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Incest Mard ka bachcha.

prem pujari

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bhai update to badhiya hai

par kya baat hai update raat ko hi likh rahe ho
 

Desi Man

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बढ़िया अपडेट हैं दोस्त
 

Raj

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STORY TOH BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR CHAL RAHI HAI.
LALLU GHAR WAPAS AA GAYA HAI AUR BAHNON KA AKSAR JO KAAM HOTA HAI BHAIYON KA MAJA LENA WOH BAKHUBI CHALA.SONAM NE BHI APNA DARD BAYAN KIYA LALLU SE .PR USKI HALAAT KO BHI SAMJHA .
AB LAGTA HAIKOMAL BHI LALLU SE PYAR KARNE LAGI HAI .AAKHIR HO BHI KYUN NA JUDWA JO THAHRE SATH HI KOMAL KI KHAS SONAM HAI AUR SONAM LALLU SE PYAR KARTI HAI YE BAAT KOMAL KO PATA HI HOGA.THAPPAD IS BAAT KA SABOOT HAI AUR DABI HUYI AWAAJ ME USNE KABOOL BHI KIYA HAI PAR KHUL KAR NAHI.
THEKE KO NESNABOOD KR HI DIYA AUR EK DUSHMAN BHI PAL LIYA.LUXMI MAMA MAMI KE SATH CHALI GAYI.
RITU NE ABHI TAK LALLU SE APNE GALATI KE LIYE KOI BAAT NAHI KI HAI.KAJAL NE BHI DHANG SE BAAT NAHI KI WAPAS AANE KE BAAD LALLU SE THUKWA LIYA LALLU BHI CHAPLUS KI TARAH THOKAYI KAR KE NIPAT GAYA.
SHADI BADHIYA SE HO GAYA .POORE PARIVAR KO MELA BHI GHUMA KE LAYA.LALLU KE PITA KO LAGTA HAI LALLU SE UTNA LAGAW NHI HAI JAISA KI EK BAAP BETE ME HOTA HAI .DAARU WALE KAAND KO LE KAR JO BAAT HUYI BAAP BETE ME USKO DEKH KAR TIH AISA HI LAGTA HAI.
AB THUKAYI KA AGLA NUMBER LAGTA HAI CHHOTI BUA KA HAI DEKGATE HAIN AAGE KYA HOTA HAI.
PETER KO JO MILA HAI USME KYA HAI?YE ABHI TAK PATA NAHI CHALA ?
AAPNE EK BAAR JIKR KIYA THA .KI EK ANGREJ LADKI ALLAHABAAD SANGAM PAR AAYI JISKI BAADI PAR LALLU KE JIS HI TAITU BANA THA USK DOBARA KAHI PATA NAHI HAI ? PHIR EK AUR LADKI KA JIKRA KIYA THA JAB LALLU UJJAIN GAYA THA USKA KYA ROLE HAI WOH ABHI TAK NAHI PATA CHALA ?KHAIR DEKHATE HAI AAGE KYA HOTA HAI
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Nice update
 

Aakash

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Patte par Jo likha hai woh lallu and larki ke liya hai Jo muje lag rh hai.
Koi bat nai Bhai.
Sunil ko be bat pta chal gyi hai..
Story me ab game start hogye.
Wonderful update ?...
Keep it up...
 

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Mard ka bachcha. Update 52.



Prithvi k kisi kone mai ek tunnel ki khudai chal raha tha. Kafi sare majdoor waha kai tarah k Kudal fawra liye khudai mai lage hue the.
Tunnel kafi lambi chadi bani hui thi. Andhere se bachaw k liye waha diwaro mai jagah jagah lamp lage hue the jis mai bharpur prakash fail raha tha charo or.


Ek majdoor waha sab se alag fawara le kr khudai kr raha tha. Tabhi mitti k sath ek dhatu ka 10 inch lamba or 3inch chauda koi wastu nikla.
Wo majdoor idhar udhar dekh ke use utha kr apne kapdo mai chupa liya.

Fir wo dhire dhire apne kaam mai lag gya.

Chutti se pahle wo waha se bahar aa kr temporary wash room mai ja kr us wastu ko nikal kr dekha ki kya hai.

Wo pital ka lag raha tha jo ki ek miiti chipakne se ganda ho gya tha.

Wo majdoor us pital k wastu ko apne pahne hue kapde se saaf krne laga ragar ragar kr tabhi wo khul gya.

Wo majdoor utsukta se us mai dekhne laga ki kya hai.

Us pital ka wastu under se khokhla tha jis mai koi patte ko kuch mor kr rakha hua tha.

Wo us patte ko nikal kr khol kr dekha to us mai kuch likha hua tha jo uske samajh se bahar tha.

Ye koi aisa bhasa tha jo us majdoor ko aata nahi tha.

Fir us majdoor ne pital k us khokhle ko wahi washroom mai chupa diya, taki baad mai use kabhi mauka dekh kr le jaiga. Or us patte ko jis pr kuch likha tha use apne kapde k turpai ko khol kr us mai chupa liya.

Washroom se bahar aa kr wo ek bar fir se apne kaam mai lag gya.

Chutti ke baad sab majdoor ek ek kr tunnel se bahar nikalne lage.

Wo majdoor bhi sab k sath waha se bahar aa gya.

Wo tunnel ek pahadi k under banaya ja raha tha.

Waha se nikal kr wo sab se alag ek or chal diya.

Aage wo us pahari se utar kr city jane wale raste pr ja kr kisi wahan k intjar mai khada ho gya.

Thodi der mai ek gari aati dikhi.

Wo majdoor hath dikha kr rukne ko bola.

Gari mai driver akela tha. Piche trolley laga tha gari mai jis mai sabji rakha hua tha.

Majdoor- bhaiya mujhe sahar tk ka lift de do. Bahut emargency hai.

Driver use baitha liya.

Thodi der mai wo majdoor ek chote se bajar mai tha.

Waha wo bajar se nikal kr ek gali mai ghus gya.
Gali mai aage ja kr ek building mai wo ghus gya.
Aisa lag raha tha jaise wo majdoor waha pahle bhi aa chuka hai.

Building bahut purana tha or kai manjil ka tha.

Wo sidhiyo se upper chadhta hua chauthe male pr pahucha.

Ek darwaje k aage khada ho kr us ne knock kiya.
Darwaja nahi khula.
Majdoor thoda intjar kr fir se knock kiya.

Ek 30-35 saal ki aurat jo ki ek choti si jhini dress pahne thi.
Dress iske jangh pr hi khat ho gya tha. Uski sanwali si chikni janghe chamak rahi thi.
Dress k under kuch bhi nahi pahne hue thi.
Sarir k ek ek kataw saf dikh raha tha.
Aisa lag raha tha jaise us aurat ne ye dress chupane k liye kam dikhane ko jyada pahne hue thi.
Baal bikhre hue the. Jo kandhe pr jhul rahi thi.
Muh mai sigrate dabaye hue wo gate pr aai.

Aurat- Gate q tod raha hai. Kaun ho tum. Kis se kaam hai.

Majdoor- are ye mai hu peter.
Aurat- Peter ho ya chiter. Yaha kis ko mangta hai.
Peter- sofiya, aaj fir tu ne drugs li hai. Kitni bar mana kiya hai maine.
Wo sofiya ko dhakelta hua room mai pravesh kiya.

Kamre mai aa kr dekha ek kala sandh waha nanga bed pr leta hua tha.

Peter use dekh kr aag babulla ho gya.

Peter- Haramjade joy. Teri ye himmat tu mere girlfriend ke sath. Kamine mai tumhe chodunga nahi.

Peter us sandh pr kud pada marne k liye.

Joy jo ki Peter ko dekh kr bed pr baith gya tha wo Peter ko gusse mai marne k liye aage badhta dekh kr bed pr se khada ho gya jamin pr.
Tab tak Peter joy pr kud chuka tha.
Dono ek dusre ko le kr waha bed k pas pade table lemp pr gir gya.
Table or table lemy dono sahid ho gya.

Peter jaldi se utha or us tute hue table ka ek pair utha kr joy k sar par de mara.
Joy k sar se khun bahne laga.
Joy apne sar ko pakde jhulta hua utha.
Tabhi Peter fir se ek bar apna hath chala diya.
Is joy ko pith pr laga.
Joy tilmila kr ek or bhag gya.

Gate pr khadi sofiya ye sab khadi sigrate fukti dekh rahi thi.

Joy room mai idhar udhar najar ghuma kr kuch dhundhne laga Peter se mukabla karne k liye.

Joy ko or kuch nahi apna khol kr sofe pr rakha pent dikh gya.
Joy jaldi se pent utha kr pahan liya or uska belt nikal kr hath mai lapet liya.
Tab tak Peter ek bar fir se joy ko marne k liye table ka wo tuta pair hawa mai utha liya.
Joy jaldi se belt ghuma kr Peter k hath mai fasaya or jor se khich diya.

Belt se Peter k nange hath mai jor ka chot laga.
Table ka pair uske hath se chut kr fars pr gir gya.
Joy use ek belt or laga diya.
Peter chillata hua ek or ludhak gya.
Fir joy satasat Peter pr belt barsane laga.
Peter fars pr ludhakta hua chatpatane laga.
Joy mar mar kr Peter ko adhmara kr diya.

Sofia ab sigrate fukna chod kr sofe pr baith gai.

Joy sofiya se.- chal yaha se, jaldi kr. Agar uth gya to fir ladega ye.
Sofiya uth kr Peter ko ek lat mar kr uska jeb tatolne lagi.
Peter k jeb mai kuch nahi mila fir sofiya uth kr ek lat or laga di gusse mai or bhunbhunati hui apna parse le kr kamre se nikal gai joy k sath.

Peter kafi der tak wahi fars pr pada raha fir badi muskil se uth kr washroom mai ja kr ragar ragar kr apne badan pr lage mitti ko saf kiya.
Waha se bahar nikal kr rack se apna kapda nikal kr use pahan liya.
Fir apne purane kapde mai se wo patta nikal liya jo use tunnel ki khudai mai mila tha.

Rack mai se kuch paise dhundh kr apne jeb mai dalne k baad room mai se nikal kr us building se bahar aa gya.

Man mai joy or sofiya ko hajar galiya bakta hua wo waha k chote se bajar mai ja pahucha.

Waha ek tute fute dukan se ek pawroti kharid kr khata hua aage badh gya.

Peter aage ek makan k pas ja pahucha.

Darwaje pr lage bell ko daba kr bajane k bad wo apne balo mai ungli karta use sawarne laga.

Tabhi darwaja khula.
Peter k umra ka hi ek aadmi tha.

Peter uske sath kamre k under gya.
Undar dono sofe pr baith gya.

Wo aadmi- ye kya halat bana li hai. Kaha se lad kr aa rahe ho.

Peter k sarir pr jagah jagah belt k chot se nishan pd gye the.

Peter- ye sab baad mai pahle ye batao ki kuch paise pade hai tumhare pas. Mujhe bahut jarurat hai.

Aadmi- kya karega paise ka. Pichla paisa bhi abhi tak wapas nahi kiya hai tum ne.

Peter- mai bahut jald tumhe sare paise with interest wapas kr dunga.

Aadmi- kaha se karega koi lautri nikli hai tumhari.

Peter- aisa hi kuch samaj lo. Pls mujh pr Biswas kr k kuch paise or de do.

Aadmi- agar paise wapas nahi kiya to.

Peter- tum jo chaho kr sakte ho.

Aadmi- agar mere pure paise 10 din mai wapas nahi kiye to mai tumhari gf sofiya se apne sare paise washul kr lunga.

Peter- mujhe manjoor hai.

Wo aadmi uth kr aalmari k pas gye or use khol kr us mai se kuch paise nikal kr le aaya.

Aadmi- abhi mere pas itne hi paise hai.

Peter- mera kaam ho jaiga.

Fir Peter waha se paise le kr bahar aa gya.

Bajar se bahar aa kr khada ho gya roadside mai.

Thodi der mai ek bus aai.
Peter us bus mai chad gya.

Kai jagah sawari ki chadhata utarta wo bus aakhir ek bade se sahar mai pahucha.

Peter waha utr gya.

Waha utar kr Peter ek taraf chal diya.

Ek makan k pas pahuch kr waha gate pr khade ek guard ko kuch bola.
Thodi der dono baat karte rhe fir wo guard Peter ko ek or isara karta kuch bta raha tha.
Peter waha se wapas us or chal diya.

Kafi der idhar udhar puchta hua wo ek makan k bahar pahucha.

Ye koi office lag raha tha.
Makan k bahar chardiwari bana hua tha.
Peter us chardiwari se under ja kr office k gate pr pahucha.

Gate pr ek Peon stool pr baitha hua tha.
Peter waha ja kr kuch bola.
Peon undar chala gya. Thodi der mai wo waps aaya.

Peter undar gya.
Ek cabin k pas ja kr usne door ko knock kiya.
Door glass ka tha. Jis se under se bahar dikh dikh raha tha lekin bahar se undar ka kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha.

Peter undar gya.
Undar ek adher umra ka aadmi aankho pr chasma lagaye kisi paper pr jhuka hua kuch padh raha tha.
Peter undar ja kr table k samne khada ho gya.
Kuch samay baad wo adher apna gardan utha kr Peter ko dekha.
Baithne ka ishara karta wo adher table pr faile paper ko samet kr ek or rakh diya.

Peter ek kursi pr baith gya.

Adher- Ha to kahiye kaise aana hua.

Peter- Sir, mai apne khet ki khudai kr raha tha to waha khet mai ek pital ka dhatu mila.
Jise saaf kr raha tha kapde se to wo apne aap khul gya. Us dhatu mai under se khokhla tha jis mai se ek patta rakha hua tha. Us mai pta nhi kisi bhasa mai kuch likha hua hai. Wahi le kr mai aap k pas aaya hu ye janane ki wo patte pr kya likha hai.

Adher vyakti- Dikhaiye jara, dekhe kya hai.

Peter- Aap se ek binti hai. Kripa kr ye baat yaha hum dono k bich hi rahe to thik hai. Aap samajh sakte hai aaj kal mahoul kitna kharab hai.

Adher- uska aap bilkul bhi fikra mat kijiye. Yaha aise kaam hi kiye jate hai. Agar hum baato ko raaj nahi rakhenge to kaun aayega hamare pas.

Fir Peter apne jeb se wo patta nikal kr us adher k hath mai pakda diya.

Kafi der us patte ko dekhne k baad wo adher Peter se mukhatib hua.

Adher- Ye jo ptte pr uchara hua hai ye bahut purani bhasha hai jiska mujhe gyan nahi hai. Aap is patte ko aaj yaha chod jaiye. Kal mai ise apne guru ko dikhaunga. Wo hi is ke bare mai kuch bta sakte hai.

Peter- sir aap mujhe unka pta bta dijiye. Mai un se mil kr un ko ye dikha dunga.

Adher- Wo sab se nahi milte. Aap ko mai pta bta bhi dunga fir bhi koi fayda nahi hai. Isliye aap ye mere pas chod jaiye kal saam mai aa kr aap miliyega tabhi mai kuch bta sakta hu.

Peter- Chhama kre sir. Mai ise aap k pas nahi chod sakta. Aap thik chahe to mujhe apne sath hi le chaliye apne guru ji k pas.

Wo adher thodi der kuch sochta raha.

Adher- thik hai fir. Kal subah aap aa jao ise le kr. Fir hum dono waha chalege.

Fir Peter waha se nikal aaya.
Peter k jane k baad is adher me phone utha kr kafi der tak kisi se baat karta raha fir phone rakh kr office se chala gya.





Sonam so gai thi lallu k baho mai hi.
Lallu Sonam k masoom chehre ko dekhta kab nind ki nagri mai pahuch gya use pta hi nahi chala.


Subah uth kr wo nadi kinare chala gya. Waha fresh ho kr wo yoga mai baith gya.

Yoga se uth kr wo khet ki or chala gya. Waha Lallu k papa pahle se pahuche hue the.
Lallu ko dekh kr us k papa khet se bahar aa gye.

Papa- Lalit, beta jara mere sath aa.

Lallu sir jhukaye apne pita k piche chal diya.
Khalihan mai pahuch kr waha bane ek kamre mai Ram chala gya.

Ram kamre mai kursi pr baith gya or Lallu ko ek kursi ki or isara kiya baithne ko.

Ram- lalit beta mai abhi jo kuch puchne wala hu. Ummid hai tum jhuth nahi bologe. Such hi bataoge.

Lallu Ram k chehre ko tak raha tha.

Ram- Parso saam mai gaun k dusre chod pr nadi kinare kya hua tha.

Lallu chauk gya. Papa ko kaise pta chala.

Ram- mai fir kah raha hu. Mujhe such or sirf such sunana hai.

Lallu unhe gaun mai ghumte vakt ek sharabi ka apne chote bachhe ko marne ki kahani sunai fir gaun mai theka chal raha tha ye bhi bataya.
Us din saam mai kaise usne akele us theke ko nastnabut kiya ye sara kissa suna diya.


Ram- Ye kya kiya tum ne. Tum jante ho is ka kya parinam hoga. Abhi tak hamara koi dusman nahi tha. Wo log jo khuleaam daru ka theka chala rahe the wo koi mamuli log nahi the. Unhe police prasasan ka support mila hua tha tabhi wo bekhauf kaam kr rahe the.
Mai ye nahi kahta ki tum ne jo kiya wo galat tha lekin tumhara tarika galat tha.
Kam se kam ek bar bta to dete. Aise akele un se bhirna kya sahi tha. Tumhe kuch ho jata to. Hume to pta bhi nahi chalta. Hum to jaise abhi tumhare chale jane pr bhatak rahe the tumhe dhundhte hue fir se aise hi bhatak rahe hote.
Hamara akela sahara hai tu. Tumhe kuch ho jaiga to fir hum sab ka kya hota.

Mujhe nahi to kam se kam sunil kaka ko hi bta dete.

Lallu sar jhukaye sari bate sun raha tha.

Ram- aage se kabhi aisa kaam bina hum mai se kisi ko bataye nahi karoge.

Lallu- ji. Dhyan rakhunga.

Ram- thik hai jao. Ghar pr sab dhundh rahe honge. Aangan mai kisi ko is bare mai mat batana.

Fir lallu waha se nikal kr bahar aa gya.
Ek gahri sas chod kr wo ghar ki or chal diya.

Dalan pr aa kr nalka pr hath pair dhone k baad dadu k pas aa kr baith gya.

Dadu- kaha tha beta. Badi der se tumhare sunil kaka tumhe dhundhte fir rahe hai.

Lallu- q kya baat hai.

Dadu- ye to mujhe nahi pta. Wahi batayega bhai.

Lallu- thik hai dadu. Dekhta hu mai.

Fir lallu waha se angan mai aa gya.

Kajal Lallu ko bahar se aata dekhi to use chai k liye puchi.

Lallu ha kr diya.

Lallu- maa, majhle kaka kaha hai.
Kajal- aa rahe hai. Kamre mai hai.

Kajal chai lene chali gai.

Thodi der mai sunil kaka kamre se bahar aa gye.

Sunil- kaha the barkhurdar.
Lallu- khet ki or chala gya tha.

Sunil- free ho kr dalan pr aa jaa.

Lallu ha mai gardan hila diya.

Kajal tab tak chai bana kr le aai.
Sunil kaka dalan pr chale gye.

Lallu khatiya pr baith kr chai pi liya fir waha se uth kr dalan pr aa gya.
Shandar udate tha bhai apke udate ka wait rehta hai rozz itni achhi story likhi hai aapane. WAITING for next update sir jii
 

jonny khan

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Nyc updates dear ..!!!!
 

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I m agree with Ng bro rebu

Ghar ke sabhi priwar walo character samjh nahi aa raha hai sirf sunil dada mama mami aur lallu ke ilawa

Baki characters ka sahi base hi nazar ni aa raha esa lagta hai ki yeh sab character jabardasti ke hai

Kajal ek maa hai par maa wale lakshan kahi nahi dikhe usmein usne bs hawas mitayi apni lallu ke sath verna ek maa ko pata nahi chalega kya ki bete ne khana khaya ya nahi kitne hi moke ese aye ki maa ko farak hi nahi pada ki bete ne khana khaya hi nahi

Ram lallu ka baap use jese kisi se matlab hai hi nahi biwi se alag betha hai bete futi ankh nahi suhata use yeh ek bichittar character hai beta ghar se gayab hua baap ka iss cheez ko leke koi dialogue hi nahi hai

Ritu isne bhi hawas mitayi bs apni aur kuch nahi aur mujhe yahan bhi point samjh nahi aya ki Ritu ka pati bhi usse alag sota hai yahi meri samjh mein nahi aa raha yahan ghar ke sare bade marad apni biwio ke sath nahi balki alag kamre mein sote hai

Raghni bhi alag character hai hina soche samjhe kadam utati hai
4th kaki bhi esi hi hai

Ab bari behno ki ati hai agar dekha jaye to behno ko itni care ni hai hero ki unhe lallu ki yaad tabhi ati hai jab uska mazak banana hota hai ya kam hota hai ya fir usne dukhi karna hota hai ya marna hota hai pyar ke hisab se abi tak unka ek bhi point nahi aya hai jese ek bhai behan mein prem hota hai vesa kuch nahi hai

Ab baat karte hai lakshmi ki woh jab se ghar mein ayi hai tabse agar dekha jaye to usne first night lallu ke sath manayi uske baad jan bujh ke lallu ke pass nahi ayi like ek kathputli ki tarha hai woh jese lallu ki behne use nacha rahi hai woh nach rahi hai
Yahan tak ki usne pehle yeh batana bhi jaruri ni samjha ki woh mami ke sath ja rahi hai jab use pata chala ki lallu ko pata chal chuka hai is baat ka to rone dhone ka drama karke apni hawas mita li baki use bhi koi fikar ni hai lallu ki ki pati ne khana khaya ya nahi pati pareshan hoga ya nahi balki ulta use jan bujh ke tang karti hai verna ek biwi apne pati ko dukhi nahi kar sakti chahe koi lakh chutiyapa kare use apni pati ki fikar hoti hai para yahan yo ulta hai

Fir bari ati hai sonam ki jise pata hai ki lallu ki shadi ho chuki hai fir bhi woh jan bujh ke lallu aur lakshmi ke vich drar dalne ki koshish kar raHi hai yahan tak ki mujhe lagta hai dono mami aur mama ko chorh ke koi bhi lallu ki shadi se khush nahi hai sab koshish kar rahe hai ki shadi tut jaye agar gaur se dekha jaye

Baki shayad writer sahab ne kuch socha hoga in characters ke bare mein sorry bro agar mera rebu hura lage to but mujhe jo points galat lage bol diye aur mere rebus ese hi hote hai jhuthi tarif mujh se nahi hoti
Bhai bilkul Sahi kha, Jaise story starting mein thi usse bhatak gai hai.
2 din hue nahi lallu ki Shaadi hue aur usko Bari mami Apne sath lejarahi hai. Kya chutiapa hai. Bhene thori hai Ji Ka janjal hai.
Overall Dekha Jaye to story main dam khatam ho Raha hai.
Lekhak mohdaye ko dhayan dena pare ga.
 
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