Bhai me ek silent reader hun main 2 din pahele hi app ki story padhna start kiya aur ajj tak diye sabhi update maine khatam kara diya .story to bhai bahut hi badhiya aur super hai ,bahut hi dil khus kar dene wale update the .magar main baat kahena chaunga ki app ab story ko fantasy ya fir magic ke tarf leke jaa rahe ho to isme laxmi ka lallu ke life me bahut hi important role to rahega hi na ya fir asie hi shadi karadi. Main ye isliye puch raha ku main bahut si comment bi padhe jisme app ne likha hai ki main soch ke nahi lihkta bas jo man me aaya vo lihkta hun to bhai story link jarur rakhana nahi to story achi nahi lagegi.
Aur ek baat app ek family story lihk rahe ho aur app bahut sare characters ko bhi add kiya hai to uss hisab se app ko sabhi ke role ko thik se dikhana padega ,last update me dekha to lallu gaon aaya to sabse mila magar usme main role papa ka kuch hona chaiye tha kyun ki beta bahara gaya tha ghara chod ke magar papa ne kuch pucha hi nahi , fir dadaji to lallu ko bahut pyar karte hain magar unka bi role nahi hai .
Ritu to patni hai lallu ki uske bi koi baat hi nahi hua usse
Bas iss sab ka jara dhyana rakhiye nahi to story se link chali jati hai.
Main janta hoon ke app ek writer nahi ho bas lockdown ke bajahase lihk rahe ho magar app be asie sab story to padhe hi hoge to uss hisab se likha karo acha rahega.
App ke story me ye mera 1st comment hai to bhai bura mat lagana .
Valid point brother
