Fantasy MERA BADLA (REVENGE) suspence action love romance much more

[Naina]

Naina g phle to apka tahi dil se suwagat hamary is choti se theard pe
Jin shabdo se apny update ke tarif ke waqai lajwab hai

Aap sab readrs he hamen likhne ke taqat dete ho apky revos he hamara hosla barhate hen apny sab readrs ka mai dil se saman karta hun aur hamisha yahi kosish kruga ke apna best de saku har update mai

Ab se is story pe bhi revos start
Btw story line badhiya hai... flaow bhi Laaljawab hai

 

[Rajaa the king]

well...ek action scenes ka mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt sceans cha jaye dilo dimag pe.... hamesha ki tarah writer sahab ne bahot hi ummda aur ek details ke sath fighting aur action scenes create ki hai update mein , Jo sach mein adbhut aur prashansaniya hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha.. update padhte waqt aisa lage ki jaise likha gaya har shabd jeevit ho utha aur mujhe ye update mein ghatit drishya ko dikha rahe hai.... .

Kayi mamlo mein ye update sarvashresth hai....mujhe koi wajah najar nahin aayi ki main is update se koi kami nikalu.... ek reader ke liye sab se badi khushi ki baat yahin hoti hai ki aise update padhne ko mile .. bahut bahut dhanyavaad aapko jo itna achha sundar update ham sab pathakon ke madhya rakhe... main is update ko 5 mein se 5 ank deti hoon..
.. The narration and the dialogues were perfect fit for the atmosphere of the update.
Btw brilliant update with awesome writing skills

5 mai se 5
Are naina g ya bol kar aap dosre writers ke sath nainsafi to nhi kar rhe na kyu ke ham to choti se new writer hen hamse bw ache aur behtreen writers mojud hn xfm pe esa na ho wo naraz ho jai

 

[Rajaa the king]

Ab se is story pe bhi revos start
Btw story line badhiya hai... flaow bhi Laaljawab hai

Matalb kafi tagre mehnt krne paregy har update pe taki apko koi kami na dekh jai update mai kyu ke hamny dekha hai aap update mai choti se choti kami ek dum se parfect pkr leti ho well apky revos se mujhe apny mistks pata chalegy i am waiting

 

[Rajaa the king]

Mast update

Wellcome on theard bro thnku

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[Bilal jan]

Bhai update ka intzar hy

 

[Bilal jan]

doston maine ya socha hai ke story mai sex add nhi kruga romantic seens add kruga kyu ke sex ke bina be story achi jaige baki aap logo batai many sahi disicion liya hai ya nhi

Bhai jaisy aap ko theek lagy

 

[Naik]

doston maine ya socha hai ke story mai sex add nhi kruga romantic seens add kruga kyu ke sex ke bina be story achi jaige baki aap logo batai many sahi disicion liya hai ya nhi

Sex scene na dalne k baare m jo socha bahot kia ha romantic moment daal do chalega
Or jo bhai bol rehe h sex scene dalne k liye unse gujarish iss forum bahot saari sex storys h aap unhe padh sakte h
Thank you

 

[Ajay]

update 15
raat ko sabny khana khaya us alien ke lash ko jafar ne kaha kardiya ya na komal ko pta na he raja ko

next day

morning 7.00 am
In hall
jafar...bacho thori der mai ham nikly ge yahan se tab tak tumhe kuch btana chahta hun

raja..g baba boly

jafar...aaj tum dono apny 3 new teachrs se milogy jo tumhe alag alag hathyar chalana sikhaigy
jese
talwar
lathi
chaku
martiel arts
defence and attack aur be bohat se tacnics

komal..baba ya to raat ko be bole the aap

jafar...han lakin ek baat sun lo ya aasan nhi hony wala tumhe kai baar bhooka pyasa rehte hue ghnto tak traning krne hogi bina ruke kyu ke kal raat jo mainy dekha hai ab yakeen hony lga hai ke waqai dharti pe bohat bara khatra mandra raha hai jisko tumhe he rokna hoga

raja..baba meri to ab be kuch samaj nhi aa rha lakin jo be hai mai pori kosish kruga har chiz mai parfect hony ke

jafar...shabash meri sher

komal dil mai...sher nhi chuha hai jab dekho darta rehta hai

locket...sharam kr komal ya jisko tu chuha bol rhe hai jab ya apny asli avtar mai aay ga tab is univers mai is se ziyada tez dimag kese ke pass nhi na hoga na inky fights aur attacks ko koi defence kr paiga na inky mamoli jal se koi nikal paiga saf alfaz mai bolo to he is a lagend of univers

komal...itni lambi kyu chor rhi hai yaar is se ziyada tez to mai hun

locket...wo is lye kyu ke inky memory lose nhi hue usky locket ne usky memory khud mai capture kar le hai taky ya bina purani yaddon ke khud ko mazbot kare is lye jab locket apny powrs isko de to ya unhe sambhal saky

komal...kya mtlb memory capture ke hai aur jese tu mujhse baat krti hai kya uska locket us se baat nhi krta kya

locket..nhi usky locket ne abhe tak khud ko seal kiya hua hai taky usky location trace na ho saky kal raat be tere wajasy raja pe us dred ne hamla kiya kyu ke meri powrs ke seal tot chuky hai mujhe trace kiya ja sakta hai

ya sun komal ko lga jhatka

komal...mtlb tujhse baat krke mainy apny pair pe kulhary mar le

locket..yahi samaj lo

komal...bira garak ho ab musibat naseeb mai likhe hai to kya kar sakti ho ab is chuhe ke sath sath kud ko safe rakhne ke lye 2bl mehnat krne hogi hayyy re meri photi kismat

locket.. Hehehehehe roo mat kal raat jo breclet tuny us dred ke hath se utara tha wo raja ke hath mai phna de phr dekh kamal

komal..kya hai us breclet mai

locket...usmy dreds ke mind powrs hen jo kafi dangrous be hen aur faidemand be jese ke khatra pass hote he raja usko sanse kar lega aur agr hamla hua to us breclet se ek sheild raja ko cover kregy aur usy time raja jis hathyar ka sochega usky hath mai hoga

komal khush hote hue ....to mai usko kyu du ya to mai he phnogy

locket...are pagal ya tu phnegy to kali kaloti ban jaigy dreds ke powrs sirf ek mard he use kar sakta hai dosri sirf unky wife jo unky pida hony ke bad he unse jor jate hai agr unky biwi ke ilawa koi aur aurat ya larki ya breclet phn le to wo be dred ban jati hai

ya sun komal hadbada gye

komal...touba hai mujhe us ajeeb alien jese makhlok nhi ban..na
.ya bol usny wo breclet raja ke kalai mai phna diya aur usko samjha diya

DOSRI TARAF

AREA 51
Dr thomas is waqt us insan numa alien jisko unho ne zindgi de the ke sath ek room mai bethe hue the
room ke bich ek diwar bane hue the jo sheshe ke tarha he the lakin itni mazbot ke torte torte banda he dum torde

ek taraf thomas
dosri taraf alien
is bnde ka name kavin ha

thomas kafi din se us se baten krne ke try kar rhw the lakin wo baat he nhi krta tha aaj unho ne kuch naye tarkib lgai the

thomas...kavin mai janta hun tum mere har baat sun samaj rhe ho lakin tum baat nhi krna chahte phr be mai tumhe kuch dena chahta hun

ya bol thomas ne bahar khre bnde ko ishara kiya

ishare ka mtlb samjhte he us room jismy thomas aur kavin the usky sides sw zameen hatne lge dekhte dekhte wo room ke niche ka hisa hath gya aur wo room niche zameen mai jany lga 1 2 3 ese krte krte 103 numbr pe jaky wo room ruk gya

thomas...kavin wellcome to your world dekho tumhary ek ufo ke zariye hamny kitne ufos banai hen

ya sun kavin ne nazar utha kar jo dekha

har taraf jadid aur hightech tecnology se tayar karda ufos khre the aur sabsy aagy khra tha ek ufo silver colour ka jo ke inho ko is alien se mila tha

ya dekh kavin ke honto pe itne time mai phle baar muskan nach gye

kavin...dr i am not kavin
my name is kaal
the spy of DRACO PLANET
mujhe realive krne ke lye thanku
.ya sun thomas ko koi hirani nhi hue kyu ke ya hoga is baat ka usko 100 prcnt yakeen tha

thomas..so kaal ab tumny jab apna intro de he diya hai to batao tum dharti pe kyu aai the aur ya be batao is univrse mai aur kitne ese planets hen jahan pe tumhary kese aliens ya insan baste hen

kaal...dr ham is dharti ke janam hony se be bohat phle he is univrse ka hisa the lakin jab dharti is univrse ka hisa bane to aur be kai stars ka janam hua jaha alag alag parjatiya rehne lge is waqt univrse mai bus dharti aur hamara he planet esa hai jaha zindgi hai baki all planets veeraan ho chuky hen

thomas..kya mars pe be insan rehte the ya tum jese he the wo

kaal...na insan na ham jese
tum log jo ya predators ke movies banate ho na ya
realty mai mars pe rehte hen predators wo dosre jev the jo hamary bad is universe ka hisa bane lakin mars ke tabah hony ka karan be wo bane kyu aur kese ya next part mai bataoga

thomas...hmm tu tumhari ship ko dekh hamny usky jese best ships tayyar kiye hen lakin ek kami hai in mai

kaal...yahi na ke ya dharti pe to light speed se chal sakte hen lakin space mai ya esa nhi kar sakte

thomas..right to batao isky waja kaya hai

kaal...tum log inky parts dekha do mai dekho kya kya use kiya hai tum logo ne ismy

kyu ke hamary tecnology tumse 100 prcnt aagy hai tum log ya jo space mai rokets bhejte ho na salo sal ka time lga kar ham agr chahe to ya kan sirf 1 week mai kar legy kyu ke har chiz ko 100 prcnt parfect bnany mai hanary robots ka koi jawab nhi aur wo robots adhe robots hen

thoms uchal kar...u mean half robo half human..

kaal hanste hue ...half robo half alien khna ziyada sahi rhega tumhary lye

thomas....wo ham be is pr kam shuru kar chuky hen but success nhi mili ab tak

kaal ...its not easy for you coz humns body are very sansetive is lye yaha ke hisab sw 2090 tak ya possibl ho jaiga but not sure tab tak kuch bachega be yaha ya nhi

ya bol kaal uthta hai aur us kanch pe hath rakhta hai esa krte he wo kanch bilkul naram ho jata hai aur kaal usko cross kar thomas ke samny aakr khra ho jata hai

ya dekh thomas ke ankhen heraat se phate ke phate reh jate hen

kaal...cool doc cool hamen pidaishi powrs milte hen jo kafi taqtwar aur unbreakibl hote hen

thomass...thats not possibl

kaal...lets walk doc chalo mere ship mai tumhe ya sab yaken dilata hun





aaaaj ke lye itna he

next update 8 ko same time kam ka presure hai daily update nhi de pa rha upr se shadi pe shadi har dawaar attend krne prte hai coz papa ke tabiyt down hai

ok frnd enjoy and give your revo

Nice update bhai

 

[Ajay]

update 16

jafar komal aur raja is waqt ek secret place mai khre the jo zameen ke 50/ metter niche bana hua tha

wahan is waqt 3 aur log khre the
sid....weapons exprt +explosive bomb bnana aur defuse krna all time exprt
juan...swords master all type of swords knife and bladess
veena...martieal arts exprt all fights unknown lagend tequinics exprt

jafar...ya 3no tum dono ko training degy

sid...jafar kya ya log hamara tourchar seh paige kyu ke u know that inhe train krne se phle ham inka stamina inky speed inky powrs body ke lachkkkk har chix parhkhegy usky bad he ham log inhe train krna hai ya nhi decide kregy

jafar...han janta hun aur mujhe bhrosa hai ya dono apny har test mai khre utregy

juan...well see kyu ke ya ek unofficiel traning hai to mai be dekhna chahta hun kitna dum hai inho mai coz inky to abhe dudh ke dant be nhi tote hahaha

juan ne ya baat raja aur komal ke face pe expression dekhne ke lye kahi thi ke unhe gussa ata hai ya nhi lakin iska natija inhe kesa miliga ya to bad mai pta chalega jaha komal ne locket ke khne pe apna chahra sapat he rakha wahin raja ne to jese usky bat he nhi suny

veena...chalo tum dono mere sath aao

ya bol wo un dono ko sath le jany lge wo aagy the sab aur komal raja piche

komal...raja ham pe is dharti ko protect krne ke bohat bary zimidary hai hamen har kimat pe inhe apna best dena hoga tabhi ya hamwn traning degy

raja...i well give you answr after test

ya raja ne without any emotion kaha tha

locket...komal ab kuch mat bol raja ke locket ne usky mind ko unblock kr diya hai ab aai ga maza

komal...ok

wo dono ek hal mai poche jaha is waqt 4 studant traning kar rhe the 2 boys 2 girls

veena...gayz meet these new unofficiel studants raja n komal

boy 1....kamal khan...ek cool rehne wala banda har problm ko clamly handel krta bina tenshion ke boly to ek dum bindass rehne wala
boy2...sameer mahawar...wesy to inky porwaj indian the lakin batwary ke waqt inky family yaha aagye to ab ya be yahi rehte hen than ek dum body bildur banda like arbaz khan looks
girl 1...siya ek khunkhar sherni
inka gussa mtlb mout inko mardo se nafrat hai
waja aagy pata chalegy

roma...ek intelegant and very fast thinking girl...kamal ke gf be hai ya

intro ho gya ab

veena...so gayz ya dono be tumhary sath traning legy lakin inka koi record nhi hoga but us se phle inky kabiliyt check krne hai so whos want to try

kamal..mam but ham pichle 6 mounths sw train ho rhe hen aur ya new hen kya ya hamen face kr paigy

juan...well hamen dekhna hai ya tumhary samny kab tak tik sakte hen

sid...to rull sun lo
raja tum kamal pe 10/mint tak attack krogy than wo sirf defence krega aur tumhe usky defence ko obsrve krna hai 10/mint bad wo defence khtm krki hand to hand tumse fight krega

raja....i am ready

juan..bache atttitude mat dekha ya kamal hand combat mai veena ka sabsy best studant hai

raja...i well give you answr in fight

komal mann mai...bap re ya to pora he badal gya darpok se sidha angriz ke olad ban gya

locket...hayyy kitne waqt bad wo attitude dekhne ko mila hazaro sal bad be ek prcnt be uska attitude nhi badala

komal...esa na ho wo attitude usko bhare pr jai

locket....well see

sabny ek carcel bnaya
sid..raja 10 mint hen tumhary pass show krke dekhao tum kamal se ziyada powr full ho show me

veena...imposdibl hai wesy kyu ke kamal defence krte hue be kafi heavy attack krta hai kafi bar mai be chounk gye usky speed se

juan...11we mint mai fight clos hai

raja aur kamal face to face khre the

kamal...dost fikar mat kro mai ziyada heavy punch nhi kruga ya bus test hai khul kr khud ko show kru

raja...i want to see you
mujhe dekhna hai tum kya kya sikh chuky ho

kamal...mazak acha tha

raja....i well be challengd you 10/mint mai tum mujhe ek be bar punch nhi kar paoge mai bina defence ke bus tumse bachoga

kamal...gurror bohat hai tum mai

raja....khud pe bhrosa hai mujhe kya tumhe bhrosa nhi khud pe

kamal...well mere usol ya krne ke ijazat nhi dete mujhe

raja...ok to mere hits ko defence krki dekhao ab

kamal man mai...intresting confidant high level ka hai iska dekhta hun dum kitna hai is mai kya pta kuch new sikhne ko mil jai

kamal ne defence posstion le but defence kiya nhi ese he khra rha aur ungli se raja ko hit krne ka ishara kiya

raja...i love it

ya bol raja bhaga usky taraf
kamal ko lga raja jhamp mar kar kick krega lakin ya kya raja bhagta hua aaya aur jab tak kamal samaj pata raja ne sleep mar kar kamal ke pet mai ek dumdar punch jhar diya

ya unexcebl tha waha bethe sabky lye coz ya to sirf ek exprt fightr he kar sakta hai jo apna hit ka spot kuch dekhata hai lakin uska hit kahi aur hota hai

raja wahi nhi ruka kamal ke pet pe punch krne ke bad he usky dono tango ko apny tango mai phasa kar ek dum se jhatka mar kr gira diya
dhmmmmmmm ke tagre awaz ke sath kamal niche gira

raja uth kr khra hua aur kamal ke taraf apna hath barha diya
kamal ek to phle sadmy mai tha ke ek fresher ne usko just ek mint mai dhol chata de lakin phr usny raja ka hath pkra aur raja ne usko uthaya

kamal...impressive yaar bina traning ke itna fast and unblivbl attack wo be ek sath 2 bar
.raja kuch na bola...

raja...abhe 8 mint baki hen ab tum attack krogy ya nhi

kamal...ab tumny apny taqat dekhai ha to chalo ham be dekha dete hen tumhe

ya bol phr se dono fight posstion mai aai

raja ke ankhen kamal ke body ke har moment ko scane kar rhe thi like ek choti se moment be capture kr rha tha wo

kamal ne raja ke taraf jhamp ke aur jese he usko kick marne chahe raja waha se hat gya same time kamal ne raja ke pet pe punch krna chaha lakin raja back flip mar kr waha se door ho gya

ya dekh veena raja se impress ho gye the kyu ke raja jo speed aur mind abhe use kr rha tha wo uska tha he nhi lakin moments to usky he the na bus krwa locket raha tha

veena...i must say ya kafi fast hai usky eye moments dekho har choti se choti moment ko note kr rha hai wo

sid...hmmm but kamal abhe apny real powr kaha show kr rha hai he was played

udhr kamal lgatar attacks kar raha tha but ek be baar wo raja ko touch be nhi kar paya tha

raja...thak gye ho to 5 mint rest le lo i must see you are tired
Ab mr cool ka mind waqai mai angry hony lga tha aaj tak esa nhi hua tha ke koi usky samny es tarha tik pai jabky wo usko hit kar sakta ho lakin kamal pori kosish ki bad be usko chu na pai

juan...kamal only 2 mint you have

ya sun kamal...i think its over

ya bol kamal khra hua aur usny apny ankhen band ke

veena...kamal apna last war kar raha hai imposibl 6mint mai kamal apny har attack ko try kiya wo fail hua

udhr kamal ne apny ankhen band kar apny dono hath jore aur 30second bad apny ankhen kholi raja ke nazar is waqt kamal ke ankho aur lips pr the jese he usny ankhen kholi to raja ne dekha kamal wahi khra hai lakin ya ek prachin kal ki ek ese fight scale the jo hypnotic thi raja 2 second esa he lga lakin 3rd second mai raja urta hua puche deewar se ja lga

raja ko is baar jis speed se kai punch lge the usky mou mai halka khoon aagya tha usny is khoon ko thoka

raja...note bad note bad mujhe lga tha dharti pe ya sab prachin kala khtm ho gye hogy lakin aaj be yahan ya kala ya mojod hai

kamal..kyu bhai maza aaya

raja usky taraf dekh kr...tumny apna akhri attack kr liya lakin mainy to abhe fight start be nhi ke

kamal...nice joke 30 second baki hen himat hai to hit krki dekha

ya sun raja itni time mai phli baar muskuraya

usny apny ankhen bus bnd ke aur khol di aur hawa ke jhoky ke tarha kamal ke pass pocha usky samjny se phle ek punch usky jabde mai thok diya wahin apna ghutna usky pet pe jhara jesw he wo niche jhuka wohi ghutna usky mou pe jhar diya kamal flip hote hue niche ghasit.ta hua jaky diwar se takra gya

abhe jo hua wo kese ko be yakeen nhi aa rha tha tha juan sid aur veena 3no shock aur sadmy mai the ke ek new larka itna fast aur fast kese ho sakta hai

wahin kamal diwar ko tik lga kar wahin betha hua tha usky mou se khoon nikl rha tha aur uska jabra pori tarha dard kr rha tha aur wo yahi soch rha tha ya hua kya aur kese hua

sabky tantra tote komal ke awaz se

komal pass jakar raja ko galy lag gye
komal zor se...wow raja itni tagre aur fast fight phle baar dekhi real mai

raja aram se komal ke kan mai...ab hath chor be do mera hath kahi aur touch ho rha hai

komal raja ke baat nhi samjhe lakin jab usny raja ka bazo dekha to paya uska bazo komal ne apny chest se sata rakha hai
ya dekh komal ke gori gal lal tamatar jese ho gye aur usny raja ka bazo chor diya

tav tak sab sadmy se bahar aa chuky the sameer ne sahara dekr kamal ko uthaya

kamal pass aakr...man.na parega kafi dum hai tum mai

raja...khud pe bharosa ho to tum akily he har musibat se lar sakte ho har jung jit sakte ho bus kabhi piche mat hato tumhari himat he tumhara hathiyar hai tumhara bhrosa he tumhari taqat

sameer...nice yaar kafi mature lagte ho anyway can we frnd

raja...ofcourse why not and kamal sorry for these bro
kamal...no worrys mainy he kha tha tumhe kuch kar ke dekhao lakin socha nhi tha tum mujhe is tarha sarprise krogy
raja...bhrosa aur yakeen ho to sab kuch ho sakta hai

ya 3no chalkr 3no teachrs ke pass aate hen

raja ko apny pass aata dekh 3no apny discuss band krte hen

kamal..mam these gay is very tough opponent of these my intry life

veena...i musy seee to ya dekhni mai jitna masom lag rha hai uska ulta ya utna he dangrous andr se hai kyu ke mai tum dono ke fyt ke nich bus isky ankho ke moment he note kar saky baki iska face bina expression ke dekha mujhe

sid...well tumhe train krne mai maza aai ga
juan...Komal i think tum be hamen kuch sarprise zaror krogi

komal..no sir bus jo sikhe hue hun wohi show krogi

juan...wo why u wait
veena..siya u ready
siya..yes mam
ab siya aur komal aamny samny the

siya...tumhe sharam nhi aai us raja ke bazo ki sath apny chest ragrte hue

komal ya sun...ya mera matter hai teri kyu jal rhe hai

siya...ya sab mard bus aurat ki jism ke chahat rakhte hen hawasi kahi ke

komal...oye tu kisko hawasi boli

siya..sab mard jo be is duniya mai hen sath us raja ko be

ya sun komal ka dimag thnka
komal...kutiya teri himat kese hue meri raja ko hawasi bolne ke ya bol komal ne waha khre hue he hawa mai chalang mare lakim locket ke powrs ke madad se wo hawa mai he rehte hue tezi se siya ke pass aai aur ek kick usky chest pe de mare wo wahi nhi ruky hawa mai flip marte hue komal ne siya ke kandho ko pkr kr usky back pe char gye aur usky lakin ulte usny apny tange siya ke galy mai phasa kar apny hath zameen pe rakhe aur siya ko hawa mai uthate hue zor se zameen pe de mara dhmmmmmmmmmm siya ek dum canfusd ho gye the jabky wo be ek achi khasi fightr thi sath martial arts mai wo be kamal ko takar deti thi dono same to same level pe fight krte

siya niche gire to usko ahsas hua uska lift hand gya kam se kyu ke ek to komal gusse mai dosra locket powrs ke wajasy siya ke band baj gye the siya jese tese khud ko sambhalti hue uthe aur khre ho gye

komal gusse mai ....aaj khe diya dubara kabhi bhool kr be tumny raja ke khilaf ek alfaz be kaha to yaad rakhna zinda nhi chorogi tujhe

siya...mai sabit krki rhogi ke ya be sabky tarha jism ka bhooka hai

komal...agr waqai mai tujhme dum hai to sabit krki dekha de umar bhar teri kutiya banky rhogi lakin agr tu na kar pai to umar bhar tu meri kutiya banky rhegy

siya...challenge accpt

tab tak roma siya ke pass aai
roma...mam siya ka hand isolet ho gya she cant fyt more

veena...ek din mai apny 2 best studants ko 2new freshrs se mar khate hue dekha aaj pori life mai phle he din inho ne itna bara jhatka diya hai aagy pta nhi kya kya dekhna hoga

yahi khayal sid aur juan ke be dimag mai chal rhe the



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