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Fantasy Meera ki dastan (मीरा की दास्तान)

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Neelkr22

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Meera - pratap ji ye chahiye muze !

Dukandar - or kuch dikhau aapki biwi ke liye ! .......pratap ji ne meera ki or dekha to uske hoto pe katil muskan thi.

Pratap ji - han dikhaiye ! ......dukandar ne or kapde nikale.

Usme se meera ne kale rang ka ghagra choli pasand ki.

Meera - kacchi bhi dikhaiye ! ......dukandar ne kai rang ki kacchiya dikhai.

Meera ne neeli kacchi utha ke pratap ji ko dikhai.

Meera - kaisi he ! .....pratap ji ki halat kharab ho gai.... .....unhe lal kacchi ki yaad aai jab meera ne unhe bathroom me jate waqt di thi..... .....usi ki vajah se aag thandi hui thi unki..... ....meera ki nazar jay pe gai to uski aankhe jal rahi thi.

Pratap ji - tuze jo pasand aaye kharid le ! .....meera ne teen kacchiya pasand ki.

Dukandar ne ek thaili me kapde bhar ke hisab lagaya.... .....pratap ji ne keemat deke thaili jay ke haat me dedi.... .....or meera ka haat pakad kar bahar gaye.

Jay ne gadi shuru karte hi meera andar baith gai uske chehre pe khushi saf zhalak rahi thi.

Car ke dusari taraf ka darvaja Jaise hi pratap ji ne kola..... .......meera ne unka haat khinch kar andar bithaya......

Meera - aapne mera dil khush kar diya aaj ! .......fauran pratap ji ke kamar ke dono taraf ghutane rakh ke meera ne apne lal hoto ko unke sukhe hoto se milaye.

Kamsin badan ki garmi se pratap ji pagal ho gaye..... ....salvaar ke upar se chutado ko hatheli me daboch kar pratap ji nichle lal hont ko nichod kar uska shehed pine lage.....

Gusse se bhara jay jalta bhunta gadi tez raftar se daudane ki koshish karne laga...... ......un dono ko rokne ka ek tarika tha jald se jald daftar tak pohoncha jaye......

Sheeshe me apni patni ka chehra to dekh nahi paya..... ......par uske khule baal salvar ke upar se dono chutado pe kase huye pratap ji ke haat dikh rahe the.....

Meera - jay kitni tez gadi chalata he side me rok de ! .....apni patni ke lafz sun jay ki run kaanp uthi.... .....ek taraf vo jaldi daftar pohoch kar dono ko rokne ki koshish kar raha tha.......or ek taraf uski patni jisne khud car rokne ko kaha........ ...majbooran usne sadak ke kinare rok di.....

Pratap ji ke Sar ke safed balo me ungliya daal kar meera ki pakad majboot hui...... ......fir se tut padi betarasha unke hoto ko chumne..... .....unke haat naram chutado pe sakhti badha ke berehmi se badate gaye.


Meera ke kamsin jism ki aag bhadak uthi...... .......machli ki tarah kasmasati hui meera ne salvar ke upar se hi yoni ko pant ke ubhar par ragadna shuru kiya.....

jay ki nazare nafrat se pratap ji ke hato ko ghur rahi thi..... ......kaisa tharki insaan he komal bacchi ko kitni berehmi se ragad raha he.....

Agle hi pal meera ne safed kamij utar feki...... ......ek or keher pratap ji pe baras pada...... ......chand palo me unke muh me gehri chunchi sama gai.......
 
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Neelkr22

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Meera - uimma aa.. aahh... nichod..... lijiye.... pura dudh... essss... ahh... , aapke... tofe.. ne. khush... uhhfff.... kar.. diya... ssssss.... ! .......tadapati machli ki vasna bhadak uthi..... ......meera tezi se kamar hila kar yoni ko pant ke ubhar pe ragade ja rahi thi....... .......sheeshe me nangi hilati kamar dekh jay ka gussa or bhadak utha....

Meera - uima... pratap... je... kato.... mat... vo. nishan... dekh... lenge... ahh aise... dheere... chusiye naa..... hayee... uhhfff... maza.. aa.. raha.. he... ! .....meera ki baton ne jay ke dil me lagi aag me or tel daal diya......

Pratap ji - tune muze deewana bana diya he meera, subah se tera besabri se intzaar kar raha tha !

Meera khilkhilate huye kamar hila kar boli.

Meera - aapne kal itna thaka diya muze, aankh kaise khulti !

Pratap ji - isliye tuze tofa diya ! .....meera ne khilkhilate huye pratap ji ka sar dusari chunchi pe dabaya..... ......jisko nichod kar chusne me pratap ji mashgool ho gaye.....

Meera - ahh... khaa.. jao... na... pure.... pratap ji.. aahhh... aissse hi uhhfff... !

Aadhe ghante se gadi roke jay unhe dekh gusse ki aag me jal raha tha...... ......kai der tak dudh chusva kar meera palat ke pant ke ubhar pe baith gai.

Pratap ji ka haat chati ke do urojo pe kasne laga.... .....jay abtak sau galiya bak chuka tha unhe... ......kitna tharki buddha he kamina.....

Meera ke hoto ki lali uske gaal pe faili thi...

Meera - uhfff pratap jii dheere dabaiye pehle hi chus chus ke lal kar diye he mere dhudh !

Pratap ji pagalo ki tarah meera ki gardan ko chumte huye uske dudh nochodne lage..... ......shishe se dekh rahe jay ki aankho me dekh meera ne aankh mar di...... .....kal ki tarah firse jay ki ruh kaanp uthi.... ......pratap ji ka haat pakad kar meera ne jangho ke bich rakh diya.

Meera - aahhh kabse dudh ragad rahe ho aag to yaha lagi he ! .....apni patni ki besharmi se jay ko bahot bura laga..... .....pratap ji salvar ke upar se tez ungliya ghuma kar yoni ke fako ko ragadne lage..... ...jay ko chidhate huye meera tezi se chillai.....

Meera - uima....aaa pratap... ji... aaa....hhhh or tez... aapki..... ungliyo... me.... jadoo.... he.... ! .......kamuk bato ka asar yoni pe ragad ko tez karne me kamyaab hua.

Gora kamsin jism machli ki tarah tadap kar jism ki aag or bhadakane laga...... .......agle chand palo me hi meera ki janghe sikud gai..... .....yoni ke dwar se kamrus ki barsat kachhi me fail gai.....

Pasine se bhigi meera ke chehre pe sukun zhalakne laga..... .....tez sanse bhar kar meera ki chati upar niche ho rahi thii.
 
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Neelkr22

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Pasine se bhigi meera ke chehre pe sukun zhalakne laga..... .....tez sanse bhar kar meera ki chati upar niche ho rahi thii.

Kuch der baad jab use rahat mili to god se utar kar meera ne kamij pehen li.

Meera - ab jake kaleje ko thandak mili pratap ji ! ......pratap ji ki pyaas to adhuri hi thi.

Pratap ji - teri buzh gai par meri aag abhi jal rahi he ! .....meera ne khilkhilate huye pratap ji ke pant ke ubhar ko dekha.

Meera - kal lal kacchi pe dekhi aapki aag, aaj vaise hi buzha lijiye ! ......jispe pratap ji hasane lage.

Ishara milte hi jay gadi daudane laga.....

Pratap ji or meera andar chale gaye..... ......jay thaili leke apni khursi par baith gaya..... .....meera ne fauran thaili se ek kacchi uthai or pratap ji ke kamre me chali gai.

Jay ki nazare fauran kanch ki khidaki se andar gai..... ......table ke samne khadi uski patni ne pratap ji ke samne salvaar ka nada khol diya...... ......kacchi badal ke vapas salvaar pehen liya...... .....pratap ji ne bahot koshish ki par kamij ki vajah se unhe yoni ka deedar nahi hua...... ......purani kacchi table pe rakh meera vapas aake apni khursi pe baith gai...... ......bholi bhali meera apne kadam itne aage badhayegi jay ne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha...... ......vo kabhi nahi badhati agar jay ne uske dil me chingari na bhadkai hoti......

Meera 10
 

kamdev99008

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bahut jabardast..................bina chudai ke hi thermometer toot gaye............
seduction ke sath story bhi balance rakhna.......jaise abtak kiya

waiting for next.............eagerly
 

Neelkr22

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bahut jabardast..................bina chudai ke hi thermometer toot gaye............
seduction ke sath story bhi balance rakhna.......jaise abtak kiya

waiting for next.............eagerly
Thanks bhai,
Aapki story me alag hi maza aata he alfazo me aisa jadoo he kya kahe,
bayan kiye huye halat aankho ke samne lane ke liye majboor kar deti he aapki likhavat.
 

kamdev99008

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Thanks bhai,
Aapki story me alag hi maza aata he alfazo me aisa jadoo he kya kahe,
bayan kiye huye halat aankho ke samne lane ke liye majboor kar deti he aapki likhavat.
Apne meri kahani padhi aur itni pasand bhi ki..... Aabhari hoon..... Bas yahi kahunga.... Ye meine nahin waqt aur halaat ne likhi hai... Mein to sirf shabdon mein pirokar... Apko arpit kar raha hu

Ye asli kahani ko pahchan mitane ke liye thoda bahut badalkar... Apke samne laya hu... Meri atmkatha... Mere pariwar ki daastaan.......
Kaise hawas, gussa, moh aur lalach.... Ek bhare pure pariwar ko.... Anam, benam, gumnam hi nahi badnam bhi bana deta hai.... Bas kuchh chand log bache hain pichhli peedhi (generation) ke... New generation me to sirf ummeedein hi hain....

Paisa, jamin, jaydad barbaad hui.... Fir se hasil kar li... Bas ab kisi ke pas apne nahin rahe.... Musafir ki tarah bhatakte huye ek dusre ka rasta kat dete hain kabhi-kabhi
 

Neelkr22

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Apne meri kahani padhi aur itni pasand bhi ki..... Aabhari hoon..... Bas yahi kahunga.... Ye meine nahin waqt aur halaat ne likhi hai... Mein to sirf shabdon mein pirokar... Apko arpit kar raha hu

Ye asli kahani ko pahchan mitane ke liye thoda bahut badalkar... Apke samne laya hu... Meri atmkatha... Mere pariwar ki daastaan.......
Kaise hawas, gussa, moh aur lalach.... Ek bhare pure pariwar ko.... Anam, benam, gumnam hi nahi badnam bhi bana deta hai.... Bas kuchh chand log bache hain pichhli peedhi (generation) ke... New generation me to sirf ummeedein hi hain....

Paisa, jamin, jaydad barbaad hui.... Fir se hasil kar li... Bas ab kisi ke pas apne nahin rahe.... Musafir ki tarah bhatakte huye ek dusre ka rasta kat dete hain kabhi-kabhi
aapne itna kehkar muze dobara padhne pe majboor kar diya bhai.
Best story he aapki.
 
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