . Aaj Manju itne salon bad ayi hai to ab tu door rahega... barobar ungli karni hain tujhe right idhar aur left udhar samjha......................
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dono kaan saaf hone chahiye... bahut baas marta hain...

Aur tu kya dekh raha hai ? Chal idhar aa hum dono k beech let ja aa kar ...... Amit....aila pehle kiska pakrooo idhar wala kee udhar wala... dono party unglimal ke sahare hain....

Divya : mujhe marte hue ) besharam,,, abhi batati hun tujhe ..... Divya... haii mujhe khoobshoorat bola... aur bol na bol na... main toh natak kar rahi thee sharmane ka...

par unki is harkat se meri hawa tight ho gyi kyunki is bar main sidha leta hua tha aur mausi mera gala dabane k chakkar me meri chhati par hi aa gyi .... yahee toh pilan tha.... mausi k thos stan ..... Mausi k komal stano .... clear karne ka re baba main komal maano kee thos... kahe kee dabate wakt feeling change ho rahi hain....

dabana tha divya ka dab gayee manju(iss baar madhu na likhoonga)... bechare ka lund pe shab laat mar rahi hai.... haath ko aaya par muh na laga... Manju.... Chal saale haath na laga...

Raja chouhan .... bhai aapka bhi KLPD hua tha kya aaj ghar pe... idhar apna frustration kahani mein nikal rahe ho... sala amit ka toh theek tha bechara baljeet rai ka bhi karwa diya... kisi pe toh tarash khate are unpe na kam se kam masoom readers pe hi taras kha lete...
khair uski toh bitiya ne hi kaat liya.... Lekin ek sawal hain jo pareshan kar rahi hain... akhir rupali baljeet rai ke ghar mein kyun rah rahi hain... paiso ka toh sawal hi na uthta uski beti ek jani mani doctor hain... phir kya wajah hain dar baljeet rai se.... toh phir police kee madad kyun na leti hain... akhir ek veshya hi toh ban ke rah gayee hain... kabhi bhatije ke niche toh kabhi jeth ke.... ya phir sahar chhor ke kaheen door chali jaati.... bharat desh bahut bara hain... iss tarah dar ke saye mein jeete rahna... aaj toh amit aa gya hain... lekin agar wo na hota toh... phir kaise bachati apni betio ko unse.... ek na ek din wo bhi uska bhog kee vastu ban hi jaati...

khair sheena aur family toh manju ko lana chahti hain... lekin unhe kya pata kee manju ko ek alag hi pariwar mil chuka hain... shayad baljeet ke manshube itni aasani se pura na ho...