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yaar yeh toh U turn le liya kahani ne ab ek saat itne vajrapat hoga, dekhte hain interesting banta jaa raha hain kahani, lagta hai yeh fufa hi kandul admi hain jo saare kand usse hi jure hue honge.Update 100
ab aaiye chalte hai is kahani ke 100th upadte par... lekin pahle kuch baat- mai aap sabhi reader logon ka bahut bahut bahut dhanyawaad karna chahta hoon kyonki kisi ne kaha hai "readers are leaders" aur readers logon ki wajah se ye kahani ko itna kuch mil paya..... ye kahani apne utar chadhav aur corona ko jhelte hue yahan tak pahuch gayi... ab ummid karte hai ki jab ye kahani haste khelte jhujhte yahan tak pahuch hi gayi to isi tarah haste khelte hi ye kahani poora ho jaye...
mai bhi soch raha tha ye kahani yahan tak pahuch gayi lekin is kahani ka mukya ansh(part) abhi tak nahi aaya to chaliye ab use suru karte hai...aane wale 7 din kamjor dilwalo ke liye nahi hai.. kyonki ye saat din me sayad love sex drugs smuggling sab chije aa jayegi suman ki jindagi me... ya kah sakte hai ye apne aap me ek choti si kahani hai is kahani ke bich...mai jab kahani suru ki thi tab hi ise likhna chahta tha lekin wo bahut jaldi ho jata aur ab bhi nahi likhunga to sayad der ho jayegi... is liye prastut hai upadate number 100.......
mai apne room me mast so raha tha subah subah achanak se mera nind khula wo bhi maa ke rone ki awaz se... sala maa ki tadap bhari awaz sunkar to dil se rona aa jata hai..mai doudta hua bhaga ma ke pass... maa apna pet pakde ro rahi thi... aur meri dono bhabhi aur bahan bhi wahi thi...
mai-kya hua maa ko...
didi-lagta hai maa ko pet me dard hai...
mai man me socha-ye saali poori pagal hai.. itna to mujhe bhi pata hai..
mai fatak se ghar se bahag mod par gaya aur ek auto le aaya..aur maa ko usme baitha kar didi ke saath aa gaya hospital..
hospital me mai apna card dikhaya to mujhe fayda hua aur maa ko jaldi se ek doctor ke pass le jaya gaya..
doctor check kiya aur bol diya ki maa ke pet me patthar hai to operation karna padega..aur operation yahan nahi hota hai...jitna jaldi operation karao utna achha hai...aur mai aapko kuch dawa de deta hoon isse dard control hoga...
mai to ye sunkar hi dar gaya socha ab kya karoon kyonki yahan sabse achha hospital ek private hospital tha usme operation karwana matlab 4-5 lakh kharch fir riti didi ki shaadi kaise hoga... mai soch me pad gaya fir socha ek baar sadhna madam ko puchta hoon wo padhi likhi hai to unke pass koi idea hoga... aur mai turant unko phone laga diya...
mai-madam aapse jaruri baat karna hai madam...aapse jaruri baat karna hai...
sadhna-arey aram se bolo kya baat hai mai sun rahi hoon...
mai-madam ji meri maa ko pet me stone ho gaya hai..mujhe ilaz karana hai lekin yahan koi achha hospital nahi hai...
sadhna-isme dikkat ki koi baat nahi hai suman tum doctor se meri baat karwao..mai usko bol dungi wo tumhari maa ko dilli ke aims me refer kar dega..wahan apne desh ke bahut achhe achhe doctor hai aur aajkal laser technique se operation hota hai 4-5 din me sab ho jayega...
mai-lekin wahan kharcha bahut hoga na madam...
sadhna madam-koi kharcha nahi hoga tum government employee ho tumhara sara kharch sarkaar utha legi..tumko ek rupaye bhi nahi lagega itna hi nahi jo paisa dawa me lagega uska bill rakhna wo paisa bhi baad me mil jayega..bas dilli me rahne me jo kharch hoga..agar koi relative hai to unke yahan ruk jana...ab tum jaldi se mera baat karwao doctor se fir maa ke saath gahr jao aur apne aur apne maa ke saath me koi aur ek ladies ke kapde pack karlo.... mai tumko ek ghante me fir se phone karungi thik hai...
mai-ji madam..sukriya madam... aur mai apna phone lekar doudte hue bhaga doctor ke pass ..
mai-doctor sahab ye madam aapse baat karna chahti hai...aur maine phone doctor ko diya...
doctor ne sadhna mam se baat ki aur khali yes mam yas mam bolkar phone kaat diya...
doctor-dekhiye mai mrs urmi ji ko aims refer kar de raha hoon aap wahan ka aapointment lekar check kara lijiyega...
mai-sukriya doctor sahab... sukriya...
fir wo cabin me gaya aur compounder ko kuch bola..wo kuch kuch type kiy uspar hospital ka muhar lagakar wo paper humko de diya...
abhi maa wahi chair par baithi thi..doctor ke dawa se dard thoda kam tha..saath hi riti didi bhi baithi hui thi...ki mujhe raman bhai ka phone aa gaya...
raman-tu khana hai maa ko kya hua sab thik to hai na...
mai-haan bhai sab thik hai lekin maa ko dilli lekar jana hoga operation ke liye...
raman bhai to ye sunte hi girte girte bacha...
raman-tu pagal hai kya itne paise kahan hai apne pass..ghar ki halat dekh riti ki shaadi hai aur ab to loan bhi hai 6 lakh ka...do-do hum tino bhai par...
mai-aap chinta mat karo mai jahan kaam karta hoon na wo log ye sara paisa denge bas dilli me kahi rahne ka intezam karna padega...
raman-kya tera company sab dega...
mai-haan..
raman-sala paisa to deta nahi company jada lekin itna facility...
mai-haan bhai...
raman bhai ko bhi ye sun kar rahat mila ..ye fir kahe khushi bhi mila...
raman-sachme bhai aaj tune bahut bada bojh utha liya ghar ka..tu na hota to ya to riti ki shadi ruk jati ya maa mar jati...ye bolte bolte bhai ro diya....
mai-arey bhai aapne mehnat se mujhe padhaya hai uska inam hai ye...
raman rote hue bola-nahi re tu mehnat se padha uska inam hai...
mai-arey bhai lekin dilli me rahenge kahan..
raman-wo apne fufaji hai na unke yahan rah lena...
mai-pagal ho kya...poora gaav janta hai wo kaisa ulta sidha kaam karte hai...unke yahan nahi jaunga mai...
raman-tujhe koun sa unka kaam me haath batana hai bas apna kaam karna aur chale aana isi ahane bua se bhi mil lena...
mai-mai nahi jaungha wahan...
raman-dekh aur kisi ko mai nahi janta..aur tu jaa raha hai dilli to wahi rah lena thoda asani bhi ho jayega samjha...
mai abhi hi fufa aur bua se baat kar leta hoon... aur yahan tere aur maa ke kapde pack kar deta hoon..
mai-saath me riti didi ke bhi kapde pack kar dena...
raman-wo kyun...
mai-kyonki ek ladies bhi chahiye saath me..
raman-thik hai..aur tu chinta na karna yahan mai sab dekh lunga..aur aman ko bhi sambhal lunga...
mai-thik hai bhai..
mai abhi uska phone jaise hi rakha sadhna madam ka phone aa gaya..
sadhna-koun koun jaa rahe ho..
mai-ji mai didi aur maa...
sadhna-thik hai tum sabka naam umar likh kar bhejo abhi aur jo paper tumko doctor ne diya wo bhi photo khich kar bhejo... mai online hi appointment le lungi..tumko wahan doudna nahi padega jada...
maine turant hi ye kaam kar diya..
sadhna madam ne adhe ghante me mujhe ek ticket bheja train ka jo aaj sham ka hi tha aur fir phone karke boli ki mai wahi ruku wo apni car lekar aa rahi hai...fir idhar raman bhai ne mujhe phone karke fufa ji ka dress likhwa diya aur bola ki bhai ka baat ho gaya hai..
ab hum tino baithe hue the..maa aur didi kaafi udas thi...
maa-mujhe maaf kardena beta mere chalte tera itna paisa kharch ho jayega..mera ilaz mat karwa...pahle riti ki shaadi kara dete hai...baad me mai bachungi tab socha jayega.. ye sunkar riti ke bhi ankhon me ashoon aa gaya..
mai-arey bas karo ye rona dhona..kuch nahi hua hai sab thik ho jayega...aapka ilaz bhi aur iski shaadi bhi...
ye sunkar dono meri taraf dekhne lage-mai arey meri company sab kar degi... ab aap rona band karo...aur didi tu bhi rona band kar..
dono chup ho gayi fir thodi der me sadhna madam aa gayi
mai-maa didi ye humari madam hai...
maa aur didi ne namaste kiya fir sadhna mam meri maa ko sahara dekar apne car me baitha di..saath hi riti didi bhi baith gayi...
mai sadhna madam ke saath aage seat par baith gaya..
sadhna-inke kapde kahan hai...
mai-wo bhai laa raha hai...
sadhna-unse pucho wo kahan hai jahan hai wahi ruke hum kapde le lenge unse...
mai apne bhai se baat kiya aur sadhna madam ko bataya ki wo abhi bas stand par hi pahcuhe hai..to sadhna madam car udhar hi mod di..aur 45 minut me hum bas stand par the...
bhai to hum sabko car me dekhkar hi shock me tha..
mai-bhai ye humari madam hai..
bhai=namaste madam ji...
sadhna madam-namaste ji...aur fir wo kapde diye jo madam ne dikki khol kar usme rakhwa di aur fir car badha di..
mai-madam ab humlog kaahn jaa rahe hai...
sadhna-yahan se railway staion 3 ghante hai... mai tumko drop kar dungi train me baith jana aur dilli me utar jana...dilli me kahan rahoge kuch socha hai...
mai-ji humare ek fufa hai wahan...
sadhna madam ne address dekha fir bataya ki station se kaise wahan jana hai..
fir isi tarah wo car chalati rahi aur humlog pahuch gaye railway station....
ye meri life ka pahla railway staion tha....
waise mobile me aur tv me to dekha tha lekin asli me pahli baar tha...
sadhna madam ek baar me samjh gayi ki humara pahli baar hai to wo humare saath platform par gayi abhi train aane me ek ghanta tha to wo bagal ke dukan se kuch khane ko le aayi hum sab khaye wo bhi khayi aur wo hum tino ko bata rahi thi tarin me kahan pesab hota hai kahan potty hota hai...aur wo batayi ki humara booking unhone 1st class ac me kara diya hai..to khana bhi milega...aur aaj shaam ko hum yahan hai to kal sham ko 4 baje dilli pahuchenge... maa aur didi bhi badi dhyan se unki baat sun rahi thi... fir aayi train..wo train me chadhi aur humara seat dhundh kar hume wahan baithayi aur goodby take care bolkar utar gayi..aur humari train bhi chuk chuk karte hue badh gaya........
Cahlo yeh sadhna madam toh bari kaam kee nikli itni bari tension ka hal unhone chutki mein hi kar dee, sahi hain jab maksad ek ho toh dost jaldi ban jaate hain.
Bhai aage ka toh bata hi rahe hain lekin lagtaa hain kuchh raaz suman ke past se bhi jure hain, jo ki geeta wala kand kee or darshata hain, jo bhi dekhte hain. ab delhi mein kya naye bhasar machta hai.