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idhar ya sab baat kr rhe the ke raja achank chekhhhhh utha

ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiii

ya sun sab raja ke taraf bhagy

komal raja ke pass jakar...raja raja kya hua thik ho na tum bolo kya hua

raja ne ek dum komal ko dhaka de diya wo gir jate agr rani na khri hoti piche

raja...kon ho aap log aur mai yaha kya kar raha hun aur aap mera name kese jante ho

ek boooommmmmmmm phora raja ne sabky uprrrrrrrrr

ab aagy
after one mounth

USA
area 51
pichle 1 mahine se thomas aur kaal ek project per kam kar rhe the jo bohat he advance tha

thomas...kaal akhir ya tum banwa kaya rhe ho ya to batao 1 mahine se tumse rozana poch poch kr thak chuka hun ab mai

kaal....dekho doc tumny wada kiya tha tum mere madad krogy aur mai tumhari but tumny ya wada nhi liya tha ke mai jo be banaoga tumhe usky details dunga

thomas ya sunky gusse mai
thomas...kaal bhulo mat agr tum zinda ho to sirf mere badolat

kaal...janta hun aur is lye he tum ab tak zinda ho

thomas...dhamki nahe do to accha hai aur ya batao ya akhir hai kya

kaal...okay ya ek ese machine hai joky jab hamary king winsho yaha aai ge to unko 5 din ismy rakhegy kyu ke ham dreds to har nature mai ghul mil jate hen lakin king winsho ko yaha adjust krne ke lye yaha ke hawa mai sans lene kw lye 5 din ismy rehna hoga usky bad wo yaha sabkuch aam tarha se kar paige aur unky powrs dubal ho jaige ya idea unho ne msg ke zariye mujhe diya hai

thomas ya sunker shock ho gya aur kuch soch kr usny kaal se pocha

thomas...to kya is machine mai agr main reh lo to kya mai spice mai bina oxcygen ke zinda reh sakta hun

kaal...han lakin us se phle tumhe khud mai ek zinda dred ka DNA particals inject krne hogy usky bad 1 mahina is mai rehne ke bad tum spice mai aram se reh sakty bina oxcygen ke

thomass khushi se uchal para
thomas....wow kaal tum waqai kamal ho yaar

kaal..abhi tumny kuch be nhi dekha jald se jald isko complet krne mai mere madad kro

thomas khushi khushi lag gya wo kam krne mai

dosri taraf

ek larka sukoon se apny bister pr soya hua tha subha ka waqt tha us larke ke chehre pe duniya bhar ke masomiyat barhpa the koi dekhe to bus us masomiyat mai kho jai

itne mai room ka door khula aur ek aurat andr aai usky ek hath mai tray the jismy dodh ka glass aur dry fruits the

usny wo tray tabil pe rakha aur bed pr beth gye wo larka ab be sakoon se so rha tha

aurat...apny nhi ho phr be apno se barh kr ho tum mere lal is duniya se najany kab waqif hoga tu ya log tere is acchai aur masomiyat ka bus faida uthaigy

phr wo aagy barhe aur larke ke sar pe kiss ke aur usky balo mai ungliya pherne lagi

huuuuuuuuuu ammmi sony do na

aurat...mera pyara beta uth jaa na ab dekh mamu ne bulaya hai unky waha jaana hai

larke ne ab be ankh nhi kholi the

larka...ami wo to duphir ko jana hai abhi aap be aao so jate he
ya ruko mai apky godh mai so jata hun
ya bol usny kalti mare aur apna sar aurat ke godh mai rakh diya aur bina kuch boly aram krne lag gya

aurat man mai...kab bara hoga tu raja mere bache abhi be bachpana nhi gya tera mera pyara bacha

(g han ya aur koi nhi sana the raja ke step mom and wo larka raja hai)note absy sana ko ami likhoga)))))

itne mai bahar door ke bell baje

ami...raja mai dekh kr aati ho kon aaya hai

raja ne chup chap apna sar utha liya aur takye pe let gya

ami ne jab door khola to samny khre logo ko dekh wo heraan ho gye

samny is waqt kafi log khre the
8 mard 8 girls

ami...g aap log kon aur kis se milna hai aap logo ko

ek admi samny aaya
ami usko kafi gour se dekh rhe the jese kuch yaad krne ke kosish kr rhe ho aur jesy unko kuch yaad aaya
aur ami ko jhatka laga zor ka unho ne kas kar door ko pakar liya

ami... bhai aap zinda ho
aur ami ke ankho se anso behne lage
uncal ne agy barh unko gale se laga liya

uncal ke be ankho se anso beh rhe the lakin piche khre sab log canfused the

ami...rote hue
bhai bus khabar aai the ke aap log sab mare gye ho sary family khatam ho gye yaha tak ke ya kha gya lash tak nhi mili bus ek nanhe se jaan mere hatho mai sunp de gye the

uncal..bahen chup ho jao dekho piche sab parishan khre hen

ami ne be ab dhiyaan diya sab log abhi be door pe he khre hen

ami...aaye sab andr aakar bethye

sab andr aai aur jisko jaha jaga mile wo beth gya

ami...aap log betho mai khany pine ka intzam krti ho

uncal...behna taklif mat kro ham sab nashta krke aai hen aao betho yaha ham sab tumse bohat zarori baat krne aai hen


Ya sab jabsy ghar mai dakhil hue the 4 ankhen lagatar ghar mai kuch dhondh rhe the lakin unko abhi tak shayad wo nhi dekha tha jo wo dhondh rhe thi

ami..ese kese bhai itne sal bet gye aaj aap mile ho ese thory chalega aapsy ziyada mai bechain hun sab janny ke lye lakin in mehmano ka be khayal rakhna hai

uncal...behna yahi to btana chahta hun ya sab kon hen aur yahan kyu aai hen ya sun lo

ami...thik hai bhai bus mai phone krki mangwa leti ho phr bat krte hen

ya bol ami raja ke room mai aai jo abhi be befikar soya hua tha

ami...raja beta uth dekh mere bhai jinka maine btaya tha tumhe wo aai he wo zinda hen aue kai log be aai hen unky sath

ya sun raja jhamp mar kr utha

raja ....kya wohi Jo USA mai the

ami khushi se...han wohi beta ab jaldi uth tayyar hokar niche aai

raja....ami mera sut nikalo mai 5 mint mai aaya

ya bol wo ghuss gya washroom

ami...ya be pora pagal hai

ya bol ami ne raja ke pent shirt nikale aur phone karki bahar aai

ami..ayub bhai ab bataiye itna time wo khabar aur ya sab kya hai

(g han ya rani ke uncal ayub khan hen)
ayub...behna lambi story hai raat mai bataoga abhi tum in sabsy milo

jafar..inko he raja mila tha zakhmi halat mai inky wajasy he wo aaj dubara tumhary pass hai

ya sun ami uthe aur jafar ke samny jaky hath jor diye
ami..kis tarha shukhriya ada kro mai apka bhai

jafar ne ami ke hath pakar liye

jafar...ab jab bhai bol diya hai to ya be pata hoga behne bhai ke samny hath nhi jorte kabhi na unka sukhriya aada krte hen

ya sun ami ke ankho me anso aany lage

ami..najane konsa acha kam kiya tha maine jo itne waqt bad aaj ek bhai jisko mara hua samaj bethe the wo lot aaya aur ek aur bhai mil gya ya bol ami jafar ke gale lg gye

jafar ne ami ke sar pe hath rakha
jafar...na bahen roo mat bus chup bura waqt guzar gya ab aany wale waqt mai jo sath hen unky sath in palo ko jiyo

ayub...sana ab insy milo
juan
sid
kamal
sameer
jhon
luffy

girls
veena
rani
komal
juli
lara
sumi
roma
siya

aur usky bad raja ke milne se raja ke last fight tak ke sary story short out mai ami ko batai gye

lakin story start hote he piche se raja be aagya tha aur usny sab kuch sun liya
jesy he ayub chup hua sabny piche dekha raja khara hua tha

lakin usky chehre pe kai tarha ke expression the

ami uthe aur raja ka hath pakar liya aur usko apny sath sofe pe bethaya

ami...raja kaya ya sab sach hai jo ya sab bol rhe hen

raja sabky taraf dekhne laga achanak usky nazar 2 chehro pe theher gye

ek rani
dosri komal
lakin dono ko ignor kr usny jawab diya


raja...i dont know ami ya sab kya hai aap janti hen ke mujhe fight aati he nhi na maine ab tak kabhi kesi se fight ke yaha tak ke mai kai baar larko se college mai mar khakar zakhmi halat mai ghar aaya hun

ami be raja ke jawab se agree the bachpn se raja deccent boy rha kabhi be usny kese ko koi chot nhi pochai khud mar kha leta but marta nhi tha

ami...lakin beta jab apky memory lose hue to usky bad aap inky sath the aur ya sab tabhi hua esa in sabka bolna hai

raja...ami agr esa hai jo mujhe kuch yaad nhi aa rha

komal se ab bardasht nhi ho rha tha raja ka yun ignor krna

komal uthe aur aakar raja ka hath pakar liya

komal...tu tumhe yaad nhi hai kuch be right

raja ne ek pal komal ko dekha aur nazreen chura kar

raja...of course mujhe yaad nhi hai kuch be

komal....okay fine to ab dekho kaya krti ho mai

ya bol komal ne raja ke shirt ko pkr kr khicha aur shrt ke batton tot gye raja ka locket show ho gya komal ne bina der kiye apna locket raja ke locket se jor diya
dhammmmmmmmm ek bijliiiiiiiiiiiii karki aasman mai ek dum se pora asmaaan kale baddlo se dhakkkkk gya tezzzz hawai chalne lagi

raja aur komal dono urte hue door jaa gireeeee jaha komal ko girne se sumi ne bacha liya wohi raja jo ura tha waha sabky nazar gye to sabky hosh ur gye

kyu ke waha kuch be nhi utha
raja gayab ho chuka tha aasman mai lal bijliya zor shor se chamak rhe thi



aaaaj ke lye itna he

barish ke wajasy kafi late ho gya but ab update post krne ke bad sou ga
keep supporting doston

next update soon
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Awesome update bhai keep posting
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Zabardast Update Rajaa the King Bhai







Maza Aagaya
Thank you
Well well kaafi interesting tha ye update specially ending ayub k aane ke baad se maza aaya ,han utna lamba update nhi tha but after a long time something is better than nothing, to umeed hai ke aage aur bhi lambe update dekhne ko milenge. Next update ka intezaar rhe gaa.
Best of luck 👍 for everything bro ☺️.
Bus bro come back try kiya hai dekhta hun aap logo ko kitna pasand aata hai dubara story pe phle wale pakar bnany mai kuch time lege ga

you know ke jo halat mere sath chal rhe in mai easy nhi hai ek jaga focus krna
But i try my best all of you doston
 

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idhar ya sab baat kr rhe the ke raja achank chekhhhhh utha

ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiii

ya sun sab raja ke taraf bhagy

komal raja ke pass jakar...raja raja kya hua thik ho na tum bolo kya hua

raja ne ek dum komal ko dhaka de diya wo gir jate agr rani na khri hoti piche

raja...kon ho aap log aur mai yaha kya kar raha hun aur aap mera name kese jante ho

ek boooommmmmmmm phora raja ne sabky uprrrrrrrrr

ab aagy
after one mounth

USA
area 51
pichle 1 mahine se thomas aur kaal ek project per kam kar rhe the jo bohat he advance tha

thomas...kaal akhir ya tum banwa kaya rhe ho ya to batao 1 mahine se tumse rozana poch poch kr thak chuka hun ab mai

kaal....dekho doc tumny wada kiya tha tum mere madad krogy aur mai tumhari but tumny ya wada nhi liya tha ke mai jo be banaoga tumhe usky details dunga

thomas ya sunky gusse mai
thomas...kaal bhulo mat agr tum zinda ho to sirf mere badolat

kaal...janta hun aur is lye he tum ab tak zinda ho

thomas...dhamki nahe do to accha hai aur ya batao ya akhir hai kya

kaal...okay ya ek ese machine hai joky jab hamary king winsho yaha aai ge to unko 5 din ismy rakhegy kyu ke ham dreds to har nature mai ghul mil jate hen lakin king winsho ko yaha adjust krne ke lye yaha ke hawa mai sans lene kw lye 5 din ismy rehna hoga usky bad wo yaha sabkuch aam tarha se kar paige aur unky powrs dubal ho jaige ya idea unho ne msg ke zariye mujhe diya hai

thomas ya sunker shock ho gya aur kuch soch kr usny kaal se pocha

thomas...to kya is machine mai agr main reh lo to kya mai spice mai bina oxcygen ke zinda reh sakta hun

kaal...han lakin us se phle tumhe khud mai ek zinda dred ka DNA particals inject krne hogy usky bad 1 mahina is mai rehne ke bad tum spice mai aram se reh sakty bina oxcygen ke

thomass khushi se uchal para
thomas....wow kaal tum waqai kamal ho yaar

kaal..abhi tumny kuch be nhi dekha jald se jald isko complet krne mai mere madad kro

thomas khushi khushi lag gya wo kam krne mai

dosri taraf

ek larka sukoon se apny bister pr soya hua tha subha ka waqt tha us larke ke chehre pe duniya bhar ke masomiyat barhpa the koi dekhe to bus us masomiyat mai kho jai

itne mai room ka door khula aur ek aurat andr aai usky ek hath mai tray the jismy dodh ka glass aur dry fruits the

usny wo tray tabil pe rakha aur bed pr beth gye wo larka ab be sakoon se so rha tha

aurat...apny nhi ho phr be apno se barh kr ho tum mere lal is duniya se najany kab waqif hoga tu ya log tere is acchai aur masomiyat ka bus faida uthaigy

phr wo aagy barhe aur larke ke sar pe kiss ke aur usky balo mai ungliya pherne lagi

huuuuuuuuuu ammmi sony do na

aurat...mera pyara beta uth jaa na ab dekh mamu ne bulaya hai unky waha jaana hai

larke ne ab be ankh nhi kholi the

larka...ami wo to duphir ko jana hai abhi aap be aao so jate he
ya ruko mai apky godh mai so jata hun
ya bol usny kalti mare aur apna sar aurat ke godh mai rakh diya aur bina kuch boly aram krne lag gya

aurat man mai...kab bara hoga tu raja mere bache abhi be bachpana nhi gya tera mera pyara bacha

(g han ya aur koi nhi sana the raja ke step mom and wo larka raja hai)note absy sana ko ami likhoga)))))

itne mai bahar door ke bell baje

ami...raja mai dekh kr aati ho kon aaya hai

raja ne chup chap apna sar utha liya aur takye pe let gya

ami ne jab door khola to samny khre logo ko dekh wo heraan ho gye

samny is waqt kafi log khre the
8 mard 8 girls

ami...g aap log kon aur kis se milna hai aap logo ko

ek admi samny aaya
ami usko kafi gour se dekh rhe the jese kuch yaad krne ke kosish kr rhe ho aur jesy unko kuch yaad aaya
aur ami ko jhatka laga zor ka unho ne kas kar door ko pakar liya

ami... bhai aap zinda ho
aur ami ke ankho se anso behne lage
uncal ne agy barh unko gale se laga liya

uncal ke be ankho se anso beh rhe the lakin piche khre sab log canfused the

ami...rote hue
bhai bus khabar aai the ke aap log sab mare gye ho sary family khatam ho gye yaha tak ke ya kha gya lash tak nhi mili bus ek nanhe se jaan mere hatho mai sunp de gye the

uncal..bahen chup ho jao dekho piche sab parishan khre hen

ami ne be ab dhiyaan diya sab log abhi be door pe he khre hen

ami...aaye sab andr aakar bethye

sab andr aai aur jisko jaha jaga mile wo beth gya

ami...aap log betho mai khany pine ka intzam krti ho

uncal...behna taklif mat kro ham sab nashta krke aai hen aao betho yaha ham sab tumse bohat zarori baat krne aai hen


Ya sab jabsy ghar mai dakhil hue the 4 ankhen lagatar ghar mai kuch dhondh rhe the lakin unko abhi tak shayad wo nhi dekha tha jo wo dhondh rhe thi

ami..ese kese bhai itne sal bet gye aaj aap mile ho ese thory chalega aapsy ziyada mai bechain hun sab janny ke lye lakin in mehmano ka be khayal rakhna hai

uncal...behna yahi to btana chahta hun ya sab kon hen aur yahan kyu aai hen ya sun lo

ami...thik hai bhai bus mai phone krki mangwa leti ho phr bat krte hen

ya bol ami raja ke room mai aai jo abhi be befikar soya hua tha

ami...raja beta uth dekh mere bhai jinka maine btaya tha tumhe wo aai he wo zinda hen aue kai log be aai hen unky sath

ya sun raja jhamp mar kr utha

raja ....kya wohi Jo USA mai the

ami khushi se...han wohi beta ab jaldi uth tayyar hokar niche aai

raja....ami mera sut nikalo mai 5 mint mai aaya

ya bol wo ghuss gya washroom

ami...ya be pora pagal hai

ya bol ami ne raja ke pent shirt nikale aur phone karki bahar aai

ami..ayub bhai ab bataiye itna time wo khabar aur ya sab kya hai

(g han ya rani ke uncal ayub khan hen)
ayub...behna lambi story hai raat mai bataoga abhi tum in sabsy milo

jafar..inko he raja mila tha zakhmi halat mai inky wajasy he wo aaj dubara tumhary pass hai

ya sun ami uthe aur jafar ke samny jaky hath jor diye
ami..kis tarha shukhriya ada kro mai apka bhai

jafar ne ami ke hath pakar liye

jafar...ab jab bhai bol diya hai to ya be pata hoga behne bhai ke samny hath nhi jorte kabhi na unka sukhriya aada krte hen

ya sun ami ke ankho me anso aany lage

ami..najane konsa acha kam kiya tha maine jo itne waqt bad aaj ek bhai jisko mara hua samaj bethe the wo lot aaya aur ek aur bhai mil gya ya bol ami jafar ke gale lg gye

jafar ne ami ke sar pe hath rakha
jafar...na bahen roo mat bus chup bura waqt guzar gya ab aany wale waqt mai jo sath hen unky sath in palo ko jiyo

ayub...sana ab insy milo
juan
sid
kamal
sameer
jhon
luffy

girls
veena
rani
komal
juli
lara
sumi
roma
siya

aur usky bad raja ke milne se raja ke last fight tak ke sary story short out mai ami ko batai gye

lakin story start hote he piche se raja be aagya tha aur usny sab kuch sun liya
jesy he ayub chup hua sabny piche dekha raja khara hua tha

lakin usky chehre pe kai tarha ke expression the

ami uthe aur raja ka hath pakar liya aur usko apny sath sofe pe bethaya

ami...raja kaya ya sab sach hai jo ya sab bol rhe hen

raja sabky taraf dekhne laga achanak usky nazar 2 chehro pe theher gye

ek rani
dosri komal
lakin dono ko ignor kr usny jawab diya


raja...i dont know ami ya sab kya hai aap janti hen ke mujhe fight aati he nhi na maine ab tak kabhi kesi se fight ke yaha tak ke mai kai baar larko se college mai mar khakar zakhmi halat mai ghar aaya hun

ami be raja ke jawab se agree the bachpn se raja deccent boy rha kabhi be usny kese ko koi chot nhi pochai khud mar kha leta but marta nhi tha

ami...lakin beta jab apky memory lose hue to usky bad aap inky sath the aur ya sab tabhi hua esa in sabka bolna hai

raja...ami agr esa hai jo mujhe kuch yaad nhi aa rha

komal se ab bardasht nhi ho rha tha raja ka yun ignor krna

komal uthe aur aakar raja ka hath pakar liya

komal...tu tumhe yaad nhi hai kuch be right

raja ne ek pal komal ko dekha aur nazreen chura kar

raja...of course mujhe yaad nhi hai kuch be

komal....okay fine to ab dekho kaya krti ho mai

ya bol komal ne raja ke shirt ko pkr kr khicha aur shrt ke batton tot gye raja ka locket show ho gya komal ne bina der kiye apna locket raja ke locket se jor diya
dhammmmmmmmm ek bijliiiiiiiiiiiii karki aasman mai ek dum se pora asmaaan kale baddlo se dhakkkkk gya tezzzz hawai chalne lagi

raja aur komal dono urte hue door jaa gireeeee jaha komal ko girne se sumi ne bacha liya wohi raja jo ura tha waha sabky nazar gye to sabky hosh ur gye

kyu ke waha kuch be nhi utha
raja gayab ho chuka tha aasman mai lal bijliya zor shor se chamak rhe thi



aaaaj ke lye itna he

barish ke wajasy kafi late ho gya but ab update post krne ke bad sou ga
keep supporting doston

next update soon
Superb update
 
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Next update kb de rhe bhai
Bhai apny is update ka riwo nhi diya aur new update ka poch rhe
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idhar ya sab baat kr rhe the ke raja achank chekhhhhh utha

ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiii

ya sun sab raja ke taraf bhagy

komal raja ke pass jakar...raja raja kya hua thik ho na tum bolo kya hua

raja ne ek dum komal ko dhaka de diya wo gir jate agr rani na khri hoti piche

raja...kon ho aap log aur mai yaha kya kar raha hun aur aap mera name kese jante ho

ek boooommmmmmmm phora raja ne sabky uprrrrrrrrr

ab aagy
after one mounth

USA
area 51
pichle 1 mahine se thomas aur kaal ek project per kam kar rhe the jo bohat he advance tha

thomas...kaal akhir ya tum banwa kaya rhe ho ya to batao 1 mahine se tumse rozana poch poch kr thak chuka hun ab mai

kaal....dekho doc tumny wada kiya tha tum mere madad krogy aur mai tumhari but tumny ya wada nhi liya tha ke mai jo be banaoga tumhe usky details dunga

thomas ya sunky gusse mai
thomas...kaal bhulo mat agr tum zinda ho to sirf mere badolat

kaal...janta hun aur is lye he tum ab tak zinda ho

thomas...dhamki nahe do to accha hai aur ya batao ya akhir hai kya

kaal...okay ya ek ese machine hai joky jab hamary king winsho yaha aai ge to unko 5 din ismy rakhegy kyu ke ham dreds to har nature mai ghul mil jate hen lakin king winsho ko yaha adjust krne ke lye yaha ke hawa mai sans lene kw lye 5 din ismy rehna hoga usky bad wo yaha sabkuch aam tarha se kar paige aur unky powrs dubal ho jaige ya idea unho ne msg ke zariye mujhe diya hai

thomas ya sunker shock ho gya aur kuch soch kr usny kaal se pocha

thomas...to kya is machine mai agr main reh lo to kya mai spice mai bina oxcygen ke zinda reh sakta hun

kaal...han lakin us se phle tumhe khud mai ek zinda dred ka DNA particals inject krne hogy usky bad 1 mahina is mai rehne ke bad tum spice mai aram se reh sakty bina oxcygen ke

thomass khushi se uchal para
thomas....wow kaal tum waqai kamal ho yaar

kaal..abhi tumny kuch be nhi dekha jald se jald isko complet krne mai mere madad kro

thomas khushi khushi lag gya wo kam krne mai

dosri taraf

ek larka sukoon se apny bister pr soya hua tha subha ka waqt tha us larke ke chehre pe duniya bhar ke masomiyat barhpa the koi dekhe to bus us masomiyat mai kho jai

itne mai room ka door khula aur ek aurat andr aai usky ek hath mai tray the jismy dodh ka glass aur dry fruits the

usny wo tray tabil pe rakha aur bed pr beth gye wo larka ab be sakoon se so rha tha

aurat...apny nhi ho phr be apno se barh kr ho tum mere lal is duniya se najany kab waqif hoga tu ya log tere is acchai aur masomiyat ka bus faida uthaigy

phr wo aagy barhe aur larke ke sar pe kiss ke aur usky balo mai ungliya pherne lagi

huuuuuuuuuu ammmi sony do na

aurat...mera pyara beta uth jaa na ab dekh mamu ne bulaya hai unky waha jaana hai

larke ne ab be ankh nhi kholi the

larka...ami wo to duphir ko jana hai abhi aap be aao so jate he
ya ruko mai apky godh mai so jata hun
ya bol usny kalti mare aur apna sar aurat ke godh mai rakh diya aur bina kuch boly aram krne lag gya

aurat man mai...kab bara hoga tu raja mere bache abhi be bachpana nhi gya tera mera pyara bacha

(g han ya aur koi nhi sana the raja ke step mom and wo larka raja hai)note absy sana ko ami likhoga)))))

itne mai bahar door ke bell baje

ami...raja mai dekh kr aati ho kon aaya hai

raja ne chup chap apna sar utha liya aur takye pe let gya

ami ne jab door khola to samny khre logo ko dekh wo heraan ho gye

samny is waqt kafi log khre the
8 mard 8 girls

ami...g aap log kon aur kis se milna hai aap logo ko

ek admi samny aaya
ami usko kafi gour se dekh rhe the jese kuch yaad krne ke kosish kr rhe ho aur jesy unko kuch yaad aaya
aur ami ko jhatka laga zor ka unho ne kas kar door ko pakar liya

ami... bhai aap zinda ho
aur ami ke ankho se anso behne lage
uncal ne agy barh unko gale se laga liya

uncal ke be ankho se anso beh rhe the lakin piche khre sab log canfused the

ami...rote hue
bhai bus khabar aai the ke aap log sab mare gye ho sary family khatam ho gye yaha tak ke ya kha gya lash tak nhi mili bus ek nanhe se jaan mere hatho mai sunp de gye the

uncal..bahen chup ho jao dekho piche sab parishan khre hen

ami ne be ab dhiyaan diya sab log abhi be door pe he khre hen

ami...aaye sab andr aakar bethye

sab andr aai aur jisko jaha jaga mile wo beth gya

ami...aap log betho mai khany pine ka intzam krti ho

uncal...behna taklif mat kro ham sab nashta krke aai hen aao betho yaha ham sab tumse bohat zarori baat krne aai hen


Ya sab jabsy ghar mai dakhil hue the 4 ankhen lagatar ghar mai kuch dhondh rhe the lakin unko abhi tak shayad wo nhi dekha tha jo wo dhondh rhe thi

ami..ese kese bhai itne sal bet gye aaj aap mile ho ese thory chalega aapsy ziyada mai bechain hun sab janny ke lye lakin in mehmano ka be khayal rakhna hai

uncal...behna yahi to btana chahta hun ya sab kon hen aur yahan kyu aai hen ya sun lo

ami...thik hai bhai bus mai phone krki mangwa leti ho phr bat krte hen

ya bol ami raja ke room mai aai jo abhi be befikar soya hua tha

ami...raja beta uth dekh mere bhai jinka maine btaya tha tumhe wo aai he wo zinda hen aue kai log be aai hen unky sath

ya sun raja jhamp mar kr utha

raja ....kya wohi Jo USA mai the

ami khushi se...han wohi beta ab jaldi uth tayyar hokar niche aai

raja....ami mera sut nikalo mai 5 mint mai aaya

ya bol wo ghuss gya washroom

ami...ya be pora pagal hai

ya bol ami ne raja ke pent shirt nikale aur phone karki bahar aai

ami..ayub bhai ab bataiye itna time wo khabar aur ya sab kya hai

(g han ya rani ke uncal ayub khan hen)
ayub...behna lambi story hai raat mai bataoga abhi tum in sabsy milo

jafar..inko he raja mila tha zakhmi halat mai inky wajasy he wo aaj dubara tumhary pass hai

ya sun ami uthe aur jafar ke samny jaky hath jor diye
ami..kis tarha shukhriya ada kro mai apka bhai

jafar ne ami ke hath pakar liye

jafar...ab jab bhai bol diya hai to ya be pata hoga behne bhai ke samny hath nhi jorte kabhi na unka sukhriya aada krte hen

ya sun ami ke ankho me anso aany lage

ami..najane konsa acha kam kiya tha maine jo itne waqt bad aaj ek bhai jisko mara hua samaj bethe the wo lot aaya aur ek aur bhai mil gya ya bol ami jafar ke gale lg gye

jafar ne ami ke sar pe hath rakha
jafar...na bahen roo mat bus chup bura waqt guzar gya ab aany wale waqt mai jo sath hen unky sath in palo ko jiyo

ayub...sana ab insy milo
juan
sid
kamal
sameer
jhon
luffy

girls
veena
rani
komal
juli
lara
sumi
roma
siya

aur usky bad raja ke milne se raja ke last fight tak ke sary story short out mai ami ko batai gye

lakin story start hote he piche se raja be aagya tha aur usny sab kuch sun liya
jesy he ayub chup hua sabny piche dekha raja khara hua tha

lakin usky chehre pe kai tarha ke expression the

ami uthe aur raja ka hath pakar liya aur usko apny sath sofe pe bethaya

ami...raja kaya ya sab sach hai jo ya sab bol rhe hen

raja sabky taraf dekhne laga achanak usky nazar 2 chehro pe theher gye

ek rani
dosri komal
lakin dono ko ignor kr usny jawab diya


raja...i dont know ami ya sab kya hai aap janti hen ke mujhe fight aati he nhi na maine ab tak kabhi kesi se fight ke yaha tak ke mai kai baar larko se college mai mar khakar zakhmi halat mai ghar aaya hun

ami be raja ke jawab se agree the bachpn se raja deccent boy rha kabhi be usny kese ko koi chot nhi pochai khud mar kha leta but marta nhi tha

ami...lakin beta jab apky memory lose hue to usky bad aap inky sath the aur ya sab tabhi hua esa in sabka bolna hai

raja...ami agr esa hai jo mujhe kuch yaad nhi aa rha

komal se ab bardasht nhi ho rha tha raja ka yun ignor krna

komal uthe aur aakar raja ka hath pakar liya

komal...tu tumhe yaad nhi hai kuch be right

raja ne ek pal komal ko dekha aur nazreen chura kar

raja...of course mujhe yaad nhi hai kuch be

komal....okay fine to ab dekho kaya krti ho mai

ya bol komal ne raja ke shirt ko pkr kr khicha aur shrt ke batton tot gye raja ka locket show ho gya komal ne bina der kiye apna locket raja ke locket se jor diya
dhammmmmmmmm ek bijliiiiiiiiiiiii karki aasman mai ek dum se pora asmaaan kale baddlo se dhakkkkk gya tezzzz hawai chalne lagi

raja aur komal dono urte hue door jaa gireeeee jaha komal ko girne se sumi ne bacha liya wohi raja jo ura tha waha sabky nazar gye to sabky hosh ur gye

kyu ke waha kuch be nhi utha
raja gayab ho chuka tha aasman mai lal bijliya zor shor se chamak rhe thi



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एक लाजबाब गद्यांश राजा भाई, मैंने आपके कहानी को पढ़ना कुछ दिनों पहले ही सुरु किया, और सच बोलूँगा... सुरुआत से ही कहानी मे जो लय देखने को मुझे मिली, वो काबिले तारीफ़ थी ।
राजा और कोमल के बीच मस्तियाँ, फिर रानी मतलब क्विन का आतंक... और पिछले कुछ update मे राजा, रानी और कोमल के बीच का संवाद....
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