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इंतज़ार है....Update will be posted in few minutes
इंतज़ार है....Update will be posted in few minutes
superb story dear ...!!!!!
Nice update
Nice going lakin maza nahi aaya Aasma wala malmla pura kurna thaa bro bus dil khuta kurdeya aap nay lund ka head jaa chuka thaa uss Aasma ko hero kay lund ka gulam lazmi bunana thaa bus maza nahi aaya
HUMMM Luck like i am going to like that Abhi guy hes a cool dud ha let see how he use his tool in right way and slave all bitches hahahaahah i am waiting bro show us that Abhi in his full glory
wonderfull update bhai
Es duniya mai do hi type ki log hote hai...pahel POGO dekhte hai....aur dusre PORN
I have a Q a BIG Q what about the third type of people how watch PORN POGO
Hello bhi......
I'm here for the first time......
First of all for the new thread....
Bhai wese to mujhe adultery koi khas pasand nahi hai.....
Lekin aapne ye jo twist (2brain)isme dala hai.....OR hero ki jo psychological problem bataayi hai.....that is unique.....and awesome......
OR aapki isi diffrent think or work ke liye me yanha aaya hu.....
Story ka plot kaafi achcha or alag hai...
Hero ka character bhi kaafi intresting hai....
OR suspense bhi hai.....
Starting ke update bas buildup the.....
Lekin jo last wala update tha.....
OR us me bhi khas kar us personality split wala scene bahut achcha tha.....
Overall good story.....
Keep it up.....entertain us.....
And keep rocking....
Thanks....
Lagta kuch naya parhny ko mile ga.
Ap ka plot mujhe pasand aya .
waiting for next update
Update posted thanks for being so supportiveइंतज़ार है....
Super update bhaiUPDATE ~ 6
MAI(Mann mai)- Aaj es aasma ko to sabake shika diya ab se y Ram ko bilkul bhi pareshan nahi karegi......chlo ab college chla jae ...4 bje gae hai....ab priya didi ko pick bhi to karna hai...aur kya pata koe naya mal haat aajae
Y sbe soch kr mai college college ki aur nikale gaya....vaha pahoch kr
PRIYA- Itna time kyu laga diya idiot
MAI-Sorry didi ....vo traffic mai fahs gaya tha (mann mai- teri maa ko chodu....agr y ram ka lafda nahi hota na to abhi batata ...ki idiot kon hai.....patke patke ki...eski puri hekadi nikale deta)
PRIYA-Ab dekhta rahega ya gadi bhi nikale ga....aur ha maire ko madam bole samjha ...mai teri koe didi vidi nahi hu
MAI- nikale ta hu madam (mann mai- mann to kar raha hai abhi lund nikale kr eski muh mai dale du..aur eski saari hikade....chode chode kr....bahar nikale du.....par kya karu agr meri emotion change huvy to ram bhich mai aa jae ga.....aur sara maza ....saza mai badle gae ga)
PRIYA-Kaha dhyaan hai tera
MAI- Kahi nahi madam.....mera dhyaan ek dum sahi jagah hai
PRIYA-tera dhyaan kahi bhi ho....mujhe use si koe parak nahi padta ab ...jaldi se gadi nikale aur ghar chle
MAI-Okay Madam
Y kah kr maine gadi niklae aur phire priya aakar gadi mai beth gae aur mai gadi chlanai laga
Kuch der bade priya boli
PRIYA- Gadi roko
MAI-lekine kyu?
PRIYA-Jitna kaha hai utna karo
MAI(Mann mai)- Bhoute natake kr ti hai .....sala eska number lagana hi padega
PRIYA-Tumnai suna nahi maine kya kaha
MAI(gusse se brake marte huvy)- Lo rok di ab bolo
PRIYA-Ab gadi se niche uthro
MAI(gusse se gate khol te huvy)- Le ithar gaya aur bata
PRIYA-Aur ab tum ghar pr chle kr aana ......mai to chali
Y kah kr usnai gadi bhaga de.....aur mai use dekhta rahgaya
MAI(bohote gusse se)- Sala eski maa ki choote saali mera hi poopte bana gae.....
tabhi
{Change.... change.... change}
MAI(ab ram )- Y abhi bhi na pata nahi gusse mai kya kya bolta hai....y bhi bhul gata hai vo hmari badi didi hai......mana unhi ghusa jayada aata hai eska mtb y thodi hai ke hme unhi khuch bhi bole....vesi mai to aasma didi ke pass tha na.....phire mai switch ho gaya tha ...aur ab mai yaha hu.....eska mtlb abhi nai aasma didi ka matter sambhale liya.....chlo accha hai....ek balaa to kam hue....vesi abhi nai aasma didi ko samjahya kise hoga....kahi khuch utla sidha to nahi kiya hoga....jo bhi ho...mujhe pura yakine hai abhi nai mamla sambhale liya hoga....jise vo hmisa sambhalta hai
Y sbe sochate huvy mai ghar ki aur nikale gaya.....ghar pahoch tehi roj ke tarah mera sawajate gaaliyo se kiya gaya
RAMA- Kaha tha ab tke ....khana kon teri maa banaae gi
MAI-Sorry badi mummy vo kya hai na priya didi nai mujhe raste mai akela chode diya ....es karn vaha se ghar paidal chalne ke karn time lag gaya.....abhi khana banata hu
Y kah kr mai kitchen ki aur nikale gaya aur sbe ke liye khana banane laga
MAI(mann mai)- Yaar masala kaha hai.....yahi to rakha tha....kahi badi mummy ne upar waali almary mai to nahi rakh diya.....dekhta hu
Y soch kr mai upar waali almary check karne laga....ki tabhi mujhe khuch esa mila jise dekh kr mai hiran ho gaya aur phire
{Change...Change ...Change}
MAI(Ab Abhi)- Mera plan kahmyab huva.....ab aae ga maza
[Huva y tha ke abhi nai Ram ko shock karnai ke liye ...upar almary mai rama ki khuch nude tasvere rakh de thi..jise dekh kar Ram shock ho gaya aur phire change ...change ....change]
Tabhi bahar se rehkha andar aae aur boli
REHKHA—kitna time aur lage ga
MAI- Abhi thoda time lagega
REHKHA— kaam ka na kaaj ka dushman anaj ka….aaj school kyo nahi aya mujhe pick karnai?
MAI—aaj thoda tabiyat theek nahi thi didi
REHKHA—ye didi bolna band kar de…nahi to bahut pachtayega samjha
MAI- samjha gaya....lekine ek bate puchani hai
REHKHA-Kya puchana hai....puch
MAI- Aap maire badi bahen ho to mai aapko didi kyu nahi bol sakta
REHKHA- Kyuki mai thujh bhai nahi manti....bhai kya mai tujhe hamare parivaar ka hisa bhi nahi manti
MAI-Par kyu....maine esa kya kiya?
REHKHA- kyu nahi pata bs nahi mante so nahi mante.....tu y fhaltu ke baat mate kar aur jaldi se
kaam pura kr
MAI (apni ankho ko rehkha ke kurte se jhankti chuchiyo me gada ke)—mai to kab se kaam karna chahta hu aap he ho jo baate kr rahi ho
Rehkha maire bato ko sun kar jaise hi mairi taraf nazar ghumayi to mujhai kahi bade gaur se dekhte huye paya…..jab usne maire nazaro ka picha kiya to samajh gayi…..turant hi gusse mai budbudate huye kitchen se bahar chali gae
REHKHA(mann me budbudate huye)—kamina kahi ka…..kaise ghur ghur ke dekh raha tha jaise kha hi jayega meri chuchiyo ko ….meri sabhi saheliya theek hi kahti hain ki ye ajeb hai....ek hi pale mai eska pura ka pura character hi badale jata hai.....pahale kise kha raha tha...ki aap maire didi ho na....aur phire meri hi chuchiyo ko kha jane wali nazro se dekh raha tha .....pata nahi kbhi mood change hone par mere upar chad gaya to.......mujhe bach ke rahna hoga isse
REHKHA to budbudate hue chali gae.....pr mai usko jata dekh kr mann mai
MAI(mann me)—wow….kya mast gaand ki rehkha hai......…kitni badi hai….kash ek bar ye mujhe marne ko mil jaye to maza aa jayega.....esi dekh kr to mera khada ho gaya ab to kise na kise ka number lagana hi padega
Bhai intro or storie main pic b add kr doUPDATE ~ 6
MAI(Mann mai)- Aaj es aasma ko to sabake shika diya ab se y Ram ko bilkul bhi pareshan nahi karegi......chlo ab college chla jae ...4 bje gae hai....ab priya didi ko pick bhi to karna hai...aur kya pata koe naya mal haat aajae
Y sbe soch kr mai college college ki aur nikale gaya....vaha pahoch kr
PRIYA- Itna time kyu laga diya idiot
MAI-Sorry didi ....vo traffic mai fahs gaya tha (mann mai- teri maa ko chodu....agr y ram ka lafda nahi hota na to abhi batata ...ki idiot kon hai.....patke patke ki...eski puri hekadi nikale deta)
PRIYA-Ab dekhta rahega ya gadi bhi nikale ga....aur ha maire ko madam bole samjha ...mai teri koe didi vidi nahi hu
MAI- nikale ta hu madam (mann mai- mann to kar raha hai abhi lund nikale kr eski muh mai dale du..aur eski saari hikade....chode chode kr....bahar nikale du.....par kya karu agr meri emotion change huvy to ram bhich mai aa jae ga.....aur sara maza ....saza mai badle gae ga)
PRIYA-Kaha dhyaan hai tera
MAI- Kahi nahi madam.....mera dhyaan ek dum sahi jagah hai
PRIYA-tera dhyaan kahi bhi ho....mujhe use si koe parak nahi padta ab ...jaldi se gadi nikale aur ghar chle
MAI-Okay Madam
Y kah kr maine gadi niklae aur phire priya aakar gadi mai beth gae aur mai gadi chlanai laga
Kuch der bade priya boli
PRIYA- Gadi roko
MAI-lekine kyu?
PRIYA-Jitna kaha hai utna karo
MAI(Mann mai)- Bhoute natake kr ti hai .....sala eska number lagana hi padega
PRIYA-Tumnai suna nahi maine kya kaha
MAI(gusse se brake marte huvy)- Lo rok di ab bolo
PRIYA-Ab gadi se niche uthro
MAI(gusse se gate khol te huvy)- Le ithar gaya aur bata
PRIYA-Aur ab tum ghar pr chle kr aana ......mai to chali
Y kah kr usnai gadi bhaga de.....aur mai use dekhta rahgaya
MAI(bohote gusse se)- Sala eski maa ki choote saali mera hi poopte bana gae.....
tabhi
{Change.... change.... change}
MAI(ab ram )- Y abhi bhi na pata nahi gusse mai kya kya bolta hai....y bhi bhul gata hai vo hmari badi didi hai......mana unhi ghusa jayada aata hai eska mtb y thodi hai ke hme unhi khuch bhi bole....vesi mai to aasma didi ke pass tha na.....phire mai switch ho gaya tha ...aur ab mai yaha hu.....eska mtlb abhi nai aasma didi ka matter sambhale liya.....chlo accha hai....ek balaa to kam hue....vesi abhi nai aasma didi ko samjahya kise hoga....kahi khuch utla sidha to nahi kiya hoga....jo bhi ho...mujhe pura yakine hai abhi nai mamla sambhale liya hoga....jise vo hmisa sambhalta hai
Y sbe sochate huvy mai ghar ki aur nikale gaya.....ghar pahoch tehi roj ke tarah mera sawajate gaaliyo se kiya gaya
RAMA- Kaha tha ab tke ....khana kon teri maa banaae gi
MAI-Sorry badi mummy vo kya hai na priya didi nai mujhe raste mai akela chode diya ....es karn vaha se ghar paidal chalne ke karn time lag gaya.....abhi khana banata hu
Y kah kr mai kitchen ki aur nikale gaya aur sbe ke liye khana banane laga
MAI(mann mai)- Yaar masala kaha hai.....yahi to rakha tha....kahi badi mummy ne upar waali almary mai to nahi rakh diya.....dekhta hu
Y soch kr mai upar waali almary check karne laga....ki tabhi mujhe khuch esa mila jise dekh kr mai hiran ho gaya aur phire
{Change...Change ...Change}
MAI(Ab Abhi)- Mera plan kahmyab huva.....ab aae ga maza
[Huva y tha ke abhi nai Ram ko shock karnai ke liye ...upar almary mai rama ki khuch nude tasvere rakh de thi..jise dekh kar Ram shock ho gaya aur phire change ...change ....change]
Tabhi bahar se rehkha andar aae aur boli
REHKHA—kitna time aur lage ga
MAI- Abhi thoda time lagega
REHKHA— kaam ka na kaaj ka dushman anaj ka….aaj school kyo nahi aya mujhe pick karnai?
MAI—aaj thoda tabiyat theek nahi thi didi
REHKHA—ye didi bolna band kar de…nahi to bahut pachtayega samjha
MAI- samjha gaya....lekine ek bate puchani hai
REHKHA-Kya puchana hai....puch
MAI- Aap maire badi bahen ho to mai aapko didi kyu nahi bol sakta
REHKHA- Kyuki mai thujh bhai nahi manti....bhai kya mai tujhe hamare parivaar ka hisa bhi nahi manti
MAI-Par kyu....maine esa kya kiya?
REHKHA- kyu nahi pata bs nahi mante so nahi mante.....tu y fhaltu ke baat mate kar aur jaldi se
kaam pura kr
MAI (apni ankho ko rehkha ke kurte se jhankti chuchiyo me gada ke)—mai to kab se kaam karna chahta hu aap he ho jo baate kr rahi ho
Rehkha maire bato ko sun kar jaise hi mairi taraf nazar ghumayi to mujhai kahi bade gaur se dekhte huye paya…..jab usne maire nazaro ka picha kiya to samajh gayi…..turant hi gusse mai budbudate huye kitchen se bahar chali gae
REHKHA(mann me budbudate huye)—kamina kahi ka…..kaise ghur ghur ke dekh raha tha jaise kha hi jayega meri chuchiyo ko ….meri sabhi saheliya theek hi kahti hain ki ye ajeb hai....ek hi pale mai eska pura ka pura character hi badale jata hai.....pahale kise kha raha tha...ki aap maire didi ho na....aur phire meri hi chuchiyo ko kha jane wali nazro se dekh raha tha .....pata nahi kbhi mood change hone par mere upar chad gaya to.......mujhe bach ke rahna hoga isse
REHKHA to budbudate hue chali gae.....pr mai usko jata dekh kr mann mai
MAI(mann me)—wow….kya mast gaand ki rehkha hai......…kitni badi hai….kash ek bar ye mujhe marne ko mil jaye to maza aa jayega.....esi dekh kr to mera khada ho gaya ab to kise na kise ka number lagana hi padega
Thanks brother for your appreciationable feedback....keep it up ang be alongzabardast update