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Incest Mard ka bachcha.

Pbsex

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Bhai
Plot bahut hi sandar hai. Start bhi damakedar thi. Kumbh ho ya ujjen dono ka sandar detail tha. Shopping ho ya bachche ko bachana wo bhi mast tha.
Per ritu ka ruthna kuch kam samaj aaya. Wo ek old age lady hai or wo lallu ko pati manti hai. Mana lallu ne dard diya to dava bhi di. Or rudna or is tarha se bejjati karna dono me bhi farak hai.
Ek patni pati se naraj ho sakti hai. Per sabke samne aese bejjati nahi karti.
Kajal ritu ka pata chalne se naraj hui. Or ye thik bhi laga. Kajal ka us raat ka gussa bhi achcha tha. Per lallu ka use maaf kar dena samaj nahi aaya. Maa ko maaf kar deta but fir se bina baat clear kiye chod diya se samaj nahi aaya. Lallu ka sabke samne Kajal ke bare me na bata kar dil chhu liya tha. Per usi raat fir se Kajal ko chod kar dil tod diya.
Jese Sonam ke sath pyar bhari baate dikhai lotne per wese hi Kajal ke sath kuch dikhte. Kajal ko chup karwa kar bahar aa jate. Kajal ko aahsaas diware ki sach me uske bete ko bhi pida huyi hai.
Yese chudai karne se to laga Jese hero ek kutta hai. Koi maan samman nahi.
Sorry yadi mera comment bura lage to. But mene keval apne dil ki baat rakhi hai. Kahai bahut achchi hai. Lallu achcha khel raha hai.
Sorry again

And waiting for next.......
 

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Mard ka bachcha. Update47.




Lallu lakshmi k kathor parvat ka ehsas karta hua lakshmi k waksh pr apna sar dabaye use hotho se chum raha tha.
Lakshmi ko aisa ehsas kabhi nahi mila tha. Bahut achha lag raha tha use.
Lakshmi Lallu k sar k balo ko sahlati sisakti ja rahi thi.

Lallu sar utha kr lakshmi k hotho pr laga diya.

Lakshmi k galo ko sahlata hua bade pyar se uske hotho se tapakne ko aatur prem rash ko Lallu nichodta ja raha tha.

Jab dono ko sas lena muskil ho gya to muh utha kr gahri sas lene lage.

Lakshmi simat kr Lallu k sine pr sar rakh li.

Lallu lakshmi ko apne aagosh mai liye uske pith pr hath chalata ja raha tha.
Jaise hi Lallu ka hath lakshmi k nangi pith k hisse pr jata dono k sarir mai kampan chhutt jati.

Lallu aahista se lakshmi k choli k dor ko pakad kr khich diya.
Choli dhili ho gai.
Lallu choli ko lakshmi k kandhe pr se niche khich diya.
Lakshmi apni aankhe band kiye Lallu k hatho mai apne aap ko samarpit kr di.
Lakshmi mare sarm k lallu k sine mai muh chupaye hue thi.
Lallu ek hath ko choli se nikal diya.

Undar lakshmi k lal bra ujagar ho gya. Jis mai lakshmi k Amrit kalash chupe hue bahar aane ko tarap rahe the.
Lakshmi ko dusri or kr Lallu dusre hath se bhi choli ko nikal kr lakshmi k sarir se alag kr ek or rakh diya.

Lakshmi lajjya se apna pith Lallu ki or kiye apne dono hatho se apna chehra dhak li.

Lallu lakshmi k bedag chikni pith or us pr bra ki lal pati dekh kr romanchit ho raha tha.
Lallu jhuk kr lakshmi k pith pr chummiyo ki jhari laga di.

Lakshmi sisakti hui chadar ko apne dono hatho se pakad kr aundhe muh ho gai.

Lallu bra k patti ko huk k pas use muh mai le kr huk ko kholne ki kosis karne laga apne muh se.
Lallu ki garm sas or uske hotho ka sparsh lakshmi ko ek naya anubhab kara raha tha.

Lakshmi waise hi maje se aankhe band kiye Lallu k utpatang harkato ka maja le rahi thi.

Bra ka hukm khul gya. Lallu use danto mai dabaye dono or kr diya.
Kandhe pr chipke bra k straps ko kandhe ko chumta Lallu use bhi khishaka diya.

Lallu lakshmi k kandhe ko pakad kr pith k bal ghuma diya.

Lakshmi k gore aami pr bra ka cups tanga hua tha banki hissa light ki raushni mai sangmarmar ki tarah chamak raha tha.

Lallu ko lakshmi k unnat ubharo k gahri ghati apni or khich raha tha.

Lallu aage badh lakshmi k waksh pr tange cups ko hotho mai daba kr alag kr diya.

Lakshmi aah bharti apne dono hatho se apne us dono pahadiyo ko dhak liya.

Lallu ko ek jhalak matra mil paya.

Lallu us Komal pahadi or us pr ki pink choti ko dekh kr ek aah bhar kr rah gya.

Ab Lallu k Sabra ki intha ho gai thi.

Lallu jhapat kr lakshmi k pure chehre ko chumne laga.
Chehre ko chumta hua Lallu niche sarakta ja raha tha. lallu lakshmi surahi jaisi chikni gardan par ja pahucha.
Lakshmi apne gale mai Lallu k saso ko mahsus kr gale ko utha kr lambi kr li or Lallu ko apne baho mai bhar uske pith pr hath se sahlane lagi.

Lallu lakshmi k gale ko chumta hua niche aane laga.

Lakshmi k chote pink nipples Lallu k badan se ragad kr khade ho gye the.
Thoda sa bhi agar Lallu k sarir se chipkata to lakshmi k muh se masti ki lahar se ek aah nikal jata

Lallu niche aata lakshmi k ek nipple ko muh mai bhar liya.
Lakshmi maje se hawa mai urne lagi.
Lallu k balo ko nochti lakshmi Lallu k sar ko apne chuche pr dabati ja rahi thi.

Lallu thodi der ek nipple ko chusne k bad use chod dusre ko pakad liya or pahle waksh ko apne hatheli mai le kr halke hatho se sahlane laga.

Lakshmi aanand ki sari seema tor badlo ki sair kr rahi thi. Wo apne hotho ko apne dant se katati naak se lambi lambi sase chhod rahi thi.

Lallu chus chus kr dono chuche ko lal kr diya.

Fir lallu waha se niche aa gya.
Lakshmi k pet pr Lallu k sas ko mahsus kr lakshmi k pet mai gudgudi ho rahi thi.

Lallu lakshmi k chikni pet ko chumta uske gahri nabhi pr aa gya or apna jibh nikal kr use chat liya.
Lakshmi kamar uhta kr patakne lagi bed pr.

Lallu apni laplapate jibh se lakshmi k nabhi mai ghusha kr use chatne laga.

Lakshmi ki penty to pura bhing gai thi. Jaise panty mai hi peshab kr diya ho.

Nabhi se khelne k bad Lallu waha se niche khishak kr lakshmi k lahnga jo kamar pr bandhi thi.
Lallu kamar ko chumta lahnga k dor ko danto se pakad kr khaich diya.

Lahnga ka dor khulte hi Lallu use muh mai daba kr niche khishkane laga.

Lahnga lakshmi k kamar k niche bada hua tha or Lakshmi use hatho se pakad bhi li.
Lakshmi ko bada sarm aa raha tha lallu k hatho yu nangi hone mai.

Lallu ek bar lakshmi ko dekha wo najre jhukaye sarma kr muh ghuma li.

Lallu apna kurta or baniyan khol liya. Ab Lallu upper se nanga tha.
Fir us ne apna pajama bhi khol diya
Ab Lallu sirf kachhe mai tha sirf.
Ab Lallu lakshmi k badan ko niche se upper sahlata aage badhne laga.

Lallu upper aa kr ek chuche ko hotho mai daba liya or dusre ko hath se masalne laga.

Lakshmi aahe bharti hui Lallu k pith ko sahla rahi thi. Lallu k nange badan ko apne badan se chipkaye lakshmi bin pani k machli ki tarah bed pr machal rahi thi.

Lallu lakshmi k chuche ko dono hatho mai pakde mashal raha tha.
Lallu fir ek bar niche aa ne laga or dono hatho se langha k sath sath lakshmi k panty ko pakad kr khich diya.

Lakshmi chauk kr uth baithi. Lekin tab tak Lallu bhi uth chuka tha or lahanga jo aadhe pair tk aa gya tha use pura khich kr lakshmi k pairo se nikal diya.

Lakshmi apne hatho se apne sarmgah ko ghak kr piche palat gai. Ab lakshmi ka pith Lallu ki or tha.

Lallu lakshmi k gol gand ko dekh kr babla ho gya.
Wo apna chaddi bhi khol kr fek diya or piche apne hath se halke halke lakshmi k pith ko sahlane laga. Lakshmi sihar gai. Wo machalne lagi.

Lallu pith se khelta hua lakshmi se piche se chipak gaya ja kr.

Lallu ka pura sarir lakshmi se chipka hua tha.
Lakshmi sisakti hui ghum kr Lallu ko apne gale se laga kr uske hotho se chusne lagi.

Lallu lakshmi k pith pr hath chalata apne hath ko niche le ja kr lakshmi k fulle hue gand ko mutthi mai bhar liya.

Lakshmi aah bharti hui Lallu k hotho ko kat li.

Lallu ab is prem ko purn kr lakshmi ko har tarah se apna banana chahta hai.

Lallu- lakshmi kya tum taiyar ho hamesha meri ban kr rahne ko. Mujhe maaf karna ye saval mai ab kar raha hu jo bahut pahle karna chahiye tha.

Lakshmi- kya itna sab hone k baad bhi aap ko ab is sawal ka jabab chahiye.

Lallu- mai ek bar tumhare muh se sunana chahta hu.

Lakshmi aage badh kr uske hotho ko chum li or sarma kr sine mai muh chupa li.

Lakshmi- mil gya jabab.
Lakshmi lajati hui boli.

Lallu lakshmi k pure sarir pr apna hath chala raha tha. Itna Komal badan tha ki Lallu ka hath ek jagah ruk hi nahi raha tha.

Lallu uth kr uske pair k pas aa gya or fir waha se lakshmi ko chumna start kr diya or upper badhne laga.
Upper badhta Lallu lakshmi k jangh ko katne laga lakshmi bed pr machalne lagi.

Lallu lakshmi k dono pair ko hath se pakad kr faila diya.
Lakshmi jhat se apne hatho se apne chut ko dhak li.

Lallu lakshmi k hotho k charo or apne jibh se chatne laga.

Lallu jibh chalata hua ek hath se uske gol gol chuche ko masalne laga.
Lakshmi dard or maje se karah rahi thi.

Dhire dhire Lakshmi ka hath waha se hat raha tha.
Lallu ek hath se uske dono hath ko waha se hata kr lakshmi k choti si chut pr apna jibh se chat liya.

Lakshmi Lallu k sar ko waha se dhakel kr hatane lagi.

Lakshmi- pls.. waha nahi. Wo ganda hai. Pls man jaiye.

Lallu kaha manane wala tha wo muh khol kr pure chut ko muh mai bhar kr use kaatne or jibh chalene laga.
Lakshmi tadapti hui Lallu k muh mai jhar gai.


Lallu uth kr baith gya or Lakshmi k chut k muh pr apna danda laga kr waha masalne laga.
Lakshmi Lallu k garm laude ko apne chut pr mahsus kr sihar uthi.
Uska gala sukh gya tha. Hoth fadfada raha tha.

Lallu thodi der laude ko chut pr masal kr use achhi tarah chut ras se gila kr diya fir lakshmi k chut k chote se ched pr apna danda laga kr lakshmi k kamar ko pakad liya.

Lakshmi apne danto se apne hoth ko daba rakhi thi.

Lallu ek halka dhakka laga diya lekin itna chota ched tha ki Lallu ka Lola fishal kr lakshmi k pet se ja laga.

Lallu idhar udhar dekha to table pr ek cream ka dabba rakha tha.
Lallu jhat se use utha kr laya or pahle achhi tarah se lakshmi k gulabi chut k ched mai ungli dal kr undar tak laga diya fir apne dande ko us lubricant cream se pura chopar diya.
Fir lallu aa kr lakshmi k tango k bich aa kr baith gya or Lakshmi ko dekh kr apne dande ko ek hath se pakad kr chut k chhed pr laga diya fir lallu lakshmi k dono boobs ko pakad kr ek jor ka dhakka laga diya.

Lakshmi ek jor ki chikh mar di lekin lallu jaldi se apna hath aage kr lakshmi k muh ko band kr diya.

Lallu ka danda lakshmi k chut ko far kr aadha under ja ghusa.
Chut pura fail gya tha. Us khun ko ek patli lakir nikal aai.

Khun dekh kr Lallu ka dar se bura haal ho gya.
Lallu najar utha kr lakshmi ko dekha to lakshmi ki aankho se aansu ki dhara uske chehre pr pura faila hua tha.

Lallu ko ye dekh kr bahut jayda bura laga. Wo lakshmi k upper jhuk kr uske chehre pr phaile aanshuo ko chat kr saf kr diya.

Lallu fir Lakshmi k ek pinki nipple ko muh mai bhar kr chubhlane laga.

Thodi der mai jab lakshmi ko thoda aaram mila dard se to wo Lallu k sar k balo ko sahlane lagi.

Lallu samajh gya ki ab lakshmi ka dard kam ho gya hai to wo ab halka halka apna kamar hilane laga.

Lakshmi ko abhi bhi dard ho raha tha.
Wo har dhakke pr karah uthati. Jab tak lakshmi k chut ki manspeshiya undar se Lallu k laude k layak jagah nahi bana li.

Thodi der baad lakshmi k muh se dard k sath sath maje ki aahe bhi nikalne lagi.
Lallu ab thoda gahra dhakka lagane laga tha.
Lakshmi ki dono chuchiya Lallu k mardan se lal ho gya tha or uske nipples bhi. Nipples pr to kahi kahi Lallu k katne se blood bhi aa gye the

Abhi ab Lallu lakshmi k kamar ko pakad kr uske dono pairo k bich baitha lambe lambe strong strock laga raha tha jis se lakshmi ki chuchiya ek lay mai aage piche hil rahi thi.
Lakshmi apne hatho se chadar pakde Lallu k dhakko ko sahti hui uska pura sath de rahi thin
Lakshmi ko to yaad bhi nahi tha ki is pahli raat mai hi wo kitni bar apna kaam rash baha chuki hai.

Lallu aaj lakshmi ko pura nichod lene k mud mai tha.
Kaha ye gaun ka gabru javan desi chhora or Lakshmi kaha ek dharmik sthal ki najuk si ladki. Badi muskil se Lallu k lole ko jhel rahi thi.

Abhi Lallu apna pura lauda nikal kr ek bar mai hi Lakshmi k undar jar tak thok raha tha.
Lakshmi to har dhakke k baad lag raha tha jaise uske bachhedani mai Lallu ka lauda ghus raha hai.
Wo aasamn ki sair kr rahi thi.

Lallu apne ghutne pr baitha lakshmi k gand k niche hath se pakad kr use uthaye dhakka dhakk apna reil gari chalaye ja rha tha.

Lallu ko to jaise swarnim aanand ka anubhab ho raha tha.

Lallu ab apne charam shukh k najdik hi tha to uska speed bahut badh gya tha.
Lakshmi bhi kabhi apne hotho pr jibh girati to kabhi Lallu lallu ko pakad kr chum leti.

Wo bhi ab karib hi thi. Uska pura sarir kampta hua sara khun uske chehre pr aa gya tha.

Lallu lakshmi k dono gol doodh ko nichodta hua ek karah bharta apna lawa lakshmi k garm bhatthi mai ugalne laga.
Lallu k lawe ko apne undar feel kr k lakshmi bhi jharti chali gai.


Dono ek dusre ko apne baho mai samaye aise hi lete saso ko durust karne lage.

Thodi der bad Lallu aahista se lakshmi k upper se utha kr baith gya.

Lakshmi k chut se jaise hi lauda nikala Lallu ne ek madhur dhwani sunai diya pakk.


Lallu jab lakshmi k chut ko dekha to uska bahut bura haal tha.
Chut k hoth suj kr full gye the or kafi lal bhi ho gya tha.
Abhi thodi der pahle jaha chut k dono hoth bilkul chipke hue the abhi to Lallu k mote dande se mar kha kr fail gya tha. Jis mai se dono ka mila hua prem rash sath mai lakshmi k chut se nikalta khun teeno mil kr abhi us ched se nikal raha tha.

Lallu towel lapet kr washroom chala gaya or waha se fresh ho kr aaya to uske hath mai ek bhinga hua kapda tha jis se Lallu lakshmi k chut ko pahle achhe se saaf kr diya.

Lakshmi to jaise behosh ho ho gai thi.
Apne chut pr garm pani ka ehsas pa kr aankh khol kr dekhi to Lallu ko saf karta dekh wo sarma gai.

Lallu use saff kr fir ek bar washroom gya or
dubara waha se wo kapda bhinga kr le aaya or us se thodi der lakshmi k chut ki sekai kr di.

Fir lallu uth kr ek kissi us chut pr le kr kapde ko ek or rakh diya or bed pr aa kr lakshmi ko baho mai bhar uske hotho pr chum liya.

Lakshmi laja kr Lallu se chipak gayi.

Lakshmi ki chut mai abhi bhi dard tha.
Lakshmi ko ghumne se chut mai dard karne laga jis se uske muh se ek karah nikal gai.

Lallu uth kr kapda pahan lakshmi k upper chadar dal kr dhak diya or rasoi mai chala gya.
Waha freezer se ice nikal kr laya or fir us se lakshmi k chut ki thodi sekai kr di..

Ice lagne se lakshmi ko bahut gudgudi ho rahi thi.

Lekin Lallu ka pyar dekh kr use bahut khushi ho raha tha.

Lallu mobile nikal kr dekha to abhi 3 baj rahe the.
Thodi der sekai k baad Lallu fir se aa kr lakshmi ko pakad kr so gya.
Lallu ka man to nahi bhara tha lekin wo dekh raha tha ki abhi lakshmi ki halat bahut jyada kharab hai. Is liye apne man ki bhabna ko daba kr sone ki kosis karne laga.
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Lakshmi bhi bahut thak gai thi.
Use nahi pta tha ki use rani maa ne kis sandh se sadi kr di hai. Jo ek hi bar mai lakshmi ka kachumar nikal diya hai.

Lakshmi Lallu k mashum chehre ko dekhte hue wo bhi nind ki hasin wadiyo mai kho gai.
 

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Mard ka bachcha. Update 48.


Subah 8 baje kisi k darwaja khatkane se dono ki nind khuli.

Abhi tak dono ek dusre k baho mai chipke nange so rahe the.

Dono apne aap ko dekha to khud ko nanga pa kr dono jhat se uth kr lakshmi to chadar hi khich kr lapet li or Lallu jis towel ko pahan kr soya tha wahi lapet liya.
Fir lallu apna kapda utha kr pahan liya or Lakshmi ko bhi uska kapda utha kr diya or pahle lakshmi ko washroom se ho aane ko bola.

Lakshmi bed se utar kr jaise hi khadi hone k liye apne pairo pr bhar di waise hi uske muh se ek karah nikal gya.
Dono tang k bich joint mai bahut dard tha.

Hona hi tha ye to aaj kacchi kali se fool jo bani thi.

Lallu uth kr lakshmi ko apne god mai utha liya or use washroom tak chod aaya.
Waha ek towel ja kr de diya.

Lakshmi snann kr waha se towel lapet kr nikli.

Fir apne bag se kapde nikal kr pahanane lagi tab tak Lallu fresh hone chala gya.

Jab lallu wHa wha se aaya to lakshmi ek lal sari pahne khadi thi.
Lallu- ab kaisi ho aap. Kya abhi bhi dard hai.

Lakshmi bura sa muh bana kr ha kr di.

Lallu- chal sakti hai aap.
Lakshmi- kaise chalungi sab k samne. Langdati hui sab k samne kaise jaungi. Sab kya sochenge.

Lallu- fir kya kare abhi.

Lakshmi- aap bahar jao. Mai nahi jaungi. Mai yahi rahungi.

Lallu- thik hai mai dekhta hu koi dabai.

Fir lallu kapda pahan kr darwaja khol bahar aa gya.
Aangan mai kafi sare log baithe the.
Lallu ko bahut sarm aa raha tha. Aaj pahli bar wo itna late utha tha.

Ghar ki sabhi ladkiya or kaki maa bha mami sab aangan mai bathe the to koi kaam kr rahi thi.

Choti bua- to janab ki nind puri ho gai.

Lallu- ji bua. Wo raat late nind aai thi.to…

Choti bua- mujhe batana tha na. Mai to chhat pr hi thi. Tumhe to nahi dekhi mai.

Lallu- wo...wo..

Roma- bua, bhai to lakshmi ji ki mohini surat mai khoye the. Inka sara nind chain to bhabhi ne chura liya. Fir inhe kaise nind aati.

Gauri- pta hai bua raat bhai na bhabhi ki ghunghat utha rahe the to inka hath kamp raha tha.

Sab thahaka laga kr huss diye.

Ritu- Sonam ja jakr bahu ko la kamre se. Use sab ne akela chod diya hai.

Sonam waha se uth kr kamre ki or chali gai.

Lallu Komal ko dekh kr.
Lallu- di chai do na.

Ragini- ja apni bibi se mang. Use bol hum sab k liye chai banaye.

Tab tak Sonam bhi waha aa gai.

Sonam- Ritu se, maa bhabi ko bukhar hai. Koi dabai ho to do na.
Kajal- mai deti hu.
Fir Kajal uth kr kamre mai chali gai or waha se dabai le kr lakshmi k pas chali gai.

Kajal- beta jyada dard hai. Ohh mai bhi kya puch rahi hu.( Dard to hoga hi mushal jaisa jo hai muaa ka.)
Ye lo beta abhi chai bhej rahi hu. Uske baad ye dabai khana. Ye bukhar or dard dono ko sahi kr dega.

Tab tak badi mami bhi waha aa gai.
Mami- kya hua mere bete ko.

Kajal- kuch nahi, halka sa bukhar aa gya hai. Dabai de di hai. Abhi thik ho jaiga.

Kajal room se chali jati hai chai lane.

Mami- beta tabiyat jyada kharab ho to doctar k pas chale.

Lakshmi- nahi maa. Mai thik hu. Bas halka sa bukhar hai.

Tabhi waha Ragini chai le kr aa jati hai.

Ragini- lo beta. Ye chai k sath bread kha lo. Fir dabai le lena.

Mami- ye achanak bukhar kaise aa gya.

Ragini badi mami ko ek taraf le ja kr.
Ragini- are bhabhi raat dono ne first night manai hai. Isi liye aisa hua hai. Bachchiya sab bata rahi thi.

Ragini aahista se sab batai badi mami ko tab ja kr unke palle pada.

Mami muskudate hue Lakshmi k pas aai or uske sar pr hatho se sahla kr matha chum li.
Fir wo Ragini kaki k sath kamre se bahar aa gai.

Ragini- Sonam beta ek do bahan apne bhabi k pas chale jao. Waha wo akeli rahegi kamre mai to use or tabiyat kharab jaisa hi lagega

Fir sonam or Komal uth kr waha se lakshmi k pas aa gai.

Dono bed pr baith kr lakshmi k sath bate karne gai.

Idhar aangan mai sabhi aaurte sadi ki taiyari mai busy ho gai.

Lallu bhi dalan pr ja kr kaka logo se kaam ka puch kr un logo k sath kaam mai hath batane laga.

Lallu ko jyadatr bahar ka hi kaam mila tha to wo bahar hi busy ho gya wo aangan nahi aa paya. Uska bada man tha ki aa kr ek bar lakshmi ko dekhe ki wo kaisi hai lekin time nahi mil raha tha. Bahut kaam bacha hua tha abhi. Saam mai mehman aane wale the. Fir barat bhi jane wali thi.

Uske yaha riwaj tha ki barati jane se pahle din mai Larke k yaha ki khana khate hai. To wo sab bhi byabasta dekhna tha.

Inhi kamo mai wo fasha hua tha.

Idhar lakshmi ab thodi sahi thi. Wo halke halke chal pa rahi thi to bahar aa kr sab k sath baith gai or sab sadi ki taiyari uska bish gana bajana sab dekh rahi thi.

Saam mai Lallu free ho paya.

Wo sidha aangan mai aaya or lakshmi ko dhundhne laga.
Ab kisi se puch bhi nahi sakta tha ko lakshmi kaha hai. Nahi to sab usi ka gajal bana dete. Us mai bhi ladkiya to abhi isi tak mai rahti thi ki kab Lallu lakshmi se related koi baat kare ya koi harkat kare or sab pakad kr uska class laga de.


Lallu pura ghar chhan mara lekin use lakshmi kahi nahi dikhi.

Lallu- maa...maa.
Lallu Kajal ko dekh kr use rok liya.


Kajal- kya hai beta. Abhi bahut kaam hai abhi disturb mat kr.

Lallu- maa lakshmi ji kaha hai.
Lallu dhire se maa se pucha.

Kajal- q kya kaam hai.
Lallu- maa, kaam k chakkar mai subah se us se mila nahi hu. To isi liye…

Kajal- wo yaha nahi hai. Mandir gai hai sab k sath. Abhi aati hogi. Ab chod mera rasta abhi bahut kaam karne ko pada hai.

Lallu muh bana kr side ho gya.

Shaam ka samay tha aangan mai aurte puja ki taiyari karti hui waha ki jo kshetriya lok geet hota hai wo ga rahi thi.

Idhar bahar dalan pr baratiyo ka aana suru ho gyabtha jo gariyo mai apna apna subidha k hishab se baithate ja rahe the.


Aangan mai sari vivah ki rashme puri ho jane k bad ladka ko le kr sabhi ladki walo k yaha chal diye.

Lallu Raghav k sath uske car mai hi baitha tha.

Ladki walo ka gaun inke yaha se dur tha 10 baj gye waha pahuchne mai.


Waha thoda pahle Raghav ko ghodi pr baitha kr sab lag gye nagin dance mai.

Gaje paje k sath nachte hue sab ladki wale k yaha pahuche.
Waha fir sab ka swagat hua or fir Raghav ka jaimala hona tha to uska taiyari hone laga.

Thodi der mai dulhan ko le kr ladki wale aa gye or wahi stage pr dono ka jaimala hua.

Fir Raghav ko vivah k liye aangan mai le jaya gya.
Jaha sabhi rashme pure hone mai subah ho gya.

Sabhi barati khana kha kr waha se pahle hi aa gye the.
Waha sirf anil or sunil kaka rah gye.
Sab Lallu ko bhi rukne ko kah rahe the lekin lallu ko to apne ghar ja kr lakshmi ko dekhne ki jaldi thi. Waise bhi wo aangan ja kr apni bhabi ko dekh aaya tha.

Lallu jab apne aangan aaya to sab uth chuke the tab tak subah ho gya tha.

Lallu aa kr sab se pahle apne kamre mai gya lekin ek bar fir use nirasha hi hath laga.
Lakshmi waha nahi thi.

Lallu kapda badal kr bahar aa gya.
Ghar ki sabhi aurte use gher kr baith gye.
Lallu se sabhi waha kya kya hua, bhabhi kaisi hai, unka parivar kaisa hai sab tarah tarah ka sabal puchne lage.
Lallu sab ko jaldi jaldi jabab deta un logo se pichha chudana chah raha tha. Lekin lallu unke jitne sabal ka jabab deta utne hi or sabal wo log Lallu se or kr dete.
Ant mai Lallu se raha nahi gya.
Lallu- are kitne saval karoge aap log. Abhi thodi der mai to aa hi jainge Raghav bhaiya apne dulhania ko le kr fir jee bhar kr dekh lena.
Abhi koi ek cup chai pila do pahle.

Tabhi piche se Ritu kaki chai le kr aa gai.

Ritu- mujhe lag hi raha tha ki tu chai manenga. Le mai pahle hi bana diya tha.

Lallu chai pita soch raha tha ki lakshmi k bare mai kaise puche sab se.

Fir lallu najar ghuma kr dekha to Sonam or Komal bhi yaha nahi thi.

Lallu- di kaha hai. Wo abhi tak nahi uthi hai kya.

Gauri- didi ko dhundh rahe ho ya bibi ko.
Lagta hai hamara bhai d or b ka fark bhul gya hai.

Sab Gauri ki baat st jor se Huss diye.

Lallu- yaha to baithana hi bekar hai.
Lallu bahana bana kr Sonam di k kamre mai ghus gya jaha Sonam or Komal dono lakshmi k sath baith kr bate kr rahe the.

Lallu bhi wahi aa kr baith gya.

Komal- tum yaha kya kr raha hai.

Lallu- ye aaj kaisa sabal hai. Is se pahle to kabhi nahi pucha tha aap ne.

Komal- abhi yaha ladies talk chal raha hai chal bhag yaha se.

Lallu- aayy….. ye kaisa talk hai jo ek bhai ko uski pyari bahan se alag kr de.

Sonam- ye aisa talk hai jo uske pati ko uski patni se alag kr deta hai.
Sonam lallu k kaan ko pakad kr use kamre se nikal di.

Lallu bura sa muh banata waha se bahar aa gya.

Roma- kya bhai… mil aaye apne didi kam bibi se.

Badi mami- Kya bol rahi hai Roma beta. Kuch soch kr to bola kr.


Lallu wahi baitha tha. Tabhi sonam or Komal k sath lakshmi bai aangan mai aa gai.

Gauri- lo aa gai aap ki rampyari. Ab jitna dekhna hai dekh lo.

Sab Huss diye.

Lakshmi bhi sarma gai.

Lallu chor najro se lakshmi ko dekh raha tha tabhi…

Rani- dekho bhai kaise dekh raha hai bhabhi ko.

Lallu- he bhagwan ab mai yaha baith bhi nahi sakta.

Lallu uth kr apne kamre mai chala gaya.

Waha ja kr Lallu apne bed pr let gya.



Lallu- ye sab to ab Lakshmi ji ki or dekhna bhi band karva denge.
Kya karu,kya karu. Bada dekhne ka man kr raha hai or sab nirdai use mujh se dur rakhne ka hr tarah ka prayash kr kar rahe hai.


Lallu khud se bate karta hua bed pr leta hua tha.

Raat to soya nahi tha isliye abhi bed pr late hi nind aa gya.

Pta nahi kitna samay hua tha.

Lakshmi- uthiye, bhaiya or bhabhi aa gye hai. Ab uth jaiye.

Lallu aankh khola to lakshmi Lallu pr jhuki use utha rahi thi.
Lallu lakshmi ko baho mai le kr use bhi bed pr apne sath sula liya.

Lakshmi- kya kr rahe hai. Darwaja khula hua hai. Koi aa jaiga.

Lallu- kitna tarpati ho. Kya tumhe maja aata haiujhe tarpa kr.

Lakshmi- mai kya karu. Koi na koi sath hi hote hai. Fir mai kya kru.

Lallu- abhi to koi sath nahi hai na. Abhi thodi der mere sath let jao.

Lakshmi- bhaiya bhabhi aaye hai. Chaliye na, unhe dekhne chalte hai. Sab wahi hai.

Lallu- ye to or bhi achhi baat hai. Abhi idhar koi nahi aayega. Hum itmanan se pyar bhari bate kr sakte hai.

Lakshmi- kya kr rahe hai koi aa jaiga. Chodiye na.
Lallu- pahle ye batao ki ab tum kaisi ho.
Kitne der se tumhe dekha nahi tha. Ab kaleje ko thodi thandhak pahuchi hai.

Lakshmi- hutt besaram,
Lakshmi lallu ko apne pas se dhakel kr dur kr di.

Lallu muh bana kr baith gya.

Lakshmi- aa jaiye Fresh ho kr. Mai tab tak didi logo k sath ja rahi hu bhabhi ko dekhne.
Lakshmi bahar chali gai.

Lallu- sab ladkiya ek jaisi hi hoti hai. Sadi byah ka naam sun kr hi dekhne ko taiyar ho jati hai. Chahe apna sadi hi q na hone ko ho.
Huss hai yaha pati tarap raha hai or ek meri Sri mati ji hai jinhe koi fikra hi nahi.

Lallu apne aap se bate karta uth kr washroom chala gaya.
Fresh ho kr bahar aaya or fir wo bhi bhaiya bhabhi ko dekhne chala gya.
Sabhi ladies waha rasm mai lage hue the.
Wo log dono ko le kr Puja wale kamre mai chale gye.

Lallu thodi der ye sab dekha fir aa kr aanagan mai baith gya.


Do ghante baad sab free hue.

Bhabhi k gaun se kuch mehman bhi sath aaye the to fir Lallu un logo k khatirdari mai lag gya. Ab ghar mai sab se chota wahi tha to koi bhi kaam hota to sab use hi karne ko kahte.
Lallu raat khana khane tak inhi logo mai laga raha.

Char mehman aaye the. Sab ko khila kr fir unke sone ka vyavastha krne k baad jab lallu free hua fir aangan mai ja kr khana khaya.
Ladies party khana kha rahi thi.

Lallu bhi ja kr apne liye khana nikal kr ek side baith khane laga.

Khana khane k baad Lallu dalan pr mehmano ko dekhne chala gya ki wo soye ya nahi.
Unhe kisi chij ki jarurat to nahi hai.

Charo mehman so gye the.
Lallu waha se waps aa kr apne kamre mai aaya to lakshmi abhi nahi aai thi.

Lallu apna kapda badal kr sone ki taiyari karne laga.

Kafi der intjar karne k baad bhi kab lakshmi nahi aai to Lallu ko nind aa gya.

Raat k kisi samay Lallu ki nind khuli.

Dekha to lakshmi abhi bhi nahi aai thi.

Lallu fir sone ki kosis karne laga.

Subah char baje uth kr nadi kinare chala gya.
Bahut din ho gye the nadi ki or gye hue.

Waha ja kr Lallu fresh hua or wahi ek per k niche dhyan mai baith gya.

Abhi tak Lallu teen dwar khol chuka tha or chauthe dwar ki or ja raha tha.

Ab green gate ki bari thi.

Lallu dhyan mai baitha green gate k pas pahuch gya.

Green gate ko kholne ko jaise hi hath badhaya Lallu ne wo gate apne aap se khul gya.
Undar pravesh kr gya lallu. Yaha bhi waisa hi tha jaise banki k teen jagah use dekhne ko mila tha.

Lallu waha hawa mai latka idhar udhar bhatakta aage badh raha tha lekin aage jane ka gate nahi dikh raha tha. Fir use yaad aaya ki gate upper mil rahe hai.
To wo ab upper ki or chal diya kafi upper jane k baad use ek blue colour ka chamakta hua kuch dikha.
Lallu waha ja kr dekha to wo ek gate hi tha.

Lallu us gate k pas ja kr sant ho kr use khol liya.

Blue gate khulte hi Lallu ko apne under khich liya.
Lallu waha jaise koi chumbak ho aise khicha chala gya.

Blue atmosphere mai Lallu middle mai pahuch kr ruk gya.
Waha se fir lallu upper ki or safar suru kr diya apna.


Aage use indigo colour ka gate dikh raha tha. Lallu khush ho gya.

Gate k pas pahuch kr Lallu jaise hi use kholne ko hath badhaya wo gate Lallu ko apne mai sama liya or dusri or chod diya.

Undar yaha bhi banki jagho ki tarah hi tha.

Wo hawa mai urta badlo ko chir kr upper uthata ja raha tha.

Ab ek last rah gya tha.

Lallu yaha indigo atmosphere mai aa kr uske jaisa hi ho gya tha.

Koi dekh le abhi Lallu ko to dar kr bhag jaiyega koi bhoot samaj kr.

Puri body baal tak Lallu k indigo colour ka ho gya tha.

Lallu upper urrta hua aage badh raha tha.

Bahut upper use vailot colour ka gate dikha.

Waha pahuch kr Lallu sidha us mai pravesh karta chala gya.

Yaha pravesh karte hi Lallu an vielot colour mai badal gya tha.

Waha charo or indradhanush bana hua hawa mai tair raha tha.

Lallu ek jagah sthir ho kr charo or dekh raha tha tabhi wo sabhi indradhanush chamakne laga or wo sabhi urrta hua aa kr Lallu k sarir mai pravesh karne laga.

Asim dard ka ehsas ho raha tha lallu ko.

Lallu jor jor se gala far kr chilla raha tha lekin jab tak wo sare indradhanush uske under sama nahi gye. Lallu ko dard hota raha.

Khatm hone k baad Lallu behosh ho gya.

Hosh aaya to 10 baj raha tha.
Lallu waha se uth kr jaldi se ghar ki or chal diya. Mobile nikal kr dekha to kai call the ghar se Sonam k.

Lallu jaldi jaldi chalta hua ghar pahuch gya.

Sonam- kaha tha tu ab tak. Call q nahi utha raha tha. Pta hai hum kitna dar gye the.
 

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Lallu- di, bahut din ho gya tha nadi k taraf gye hue to udhar hi chala gya tha.

Sonam- to itna der lagta hai. Ja jakr lakshmi ko dekh. Kamre mai kab se ro rahi hai.

Lallu- aisa kya hua didi.

Sonam- Tu pahle lakshmi ko chup karawa.

Lallu jaldi se kamre ki or badh gya.

Kamre mai lakshmi bed pr leti ro rahi thi.

Lallu jaldi se ja kr lakshmi k pas baith gya or use pakar kr uthaya.

Lakshmi lallu ko bekhte hi us se lipat kr jor jor se rone lagi.

Rone ki awaj sun kr dono mami dono bua or kaki maa bahne sab lallu k kamre mai aa kr jama ho gai.

Sab Lallu ko kha jane wali najro se dekhne lage.

Lallu- aise q dekh rahe ho aap sab. Maine kuch nahi kiya hai.

Kajal- to meri beti q ro rahi hai.
Ritu- jaldi bata kya kiya hai tu ne.

Bua- bahut badmash ho gya hai tu.

Mami- q mere beti ko rula diya beta.
Roma- jarur bhai ne kuch kaha hoga.

Lallu- Are nahi bhai. Koi mujhe bolne dega. Tabhi bolunga na.

Rigini- ha to bol na. Bolta q nahi.

Rani- bhai agar aap ne mere pyari bhabhi ko kuch kaha hoga to dekh lena.

Gauri- ha hum sab aap se baat nahi karenge.

Lallu baar bar bolne ko muh kholta tab tak koi bich mai bol padta.
Lallu muh dekhta rah jata.

Lallu- are thodi der sab muh band rakhoge apna.
Lallu jor se bola.

Sab chup ho gye.

Lallu- mai aaya to ye pahle se ro rahi thi. Mai to khud abhi abhi aaya hi hu.

Mami aage aa kr lakshmi k pas bed pr baith gai.

Mami- kya hua mere beti ko. Q ro rahi hai.
Lakshmi lallu ko chod kr mami k gale lag gai roti hui.
Komal- ab to mujhe bhi lag raha hai bhai ne kuch bol diya hai bhabhi ko.

Lallu sar pr hath mar kr rah gya.

Lallu- yaar kuch bol bhi do ab ki aakhir aap ro q rahe ho. Nahi to sab mujhe mar mar kr bharta bana denge.

Sonam tabhi piche se aai.
Sonam- Lo rula diya na. Mai bheja tha ki tu chup karayega lekin tu to or rula hi diya.

Lallu- Bas aap hi nahi thi yaha. Aap ki hi kami thi.

Sonam- chal sorry bol lakshmi se pahle.

Lallu- Sorry lakshmi ji. Mere se agar koi galti hui hai to maaf kr dijiye.


Lallu kaan pakad kr wahi baith gaya.





Dekha phoolon ko kaaton pe sote huye
Dekha toofan ko kashti dubote huye

Dekh sakta hoon main kuchh bhi hote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye

Dekh sakta hoon main kuchh bhi hote huye
Dekh sakta hoon main kuchh bhi hote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye

Ek din bigadi kismat sanwar jaayegi
Yeh kushi humse bachkar kidhar jaayegi
Gham na kar zindagi yoon ghuzar jaayegi
Raat jaise ghuzar gayi sote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye


Lallu ka gana sun kr sabhi tali bajane lge.
Lakshmi bhi chup ho gai thi or sarmati hui badi mami k piche muh chhupa li.


Lallu- aaahhh, ab ja kr sukun mila. Ab ye batao ki ro q rahi thi.

Lakshmi- aap kaha the subah se. Mai subah 5 baje se aap ko dhundhti fir rahi hu. Fir mujhe laga ki raat mai main didi logo k sath so gai thi to is liye aap naraj ho kr kahi chale gaye hai.

Lallu- are yaar baar baar ek hi galti thode na karunga. Ek bar bhaga to tumhe le kr ghar aaya. Is bar agar aisa hua to sonam di meri jaan le legi.

Sabhi - kya….

Lallu- ( are baap re ye kya bol gya mai.) Ab meri Khair nahi. Aaj mai kiska muh dekh kr utha tha. Aaj to apna hi muh dekha tha. Kya itna bura hai mera muh)

Sab- kya kaha, Sonam maregi.

Lallu- Ha, didi ka kahna tha ki mai tere sadi mai nachne wali thi. To wo unka khawahish, khawahish hi rah gya na.

Lallu -( Bach gya beta. Nahi to aaj lag gai thi teri.)


Fir sab ek ek kr kamre se bahar aa gye.

Ab kamre mai yahi dono rah gye the.

Lallu- Aap ko pta hai. Aap me mujhe kitna tarpaya hai abhi do dono se.

Lakshmi- (Sarmati hui.) Mai bhi to tadpi hu na.

Lallu- To aisa kaam q kiya aap ne. Khud bhi tarpi or mujhe bhi tarpa diya.

Lakshmi- mai kya karti. Sonam didi jidd karne lagi ki aaj mere sath hi chalo sone. Waha baat bhi karni hai.
Ab mai didi ko kaise mana kr sakti hu.

Lallu aage badh lakshmi ko apne baho mai bharna chaha.
Lakshmi chitak kr dur ho gai.

Lallu- kya hua.

Lakshmi- (darwaje ki or isara kr.) Gate khula hai. Koi aa jaiga.

Lallu muh bana kr rah gya.

Lallu- abhi koi nahi aayega.

Tabhi kamre mai Roma aa gai.
Roma- bhabhi chalo na sab badi bhabhi k pas ja rahe hai. Aap bhi chalo.

Lakshmi hasti hui uth kr roma k sath chali gai.

Lallu dekhta hi rah gya.
 

123aaliahai

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Lallu lakshmi k kathor parvat ka ehsas karta hua lakshmi k waksh pr apna sar dabaye use hotho se chum raha tha.
Lakshmi ko aisa ehsas kabhi nahi mila tha. Bahut achha lag raha tha use.
Lakshmi Lallu k sar k balo ko sahlati sisakti ja rahi thi.

Lallu sar utha kr lakshmi k hotho pr laga diya.

Lakshmi k galo ko sahlata hua bade pyar se uske hotho se tapakne ko aatur prem rash ko Lallu nichodta ja raha tha.

Jab dono ko sas lena muskil ho gya to muh utha kr gahri sas lene lage.

Lakshmi simat kr Lallu k sine pr sar rakh li.

Lallu lakshmi ko apne aagosh mai liye uske pith pr hath chalata ja raha tha.
Jaise hi Lallu ka hath lakshmi k nangi pith k hisse pr jata dono k sarir mai kampan chhutt jati.

Lallu aahista se lakshmi k choli k dor ko pakad kr khich diya.
Choli dhili ho gai.
Lallu choli ko lakshmi k kandhe pr se niche khich diya.
Lakshmi apni aankhe band kiye Lallu k hatho mai apne aap ko samarpit kr di.
Lakshmi mare sarm k lallu k sine mai muh chupaye hue thi.
Lallu ek hath ko choli se nikal diya.

Undar lakshmi k lal bra ujagar ho gya. Jis mai lakshmi k Amrit kalash chupe hue bahar aane ko tarap rahe the.
Lakshmi ko dusri or kr Lallu dusre hath se bhi choli ko nikal kr lakshmi k sarir se alag kr ek or rakh diya.

Lakshmi lajjya se apna pith Lallu ki or kiye apne dono hatho se apna chehra dhak li.

Lallu lakshmi k bedag chikni pith or us pr bra ki lal pati dekh kr romanchit ho raha tha.
Lallu jhuk kr lakshmi k pith pr chummiyo ki jhari laga di.

Lakshmi sisakti hui chadar ko apne dono hatho se pakad kr aundhe muh ho gai.

Lallu bra k patti ko huk k pas use muh mai le kr huk ko kholne ki kosis karne laga apne muh se.
Lallu ki garm sas or uske hotho ka sparsh lakshmi ko ek naya anubhab kara raha tha.

Lakshmi waise hi maje se aankhe band kiye Lallu k utpatang harkato ka maja le rahi thi.

Bra ka hukm khul gya. Lallu use danto mai dabaye dono or kr diya.
Kandhe pr chipke bra k straps ko kandhe ko chumta Lallu use bhi khishaka diya.

Lallu lakshmi k kandhe ko pakad kr pith k bal ghuma diya.

Lakshmi k gore aami pr bra ka cups tanga hua tha banki hissa light ki raushni mai sangmarmar ki tarah chamak raha tha.

Lallu ko lakshmi k unnat ubharo k gahri ghati apni or khich raha tha.

Lallu aage badh lakshmi k waksh pr tange cups ko hotho mai daba kr alag kr diya.

Lakshmi aah bharti apne dono hatho se apne us dono pahadiyo ko dhak liya.

Lallu ko ek jhalak matra mil paya.

Lallu us Komal pahadi or us pr ki pink choti ko dekh kr ek aah bhar kr rah gya.

Ab Lallu k Sabra ki intha ho gai thi.

Lallu jhapat kr lakshmi k pure chehre ko chumne laga.
Chehre ko chumta hua Lallu niche sarakta ja raha tha. lallu lakshmi surahi jaisi chikni gardan par ja pahucha.
Lakshmi apne gale mai Lallu k saso ko mahsus kr gale ko utha kr lambi kr li or Lallu ko apne baho mai bhar uske pith pr hath se sahlane lagi.

Lallu lakshmi k gale ko chumta hua niche aane laga.

Lakshmi k chote pink nipples Lallu k badan se ragad kr khade ho gye the.
Thoda sa bhi agar Lallu k sarir se chipkata to lakshmi k muh se masti ki lahar se ek aah nikal jata

Lallu niche aata lakshmi k ek nipple ko muh mai bhar liya.
Lakshmi maje se hawa mai urne lagi.
Lallu k balo ko nochti lakshmi Lallu k sar ko apne chuche pr dabati ja rahi thi.

Lallu thodi der ek nipple ko chusne k bad use chod dusre ko pakad liya or pahle waksh ko apne hatheli mai le kr halke hatho se sahlane laga.

Lakshmi aanand ki sari seema tor badlo ki sair kr rahi thi. Wo apne hotho ko apne dant se katati naak se lambi lambi sase chhod rahi thi.

Lallu chus chus kr dono chuche ko lal kr diya.

Fir lallu waha se niche aa gya.
Lakshmi k pet pr Lallu k sas ko mahsus kr lakshmi k pet mai gudgudi ho rahi thi.

Lallu lakshmi k chikni pet ko chumta uske gahri nabhi pr aa gya or apna jibh nikal kr use chat liya.
Lakshmi kamar uhta kr patakne lagi bed pr.

Lallu apni laplapate jibh se lakshmi k nabhi mai ghusha kr use chatne laga.

Lakshmi ki penty to pura bhing gai thi. Jaise panty mai hi peshab kr diya ho.

Nabhi se khelne k bad Lallu waha se niche khishak kr lakshmi k lahnga jo kamar pr bandhi thi.
Lallu kamar ko chumta lahnga k dor ko danto se pakad kr khaich diya.

Lahnga ka dor khulte hi Lallu use muh mai daba kr niche khishkane laga.

Lahnga lakshmi k kamar k niche bada hua tha or Lakshmi use hatho se pakad bhi li.
Lakshmi ko bada sarm aa raha tha lallu k hatho yu nangi hone mai.

Lallu ek bar lakshmi ko dekha wo najre jhukaye sarma kr muh ghuma li.

Lallu apna kurta or baniyan khol liya. Ab Lallu upper se nanga tha.
Fir us ne apna pajama bhi khol diya
Ab Lallu sirf kachhe mai tha sirf.
Ab Lallu lakshmi k badan ko niche se upper sahlata aage badhne laga.

Lallu upper aa kr ek chuche ko hotho mai daba liya or dusre ko hath se masalne laga.

Lakshmi aahe bharti hui Lallu k pith ko sahla rahi thi. Lallu k nange badan ko apne badan se chipkaye lakshmi bin pani k machli ki tarah bed pr machal rahi thi.

Lallu lakshmi k chuche ko dono hatho mai pakde mashal raha tha.
Lallu fir ek bar niche aa ne laga or dono hatho se langha k sath sath lakshmi k panty ko pakad kr khich diya.

Lakshmi chauk kr uth baithi. Lekin tab tak Lallu bhi uth chuka tha or lahanga jo aadhe pair tk aa gya tha use pura khich kr lakshmi k pairo se nikal diya.

Lakshmi apne hatho se apne sarmgah ko ghak kr piche palat gai. Ab lakshmi ka pith Lallu ki or tha.

Lallu lakshmi k gol gand ko dekh kr babla ho gya.
Wo apna chaddi bhi khol kr fek diya or piche apne hath se halke halke lakshmi k pith ko sahlane laga. Lakshmi sihar gai. Wo machalne lagi.

Lallu pith se khelta hua lakshmi se piche se chipak gaya ja kr.

Lallu ka pura sarir lakshmi se chipka hua tha.
Lakshmi sisakti hui ghum kr Lallu ko apne gale se laga kr uske hotho se chusne lagi.

Lallu lakshmi k pith pr hath chalata apne hath ko niche le ja kr lakshmi k fulle hue gand ko mutthi mai bhar liya.

Lakshmi aah bharti hui Lallu k hotho ko kat li.

Lallu ab is prem ko purn kr lakshmi ko har tarah se apna banana chahta hai.

Lallu- lakshmi kya tum taiyar ho hamesha meri ban kr rahne ko. Mujhe maaf karna ye saval mai ab kar raha hu jo bahut pahle karna chahiye tha.

Lakshmi- kya itna sab hone k baad bhi aap ko ab is sawal ka jabab chahiye.

Lallu- mai ek bar tumhare muh se sunana chahta hu.

Lakshmi aage badh kr uske hotho ko chum li or sarma kr sine mai muh chupa li.

Lakshmi- mil gya jabab.
Lakshmi lajati hui boli.

Lallu lakshmi k pure sarir pr apna hath chala raha tha. Itna Komal badan tha ki Lallu ka hath ek jagah ruk hi nahi raha tha.

Lallu uth kr uske pair k pas aa gya or fir waha se lakshmi ko chumna start kr diya or upper badhne laga.
Upper badhta Lallu lakshmi k jangh ko katne laga lakshmi bed pr machalne lagi.

Lallu lakshmi k dono pair ko hath se pakad kr faila diya.
Lakshmi jhat se apne hatho se apne chut ko dhak li.

Lallu lakshmi k hotho k charo or apne jibh se chatne laga.

Lallu jibh chalata hua ek hath se uske gol gol chuche ko masalne laga.
Lakshmi dard or maje se karah rahi thi.

Dhire dhire Lakshmi ka hath waha se hat raha tha.
Lallu ek hath se uske dono hath ko waha se hata kr lakshmi k choti si chut pr apna jibh se chat liya.

Lakshmi Lallu k sar ko waha se dhakel kr hatane lagi.

Lakshmi- pls.. waha nahi. Wo ganda hai. Pls man jaiye.

Lallu kaha manane wala tha wo muh khol kr pure chut ko muh mai bhar kr use kaatne or jibh chalene laga.
Lakshmi tadapti hui Lallu k muh mai jhar gai.


Lallu uth kr baith gya or Lakshmi k chut k muh pr apna danda laga kr waha masalne laga.
Lakshmi Lallu k garm laude ko apne chut pr mahsus kr sihar uthi.
Uska gala sukh gya tha. Hoth fadfada raha tha.

Lallu thodi der laude ko chut pr masal kr use achhi tarah chut ras se gila kr diya fir lakshmi k chut k chote se ched pr apna danda laga kr lakshmi k kamar ko pakad liya.

Lakshmi apne danto se apne hoth ko daba rakhi thi.

Lallu ek halka dhakka laga diya lekin itna chota ched tha ki Lallu ka Lola fishal kr lakshmi k pet se ja laga.

Lallu idhar udhar dekha to table pr ek cream ka dabba rakha tha.
Lallu jhat se use utha kr laya or pahle achhi tarah se lakshmi k gulabi chut k ched mai ungli dal kr undar tak laga diya fir apne dande ko us lubricant cream se pura chopar diya.
Fir lallu aa kr lakshmi k tango k bich aa kr baith gya or Lakshmi ko dekh kr apne dande ko ek hath se pakad kr chut k chhed pr laga diya fir lallu lakshmi k dono boobs ko pakad kr ek jor ka dhakka laga diya.

Lakshmi ek jor ki chikh mar di lekin lallu jaldi se apna hath aage kr lakshmi k muh ko band kr diya.

Lallu ka danda lakshmi k chut ko far kr aadha under ja ghusa.
Chut pura fail gya tha. Us khun ko ek patli lakir nikal aai.

Khun dekh kr Lallu ka dar se bura haal ho gya.
Lallu najar utha kr lakshmi ko dekha to lakshmi ki aankho se aansu ki dhara uske chehre pr pura faila hua tha.

Lallu ko ye dekh kr bahut jayda bura laga. Wo lakshmi k upper jhuk kr uske chehre pr phaile aanshuo ko chat kr saf kr diya.

Lallu fir Lakshmi k ek pinki nipple ko muh mai bhar kr chubhlane laga.

Thodi der mai jab lakshmi ko thoda aaram mila dard se to wo Lallu k sar k balo ko sahlane lagi.

Lallu samajh gya ki ab lakshmi ka dard kam ho gya hai to wo ab halka halka apna kamar hilane laga.

Lakshmi ko abhi bhi dard ho raha tha.
Wo har dhakke pr karah uthati. Jab tak lakshmi k chut ki manspeshiya undar se Lallu k laude k layak jagah nahi bana li.

Thodi der baad lakshmi k muh se dard k sath sath maje ki aahe bhi nikalne lagi.
Lallu ab thoda gahra dhakka lagane laga tha.
Lakshmi ki dono chuchiya Lallu k mardan se lal ho gya tha or uske nipples bhi. Nipples pr to kahi kahi Lallu k katne se blood bhi aa gye the

Abhi ab Lallu lakshmi k kamar ko pakad kr uske dono pairo k bich baitha lambe lambe strong strock laga raha tha jis se lakshmi ki chuchiya ek lay mai aage piche hil rahi thi.
Lakshmi apne hatho se chadar pakde Lallu k dhakko ko sahti hui uska pura sath de rahi thin
Lakshmi ko to yaad bhi nahi tha ki is pahli raat mai hi wo kitni bar apna kaam rash baha chuki hai.

Lallu aaj lakshmi ko pura nichod lene k mud mai tha.
Kaha ye gaun ka gabru javan desi chhora or Lakshmi kaha ek dharmik sthal ki najuk si ladki. Badi muskil se Lallu k lole ko jhel rahi thi.

Abhi Lallu apna pura lauda nikal kr ek bar mai hi Lakshmi k undar jar tak thok raha tha.
Lakshmi to har dhakke k baad lag raha tha jaise uske bachhedani mai Lallu ka lauda ghus raha hai.
Wo aasamn ki sair kr rahi thi.

Lallu apne ghutne pr baitha lakshmi k gand k niche hath se pakad kr use uthaye dhakka dhakk apna reil gari chalaye ja rha tha.

Lallu ko to jaise swarnim aanand ka anubhab ho raha tha.

Lallu ab apne charam shukh k najdik hi tha to uska speed bahut badh gya tha.
Lakshmi bhi kabhi apne hotho pr jibh girati to kabhi Lallu lallu ko pakad kr chum leti.

Wo bhi ab karib hi thi. Uska pura sarir kampta hua sara khun uske chehre pr aa gya tha.

Lallu lakshmi k dono gol doodh ko nichodta hua ek karah bharta apna lawa lakshmi k garm bhatthi mai ugalne laga.
Lallu k lawe ko apne undar feel kr k lakshmi bhi jharti chali gai.


Dono ek dusre ko apne baho mai samaye aise hi lete saso ko durust karne lage.

Thodi der bad Lallu aahista se lakshmi k upper se utha kr baith gya.

Lakshmi k chut se jaise hi lauda nikala Lallu ne ek madhur dhwani sunai diya pakk.


Lallu jab lakshmi k chut ko dekha to uska bahut bura haal tha.
Chut k hoth suj kr full gye the or kafi lal bhi ho gya tha.
Abhi thodi der pahle jaha chut k dono hoth bilkul chipke hue the abhi to Lallu k mote dande se mar kha kr fail gya tha. Jis mai se dono ka mila hua prem rash sath mai lakshmi k chut se nikalta khun teeno mil kr abhi us ched se nikal raha tha.

Lallu towel lapet kr washroom chala gaya or waha se fresh ho kr aaya to uske hath mai ek bhinga hua kapda tha jis se Lallu lakshmi k chut ko pahle achhe se saaf kr diya.

Lakshmi to jaise behosh ho ho gai thi.
Apne chut pr garm pani ka ehsas pa kr aankh khol kr dekhi to Lallu ko saf karta dekh wo sarma gai.

Lallu use saff kr fir ek bar washroom gya or
dubara waha se wo kapda bhinga kr le aaya or us se thodi der lakshmi k chut ki sekai kr di.

Fir lallu uth kr ek kissi us chut pr le kr kapde ko ek or rakh diya or bed pr aa kr lakshmi ko baho mai bhar uske hotho pr chum liya.

Lakshmi laja kr Lallu se chipak gayi.

Lakshmi ki chut mai abhi bhi dard tha.
Lakshmi ko ghumne se chut mai dard karne laga jis se uske muh se ek karah nikal gai.

Lallu uth kr kapda pahan lakshmi k upper chadar dal kr dhak diya or rasoi mai chala gya.
Waha freezer se ice nikal kr laya or fir us se lakshmi k chut ki thodi sekai kr di..

Ice lagne se lakshmi ko bahut gudgudi ho rahi thi.

Lekin Lallu ka pyar dekh kr use bahut khushi ho raha tha.

Lallu mobile nikal kr dekha to abhi 3 baj rahe the.
Thodi der sekai k baad Lallu fir se aa kr lakshmi ko pakad kr so gya.
Lallu ka man to nahi bhara tha lekin wo dekh raha tha ki abhi lakshmi ki halat bahut jyada kharab hai. Is liye apne man ki bhabna ko daba kr sone ki kosis karne laga.
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Lakshmi bhi bahut thak gai thi.
Use nahi pta tha ki use rani maa ne kis sandh se sadi kr di hai. Jo ek hi bar mai lakshmi ka kachumar nikal diya hai.

Lakshmi Lallu k mashum chehre ko dekhte hue wo bhi nind ki hasin wadiyo mai kho gai.
Nice update
 

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Mard ka bachcha. Update 48.


Subah 8 baje kisi k darwaja khatkane se dono ki nind khuli.

Abhi tak dono ek dusre k baho mai chipke nange so rahe the.

Dono apne aap ko dekha to khud ko nanga pa kr dono jhat se uth kr lakshmi to chadar hi khich kr lapet li or Lallu jis towel ko pahan kr soya tha wahi lapet liya.
Fir lallu apna kapda utha kr pahan liya or Lakshmi ko bhi uska kapda utha kr diya or pahle lakshmi ko washroom se ho aane ko bola.

Lakshmi bed se utar kr jaise hi khadi hone k liye apne pairo pr bhar di waise hi uske muh se ek karah nikal gya.
Dono tang k bich joint mai bahut dard tha.

Hona hi tha ye to aaj kacchi kali se fool jo bani thi.

Lallu uth kr lakshmi ko apne god mai utha liya or use washroom tak chod aaya.
Waha ek towel ja kr de diya.

Lakshmi snann kr waha se towel lapet kr nikli.

Fir apne bag se kapde nikal kr pahanane lagi tab tak Lallu fresh hone chala gya.

Jab lallu wHa wha se aaya to lakshmi ek lal sari pahne khadi thi.
Lallu- ab kaisi ho aap. Kya abhi bhi dard hai.

Lakshmi bura sa muh bana kr ha kr di.

Lallu- chal sakti hai aap.
Lakshmi- kaise chalungi sab k samne. Langdati hui sab k samne kaise jaungi. Sab kya sochenge.

Lallu- fir kya kare abhi.

Lakshmi- aap bahar jao. Mai nahi jaungi. Mai yahi rahungi.

Lallu- thik hai mai dekhta hu koi dabai.

Fir lallu kapda pahan kr darwaja khol bahar aa gya.
Aangan mai kafi sare log baithe the.
Lallu ko bahut sarm aa raha tha. Aaj pahli bar wo itna late utha tha.

Ghar ki sabhi ladkiya or kaki maa bha mami sab aangan mai bathe the to koi kaam kr rahi thi.

Choti bua- to janab ki nind puri ho gai.

Lallu- ji bua. Wo raat late nind aai thi.to…

Choti bua- mujhe batana tha na. Mai to chhat pr hi thi. Tumhe to nahi dekhi mai.

Lallu- wo...wo..

Roma- bua, bhai to lakshmi ji ki mohini surat mai khoye the. Inka sara nind chain to bhabhi ne chura liya. Fir inhe kaise nind aati.

Gauri- pta hai bua raat bhai na bhabhi ki ghunghat utha rahe the to inka hath kamp raha tha.

Sab thahaka laga kr huss diye.

Ritu- Sonam ja jakr bahu ko la kamre se. Use sab ne akela chod diya hai.

Sonam waha se uth kr kamre ki or chali gai.

Lallu Komal ko dekh kr.
Lallu- di chai do na.

Ragini- ja apni bibi se mang. Use bol hum sab k liye chai banaye.

Tab tak Sonam bhi waha aa gai.

Sonam- Ritu se, maa bhabi ko bukhar hai. Koi dabai ho to do na.
Kajal- mai deti hu.
Fir Kajal uth kr kamre mai chali gai or waha se dabai le kr lakshmi k pas chali gai.

Kajal- beta jyada dard hai. Ohh mai bhi kya puch rahi hu.( Dard to hoga hi mushal jaisa jo hai muaa ka.)
Ye lo beta abhi chai bhej rahi hu. Uske baad ye dabai khana. Ye bukhar or dard dono ko sahi kr dega.

Tab tak badi mami bhi waha aa gai.
Mami- kya hua mere bete ko.

Kajal- kuch nahi, halka sa bukhar aa gya hai. Dabai de di hai. Abhi thik ho jaiga.

Kajal room se chali jati hai chai lane.

Mami- beta tabiyat jyada kharab ho to doctar k pas chale.

Lakshmi- nahi maa. Mai thik hu. Bas halka sa bukhar hai.

Tabhi waha Ragini chai le kr aa jati hai.

Ragini- lo beta. Ye chai k sath bread kha lo. Fir dabai le lena.

Mami- ye achanak bukhar kaise aa gya.

Ragini badi mami ko ek taraf le ja kr.
Ragini- are bhabhi raat dono ne first night manai hai. Isi liye aisa hua hai. Bachchiya sab bata rahi thi.

Ragini aahista se sab batai badi mami ko tab ja kr unke palle pada.

Mami muskudate hue Lakshmi k pas aai or uske sar pr hatho se sahla kr matha chum li.
Fir wo Ragini kaki k sath kamre se bahar aa gai.

Ragini- Sonam beta ek do bahan apne bhabi k pas chale jao. Waha wo akeli rahegi kamre mai to use or tabiyat kharab jaisa hi lagega

Fir sonam or Komal uth kr waha se lakshmi k pas aa gai.

Dono bed pr baith kr lakshmi k sath bate karne gai.

Idhar aangan mai sabhi aaurte sadi ki taiyari mai busy ho gai.

Lallu bhi dalan pr ja kr kaka logo se kaam ka puch kr un logo k sath kaam mai hath batane laga.

Lallu ko jyadatr bahar ka hi kaam mila tha to wo bahar hi busy ho gya wo aangan nahi aa paya. Uska bada man tha ki aa kr ek bar lakshmi ko dekhe ki wo kaisi hai lekin time nahi mil raha tha. Bahut kaam bacha hua tha abhi. Saam mai mehman aane wale the. Fir barat bhi jane wali thi.

Uske yaha riwaj tha ki barati jane se pahle din mai Larke k yaha ki khana khate hai. To wo sab bhi byabasta dekhna tha.

Inhi kamo mai wo fasha hua tha.

Idhar lakshmi ab thodi sahi thi. Wo halke halke chal pa rahi thi to bahar aa kr sab k sath baith gai or sab sadi ki taiyari uska bish gana bajana sab dekh rahi thi.

Saam mai Lallu free ho paya.

Wo sidha aangan mai aaya or lakshmi ko dhundhne laga.
Ab kisi se puch bhi nahi sakta tha ko lakshmi kaha hai. Nahi to sab usi ka gajal bana dete. Us mai bhi ladkiya to abhi isi tak mai rahti thi ki kab Lallu lakshmi se related koi baat kare ya koi harkat kare or sab pakad kr uska class laga de.


Lallu pura ghar chhan mara lekin use lakshmi kahi nahi dikhi.

Lallu- maa...maa.
Lallu Kajal ko dekh kr use rok liya.


Kajal- kya hai beta. Abhi bahut kaam hai abhi disturb mat kr.

Lallu- maa lakshmi ji kaha hai.
Lallu dhire se maa se pucha.

Kajal- q kya kaam hai.
Lallu- maa, kaam k chakkar mai subah se us se mila nahi hu. To isi liye…

Kajal- wo yaha nahi hai. Mandir gai hai sab k sath. Abhi aati hogi. Ab chod mera rasta abhi bahut kaam karne ko pada hai.

Lallu muh bana kr side ho gya.

Shaam ka samay tha aangan mai aurte puja ki taiyari karti hui waha ki jo kshetriya lok geet hota hai wo ga rahi thi.

Idhar bahar dalan pr baratiyo ka aana suru ho gyabtha jo gariyo mai apna apna subidha k hishab se baithate ja rahe the.


Aangan mai sari vivah ki rashme puri ho jane k bad ladka ko le kr sabhi ladki walo k yaha chal diye.

Lallu Raghav k sath uske car mai hi baitha tha.

Ladki walo ka gaun inke yaha se dur tha 10 baj gye waha pahuchne mai.


Waha thoda pahle Raghav ko ghodi pr baitha kr sab lag gye nagin dance mai.

Gaje paje k sath nachte hue sab ladki wale k yaha pahuche.
Waha fir sab ka swagat hua or fir Raghav ka jaimala hona tha to uska taiyari hone laga.

Thodi der mai dulhan ko le kr ladki wale aa gye or wahi stage pr dono ka jaimala hua.

Fir Raghav ko vivah k liye aangan mai le jaya gya.
Jaha sabhi rashme pure hone mai subah ho gya.

Sabhi barati khana kha kr waha se pahle hi aa gye the.
Waha sirf anil or sunil kaka rah gye.
Sab Lallu ko bhi rukne ko kah rahe the lekin lallu ko to apne ghar ja kr lakshmi ko dekhne ki jaldi thi. Waise bhi wo aangan ja kr apni bhabi ko dekh aaya tha.

Lallu jab apne aangan aaya to sab uth chuke the tab tak subah ho gya tha.

Lallu aa kr sab se pahle apne kamre mai gya lekin ek bar fir use nirasha hi hath laga.
Lakshmi waha nahi thi.

Lallu kapda badal kr bahar aa gya.
Ghar ki sabhi aurte use gher kr baith gye.
Lallu se sabhi waha kya kya hua, bhabhi kaisi hai, unka parivar kaisa hai sab tarah tarah ka sabal puchne lage.
Lallu sab ko jaldi jaldi jabab deta un logo se pichha chudana chah raha tha. Lekin lallu unke jitne sabal ka jabab deta utne hi or sabal wo log Lallu se or kr dete.
Ant mai Lallu se raha nahi gya.
Lallu- are kitne saval karoge aap log. Abhi thodi der mai to aa hi jainge Raghav bhaiya apne dulhania ko le kr fir jee bhar kr dekh lena.
Abhi koi ek cup chai pila do pahle.

Tabhi piche se Ritu kaki chai le kr aa gai.

Ritu- mujhe lag hi raha tha ki tu chai manenga. Le mai pahle hi bana diya tha.

Lallu chai pita soch raha tha ki lakshmi k bare mai kaise puche sab se.

Fir lallu najar ghuma kr dekha to Sonam or Komal bhi yaha nahi thi.

Lallu- di kaha hai. Wo abhi tak nahi uthi hai kya.

Gauri- didi ko dhundh rahe ho ya bibi ko.
Lagta hai hamara bhai d or b ka fark bhul gya hai.

Sab Gauri ki baat st jor se Huss diye.

Lallu- yaha to baithana hi bekar hai.
Lallu bahana bana kr Sonam di k kamre mai ghus gya jaha Sonam or Komal dono lakshmi k sath baith kr bate kr rahe the.

Lallu bhi wahi aa kr baith gya.

Komal- tum yaha kya kr raha hai.

Lallu- ye aaj kaisa sabal hai. Is se pahle to kabhi nahi pucha tha aap ne.

Komal- abhi yaha ladies talk chal raha hai chal bhag yaha se.

Lallu- aayy….. ye kaisa talk hai jo ek bhai ko uski pyari bahan se alag kr de.

Sonam- ye aisa talk hai jo uske pati ko uski patni se alag kr deta hai.
Sonam lallu k kaan ko pakad kr use kamre se nikal di.

Lallu bura sa muh banata waha se bahar aa gya.

Roma- kya bhai… mil aaye apne didi kam bibi se.

Badi mami- Kya bol rahi hai Roma beta. Kuch soch kr to bola kr.


Lallu wahi baitha tha. Tabhi sonam or Komal k sath lakshmi bai aangan mai aa gai.

Gauri- lo aa gai aap ki rampyari. Ab jitna dekhna hai dekh lo.

Sab Huss diye.

Lakshmi bhi sarma gai.

Lallu chor najro se lakshmi ko dekh raha tha tabhi…

Rani- dekho bhai kaise dekh raha hai bhabhi ko.

Lallu- he bhagwan ab mai yaha baith bhi nahi sakta.

Lallu uth kr apne kamre mai chala gaya.

Waha ja kr Lallu apne bed pr let gya.



Lallu- ye sab to ab Lakshmi ji ki or dekhna bhi band karva denge.
Kya karu,kya karu. Bada dekhne ka man kr raha hai or sab nirdai use mujh se dur rakhne ka hr tarah ka prayash kr kar rahe hai.


Lallu khud se bate karta hua bed pr leta hua tha.

Raat to soya nahi tha isliye abhi bed pr late hi nind aa gya.

Pta nahi kitna samay hua tha.

Lakshmi- uthiye, bhaiya or bhabhi aa gye hai. Ab uth jaiye.

Lallu aankh khola to lakshmi Lallu pr jhuki use utha rahi thi.
Lallu lakshmi ko baho mai le kr use bhi bed pr apne sath sula liya.

Lakshmi- kya kr rahe hai. Darwaja khula hua hai. Koi aa jaiga.

Lallu- kitna tarpati ho. Kya tumhe maja aata haiujhe tarpa kr.

Lakshmi- mai kya karu. Koi na koi sath hi hote hai. Fir mai kya kru.

Lallu- abhi to koi sath nahi hai na. Abhi thodi der mere sath let jao.

Lakshmi- bhaiya bhabhi aaye hai. Chaliye na, unhe dekhne chalte hai. Sab wahi hai.

Lallu- ye to or bhi achhi baat hai. Abhi idhar koi nahi aayega. Hum itmanan se pyar bhari bate kr sakte hai.

Lakshmi- kya kr rahe hai koi aa jaiga. Chodiye na.
Lallu- pahle ye batao ki ab tum kaisi ho.
Kitne der se tumhe dekha nahi tha. Ab kaleje ko thodi thandhak pahuchi hai.

Lakshmi- hutt besaram,
Lakshmi lallu ko apne pas se dhakel kr dur kr di.

Lallu muh bana kr baith gya.

Lakshmi- aa jaiye Fresh ho kr. Mai tab tak didi logo k sath ja rahi hu bhabhi ko dekhne.
Lakshmi bahar chali gai.

Lallu- sab ladkiya ek jaisi hi hoti hai. Sadi byah ka naam sun kr hi dekhne ko taiyar ho jati hai. Chahe apna sadi hi q na hone ko ho.
Huss hai yaha pati tarap raha hai or ek meri Sri mati ji hai jinhe koi fikra hi nahi.

Lallu apne aap se bate karta uth kr washroom chala gaya.
Fresh ho kr bahar aaya or fir wo bhi bhaiya bhabhi ko dekhne chala gya.
Sabhi ladies waha rasm mai lage hue the.
Wo log dono ko le kr Puja wale kamre mai chale gye.

Lallu thodi der ye sab dekha fir aa kr aanagan mai baith gya.


Do ghante baad sab free hue.

Bhabhi k gaun se kuch mehman bhi sath aaye the to fir Lallu un logo k khatirdari mai lag gya. Ab ghar mai sab se chota wahi tha to koi bhi kaam hota to sab use hi karne ko kahte.
Lallu raat khana khane tak inhi logo mai laga raha.

Char mehman aaye the. Sab ko khila kr fir unke sone ka vyavastha krne k baad jab lallu free hua fir aangan mai ja kr khana khaya.
Ladies party khana kha rahi thi.

Lallu bhi ja kr apne liye khana nikal kr ek side baith khane laga.

Khana khane k baad Lallu dalan pr mehmano ko dekhne chala gya ki wo soye ya nahi.
Unhe kisi chij ki jarurat to nahi hai.

Charo mehman so gye the.
Lallu waha se waps aa kr apne kamre mai aaya to lakshmi abhi nahi aai thi.

Lallu apna kapda badal kr sone ki taiyari karne laga.

Kafi der intjar karne k baad bhi kab lakshmi nahi aai to Lallu ko nind aa gya.

Raat k kisi samay Lallu ki nind khuli.

Dekha to lakshmi abhi bhi nahi aai thi.

Lallu fir sone ki kosis karne laga.

Subah char baje uth kr nadi kinare chala gya.
Bahut din ho gye the nadi ki or gye hue.

Waha ja kr Lallu fresh hua or wahi ek per k niche dhyan mai baith gya.

Abhi tak Lallu teen dwar khol chuka tha or chauthe dwar ki or ja raha tha.

Ab green gate ki bari thi.

Lallu dhyan mai baitha green gate k pas pahuch gya.

Green gate ko kholne ko jaise hi hath badhaya Lallu ne wo gate apne aap se khul gya.
Undar pravesh kr gya lallu. Yaha bhi waisa hi tha jaise banki k teen jagah use dekhne ko mila tha.

Lallu waha hawa mai latka idhar udhar bhatakta aage badh raha tha lekin aage jane ka gate nahi dikh raha tha. Fir use yaad aaya ki gate upper mil rahe hai.
To wo ab upper ki or chal diya kafi upper jane k baad use ek blue colour ka chamakta hua kuch dikha.
Lallu waha ja kr dekha to wo ek gate hi tha.

Lallu us gate k pas ja kr sant ho kr use khol liya.

Blue gate khulte hi Lallu ko apne under khich liya.
Lallu waha jaise koi chumbak ho aise khicha chala gya.

Blue atmosphere mai Lallu middle mai pahuch kr ruk gya.
Waha se fir lallu upper ki or safar suru kr diya apna.


Aage use indigo colour ka gate dikh raha tha. Lallu khush ho gya.

Gate k pas pahuch kr Lallu jaise hi use kholne ko hath badhaya wo gate Lallu ko apne mai sama liya or dusri or chod diya.

Undar yaha bhi banki jagho ki tarah hi tha.

Wo hawa mai urta badlo ko chir kr upper uthata ja raha tha.

Ab ek last rah gya tha.

Lallu yaha indigo atmosphere mai aa kr uske jaisa hi ho gya tha.

Koi dekh le abhi Lallu ko to dar kr bhag jaiyega koi bhoot samaj kr.

Puri body baal tak Lallu k indigo colour ka ho gya tha.

Lallu upper urrta hua aage badh raha tha.

Bahut upper use vailot colour ka gate dikha.

Waha pahuch kr Lallu sidha us mai pravesh karta chala gya.

Yaha pravesh karte hi Lallu an vielot colour mai badal gya tha.

Waha charo or indradhanush bana hua hawa mai tair raha tha.

Lallu ek jagah sthir ho kr charo or dekh raha tha tabhi wo sabhi indradhanush chamakne laga or wo sabhi urrta hua aa kr Lallu k sarir mai pravesh karne laga.

Asim dard ka ehsas ho raha tha lallu ko.

Lallu jor jor se gala far kr chilla raha tha lekin jab tak wo sare indradhanush uske under sama nahi gye. Lallu ko dard hota raha.

Khatm hone k baad Lallu behosh ho gya.

Hosh aaya to 10 baj raha tha.
Lallu waha se uth kr jaldi se ghar ki or chal diya. Mobile nikal kr dekha to kai call the ghar se Sonam k.

Lallu jaldi jaldi chalta hua ghar pahuch gya.

Sonam- kaha tha tu ab tak. Call q nahi utha raha tha. Pta hai hum kitna dar gye the.
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123aaliahai

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Mard ka bachcha. Update 49.



Lallu- di, bahut din ho gya tha nadi k taraf gye hue to udhar hi chala gya tha.

Sonam- to itna der lagta hai. Ja jakr lakshmi ko dekh. Kamre mai kab se ro rahi hai.

Lallu- aisa kya hua didi.

Sonam- Tu pahle lakshmi ko chup karawa.

Lallu jaldi se kamre ki or badh gya.

Kamre mai lakshmi bed pr leti ro rahi thi.

Lallu jaldi se ja kr lakshmi k pas baith gya or use pakar kr uthaya.

Lakshmi lallu ko bekhte hi us se lipat kr jor jor se rone lagi.

Rone ki awaj sun kr dono mami dono bua or kaki maa bahne sab lallu k kamre mai aa kr jama ho gai.

Sab Lallu ko kha jane wali najro se dekhne lage.

Lallu- aise q dekh rahe ho aap sab. Maine kuch nahi kiya hai.

Kajal- to meri beti q ro rahi hai.
Ritu- jaldi bata kya kiya hai tu ne.

Bua- bahut badmash ho gya hai tu.

Mami- q mere beti ko rula diya beta.
Roma- jarur bhai ne kuch kaha hoga.

Lallu- Are nahi bhai. Koi mujhe bolne dega. Tabhi bolunga na.

Rigini- ha to bol na. Bolta q nahi.

Rani- bhai agar aap ne mere pyari bhabhi ko kuch kaha hoga to dekh lena.

Gauri- ha hum sab aap se baat nahi karenge.

Lallu baar bar bolne ko muh kholta tab tak koi bich mai bol padta.
Lallu muh dekhta rah jata.

Lallu- are thodi der sab muh band rakhoge apna.
Lallu jor se bola.

Sab chup ho gye.

Lallu- mai aaya to ye pahle se ro rahi thi. Mai to khud abhi abhi aaya hi hu.

Mami aage aa kr lakshmi k pas bed pr baith gai.

Mami- kya hua mere beti ko. Q ro rahi hai.
Lakshmi lallu ko chod kr mami k gale lag gai roti hui.
Komal- ab to mujhe bhi lag raha hai bhai ne kuch bol diya hai bhabhi ko.

Lallu sar pr hath mar kr rah gya.

Lallu- yaar kuch bol bhi do ab ki aakhir aap ro q rahe ho. Nahi to sab mujhe mar mar kr bharta bana denge.

Sonam tabhi piche se aai.
Sonam- Lo rula diya na. Mai bheja tha ki tu chup karayega lekin tu to or rula hi diya.

Lallu- Bas aap hi nahi thi yaha. Aap ki hi kami thi.

Sonam- chal sorry bol lakshmi se pahle.

Lallu- Sorry lakshmi ji. Mere se agar koi galti hui hai to maaf kr dijiye.


Lallu kaan pakad kr wahi baith gaya.





Dekha phoolon ko kaaton pe sote huye
Dekha toofan ko kashti dubote huye

Dekh sakta hoon main kuchh bhi hote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye

Dekh sakta hoon main kuchh bhi hote huye
Dekh sakta hoon main kuchh bhi hote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye

Ek din bigadi kismat sanwar jaayegi
Yeh kushi humse bachkar kidhar jaayegi
Gham na kar zindagi yoon ghuzar jaayegi
Raat jaise ghuzar gayi sote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye
Nahi main nahi dekh sakta tujhe rote huye


Lallu ka gana sun kr sabhi tali bajane lge.
Lakshmi bhi chup ho gai thi or sarmati hui badi mami k piche muh chhupa li.


Lallu- aaahhh, ab ja kr sukun mila. Ab ye batao ki ro q rahi thi.

Lakshmi- aap kaha the subah se. Mai subah 5 baje se aap ko dhundhti fir rahi hu. Fir mujhe laga ki raat mai main didi logo k sath so gai thi to is liye aap naraj ho kr kahi chale gaye hai.

Lallu- are yaar baar baar ek hi galti thode na karunga. Ek bar bhaga to tumhe le kr ghar aaya. Is bar agar aisa hua to sonam di meri jaan le legi.

Sabhi - kya….

Lallu- ( are baap re ye kya bol gya mai.) Ab meri Khair nahi. Aaj mai kiska muh dekh kr utha tha. Aaj to apna hi muh dekha tha. Kya itna bura hai mera muh)

Sab- kya kaha, Sonam maregi.

Lallu- Ha, didi ka kahna tha ki mai tere sadi mai nachne wali thi. To wo unka khawahish, khawahish hi rah gya na.

Lallu -( Bach gya beta. Nahi to aaj lag gai thi teri.)


Fir sab ek ek kr kamre se bahar aa gye.

Ab kamre mai yahi dono rah gye the.

Lallu- Aap ko pta hai. Aap me mujhe kitna tarpaya hai abhi do dono se.

Lakshmi- (Sarmati hui.) Mai bhi to tadpi hu na.

Lallu- To aisa kaam q kiya aap ne. Khud bhi tarpi or mujhe bhi tarpa diya.

Lakshmi- mai kya karti. Sonam didi jidd karne lagi ki aaj mere sath hi chalo sone. Waha baat bhi karni hai.
Ab mai didi ko kaise mana kr sakti hu.

Lallu aage badh lakshmi ko apne baho mai bharna chaha.
Lakshmi chitak kr dur ho gai.

Lallu- kya hua.

Lakshmi- (darwaje ki or isara kr.) Gate khula hai. Koi aa jaiga.

Lallu muh bana kr rah gya.

Lallu- abhi koi nahi aayega.

Tabhi kamre mai Roma aa gai.
Roma- bhabhi chalo na sab badi bhabhi k pas ja rahe hai. Aap bhi chalo.

Lakshmi hasti hui uth kr roma k sath chali gai.

Lallu dekhta hi rah gya.
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Tony stark

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Plot bahut hi sandar hai. Start bhi damakedar thi. Kumbh ho ya ujjen dono ka sandar detail tha. Shopping ho ya bachche ko bachana wo bhi mast tha.
Per ritu ka ruthna kuch kam samaj aaya. Wo ek old age lady hai or wo lallu ko pati manti hai. Mana lallu ne dard diya to dava bhi di. Or rudna or is tarha se bejjati karna dono me bhi farak hai.
Ek patni pati se naraj ho sakti hai. Per sabke samne aese bejjati nahi karti.
Kajal ritu ka pata chalne se naraj hui. Or ye thik bhi laga. Kajal ka us raat ka gussa bhi achcha tha. Per lallu ka use maaf kar dena samaj nahi aaya. Maa ko maaf kar deta but fir se bina baat clear kiye chod diya se samaj nahi aaya. Lallu ka sabke samne Kajal ke bare me na bata kar dil chhu liya tha. Per usi raat fir se Kajal ko chod kar dil tod diya.
Jese Sonam ke sath pyar bhari baate dikhai lotne per wese hi Kajal ke sath kuch dikhte. Kajal ko chup karwa kar bahar aa jate. Kajal ko aahsaas diware ki sach me uske bete ko bhi pida huyi hai.
Yese chudai karne se to laga Jese hero ek kutta hai. Koi maan samman nahi.
Sorry yadi mera comment bura lage to. But mene keval apne dil ki baat rakhi hai. Kahai bahut achchi hai. Lallu achcha khel raha hai.
Sorry again

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