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Asal me story ko lamba kerne se scènes repeat hone lagtay hain. Is liye ziada lamba nahi likhti. “Aam si larki” or “It’s not a Love Story” dono k sath mujhe ye cheez face kerni pari…Bs ap story thori lambi kiya kro abi hum caracters my guste hi h to story khtam ho jati h m apki story saffar meri chaht ka fan ho gya hu 3.4 bar parhi h wo story maza agya story my incest tach ho to sahi maza ata h
Asal me Mera maqsad hai k Jahan per kahani ka subject khatam, to wahan story ko khatam ker dein. Warna story idhar udhar bhatakti hai.