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[Naik]

Kafi tenshion mai hun doston family probom ho gye hai jis wajasy dimag ka faluda bana pra hai ek do baar update likhne ka try kiya but focus nhi kar pa rha hun jese he problm solve hoti hai update dena start krdoga

Sorry for daillyyy dosto but is waqt mood aur dimag dono ke wat lgi hue

Okay bhaya
Koyi baat nahi
Pehle family problem solve karo for update dijiyega

 

[Xabhi]

update 29
rani...emotions agr ek baar raja ruthless ho gya to ya unstopebel hai no one can beat him

AB aagy
Ya log baat karte rhe
dosri taraf sana

lucky aur Ahmad

sana...suniye g raja ka to pata nhi chala usny rabta nhi kiya to kyu na ham bank jakar usky account se sary paise nikal le

ya sun kar sana ke shohar ahmad ko jhatka laga
kyu ke agr sana bank gye to wo sach jaan jaige aur usko pta chal jaiga ke raja paise nikal chuka hai aur tab usky sath lucky aur ahmad be the

ahmad...nhi begum wo usky amant hai jab wo ai ga khud nikal lega hamen haq nhi usky paiso ka istimal krne ka

sana...bhar mai jai wo sary zindgi guzar rhe hai is garibi mai ghar acha hai lakin mujhe aish o aram chahye jo usky paiso se he mil sakta hai ab tum sath chalo ge ya mai akily jao

ya sun ahmad man mai...(ab line pe aa rhe hai na begum paisa he sab kuch hai ab tumhe lapit leta hun)

ahmad...begum to kya tum usko mar kr be paise hasil krogi

sana...to is mai bura he kya hai usko pal pos kar bara kiya hai itna to haq banta hai na jisky jaan bachai usky jaan lene ka haq be hai hamen

ahmad...matalb tum agr wo paise nhi dega to mar dogi usko
.sana...han mar dungi jaan se aur usky paiso se baki ke zindgi aram se katogi

ahmad...begum sach mai tumhe usky paiso se he mtlb hai

sana...g aur nhi to kya bachpn se usko itna pyar se paiso ke lalch mai he diya tha na to ab wo paise hamary hen

ahmad...begum lucky aa jai phr tumhe kuch btata hun jo sun kar tum khushi se jhum jaogi

sana...kya baat hai g

ahmad...ruko zara sabar kro

sana.. Thik hai g

sana man mai(aaj tum log khud apna gunah kabol krogy aur phr tumhe ese saza dilaogi ke umar bhar jail mai rote rhogy mere raja ko mujhse chin kar tum dono ne ek maa ke dil usky armano aur usky bhrose ka khoon koya jisky saza tumhe mil jaige )

ahmad ghar se nikal gya aur sana ne apny room mai phr lucky ke room mai aur jo teesra room raja ka tha usmy be usny camra fix kr diye live recording jo sidha unka bhai dekh raja tha sath mai Ssp betha hua tha

kuch der bad lucky aur ahmad dono sath ghar mai dakhil hue

ahmad...begum raja ka room kholo waha jakar baat krte hen

sana ne room khola

room mai jate ahmad ne room ka door lock kr diya

sana...ahmad ese kya baat hai jo aapny door be lock krdiya hai

ahmad...begum ab jab tum hamary tarha paisa he chahti ho to kyu tumhe sach bata de

sana...konsa sach

lucky...mummy asal mai maine aur papa ne raja ka sara paisa bank se niklwa liya

sana chuonkty hue...lakin mere sigh ke bina ya raja ke sigh ke bina kese

ahmad...begum paise raja ne khud nikaly aur hamen de diye

sana ...kahan he wo paisa dekhao mujhe aur raja ne paisa kab diya tumhe

ahmad...pori baat to suno

sana...g bataiye

lucky. ...mummy jis din raja ko study ke lye bahar jana tha aur usy din ham usko behla fusla kar bank le gye aur us se sary paise niklwa liye

phr lucky utha aur raja ke bed ke niche se ek soutcase nikala jo paiso se bhara hua tha

sana...ya paise yahan kese aai ya room to lock rehta hai chabi mere pass hoti hai

ahmad...jis din ham ne paise nikaly raat ko chabi utha kar hamny ya paise yaha rakh diye taky agr kal ko koi masla ho to hampy shak na jai kesi ka

sana...konsa masla

ahmad...asal mai raja se paise lene ke bad maine aur lucky ne usko berehmi se mar kar nadi mai phek diya tha agr usky lash milte to mamla bigr jata is lye hamny paise yaha rakh diye lakin aaj tak usky lash nhi mili na koi police karwai hue to ab ham mazy se usky paiso pe aish kregy


bus ya sun sana ke dil ne khoon ke anso rona shuru kr diye the

udhar...
ssp...sir inho ne apna jurm kabol kr liya hai ab inhe arrest krte hen aur ya recording be hai to ya kese be surat mai nhi bach sakte ab

mamu...inho ne mere bete ko mara inhe court mai paish hone se phle itna tarpao ke ya chikh chikh kar sirf mout ke saza mangy sirf mout ke

ssp...esa he hoga ab chaliye

udhr...

lucky...mummy apko pata hai raja dekhne mai to aam larka tha lakin usmy taqat achi khasi thi kai bar uspy war krne ke bad jakar wo gira jabky mai to ek war mai he dher ho jao

ahmad...chalo ab ya baat khtm kro ab ham teeno mil kar aish krte hen kyu begum

sana jo itni der se chup chap inky baten sun rhe thi ab uska sabar jawab de gya

sana gusse mai....lucky tuny aur tere baap ne jo gunah kiya hai ab usky saza miligy tumhe zindgi mout se batar ho jaigy tum dono ke ab

achanak sana ka badla hua roop dekh dono ke hosh ur gye

ahmad...kya bol rhe ho sana pagal ho gye ho kya tum be to usko mar kr paisa hasil krna chahti thi

sana...thooooo hai is paise pe jo ek maa ko apny bete ka khoon krne ke lye ukhsai
are itni din se mai ya sab is lye boli taki tum dono apna jurm kabol kro aur mai tum dono ko saza dilwao mere bete ke khoon krne ke

ya sun lucky aur ahmad ke fus ur gya lakin ahmad ek lalchi aur kamina insan tha

ahmad...begum ya acha hua tumny abhi apna mou khol diya ab tere lash be kabhi kesi ko nhi miligy jese raja ke nhi mili

sana.. To mera be khoon krogy tum dono


lucky . ....mummy sorry lakin papa sahi bol rhe hen hamen aish krne hai jail mai nhi sarna aur ham azadi se tabhi jee paigy jab apko mar kar gayab kregy

ya bol achank lucky ne takiya utha liya

ahmad...waah beta aaj yakeen ho gya tu mera he beta hai

ahmad ne sana ke hath pakar liye aur bed pr gira diya

lucky ne takiya sana ke mou pe rakh diya aur dabany laga

tabhi dhmmmmmmm se room ka door khula aur mamu tezi se andr aai aur dono ke gaden se pakar kr unka sir deewar mai marne lagy

mamu...kutto kamino mere bete raja ko mar kr dil nhi bhara ke ab mere pyari se bhn ko marne chale the aJ zinda nhi choroga tum logo ko

piche police wale be aagye lakin mamu gusee mai pagal ho chuky the unho ne unka sir deewar mai tab tak marte rhe jab tak wo dono behosh na ho gye ssp ne aagy barh kr unhe bary mushkil se roka

ssp...bhai jaan apny bhn ko dekhiye inhe to ab mai police stetion mai bataoga uthao in dono ko aur le chalo thane

mamu ne khud ko sambhala aur sana ke pass gye

mammu...mere bhn to thik to hai na

sana rote hue...bhai ya log insan nhi darinde hen darinde raja ko inho ne sach mai mar diya ya bol wo zor zor se rony lagi

mammu...bhn kismat mai jo likha ho koi nhi mita sakta ssp ko maine bol diya hai inse poche ke kis nadi se inho ne raja ko pheka tha phr wahan se ham har jaga aur aas pass ke gaon mai poch kach kregy agr wahan raja ke lash na mili to phr samjho hamara raja zinda hai is lye himat mat haro samjhi

sana...kya ya mumkin hai bhai

mammu...jisky sir pe tujh jese pyari maa ka saya ho mout usko chu to sakte hai lakin aany ke lye usko tere ijazat chahye hogi upar wala ek maa ka dil tabhi dukhata hai jab koi maa dosro ke bacho ke zindgi khrab krti hai lakin tuny to hamisha dosro ke bacho ko apna mana hai to pagli tere goud ko suna kese kar sakta hai uperwala

sana.. Bus mera raja sahi salamt ho jaha be ho mujhe us se milna hai yahi dua krti ho mujhe mout aajai usky zindgi ke badly

mammu...chup kr kuch be bolti hai dekhna raja ke zinda hony ka koi na koi sabut zaror miliga uperwale pe bhrosa rakh

sana...mere to har dua apny bete raja ke lye he hai lot aa bete jaha be hai to teri ami bohat yaad kr rhi hai tujhe


idhar ya sab baat kr rhe the ke raja achank chekhhhhh utha

ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiii

ya sun sab raja ke taraf bhagy

komal raja ke pass jakar...raja raja kya hua thik ho na tum bolo kya hua

raja ne ek dum komal ko dhaka de diya wo gir jate agr rani na khri hoti piche

raja...kon ho aap log aur mai yaha kya kar raha hun aur aap mera name kese jante ho

ek boooommmmmmmm phora raja ne sabky uprrrrrrrrr








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Jabardast superb update bhai sandar beautiful

 

[Xabhi]

Xabhi bhai kaha ho

Bhai Ghar me cold war Chal rha hai jiske chalte tenson me hu pr wakt milte hi hajir Ho jaya karunga...

 

[Bilal jan]

Kafi tenshion mai hun doston family probom ho gye hai jis wajasy dimag ka faluda bana pra hai ek do baar update likhne ka try kiya but focus nhi kar pa rha hun jese he problm solve hoti hai update dena start krdoga

Sorry for daillyyy dosto but is waqt mood aur dimag dono ke wat lgi hue

Ok bhai intzar rahe ga

 

[LionHeart007]

Kafi tenshion mai hun doston family probom ho gye hai jis wajasy dimag ka faluda bana pra hai ek do baar update likhne ka try kiya but focus nhi kar pa rha hun jese he problm solve hoti hai update dena start krdoga

Sorry for daillyyy dosto but is waqt mood aur dimag dono ke wat lgi hue

Koi nahi yrrrr mujhe laga hi tha shayad koi problem na huiii ho isiii liye mene bola tha ke agr koi issue hai to bata den is se ye hoga ke Eak to sab baar baar bolenge nahi ya kuch bhi nahi sochenge aur Dusra ye ke apko pray bhi mil jaigii ke apki jo bhi problem hai eo jaldi se solve ho jai aur ap pehle ke jese fit & fine ho jain.

 

[Tiger 786]

Kafi tenshion mai hun doston family probom ho gye hai jis wajasy dimag ka faluda bana pra hai ek do baar update likhne ka try kiya but focus nhi kar pa rha hun jese he problm solve hoti hai update dena start krdoga

Sorry for daillyyy dosto but is waqt mood aur dimag dono ke wat lgi hue

Ok bro take ur time

 

[Bilal jan]

Waiting for next update

 

[Bilal jan]

Waiting for next update

 

[Bilal jan]

Bhai next update kab tak aaye ga

 

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