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Adultery Me our meri biwi

Radhika ko dekh ke aap ko kya lagta he, kon he vo?

  • Naaikaa

    Votes: 26 29.2%
  • Khal-Naaikaa

    Votes: 45 50.6%
  • Ek majbur aaurat

    Votes: 18 20.2%

  • Total voters
    89

Lone man

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Bhai story mein biwi badla le rahi hai apne pati se. Aage chalkar pati ka bi badla dikhawo. Story bohut lazawab hogi.
Sirf pati ko cuckold hi dilhana hai to iss theme ke stories ka baap shikari golu ji hain.
Wahan pe bhi bohut comments aate hain ki kuch badla ki guzarish karte hain.
Baki aap ki marzi. Sorry for comparing you with shikari golu.
Please end your story with my request.
 

SamFisher

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Bhai story mein biwi badla le rahi hai apne pati se. Aage chalkar pati ka bi badla dikhawo. Story bohut lazawab hogi.
Sirf pati ko cuckold hi dilhana hai to iss theme ke stories ka baap shikari golu ji hain.
Wahan pe bhi bohut comments aate hain ki kuch badla ki guzarish karte hain.
Baki aap ki marzi. Sorry for comparing you with shikari golu.
Please end your story with my request.
Writer will end his story with ur request. I'm sorry who r u again? First mistake u made by comparing one writer with another. enjoy the story like all readers. If u don't like it u don't have to read it. U r criticizing because other writer is ur favourite?
 
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Lone man

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Don't get me wrong here . I never said writer is inferior to any one. I believe every one has different way of expressing emotions in their stories. I do like what I am reading so shared my views.
Still
 
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Lone man

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Junglee bhai. Please forgive me for my review. I understand there is no room for critics here.
If only moderators would add sub heading as cuckold then readers like me will stay away .
Goodluck with your story.
 

Junglee012

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Radhika apne aapan ko thik karti he our
Dusri Cigarette pine lagti he.
Cigarette khtm hone ke baad vo fresh hoti he our sahil ka intezaar karte karte so jati he....

Paath 5.1
(AB HUM CHLTE HE SAHIL KI MEETING KI TARAF)
Rdhika ka call cut karne ke baad sahil city ke sab se bade hotel star place me aata he, vaha book kiye gaye conference room ki booking Hotel ke reception me dikhakar room ki taraf badhta he.
Room ka door kholta he vaha pahle hi 4 log mojud he 4 ke 4 bade businessman lag rahe the.
Sahil andar jate hi. Bol padta he

Sahil:- good evening gentleman I'm sahil sharma owner fo khushi enterprises. Hello khan sir me aap se mil chuka hu.welcom sir
Khan jo ki 50 ya 52 age ka banda tha vo bola.
Khan:- yes mr.sahil hum aap se mil chuke he,ab me aap ko baki logo se milwata hu phir aap apna project deatel batai ye hum 4 ro ko laga isme humari company ka profit he to deal paki.
Me aasha karta hu aisa hi ho aap jese noujawan our hunarmand logo ke saath kaam karna hume pasand he.

Sahil:- (apni tarif sunkar) thank you khan sir.

Khan:- most welcome young boy.
Sahil ko khan ki bato se lagta he ki me ye deal creck kar dunga uska confidants badh jata he.khan sab ka intro kara deta he sab khan ke hum umar hu the.

Khan:- ye he mr.alok patel, palel Finance Group ke malik
Sahil alok se haath milata he,our welcome kehta he.

Khan:- ye he mr. shoheb ansari ye mere sab se karibi dost he. Ye star group me malik he,ye hotel bhi inka hi he. Aise bahut se hotel he inke desh me.
Sahil shoheb se haath milata he, unko bhi welcome kahta he.

Khan:- our enko to tum jante hi honge ye he mantri ji mr.kamlesh singh.
Ye lok party ke high command bhi he
Sahil unse bhi haath milata he our unko bhi welcome kahta he.

(Kamlesh singh ko me mantriji likhunga)
Kamlesh:- ab jaldi se presentation shuru karo muje our ek part meeting me bhi jana he

Sahil:- jarur mantri ji.
Phir sahil apne project presentation Shuru karta hai.
Pura presentation Hote Hote do ghante nikal Jaate Hain. Presentation pura hone par sahil sab ki ray magta he ke unko ye kesa laga

Mantri ji :- sahil me to nikal raha hu mere in dosto ka jo bhi fesla hoga vahi mera bhi fesla samjhna ok.muje kafi der ho gai he. Itna kahkar mantri ji apni jagah se uth khade hote he.

Sahil:- jarur mantri ji jesa aap kahe.
Mantri has ke sahil se haath milakar chala jata he.

Khan our baki dono aapas me kuch bate karne lagte he. Kuch der baad

Alok:- sahil bura mat maano but ye project pura karne me tumhari me nahi kar paunga, muje is project me dilchpi nahi na hi koi profit dikh raha.to sorry meri taraf se na hi samjho.
Sahil alok ko samjhane ki puri koshish karta he par alok nahi manta.
Sahil ashabhut nazro se mr.khan ko dekhta he khan use kuch ishara karta he our phir undone se baat karne lagta he.
Kuch der baad khan sahil ko ishara kar ke side me aane ko bolta he.

Khan:- dekho sahil alok ne jo bhi kaha uske liye me sorry kehta hu par uski baat me dam he, our hum 4 ro ke business ke bade project usike haath ke niche se jate he.to hum sab ne socha he ki hum is project me invest nahin kar rahe our ye humara final decision he.

Sahil:-(ghbrakar.....)khan sir ye aap kya kah rahe he aap to mere saath kai project kiye he aap ko kabhi bhi nuksaan uthana pada boliye?

Khan:- sahil bat to tumhari sahi he,
(Sahil ke kandhe par haath rakh kar)
Lekin me kuch nahi kar sakta akele,ye tum bhi janete ho muje maaf karna plz I'm sorry.

Sahil:- (lagbhag rote huve)aap samajh kyu nahi rahe sir is project me mene meri sari kamai laga di he yaha tak ke ghar bhi ab kya hoga sir,me kahi ka nahi rahunga.

Khan:- dekho sahil me ek koshish karta hu par mujhse jada umid mat rakhna.
Ab hume chalna chahiye,tum kal subha muje ek call karna kuch mujse hota he to me jarur karunga ok.

Sahil:- (pura tut chuka tha nirash hokar)plz sir kuch acha ho me yahi chahunga...
Khan baki sab ko ishara kar chale ko kehta he

Alok :- khan bhai jara ek min me ek jaruri call kar leta hu phir chalte he.
Ye kahkar room se bahar chala jata he

Room ke bahar....
Alok:- (mobile se ek call karta he) dost kaam ho gaya ab apna vaada yaad rakhna jiski photo dikhai tho vo muje chahiye.
Samne call pe our koi nahi rajesh hi tha

Rajesh:- alok mere dost mujpar bharosa rakho.ek baar miloge na tum usase uske gulam ban jaoge eka maza deti he vo.hahahaha...... Me to kab ka gulam ban gaya hu...

Alok:- acha he to hum bhi gulami karne ko tayaar he mere bhai kab milwa rahe ho phir...

Rajesh:- me usase baat kar ke batata.kaha miloge vahi apne golden fromhouse par kya? Hahahaha...

Alok:- saale sab pata he phir bhi puchega,our ha me akela rahunga tum mat aana baad me mil kar gulami karenge uski,hahahaha.....

Rajesh:- thik he mere bhai jesi teri marzi, par mulakat ka koi khaas tofah jarur dena use yaad se samjha.
Malkin bahut moody he. Hahahaha.....
Chal rakhta hu tune khush kar diya mere bhai.

Alok:- chal phir teri us Malkin ki gulami karne ke baad hi ab call karunga. Hahahaha.......
Alok phone cut kar room me aakar khan our shoheb ko chalnae ko kahta he 3no room se nikal jate he our rah jata he sahil apni dubati takdeer ko bachane soch me.
Vo puri tarah tut chuka tha abhi 10 baje the use ghar jane ka man nahi ho raha tha vo room se nikal kar bar ki taraf jane lagta he our bar counter par Beth ke apne tension bhulane ke liye pine lagta he.kafi der pine ke baad vo ghar ki taraf chal deta he ghar pahuch kar time dekhta he to 12.30 bje the vo chabhi se gate kholne ki bhi halat me nahi tha,vo bell bajata he.
Yaha radhika ki aakh lagi hi hoti he ke use doorbell ki aawaz se aakh khul jati he vo bedroom se nikal kar maindoor tak Jake aawaj lagati he

Radhika:- kon he?

Sahil:- (madhe ki halat me) me hu darwaja kholo..
Radhika sahil ki aawaj unkar zar se darwaja khol deti he sahil ko nashye ki halat me dekh kar man hi man muskura jati he.par khud ko sabhal kar bolti he.

Radhika:- ye kya ji aap our is halat me?

Sahil:- muje anadr le chalo sab bataunga.
Radhika sahil ko sahara de kar ghar ke andar le aati he sahil hall me sofe par hi let jata he. Vo kuch badbada raha tha nasheme.

Sahil:- hum barbad ho gaye radhika,hum barbad ho gaye.

Radhika:-(man me) hum nahi sahil tum barbad ho gaye ho par ye to shurwat he abhi tuze meri gulami bhi karni he samjha tabhi mere man ko shanti milegi.
Radhika:- aap abhi so jaiye ji hum kal baat karte he. Ye kahte huve sahil ke jute nikal kar use sofe par Lita deti he our khud bedroom me chali jati he.
Bedroom me aakar vo apna mobile dekhti he tabhi time 12.45 huva tha use whatsapp me rajesh ke 2 message dikhte he vo pahle bedroom ka dor band kar deti he our rajesh ke message khol ke padhte huve bedpar let jati he.

(Whatsapp message)
Rajesh:- radha rani tera kaam ho gaya he.
Ab agar jag rahi ho to message karna.
Radhika turant reply karti he.

Radhika:- raj ji radha rani nahi Malkin bolo samjhe..... Hehehehe
Turant rajesh ka reply aata he.

Rajesh :- maaf karna Malkin ji galti ho gai.par aaj se me aap ko Malkin hi kahunga, our aap muje gulam hi kahna thik he.malkin ji.hahahaha....

Radhika:- hhhmmmm.. to mere gulam ne apna kam bakhubi kiya he to ye lo inaam our radhika apni nighty our panty khol ke ek photo kahich ke rajesh ko sand karti he..(sand image)

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Rajesh:- aap ka ye gulam inaam pakar khush ho gaya.ab ek baat batani he aap ko me kal call karta hu.

Radhika:- thik he subha 11.30 ko kar lena ab me gulam ko hukkm deti hu ki so jaye.hehehehe..

Rajesh:- jo hukkm Malkin ji good night
(Whatsapp chat and)
Radhika phone side me rakh kar apne aap ko thik kar ke so jati he.

kyu kar rahi he radhika ye sb?
sahil ko barbad kar ke use kya milega?
kyu banana chahti he vo shali ko gulam?
our is liye vo khud ki izzat bhi nilam karne ko tayaar he? Aakhir kyu?
sab sawalo ke jawab dhire dhire mil jayenge.
aap ka dost junglee......
 

Junglee012

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Junglee bhai. Please forgive me for my review. I understand there is no room for critics here.
If only moderators would add sub heading as cuckold then readers like me will stay away .
Goodluck with your story.
Koi baat nahi bhai kelin sahil ka gunah kuch aisa he ki use ye bhugta hi padega.our rahi baat stori ki to aage padhiye phir aap khud kahoge ke sahil ke saath yahi hona chahiye.
 

SamFisher

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Junglee bhai. Please forgive me for my review. I understand there is no room for critics here.
If only moderators would add sub heading as cuckold then readers like me will stay away .
Goodluck with your story.
Wow dude u played victim card successfully. Shikari golu bhai is baap and then stop this story by my request. This is not a sign of a good critics.
Anyway no hard feelings. Bye.
 
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