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Fantasy Meera ki dastan (मीरा की दास्तान)
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Meera 11
Roj ki tarah aaj bhi dak ke dibbe ke pass meera ke badan se salvar niche gir gaya....... .......jay ko khushi thi ki raaj sheher se bahar gaya he...... ......meera ke kadam kacche raste pe mud gaye...... .......dheere dheere petikote uth kar jangho tak lake vo makan ki or badhne lagi...... .......darvaje tak pohonch kar usne petikote niche chor ke andar dakhil hui...... ......jab jay makan me aaya tab tak vo khana banane me lag gai thi.
Khana khakar dono so gaye.
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Daftar jate waq jay ko ajeeb laga aaj subah kyu meera dak ke dibbe ke pass ruki..... ......ek minute ke andar hi vo aage badh gai......
......kaam karte waqt raaj ne gaur kiya uski patni ki nazare bar bar darvaje ki or jati pratap ji ko dhundne..... .......dopeher dhal gai...... .......achanak meera ke aankho ki chamak badh gai...... ........6 baje pratap ji ne aate hi baki sabko bhej diya...... .......meera fauran unke kamre me chali gai...... .......kancch ki khidaki se usne andar dekha to pratap ji ke haat me chamkila baksa tha......
Use khulte hi meera khushi ke mare uchalne lagi...... .......agle hi pal meera zhapat kar tut padi apne lal hont pratap ji ke sukhe hoto pe rakh betarasha pagalo ki tarah chumne lagi....... .......jay samaz nahi paya aakhir us bakse me kya dekha jo meera itni pagal ho gai......
.....usne khud ptarap ji ka haat apne chutado pe rakha...... ......narmai ka ehsaas hote hi unki khurduri ungliya charo or kaske berehmi se dabane lagi.....
Meera ne Unke gale me bahen daal lal hoto ki barish shuru ki...... .......bekabu hoke pratap ji ne dheere dheere ghagra kamar ke upar tak uthaya....... .......lal kacchi ke sath hi unki ungliya fir ek baar chutado ke gherav pe kasne lagi....... .......meera machli ki tarah tadap kar unke kaan ko muh me bhar chuse ja rahi thi......
Jay gusse se jal bhun bakse me kya hoga soch soch ke pareshan ho gaya..... ......aisi kya cheej he jo meera ne sari had paar ki......
Kamre ka Darvaja khula hone se chudiyo ki khankhan ke sath ek aavaj jay ko sunai di.
Pratap ji - pehna du tuze behad haseen lagegi ! .....meera ne khilkhilate huye jay ki aankho me dekha.
Meera - aap mere pati nahi ho kaise pehnaoge ! .......lal hont fir se kaan ko chumne lage.
Pratap ji - me abhi dekhna chahta hu !
Meera - jay pehna dega pati nahi to koi rishtedar hi pehna sakta he na ! .......unki giraft se aazad hote hi meera darvaje tak aake boli.
Meera - jay andar aao 2 minute ! ......jay darvaje se andar gaya......sabse pehle uski nazar khule bakse me gai...... ......ek cham chamata sone ka mangalsutra tha..... .....use dekh jay ko kuch yaad aaya fauran uski aankhe chamak uthi....... ......ye vahi mangalsutra tha jise kharidne ki jid meera kar rahi thi......
Meera - jay mera mangalsutra utar ke ye naya pehna de, pati ke bagair koi rishtedar hi mangalsutra ko pehna sakta he na ! ......meera ki chalaki jay samaz gaya..... .....kum se kum asali pati se pehnane ka ehsaan to kiya...... .....jay majboor hoke purane ko utar kar naya pehenane laga...... .......meera khushi ke mare uchal rahi thi..... .......usne fauran pucha....
Meera - accha he na jay pasand aaya tuze, muze to bahot pasand aaya ! .......jay ne hami bhar di... ......usase ruka nahi gaya or nikal gaya kamre ke bahar.
Vapas apni jagah baith dekhne laga kaanch ki khidaki se.
Andar meera ne palat kar pratap ji ko dikhaya.....
Pratap ji - wah mast lag rahi he tuze jo chahiye tha de diya, ab tum apna vada pura karo ! ......itne din se pratap ji ko tadpa rahi meera ne kyu abtak unke liye apni yoni ke dwar nahi khole iska javab jay ko mil gaya.... .....pratap ji ne bahot asani se jay ko kaam pe rakh liya...... ......usika fayda meera ne utha liya.
Meera - jaroor pratap ji aapne meri barso ki tamanna puri ki he ! ........meera ki aavaj sun jay ne fir khidaki se andar zhank ke dekha..... .......pratap ji ke samne khadi meera choli ki dor khol chuki thi jo badan se aazad hoke niche gir gai...... ......bhuke bhediye
Roj ki tarah aaj bhi dak ke dibbe ke pass meera ke badan se salvar niche gir gaya....... .......jay ko khushi thi ki raaj sheher se bahar gaya he...... ......meera ke kadam kacche raste pe mud gaye...... .......dheere dheere petikote uth kar jangho tak lake vo makan ki or badhne lagi...... .......darvaje tak pohonch kar usne petikote niche chor ke andar dakhil hui...... ......jab jay makan me aaya tab tak vo khana banane me lag gai thi.
Khana khakar dono so gaye.
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Daftar jate waq jay ko ajeeb laga aaj subah kyu meera dak ke dibbe ke pass ruki..... ......ek minute ke andar hi vo aage badh gai......
......kaam karte waqt raaj ne gaur kiya uski patni ki nazare bar bar darvaje ki or jati pratap ji ko dhundne..... .......dopeher dhal gai...... .......achanak meera ke aankho ki chamak badh gai...... ........6 baje pratap ji ne aate hi baki sabko bhej diya...... .......meera fauran unke kamre me chali gai...... .......kancch ki khidaki se usne andar dekha to pratap ji ke haat me chamkila baksa tha......
Use khulte hi meera khushi ke mare uchalne lagi...... .......agle hi pal meera zhapat kar tut padi apne lal hont pratap ji ke sukhe hoto pe rakh betarasha pagalo ki tarah chumne lagi....... .......jay samaz nahi paya aakhir us bakse me kya dekha jo meera itni pagal ho gai......
.....usne khud ptarap ji ka haat apne chutado pe rakha...... ......narmai ka ehsaas hote hi unki khurduri ungliya charo or kaske berehmi se dabane lagi.....
Meera ne Unke gale me bahen daal lal hoto ki barish shuru ki...... .......bekabu hoke pratap ji ne dheere dheere ghagra kamar ke upar tak uthaya....... .......lal kacchi ke sath hi unki ungliya fir ek baar chutado ke gherav pe kasne lagi....... .......meera machli ki tarah tadap kar unke kaan ko muh me bhar chuse ja rahi thi......
Jay gusse se jal bhun bakse me kya hoga soch soch ke pareshan ho gaya..... ......aisi kya cheej he jo meera ne sari had paar ki......
Kamre ka Darvaja khula hone se chudiyo ki khankhan ke sath ek aavaj jay ko sunai di.
Pratap ji - pehna du tuze behad haseen lagegi ! .....meera ne khilkhilate huye jay ki aankho me dekha.
Meera - aap mere pati nahi ho kaise pehnaoge ! .......lal hont fir se kaan ko chumne lage.
Pratap ji - me abhi dekhna chahta hu !
Meera - jay pehna dega pati nahi to koi rishtedar hi pehna sakta he na ! .......unki giraft se aazad hote hi meera darvaje tak aake boli.
Meera - jay andar aao 2 minute ! ......jay darvaje se andar gaya......sabse pehle uski nazar khule bakse me gai...... ......ek cham chamata sone ka mangalsutra tha..... .....use dekh jay ko kuch yaad aaya fauran uski aankhe chamak uthi....... ......ye vahi mangalsutra tha jise kharidne ki jid meera kar rahi thi......
Meera - jay mera mangalsutra utar ke ye naya pehna de, pati ke bagair koi rishtedar hi mangalsutra ko pehna sakta he na ! ......meera ki chalaki jay samaz gaya..... .....kum se kum asali pati se pehnane ka ehsaan to kiya...... .....jay majboor hoke purane ko utar kar naya pehenane laga...... .......meera khushi ke mare uchal rahi thi..... .......usne fauran pucha....
Meera - accha he na jay pasand aaya tuze, muze to bahot pasand aaya ! .......jay ne hami bhar di... ......usase ruka nahi gaya or nikal gaya kamre ke bahar.
Vapas apni jagah baith dekhne laga kaanch ki khidaki se.
Andar meera ne palat kar pratap ji ko dikhaya.....
Pratap ji - wah mast lag rahi he tuze jo chahiye tha de diya, ab tum apna vada pura karo ! ......itne din se pratap ji ko tadpa rahi meera ne kyu abtak unke liye apni yoni ke dwar nahi khole iska javab jay ko mil gaya.... .....pratap ji ne bahot asani se jay ko kaam pe rakh liya...... ......usika fayda meera ne utha liya.
Meera - jaroor pratap ji aapne meri barso ki tamanna puri ki he ! ........meera ki aavaj sun jay ne fir khidaki se andar zhank ke dekha..... .......pratap ji ke samne khadi meera choli ki dor khol chuki thi jo badan se aazad hoke niche gir gai...... ......bhuke bhediye
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......bhuke bhediye ki tarah pratap ji ki nazare meera ke husn ko ghurne lagi.....
Meera ne kaanch se jay ki or dekh aankh maar di...... .......har bar jab bhi meera use aankh marti kuch na kuch jaroor karti...... ......ab jay ka dar saf zhalakne laga.... ......lehenge ka nada khulte hi aazad hokar vo pairo me gir gaya..... .....uske gore husn pe sirf lal kacchi bachi thi.....
pasine se bheege pratap ji ka haat pant ke upar se land sehlane laga...... ......unki bebasi ko jan ke meera ne apni kacchi utar feki...... .......bala ki khubsurat swarg ki apsara jaisi bedag husn ka deedar karke jangho ke bich pratap ji ki nazare tham gai..... ......halke balo me yoni ke hoto pe gila rus faila tha.....
Pratap ji ka sabra tut gaya apni pant nichi kar kala land bahar nikal ke masalne lage...... ......meera ki nazare kale land pe tham gai...... .......land ke har taraf kale ghane baal the meera ka gala sukh gaya par yoni se do bund beh gaye.....
Meera khud ko rok nahi pai..... .....lipat gai pratap ji se fir ek bar unke hoto pe tut padi..... ......usne komal gora haat kale land ke charo or se pakad kar apni giraft me le liya..... .
...gusse ki aag me jalte jay samaz gaya aaj uski biwi pratap ji ke niche sone hi wali he.... ....ab vo meera ko rok nahi sakta..... .....aaj ki tareekh jay jindagi bhar kabhi bhool nahi payega......
Meera tezi se land hilane lagi......
Pratap ji - meera apne hoto se land chum kar chus lo ek baar bahot dil kar raha he ! ......meera ki aankhe badi ho gai..... .....jay ki or dekha to unse apni gardan naa me hilai....
....kamuk hasi hoto pe faila ke meera niche baith gai...... ......uski aankhe gaur se kale land ko dekhe ja rahi thi.... .....ajeeb si mehek ne uska rom rom kaanp utha....
Pratap ji ko yakeen nahi hua sach me meera itni aasani se maan jayegi.....
Aage badh ke meera ne lal hoto se tope ko chum liya..... .....pratap ji ka tan badan kaanp utha..... ......kamsin 23 saal ki apsara ko aaj 50 sal ke buddhe ka land bha gaya....
Juban ki gili nok land ke ched ko chute hi pratap ji ka haat meera ke sar pe dab gaya...... ......tadap kar unka land ufan marne laga...... .......jay ko apni aankho pe bharosa nahi ho raha tha....
Meera ne juban sw chakh ke dekha to namkin zhaika muh me faila...... ......dheere dheere juban tope se land ke aakhri chor ghane balo se takrake vapas tope tak aagai.....
Uski harkate pratap ji ke sabra ka imtihan le rahi thi...... .......jay ki aankho me dekh meera ne fir aankh mari...... .......mathe se pasina chalak kar jay ke galo se beh gaya.....
Meera pura muh khol kar dheere dheere kale land ko nigalte huye muh me lene lagi...... ......garam thok ke sath land pe charo or lal hoto ki giraft pratap ji ko pagal karne lagi.....
.......dono haato me meera ka sar pakad kar pratap ji dheere dheere kamar hilane lage..... .......thook me namkin zhaika fail ke pure muh me aa gaya..... .......besabri se meera ki juban land ke charo or ghumne lagi...... .......kamar hilane ke sath uske muh me land andar bahar hone laga..... ......meera pagal ho gai tezi se uski juban land pe ghum kar hoto ki pakad charo or se majboot hone lagi..... .......meera apne haat ki do ungliya yoni pe rakh masalte huye land ko chusne lagi........ ......har dhakke ke sath muh me jama thook hoto se nikal kar ubhari chati pe girne laga.
Raftar tez hote hi meera machal uthi..... .......namkin thook har dhakke ke sath halak se niche utarta to kabhi hoto se bahar girta..... ......pratap ji satve aasman me the khud ko or jyada rokna muskil tha..... ......fauran land bahar nikal kar tezi se hilate huye unke jism ki aag jwalamukhi banke surakh se baras kar meera ki chati pe fail gai.....
Meera ne kaanch se jay ki or dekh aankh maar di...... .......har bar jab bhi meera use aankh marti kuch na kuch jaroor karti...... ......ab jay ka dar saf zhalakne laga.... ......lehenge ka nada khulte hi aazad hokar vo pairo me gir gaya..... .....uske gore husn pe sirf lal kacchi bachi thi.....
pasine se bheege pratap ji ka haat pant ke upar se land sehlane laga...... ......unki bebasi ko jan ke meera ne apni kacchi utar feki...... .......bala ki khubsurat swarg ki apsara jaisi bedag husn ka deedar karke jangho ke bich pratap ji ki nazare tham gai..... ......halke balo me yoni ke hoto pe gila rus faila tha.....
Pratap ji ka sabra tut gaya apni pant nichi kar kala land bahar nikal ke masalne lage...... ......meera ki nazare kale land pe tham gai...... .......land ke har taraf kale ghane baal the meera ka gala sukh gaya par yoni se do bund beh gaye.....
Meera khud ko rok nahi pai..... .....lipat gai pratap ji se fir ek bar unke hoto pe tut padi..... ......usne komal gora haat kale land ke charo or se pakad kar apni giraft me le liya..... .
...gusse ki aag me jalte jay samaz gaya aaj uski biwi pratap ji ke niche sone hi wali he.... ....ab vo meera ko rok nahi sakta..... .....aaj ki tareekh jay jindagi bhar kabhi bhool nahi payega......
Meera tezi se land hilane lagi......
Pratap ji - meera apne hoto se land chum kar chus lo ek baar bahot dil kar raha he ! ......meera ki aankhe badi ho gai..... .....jay ki or dekha to unse apni gardan naa me hilai....
....kamuk hasi hoto pe faila ke meera niche baith gai...... ......uski aankhe gaur se kale land ko dekhe ja rahi thi.... .....ajeeb si mehek ne uska rom rom kaanp utha....
Pratap ji ko yakeen nahi hua sach me meera itni aasani se maan jayegi.....
Aage badh ke meera ne lal hoto se tope ko chum liya..... .....pratap ji ka tan badan kaanp utha..... ......kamsin 23 saal ki apsara ko aaj 50 sal ke buddhe ka land bha gaya....
Juban ki gili nok land ke ched ko chute hi pratap ji ka haat meera ke sar pe dab gaya...... ......tadap kar unka land ufan marne laga...... .......jay ko apni aankho pe bharosa nahi ho raha tha....
Meera ne juban sw chakh ke dekha to namkin zhaika muh me faila...... ......dheere dheere juban tope se land ke aakhri chor ghane balo se takrake vapas tope tak aagai.....
Uski harkate pratap ji ke sabra ka imtihan le rahi thi...... .......jay ki aankho me dekh meera ne fir aankh mari...... .......mathe se pasina chalak kar jay ke galo se beh gaya.....
Meera pura muh khol kar dheere dheere kale land ko nigalte huye muh me lene lagi...... ......garam thok ke sath land pe charo or lal hoto ki giraft pratap ji ko pagal karne lagi.....
.......dono haato me meera ka sar pakad kar pratap ji dheere dheere kamar hilane lage..... .......thook me namkin zhaika fail ke pure muh me aa gaya..... .......besabri se meera ki juban land ke charo or ghumne lagi...... .......kamar hilane ke sath uske muh me land andar bahar hone laga..... ......meera pagal ho gai tezi se uski juban land pe ghum kar hoto ki pakad charo or se majboot hone lagi..... .......meera apne haat ki do ungliya yoni pe rakh masalte huye land ko chusne lagi........ ......har dhakke ke sath muh me jama thook hoto se nikal kar ubhari chati pe girne laga.
Raftar tez hote hi meera machal uthi..... .......namkin thook har dhakke ke sath halak se niche utarta to kabhi hoto se bahar girta..... ......pratap ji satve aasman me the khud ko or jyada rokna muskil tha..... ......fauran land bahar nikal kar tezi se hilate huye unke jism ki aag jwalamukhi banke surakh se baras kar meera ki chati pe fail gai.....
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Itna sara safed rus dekh meera chaunk gai...... ......rus ki mehek jism me utarte hi meera ki dono ungliya yoni ke hoto ko berehmi se ragadane lagi.
Pratap ji - meera tere jaisi kamuk haseena koi nahi ho sakti ! ......jay lachar gusse se use ghure ja raha tha...... .....meera ki khilkhilahat ne unko fir ghayal kar diya.
Meera - ab jaldi kijiye muzase sabra nahi ho raha, me tadap rahi hu aapka kala hatiyar apni yoni me lene ke liye ! ....apni biwi pratap ji ke niche sone ke liye tarasti dekh jay ke sine me aag bhadak uthi
Pratap ji - 8 baje he raat to abhi shuru hui meera ! .....meera ke chehre ka badla rang jay ne pehchan liya.....
Meera - aaj nahi itwaar ko aa jaiye aapke havale jism saup dungi ! .....meera ne uth kar ghagre se apni chati poch li..... .....or kacchi utha ke pehen li.....
Pratap ji - kyu aaj raat yaha rukne me kya pareshani he ! .....meera ne khilkhilate huye kaha.
Meera - mere pati ko khana kon khilayega pratap ji, or han itwar ki raat aapko jane nahi dungi, or sone to bilkul bhi nahi dungi ! ......soch ke hi pratap ji ke land me halchal ho gai..... ......meera ne tabtak kapde pehen liye...... ......unke man me ek sawal paida hua.....
Pratap ji - par jay hoga na ! ......meera ne kaanch ki khidaki se jay ki aankho me dekh katil muskan hoto pe failai.
Meera - uske liye sharab ki do bottle alag se lani hogi ! .....pratap ji has pade..... .....unse gale mil kar meera bahar aa gai..... .....jay ki halat dekh uske hoto pe muskan faili thi.... .....bag ki or ishara karke meera daftar se bahar nikal gai..... ......bag utha kar jay bhi nikal gaya.... ......meera kuch jyada hi tez kadam badhate huye chal rahi thi.....
Pratap ji - meera tere jaisi kamuk haseena koi nahi ho sakti ! ......jay lachar gusse se use ghure ja raha tha...... .....meera ki khilkhilahat ne unko fir ghayal kar diya.
Meera - ab jaldi kijiye muzase sabra nahi ho raha, me tadap rahi hu aapka kala hatiyar apni yoni me lene ke liye ! ....apni biwi pratap ji ke niche sone ke liye tarasti dekh jay ke sine me aag bhadak uthi
Pratap ji - 8 baje he raat to abhi shuru hui meera ! .....meera ke chehre ka badla rang jay ne pehchan liya.....
Meera - aaj nahi itwaar ko aa jaiye aapke havale jism saup dungi ! .....meera ne uth kar ghagre se apni chati poch li..... .....or kacchi utha ke pehen li.....
Pratap ji - kyu aaj raat yaha rukne me kya pareshani he ! .....meera ne khilkhilate huye kaha.
Meera - mere pati ko khana kon khilayega pratap ji, or han itwar ki raat aapko jane nahi dungi, or sone to bilkul bhi nahi dungi ! ......soch ke hi pratap ji ke land me halchal ho gai..... ......meera ne tabtak kapde pehen liye...... ......unke man me ek sawal paida hua.....
Pratap ji - par jay hoga na ! ......meera ne kaanch ki khidaki se jay ki aankho me dekh katil muskan hoto pe failai.
Meera - uske liye sharab ki do bottle alag se lani hogi ! .....pratap ji has pade..... .....unse gale mil kar meera bahar aa gai..... .....jay ki halat dekh uske hoto pe muskan faili thi.... .....bag ki or ishara karke meera daftar se bahar nikal gai..... ......bag utha kar jay bhi nikal gaya.... ......meera kuch jyada hi tez kadam badhate huye chal rahi thi.....
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Meera 12
Meera dak ke dibbe ke pass ruk gai usne piche mud ke dekha to jay jyada hi dheeme chal raha tha...... .....uski vajah meera samaz gai.....
Meera ko dak ke pass ruka dekh jay bhi ruk gaya..... .....jay ko malum tha raaj nahi aayega..... ........15 minute baad meera ke pass car aake ruk gai..... .....raj ki car dekh jay ke pasine chutne lage...... .....dusari or meera ke chehre ki chamak badh gai thi......
Dono kuch der ek dusare ko dekhne lage.
2 minute baad meera ne jay ki taraf dekha or car me baith gai..... ......fauran car ne tez raftar pakad ke raste pe daud kar ozal ho gai.
Jay ka dil ghabrane laga.... .....daudate huye vo kacche raste se aage gadi ke piche bhagne laga..... ....bahot dur jake bhi use kahi car dikhai nahi di.... ......pehli baar itna dar mehsoos hua use.....
Use meera ki fiqar hone lagi dimag me tarah tarah ki batein ghumte hi jay ka khauf havi hone laga..... ......vapas kacchi sadak ke mod pe ruk ke jay intzaar karne laga..... .....ek ek pal mushkil se kat ke jay intzaar karne laga.
Kuch yaad aate hi bag me dhundne par use kagaz dikha..... ......matlab is kagaz ko lene meera subah dak ke dibbe ke pass ruki thi....
Kagaz pe nazare ghumai to uspe likha tha.
"Pyaari meera,
Subah hi aaya hu par jaldi vapas jana he,
Aaj sham ko milna chahta tha,
Raaj"
intzaar karte karte 12 baj gaye the kacche raste pe dheere dheere kadam badhate huye jay bar bar piche mud ke dekhta, sadak khatam hote hi vo makan ki or mud ke chalne laga.
Sofe pe baitha jay ek ghante tak besabri se intzaar karta raha..... .....raat ke 2 baje darvaje pe aahat sun usne nazare ghumai..... .......meera andar aagai.....
Jay - itni jaldi aag buzh gai subah aa jati, bazaru veshya ban gai he tu meera ! ........meera ne teekhi nazaro se jay ko ghur ke apni bag me kuch rakh diya or bathroom me chali gai.... ......nahakar usne kapde badal diye the..... .......or bina kuch bole hi so gai...... kuch der baad jay ne bag me dhundh kar parchi kholi to uspe ek imarat ka pata likha tha...... ......jay ne kuch der socha fir so gaya.......
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Subah subah jaldi uth kar meera taiyar hui..... ......salvar kamij pehen ke usne maang me sindur bhar diya..... .....hoto pe lali lagate huye boli.
Meera - jay ise pehna de ! ......jay ne dekha to uske haat me purana mangalsutra tha.....
Jay - kya hua ab naya kaha he !
Meera - kal raat ko gai thi tab gum ho gaya pehna jaldi der ho rahi he ! ......meera itni asani se boli jaise use koi gum hi na ho....
Jay - aise kaise gum ho gaya kahi raaj ne chin to nahi liya !
Meera - ab pehna jaldi 9 baj gaye he ! .....jay ne uske gale me pehna diya.....
Daftar pohonchte hi jay kaam karne laga.... ......par meera kaam chod kar darvaje ki or dekhe ja rahi thi..... ....ek ghante baad pratap ji aake meera ke samne ruk gaye..... .....meera ne unhe kuch ishara kiya...... ........vo muskura kar andar chale gaye..... ......fauran meera ne bag uthai or andar jate waqt darvaja acche se band kar diya.....
Jay samaz gaya meera unhe mangalsutra khone ki baat batane gai he..... ......kaanch ki khidaki se jay ki nazare andar zhankne lagi..... ......khursi pe baithe pratap ji table ke samne khadi meera se baat karne lage..... .....kareeb 15 minute tak dono baat karte rahe..... ......mangalsutra ki hi baat hogi shayad...... ......aakhirkar pratap ji ne meera ke sar ko sehla ke muskura diya..... .......fauran meera bahar aake khursi par baith kaam karne lagi.....
.....jay janane Ko betab tha kya hua par usne pucha nahi...... ......aaj meera kuch jyada hi man laga kar kaam kar rahi thi..... .....pehli baar use is tarah dekha shayad mangalsutra chinane ki vajah se naraz ho..... .....jay ne gaur kiya to meera ka pallu chati pe dhaka hua tha..... .....use tajjub tab hua jab chati ke ubhar pe uski nazar gai...... ......aaj to usne bra bhi pehen li thi......
Pura din aise hi beeta gaya par ek baar bhi pratap ji uske kareeb nahi aaye..... .......or na hi meera unke pass gai.... .
Meera dak ke dibbe ke pass ruk gai usne piche mud ke dekha to jay jyada hi dheeme chal raha tha...... .....uski vajah meera samaz gai.....
Meera ko dak ke pass ruka dekh jay bhi ruk gaya..... .....jay ko malum tha raaj nahi aayega..... ........15 minute baad meera ke pass car aake ruk gai..... .....raj ki car dekh jay ke pasine chutne lage...... .....dusari or meera ke chehre ki chamak badh gai thi......
Dono kuch der ek dusare ko dekhne lage.
2 minute baad meera ne jay ki taraf dekha or car me baith gai..... ......fauran car ne tez raftar pakad ke raste pe daud kar ozal ho gai.
Jay ka dil ghabrane laga.... .....daudate huye vo kacche raste se aage gadi ke piche bhagne laga..... ....bahot dur jake bhi use kahi car dikhai nahi di.... ......pehli baar itna dar mehsoos hua use.....
Use meera ki fiqar hone lagi dimag me tarah tarah ki batein ghumte hi jay ka khauf havi hone laga..... ......vapas kacchi sadak ke mod pe ruk ke jay intzaar karne laga..... .....ek ek pal mushkil se kat ke jay intzaar karne laga.
Kuch yaad aate hi bag me dhundne par use kagaz dikha..... ......matlab is kagaz ko lene meera subah dak ke dibbe ke pass ruki thi....
Kagaz pe nazare ghumai to uspe likha tha.
"Pyaari meera,
Subah hi aaya hu par jaldi vapas jana he,
Aaj sham ko milna chahta tha,
Raaj"
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Sofe pe baitha jay ek ghante tak besabri se intzaar karta raha..... .....raat ke 2 baje darvaje pe aahat sun usne nazare ghumai..... .......meera andar aagai.....
Jay - itni jaldi aag buzh gai subah aa jati, bazaru veshya ban gai he tu meera ! ........meera ne teekhi nazaro se jay ko ghur ke apni bag me kuch rakh diya or bathroom me chali gai.... ......nahakar usne kapde badal diye the..... .......or bina kuch bole hi so gai...... kuch der baad jay ne bag me dhundh kar parchi kholi to uspe ek imarat ka pata likha tha...... ......jay ne kuch der socha fir so gaya.......
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Subah subah jaldi uth kar meera taiyar hui..... ......salvar kamij pehen ke usne maang me sindur bhar diya..... .....hoto pe lali lagate huye boli.
Meera - jay ise pehna de ! ......jay ne dekha to uske haat me purana mangalsutra tha.....
Jay - kya hua ab naya kaha he !
Meera - kal raat ko gai thi tab gum ho gaya pehna jaldi der ho rahi he ! ......meera itni asani se boli jaise use koi gum hi na ho....
Jay - aise kaise gum ho gaya kahi raaj ne chin to nahi liya !
Meera - ab pehna jaldi 9 baj gaye he ! .....jay ne uske gale me pehna diya.....
Daftar pohonchte hi jay kaam karne laga.... ......par meera kaam chod kar darvaje ki or dekhe ja rahi thi..... ....ek ghante baad pratap ji aake meera ke samne ruk gaye..... .....meera ne unhe kuch ishara kiya...... ........vo muskura kar andar chale gaye..... ......fauran meera ne bag uthai or andar jate waqt darvaja acche se band kar diya.....
Jay samaz gaya meera unhe mangalsutra khone ki baat batane gai he..... ......kaanch ki khidaki se jay ki nazare andar zhankne lagi..... ......khursi pe baithe pratap ji table ke samne khadi meera se baat karne lage..... .....kareeb 15 minute tak dono baat karte rahe..... ......mangalsutra ki hi baat hogi shayad...... ......aakhirkar pratap ji ne meera ke sar ko sehla ke muskura diya..... .......fauran meera bahar aake khursi par baith kaam karne lagi.....
.....jay janane Ko betab tha kya hua par usne pucha nahi...... ......aaj meera kuch jyada hi man laga kar kaam kar rahi thi..... .....pehli baar use is tarah dekha shayad mangalsutra chinane ki vajah se naraz ho..... .....jay ne gaur kiya to meera ka pallu chati pe dhaka hua tha..... .....use tajjub tab hua jab chati ke ubhar pe uski nazar gai...... ......aaj to usne bra bhi pehen li thi......
Pura din aise hi beeta gaya par ek baar bhi pratap ji uske kareeb nahi aaye..... .......or na hi meera unke pass gai.... .
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.......or na hi meera unke pass gai.... .....shayad itni keemti cheej khone se naraz huye ho.....
Raat ke 8 baj gaye meera ne muskura ke jay ko kaha.
Meera - chalo jay 8 baj gaye ! ......meera ne apni bag uthai or daftar se nikal gai...... ......jay bhi uske piche piche chalne laga...... .......dak ke dibbe ke pass ruke bina meera ke kadam aage badh kar makan me aagai..... .....jay ko bada ajeeb laga..... .....khana banakar dono ne kha liya..... .....or so gaye.....
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.......subah subah jay ki aankh khuli to uska dil bechain ho gaya..... ......aaj itwar he pratap ji aa jayenge...... ......meera to unhe raat ko bhi rukane wali he..... ......pata nahi ab kya hoga...... ......soch ke hi jay ka dil ghabrane laga...... ......jis cheej ke liye meera unke sath sone wali he vo to raaj ne chin li.....
.car me ghumta he kamina akeli meera ka fayda utha ke aag bhi buzhai or lut liya..... ......nahakar jay bahar aaya tab meera salvar kamij pehne khana bana rahi thi...... .......jaise jaise dopeher hui vaise vaise jay ke pasine chutne lage...... ......meera khana kha ke aaram se so gai..... ......jay pareshan ho gaya shayad puri raat jagna he isliye meera soi hogi kamini......
......andhera hote hi meera uth ke vapas apne kaam me lag gai..... ......subah se jay pareshan tha..... .....dusari or meera ke chehre pe koi bhav nahi tha.....
Meera - jay khana lagaya he kha le ! .....meera ke sath khana khatam kar jay sofe pe baith gaya..... .....bartan dhokar meera vapas bistar pe aake so gai....
Jay ko ajeeb laga par use khushi hui unke na aane se...... ......agle din bhi pratap ji meera ke kareeb nahi aaye..... ......aise hi din beetane lage...... ......meera ke chehre ka rang mano ud gaya tha.....
....aise hi do hafte nikal gaye.... ......nahi pratap ji uske pass aaye or nahi raj ki car kabhi dikhai di...... .....meera gumsum rehne lagi......
Jay - kya hua tuze ! ......jay ke saval pe meera muskurai.
Meera - kuch bhi to nahi !
Jay - jabse raaj ne keemati mangalsutra china tabse gumsum rehne lagi he tu !
Meera - aisi koi baat nahi he jay ! .....har bar ki tarah yahi javab jay ko milta.
Ek mahina aise hi beet gaya..... ......ek din daftar me kaam karte waqt pratap ji vaha aaye..... .....ek card meera ke table pe rakha.
Pratap ji - kal sham ko party he sheher ke bade logo ki, tum dono aaoge to accha lagega ! .....pratap ji palat kar chale gaye..... .....meera ne ek nazar card pe dali or vapas kaam karne lag gai.....
Raat ko khana khate waqt jay ne pucha.
Jay - kal hum jayenge meera bahot shandar ronak hogi vaha !
Meera - muze kal makan saaf karna he jay tum chale jana ! .....uska bahana jay samajh gaya.
Jay - muze kuch nahi pata tum mere sath chalogi baat khatam ! .....meera ne teekhi nazaro se jay ko ghura or bartan dhone chali gai.
Agle din subah se jay use manane ki koshish karne laga..... .....shayad meera ko accha lage...... ......kai baar jid karne ke baad meera man gai.....
Neele rang ki saree me behad khubsurat lag rahi thi aaj..... ......par uske chehre ki mayusi ne sab par pani fer diya.
Jab dono vaha pohonch gaye ronak dekh chaunk gaye..... .....kai log vaha maujood sharab pite huye kai aurate bhi unka sath pi rahi thi.... ......dusari or khane ki har cheej rakhi hui thi..... ......dono ko pratap ji ke alava daftar me kaam kar rahe 4 log hi pehchante the..... ......pratap ji apne dosto me khoye the..... ......yaha daftar me kaam kar rahe sab bhojan karne pe tut pade.....
Jay ne meera se ijajat lekar sharab ki or chala gaya...... ......meera ek khursi me baithi apni hi soch me dubi thu..... ......daftar ki ek mahila usase baat kar rahi thi jispe meera ka dyan hi nahi tha.
Raat ke 8 baj gaye meera ne muskura ke jay ko kaha.
Meera - chalo jay 8 baj gaye ! ......meera ne apni bag uthai or daftar se nikal gai...... ......jay bhi uske piche piche chalne laga...... .......dak ke dibbe ke pass ruke bina meera ke kadam aage badh kar makan me aagai..... .....jay ko bada ajeeb laga..... .....khana banakar dono ne kha liya..... .....or so gaye.....
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.......subah subah jay ki aankh khuli to uska dil bechain ho gaya..... ......aaj itwar he pratap ji aa jayenge...... ......meera to unhe raat ko bhi rukane wali he..... ......pata nahi ab kya hoga...... ......soch ke hi jay ka dil ghabrane laga...... ......jis cheej ke liye meera unke sath sone wali he vo to raaj ne chin li.....
.car me ghumta he kamina akeli meera ka fayda utha ke aag bhi buzhai or lut liya..... ......nahakar jay bahar aaya tab meera salvar kamij pehne khana bana rahi thi...... .......jaise jaise dopeher hui vaise vaise jay ke pasine chutne lage...... ......meera khana kha ke aaram se so gai..... ......jay pareshan ho gaya shayad puri raat jagna he isliye meera soi hogi kamini......
......andhera hote hi meera uth ke vapas apne kaam me lag gai..... ......subah se jay pareshan tha..... .....dusari or meera ke chehre pe koi bhav nahi tha.....
Meera - jay khana lagaya he kha le ! .....meera ke sath khana khatam kar jay sofe pe baith gaya..... .....bartan dhokar meera vapas bistar pe aake so gai....
Jay ko ajeeb laga par use khushi hui unke na aane se...... ......agle din bhi pratap ji meera ke kareeb nahi aaye..... ......aise hi din beetane lage...... ......meera ke chehre ka rang mano ud gaya tha.....
....aise hi do hafte nikal gaye.... ......nahi pratap ji uske pass aaye or nahi raj ki car kabhi dikhai di...... .....meera gumsum rehne lagi......
Jay - kya hua tuze ! ......jay ke saval pe meera muskurai.
Meera - kuch bhi to nahi !
Jay - jabse raaj ne keemati mangalsutra china tabse gumsum rehne lagi he tu !
Meera - aisi koi baat nahi he jay ! .....har bar ki tarah yahi javab jay ko milta.
Ek mahina aise hi beet gaya..... ......ek din daftar me kaam karte waqt pratap ji vaha aaye..... .....ek card meera ke table pe rakha.
Pratap ji - kal sham ko party he sheher ke bade logo ki, tum dono aaoge to accha lagega ! .....pratap ji palat kar chale gaye..... .....meera ne ek nazar card pe dali or vapas kaam karne lag gai.....
Raat ko khana khate waqt jay ne pucha.
Jay - kal hum jayenge meera bahot shandar ronak hogi vaha !
Meera - muze kal makan saaf karna he jay tum chale jana ! .....uska bahana jay samajh gaya.
Jay - muze kuch nahi pata tum mere sath chalogi baat khatam ! .....meera ne teekhi nazaro se jay ko ghura or bartan dhone chali gai.
Agle din subah se jay use manane ki koshish karne laga..... .....shayad meera ko accha lage...... ......kai baar jid karne ke baad meera man gai.....
Neele rang ki saree me behad khubsurat lag rahi thi aaj..... ......par uske chehre ki mayusi ne sab par pani fer diya.
Jab dono vaha pohonch gaye ronak dekh chaunk gaye..... .....kai log vaha maujood sharab pite huye kai aurate bhi unka sath pi rahi thi.... ......dusari or khane ki har cheej rakhi hui thi..... ......dono ko pratap ji ke alava daftar me kaam kar rahe 4 log hi pehchante the..... ......pratap ji apne dosto me khoye the..... ......yaha daftar me kaam kar rahe sab bhojan karne pe tut pade.....
Jay ne meera se ijajat lekar sharab ki or chala gaya...... ......meera ek khursi me baithi apni hi soch me dubi thu..... ......daftar ki ek mahila usase baat kar rahi thi jispe meera ka dyan hi nahi tha.
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Sharab pite pite jay ki nazare ek shaksh pe ruk gai...... .......jay ne uska picha kiya use yakeen hote hi uska haat majbuti se se pakad liya.
Jay - aaj tuze nahi chorunga ! ......vo insaan palat gaya to raaj tha..... .....jaise hi Raj ki nazar jay pe gai to muskurake bola.
Raaj - jay aakhir mulaqaat ho hi gai, kaha he tumhari patni meera ! ......chaunkne ki bari jay ki thi matlab raaj pehle se janta tha me uska pati hu.
Jay - kaisi bhi ho, us raat meera ko akele le jake sone ka haar chinte waqt thodi bhi sharam nahi aai, ab kise fasane aaya yaha ! .....jay ki aankho ko padh raaj kuch kuch samajhne laga.
Raaj - chod usase bhi mehenga dila dunga !
Jay - abhi chahiye muze !
Raaj - yaha kon leke aata he ! .....jay uska haat chorne ko taiyar hi nahi tha.
Jay - muze abhi chahiye, tu janta nahi use pane ke liye meera ne kya kya kiya ! .....raaj ke chehre pe hasi fail gai...... .....jaise ki use sab pata ho.....
Raaj - theek he abhi lata hu haat chor ab !
Jay - tu bhag gaya to ! .....raaj ki nazare aas paas ghum ke usne ek aavaj di.
"Dipti yaha aana" ......kuch duri pe ladkiyo ki zhund me se ek ladki ne aavaj ki or dekha...... ......zhund se kuch bol kar vo raaj ke pass aai.... .....haseen chamak thi chehre pe sar se paav tak khubsurati zhalak rahi thi.....
"Kya hua bhaiya" ......raj ko bhaiya bulane se jay ne uska haat chor diya.
Raaj - apne gale ka necklace de muze ! ......dipti chaunk gai ek dafa jay ki or shaq ki nazare dal ke usne necklace utar diya....
Dipti - sab theek to he na !
Raaj - ye mera dost jay, paiso ki sakht jaroorat he abhi ! .....dipti ne sar se paav tak jay ko ghurte huye kaha.
Dipti - bhaiya kal de sakte the na paise !
Raaj - abhi jaroorat he jay ko utne to jeb me he nahi ! .....dipti chali gai.
Raaj - ye lo ab to khush he na jay !
Jay - ye bhi kisise chura kar apni behen ko diya hoga ! .....raj ke chehre pe sadgi si muskan fir fail gai.....
Raaj - aisa hi kuch samaz le ! ......jay man hi man gali deke raj ko jata dekhta raha..... .....sharab ka gilas khatam kar vo khushi khushi meera ke pass aaya.....
Meera - chale ab ! ....jay ne jeb se cham chamata har nikal kar meera ki aankho ke samne zhula kar kaha.
Jay - kaisa he meera ! ......meera ki aankho me saf saf chamak dikhi.
Meera - ye kab khareeda !
Jay - raaj se us raat ka badla liya ! ......meera ki nazare cheete se bhi tez har taraf use dhaud kar dhundhne lagi.....par kahi raaj dikhai nahi diya....
Meera - jaa use vapas kar !
Jay - kyu usne churaya na !
Meera - nahi raste se aate waqt gir gaya ja pehle use vapas kar ! ......jay hairani se meera ko dekhta kabhi necklace ko..... .....aakhirkar vapas use jana pada kai der tak jay ne dhundhne ki koshish ki..... .....tabhi uski nazar meera pe padi vo use hi ghur rahi thi..... .......usase nazare chura ke jay bheed me kho gaya..... .....10 minute baad meera ke pass aaya tab meera ki nazare use hi dhundh rahi thi.....
Jay - de diya chale ab ! ......dono ghar ki or nikal gaye.....
Jay ka dimag soch soch ke pareshan ho gaya..... .....necklace ab bhi uski jeb me tha..... ......raaj ne to apni behen ke gale se utar kar diya kya sach me usne nahi liya..... ......jay sharminda ho gaya.
"Kyu bura lag raga he tuze jay, usne teri patni se der raat tak havas mitai, tu bevkoof intzaar karta raha, or dono vaha maze kar rahe the"
Bistar pe lete lete jay ki soch or gehri hone lagi.
"par jism ki havas mitane ke alava bhi kuch hua he, tabse meera gumsum rehne lagi, uske chehre ka rang bhi ud gaya he, tabse pratap ji ko kareeb aane nahi diya usne"
Der raat ko jay ki aankh lag gai.
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Jay - aaj tuze nahi chorunga ! ......vo insaan palat gaya to raaj tha..... .....jaise hi Raj ki nazar jay pe gai to muskurake bola.
Raaj - jay aakhir mulaqaat ho hi gai, kaha he tumhari patni meera ! ......chaunkne ki bari jay ki thi matlab raaj pehle se janta tha me uska pati hu.
Jay - kaisi bhi ho, us raat meera ko akele le jake sone ka haar chinte waqt thodi bhi sharam nahi aai, ab kise fasane aaya yaha ! .....jay ki aankho ko padh raaj kuch kuch samajhne laga.
Raaj - chod usase bhi mehenga dila dunga !
Jay - abhi chahiye muze !
Raaj - yaha kon leke aata he ! .....jay uska haat chorne ko taiyar hi nahi tha.
Jay - muze abhi chahiye, tu janta nahi use pane ke liye meera ne kya kya kiya ! .....raaj ke chehre pe hasi fail gai...... .....jaise ki use sab pata ho.....
Raaj - theek he abhi lata hu haat chor ab !
Jay - tu bhag gaya to ! .....raaj ki nazare aas paas ghum ke usne ek aavaj di.
"Dipti yaha aana" ......kuch duri pe ladkiyo ki zhund me se ek ladki ne aavaj ki or dekha...... ......zhund se kuch bol kar vo raaj ke pass aai.... .....haseen chamak thi chehre pe sar se paav tak khubsurati zhalak rahi thi.....
"Kya hua bhaiya" ......raj ko bhaiya bulane se jay ne uska haat chor diya.
Raaj - apne gale ka necklace de muze ! ......dipti chaunk gai ek dafa jay ki or shaq ki nazare dal ke usne necklace utar diya....
Dipti - sab theek to he na !
Raaj - ye mera dost jay, paiso ki sakht jaroorat he abhi ! .....dipti ne sar se paav tak jay ko ghurte huye kaha.
Dipti - bhaiya kal de sakte the na paise !
Raaj - abhi jaroorat he jay ko utne to jeb me he nahi ! .....dipti chali gai.
Raaj - ye lo ab to khush he na jay !
Jay - ye bhi kisise chura kar apni behen ko diya hoga ! .....raj ke chehre pe sadgi si muskan fir fail gai.....
Raaj - aisa hi kuch samaz le ! ......jay man hi man gali deke raj ko jata dekhta raha..... .....sharab ka gilas khatam kar vo khushi khushi meera ke pass aaya.....
Meera - chale ab ! ....jay ne jeb se cham chamata har nikal kar meera ki aankho ke samne zhula kar kaha.
Jay - kaisa he meera ! ......meera ki aankho me saf saf chamak dikhi.
Meera - ye kab khareeda !
Jay - raaj se us raat ka badla liya ! ......meera ki nazare cheete se bhi tez har taraf use dhaud kar dhundhne lagi.....par kahi raaj dikhai nahi diya....
Meera - jaa use vapas kar !
Jay - kyu usne churaya na !
Meera - nahi raste se aate waqt gir gaya ja pehle use vapas kar ! ......jay hairani se meera ko dekhta kabhi necklace ko..... .....aakhirkar vapas use jana pada kai der tak jay ne dhundhne ki koshish ki..... .....tabhi uski nazar meera pe padi vo use hi ghur rahi thi..... .......usase nazare chura ke jay bheed me kho gaya..... .....10 minute baad meera ke pass aaya tab meera ki nazare use hi dhundh rahi thi.....
Jay - de diya chale ab ! ......dono ghar ki or nikal gaye.....
Jay ka dimag soch soch ke pareshan ho gaya..... .....necklace ab bhi uski jeb me tha..... ......raaj ne to apni behen ke gale se utar kar diya kya sach me usne nahi liya..... ......jay sharminda ho gaya.
"Kyu bura lag raga he tuze jay, usne teri patni se der raat tak havas mitai, tu bevkoof intzaar karta raha, or dono vaha maze kar rahe the"
Bistar pe lete lete jay ki soch or gehri hone lagi.
"par jism ki havas mitane ke alava bhi kuch hua he, tabse meera gumsum rehne lagi, uske chehre ka rang bhi ud gaya he, tabse pratap ji ko kareeb aane nahi diya usne"
Der raat ko jay ki aankh lag gai.
Meera 12
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