Incest Mard ka bachcha.

[Chunmun]

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Mard ka bachcha. Update 13.


Subah darwaja khatkane se Lallu ka dhyan toota.

Ek najar Ritu ko dekha to wo soyi hui thi.
Lallu aage badh kr darwaja khol diya.

Darwaje par kaka khade the.
Anil- kya baat hai. Aaj nind nahi khuli kya.
Lallu- kya karu. Din mai koi kaam nahi tha to so gya tha. Raat mai nind nahi aayi. Abhi ja kr soya tha ki aap aa kr utha diye.

Anil- chalo koi nahi. Fresh ho jao. Apni kaki ko bhi utha dena. Fir chalte hai sangam snann pr.

Kaka chale gye.
Lallu darwaja laga kr ( kaki ko uthau ya apni lugai ko) apne aap se badbadata Ritu k pas aaya or uske chuche ko pakad kr sahlane laga.

Ritu kunmunane lagi.
Lallu Ritu k hotho ko muh mai bhar kr uska rash chusne laga to Ritu ki nind khul gai.
Thodi der bad Ritu bhi Lallu ka bharpur sath de rahi thi.

Lallu alag ho kr baith gya. Man to nahi tha hatne ka lekin abhi samay nahi tha ye sab karne ka.

Lallu- kaka aaye the. Jaldi se ja kr fresh ho jao fir snann ko chalna hai.

Ritu angdai leti hui uthati hai or ek chamat laga deti hai Lallu ko.
Ritu- aaahh harami sale. Pura badan dard kr raha hai. Mujhe pair nahi uthaya ja raha jaise lagta hai ki abhi bhi lauda ghusha hai meri bur mai.

Lallu husta hua Ritu k bur ko sahla diya.
Ritu sssiii sssii karti hui piche ho gai halke se.
Fir Ritu apne kapde ko sahi kr k bahar fresh hone ko chali gai.
Kay chal thi. Chalti hue dono pair failaye piche se gand k dono patt jaise piche do tarbhuj latak rahe ho. Jo chalte wakt har kadam pr upper niche ho raha tha.

Ritu Fresh ho kr aa kr Lallu ko ek chamat fir laga di.

Ritu- kutte, kya halat bana diya hai tu ne mere son pari ka.

Lallu- maine kya kiya. Tu hi to bol rahi thi ki aise chodna ki bahar niklu to log mera chal dekh kr bole dekh apne khasam se sari raat humach hummach kr chudwa kr aai hai.

Ritu Lallu ki bate sunn kr sarma gai. Saram se uske gaal bilkul tamatar ki tarah lal ho gye.

Lallu bahar nikal kr fresh hone chala gya.
Waha se aa kr sare kapde jo naha kr pahanane the wo ek bag mai dal kr sabhi chal diye snann krne.

Aaj, kal itni bhir nahi thi. Kal kumbh snann tha. To kafi sare log kal hi snann kr k chale gye the. dusra kal bhagdar bhi mach gai thi to kuch dar se bhi chale gye the.
Anil- kya baat hai aise q chal rahi hai. ( Anil Ritu ki chal dekh kr bola)
Ritu sarma gai. Ghabra bhi gai. Ab kya bole apne is khasham ko ki wo usko chod kr apne devar k bete se, apne bete se bhi umra mai chote ladke se byah kr k uski lugai ban gai hai. Uski randi ban gai hai or raat bhar us se jam k chudwai hai. Itni chudi hai jitna to isne ek shal mai nahi choda hoga. Itna is naye khasham ne uske phatar ne use ek raat mai chod diya hai.

Ritu- wo raat andhere mai thokar lag gai thi. To pair mai moch aa gya tha.

Lallu Ritu k chal ko dekh kr muh daba kr hisse ja raha tha. Lallu se to hussi hi nahi ruk rahi thi. Or Ritu badi badi aankh kr k Lallu ko dhamkaya ja rahi thi.

Yu hi maje karte hue charo sangam pr pahuch gye.


Charo log naha kr road pr aa gye.
Anil kaka ne ek E-riksha kiraye pr kiye kumbh k sare sthal k darshan k liye.

Ye log us mai baith kr chal diye astnayak k darshan ko.
Sangam mai snan kiye hi the ye log to waha pratham nayak ka puja kr hi liye the Triveni k.

Us ke bad ye log chal diye dusre nayak k darshan ko. Madhav mandir. Jin mai sab se pramukh hain Beni Madhav.

Waise to pure prayag mai kul barah Madhav mandir hai lekin sab mai nahi ghum sakte the q ki aaj hi jana bhi tha ghar to ye log beni Madhav mandir ja kr waha puja archna kiye.
Lallu Ritu k sath pati patni k roop mai hi puja kiya qki kaka to Dadu k sath the.
Lallu in se thoda aage ya piche ho jata tha in samay mai or dono pati patni ban kr Puja kr lete hai.

Fir wha se ye log tisre nayak ko chal diye.
Tisre nayak hai someswer mandir.

Yaha bhagwan shiv ki mandir hai.
Yaha aane pr bahut bhir thi yaha.
Dadu or kaka ek line mai ghus gye lekin Lallu or Ritu ja hi nahi pa rahe the. Tabhi waha ek sadhu baba aaye jo Lallu ka hath pakad kr ek or le gye. Lallu Ritu ka hath pakde hue tha to dono sadhu baba k piche khiche chale gye.
Thodi dur jane pr sadhi baba ek kund k pas aa kr ruk gye.
Sadhu baba- ye sita kund hai. Yaha is Someshwar sthan mai shwyam chandrama Amrit warsha kiye hai.
Tum dono ek kund mai snann kr lo fir prabhu bhole Someshwar ki puja karna.

Lallu or Ritu ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the.
Sadhu baba waha se chale gye the.
Lallu Ritu ka hath pakad kr kund mai utar gye.
Dono us kund mai naha kr bahar aa gye.
Wahi pas mai ek bacha inke liye kapda le kr khada tha.
Bacha- ye aap dono k liye.

Lallu or Ritu fir ek dusre ko dekhne lage. Unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ye ho kya raha hai.
Khair abhi unke kapde to bhing gye the to dono us bache se kapda le kr jaldi se badal liye.
Waha se wo log mandir mai pahuch gye.
Mandir mai ja kr fir dono ek jore ki tarah puja archana ki prabhu Someshwar mahadev ki.
Waha prabhu Someshwar ko ganga jal or phul arpan kr jaise hi pranam karne ko chhuwaa Lallu ne use laga jaise uske pure sarir mai chitiya feng gai ho.
Badan k sare roye khade ho gye.
Lallu pura pasine se bhig gya.
Uski dharkan bahut tej chalne laga. Aankhe mund gai.

Chalo caldi puja kr niklo yaha se. Dusre bhakto ko puja karne do. Waha khada ek panda Lallu k kandhe se pakad kr hilata bola.
Tab kahi ja kr Lallu ko hosh aaya. Fir Ritu ko sath le kr Lallu mandir se bahar aa gya.

Waha se nikal kr fir charo pahuche chauthe nayak Bhardwaj aashram.

Yaha Bhardwaj aashram mai maharishi Bhardwaj ne ek Shiv ling ki stapna ki hai jinhe bhardwajeshwer Shiv k naam se jante hai.
Ye sabhi log waha ja kr unki puja archana karte hai.

Waha se aage panchwa nayak naag washuki ka mandir.
Yaha naag washuki k sath unke bhai seshnaag ki bhi murti hai inki bhi puja ki jati hai yaha.

Lallu ko yaha lag raha tha jaise koi use mandir mai khich raha hai. Apne aap ko bahut rokne ki kosis kr raha tha lekin uske kadam ruk hi nahi rahe the.

Mandir mai wo sab se pahle ja pahucha. Kai bar to dusre ko dhakka bhi lag gya.
Sab se bachta bachata wo mandir mai pahuch gya or waha sidha prabhu washuki k pa achala gya.
Aisa lag raha tha jaise wo khud Lallu ko apne pas khich laye ho.

Lallu unko chhu kr pranam karne ko jaise hi hath badhaya waise hi us ke pure sarir mai badi tej jhatka laga. Jaise laga kisi ne uske hath mai kat liya ho.
Usne gaur se dekha to waha do nishan bhi the jis se halka khun bah raha tha.

Lallu k hosh pakhta ho gye. Use laga ki ab wo jinda nahi bachega. Uske aankho k aage andhera chha gya.
Lallu bhagwan washuki k murat k aage hi chakra kr girne laga ki kisi ne use piche se pakad liya.

Us ke sir pr pani dala. Tab jaa kr Lallu ko thoda hosh aaya.

Tab tak Ritu bhi pas aa gai thi.

Fir Ritu Lallu ko le kr naag seshnaag ji k murat k pas aa gai puja k liye.
Lallu washuki ki puja mai jo hua us se dar gya tha.
Fir bhi abhi yaha Ritu bhi sath thi to Lallu darta hua hath badha kr bhagwan shesnaag pr gangajal or pusp arpan kiya.
Darte darte hath badhaya Ritu k hath ko pakde hue. Lallu dar se uska pura sarir kamp raha tha.
Lallu jaldi se hath badha kr unhe chhu liya. Chhute hi ek bar fir Lallu ko laga jaise uske pure sarir mai sitalata sama gai ho.
Is bar kuch alag hua tha.
Pahli bar use laga jaise bijli ka jhatka laga hai or kisi ne hath mai kat liya hai lekin is bar uske pure sarir mai sitalata se bhar gya. Ab Lallu ko bahut achha lag raha tha.

fir waha se nikal kr charo chal diye chhattte nayak ki puja mai.
Chhatte nayak hai Akshay watt.
Sanagam k nikat ye Akshay watt.
Kaha gya hai ki aise teen watt or hai bharat mai jin mai se ek mathura k brindaban mai hai banshiwatt.

Gaya mai hai gayawatt ya baudhwatt.

Tisra hai Ujjain mai siddhwatt.

To ye charo log Akshay watt ki puja archna ki.

Satwa nayak naag seshnag.
Inka or nag washuki ka mandir dono ek hi hai.
Dono ki puja sath ho jati hai.
Aathwa nayak tirth raaj prayag. Jinhe Madhav raaj bhi kaha jata hai.

Yaha inki puja ki or fir prashad or ghar walo k liye thoda bahut saman kharid kr ye log dhramsala chale gye.
Dhramshala pahuch kr fresh hue or jaldi se khana kha kr apna sara saman samet railway station pahuch gye.
Waha train khulne wali hi thi.
Jaldi jaldi karte hue jaise taise ye log train pakad liye.

Train Mai apne Barth pr baithne k baad inhe sukun ka saas lene ko mila.

Ghumne puja karne mai bahut samay lag gya or aaj hi nikalna bhi tha inhe. Kal ka din to inka waise hi kharab ho gya tha.
Fir bhi aaj bhi ghhume to lekin kai mahatwapurn mandir puja karne ko rah gya jiska malal in logo ko abhi bhi ho raha tha.

Good one.....nice description abt all nayak....

But ye katne ka funda samjh nhi aaya....kya koi aasmani taqat add karne wale ho....???

Keep rocking.....

 

[Chunmun]

Good one.....nice description abt all nayak....

But ye katne ka funda samjh nhi aaya....kya koi aasmani taqat add karne wale ho....???

Keep rocking.....

Thoda bahut aage k liye soch raha tha.

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Mard ka bachcha. Update 14.


Subah k 3 baje ye log apne station pr pahuch gye the.

Station se bahar sunil kaka gadi le kr khade the.
Lallu sara saman apne kandhe pr latkaye dadu kaka kaki k sath station se bahar aa gya.

Sara saman gadi mai rakhne k bad ek ek kr sab gari mai baith gye.

Thodi der mai hi ye log ghar pahuch gye.

Ghar pahuch kr sab saman nikal Lallu dalan pr rakha. Kaki aangan mai chali gai. Dadu or anil hath pair dho apne Pane bistar pr let gye.
Lallu dadu ka saman wahi dalan k kamre mai rakh banki saman le kr aangan aa gya.

Kajal- aa gya mera laal. Kitna suna ho gya tha ye ghar tere bina. ( Kajal Lallu k gaal ko sahlata bola)

Lallu- maa abhi bahut joro ki nind aai hai. Mujhe kahi sone do. Bahut thak bhi gya hu.
Kajal- aa mere lal. Pahle hath pair dho aa. Aaj mere pyara beta apni maa k sath soyega.

Lallu nalka pr ja kr hath pair dho aaya.
Wapas aa kr apne maa k kamre mai chala gya.

Kajal k kamre mai double bed tha.
Lallu ki maa Lallu ka laya bag sahi se rakh rahi thi.
Lallu aa kr apne kapde badal ek dhoti lapet kr bed pr aa gya.
Lallu- maa mujhe aaj koi uthana mat jabtak mai khud na uth jau.
Maa- thik hai beta so ja ab tu.

Lallu aankh band kr sone ki kosis karne laga.

Kajal bhi saman rakh kr bed pr aa gai or Lallu k lalat pr ek chummi de kr sone ko let gai.


Subah bahar sab k sor gul se kajal ki nind khul gai.

Kajal uthane lagi to dekhti hai ki Lallu piche se use apne baho mai le kr soya hua hai.
Kajal muskati hui ahiste se Lallu k hath ko apne upper se hata kr bed se niche utar gai.

Kajal palat kr jane lagi ki use kuch dikha jise dekh kr Kajal ki aankhe bahar ko aane ko ho gai.

Kajal ghur ghur kr dekh rahi thi.

Lallu jo dhoti pahan kr soya tha wo khul gya tha or Lallu ka baburaw subah subah pressure se uth khada hua tha.
Baburaw ka bhayan roop dekh kr Kajal hairan ho gai.
Aaj tak usne ek hi Lauda dekhi thi wo bhi apne pati ka mungfali jitana.
Lallu ka ye vikral roop Kajal ko pasina chudane k liye kafi tha.

Kajal wapas Lallu k badan pr dhoti dal kr uske upper ek chadar dal di.

Kajal apne sine pr hath rakh kr khud ki badhi saso ko sambhalti darwaja khol kr bahar aa gai.

Kajal- q halla kr rahe ho itna. Kaki or Lallu subah aaye hai kumbh se. Abhi so rahe hai. Halla mat karo.

Komal- maa, kaki kya layi hai hamare liye do na.
Komal k sath banki bahne bhi aa kr khadi ho gai.

Kajal- abhi kaki so rahi hai. Jab so kr uthegi tab khud degi.

Sonam- kaki aap hi de do na pls. Aap to meri pyari kaki ho na.
Kajal- jyada maska mat Laga tum log chal ghar ki safai kr sab mil kr. ( Kajal Sonam k kaan ko pakadti boli.)

Sab ladkiya muh tedha karti ghar k kaamon mai lag gai.

Ragini- kab tak soye rahenge ye log. Kajal ja kr dono ko utha de ab. Nahaye dhoye fresh ho kr khana khaye. Ab fir raat mai bhi sona hai inhe nahi to fir raat nind nahi aayegi.

Kajal ja kr pahle Ritu ko utha di. Fir apne kamre mai ja kr Lallu ko uthane lagi.
Lallu angdai leta uth kr baith gya. Samne maa ko dekh kr use gale laga liya.

Kajal- ab pyar karna ho gya ho to ja naha kr kuch kha pi le.

Lallu Kajal k gaal ko chumta bahar chala gya.
Kajal apne pagal bete k harkat pr muskati bed saf kr dusra chadar bicha di fir Gauri ko room mai jhari lagane ko bol kr bahar aa gai.

Lallu uth kr dalan pr aa gya. Yaha ab dadu or anil so kr uth gye the or snann kr liye the.

Dadu- Lallu beta. Tum nahaye ya nahi.
Lallu- dadu abhi abhi so kr utha hu.

Anil- beta ja kr naha le fir sab khana khate hai.

Lallu wahi dalan pr bathroom mai fresh hua fir nalka pr naha kr aangan mai aa gya.
Lallu- maa.. maaa..

Ragini- q chilla raha hai. Kajal rasoi mai khana bana rahi hai.

Lallu- kaki kapda chahiye pahane ko.
Is samay Lallu sirf ek towel kamar pr lapete aangan mai khada tha.

Ragini- hayyy rammm ye tattu kaha se banwa li tu ne.
Lallu- tattu…

Ragini- ha dekh kitana kara rakha hai. Kya pure badan pr karwa liya hai.

Lallu- apne badan ko dekhte hue kaha hai kuch kaki.kya tattu bol rahi ho.

Ragini- buddhu pith pr dekh. Pure jagah tattu bana hua hai ajib sa.

Lallu- kaki apne pith ko kaise dekh sakta hu mai.

Rigini kaki ek darpan la kr Lallu k pith ko dikhati hai.
Lallu darpan mai apne pith dekh kr chauk jata hai.
Pure pith pr ajib sa tattoo bana hua tha.
Lallu- behanchod ye kya hai. Ye kab ho gya.

Ragini kaki- kya matlab. Tumhare pith pr itna bada pure pith mai tattu bana hai or tumhe hi pta nahi.

Lallu- nahi mera matlab. Mai bola tha chota banane ko us ne to pure pith pr bana diya hai.

Baap ka moogfali jitna aur bete ka bhayanak....baap ka hi beta hai ya kisi aur ka....hahaha....

well....aasmani taqat tatoo ban kar aa gai...good....but why ????

Dekhte hai kya reason dikhate ho...

Keep rocking......

 

[Raja thakur]

fantastic update

 

[Princetaswi]

bhut hi achi updates bhai hero ko aise hi pagal rakhna jaise chal raha hai ya jaise bayan kia k kbi bhut acha hu jata hai kbi pagal aur iski choti choti adatian hi hero ko alag krti hai is story ka plot hero ki waja se alag aur sb se behtareen bnati hai

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Last update.....

lallu ke andar ka baccha dikh gaya...good....

well...lallu rota raha aur uski lugaai nhi aai....ye theek nhi...aana chahiye tha....

Ab dekhte hai ki thappad ki goonj sunaai degi ki nhi...aur kab tak....

Keep rocking......

 

[Chunmun]

Baap ka moogfali jitna aur bete ka bhayanak....baap ka hi beta hai ya kisi aur ka....hahaha....

well....aasmani taqat tatoo ban kar aa gai...good....but why ????

Dekhte hai kya reason dikhate ho...

Keep rocking......

Sorry but kya karu. Likhte wakt jo dil mai aata hai type karta jata hu.
Mujhe laga ki thoda ye is type ka takat rahega to mujhe kahani aage badhane mai aasani hogi.
Ab bhai aap ki tarah to mere dimag mai utne lafde nahi aate hai na jo pyar ka bhukha mai xb pr dikhaye ho aap.
Kabhi dubara padhunga use.

 

[Raj142]

JABRDUST UPDATE BHAI

 

[Chunmun]

bhut hi achi updates bhai hero ko aise hi pagal rakhna jaise chal raha hai ya jaise bayan kia k kbi bhut acha hu jata hai kbi pagal aur iski choti choti adatian hi hero ko alag krti hai is story ka plot hero ki waja se alag aur sb se behtareen bnati hai

Kosis rahega bhai. Waise kahi mai bhatak jau to aap log sambhalne ko to ho hi.