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Thanks u aapne time nikake itne sare suggestions diye .Kuch batain dimag ma add kr lo story
Or ap ko faida hoga..
1. Story ko hamesha plot py ly kr chalo.
2. Readerz sy mashvra zaror lo pr likho
Wo jo story polt py fit ho.
3. Story ko real k hisaab sy rakho.(Jesy scene start sy lay kr scene stop k darmiyaan).
4. Kuch log tarif krty hain kuch acha kehty
Hain kuch bura .per ap dil py mat lena kisi
B baat ko (kiu k honsla torny waly hazaroon milain gy)
5. Nagetive comment ka kbi replay mat krna . Na us ko dil dimag py havy krna.
6.Shuru ma Readerz hamesha kam hoty
Hain kisi b story ko hit hony ma time lgta ha . Ap ka kaam likhna ha to likhty raho.
Readerz ki counting maat krna.
Keep Going . Keep it Up..
Haan sab naam aaenge bas time dijiye .Bht hotest or zabrdst plot ha ap ki story ka....Keep it up
Ap update bht tezz likh rahi ho.
In ki video b 30.40 mints ki hoti hain
Update likhty hoe speed slow rakho sceen ki . Solw or erotic sy bharpoor.
Jesy wo kia mehsoos kr rahi ha.
Ap apny Jazbat ka sahi sy izhaar nai kr paa rahi ho.
Jo kirdar (Girls) k naam b likho sth k kon kon ha us k figer ki detail.
Leah gotti or lana roads py b 1.1 update
Likho or in 2no ka aik sceen b.
Next long or slow slow update ka intzaar rahe ga
Mujee bhi yesaa hi saand chahiyee