Adultery MASTI........... JINDAGI KI( story of a watchman)- BEGINNING...

[Wanton]

behtareen update hai yaar! bahut bahut maja agaya
bahut hi best likha hai aap ne, ekdom lajawab aur mast
bahut bahut passand aya mujhe is kahaani ko, aisa hi likhte raho yaar,

 

[Juggernaut]

itna pyara! itna mazadar! itna jabardast update! sab kuch dikhaya hai aap ne iss kahaani mein bahut hi acha laga issko padhke bhai,

 

[SweetSonali]

Kafi lajawab aur jackass update hai yah! bahut khoob yaar! dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

 

[Blueman]

Super sensational update! Wonderful and amazing narrations! Your writing is really exceptional! Hope the next update will come very soon!

 

[Kartik69]

wah!wah! ekdom fataka update! aur ek twist! aap such mien ek excellent writer ho yaar! bahut bahut Shukriya is kahaani ko lie!

 

[Shalini]

ekdom kamaal ka update hai yah!mujhe aisa lagta hai ki ek aur hot encounter hone wala hai
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for the next update

 

[The Pervert]

What a tremendous update! Just outclass writings! Super excellent descriptions!

 

[Ghosthunter]

Whoooosssshhhh.... phewwww!Now again you have proven what miracles your pen can do..... your writing skills are just beyond description!This phenomenon I can describe as a perfect blend of Sensuality, pure love and excitement.... Or should I say Sexcitement???

 

[Rohit]

wow yaar wow! it's just a great update.
bahut hi passand aya mujhe is update, ye update bahut kuch bolta hai!
bahut hi majedaar likha hai aap ne, emotion ke saath pyar aur tadap aur twist!
sab bilkool sahi se barabar naap taul kar likha hai aap ne
aap ki grip jabardast hai kissi baat ko pakar mein rakhna aur bayaan karna

 

[Obsessed]

What a dashing update! Keep rocking brother!