Fantasy MANNA (THE MASTER)

[aalu]

sahi hain iska uddeshya siddh toh ho gaya,,, asli nakli kee pehchan ho gayee inhe,,, kaun dost hain aur kaun dushman yeh bhi maloom chala... mushibat mein kispe aap vishwas kar shakte hain,,, akhir yudh kee ghari mein yahee toh hota hani ek doosre pe vishwas aur ektaa se hi kisi yudhh ko jeeta jata hain... jo aaj in chhatro ne paya hain...

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sahi pariwar kee asliyat,, wakai kya sabhi aise hain khokhle,, naam ke bahadur ya phir ek nandani hi sachhi bachi hain udhar...

Main..man me.,. Nandni or avni ko main acha lgne lga tha mujhe lag rhaa tha ki eh dono ko mujh se pyar hone lga jabse inki jaan bachai hai

yeh bhawnaye agar ladkio kee taraf se dikhate toh behtar hota,,, jaise jaroori nahin kee har wakt kahani manna kee hi najar se chale jahan jaroori ho aap kahani ko third person view ya kahe writers view se dikha shakte hain,,, iss tarah se dushmano kee sochne kee kshamta aur unki najariye ka bhi pata chalega... yeh bas ek suggestion hain,,, baaki jaise aapko theek lage..

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waise kahani mein detailing pe thora aur dhyan de,,, jaise school kaisa hain,,, immarat ka ek chitran aapki shabdo mein,,, aur uske charo taraf kya hain,,, yeh kaun sa rajya hain ya phir iske padosi rajya kaise hain,,, update ko do bhago mein chalaye jaise ek mein manna ke views doosri mein wo jaroori cheeje jisse kahani aage badhengi,, cheeje jo background mein ho rahi hain bina manna keee najar mein aaye...

 

[mandy]

sahi hain iska uddeshya siddh toh ho gaya,,, asli nakli kee pehchan ho gayee inhe,,, kaun dost hain aur kaun dushman yeh bhi maloom chala... mushibat mein kispe aap vishwas kar shakte hain,,, akhir yudh kee ghari mein yahee toh hota hani ek doosre pe vishwas aur ektaa se hi kisi yudhh ko jeeta jata hain... jo aaj in chhatro ne paya hain...

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sahi pariwar kee asliyat,, wakai kya sabhi aise hain khokhle,, naam ke bahadur ya phir ek nandani hi sachhi bachi hain udhar...

yeh bhawnaye agar ladkio kee taraf se dikhate toh behtar hota,,, jaise jaroori nahin kee har wakt kahani manna kee hi najar se chale jahan jaroori ho aap kahani ko third person view ya kahe writers view se dikha shakte hain,,, iss tarah se dushmano kee sochne kee kshamta aur unki najariye ka bhi pata chalega... yeh bas ek suggestion hain,,, baaki jaise aapko theek lage..

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waise kahani mein detailing pe thora aur dhyan de,,, jaise school kaisa hain,,, immarat ka ek chitran aapki shabdo mein,,, aur uske charo taraf kya hain,,, yeh kaun sa rajya hain ya phir iske padosi rajya kaise hain,,, update ko do bhago mein chalaye jaise ek mein manna ke views doosri mein wo jaroori cheeje jisse kahani aage badhengi,, cheeje jo background mein ho rahi hain bina manna keee najar mein aaye...

Abhi starting hai bhai sab kuch hona hai sime maine jda detail age deni hai kyuki age chl kar hi sab samjh aye ga abhi to bas suruwat a baki main apni traff se poori khosish kronga

 

[Luffy]

: Admi1 kmaal ki baat hai aaj tak mere vaar se koi nhi bach paya lekin tum bach gaye


Lekin ab nhi bach payoge

Admi1 ne mere par fir hamla kiya or poori takat ke sath mere peat me var kiya


Charo traff khoon hi khoon tha mere face par khoon ki dharaaa beh rahi tthi jise dekh

Jai..... Nhiiiiiiiiii pls use chodd do


Nandni... Chodd de use kuttee


Sam... Bola tha sale.ko bhagg jaa lekin nhi mana


Admi2 ...hahaha haste huye jab dekha meri tarf to uski hassi band ho gai uske face par dar dikhai de reha tha.kyuki


Jab usne dhiyaan se dekha to uske dost ka dill mere hath me tha or woh dhadak raha tha


Uska dost mar raha tha

Adm1 ...kon ho tum


Admi2 ki cheekh nikkl gai kyuki uska dost mar chuka tha


Uski cheekh sun jai ne jab meri traf dekha oske face par haraini or khushi ke dono expression the


Nandni ne jab dekha to uska bhi muh khula reh geya tha sath mein ameen ka bhi


Admi2 .... Poore gusse se apne beast ko lekrr meri traff bhagaa
Jl


Jahan main apne beast ko dekh raha tha jo bhut dra huya tha jise dekh mujh ko hassi aa rahi thi


Admi2 ne poori power ke sath mere pe hamla.kiya or uske hamle ne mujhe door uchaal feka


Main dobra khadda huya

Tab tak usne dusra hamla.kiya or mere peat pe marne lga

Woh lga taar mare hi jaa rhaa tha gusse mein


Lekin jab marte.marte usne mere face ki traf dekha to woh dekh kar dar geya


Uski akhoon mein dar tha

Woh dar ke sath mujhse phooshtha hai kon ho tum


Main... Bas smile ki or uski akhaon mein dekhne lga

Jab usne dhiyaan se meri akhon mein dekha woh sab dekh kar usne


Apni takat se apne app hi khatm kr diya sab yeh dekh kar harain the ki yeh sab kaise huya


Maine sab ko ajaad.kiya

Nandni... Sukkriya tum thik to ho na

Avni... Tu thik ho na kuch huya to nhi tujhe


Sam.. sale bacha liya tune hum.ko.mujhe ummed nhi thi


Jai... Kon ho tum yeh sab kyaa tumhara beast kamjoor hai main unko hara nhi ska lekin tumne kuj mint mein sab ko khtm kr diya akhir kon ho tum


Main... Tumne thik se dekha nhi maine kisi ko nhi khtm kiya usne kudh ko khtm kr liya hai apne hi beast se

Lekin usko esa huya kyaa

Main...mujhe lgta hai usne apne kiye par pasthwa hoga isiliye usne yeh sab kiya


Jai..bakwas na.kro..

Nandni.... Ab bas bhi kro eske bare mein bad mein baat kre ge phele yahan se niklo kisi achi jga chlo


Hum sab chlne lag gaye tabhi

Avni....mere pass ayi or boli mujhe sach jannan hai

Main.. bola tumhare shmne hai sab maine kuch nhi kiya

Avni...lekin tumne kaise sab ko mar diya
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Main.. mere pass hipnotise krne ki shakti hai

Maine dono ko hipnotise krke hara diya

Sab mere yeh jawab sun kar satisfy huye


Lekin ek tha jiske man mein kuj doubt the

Awesome update

 

[Luffy]

Hum lgo ne raat guazare ke liye koi safe jga dhondi or osmein beth gaya

Aag jalai or uske charo tarf ek circle bna kar beth gaye


Sam... Mujhe umeed nhi thi ki main bach paonga

Lekin aaj mere sath jo dhokha huya usko main kabhi nhi bhool sakta

Mohit ko maine bhai jaisa mna ta sala mujhe marne ke liye chodd kr chla geya


Nandni... Mujhe umemd nhi thi mera bhai ese kre ga main kabhi soch nhi sakti thi ki mera bhai apni jaan bachne ke liye apne dosto ko fasaa kar nikl geya

Avni .... Kisi par bhi trust mat kro sab badal jate hai

Maine apne jeene ki icha hi chodd di thi lekin manna bhagwaan ki trah aya or mujhe bacha liya

Thanks manne apne mujhe bacha liya

Main... Are isme thanks wali kya baat ager meri jga hoti to app bhi ese hi krti

Avni ..main esa nhi krti main apni jaan bacha ti

Sam nandni... Thanks ajj tumhari vaja se hum jinda hai hum dono ki jindgi aaj se tumhare naam

Main... Are ese krne ki koi jarort nhi hum. Dost hai sab dost ek dusre ki help hi krte hai esme eehsaan wali koi baat nhi.


Sam ... Sab dost esa nhi krte bhai...

Jai ... Yr mujhe yeh samjh nhi aya itne strong beast hone ke bad bhi hum unke jaal mein kaise fass gaye

Main... Tum logo ne apne dimag ko use nhi kiya

Sab...kaise....

Main .. jab woh fight kr rahe the tab tumne dekha hoga ki un dono ki eyes apas mein connect thi jaise ek ko dikhai deta to dusra bhi dekh raha tha isisliye woh tumhare move tumhare beast ki power sab ddkh paa rahe the


Nandni... Isilye unhone hme asani se kaid kar liye


Jai...lekin tumko kyu nhi kaid kiya


Main.. kyyki woh mujhe marne wale the kyki mere pass kuj khass beast nhi tha isiliye.main unke kisi kam ka nhi tha


Avni nandni... Lekin tumhari fight dekh kar lga nhi tumhare pass kmjor beast hai

Main... Hai to kamjoor hi lekin mujhe usko use krna achi trike se ata hai

Hum ese hi baat krte rahe fir so gaye

Agle din hum jungle meinn ghum te rahe or sidha jugnle se bahr aa gaye jab hum bahr aye to school ke staff ne hamara welcome kiya

Nice update

 

[Luffy]

School mein ane ke bad sab bacho ko ek sath bula liya geya or sab ko school head batne lage ki


Head master ....... Tum sabko jungle.mein bhejne ka mera ek hi matlb tha jo ki main ab tum sab mein dekh paa rahaa hoon


Tum sabko ek dusre par vishwas hona tum sab confidence lana

Ab tum sab apni apni or sathi bna sakte ho taki jo age chal kar hum apne rajjeya ke liya jung kar sake


Sab bache dhiyaan se sun rahe the

Head master ne apna bhashan diya or humko class mei bhejj diya

Main or jai last bench par beth gaye tabhi wohan par nandni avni or sam bhi hamare sath wale bench par beth gaye


Main... Tum log to hamesha age beth te the aaj pishe kyu


Nandni... Age maza nhi ata

Avni... Bilkul main to suru se pishe bethna chahti thi l

Main..man me.,. Nandni or avni ko main acha lgne lga tha mujhe lag rhaa tha ki eh dono ko mujh se pyar hone lga jabse inki jaan bachai hai

Lekin mujhe yeh bhi maloom tha ki yeh bas crush hai or kuch nhi


Tabhi mam class mein ayi or sath mein mohit bhi

Mam... To bache aaj main tum sab ko sab se bahdar bache milana chahti hoon jisne apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina hi


Apne dosto ko bachya

Jin ko ..

Dushmano ne apne 5 students ko bandi bna liya tha jinko mohit ne maar kar apne dosto ko bacha liya tha


To bacho ek baar zor se taali maar do mohit ki bhaduri ke liye


Jahan yeh sab sun kr mere dost harain the wohi mujhe koi frak nhi pada

Nandni.... Kitna neech insaan hai yeh

Sam.... Dil kr raha hi abhi jaan se maardo isko


Avni .. ab isse or kyaa ummed kr sakte hain


Jai... Yeh hai sahi parivaar ki asliyat

Nandni ... Shrm ke mare face niche kr.liya
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Main .... Sb ek jaise nhi hote jai.. meri baat sun nandni ne meri traf dekh or.maine smile.kr di

Aaj se tum sab dhiyaan lgana sikho ge kaise tum apni beast ko control' kr sakte hoo or kaise uski power ko use kr sakte hoo


Fir teacher sab dhiyaan lagne ke trike batne lag gai

Class ke bad hum sab ghr aa gaye

Fantastic update

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Mast Update bro
Keep Posting

 

[ashish_1982_in]

School mein ane ke bad sab bacho ko ek sath bula liya geya or sab ko school head batne lage ki


Head master ....... Tum sabko jungle.mein bhejne ka mera ek hi matlb tha jo ki main ab tum sab mein dekh paa rahaa hoon


Tum sabko ek dusre par vishwas hona tum sab confidence lana

Ab tum sab apni apni or sathi bna sakte ho taki jo age chal kar hum apne rajjeya ke liya jung kar sake


Sab bache dhiyaan se sun rahe the

Head master ne apna bhashan diya or humko class mei bhejj diya

Main or jai last bench par beth gaye tabhi wohan par nandni avni or sam bhi hamare sath wale bench par beth gaye


Main... Tum log to hamesha age beth te the aaj pishe kyu


Nandni... Age maza nhi ata

Avni... Bilkul main to suru se pishe bethna chahti thi l

Main..man me.,. Nandni or avni ko main acha lgne lga tha mujhe lag rhaa tha ki eh dono ko mujh se pyar hone lga jabse inki jaan bachai hai

Lekin mujhe yeh bhi maloom tha ki yeh bas crush hai or kuch nhi


Tabhi mam class mein ayi or sath mein mohit bhi

Mam... To bache aaj main tum sab ko sab se bahdar bache milana chahti hoon jisne apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina hi


Apne dosto ko bachya

Jin ko ..

Dushmano ne apne 5 students ko bandi bna liya tha jinko mohit ne maar kar apne dosto ko bacha liya tha


To bacho ek baar zor se taali maar do mohit ki bhaduri ke liye


Jahan yeh sab sun kr mere dost harain the wohi mujhe koi frak nhi pada

Nandni.... Kitna neech insaan hai yeh

Sam.... Dil kr raha hi abhi jaan se maardo isko


Avni .. ab isse or kyaa ummed kr sakte hain


Jai... Yeh hai sahi parivaar ki asliyat

Nandni ... Shrm ke mare face niche kr.liya
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Main .... Sb ek jaise nhi hote jai.. meri baat sun nandni ne meri traf dekh or.maine smile.kr di

Aaj se tum sab dhiyaan lgana sikho ge kaise tum apni beast ko control' kr sakte hoo or kaise uski power ko use kr sakte hoo


Fir teacher sab dhiyaan lagne ke trike batne lag gai

Class ke bad hum sab ghr aa gaye

very nice update bhai

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro....
Waiting for next

 

[mandy]

To dosto main abb tumko sab ilake ke bare mein bitaa deya hoon kyuki ab uski jarort hai

Jaise ki hamare jo beast raajeya ke naam je jana jata hai jo ek chota sa rajjeya hota sab raajeya ase hi hote hai

Sab apne app mein shaktishali hoti hai yahan par sab mil kar apne apne raaj ko dusro se bacha kar rakhte hai

Koi bbhi raajeya dusre rajeya par hamala kar deta hai jiske chlte jo raaj haar jata hai usko apne raajye mei mila liya jata hai

Isi lai hamara school ek common jo sab ko training deta hai

Or sab raajeya apne apne bacho ko sikhsha dene ke liye yahaan study krne ke liye bhejj dete hain

Fir yahan se jaker sab apne apne raaj ki raskha krte hain

Isi trah sab raajeya mein apne apne school ki takat dikhane ki liye fight krwai jati thi

Jis mein har rajeya ke school ke bacho ko hissa lena padh ta hai apni apni takat dikhane ke liye

Wohi dusri traff kisi jungle mein


Admi.....Ab time aa chuka hai kisi na kisi woh beast heartschool ko khtm

krna hoga taki.os rajjeya par hum apna kabzaa kar sake or apne ilake mein mila sake

Admi2 ..abhi usme time hai hume abhi kuch or bhi jarori kam krna hai

Humhe uski takat ko control krna hoga ager woh beast par apna control ho geya to sab par apna hi raaz hoga sari duniyan apne kadmo mein hogi hahahahha...

Admi1... Ahahhahha shi baat hai chli teyari kre

Dusri traf hamara beast rajeya me

Nandni.... Manna kitna sacha hai sab ke liye dil mein iazzt hai lekin woh mere se baat kam krta hai akhir kyaa kami hai mujhme


Na jane kyu mujhe woh acha lgne laga hai

Nandni eh soch te so jati hai

Same wohi haal avni ka tha

Avni.... Maine aaj tak kisi ke bare mein nhi socha lekin na jane kyu manna baar baar yaad aa raha hai

Usne meri jaan bhi bachai

Kya woh mujhe svikaar kre ga




Sorry dosto aaj ke liye itna hi

 

[Luffy]

To dosto main abb tumko sab ilake ke bare mein bitaa deya hoon kyuki ab uski jarort hai

Jaise ki hamare jo beast raajeya ke naam je jana jata hai jo ek chota sa rajjeya hota sab raajeya ase hi hote hai

Sab apne app mein shaktishali hoti hai yahan par sab mil kar apne apne raaj ko dusro se bacha kar rakhte hai

Koi bbhi raajeya dusre rajeya par hamala kar deta hai jiske chlte jo raaj haar jata hai usko apne raajye mei mila liya jata hai

Isi lai hamara school ek common jo sab ko training deta hai

Or sab raajeya apne apne bacho ko sikhsha dene ke liye yahaan study krne ke liye bhejj dete hain

Fir yahan se jaker sab apne apne raaj ki raskha krte hain

Isi trah sab raajeya mein apne apne school ki takat dikhane ki liye fight krwai jati thi

Jis mein har rajeya ke school ke bacho ko hissa lena padh ta hai apni apni takat dikhane ke liye

Wohi dusri traff kisi jungle mein


Admi.....Ab time aa chuka hai kisi na kisi woh beast heartschool ko khtm

krna hoga taki.os rajjeya par hum apna kabzaa kar sake or apne ilake mein mila sake

Admi2 ..abhi usme time hai hume abhi kuch or bhi jarori kam krna hai

Humhe uski takat ko control krna hoga ager woh beast par apna control ho geya to sab par apna hi raaz hoga sari duniyan apne kadmo mein hogi hahahahha...

Admi1... Ahahhahha shi baat hai chli teyari kre

Dusri traf hamara beast rajeya me

Nandni.... Manna kitna sacha hai sab ke liye dil mein iazzt hai lekin woh mere se baat kam krta hai akhir kyaa kami hai mujhme


Na jane kyu mujhe woh acha lgne laga hai

Nandni eh soch te so jati hai

Same wohi haal avni ka tha

Avni.... Maine aaj tak kisi ke bare mein nhi socha lekin na jane kyu manna baar baar yaad aa raha hai

Usne meri jaan bhi bachai

Kya woh mujhe svikaar kre ga




Sorry dosto aaj ke liye itna hi

Nice update