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Fantasy Manhoosh ( Revenge By KILLER )

Sunny shingh

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    • Bhai bohot hee achi story he.

    • Bhai week main 1-2 Updates bhi doge naa tab bhi sahi he updates big dena aapse yahi aasa hee
    • Story to bohot sandaar he bs updetes tode big dena aap

    • Best of luck for story keep it up
 

Babydol

New Member
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Update 5

Fir dono gar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai ti

uska kyal rakne ke liye ek maid raki gai ti

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi ti wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha ta agr uske koi parents nai honge to hum usse apne saath rak lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: ha sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha ta chalo kal subh hospital jaake usse milte hai

Fir dono so jaate hai

next day.......


Ranvir and susmita jaldi tyair hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bi hosh mai aa chuka ta jab mai Ek room mai kudh ko dek Ke pele to mai bi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta tumari

me: tik hai aunty ab but aap log

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe te raaste mai tum zakmi haalt mai te to tumko hospital le aaye

unko dek ke merko pata nai kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha ta

susmita : beta Tumari family kaha hai no do so hum contact kare

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne merko gale laga diya jissse muje bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

susmita : kya hua beta Tumari family nai hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone tumahre saath bahoot bura kiya hai but tum chinta mat karo mai huna tumari MA

Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya ta mujko unke saat bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai

mere gaanv bar gai Te ab tak

dad : ha abi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai and Mai unke saath unke gar chala jaat hu

waha pe janvi dining table pe beti ti ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye Tumahare bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate laynge

mom : ha beta tum kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmuiyt se kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai Tumahara bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe bet ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko kilya and usne merko

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gai and janvi muje uska room dikane lagi

Baki next update mai..........
Story likh rahe ho ki poem likh rahe ho
apni updates ka flow sudharo......... story ka charm bhi badhega..............
hum padh rahe hain .........iska matlab hai hum chahte hain chalti rahe

ab apki ichchha hai ki chalayein ya band kar dein ............mahino latkaoge update to kaun regular rahega
 

Mahendra Baranwal

Active Member
997
2,824
138
Update 5

Fir dono gar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai ti

uska kyal rakne ke liye ek maid raki gai ti

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi ti wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha ta agr uske koi parents nai honge to hum usse apne saath rak lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: ha sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha ta chalo kal subh hospital jaake usse milte hai

Fir dono so jaate hai

next day.......


Ranvir and susmita jaldi tyair hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bi hosh mai aa chuka ta jab mai Ek room mai kudh ko dek Ke pele to mai bi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta tumari

me: tik hai aunty ab but aap log

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe te raaste mai tum zakmi haalt mai te to tumko hospital le aaye

unko dek ke merko pata nai kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha ta

susmita : beta Tumari family kaha hai no do so hum contact kare

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne merko gale laga diya jissse muje bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

susmita : kya hua beta Tumari family nai hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone tumahre saath bahoot bura kiya hai but tum chinta mat karo mai huna tumari MA

Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya ta mujko unke saat bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai

mere gaanv bar gai Te ab tak

dad : ha abi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai and Mai unke saath unke gar chala jaat hu

waha pe janvi dining table pe beti ti ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye Tumahare bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate laynge

mom : ha beta tum kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmuiyt se kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai Tumahara bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe bet ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko kilya and usne merko

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gai and janvi muje uska room dikane lagi

Baki next update mai..........
Bahut hi nayab update
 

Naik

Well-Known Member
20,865
76,469
258
Update 5

Fir dono gar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai ti

uska kyal rakne ke liye ek maid raki gai ti

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi ti wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha ta agr uske koi parents nai honge to hum usse apne saath rak lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: ha sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha ta chalo kal subh hospital jaake usse milte hai

Fir dono so jaate hai

next day.......


Ranvir and susmita jaldi tyair hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bi hosh mai aa chuka ta jab mai Ek room mai kudh ko dek Ke pele to mai bi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta tumari

me: tik hai aunty ab but aap log

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe te raaste mai tum zakmi haalt mai te to tumko hospital le aaye

unko dek ke merko pata nai kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha ta

susmita : beta Tumari family kaha hai no do so hum contact kare

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne merko gale laga diya jissse muje bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

susmita : kya hua beta Tumari family nai hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone tumahre saath bahoot bura kiya hai but tum chinta mat karo mai huna tumari MA

Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya ta mujko unke saat bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai

mere gaanv bar gai Te ab tak

dad : ha abi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai and Mai unke saath unke gar chala jaat hu

waha pe janvi dining table pe beti ti ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye Tumahare bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate laynge

mom : ha beta tum kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmuiyt se kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai Tumahara bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe bet ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko kilya and usne merko

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gai and janvi muje uska room dikane lagi

Baki next update mai..........
Yeh achcha huwa jo ranvir or susmita n Vikram ko beta bana ker apne saath le aaye ab Vikram ki filhal k liye set h
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandaar update
 

ashish_1982_in

Well-Known Member
5,573
18,878
188
Update 5

Fir dono gar chale jaate hai

waha pe janvi so gai ti

uska kyal rakne ke liye ek maid raki gai ti

fir dono room mai jaate hai

susmita : mai keh rahi ti wo Bacha kitna massom lag raha ta agr uske koi parents nai honge to hum usse apne saath rak lenge and janvi ko bi ek bhai mil jaayga

Ranvir: ha sahi keh rahi ho mai bi yahi soch raha ta chalo kal subh hospital jaake usse milte hai

Fir dono so jaate hai

next day.......


Ranvir and susmita jaldi tyair hoke hospital aa jaate hai

Mai bi hosh mai aa chuka ta jab mai Ek room mai kudh ko dek Ke pele to mai bi shock ho jaata hu

baad mai pata chlta hai ki mai hospital mai Hu

thodi der baad dono aa jaate hai

susmita room mai aake

susmita : ab kesi Tabiyat hai beta tumari

me: tik hai aunty ab but aap log

ranvir : beta kal raat hum aa rehe te raaste mai tum zakmi haalt mai te to tumko hospital le aaye

unko dek ke merko pata nai kyu but bahoot acha feel ho raha ta

susmita : beta Tumari family kaha hai no do so hum contact kare

unki baate sunke muje rona aa gya

muje rota dek susmitaji ne merko gale laga diya jissse muje bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

susmita : kya hua beta Tumari family nai hai kya

me: fir unko sab kuch bata deta hu jo abi tak mere saath hua

meri baat sunke unki aanko mai bi aansu aa jaate hai

susmita : beta unhone tumahre saath bahoot bura kiya hai but tum chinta mat karo mai huna tumari MA

Maine bi unko apni mom dad accept kar liya ta mujko unke saat bahoot sukoon mil raha ta

( AB ranvir and susmita ki mom and dad likunga)

mom: Dr Se baat kariye kab tak vikram ko discharge mil sakta hai

mere gaanv bar gai Te ab tak

dad : ha abi baat karke aata Hu

thodi der baad muje discharge mil jaata hai and Mai unke saath unke gar chala jaat hu

waha pe janvi dining table pe beti ti ke bell baja

door kolne Ke baad jab usne mom dad ko deka to kush ho gai or unko hug kiya

jab mujko deka to pucha

janvi: mumma ye bahiya kon hai

mom : beta Ye Tumahare bahiya hai

janvi, : kya sach mai Ye mere bahiya hai. Ye mere liya chocolate laynge

mom : ha beta tum kudh hi puch lo

janvi maasmuiyt se kya aap mere bahiya Ho

me : ha mai Tumahara bhai Hu Ye bol Ke Maine usko gaal pe kiss kiya

jiss se vo bahoot kush ho gai and muje bi gaal pe kiss kiya

Hum dining table pe bet ke breakfast karne lage maine janvi ko kilya and usne merko

break fast Ke baad dad office chale gai and janvi muje uska room dikane lagi

Baki next update mai..........
nice update bhai
 
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