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Adultery Mere ghar ke naye kirayedaar ( interfaith special adultery and incest special )
- Thread starterRaj the chodu
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nice update..!!Main bahar aaya toh maa khana laga rahi thi maine kahana lagaya aur jab khana kha liya time karib raat ke 10 baje the
Toh maa ne kuch tiffin main kuch diya aur boli ki huma ko de aau usko ye sabzi bahut pasand hai .
Main-maa unhone ab tak kha liya hoga
Maa- nahi wo bol kar gai thi ki ban jaye toh raj ke hath bhej dena
Main- ap de aao na maa
Maa- tu ja de aa mujhe kitchen main kaam hai tere papa bhi aane wale honge toh main na chahate huye bhi upper aa gya aur jaise he darwaje ko knock karne he wala tha ki darwaja khul gya aur mere samne huma khadi thi kuch is tarah
Aur jab meri nazar padi toh uski ek tang nangi nazar aa rahi thi aur mujhe uski tange dekhte huye huma kuch piche hue aur pose dene lagi
Meri nazar abhi bhi uski nangi tang kar thi
Huma- kya hua raj kya dekh rahe ho pehli baar dekhi hai ki kisi aurat ki nangi jangh
Toh main hadbada gya aur maa ne jo sabzi ka tiffin diya tha usse aage karke
Wo aunty maa ne ap ke liye sabzi bheji hai
Huma- haan mujhe pata hai maine he bola tha aur mere hath se tiffin le liya aur dheere se
Kaisi lag rahi hai single piece night gown mujh par tumare uncle laye the
Aur maine iske andar kal jo tumne apni pasand ki bra panty dilai thi wo pehni hue hai
Main unko dekhne laga par bolne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi
Tabhi sayad Sana ki awaz ki kaun hai ammi jaan toh huma ghabra kar koi nahi raj hai sabzi laya tha aur mujhe bye bol kar darwaja band kar liya
Main wahi khada raha matlab huma ke dimag main kuch toh chal raha hai par kya sana se kyu dar gai
Main sochte huye niche aa gya par itna toh clear ho gya ki huma ke dil main bahut kuch chal raha hai jisse mujhe jaldi samajhna padega
Raja maurya
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Mast update BhaiMain bahar aaya toh maa khana laga rahi thi maine kahana lagaya aur jab khana kha liya time karib raat ke 10 baje the
Toh maa ne kuch tiffin main kuch diya aur boli ki huma ko de aau usko ye sabzi bahut pasand hai .
Main-maa unhone ab tak kha liya hoga
Maa- nahi wo bol kar gai thi ki ban jaye toh raj ke hath bhej dena
Main- ap de aao na maa
Maa- tu ja de aa mujhe kitchen main kaam hai tere papa bhi aane wale honge toh main na chahate huye bhi upper aa gya aur jaise he darwaje ko knock karne he wala tha ki darwaja khul gya aur mere samne huma khadi thi kuch is tarah
Aur jab meri nazar padi toh uski ek tang nangi nazar aa rahi thi aur mujhe uski tange dekhte huye huma kuch piche hue aur pose dene lagi
Meri nazar abhi bhi uski nangi tang kar thi
Huma- kya hua raj kya dekh rahe ho pehli baar dekhi hai ki kisi aurat ki nangi jangh
Toh main hadbada gya aur maa ne jo sabzi ka tiffin diya tha usse aage karke
Wo aunty maa ne ap ke liye sabzi bheji hai
Huma- haan mujhe pata hai maine he bola tha aur mere hath se tiffin le liya aur dheere se
Kaisi lag rahi hai single piece night gown mujh par tumare uncle laye the
Aur maine iske andar kal jo tumne apni pasand ki bra panty dilai thi wo pehni hue hai
Main unko dekhne laga par bolne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi
Tabhi sayad Sana ki awaz ki kaun hai ammi jaan toh huma ghabra kar koi nahi raj hai sabzi laya tha aur mujhe bye bol kar darwaja band kar liya
Main wahi khada raha matlab huma ke dimag main kuch toh chal raha hai par kya sana se kyu dar gai
Main sochte huye niche aa gya par itna toh clear ho gya ki huma ke dil main bahut kuch chal raha hai jisse mujhe jaldi samajhna padega
deltaboy
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Story is good but one lead role is there that is RAJ and rest all are women. Add some male roles and reduce women roles. And add interfaith from both sides. and adulatory is between mom and son would sounds good but adulatory between Raj and Huma is not a good idea. Bring some male character. Add some interfaith for both religions . Thats its. Keep writing. Good plot
Funworld
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Har Update ek se badhkar ek ho raha hai,Main bahar aaya toh maa khana laga rahi thi maine kahana lagaya aur jab khana kha liya time karib raat ke 10 baje the
Toh maa ne kuch tiffin main kuch diya aur boli ki huma ko de aau usko ye sabzi bahut pasand hai .
Main-maa unhone ab tak kha liya hoga
Maa- nahi wo bol kar gai thi ki ban jaye toh raj ke hath bhej dena
Main- ap de aao na maa
Maa- tu ja de aa mujhe kitchen main kaam hai tere papa bhi aane wale honge toh main na chahate huye bhi upper aa gya aur jaise he darwaje ko knock karne he wala tha ki darwaja khul gya aur mere samne huma khadi thi kuch is tarah
Aur jab meri nazar padi toh uski ek tang nangi nazar aa rahi thi aur mujhe uski tange dekhte huye huma kuch piche hue aur pose dene lagi
Meri nazar abhi bhi uski nangi tang kar thi
Huma- kya hua raj kya dekh rahe ho pehli baar dekhi hai ki kisi aurat ki nangi jangh
Toh main hadbada gya aur maa ne jo sabzi ka tiffin diya tha usse aage karke
Wo aunty maa ne ap ke liye sabzi bheji hai
Huma- haan mujhe pata hai maine he bola tha aur mere hath se tiffin le liya aur dheere se
Kaisi lag rahi hai single piece night gown mujh par tumare uncle laye the
Aur maine iske andar kal jo tumne apni pasand ki bra panty dilai thi wo pehni hue hai
Main unko dekhne laga par bolne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi
Tabhi sayad Sana ki awaz ki kaun hai ammi jaan toh huma ghabra kar koi nahi raj hai sabzi laya tha aur mujhe bye bol kar darwaja band kar liya
Main wahi khada raha matlab huma ke dimag main kuch toh chal raha hai par kya sana se kyu dar gai
Main sochte huye niche aa gya par itna toh clear ho gya ki huma ke dil main bahut kuch chal raha hai jisse mujhe jaldi samajhna padega
Aise hi Story ko badhate rahe,
Hero Raj hi Thik hai.
aur koi Male Charector badhane ki jarurat nahi hai.
Aap Apne hisab se likhte rahe.
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Rochak aur Romnchak Kahani sahi ja rahi hai. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
TedBundy
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Wow! Another mind blowing interfaith story!Absolutely fantastic update! Very very nice and excellent writings!
The Wicked
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