Romance Matlab Ka Pyar Jo Hakikat Main Ho Gaya

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bhai rehman ruby ko jab bachayega uske baad zat se uske pyaar ko accept na kare..bachane ke baad bhi sirf dosti rakhe aur ruby ko thoda tadpaye..matlab woh jo ladki thi na jo rehman se pyaar karti thi uske sath rehman thoda ghume fire tab ruby ko samajh aayega ki apna pyaar jab dusre ke sath hota hai toh kaisa lagta hai..!! bhai yeh bas ek sujhav hai baki aapki marji hai..!!

 

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bhai rehman ruby ko jab bachayega uske baad zat se uske pyaar ko accept na kare..bachane ke baad bhi sirf dosti rakhe aur ruby ko thoda tadpaye..matlab woh jo ladki thi na jo rehman se pyaar karti thi uske sath rehman thoda ghume fire tab ruby ko samajh aayega ki apna pyaar jab dusre ke sath hota hai toh kaisa lagta hai..!! bhai yeh bas ek sujhav hai baki aapki marji hai..!!

Bhai aap phikar mat karo end aap ko achha lagega bas itana kahunga

 

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rubi rote hua hi us aurat se lipat kar so gayi aurat ne bhi rubi ko apne se alag nahi ki our rubi ko apne bahon main sone diya our rubi ki aankhon se bahti hui un aansuon ko pochh diya our phir wah aurat bhi apni aankhe band kar ke so gayi
Next Morning

Rahman abhi so raha hota hai ki use lagta hai koi uske gaal pe kiss kar raha hai to Rahmaan apni aankhe khol leta hai to dekhta hai uski bhanji hai jo Rahmaan ke gaal par bar bar chum rahi hai our wahi khadi uski rabia baaji muskura rahi hai to Rahmaan usi tarh apni bhanji ko utha leta hai our apni bhanji ke pet par chumne lagata hai jisse rani bhi hasne lagati hai apni bhanji ko haste dekh Rahmaan bhi haste hua our rani ke pet ko chumne lagata hai jo rani our khil khila kar haste hua Rahman ke sar ka baal nochne lagati hai

chhote tu kaisa mama hai re teri bhani kab se tujhe utha rahi hai magar tu uth hi nahi raha hai tu pahle se kuch jayada hi sone laga hai Rabia baaji muskura ke kahti hai

main bhi to kab ke uth gaya tha rabia baaji our apni bhanji ke kiss ka maza le raha tha mujhe to bahut maza aa raha tha Rahman bolte hua phir se rani ka munh apne gaal par satane lagata hai jo thodi hi der main rani pareshan hokar rone lagati hai

Rabia beti q rola rahi hai meri nanhi si jaan ko marungi tujhe main Rahmaan ki ammi room main aati hui bolti hai

to Rahmaan jaldi se rani ko phir se khelane lagata hai magar rani bhi apni nani ko dekh kar unke pass jane ke liye Rahman ke pass se jane lagati hai jo Rahman ki ammi rani ko Rahmaan se chhin leti hai

ohh to meri jaan ko uske mamu rola raha hai mat jana mamu ke pass chalo ham tumhare nana ke pass chalte hai Rahman ki ammi kahti hai our rani ko lekar chali jati hai

chhote tu jaldi se fresh hokar aa main nashta lagati hui rabia baji kah kar chali jati hai

Rahmaan bhi uth kar Bathroom main chala jata hai

kya ham Rahman ko rubi ke bare main bata de mujhe achha nahi lag raha hai dil par ek bhoj sa hai agar ye baat bahar se pata chala to Rahmaan beta sayad ham se naraz ho jayega Rahman ki ammi apne pati se kahati hai

main bhi bas yehi soch raha tha hameh Rahman ko bata dena chahiye yehi thik rahega main to dookan pae jaa raha huin tum hi use bata dene Rahman ke abbu kahte hai our nashta kar ke chale jate hai

Rahmaan beta main tujhe kuch btana chahti huin dekh mujhpe gussa mat hona maine ye baat sirf teri bhalai ke liye chhupayi thi magar main nahi chahti ye baat tujhe bahar kisi se pata chale our tu mujhpe ya apne abbu par naraz na ho jaye Rahman ki ammi nashta karte hua bolti hai

wahi Rahmaan apni ammi ko Sawaliye nazare se dekhne lagata hai wahi haal rabia baaji ka bhi tha wah bhi apni mami ko usi tarh dekhne lagi thi Wahi Rahman ki ammi dono ko dekh kar bolna suru kar deti hai

beta main janti hui tu rubi se pyar karta hai maine teri wah dayeri padh liya hai tu rubi ke wajah se ghar se gaya tha tere jane ke kuch din baad hi rubi bhi kisi ladke ke sath bhag gayi thi rubi ki bhagne ki baat sun kar rabia our Rahman dono hi hairan ho gaya the Rahman ko ek waqt ke liye uska dhadkan tezz chalne laga Rahman ki aankhe nam ho gayi tabhi rabia uth kar Rahmaan ke pass jakr baith gayi our apni mami jaan ko wahi baithne ka ishara kiya jo Rahmaan ki ammi bhi apne bete ke pass aane lagi thi

thodi der ke liye Rahaman ki ammi bhi chup ho gayi kuch der tak khamoshi si chha gayi waha par phir rabia ne Rahmaan ka hanth pakdi to Rahman ne apni Aankhon se bahti aansu pochh kar apni ammi ki tarf dekhne laga to phir Rahman ki ammi kahana suru karti hai

ek din do pahar main jab rubi ki ammi aachank ghar aai to mujhe kuch thik nahi laga wah kuch pareshan lag rahi thi wah aate hi pahle puchhi kya rubi yehi hai to maine bata diya rubi to aaj mere ghar aai hi nahi to rubi ki ammi our pareshan ho gayi our phir unhone bataya ke rubi aaj subah se ghar par nahi hai to main bhi pareshan ho gayi

our phir rubi ki ammi nw bataya ki wah soch rahi thi ki rubi mere pass hogi

magar rubi yeha bhi nahi thi tab rubi ki ammi our pareshan ho gayi our rone bhi lagi thi magar maine uneh chup hone ko kaha rona to mujhe bhi ek waqt ke liye aa gaya tha magar main kuch soch kar rubi ki ammi ko chup karane lagi

phir maine rubi ko phone karne lagi magar rubi ka phone nahi lag raha tha usi waqt tere Abbu bhi khaan khane aa gaye to uneh bhi pata chala

to tere abbu bina khane khaye hi wah rubi ko pata karne ke liye collage ki tarf chale gaye magar rubi collage main bhi nahi gayi thi

idhar rubi ki ammi ne apne pati ko bhi bata diya rubi ke bare main rubi ke abbu kisi kaam se apne ghar gaye the magar rubi ke bare main sun kar wah bhi ghar aa gaye our tere Abbu ke sath mil kar har jagah talaash karne lage magr rubi kahi nahi mili tab rubi ke abbu our tere abbu police station gaye our rubi ke bare main bataya ke rubi subah se ghar se gaib hai

to police ne yeh kah kar abhi jane ke liye kah diya ke wah apne kisi dost ke pass gayi hogi aap log aaj dekh lijiye nahi aai to kal ham aap ko beti ke bare main pata karenge

to tere abbu our rubi ke abbu ghar aa gaye

wahi din main mujhe teri yaad aai q ke mujhe tere upar sakh ho gaya tha jab rubi ki ammi ghar akar rubi ke bare main boli to is liye maine tere pass phone kiya tha

q ke uske ek din pahle hi main jab tera room saf kar rahi thi to tere bister ke niche mujhe ek teri dayeri mili thi main use utha kar rakhne lagi ke usme se rubi ki kai taswir girne lagi jo mujhe bahut ajib lagi ke rubi ki itani taswire tere Pass q hai our main wah dayri dekhne lagi our tab mujhe pata chala tu rubi se kitna payar karta hai our rubi ne tera pyar thukra diya hai jisse tu dukhi hokar ghar se chala gaya hai phir maine sochi sayad rubi ko dukh hua ho tere bua ke ghar jane ka our tu bhi yeha nahi hai our ye baat rubi ko pata chal hi gaya tha ki tu banglore gaya hai bua ke ghar to mujhe laga tujhse sayad sorry bolne ke liye rubi tere pasa gayi ho

q ke tere jaane ke baad maine rubi ki chehare ko dekhi thi rubi bhut hi dukhi our pareshan lag rahi thi jo maine rubi ae kai bar puchha bhi tha magar rubi ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya us waqt

jo bhi hua tha tum dono ke bich mgar tum dono bachpan ke dost the sath main hi tum dono bade hua the bhale hi rubi tera payar kabul na kari thi magar uske aankhon main maine dekhi thi wah tere liye kitni pareshan thi wah raat ayese hi bit gayi Subah hote hi main our tere abbu rubi ke ghar chali gayi jo holl main hi rubi ke ammi abbu dukhi hokar baithe hua the ham jaise hi rubi ke ghar gaye usi waqt rubi ka phone bhi aa gaya uske abbu ke phone par

rubi ke abbu apni beti ki aawaz ko sun kar khush ho gaye rubi ke abbu abhi kuch bolte ki udhar se rubi khud bolne lagi jise sun kar ham sabhi waah hairan ho gaya our wahi rubi ki ammi abbu to rone hi lage the main bhag kar rubi ki ammi ko sambhala

phone ka speaker bhi onn tha to ham sab ne suna

rubi udhar se bolne lagi abbu main ek ladke se payar karti thi our main usi ke sath aai huin our maine shadi bhi kar liye hai please aap mujhe dhundhne ki kosis mat kijiyega rubi ne bas itana bol kar phone rakh diya to rubi ke abbu wahi par baith kar rone lage wahi rubi ki baat sun kar meri bhi aankhe bhar aai thi magar main rubi ki ammi ko sambhal rahi thi jo apni beti ki baat sun kar gir hi padi thi

phir kuch din tak rubi ki ammi abbu bahut dukhi rahe phir ek din rubi ki ammi abbu aachank apne gaaon chale gaye

beta main kabhi nahi sochi thi rubi itani ghatiya kaam karegi jo uske ammi abbu itna pyar karte the uski ammi kitni sapne dekhi hogi ye karungi apni beti ke liye wah karungi magar rubi ne unke kai sall ke sapne ko bas ek jhatke main barbaad kar diya wah bhi char din ki pyar ke liye Rahman zara soch kya bit rahi hogi rubi ke ammi abbu par jise bachpan se pyar kar ke bada kiya our wahi aulad char din ke pyar ke liye apne ammi abbu ke barso ki us pyar ko bhula kar bhag gayi Rahmaan ki ammi apni aankhon main aai aansu ko pochhte hua boli

wahi haal rabia our Rahmaan ka bhi un dono ke bhi aankhon main aansu the

Rahmaan ko to kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha wah apni ammi se kya bole wahi Rabia baaji ne Rahman ke aankho se bahta hua aansu pochhne lagi

Phir Rahman nashta chhod kar apne rabia se khud ko chhoda kar apne room main chala gaya Rahman ki ammi pichhe jane lagi tabhi rabia ne apni mami jaan ko jane ke pahle hi rok diya

mami jaan main chhote se baat karti huin Rabia baaaji boli our uth kar Rahmaan ke room main chali gai wahi Rahman apne bed par baith kar ro raha hota hai to rabia pass jakar apne bhai ke sar ko sahlane lagti hai jo Rahman apni rabia baaji ke god main sar rakh kar rone lagata hai

chhote dekh rone se ab kuch bhi nahi hoga wah tujhe chhod kar khud gayi hai jo ladki apni ammi abbu ki nahi hui wah teri ya kisi our ki kya hogi tu use bhul jaaa main yehi kahungi

main bhi samjh rahi huin mere bhai tujhe kitna dard ho raha hoga magar main bhi tere is dard ko kam nahi kar sakti huin tuhi apna dard ko tu khud hi kam kar sakta hai us rubi ko bhul kar

tu apni rabia baaji ki bat manega na chhote tu janta hai na main tujhe kabhi bhi dukhi nahi dekh sakti huin tu royega to main bhi rone lagungi kya tu yehi chahta hai apni baaji ko rolana rabia baaji bol rahi hoti hai roti hui

wahi Rahman rota hi jata hai apni baaji ko pakad kar jisse rabia baaji ko our dukh hota hai apne bhai ka our rabia baaji ka bhi aansu nikalne lagata hai phir bhi Rabia baaji apne chhote bhai ko samjhate hi jaa rahi hoti hai

magar jaise hi Rahman ko apne Gale par pani ka ahsas hota hai Rahman apni Rabia baaji ke god se aachank uth jata hai our phir apni rabia baaji ko dekhta hai ki uski rabia baaji bhi uske liye ro rahi hai to Rahman rone band kar deta hai our apni rabia baaji ki aankhon se aansu pochh deta hai

thodi der dono bhai bahan sath hokar baithe hi rahte hai magar rabia baaji Rahman ka haanth pakde hi rahti hai tabhi Rahman haanth chhoda kar uthne lagta hai jo rabia baaji Rahmaan ka haanth our majbooti se pakad leti hai

chhote kaha jaa raha hai tu mere pass hi baith kahi mat jaa abhi tu rabia baaji kahti hai

Rahmaan ke jate hua dekh kar rabia baaji is liye mana karne lagi ke Rahman bahar jakar apne aap ko kuch kar na le is liye Rahman ko pakad liya tha rabia baaji ne

baaji main thik huin mujhe jane dijiye q ke mujhe aamir ke bare main pata karna hai uski ammi kitni dukhi hai maine aap ko kal bataya tha na aap kya chahti hai main aamir ka pata na karu aap yehi chahti hai Rahmaan gusse main kahta hai

nahi main bhi chahti huin tu aamir ka pata kare magar pahle apni baaji ka kasam kha tu apne aap ko kuch bhi nahi karega jisse mami jaan our mamu ko dukhi hona pade rabia baaji Rahmaan ka hanth apne sar par rakhti hui bolti hai

baaji aap kya bol rahi hai main ayesa kuch nahi karne wala jisse aap ko our ammi abbu ke sath kisi ko dukhi hona pade main bas aamir ka pata karne jaa raha huin Rahman kahta hai to rabia baaji Rahmaan ko jane deti hai

Rahman apni rabia baaji ke pass se apni aankhon se aansu pochh kar chala jata hai magar Rahman ghar se thoda dur jane pe phir se Rahman ki aankhe bhar aati hai Rahman ek tuta hua ghar main baith kar rone lagta hai Rahman ko yekin nahi ho raha tha Rubi ghar se bhag jayegi

Rahman bhai kya hua aap dukhi lag rahe hai aamir ke bare main koi buri khabar to pata nahi chal gaya aap ko Rahman abhi aakar us tuta hua ghar main baitha hi tha ke amit akar bol padata hai

amit ki aawaz sun kar Rahmaan jaldi se apne aansu ko pochh leta hai ghumte hua phir bhi amit to dekh hi leta hai amit tum aa gaye chalo ham aamir ke bare main pata karte hai

Rahman bina amit ke tarf dekhe bolta hai our room se nikal jata hai wahi amit bhi Rahmaan ke pichhe aata hai our dono nikal jate hai

Do pahar ke 2 : PM Rahman ke ghar par

Rabia baaji chhat par rani ke sath khel rahi hoti hai ke Rabia baaji ko apni get ka darwaze par kisi ka pitne ki aawaz aati hai to rabia baaji chhat se hi dekhti hai ki bagal wala ladka hai jo darwaza pit raha hai

salman abhi rani so rahi hai tum shaam main aane thik hai Rabia baaji ladke salman se kahati hai

q ke Rabia baaji sochti hai ladka salman sayad unki beti rani ko khelane aaya hai is liye bolti hai rani abhi so rahi hai

Rabia baaji Rahmaan bhaiya se koi milne aaya hai Rahman bhai ko bol dijiye us Oto ke pas main salman kahta hai

to rabia baji samne se dekhti hai to unke ghar se thodi dur par ek Oto khada hai our pass main hi ek ladka khada hai

salman wah ladka Rahmaan ko q puchh raha hai kuch btaya kya rabia baaji upar se hi kahati hai

nahi rabia baaji kuch nahi bola bas Rahman bhaiya ko bola zara bola do to main aa gaya salman kahta hai salman zara tu ladke ko bola main puchhti huin Rabia baaji kahti hai

our rani ko lekar chhat se niche utar kar ghar ke bahar aa jati hai tab tak wah Oto wala bhi ghar ke pass aa jata hai

tum mere bhai ko q puchh rahe the kya kaam hai tumeh mere bhai se rabia baaji ladke se kahti hai

are yaar har ghar ki ladkiya our aurat ayesi hi hoti hai ghar ke kisi aadmi ke bare main puchho to pahle hajar sawal khud karne lagati hai Oto wala man main kahta hai

kya soch rahe ho tum mere bhai ko q puchh rahe ho jab Oto wala kuch nahi bolta hai to rabia baaji phir kahti hai

Mera naam kaliya hai Rahman bhai mujhe Achhe se jante hai Rahman bhai kal aamir ke bare main puchh rahe the jo mujhe aaj hi pata chala to main batane aa gaya Rahmaan bhai ko kaliya kahta hai

aamir ka naam sun kar hi Rabia baaji ke chehre par thodi khushi aa jati hai to kaliya ko ghar main aane ko bolti hai to kaliya bhi aa jata hai Rabia baaji ke sath ghar main

tum mujhe batao main Rahman ko bata dungi wah abhi ghar par nahi hai shaam main aayega rabia baaji kahti hai

kya karu Rahman bhai ki bahan ko batau ki nahi magar mujhe mama ke ghar bhi jana hai pata nahi kitne din waha rahunga Rahman ki bahan ko hi bata deta huin kaliya man main sochta hai our batane lagta hai

main subah ghar par tha to mere ek dost ka mujhe phone aaya ke uski maa ko ek dusre gaon main lekar jana hai bahut hi zaruri hai magar mujhe bhi apne mama ke yeha jana tha to main ek dusre Oto wale ke ghar chala gaya jo mere ghar ke pass main hi uska ghar tha main jab uske ghar gaya to wah ghar par hi tha our wah mujhe dekh kar jaldi se kuch chhupane laga jo mujhe bahut jayada ajib laga lekin main usse puchha Oto lekar jane ke liye to mana kar diya to main ghar aane laga magar phir maine socha wah mujhse kya chhupa raha tha to main phir se dhire se uske ghar main chala gaya jab main uske ghar main gaya to wah ek ladki ka photo dekh raha tha apne phone main our main us ladki ko sayad kabhi dekha hai ayesa laga tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki maine us ladki ko Rahman bhai ke sath dekha hai to main us ladke se phone chhin liya

is ladki ka photo tere Pass kaise hai tu janta hai ye kiski photo hai Rahmaan bhai ki dost ki bata mujhe ye photo tere Pass kaise aai our mujhe lagta hai ye phone bhi tera nahi hai bata nahi to main abhi Rahman bhai ko jakar bata deta huin wah khud tujhse puchh lenge maine us ladke se kaha jo wah dar gaya Rahmaan bhai ka naam sun kar q ke use pata tha Rahman bhai kisi se ladai nahi karte hai magar uneh kisi par gussa aata hai to phir bahut bedardi se marte hai

kuch der to chhup raha phir mere pair pakad liya our bolne laga kaliya bhai ye phone photo wali ladki ki hi hai our main nahi janta tha ye Rahman bhai ki dost hai nahi to kab ke uneh bata deta ladka darte hua kaha

kya hua hai ladki ke sath kahi tune kuch kiya to nahi us ladki ke sath phir tujhe Rahman bhai se koi nahi bachha sakta maine kaha

to wah our bhi dar gaya phir jo bataya usne mera bhi roye khade ho gaya

usne bataya ki ek din ye ladki mere hi Oto main baithi thi our phir ek ladka bhi baith gaya uska naam irfan hai main usee janta tha irfan jab Oto main baitha to ye ladki kuch darne lagi thi phir irfan ladki ke sath batmizi karne laga to ladki ne irfan ko tapped mar diya phir usi waqt irfan ne bhi tapped mar diya ladki ko main dono ko ladte dekh kar Oto rokne laga ke irfan ne gun nikal kar mere upar taan diya our mujhe hotal chalne ko kaha our dhmkaya bhi kisi ko bataya to meri pariwar ko bhi nokshan pahunchayega to main Oto chalane laga phir irfan our ladki main ladai hone lagi tabhi irfan ne gun se ladki ke sar par maar diya our ladki behosh ho gayi phir main hotal ke pass pahunch gaya to irfan ladki ko lekar hotal main pahunch gaya magar ladki ka phone Oto main hi rah gaya

main bhi bahut dar gaya tha jo main jaldi se waha se jana chahta tha tabhi mere pass ek ladka aaya bhagte hua our usne ladki ke bare main puchhne laga to maine use bata diya ke wah ladki andar gayi hai itna kaha to ladka bhi hotal main chala gaya jo mujhe laga pyar ka mamla hai our mujhe bhi janne ka man karne laga to main bhi hotal main jane laga magar gard ne mujhe hotal main jaane nahi diya main gard wale se bahas karne laga ki mujhe paise lene hai phir bhi gard mujhe jane nahi diya mere gard se bahas karte hua koi 20 minat ho gaya tha tabhi wah ladka hotal se bhagte hua aaya our main kuch puchhta usse pahle hi wah ladka bhagane laga our uske pichhe hi kai saare ladke bhi nikle our ladke ka pichha karne laga main bhi unke pichhe Oto lekar chal diya wah bhagte hua pahadi ki tarf chale gaye main bhi unke pichhe gaya tha magar jayad jaam hone se main pichhe hi rah gaya tha phir bhi unke pichhe gaya tabhi un ladko ke aate dekh kar main gadi ek jagah rok diya wah sabhi akar mere gadi main baith gaya our mujhe hotal chalne ko kaha main bhi unse kuch kaha nahi our chal diya

phir mujhe unki baat sunai diya jo ek bol raha tha itne upar se gine ke baad wah zinda nahi bachega our sabhi hasne lage

jo main samjh gaya ke wah ladka sayad us pahadi se niche kud gaya hai main bahut dar gaya tha

wah gundey bahut khatrnak lag rahe the jo maine wah baat kisi ko nahi bataya our ghar aa gaya

kaliya ne jaise hi Rabia baaji ko puri baat bataya rabia baaji ki aankhon main aansu ke sath unki dhadkan bhi tezz chalne lagai our aamir ke pahadi ke khudne ki baat sun kar wah our bhi rone lagi

wahi kaliya Rubia baaji ko rubi ka phone diya our ek number bhi diya our bola ke ye number us ladke ka hai Rahmaan bhai ko our kuch puchhna hai to puchh sakte hai uneh bata dijiyega us ladke ka naam mohit hai kaliya ne kaha our chala gaya rabia baaji ke ki munh se aawaz bhi nahi nikal rahi thi Rabia baaji phir Rahman ko phone karne lagi jo Rahmaan ka number busy aa raha tha rabia baaji rubi ka phone lekar apne room main chali gayi our Rahman ka intzaar karne lagi

Bdiya update bhai
Khani waqai bhut lazwaab h

Ikkathe updates padne ka mja hi kuch aur h
Ab to last update tha ye
Ab fir se waiting update ka randi rona

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Waiting for next update

 

[Aakash.]

No one knows the truth yet except Ruby so anyone can guess anything and it's reasonable but the truth does come out sometimes, every coin has two sides and people seen one side at the moment.

I was very sad to hear about Aamir, it should not have happened but it happened. I think Aamir was there to help Ruby. The speed of time is very fast, we could not save Aamir but maybe we could save Ruby and till now there is no news of Aamir's death so maybe he is still alive.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...​

 

[SultanTipu40]

Bdiya update bhai
Khani waqai bhut lazwaab h

Ikkathe updates padne ka mja hi kuch aur h
Ab to last update tha ye
Ab fir se waiting update ka randi rona

Akki Bhai

jald hi next update bhi dunga

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Akki Bhai

jald hi next update bhi dunga

Waiting

 

[SultanTipu40]

No one knows the truth yet except Ruby so anyone can guess anything and it's reasonable but the truth does come out sometimes, every coin has two sides and people seen one side at the moment.

I was very sad to hear about Aamir, it should not have happened but it happened. I think Aamir was there to help Ruby. The speed of time is very fast, we could not save Aamir but maybe we could save Ruby and till now there is no news of Aamir's death so maybe he is still alive.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...​

Aakash Bhai

sayad next update main pata chal jayega aamir hai kaha

 

[aalu]

update 18... review

sameer ko yeh bilkul napasand karti thee,, shayad hasna bolna bhar hi tha uske saath,,, agar wo shabra se kaam leta toh baat aage badh jaati lekin wo ekdum pechhe hi par gaya,, waheen irfaan chalbaaj nikla,,, jab usse maloom hua kee pyar kubool nahin hain toh dosti kar lee...

lekin ruby kee aadat har chhoti bari baat rahman se chhupane kee ho gayee hain,,, akhir dost kehti hain,,, kya dost sirf jaroorato ko puri karne ke liye hote hain,,, kya unse hum apni baate chhupate hain... akhir koi bhi rishta vishwas pe hi toh tika hain,,, chahe pati patni ho ya koi dost ho... vishwas khatm toh doori badhni shuru ho jaati hain... pehle usne dosti chhupayee baad mein pyar bhi...

aur phir sareaam uske dil pe tamacha maar ke chali gayee,,, uss party mein... jahan tak ruby ne bataya kee uski ammi rahman ke bina usse kahi jaane nahin deti thee,, toh phir yeh suman wala naya matter kaise aa gaya,,, aur jab wo suman ke saath jaa hi shakti thee toh phir yeh rahman wala natak karne kee kya jaroorat thee..

ruby agar dar gayee thee toh wo pehle hi cheekh shakti thee usne wait kyun kiya kisi ke gate peetne ka... aur jab usse party mein achha nahin lag raha tha na dance karna tha toh sidhe mana kar deti,,, koi bhi ek do baar mana karne pe hat jata hain,,, agar chep ho raha hain toh danger case hain... itna toh har ladki ko samajh hoti hain...

rahman ne pareshan kar rahe irfan se bachaya toh isse pyar nahin hua lekin irfan ne bacha liya toh isse pyar ho gaya.. chutiya duniya chutiye log...