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Fantasy Meera ki dastan (मीरा की दास्तान)

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Naina

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Dheere dheere vo kadam kacche raste ki taraf badhane lagi.... ....usike piche piche car usi raftar ko pakad kar aage badhne lagi.......roj ki tarah bijali ke khambe ke pass ruk kar meera ne us insaan ka gadi se utarne ka intzaar kiya.

Jaise hi vo utar gaya meera ke hoto pe muskan khil gai.....nidar hoke vo imarat ki taraf badhne lagi......do gunde meera ki khili hui khubsurati ko bhediye ki tarah ghur rahe the......nafrat se unhe dekh meera aage badh gai.....10 kadam aage jate hi usne ruk ke piche dekha.

Topi pehne shaksh ne meera ki aankhe shayad padh li ho......usne do gundo se kuch kaha jisase dono sheher ki or bhag gaye.

Meera ke hoto pe katil muskan fail gai....uski chal me ajeeb si lachak aa gai.

Jisase uske chutad or jyada thirakne lage......bijali ke agle khambe ki roshni me ruk ke meera ne bag niche rakha......or palat ke topiwale shaksh ki aankho me dekh apna pallu sine se hataya.

Dheere dheere karke meera ne apni saree utari vo sirf blows or petikote me aa gai.......saree bag me rakh ke meera ne apne baal khule chor diye..

Lehtare balo ke sath chudiyo ki khankhan gung uthi......mathe ka singur lal hoto pe shararati muskan liye.....meera ne use apne gore badan ka deedar karane lagi.

Uski gehri nabhi patli kamar pe halki si charbi meera ki kamukta me rang bharne lagi......blouse ki darar vo insaan ektak ghure jaa raha tha......agle hi pal meera ne apni choli ka ek button khol diya.

Us insaan ke jagah koi or hota to abtak tut padta, bhare badan se kamras tapakne tak meera ke yovan bhare jism ko nichod leta.....par vo insaan vahi khada mano meera ke yovan ko apni aankho me utar raha ho.

Meera ke hoto ki muskan or jyada khil gai....apni bag utha kar usne makan ki or kadam badhaye.....chand faslo baad hi meera ne apna petikote dheere dheere uthana shuru kiya.......uski gori tango ko dekh us insaan ki halat jarur kharab hui hogi......aage badhte har kadam ke sath meera ka petikote inch inch upar uthane laga.......bhari bedag jangho tak petikote pakad kar meera ke kadam dheere dheere badhne lage.

Jitna jay betab tha apni patni ko pratap ji ke niche sulane ke liye......usase dugni besabri meera ko is shaksh ki aankho me dekh ke hui......adhed pratap ji se pehle meera ke dil me is insaan ki chahat thi.

Dur se hi use makan dikhai de raha tha.....meera ke kadam fir ruk gaye.

Us insaan ki nazar meera ki gori jangho pe hi thi.....agle hi pal use jangho se lal kacchi utarti dikhne lagi.

Meera ne vo kacchi ek patthar pe rakh ke makan ki or badhte huye piche dekhne lagi......jab vo insaan patthar tak aaya to usne zhuk ke kacchi uthai.

Meera ke kadam vahi theher gaye......chamakti aankho se meera dekhne lagi....tab us insaan ne kacchi ko sungh ke naak pe ragadne laga......machalti meera ke yoni ke dwar se kai bunde tapak gaye.

Kafi der tak vo insaan kacchi ki khusbu apne jism me utarne laga......uski juban kacchi ko chatate hi meera ke dil ki dhadakane tez ho gai..... ......katil muskan hoto pe faila ke meera palat gai......or darvaja khol ke andar dakhil hui.

darvaja khula hi chora tha......meera ki aankho ke samne baar var uska chehra aa jata...... ..gora haseen aankho me chamak..... ....shayad shadi bhi nahi hui hogi 25/26 saal ka tha......uske liye meera ki yoni beh rahi thi.

Usi me khoi khoi meera me khana bana liya.


12 baje darvaje pe dastakh hote hi meera ne darvaja khola....

Jay - kaisa raha tera din ! ....meera ke hoto pe kamuk hasi faili.

Meera - accha tha ! ......khana khane ke baad meera bartan dho hi rahi thi ki piche se use jay ne bahon me bhar ke uski gardan ko chumne laga.

Meera ka dil machal utha.....usne ghum ke jay ke hoto ko chum kar use niche bithaya.....jabse us ladke ne kacchi ko chat liya tabse meera ki yoni uske hoto se chune ke liye taras rahi thi...... ......petikote utha ke pati ka sar jangho pe dabate hi meera kaanp uthi.

Meera - jayyy ssss...... !


Jay - bahot kamuk lag rahi ho kya hua ! .....jay ki juban gile hoto pe ghumate hi meera machal uthi.
Actually yeh meera pehle se ek tharki thi bas mann ki ichhaye dabaye baithi thi ab jab pati ne haan keh diya toh iske par nikal aaye hai.... kamini us topiwale ko bhi pasand karne lagi par kis way mein yeh toh wohi jaane :D
waise sabse bada hawasi toh woh office wala budhau lage hai... ek pao kele ke chilke mein aur ek pao kabar pe phir bhi aisi harkate.. :roflol:
Khair... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 

Neelkr22

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writer sahab ke liye - - aap ki likhne ki shaili bahot hi uchha mapdand ki hai.... flow toh badhiya hai bas kuch ek jagah pe atki hai lekin koi na aage yeh thik ho jaani hai..ati nahi hai kisi pehlu mein.. har ek mod ek sathik suniyojit roop se sthapit kar kahani ko aage badhi hai . dilchasp banaye rakhne ke liye aapne bahot mehnat ki hai..taaki readers judi rahe is kahani se . aur is mehnat ko ek salam.... narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain..... baaki aise hi likhte rahiye aur readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye :bow:
waise I'm sorry.... yeh pehle se sorry isliye kyunki apni revo dene Ki style kuch alag hai... so plz bura na maniyega :D
thank you
 

Sexy launda

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Difference to he bhai aage pata chalega.
Bhai meera agr jay ke anumati se bhi dusro se sex krke paise legi tb bhi wo ek tarah se whore hi rahegi.
Tb meera me aur ek whore me koi difference nhi rhega.
Aur jha tk mera anuman hai meera jay ke anumati se raj se sex kregi aur paise legi
 

Neelkr22

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Bhai meera agr jay ke anumati se bhi dusro se sex krke paise legi tb bhi wo ek tarah se whore hi rahegi.
Tb meera me aur ek whore me koi difference nhi rhega.
Aur jha tk mera anuman hai meera jay ke anumati se raj se sex kregi aur paise legi

bhai difference bahot hi jyada he..

aapko lagta he jay anumati dega, job chutne ki vajah se majboori thi uski or patni ko dusare ke niche sone se jitna khush hua tha usase kai jyada takleef hone lagi he jay ko,

Paiso ke liye so bhi sakti he par kya usase dono ka rishta pehle jaise ho jayega,

Dil to kar raha he abhi sare updates post kar du.
 
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Sexy launda

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bhai difference bahot hi jyada he..

aapko lagta he jay anumati dega, job chutne ki vajah se majboori thi uski or patni ko dusare ke niche sone se jitna khush hua tha usase kai jyada takleef hone lagi he jay ko,

Paiso ke liye so bhi sakti he par kya usase dono ka rishta pehle jaise ho jayega,

Dil to kar raha he abhi sare updates post kar du.
Nhi bhai update kl apne time se hi dijiyega,
Waise agle update ka hme bhi besabri se intzaar hai.
 

xxxlove

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Nahi Neelkr22 Ji aap update apne hisab se hi do koi jaldi nahi hai aap apna time lo.
 

Neelkr22

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Nhi bhai update kl apne time se hi dijiyega,
Waise agle update ka hme bhi besabri se intzaar hai.

Nahi Neelkr22 Ji aap update apne hisab se hi do koi jaldi nahi hai aap apna time lo.
dosto aapne to dil jeet liya,

Sabra ka fal meetha hi milega sabko.

Muze lag raha he he agla part likhna shuru kar du abhi se.
meera part 2 :D :D
Just kidding.
 

kamdev99008

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bhai difference bahot hi jyada he..

aapko lagta he jay anumati dega, job chutne ki vajah se majboori thi uski or patni ko dusare ke niche sone se jitna khush hua tha usase kai jyada takleef hone lagi he jay ko,

Paiso ke liye so bhi sakti he par kya usase dono ka rishta pehle jaise ho jayega,

Dil to kar raha he abhi sare updates post kar du.
Bhai ye bahas me mat pada karo.... Readera predict karte hain... Ye hamara haq hai...
Apko kahani me jo likhna hai... Likho... Ye apka hak hai

Bahas ki bajaye... Updates par dhyan do... Story par do

Aur kisi bhi prediction, suggestion ko manne ki apki koi majburi nahi... Na uski safai dene ki

Agle update ka intzar hai
 

Neelkr22

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Bhai ye bahas me mat pada karo.... Readera predict karte hain... Ye hamara haq hai...
Apko kahani me jo likhna hai... Likho... Ye apka hak hai

Bahas ki bajaye... Updates par dhyan do... Story par do

Aur kisi bhi prediction, suggestion ko manne ki apki koi majburi nahi... Na uski safai dene ki

Agle update ka intzar hai
bhai kahani to vahi rahegi rahi updates ki baat aaj mil jayenge
 
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