Aaryapatel
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Bhai aapke baat kuch had tak sahi hai kyun ki sabko hero ke jagah apne ko soch ke m*** joh marni hoti hai koi thodi na chahyega uske saamne koi aur chudai kare (even if yeh story kyun na ho yahan log jaldi hi female character ke saath attach sorry obsessed ho jaate hein) fir tumhari story toh wife degradation ki hai fir naration ek cuckold pati ka jo kuch nahi kar sakta sirf dekh sakta hai toh aap samajh jao main kya kahana chahata hun... Mere baat ka bura mat manna bro bt jab kahani start kiya tha tab short story ke hisab se aap start kiye tha jisme ek banda marne ke baad apne wife ke future ke liye accha saathi dhundne aata hai ek moke milne par magar aap story badhane ke chakkar mein story ko wife degradation ke tarf le chale jo basically bahut se reader ko pasand nahi aata isiliye bahut si Adultery likhne wale writer support ke abhav se likhna band kar dete hein ya phir short mein kahani nipta dete hein...Xforum site main sirf incest story chalta hai. Aur adultary kuchh log padhte hai. Incests ke alawa koi aur story yanha jyada log nehi padhte.
Han bhai. Per ye kahani shorts hi hai. Bas thoda details main bata deta hoon. Koi pasand kare ya na kare kahani ko ant tak leke jana mera farz hai.Bhai aapke baat kuch had tak sahi hai kyun ki sabko hero ke jagah apne ko soch ke m*** joh marni hoti hai koi thodi na chahyega uske saamne koi aur chudai kare (even if yeh story kyun na ho yahan log jaldi hi female character ke saath attach sorry obsessed ho jaate hein) fir tumhari story toh wife degradation ki hai fir naration ek cuckold pati ka jo kuch nahi kar sakta sirf dekh sakta hai toh aap samajh jao main kya kahana chahata hun... Mere baat ka bura mat manna bro bt jab kahani start kiya tha tab short story ke hisab se aap start kiye tha jisme ek banda marne ke baad apne wife ke future ke liye accha saathi dhundne aata hai ek moke milne par magar aap story badhane ke chakkar mein story ko wife degradation ke tarf le chale jo basically bahut se reader ko pasand nahi aata isiliye bahut si Adultery likhne wale writer support ke abhav se likhna band kar dete hein ya phir short mein kahani nipta dete hein...