Ghosthunter
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Abhi story chal rahi hai dostbhai eh story apne timeline se hat ti nazar aa rahi hai. Aap ke story ka naam hi "mera beta main aur mera mayka" hai. Usi pe jyada focus rehna chahiye.
21 din ka lockdown wala method bahut hi dichasp tha. Lekin use hum ne kho dia.
kahani me bataya gaya' 21 ke din baad chahe to shyam ko urmila apna marad bhi bana shakti hai' oh nehi dikha.
jhadne ke time urmila ne kaha tha"abhi mera fertilize period chal raha hai"
"Lagta hai ki dono ki suhagraat hui ho" wagerah wagerah
khair likhte jaiye. Aur in baaton ko and kiziye. Story me shyam aur urmila ke beech romantic scene ke liye utsuk hoon.
thanks.
Dhanyavaad jahanpanaekdom kamaal kar dhiya aapne, bahut h garam aur kamuk update,bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne hum bahut khush hue![]()
writer ke saath uska reader jitna connectivity bana ke rakhe uski writing utni success hoti hai. Aap apne readers ke comments ko value dete isiliye aap ko loog pasand karte hain. Thank you. Keep going long.Abhi story chal rahi hai dost
Aur readers ki demand hoti hai storie ko lamba kro aur lamba krne ke liye character add krne hote hai to bas wahi process chal raha hai
Aur sayad tum he patience kho diya kyu ki jo tum bol rahe ho wo bas kuch update dur tha
Par khair thanks ki tum itni closely watch kr rahe ho